English Language Paper 1, Question 2: Securing 8/8

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3:09 colourful and black

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I hope someone replies to this comment but it the pretzel method for 1 paragraph or is it split into two for 2 paragraphs?

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It's used separately in each paragraph, and for question 2 focus on the effect in order to obtain the higher marks.

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You do 2 paragraphs. Each paragraph is a full pretzel paragraph. Ur basically doing Prtezel twice

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How about if i used only one PRETZEL paragraph sir.

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what is the PRETZEL structure? as in what does it stand for

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Should you not always talk about Imagery on this question?

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"When books were golden, when imagination soared, when the world was filled with stories which ran......" is that rule of three too?

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What is prtezel

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