giving me hope fr on my november/december mocks i got a grade 4 on english language just by watching mr everything english the morning i did my exam now that im revising this before i have hope 4 myself :0
this was so helpful !!! i have my mocks tmrw and last time i got a 3 im hoping for a 5 on this one! this explained better than what my teachers have ever taught me thank youu!
just to let you know sir my school doesnt prefer us watching ur videos but i find u more easy than them not gonna stop watching ur videos thanks for making this easyy:))
@@aymsej7821 (this was my mocks) For the transactional writing, i got 32/40 and for the rest before that i got 22/40 im quite sad never got to finish for language in total i got a high 7
Is it possible to get the full 12 marks with only just 2 paragraphs? I figure that writing 2 paragraphs for 8 marks is enough (in lang P1) but for 12 marks I thought 3 would be ideal.
Sir please tell us how to start our paper 2 , from which question to which in order to finish the paper before the time. I am confused, if I approach question 4 straight after question 5 , I find question 4 difficult to answer. Please guide me…thanks
check out his other videos on timing, he says to start with question 5 and spend 45 minutes on it then go to the reading and planning spend 15 minutes, 5 - 6 minutes on reading, 3 minutes on planning Q2, 3 minutes on planning Q3 and 4 minutes on planning Q4. Then do question 1 and spend 5 minutes. Then move on to question 2 spend 10 minutes, and do 2 paragraphs. Then do question 3, spend 13 minutes, and do 2 - 3 paragraphs. Then do question 4, spend 17 minutes and do 3 paragraphs.
@@zahraahmed4555 Thank you sister , I already watch it few minutes ago but still I am uncertain of how to answer the big mark questions first with this paper.
@@Linscord i understand doing that if you dont know how to develop each point you make however examiners , from what Ive seen in past examiner reports, tend to favour answers that have a large amount of development as it shows good inference and understanding of the text.
no you don't lose marks because you're assessed on the quality of what you write, not necessarily quantity. It's easier to get 12/12 with 2 detailed paragraphs than 3 half-assed, rushed/incomplete paragraphs. Also, under exam conditions and pressure it's unlikely you'll be able to do 3 paragraphs
My teacher marked my 2 paragraphs she said that if I write one paragraph then I will get 16/16. But then again quality is important. To be on the safer side I'd personally write 3 paragraphs, but it can depend on your writing speed and how fast you can write your paragraphs.
for Q4 (16 marks) you should ideally do 3 paragraphs [or 4 if you have time but this isn't necessary to get 16/16] but since Q3 is 12 marks then 2 paragraphs is plenty under exam conditions, as it's easier to get the initial 6-8 marks of the total 12 marks than it is to get the remaining 4 marks
some people write alot for a question but it turns out to be mainly waffle and only get limted amount of marks so how many paragraphs you wrirte is not the biggest factor but make sure you at least write enough for each question and not write loads for a question with fewer marks :)
I used the same structure, I use advanced vocabulary and linguistic devices. I tried my best but my teacher told me it was only a 9/12, as I need to talk about language from the beginning in the paragraph and not leave it till the middle/end. I'm really confused, can someone help me?
Like he said, the 2 'E's are the most important. If u lost ur 3 marks, its probably because your analysis isn't detailed enough. Maybe check with ur teacher how u could improve it. I personally recommend an alternative analysis, but keep it succinct. Remember though u aren't being marked on vocab here But yeah, 3 paras, good detail = FULL MARKS.
Party after dark, now we roll, we don't smash now Party after dark, cut the lights, this the blackout Party after dark, we don't stop 'til we pass out Party after dark, welcome to the madhouse
In what I try to write after learning such greatness that is improving how to write , in structured order while think it out to say it (p) the additional thoughts while learning to stay in order of structuring my thoughts into somekind of cohesiveness I often struggle but getting better is my focus as i attempt to explain the other parts of the pretzel that is about what to try after learning of the weather conditions in that situation explained , not that advanced yet but I try (R) the weather conditions when the snow was biting the face, chilling in itself and must have needed and caused a need be with self caring items, like hot totty teas that can possible better break the freezing air bite (E) once , you drink a cup of hot to warm tea totty of honey and warm to hot water with opinion of sprinkles of red pepper , or lemon to break up the shiver it must have brought after that ( Z)FREEZE bit (E) when making additional hot tea totties of those freeze colds to prevent anykind of shiver made of the cold FREEZE felt just from learning of it (L) as I try to learn Again , just trying to do what you are teaching and it make differences that not everyone might not know but I know the major difference in what I just tried to explain and I know the vobaulaty , structure , comparison with elements , and sentence structure needs more for me to focus but I try And , have a cup of hot tea with honey too , if any kind of freeze like that ! Or not feeling that good with hands covering the warmth of the cup to ever gulp of it's tea... ( Did not know how to put it in the writing as I was thinking an additional saying and something like what I tried today's learning tutorial ) And cortisone and ever market is must have item in cabinet when traveling because I think the learning was about traveling slops knocking into all kinds of things , reminding to sanitize and gargle with small amount Luke warm to salt water whenever being in cold weather like I tried to explain and continue to try... Thank you for letting me try to be better !
You spent 8 minutes to write 1 Prtezel in a fast pace, how are we supposed to write that much in just 13 minutes when you can't write one prtezel in 4 minutes.
You and Mr Bruff are the reason my language grade went from 4 to A 7
giving me hope fr on my november/december mocks i got a grade 4 on english language just by watching mr everything english the morning i did my exam now that im revising this before i have hope 4 myself :0
Yeah this guy has gotten me from 3 to 6 in a few weeks he has helped me understand how to do the subject better
My grade went from a 1 to a 9
@@liambarker6300 fairs but thats probs cause u nver use to revise or try
@@badjs4468 yeah but it shows u that anything can happen
I have passed my English GCSE with 65% mainly because of your explanations. Thank you so much!
is 65% a B?
@@4Kamari depends on the year, but I think its a. 7 which is an A
this was so helpful !!! i have my mocks tmrw and last time i got a 3 im hoping for a 5 on this one! this explained better than what my teachers have ever taught me thank youu!
What did you get?
What did you get?
When is the mr salles and mr everything video coming out😅
Can't wait for the article question need tht the most
I agree
he did a video on that q in february i think? i’ll send the link here if you need
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@@kartikeyaanand4999 can you send it pls
@@masahalsabbagh1504 ua-cam.com/video/MLOttTC-pMQ/v-deo.html
Thank you for this video. It really helped me
just to let you know sir my school doesnt prefer us watching ur videos but i find u more easy than them
not gonna stop watching ur videos thanks for making this easyy:))
They don’t prefer you lot watching him?
@@zishan5067 YEAHH 💀💀
@@mastermind2273 they’re weird 😂😂
@@zishan5067 trusss me more than u think
Why dont they let u watch him 💀
15 minutes on this question for us extra time folk!
I have my mocks tmrw, aiming for a grade 7-9. This should help me alot!
Your an English saver
you're
Wow this is so well informed, got a language 2 test tomorrow, thank you so much
How’d you do?
@@aymsej7821 (this was my mocks) For the transactional writing, i got 32/40 and for the rest before that i got 22/40 im quite sad never got to finish for language in total i got a high 7
Have you got any tips? 😊
@@alessssssssandra28 what u need the tips for (btw this is the channel of an english teacher lol) ask i might know
this is acc a life saverrrrrr i have an english mock tmrw and i swear im feeling bare confident
how was it mine's tomorroew
What did you get ?
Mine is tmrw
@@hiba5816 gooodd
@@adamjallow2890 8
Do you use the same point you made in the first paragraph in the second paragraph
i went from a grade 3 to and 8 ive watched this sooo many times
Brilliant
Is it possible to get the full 12 marks with only just 2 paragraphs? I figure that writing 2 paragraphs for 8 marks is enough (in lang P1) but for 12 marks I thought 3 would be ideal.
depends on how detailed your analysis and effect on reader is
if it is really detailed then mabye but id recommend throwing one more prtezel paragraph
i’d say 3
It's about the quality not quantity so 2 solid paragraphs will be enough
bring back the question 2 video please
god bless you
Who else watching this the day before the exam
Thanks sir
No more of this I guess Ty for everything
6:15 can we also use the technique of personification as this is what I thought at starting as it says "biting into my face"
yh
sir u gonna do a live stream before the exam ?
Do we need to talk about structure and form for full/high marks in Macbeth
If you want to aim for grades 7-9 then yes. I think 1 or 2 might be enough, but im not 100% sure
You can still get high marks without it but it is a really good boost
question 3 is language only do not use structure it will just be ignored
@@alexashford2693 they’re talking about literature not language
If u didn’t mention form/ structure in inspector or Jekyll but u had high level language points can u get full marks
Okay sir
could you talk about how biting is personifying the snow?
yh
Sir please tell us how to start our paper 2 , from which question to which in order to finish the paper before the time. I am confused, if I approach question 4 straight after question 5 , I find question 4 difficult to answer. Please guide me…thanks
check out his other videos on timing, he says to start with question 5 and spend 45 minutes on it then go to the reading and planning spend 15 minutes, 5 - 6 minutes on reading, 3 minutes on planning Q2, 3 minutes on planning Q3 and 4 minutes on planning Q4. Then do question 1 and spend 5 minutes. Then move on to question 2 spend 10 minutes, and do 2 paragraphs. Then do question 3, spend 13 minutes, and do 2 - 3 paragraphs. Then do question 4, spend 17 minutes and do 3 paragraphs.
@@zahraahmed4555 Thank you sister , I already watch it few minutes ago but still I am uncertain of how to answer the big mark questions first with this paper.
@@zahraahmed4555 complicated damn
i can't seem to find the paper 2 q2 video is it deleted?
Right
passing because of him ;)
the verb further emphasises the strange behaviour of the writer pls which verb is that.
Would you say having a fast hand writing means you get a huge advantage?
In my opinion yes as if I write fast my handwriting is bad, therefore i run out of time😭
Definitely, the more points you make the more forced the markers are to give you marks.
@@Linscord no they would rather see more development on one point rather then you giving them a bunch of points without explanation and development
@@liliak7067 if you’re unsure with what you’re writing about then I highly recommend jotting down some points with mild description.
@@Linscord i understand doing that if you dont know how to develop each point you make however examiners , from what Ive seen in past examiner reports, tend to favour answers that have a large amount of development as it shows good inference and understanding of the text.
My bro nazir
Legend
We need more information about question 5
his done one already.if you look through his videos you will see it
can you make a vid about q5 pls?
he has already made a bunch he even put a link to download some full mark student answers have a look through his channel
Do you lose marks for only writing two paragraphs? Is there not like a limited band or level you can reach with writing two?
no you don't lose marks because you're assessed on the quality of what you write, not necessarily quantity. It's easier to get 12/12 with 2 detailed paragraphs than 3 half-assed, rushed/incomplete paragraphs. Also, under exam conditions and pressure it's unlikely you'll be able to do 3 paragraphs
My teacher marked my 2 paragraphs she said that if I write one paragraph then I will get 16/16. But then again quality is important. To be on the safer side I'd personally write 3 paragraphs, but it can depend on your writing speed and how fast you can write your paragraphs.
for Q4 (16 marks) you should ideally do 3 paragraphs [or 4 if you have time but this isn't necessary to get 16/16] but since Q3 is 12 marks then 2 paragraphs is plenty under exam conditions, as it's easier to get the initial 6-8 marks of the total 12 marks than it is to get the remaining 4 marks
some people write alot for a question but it turns out to be mainly waffle and only get limted amount of marks so how many paragraphs you wrirte is not the biggest factor but make sure you at least write enough for each question and not write loads for a question with fewer marks :)
When will you do question 5 I have no idea what to write
he has already previoulsy made videos on quesion five and has put a link to download student exemplers of articles that got good marks
where is your question 2 video? did you delete it ?
where's q1 and q2?
don't think question 1 is needed it's literally just you picking out true statements
I used the same structure, I use advanced vocabulary and linguistic devices. I tried my best but my teacher told me it was only a 9/12, as I need to talk about language from the beginning in the paragraph and not leave it till the middle/end. I'm really confused, can someone help me?
Like he said, the 2 'E's are the most important. If u lost ur 3 marks, its probably because your analysis isn't detailed enough. Maybe check with ur teacher how u could improve it. I personally recommend an alternative analysis, but keep it succinct. Remember though u aren't being marked on vocab here But yeah, 3 paras, good detail = FULL MARKS.
If i write 2 pargraphs like that would i be able to get full marks???
How will you start your second paragraph ?
Just pretty much the same way u start the first, however just say, :another example where the writer....
Which is first Lang 2 or lit 2 bc on my timetable it says lit 2 however the teachers are teaching Lang 2 in lessons so can u explain or anyone
For aqa lit 2 is pn Wednesday and lang 2 is on Friday
@@Dee-ux4vq yeah but I don’t get why is that they teachers are preparing first for Lang 2 then for lit 2 ????
How could you analyse 'zoom' on the adverb 'uncontrollably'?
is lit paper 2 before lang paper 2?
yes
We dont have to talk about structure for this Qs 3 right?
Correct. It’s only language as stated in the question
langauge is both language ad structure
@@patatoe558 bit late
@@patatoe558not for this question
what of evidence
Party after dark, now we roll, we don't smash now
Party after dark, cut the lights, this the blackout
Party after dark, we don't stop 'til we pass out
Party after dark, welcome to the madhouse
what
@@nobodyelsemattersanduh 🤣🤣
real
what does he do
" That's my zooming 'incomplete' "? 12:11
‘That’s my zooming in complete’
How many paragraphs for this question??
watch the video bro he literally says it twice
@Maira :) that's just wet why you making him go watch the video when you know what the answer anyway? You people like to waste time
@Ramim Rahman 2-3 paragraphs
In what I try to write after learning such greatness that is improving how to write , in structured order while think it out to say it (p) the additional thoughts while learning to stay in order of structuring my thoughts into somekind of cohesiveness I often struggle but getting better is my focus as i attempt to explain the other parts of the pretzel that is about what to try after learning of the weather conditions in that situation explained , not that advanced yet but I try (R) the weather conditions when the snow was biting the face, chilling in itself and must have needed and caused a need be with self caring items, like hot totty teas that can possible better break the freezing air bite (E) once , you drink a cup of hot to warm tea totty of honey and warm to hot water with opinion of sprinkles of red pepper , or lemon to break up the shiver it must have brought after that ( Z)FREEZE bit (E) when making additional hot tea totties of those freeze colds to prevent anykind of shiver made of the cold FREEZE felt just from learning of it
(L) as I try to learn
Again , just trying to do what you are teaching and it make differences that not everyone might not know but I know the major difference in what I just tried to explain and I know the vobaulaty , structure , comparison with elements , and sentence structure needs more for me to focus but I try
And , have a cup of hot tea with honey too , if any kind of freeze like that ! Or not feeling that good with hands covering the warmth of the cup to ever gulp of it's tea...
( Did not know how to put it in the writing as I was thinking an additional saying and something like what I tried today's learning tutorial )
And cortisone and ever market is must have item in cabinet when traveling because I think the learning was about traveling slops knocking into all kinds of things , reminding to sanitize and gargle with small amount Luke warm to salt water whenever being in cold weather like I tried to explain and continue to try...
Thank you for letting me try to be better !
Language or lit
You spent 8 minutes to write 1 Prtezel in a fast pace, how are we supposed to write that much in just 13 minutes when you can't write one prtezel in 4 minutes.
so true
@@hyxpnotiq957 you'll be fine I got a 7 after not being able to try question 2 at all hahah
But he was explaining it to us as he was writing.
it’s because he was explaining it to us
@@iman-mh8uk Idc mate I got a 7 so doesn’t matter anymore
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