“Winners are not afraid of losing. But losers are. Failure is part of the process of success. People who avoid failure also avoid success.” ― Robert T. Kiyosaki
I want to say thank so much brother mr everything english. i appreciate how much effort you have been spent how students get their highest marks in english exams thank you thank thank you. paper1 was easy yesterday because we used your techniques especially q5 creative writing. The question was write story about human being meeting an animal and i wrote netfilx story when the girl met a lion.
In contrast to this, Marius in Source B is presented as a more ideal travel partner. Clearly we are displayed with how selfless and helpful Marius is. This is first seen on lines 12-13, where he shows kindness towards the other climber, clearly understanding how he must feel as an inexperienced climber. By Marius aiding the climber we can not only see a contrast between Marius and Simon but how this gives a sense of comfortability and even motivation for this climber to strive to become better. Marius' character is somewhat extraordinary as he made this person become inspired through his good will. This righteous attitude is further communicated through 'literally pulled me like a parcel' which just shows how immensely protective he is as he wants no harm to come across his partner. Evidently, we can see Marius having no hesitation in having a good intention to do the right thing, whilst Simon seems more ignorant, someone consumed by his own ego, someone who only cares for himself. Therefore, we can see how Marius would rather put others before himself as he thinks it's the right thing to do.
@@imadchowdhury1936 for q2 it says u need 2 paragraphs so on each of the paragraphs i need to make them oppose eachother or i just elaborate from my first paragraph about what im talking about?
@@blues3483 yes you need to make them oppose each other but get evidence from the sources Another way to get better is to watch more videos on what you find difficult and practice questions. Good luck on your test. Well I mean I think we all need it.😀👍
Q3 paragraph 1 in source A the writer presents Joe to be in immense Pain , in which all he can think about is how to ease the aggony hes feeling. This can be seen when we learn a " wave of nausea and pain swept over " him. Here the writer uses a metaphor to illustrate how large his struggle is, and the idea he himself is almost being washed away as he zones in and out, like a wave cascading down. It is as though his body attempts to shut down in order to not have to deal with the pain. Furthermore, the adjective “Swept” emulates the impression he was hit with pain instantly as it swept over him, but failed to leave. It also implies joe swept away falling to the ground and that his mind turned to a different place to try and not associate himself with his injury. conveying across just now helpless joe was in that moment. Therefore, emphasising how the writer uses these techniaves in order to make the readers pitty joe and put themselves in is shoes, imagining the agony and physical yet mental challenge hes been placed in.
i have heard from my tutor, and she is really good and even marks exam papers , that examiners don't like it when you only refer to source a in the first paragraph and source b in the next.. and she said that you should make a direct and constant comparison between the two in the same one paragraph .. so i am very confused which one should i do?
if i were you, i'd stick to the one i more confidently can do - the one i've had most practice with because if you attempt to re learn something new, the standard at which you complete it is more likely to be lower and therefore fewer marks. but honestly up to you this is just some advice:)
Very urgent!!!!! Do we get marks if we summarise the sources separately- i.e first paragraph summarising source A And then other paragraph summarising source B. Or should we summarise all the way through the paragraph comparing both source in both paragraphs.
I didn't understand how to answer question 2 of this paper and the structure that my teacher taught me was not working but this structure is the best and i will follow this .Also whenever i watch you answering a question or planning it seems easier but when i do it by myself i find it harder .Do you have any advice on what to do? Overall Thank you for your help and i really Appreciate this! :)
For me i struggled with it but if you just read you notes a lot enough to the point if you ask yourself everything about a question you should be able to say the marks, time you have to answer and exacly how to answer it then you will do fine doing it in your exam
It is good how u written your answer for Q2 but isn’t the PEIEIEIEI paragraph too big for stating a summary for Source A can’t u break it down a bit or is it ok?
and i would like your opinion on this i know that i've done horribly on paper 1 but is there a chance that i can still get a grade 4 overall by getting a high mark on paper 2
Hi sir, question please ,do u pick the quotes immediately after reading the first source and then if it says difference you just look for quotes opposite to it? Also, is there any way you can mark questions like this if we were to write it down?
Me everything english, i badmouthed you but i was wrong i apologise and i love your videos thanks so much. May the Lord bless you and increase you richly in Jesus Name Amen!
2003, I was deep on the east side I had homies in the hood since I was knee high That's the reason I don't have to carry a weapon I went from a child to a man, to a legend (too real) Party after dark, now we roll, we don't smash now Party after dark, cut the lights, this the blackout Party after dark, we don't stop 'til we pass out Party after dark, welcome to the madhouse
so for question 2 im supposed to write and infer his badness for example of one character and in the second talk about the other character's opposite from the first as an example
and also Q2 to write that much is very time consuming as u won’t able to write all within 10 mins so can I like get 2 evidence at least for each source to state the summaries
Wait sir, the point (P) you did at the very last bit of question 2, was that going to be your second paragraph talking about source B? If yes then can you do another example answer?
i coudnt help but burst out laughing when u said you have 2 pee on the page 2x and how we should drink lots of water before the exam to do what needs to be done
am going to cry that my both parents divorced and left me alone and empty handed I want to prison I have to look after my younger sister and which 2 months old
Mr Everything English is honestly the best he made my paper 1 go so well!
same
ong
How many marks can you get if you only answered like 1 paragraph for question 4
@@N12311maybe like 4 if it was good
@@N12311 cause your supposed to do 3 the most you can get is 1/3 of the mark
“Winners are not afraid of losing. But losers are. Failure is part of the process of success. People who avoid failure also avoid success.”
― Robert T. Kiyosaki
yh when ik im gonna fail
ill say this to my parents
@@msaad2796 same bro
Yeah sure mate
There is no motivation without the fear of failure, fear allows u to exceed ur limits.
@@msaad2796 😂😂adding fire to petrol.
inshallah we pass though
This guy just saved my entire English Mocks and GCSE's
u made my paper 1 lang run so smoothly just because of your live streams
Thank you
No worries man, glad i can help
So what did u get
@@AmritjotSingh-vn4ct grade 3
@@rxstart6559who invited you bro 💀
I want to say thank so much brother mr everything english. i appreciate how much effort you have been spent how students get their highest marks in english exams thank you thank thank you. paper1 was easy yesterday because we used your techniques especially q5 creative writing. The question was write story about human being meeting an animal and i wrote netfilx story when the girl met a lion.
I did the same but with a grizzly bear but ran out of time 😢
I did it about a wolf, I got a grade 9 overall in English language and literature
@@Evco29 what did u get
what did u get
@@oliviatomato3512 a 5
In contrast to this, Marius in Source B is presented as a more ideal travel partner. Clearly we are displayed with how selfless and helpful Marius is. This is first seen on lines 12-13, where he shows kindness towards the other climber, clearly understanding how he must feel as an inexperienced climber. By Marius aiding the climber we can not only see a contrast between Marius and Simon but how this gives a sense of comfortability and even motivation for this climber to strive to become better. Marius' character is somewhat extraordinary as he made this person become inspired through his good will. This righteous attitude is further communicated through 'literally pulled me like a parcel' which just shows how immensely protective he is as he wants no harm to come across his partner. Evidently, we can see Marius having no hesitation in having a good intention to do the right thing, whilst Simon seems more ignorant, someone consumed by his own ego, someone who only cares for himself. Therefore, we can see how Marius would rather put others before himself as he thinks it's the right thing to do.
how did u write like this? teach me please
@@blues3483 I'm not that good
Sometimes I write like that so rarely
I suppose you think of an idea and expand on it.
@@imadchowdhury1936 for q2 it says u need 2 paragraphs so on each of the paragraphs i need to make them oppose eachother or i just elaborate from my first paragraph about what im talking about?
@@blues3483 yes you need to make them oppose each other but get evidence from the sources
Another way to get better is to watch more videos on what you find difficult and practice questions. Good luck on your test. Well I mean I think we all need it.😀👍
@@imadchowdhury1936 yh ty bro also any tips for q4 and 5?
Duas always.....u helped my son so much, wishing u happiness in both worlds 🌎 💙
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Q3 paragraph 1
in source A the writer presents Joe to
be in immense Pain , in which all he can think about is how to ease the aggony
hes feeling. This can be seen when we
learn a " wave of nausea and pain swept
over " him. Here the writer uses a metaphor to illustrate how large his struggle is, and the idea he himself is almost being washed away as he zones in and out, like a wave cascading down. It is as though his body attempts to shut down in order to not have to deal with the pain. Furthermore, the adjective “Swept” emulates the impression he was hit
with pain instantly
as it swept over him, but failed to leave.
It also implies joe swept away falling
to the ground and that his mind turned
to a different place to try and not associate himself with his injury. conveying across just now helpless joe was in that moment. Therefore, emphasising how the writer uses these techniaves in order to make the readers pitty joe and
put themselves in is shoes, imagining
the agony and physical yet mental
challenge hes been placed in.
isn't swept more of a verb than an adjective?
@@smallchrist your probably right
@@smallchrist it is not more of a verb, it is certainly a verb.
@@gasterd5528 I wanted to be polite...
@@smallchrist and you've nailed it.
Don't give up lads, we're so close to the Victory Royale. 🐐
What does give up mean??
@@sinapourkhojasteh6984 An example of giving up is when your parents couldn't be arsed to wear protective.
Crazyyyyy 😂😂😂😂
@@sinapourkhojasteh6984 thisisnt arabic paper
@@Countdown420It's not a arabic,it's persian
😭😭 I remember watching him exactly last year he saved my grades so well thank you so much 😭🙏🏾
Good days sir.
Thank you so much for helping pass my English Language and Literature
I got above my target grades in both
God bless you.
what grades did you end up getting if you don’t mind me asking :)
@@v1yanbh its none of your business
@@rolis924 bruh it’s non of yours either..? i was asking how much they helped
@@rolis924 🤓"its none of your business"
Imagine Sir never made videos i would be failing english right now
Anyone here last minute 08:09am the morning of the examination
i have heard from my tutor, and she is really good and even marks exam papers , that examiners don't like it when you only refer to source a in the first paragraph and source b in the next.. and she said that you should make a direct and constant comparison between the two in the same one paragraph .. so i am very confused which one should i do?
if i were you, i'd stick to the one i more confidently can do - the one i've had most practice with because if you attempt to re learn something new, the standard at which you complete it is more likely to be lower and therefore fewer marks. but honestly up to you this is just some advice:)
we are the next round 😊
Skincare routine?
cold guy. keep it up, OTM will never each your level boss
Very urgent!!!!!
Do we get marks if we summarise the sources separately- i.e first paragraph summarising source A And then other paragraph summarising source B.
Or should we summarise all the way through the paragraph comparing both source in both paragraphs.
you cant just sumarise each separately, they need to link and you need to be clear of the differences/similarities
I didn't understand how to answer question 2 of this paper and the structure that my teacher taught me was not working but this structure is the best and i will follow this .Also whenever i watch you answering a question or planning it seems easier but when i do it by myself i find it harder .Do you have any advice on what to do? Overall Thank you for your help and i really Appreciate this! :)
literally just practice and then compare with model answers or watch videos and plan the question before the teacher and then compare
For me i struggled with it but if you just read you notes a lot enough to the point if you ask yourself everything about a question you should be able to say the marks, time you have to answer and exacly how to answer it then you will do fine doing it in your exam
wait so u do one paragrapgh on source a and another on source b seperatly
@@musabaden5633 nooo don’t do that. the question is literally compare so my teacher said just do them in one and compare within that paragraph
@@musabaden5633 bc if u do it in 2 u have less points of comparison
It is good how u written your answer for Q2 but isn’t the PEIEIEIEI paragraph too big for stating a summary for Source A can’t u break it down a bit or is it ok?
Mr everything english u legend
Can u tell us which paper u will be doing so we can print it beforehand. Thanks for your help.
Sure.
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Question Paper:
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Literally the 🐐
@@jeepercreep12 u be repeating the same thing every video
I underestimated how much can be achieved in only 10 minutes.
good luck guys hope paper 2 goes well this will be the last ever paper for us
me after that one student actually pees on the paper during the test - 💀
no way u write a high level response for q2 in 10minutes using that paragraph strucuture
and i would like your opinion on this i know that i've done horribly on paper 1 but is there a chance that i can still get a grade 4 overall by getting a high mark on paper 2
Well if you are thinking that you got something like a 2/3 on Paper 1 then to pass it you'd need about a 6/7+ on Paper 2
@@Will_Clayton what grade do I need to not have to resist on lit and lang
@@gavinbissell2029 a 4
@@Will_Clayton oh dear
Hi sir, question please ,do u pick the quotes immediately after reading the first source and then if it says difference you just look for quotes opposite to it?
Also, is there any way you can mark questions like this if we were to write it down?
@Yeet Feet 3 do u know anyone who does fr free
yoy are honestly amazing! I got a grade 3 to 5 in just 2 weeks
9:21 yes im gonna piss on my paper twice
Me everything english, i badmouthed you but i was wrong i apologise and i love your videos thanks so much. May the Lord bless you and increase you richly in Jesus Name Amen!
No worries, welcome to the dark side 😅
So for question 3 since its a copy of paper 1 question 2 with more marks do i use PRTZEL Point Reference Technique Explain effect Link?????
yes but its not PRTZEL ITS PRTEZEL
@@icedtan4362 oops I forgot that E
Do you get 2 gcses for English, literature & language?
Yes
Sir, thank you so much - you helped me get a 7 in mocks - do you have any advice for getting a 9?
aim to achieve level 4 just read the mark scheme and look at examples of grade 9 or level 4 answers online
On q2 did u compare them all the way through or 1 paragraph on each source
@@marrow2747thanks
@@Samuel.Gry_I think I 0:17 compared them all the way through
2003, I was deep on the east side
I had homies in the hood since I was knee high
That's the reason I don't have to carry a weapon
I went from a child to a man, to a legend (too real)
Party after dark, now we roll, we don't smash now
Party after dark, cut the lights, this the blackout
Party after dark, we don't stop 'til we pass out
Party after dark, welcome to the madhouse
is this your p1q5 entry?
@@shafinbepary2000 YEAH
whats this even meant to be
For q2, can u not just follow the structure of SQI as I've been taught this way? PEIEIEI x2 is too long for 10 mins
mock tomorrow 😍
skincare routine when???
You said about spending longer on P2 Q3 than on P1 Q2, how much time do you advise we spend on P2 Q3?
13 minutes I think.
@@abelnegash9159 Thank you
@@AsheCroft751 my teacher said 20 mins for Q3 and 25 for Q4 and half of the people in our class got 8s and 9s when we did this in the mocks
thank you for this years help bro
Where's question 3?
can u write abt source a in one paragraph and source b in another? or do u have to write abt both in one?
Love your help keep it up.
how much time do we have for q3 ?
I'd say 15 minutes
Went for 2a to a 5a thanks
can u make any prediction for question 5?
so for question 2 im supposed to write and infer his badness for example of one character and in the second talk about the other character's opposite from the first as an example
guys remember take a biiiiiiig piss on the exam paper😂😂😂😂😂😂
chat was wilding 💀
mr everything english i still dont get the pieieie structure can you explain it to me please
In the Question 2 so we need 3 Quote?
3 from each, so Sir advised
Is this for AQA or edexel???
AQA
and also Q2 to write that much is very time consuming as u won’t able to write all within 10 mins so can I like get 2 evidence at least for each source to state the summaries
Would (p e i e i)× 2 be fine too. I think (p e i e i e i) x2 is too long? Like 6 evidence for 8marks and only 2 Mark's for effects?
well in my opinion it depends on how good or bad you peiei is and also depends on the time
I think that would also be fine, as he said somewhere in this video that you don't have to use the exact paragraph structure peieiei
I'm already went to the toilet for a very long time 🤣🤣
sir, for question 2 do we only either do similarities or diffrences?
I believe the question can say to summarise either the similarities or differences, never both.
can someone please define the rule of three for me please in simple terms
A list that includes three things within the list eg. “The cat was fluffy, cute and sweet”
What he do with the live streams I need it please
Wait sir, the point (P) you did at the very last bit of question 2, was that going to be your second paragraph talking about source B? If yes then can you do another example answer?
What does infer mean?
a conclusion reached on the basis of evidence and reasoning.
He literally explained it for about 5 mins
You’re failing 😭
Mr Everything English is Him.
cheers sir
is that last line a start of a new paragraph?
10:02 is the model answer
Does that mean that we do not have to a conclusion Q2 and Q3?
yes
How did we do paper 1 guys? 🙈
so bad
Awful i felt that there was no language or structure techniques to analyse it was only on that stupid hyena
My only problem it’s “Time” I’m so so so slow.. and this my teacher don’t wanna give me Extral time 😭
How did u do
@@Zero1._ good bro i got grade 5 🫂
Does anyone know the website he is looking at @10:05?
i seen my teachers use that aswell but im pretty sure u have to pay for it. i think its affiliated with aqa
Only teachers, aka schools have access to it. It's AQA but students can't access it
9:55 what website did you find the model answers from?
exampro but its paid
are we allowed to use a highlighter in the actual exam?
yes ofc
yes but not your writing you can just highlight the question
On a g ting paper 1 yhh question 2,3 and 4 was just waffle for me
sir if i manage to get a 6 in lang biryani and saag on me to you 😆😆
10:04
would this get me full marks
Do i need to add a conclusion on question 2?
No just link back to the question
doesn't this show marius' determination
i coudnt help but burst out laughing
when u said you have 2 pee on the page 2x and how we should drink lots of water before the exam to do what needs to be done
Sir you should stay hydrated and pee for us all instead
whos here form the laggy live
how much marks would you lose for not putting dear or regards for question 5
all
guess u can say he's the same height as the highlighter 12:42
can i write a conclusion for q2
U dont need one. Just 2 PEI paragraphs
@@adam9ezzedine *PEIEIEI
if that source is refering to simon cowell i'd say its pretty accurate 😂
so how long do we spend on question 3
he said in another video to spend 13 mins on Q3
What exam board is this
ocr
Matrix
Mate u make Fortnite montages Jesus Christ do something to the world
What paper is this?
let’s read the video title yh
I meant the specific paper used in the video
Nov 2020
What a g fr
fresh trim
are you Indian sir?
no im gay
am going to cry that my both parents divorced and left me alone and empty handed I want to prison I have to look after my younger sister and which 2 months old
r u jk or r u serious
@@jraigdne i am serious i arrested twice
You should actually try to get help instead of commenting this under a gcse english video 😭
@@sheen7681 they are lying how are u so gullible to believe that its true
@@blues3483 i dont believe them i just commented that if that was the case man
in gonna peieiei
🦍
i swear sir is wearing makeup cause how is his skin so smoooooth