Just discovered your channel and subscribing is worth it. I am now having marathons of your fanfics and everything is just so awesome!! Great writing skill :)
I agree with many others that this is a great and very unique story and that it has alot of potential to be expanded. I like the other stories but I love THIS plot storyline the very best! I would totally read it, I hope you write more.
this is ridiculous romantic and funny! flowness. emotions, haRRyness, Happyness. So cute. Louis' behaviour was just perfect.!
that was just like aghhhh. you're writing is never shit and I am forever envious. also, your music taste is wonderful.
I'm speachless. It was AMAZAYN!!!
You know i think you could become a famous writter one day😉
Keep up with the good work👍👌
Just discovered your channel and subscribing is worth it. I am now having marathons of your fanfics and everything is just so awesome!! Great writing skill :)
THIS WAS SO PERFECT OMFG JUST PERFECT. YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER, MY FAVORITE ACTUALLY. JUST PERFECT.
You give me major Larry feels okay? You're an AHMAZING writer! You really needa do more one shots (:
This is amazing you have to make another one!!!!
Omg i love your writing!!
This is just so beautiful! Your writing is just... PERFECTION!
that was amzingggg!!! you should do more one-shots
I agree with many others that this is a great and very unique story and that it has alot of potential to be expanded. I like the other stories but I love THIS plot storyline the very best! I would totally read it, I hope you write more.
I have to say, I really liked that story... It's not too cheesy or something and it's funny... Keep going cause you are good at it!!!
Wauw awesome story!!! You're a great Writer! You should make it longer!!! I Love it! :)
Stop putting yourself down you are amazing
Its amazing , you should write more larry stories :D lots of love x
I absolutely love this!!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww soo good u are such ana amazing writer pls keep writing stuff like this
this is amazing !! oh my goodness you talented person you
This was just amazing gorgeous an many many more
*take a deep breath*
ohmygosh!!!ican'tbelieve!!!Thiswassooooooamazing! xD
This was so adorable! I just loved it, it was amazing
HOLY CRAP!!!!! I loved this so much! I'm subscribing now!
THIS IS SO AWESOME *________________*. I dont like oneshot but this is so pefect, i want more
dang i love this so much i had a question what is the second song? amaing one shot you are a brillant writer :)
this is amzing well done i absolutly love it ur gonna make more right if not u should!
you should so make that into a story I didn't want that 2 end
Omfg I spazz every time you post it's not shit.. not at all it's addicting.x.
You punched me right in the feels. Thanks
This.was.perfect! You.should Do more one shots
I saw this video in my subscriptions and I was like 12min? But than I saw it was by you and I spazzed out!! SO ADORABLE!!!!
oh my fucking god that was sooooo goood seriously make it into a series please!!!!
AHH MAG GAWD THAT WAS PERFECT-3
Oh my god, this was amazing (: love it 33
THAT WAS PERFECTLY PERFECTING PERFECTED PERFECT! And I'm saying shit because it's so good.
@peace6453 constant coversations by Passion pit and Dead hearts by Stars
oh my god this was AMAZING I love it!!!
looooved it!
PERFECTION.
Well this is perfection.
I LOVE THIS OMFG BLESS
OMG they're so adorable
i just can't control these emotions!!
Freaking Out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!
oh my fucking god this is amazing!! A part 2 would be perfect!
Haha poor Liam got ditched by Lou!!! Hahaha, still lovin all your stories
I am 875% done, I can't. brb singing about my feelings.
So freaking adorable
AAWWWW That was so adorable! I totally love it!!
OMFG that was AMAZAYN!
I loved it, it was so cute!!
love it!!!
I WANT IT TO CONTINUE.... OHHH :'(
MORE ONE SHOTS LIKE THIS ♥
OH MY GOD ADORABLE
That... Was... AWESOME! So cute!!! Great job! :DDDDDDD
That was incredibly cute!
OMG THIS SHOULD BE TURN INTO A MULTICHAPTER~~ *pardon all capslock* I'm just too happy.
bTW What's the title of the song when they;re dancing??
omfg toooo cuuuuteee!!!!!!!!
bless them!!!! cute
Moreeeeee please
awwwww i loves it sooo much
This is soo perfect!!! *-*
AWWEE SOO CUTE!
What was the first and last song called?
Amazing
love ut love it love it!!! you are r
OMG THIS IS SO CUTE STOP OMG OMG OMG !!!!
OHHH MY GURDDD !!!!!!!!!!
ommg that was Perfect ♥♥♥
Awwwwwwwwwww that was so cute! My feels are all mush now. :) awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
That's so cute!
love it
asdfghjkl; this is perfect! I know its a one-shot but if you ever get bored, you should add another part! it is cute as fuck!
can you do a niam one shot pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ADORABLE :D
aww cute i loved it
this is fucking adorableee !
Okay the first song I thought it was diced pineapples by.rick Ross I was like aww shit dice pineapples they got some hell yeah but yeah good story
Oh my GOD
Wow me likey!!
Amaziiing
So cute
Loved it :)
Amazayn *-*
Nouis would be great
Part2?
DAAWWWWWWWW OKGOMGOMGGJSJBDBDSIEJJSJDDHDJHDHBSB I can't... So cute.. And this is why I love u.
Do a NOUIS or NIAM one! I just want niall :3
@Felly Marie
This was cute
I hate you. I hate you all. Making me feel this way. LARRY FEELS?! REALLY? !
IN-FUCKING-CREDIBLE !! As always. I about had a fucking heart attack. Well, there goes my ovaries *Dead* X_X
Awwww
lol I couldn't focus on the story cause I was distracted by ed sheeran, Gosh his voice is beautiful.
Omfg soooo cute xD
Nyce story but da words are not clear
waww:o
Google the lyrics
Take me out of the oven, cause I'm fucking done.
Gonna go jump off a cliff now.
Firts comment and view!!!
What was the last song?