"The train I usually take has changed its course, it is now headed nowhere..." Creepypasta

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  • Опубліковано 20 вер 2024
  • CREEPYPASTA STORY►by SocietysMenaceCC: / the_train_i_usually_ta...
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 166

  • @chrisclarence6247
    @chrisclarence6247 Місяць тому +191

    Author of the story here!!
    Thank you so much to creeps for his outstanding narration and thank you to those who gave the time to check it out.
    Hope you all enjoyed it🙏

    • @Shadowstar1311
      @Shadowstar1311 Місяць тому +18

      I’m really glad you let them escape. Hopeless no escape endings are overdone. I like being rewarded for going through the night,are alongside the characters.

    • @chrisclarence6247
      @chrisclarence6247 Місяць тому +11

      @@Shadowstar1311 In certain cases situations like this one it is plausible that an escape can happen, sometimes though there are inescapable situations.

    • @queensheebah8628
      @queensheebah8628 Місяць тому +2

      Excellent story ❤ thanks so much

    • @ginoprimo5605
      @ginoprimo5605 Місяць тому +4

      You are a gifted writer, my guy 📝

    • @justforfun1242
      @justforfun1242 Місяць тому +2

      Here’s a plot twist for you. Ninjas

  • @bettya.k.abetty8259
    @bettya.k.abetty8259 Місяць тому +35

    A train from New York to Chicago generally takes 20-22 hours. When I consulted one way I knew my client was cheap af if they put me on a train instead of an airplane.

    • @winstonwins1096
      @winstonwins1096 Місяць тому +1

      Idk. I work at an airport hotel and I must say the real horror seems to be at the airports these days. Not only the constant cancellations but the way people are treated by the airlines.
      I think I'd actually rather take a train, or god forbid a Greyhound. And I've taken my share of Greyhounds, I used to jokingly call them "Hell on wheels." But air travel is literally a crap shoot these days.

  • @incognito7261
    @incognito7261 Місяць тому +84

    Am I stupid for thinking too much into this? If the train makes no stops, how did the narrator get on the train. I know I'm stupid, but am I THAT bad?

    • @chrisclarence6247
      @chrisclarence6247 Місяць тому +45

      @@incognito7261 I purposely left him getting on the train for that exact theory to rise. Love when even after my stories there are some questions and theories.

    • @venga3
      @venga3 Місяць тому +33

      ​@chrisclarence6247 Was your theory that this commenter might be stupid? He mentioned no theories. Just a perceived plot hole or lack of information.

    • @JohnCena-oo1cl
      @JohnCena-oo1cl Місяць тому +9

      @@venga3LMFAO

    • @NOTurbuisness-r5q
      @NOTurbuisness-r5q Місяць тому +20

      Story’s are better when your not spoonfed every detail

    • @maalikserebryakov
      @maalikserebryakov Місяць тому +6

      @@chrisclarence6247
      Cope he got u busted
      Stop retconning

  • @destroyuttobots
    @destroyuttobots Місяць тому +13

    This could be such a good horror film. I love it

  • @ScullyPop
    @ScullyPop Місяць тому +32

    This overlay and reading is incredible.

  • @jakemcman1858
    @jakemcman1858 Місяць тому +10

    This was a really engaging story. Well written and narrated

  • @dirkbruere
    @dirkbruere Місяць тому +21

    Welcome to London Transport

  • @kreestor
    @kreestor Місяць тому +16

    The eternal engine provides! 1,001 cars long... 🚂

    • @Muth
      @Muth Місяць тому +2

      Wilford 🙏🙏🙏

  • @YouAreStarDust
    @YouAreStarDust Місяць тому +17

    Early! Thanks for this. Lots of tears this week I needed this.
    Lots of nerves as well today, time to relax 😅

    • @nevermorehollows
      @nevermorehollows Місяць тому +2

      Sorry to hear that. Hope things are better. A good story does help distract the mind. So grateful for this channel.

  • @imbored1179
    @imbored1179 Місяць тому +20

    Debating on saving this for my next commute on Monday or just watching it now.

  • @janette2422
    @janette2422 Місяць тому +8

    I have soooo much to catch up on! I've been so sick for so long; thank you Sir for a lot to keep my mind busy

  • @darknebula310
    @darknebula310 Місяць тому +5

    "You have to accept where you are or you'll go mad"

  • @MichaelaAquilina
    @MichaelaAquilina Місяць тому +8

    A train heading to nowhere...
    So, Infinity Train, then?

    • @Streifi
      @Streifi Місяць тому +3

      I just thought the same... I miss the show. Too bad it was cancelled.

    • @chrisclarence6247
      @chrisclarence6247 Місяць тому +4

      Watching infinity train and train to busan actually made me want to write a train like horror story!!
      I hope you both enjoyed this one!

    • @Streifi
      @Streifi Місяць тому +5

      @@chrisclarence6247 Certainly. A good story. Trains make for an interesting horror setting. And I'm a huge fan of the weird and surreal, so that's always a plus in my book. :)

    • @naotokamigire-terumi9912
      @naotokamigire-terumi9912 Місяць тому +1

      🚆

  • @darknebula310
    @darknebula310 Місяць тому +3

    I just started the story but my first thought is they're stuck in limbo

  • @winstonwins1096
    @winstonwins1096 Місяць тому +6

    Not only do we have a new McPasta upload, but its a friggin train one!
    The dark gods are smiling upon us my friends 🙏

  • @pharnum5956
    @pharnum5956 Місяць тому +6

    This was wonderful!
    Well written, well narrated!
    I even had a strange intrusive thought at 22:56 for some reason gamer brain kicked in and I was expecting the train to be suplexed FF6 style

  • @doodleartlover
    @doodleartlover Місяць тому +11

    Really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

  • @jebuschrist9161
    @jebuschrist9161 Місяць тому +27

    Perfect timing.
    I just cracked a beer and packed a bowl.
    Creeps on the beach is a new one for me.

  • @georger2748
    @georger2748 Місяць тому +3

    Art reminds me of 'Midnight Meat Train' ... Clive Barker

  • @theseedistheword3603
    @theseedistheword3603 Місяць тому +8

    Awesome story, reminded me of a couple old films.

  • @themanglenator1225
    @themanglenator1225 Місяць тому +5

    the amazing digital circus on a train

  • @bellhop7900
    @bellhop7900 Місяць тому +6

    YAY new video, love listening to you at work

  • @rmisery
    @rmisery Місяць тому +8

    excellent, it’s story time.

  • @HexenFrau
    @HexenFrau Місяць тому +3

    4 minutes in and my guess is that he's dead. This is some sort of purgatory train that he's stuck on, which is why it goes nowhere. Guess I'll finish it to find out of I'm right.

  • @chrisbrown7402
    @chrisbrown7402 Місяць тому +4

    Listening to this one while im on the train haha

  • @keithpineda5247
    @keithpineda5247 Місяць тому +2

    bro is never getting on any train ever again 💀

  • @samuelrockseer7240
    @samuelrockseer7240 Місяць тому +17

    I'm probably reading a little too much into this, but it seems like there might be an Atheist way of reading this story.
    The endless train represents death. It's quite literally a journey to nowhere. That drives some people to religion (the preacher and his flock), some people mad, and some people occupy themselves in an attempt to try an endure the looming specter of an eternity to nowhere (the protagonist, Lisa and Harold). There really appears to be no rhyme or reason as to why the protagonist bought his ticket, and in this sense all of us have bought our ticket by virtue of being alive.
    The desire to escape death, especially via religion, leads to misery and death. The preacher causes misery to others (by sacrificing people to escape the journey to nowhere) and to eventually to himself (by trying desperately to escape. The protagonist, Lisa and Harold ultimately pass the test by not trying to escape the train (i.e., death). They pass through a period of darkness (despair of death), but ultimately escape the train and are able re-enter the real world and enjoy life (coming to terms with mortality).
    I also wonder if the professions (pharmaceutical guy, journalist) and destination (New York) are significant in some way as they're all coded secular progressive. They escape the train whereas anyone explicitly religious does not.
    ... or maybe the author just like Stephen King's "The Mist" and wanted to do it on a train. Oh well. Food for thought at least.

    • @chrisclarence6247
      @chrisclarence6247 Місяць тому +6

      Wow! An absolutely beautiful take on this story. I like leaving enough open-endedness to my stories for people to give their idea/take on the story itself.

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown Місяць тому

      Welcome to the religion of feeding people to the train demon. We're all about love, peace, and, uhm, forced human sacrifices.

    • @LS_Dash
      @LS_Dash Місяць тому

      This summary is terrible and so are you.

  • @Nobo364
    @Nobo364 Місяць тому +2

    1001 cars? He’s on snow piercer?

  • @Flamsterette
    @Flamsterette Місяць тому +5

    Thanks for the upload!

  • @imthatjerry8973
    @imthatjerry8973 Місяць тому +3

    Your the best of all the narrators

  • @stefanlindbom8870
    @stefanlindbom8870 Місяць тому +26

    New york huh they probably got stabbed after gettin off the train😢

    • @pauliexcluded1
      @pauliexcluded1 Місяць тому +3

      Right? 😂

    • @venga3
      @venga3 Місяць тому +5

      And we know exactly how the stabber would look.

    • @jpeckdraws3932
      @jpeckdraws3932 Місяць тому +1

      That or pushed into the train and now there all ghosts

    • @Minodax86
      @Minodax86 Місяць тому

      ​@@venga3lmao

  • @dannykhoi4686
    @dannykhoi4686 Місяць тому +3

    I'm on a train atm

  • @GreenAndBlue-19
    @GreenAndBlue-19 Місяць тому +2

    Train story. I listen.

  • @SlowsyYT
    @SlowsyYT Місяць тому +3

    Never stop uploading 🙏🙏🙏

  • @GrayCrownRBLX
    @GrayCrownRBLX Місяць тому +2

    man i aint NEVER taking warp corp trains again

  • @explosivestarfish7222
    @explosivestarfish7222 Місяць тому +3

    Hey have y’all ever been… yanno…. down there and
    THAT SHIT BE FUCKIN’ STANKIN’ 😂

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor Місяць тому +3

    when you accidentally board thomas the dank engine 😑

  • @aerneif
    @aerneif Місяць тому +4

    Dang I would be trying to pry a door open to jump off. I would need to know if I could get off even if it killed me

    • @nevermorehollows
      @nevermorehollows Місяць тому +3

      For real! It’s going to end badly either way, but at least you tried escaping!

    • @aerneif
      @aerneif Місяць тому +2

      @@nevermorehollows yeah like I would have to TRY at least death or not

  • @babybastardd
    @babybastardd 7 днів тому

    Creeps I’ve been watching your since I was 13, I’m 21 now. I love your videos so much, thank you for all the effort you’ve put in for so many years❤️❤️

  • @theCidisIn
    @theCidisIn Місяць тому +1

    Jan Thirsten then Howard right after it reminded me of a Gilligan's isle character. There's a guy on there with those names combined kinda. it's Thirsten Howel.

  • @fooshi6514
    @fooshi6514 Місяць тому +2

    Average Amtrak experience

  • @xReaghan
    @xReaghan Місяць тому +1

    Where can I find this wallpaper you have in the video? Please tell me.

  • @pauliexcluded1
    @pauliexcluded1 Місяць тому +2

    I would give anything for a ticket on this train….

  • @laymayday
    @laymayday Місяць тому +3

    This was a fun one!

  • @FastHemi
    @FastHemi Місяць тому +3

    TY

  • @toolfan923
    @toolfan923 Місяць тому +2

    Reminds me of a Rick and Morty episode

  • @kentworch
    @kentworch Місяць тому

    Thank you CreepsMcPasta for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always. Definitely a good one, though it kinda gave me a sense of deja vu. 🖤🖤🖤🖤

  • @dchanka
    @dchanka Місяць тому +4

    Oh this is nice now this story reminds me of an oldie song....don't stop believing 😆

  • @nekoninja8206
    @nekoninja8206 Місяць тому +1

    Anyone else remember a sory about a guy who becomes a delivery guy for a fae like company?

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 Місяць тому +3

    Would be awesome as a Twilight Zone episode I like The Twilight Zone.

  • @luuk3656
    @luuk3656 Місяць тому

    Hey ive been listening to your podcast since i was 13 so 4 years now and your voice and podcast is amazing thank you so much for making these

  • @StoneCorazon
    @StoneCorazon Місяць тому

    5 minutes in, “I stood up suddenly, almost knocking over my chair” huh? On a train?

  • @lizzyc7712
    @lizzyc7712 Місяць тому +2

    Yay love the videos

  • @Sitharos
    @Sitharos Місяць тому +1

    Great story!

  • @devil5hlygrim972
    @devil5hlygrim972 Місяць тому +2

    Still the best narrator

  • @demokosonofazathoth2555
    @demokosonofazathoth2555 Місяць тому +4

    a 1,001 car amtrak sounds terrifying

  • @natetrussel1211
    @natetrussel1211 Місяць тому

    Currently listening to this while living in downtown Cleveland haha

  • @Pabloworldwide
    @Pabloworldwide Місяць тому

    Thank you

  • @unluckyloona7813
    @unluckyloona7813 Місяць тому +1

    Not sure why but this video is not appearing in search results. Probably explains the lower than usual views.
    Even if you type "creepypasta" and sort by recently uploaded its not there.

  • @DeadlyTune
    @DeadlyTune Місяць тому

    Here is my theory, if the train never stops then how did ge get on? Well he could have been in a crash or something traumatic causing him to ve in a coma and the train could be a fragment of his imagination as his mind trys to wake up, everyone he meets is just a persona hes seen before walking through town or something because he has to of seen them to see faces cause the human mind can't make up its own face, so that means all the people hes seing is people he is either close with or met in a store even if its seeing them from afar, which would explain how he got on the train and everyone he is seeing. Yes i know i repeated some details, listening to storys makes ne tired and when im tired i dint think straight so deal with it.

  • @Hambone891
    @Hambone891 Місяць тому +4

    30 seconds with zero views let me change that real quick!

    • @Flamsterette
      @Flamsterette Місяць тому +1

      Punctuation is a good idea here

  • @florpflop6364
    @florpflop6364 8 днів тому

    If the train never stops, how did he get on?

  • @thomaswburkhart
    @thomaswburkhart Місяць тому +1

    what was the message? what was his greatest sin?

  • @Bluesit32
    @Bluesit32 Місяць тому

    Ehhh...seems kind of weird that shortly after the new guy shows up, everything concludes. For the VERY first time in probably decades or more, the train stops?

    • @lynagem5154
      @lynagem5154 Місяць тому +2

      not really. they just chose his POV, they couldve chose any POV and it still wouldve concluded the same way it did. with a new guy boarding and then leaving sooner than others. they chose his POV as someone who was freshly confused and new to environment.

  • @stephaniem9836
    @stephaniem9836 Місяць тому

    Such a good one! ❤

  • @LordCommanderSpaceAlligator
    @LordCommanderSpaceAlligator Місяць тому +3

    We waited 2 weeks for "my train went the wrong way" ???
    Wth happened to skinwalker & wendigo stories? Ghost & monster stories. Unreal

  • @Meniscus6
    @Meniscus6 Місяць тому

    Remember kids double check your train tickean stay away from religous people in crises

  • @greyspot00
    @greyspot00 Місяць тому

    I want to know if time passed, and how long the others were on the train

  • @ChristiancMeek6
    @ChristiancMeek6 Місяць тому +1

    @CreepsMcPasta You sound more downtrodden than usual. You doing ok Creeps? Or is this just a new infliction you're trying out?

  • @Jodenii
    @Jodenii Місяць тому

    Someone else released this yesterday 😢

  • @scottbrown6198
    @scottbrown6198 Місяць тому

    "Laptop out spread cheeks open"

  • @stonedjasonvoorhees5959
    @stonedjasonvoorhees5959 Місяць тому +1

    I ain't no taco man that's for sure

  • @jayceec3539
    @jayceec3539 Місяць тому

    This story has been on many,many times now. The only thing different is the title keeps changing..

  • @jpeckdraws3932
    @jpeckdraws3932 Місяць тому

    The purgatory train just a theory as I listen to this haha

  • @Paul-qr5qz
    @Paul-qr5qz Місяць тому

    Avanti west coast in a nutshell

  • @miruajin6448
    @miruajin6448 Місяць тому

    Why is he asking around then declaring people insane?

  • @pmmarquillero9022
    @pmmarquillero9022 Місяць тому +1

    ❤❤❤

  • @Screwball70
    @Screwball70 Місяць тому +1

    Check list: SKINZ
    BUD
    BAG OF CRISPS
    CREEPS MCPASTA
    all present and correct, logistics are fun lol.

  • @MatthewCarter-t3g
    @MatthewCarter-t3g Місяць тому

    7:49

  • @cptbalao1810
    @cptbalao1810 Місяць тому

    What do they eat?

  • @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551
    @anthonyarcanumsanctumregnu9551 Місяць тому +1

    As a life long New Yorker who remembers the Real NYC before it died by all these newer different peole migrating here first from other states late 90s Early 00's to these Illegals now it reminds me of NYC roday just a routine nightmare.

  • @lilfreshieBrat
    @lilfreshieBrat Місяць тому

    ❤🚞

  • @Dr_1212
    @Dr_1212 Місяць тому +1

    😈

  • @AAAAAA-cd4ux
    @AAAAAA-cd4ux Місяць тому

    Mmm

  • @soggyslopster6800
    @soggyslopster6800 Місяць тому

    Only in Ohio bruh

  • @maalikserebryakov
    @maalikserebryakov Місяць тому +1

    Very mid story. Its so mid i bet GPT could have wrote it

  • @everything_enthusiast
    @everything_enthusiast Місяць тому +9

    88 views in 3 mins?? bro fell off

    • @Abdullah05command
      @Abdullah05command Місяць тому +7

      Brain rot bot

    • @LeeWang-y9z
      @LeeWang-y9z Місяць тому

      Get lost. Nothing nice to say, then as my teacher used to say, "fuck off then, keep that dirty mouth shut or I will wash it out with bleach."

    • @503rpf
      @503rpf Місяць тому +3

      Not all of us can watch right when it comes out. You know people have jobs and family to deal with right!?! I wanted to listen right away. But couldn't do that until now🧄

  • @tomphillips6743
    @tomphillips6743 Місяць тому

    Great story!