I'm happy Louis & Harry didn't really do anything since they both weren't sober. Louis is such a badass but he is a sweetheart too! Really like this part!
oh my...! this episode is amazing! I was dying! in Niam part... wow. And poor Zayn, I hope he change someday.. and I'm speachless. right now. so much ACTION.
I cant even explainy anger at the moment. I wish I could jump into the story and grab a pan and smack Cook then cook him for Lou. Harry is so HILARIOUS
Omg the pic old cook, that's one of the freakiest picture I've seen!! But i kinda feel sorry for zayn, but i LOVE harry and lou together!! and i cant to see what happens with Niam and S And omg this was just an amazing episode!! Can wait for the next ones!
OMg AMAZING!!!! Wtf with cook. & Love how Louis looks after Harry. and Niall's back in the story, and liam and Zayn. hahaha need more! xxx Your an amazing writer!
Louis and Harry are so adorable. Is it weird that i think that Harry's even MORE precious when he's on pills? NO COOK! I kind of saw that coming though. Really good though!
omf zayn is serious shit stirrer with louisandharry this season i can feel it. needy, vulnerable!harry is the best and god loving, sweet!louis is just the best.
Omfg i just want liam and niall to be together already! I had a feeling that cook was going to be at the end and i was right! Omfg this is amazing and cant wait for the next part!!
Omg, I am obsessed! I've watched this episode 3 times already! Ahhh I can't wait for the next one. I am so impatient. Omg I want some Niam action soon. Eeeep!
WHAT oh my good no .. ugh looooueeh oh my god niallllllll .. okay I love ziam but niam would just be so cute. Niall would come out because he's in love with liam and liam would get who he's wanted forever and I just can't NIAM
Harry is so cute when he's rolling! but OMFG I KNEW IT I WAS JUST WAITING FOR COOK WHEN THEY SAID HE WAS COMING IM LIKE OMG DON'T GO LOU!!! and it was almost over and I was like OK so maybe Cook didn't come then it was like *taps on lous shoulder* and im like OMFG its Cook I just know it and IT WAS! OMFG Cook better not hurt my BooBear! he deserves a smack in the face.......WITH A METAL BAT.... COVERED IN SPIKES..... THAT'S ON FIRE!!!
I've got a whole lot to say bout this. First of all, Zayn's character is a real douche sometimes, but I under he's hurt. Second, I think its really sweet that Harry sort of changed Louis in a way. You couldn't of picked a more murderous looking picture of cook haha. I personally don't know whether I ship Niam or Ziam more, so if it goes either way, I'd be happy. Just please please update soon! its a snow day away from school and this. This just made my mood even better... it always does.
how are you soo amazing u are an amazing writer i love how louis doesnt want to fuck harry yet i like how he wants it to be special and yay niam feels and the unforgetable ending this is just to awesome
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CHOOSE SUCH A SCARY PICTURE OF COOK??? I'M SITTING ON MY OWN IN THE DARK IN THE MITTLE OF THE NIGHT!!! NOW I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO FALL ASLEEP!!! D;
Larry= Afreakingdorable!! Harry! You are just to cute. Zouis= Make up already! You guys are like the bestest of buds! (but not by kissing, nope I will not approve!) Niam= Niall you are really fucking stupid. Make up your mind since its really fucking obvious Liam likes you. Then theres Cook. I KNEW IT! I wasn't expecting a punch in the face tho. Like really Cook really? You should take a chill pill and maybe fall off into a cliff... into the ocean.... full of hungry sharks...
Yesterday I saw that you had uploaded, but than youtube diceded to be anoying. So I couldn't watch until now. But I loved it! I want Niam together, Cook must get punched really hard by anyone, maybe even Elenor. Why did Cook beat Louis anyway? Harry is so funny when he is on drugs. :D I can't wait on your next upload, but I'll. Love you xxx
Omg 0.0 fucking Cook. I had to see that coming!!! Waaah 0.0 Ok before I forget; Harry on pills is so cute ;). But I can't wait for next week you're so amazing I love Risk so fucking much and I hate Cook so fucking mutch he's so fucked up argh!!! & NIAM
no, no, no, no, no!!!!!!! What??? ANYONE CAN HURT BOOBEAR OK?? I'LL COME IN THE STORY AND I'LL KILL YOU COOK!!! YOU CAN'T TOUCH HIM, TALK TO HIM, HURT HIM... YOU CAN'T EVEN LOOK AT HIM OK?? SO LEAVE BOOBEAR ALONE!!! anyway... This is so fuking perfect! amazing! xx
OH MY GOD SHIT JUST HAPPENED!!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE THIS STORY AND I FUCKING LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!!! LAAARRRRRYYYY FFFFEEEEEEEEEELLLLLSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh cook...it's been months or a year! Just because you have mental issues doesn't mean you have to follow Louis around like a lost puppy trying to hurt him!! And Zayn..who is it either Louis or Liam...Niall's right.
omg everyone just go hate zayn now lol. poor bby. haha but cook like wtf go away no one likes youuuu expect eleanor, who doesn't know the real you so technically no one does!! i feel so bad for zayn tho like i cannot get over it. he might probably even loves liam and liam is just like: eehh..nope. i feel so baaaaaahhdddd.
Harry is crazy lol. Louis calling him 'babe' and 'love' and being so calm haha so cute .
I'm happy Louis & Harry didn't really do anything since they both weren't sober. Louis is such a badass but he is a sweetheart too! Really like this part!
Ahhhhhh! You're such a creative writer! Love how Louis looks after Harry and so frightened that Cook showed up. Zayn, Zayn!
OMFG!!!! Harry is so cute when he's rolling! and Louis Respect him too much to di 'it' while Harry is rolling..... i really LOVE this story!
zayns face and his reaction go great with what he said
3:18
omfg this was amazing its so cute how Louis wanted to wait!
Read it again because I just can't wait for next one. Your stories have amazing depth!
oh my...! this episode is amazing! I was dying! in Niam part... wow. And poor Zayn, I hope he change someday.. and I'm speachless. right now. so much ACTION.
omg this chapter :) larry feels and niam love this so much :) amazing
I cant even explainy anger at the moment. I wish I could jump into the story and grab a pan and smack Cook then cook him for Lou. Harry is so HILARIOUS
The picture you used for Cook actually scared me
Omg the pic old cook, that's one of the freakiest picture I've seen!! But i kinda feel sorry for zayn, but i LOVE harry and lou together!! and i cant to see what happens with Niam and S And omg this was just an amazing episode!! Can wait for the next ones!
OMg AMAZING!!!! Wtf with cook. & Love how Louis looks after Harry. and Niall's back in the story, and liam and Zayn. hahaha need more! xxx Your an amazing writer!
Louis and Harry are so adorable. Is it weird that i think that Harry's even MORE precious when he's on pills? NO COOK! I kind of saw that coming though. Really good though!
omg omg omg! Why is this too amazing? can't get enough. Louis&Harry are SO cute! Ugh... i need the next one asap. :D lol
loved it.
omf zayn is serious shit stirrer with louisandharry this season i can feel it. needy, vulnerable!harry is the best and god loving, sweet!louis is just the best.
and Harry on ecstasy is HILARIOUS
Omfg i just want liam and niall to be together already! I had a feeling that cook was going to be at the end and i was right! Omfg this is amazing and cant wait for the next part!!
OMG the end its so.. oh god!!! i didnt thought such a think would happen.. i cant believe it!! more pleasssee and soon
Omg, I am obsessed! I've watched this episode 3 times already! Ahhh I can't wait for the next one. I am so impatient. Omg I want some Niam action soon. Eeeep!
WHAT oh my good no .. ugh looooueeh
oh my god niallllllll .. okay I love ziam but niam would just be so cute. Niall would come out because he's in love with liam and liam would get who he's wanted forever and I just can't
NIAM
Harry is so cute when he's rolling! but OMFG I KNEW IT I WAS JUST WAITING FOR COOK WHEN THEY SAID HE WAS COMING IM LIKE OMG DON'T GO LOU!!! and it was almost over and I was like OK so maybe Cook didn't come then it was like *taps on lous shoulder* and im like OMFG its Cook I just know it and IT WAS! OMFG Cook better not hurt my BooBear! he deserves a smack in the face.......WITH A METAL BAT.... COVERED IN SPIKES..... THAT'S ON FIRE!!!
AH OMG U ALWAYS LEAVE ME SCREAMING
Holy fudge cake that last pictures scary :o!
oh damn cook is back.
Ohhhh nooo that was cook at the end wasn't it? Oh man I want Harry and Eleanor to meet cook solo bad
The ending was just..woah.
I've got a whole lot to say bout this. First of all, Zayn's character is a real douche sometimes, but I under he's hurt. Second, I think its really sweet that Harry sort of changed Louis in a way. You couldn't of picked a more murderous looking picture of cook haha. I personally don't know whether I ship Niam or Ziam more, so if it goes either way, I'd be happy. Just please please update soon! its a snow day away from school and this. This just made my mood even better... it always does.
how are you soo amazing u are an amazing writer i love how louis doesnt want to fuck harry yet i like how he wants it to be special and yay niam feels and the unforgetable ending this is just to awesome
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CHOOSE SUCH A SCARY PICTURE OF COOK??? I'M SITTING ON MY OWN IN THE DARK IN THE MITTLE OF THE NIGHT!!! NOW I WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO FALL ASLEEP!!! D;
Oh god, Louis needs to tell eleanor!
AAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! I cannot wait for the next update!!!!!!
PLEASE update soon!!!!!!
YEEEEEEEEEEEEES, NIAM!
OMG!!! Cook is crazy!!! I can't wait for the next one!!!
I HAD SUCH A DAMN FEELING THAT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN.
I JUST DIED! THE ENDING KILLED ME!!!!! AND DAMN IT!! I THOUGHT ZIAM WOULD BE A THING!! Ugh Niall gets in the way! :(
Btw continue please more more morr more I love it so much!! :)
OMFG! i fucking screamed! I'M NOT OKAY!
i swear i felt like cooking cook
oh my fucking god.The end is SO awesome!
I like how louis didn't like fuck him just because harry begged him to and did what was right. Cute a'f.
me: screamking at the end
mom:jesica wtf
Me:OMG MOM OMG OMG
I think I screamed, idek. That ending..
omg,wats cook gonna do!? im so tense i gotta find out!!!! im worried about harry and louis! Dx
Larry= Afreakingdorable!! Harry! You are just to cute. Zouis= Make up already! You guys are like the bestest of buds! (but not by kissing, nope I will not approve!) Niam= Niall you are really fucking stupid. Make up your mind since its really fucking obvious Liam likes you. Then theres Cook. I KNEW IT! I wasn't expecting a punch in the face tho. Like really Cook really? You should take a chill pill and maybe fall off into a cliff... into the ocean.... full of hungry sharks...
oooh God soo good!! I want Niall with Liam!! c'mon why does Cook have to hate and abuse Louis?? It's so sad! Keep writing this it's fucking awesome!!
DRAMA!!!! I love drama
I screamed when i saw you uploaded, i was like dklfaj;weiofjadkl;sghjkaAAAAAAAHHH
hehe louis and harry are so cute!!!!
What are the two songs in this?
what kind of music do you use?
I. AM. IN. LOVE. WITH. YOU! You're AMAZING! And your story's.......god! BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Yesterday I saw that you had uploaded, but than youtube diceded to be anoying. So I couldn't watch until now.
But I loved it! I want Niam together, Cook must get punched really hard by anyone, maybe even Elenor. Why did Cook beat Louis anyway? Harry is so funny when he is on drugs. :D
I can't wait on your next upload, but I'll.
Love you xxx
Zayn i am here 4 u
Cant wait to c what happen next... Thank you.. Love it
Omg 0.0 fucking Cook. I had to see that coming!!! Waaah 0.0
Ok before I forget; Harry on pills is so cute ;). But I can't wait for next week you're so amazing I love Risk so fucking much and I hate Cook so fucking mutch he's so fucked up argh!!! & NIAM
no, no, no, no, no!!!!!!!
What???
ANYONE CAN HURT BOOBEAR OK?? I'LL COME IN THE STORY AND I'LL KILL YOU COOK!!! YOU CAN'T TOUCH HIM, TALK TO HIM, HURT HIM... YOU CAN'T EVEN LOOK AT HIM OK?? SO LEAVE BOOBEAR ALONE!!!
anyway...
This is so fuking perfect! amazing! xx
OH MY FUCKING GOD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THIS WAS SO GOOD I CANT ASDFGHKJAADDFSFKG;F
I KNEW IT WAS COOK ASDGAFA
OMFG harry im pretty sure thats exactly how he would be lol and pleaasee upp date like noww! :)
Oh god this is fucking perfect idk why but I really like zouis they are my fav after larry
NO ONE, REPEAT, NO ONE TOUCHES BOOBEAR WITH ONE SINGLE FINGER
COOK. YOU TOUCH OUR LOUBEAR AGAIN, WE WILL PERSONALLY COME AND FIND YOU.
YOU BETTER WATCH IT.
oh my god!!! i love it so so so so much
OMG i did not see that coming
Who else got scared when cook's face appeared at the last second?
OMFGGGG no no no no no no no no no No no no I'm dieing on
what the fuCK OMG IM CRYING WHeN IS THE NEXT I CANT WAIT OKAY I JUST CANT OMG IM SORRY GYFFERP9P;OERHGGEH
What the fuck NIALL you need to like calm yourself and be with Liam OMG amazaynnnn
OH MY GOD SHIT JUST HAPPENED!!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE THIS STORY AND I FUCKING LOVE YOUR WRITING!!!!!! LAAARRRRRYYYY FFFFEEEEEEEEEELLLLLSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh cook...it's been months or a year! Just because you have mental issues doesn't mean you have to follow Louis around like a lost puppy trying to hurt him!! And Zayn..who is it either Louis or Liam...Niall's right.
Can you try to add. Another if you can't I will under stand. ;)
omg everyone just go hate zayn now lol. poor bby. haha but cook like wtf go away no one likes youuuu expect eleanor, who doesn't know the real you so technically no one does!! i feel so bad for zayn tho like i cannot get over it. he might probably even loves liam and liam is just like: eehh..nope. i feel so baaaaaahhdddd.
I need another please!!!
I just loooved it ! But please do Ziam :D huge shipper over here ;)
god goD god god god god God god oH MY FREAKING GOD
It's not my fault if Harry parent hate Louis , coz Louis let Harry take the pill !
ahhhhhhhh cliff hanger!!!!!!!!
Shit! Didn't see that coming. :O
I love you btw
Love itttt
OOOHHH FUCK!
Sorry I'm just a little upset with the ending. Ugh. But the Larry was really cute, aww.
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!!!
next one plz...like...NOW!!
post more please
More Niam pls :3
Cook touched boobear NOONE TOUCH BOOBEAR
WAT THE HELL COOK!
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can i punch Cook!!?!!
Oh no he didn't :o
NOOOOOOOOO
MOREEEEEEE
no no no no nononononononooooooo!!!!!!!!
Omg, everytime I watch Larry fanfics, the gay marriage comes up & it makes me pissed off.
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nooo :(
is it bad that I just felt love with zouis ???
OMG OMG OMG OMG NOOO
Louis tops i want It plz
Izan