Anne is just straight up pissing me off now. Gemma though, OMG. I love Gemma! My Larry feels are tingling, and Ziam? AWW. You're an amazing writer, and I love the music you use in your fanfictions. I can't even express what I'm feeling right now. I'm smiling like an idiot..
WOAH I didn't expect that! Anne is surely getting me angry while Gemma is the sweetest thing ever :) aww they are just soooo happy together, don't you ruin this Anne or I'll hunt you down! amazing episode as always :-)
I love the cliffhangers! reading the dialogue, looking at the pictures, imaging the action and sound of their voices...and noticing the clock ticking down...and somehow the last scene always comes as a surprise! Keep writing, it's gettin' really good (not that it wasn't already)!
OMGG at first when Lou's like "I wanna hear you scream" I thought Anne would burst in while they were going at it!! omg heart attack thank god that didnt happen
What can I say? I love this, it's just so incredible! I don't like Anne at all, right now. She really pisses me off! I LOVE Gemma :) You are seriously one of the best and amazing writers on YT, i'm NOT kidding! Always when I see you've uploaded a new part, i'm so excited and can't stop smiling. I just love this sooo much. I'm so excited for the next one! :D If i'm honest, it is a little fun when it's a cliffhanger, because that makes it more exciting... just my opinion ;) I LOVED IT!! :)
OH SHIT. I loved this episode it was so cute :) Harry & Louis are just adorable I love the whole mcdonalds joke part that was funny! The ending was so intense ahhh I hope Anne comes through & accepts Harry & I'm excited for Gemma & Louis to meet! I can't wait for the next episode I know it will be amazing :) Great job, loved the episode!
i like it soooooo much......... u r an amazing writer and i have no idea how this story can end and i wish u good luck on that cuz i think it will be a lot harder than skinny love to end this story thx for this amaaaazing story and i wish u luck in your life and i hope one day i will be able to read a book for u while i'm sitting on the beach
you have 124 comments on this....thats insane! you deserve it though this is by far the best fic I've read about them since i read room 317....i'm actually starting to think this is better because its nowhere near as depressing...so LOVED IT! and post whenever you can because just seeing it in my subscriptions makes me smile!
omfg like seriously is was having a mini heart attack right after anne & gemma got in the car i was like she's gonna walk in any minute during the smexi time ... like gosh dont play with my emotions! but still continuee!!
NO NO NO NOOOOO!!! Gemma better have talked some sense into Anne during their car ride or I'm gonna scream! GAHHH!!! Larry!! D; Btw, I reaaallllyyy REAAAAALLLLYYYY wanna see some Ziam(; Love yeh!
holy mother of the Lord Jesus Christ! cliffhanger...haha thats my middle name!!! love it sooo much!!! i hope anne understands their relationship and allows it...cuz if not well...some1 is gunna die...and its not gunna b louis or harry!
Damn it Anne!!! Urghh She fucking pisses me off in this story! -.- Seriously! I can't take it anymore!!! To much DRAMA :O This story is so good. It makes me wanna cry. I have never read anything so good like this in my life
im not liking anne right now....she's pissing me off,but i ADORE gemma for supporting harry. wish my sis was more like her. hope to see more NIAM soon,too. thanks for the upload!
Honestly I'm shockd Harry didn't jump up yelling that he slept all night. Bu it wuz good! It feels like Ive been waiting forever for this episode 2 come. Rofl, I think Harry shuld jus be like "Sh*t tell dad! I'm in love now" bu it mite take him forever to do that! Wonder what Zayn&Liam r doin? :)
i hope the power of gemma & harold can convince anne that harry CAN love louis, and he will never STOP loving him. anyways, ziam ziam ziam ziam ziam. just sayin. ziam!!
OH MY F*CKING GOD and you ask me to wait for the next one ? NO! It's terrible I want it now. ahhahaha I can't stop loving RISK, it'sa drug for me. I can't wait :(
Anne is just straight up pissing me off now. Gemma though, OMG. I love Gemma! My Larry feels are tingling, and Ziam? AWW. You're an amazing writer, and I love the music you use in your fanfictions. I can't even express what I'm feeling right now. I'm smiling like an idiot..
WOAH I didn't expect that! Anne is surely getting me angry while Gemma is the sweetest thing ever :) aww they are just soooo happy together, don't you ruin this Anne or I'll hunt you down!
amazing episode as always :-)
I love the cliffhangers! reading the dialogue, looking at the pictures, imaging the action and sound of their voices...and noticing the clock ticking down...and somehow the last scene always comes as a surprise! Keep writing, it's gettin' really good (not that it wasn't already)!
OMGG at first when Lou's like "I wanna hear you scream" I thought Anne would burst in while they were going at it!! omg heart attack thank god that didnt happen
What can I say? I love this, it's just so incredible!
I don't like Anne at all, right now. She really pisses me off!
I LOVE Gemma :)
You are seriously one of the best and amazing writers on YT, i'm NOT kidding! Always when I see you've uploaded a new part, i'm so excited and can't stop smiling.
I just love this sooo much. I'm so excited for the next one! :D
If i'm honest, it is a little fun when it's a cliffhanger, because that makes it more exciting... just my opinion ;)
I LOVED IT!! :)
OH SHIT. I loved this episode it was so cute :) Harry & Louis are just adorable I love the whole mcdonalds joke part that was funny! The ending was so intense ahhh I hope Anne comes through & accepts Harry & I'm excited for Gemma & Louis to meet! I can't wait for the next episode I know it will be amazing :) Great job, loved the episode!
OMG I loved this one! I hope Anna won't tell Mr. Styles!!
It's amazing, I can't wait for the next one
i like it soooooo much......... u r an amazing writer and i have no idea how this story can end and i wish u good luck on that cuz i think it will be a lot harder than skinny love to end this story thx for this amaaaazing story and i wish u luck in your life and i hope one day i will be able to read a book for u while i'm sitting on the beach
I don't read these with Like Harry and Lou's personalities and voices... but I can like imagine them doing these things . UGH THESE ARE SO DAMN GOOD
you have 124 comments on this....thats insane! you deserve it though this is by far the best fic I've read about them since i read room 317....i'm actually starting to think this is better because its nowhere near as depressing...so LOVED IT! and post whenever you can because just seeing it in my subscriptions makes me smile!
OMFG!!! >.
They are soooo meant for each other. How they don't care were they go and just... It's fucking love!!
amazing story i cant wait for ziam or niam or whoever to come in!
Its awesome! I LOVE YOU FOR MAKING THIS
I'm going to have a heart attack :D these intense scenes and cliffhanger, mygoodness!
omfg like seriously is was having a mini heart attack right after anne & gemma got in the car i was like she's gonna walk in any minute during the smexi time ... like gosh dont play with my emotions! but still continuee!!
best part
zayn: its kinda creepy watching you smile at the ceiling :)
don't know why that made me so happy
omg, i LOVE this episode! larry fluff forever!! you have to make more soon - i wanna know if she finally changes her mind!!
anD IM CRYING CRYING CEYING I NED A NEW UPDATE
can i just say that this is perfect, and i can't wait for more, because thE SUSPENSE
OMG they're so cute!!!!!!
Anna, get out!!!!!
i don't mind cliffhangers, makes me want to read more
nomnomnom, hehe
NO NO NO NOOOOO!!! Gemma better have talked some sense into Anne during their car ride or I'm gonna scream! GAHHH!!! Larry!! D;
Btw, I reaaallllyyy REAAAAALLLLYYYY wanna see some Ziam(;
Love yeh!
OMGGGGG MAKE MORE PLZ!!!!! LOVE THIS!!!
I love this episode!!!! Great job babe!!! :) ;)
OMG I Fucking love you serious
holy mother of the Lord Jesus Christ! cliffhanger...haha thats my middle name!!! love it sooo much!!! i hope anne understands their relationship and allows it...cuz if not well...some1 is gunna die...and its not gunna b louis or harry!
OMG I STARTED CRYING IM SO HAPPY LIKR OMG
THIS WAS EVEN A BIGGER CLIFFHANGER THAN THE LAST!!! haha! loved it though!
OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG I CANT STAND IT ANY MORE ... I NEED MORE!!!!!
please please please please please please please update soon !!!!!!!
Damn it Anne!!! Urghh She fucking pisses me off in this story! -.- Seriously! I can't take it anymore!!! To much DRAMA :O This story is so good. It makes me wanna cry. I have never read anything so good like this in my life
OMG! absloutly loved the living chit out of it :D
the McDonalds ahh so cute 8-)
i am soo smiling!
im not liking anne right now....she's pissing me off,but i ADORE gemma for supporting harry. wish my sis was more like her. hope to see more NIAM soon,too. thanks for the upload!
omgggg these damn cliffhangers!!!!!!
exaclty! she's taking too long to upload the next part!!
so how about im reading this right now on new years and one direction is playing on the radio
omg my mind was blown away
Gemma so purdy.
OH GOD i really really really hope she wont do anything bad...i really want Anne to understand the love btw larry. ZIAM FTW
lou is going to have lots of "FUN" while zayn is gone
AHHHH!!!! This was soooo good!!!! What happens next???? ahhhhh!!!!
DO THE NEXT ONE PLEASE AND REALLY REALLY SOON!
omg cliffhager why do that to us....... please please upload soon and more NIAM pwease
''i want to take you on a date but dont expect any thing fancy mcdonal status''
Can you make one I can watch on my phone I can't see this one :(
next one please your a briliam writer xxx
next next next, hehe, ilove ur stories!!! :)
Honestly I'm shockd Harry didn't jump up yelling that he slept all night. Bu it wuz good! It feels like Ive been waiting forever for this episode 2 come. Rofl, I think Harry shuld jus be like "Sh*t tell dad! I'm in love now" bu it mite take him forever to do that! Wonder what Zayn&Liam r doin? :)
xD "More like McDonald's status. Not even a Bic Mac just like the dollar menu"
IM DYING
i hope the power of gemma & harold can convince anne that harry CAN love louis, and he will never STOP loving him. anyways, ziam ziam ziam ziam ziam. just sayin. ziam!!
all hells about to break loose
This is soooooooo cute ! amazing :)
They better cross there fingers they don’t get caught 💚💙
i love it sososo much ! can't wait for the next one! and btw ZIAM ZIAM ZIAM ... ;)
ur so awesome and ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!111 im screaming my kungs out
:O I love cliffhangers!!!
Am sorry but can you please please pleaseeee put this on moblie.? Thank you.
I survived the episode on 3%
post it for phones please
Can't watch is there a way u can make a duplicate plzzzzzzz
Fucking A Gemma Fucking A!!! You go gurl!!!
I love ur stories they r amazing will u write with me?
kk first off yay ziam! :) BUT I'M GONNA BURN THE GROUND ANNE WALKS ON
at first i was just like AWWWW and then im like OOOOOOOOOH well that ruined the romantic moment...x
I can't see it in my iPod :(
i love it sooooo much
CANT WATCH IT ON MY IPOD!!!!!!! HELP!!!!!
You should have written the ACTUAL Larry scene (if ya know what i mean)
Need to See this!! Please make it for mobile!
i'm sorry i know that this is a larry story but pleaaaaaaaaas can u add more zayn in it pleas :)
Can you make a duplicate pleaseeeee
It wont let me see the video....
OH MY F*CKING GOD and you ask me to wait for the next one ? NO! It's terrible I want it now. ahhahaha I can't stop loving RISK, it'sa drug for me. I can't wait :(
love it
darn i cant watch it on my phone.
I can't watch it please please make a duplicate!
I cant breathe D:
I love it so much but Anne needs to go away and let them be
I cant watch it on my ipod
well at least Gemma and Lou love Harry for who he is
I absolutly love this story, but can you please make a duplicate? Thanks, love:)
Oh and more NIAM!!!!!!!!!! :D -3
ahhh holy shit!!! i advise harry gemma and louis run!!!!!!!!!
where's niall???
ASDFGHJKL MOTHERFUDGING DYING OVER HERE :D
love itt
Anne don't break them they love each other gemma but talk some sence into grrrrrrrrrr
Will u write with me?
ikr
I can't watch either my computer doesn't work Nd I'm on my iPod
MORE PRETTY BADLY WANT TO READ MORE!
I get up check UA-cam and I can't watch it. 😭
Duplicate please
Hate my mobile -.-
HELL yeah!
OMG SAME HERE
Love it, larry is sooo cute
DAMN U ANNE RUIN THE MOMENT
Dying here! It won't let me watch it on my phone or iPad! Plz duplicate!!!!!!!!!! If u don't I swear my life will end! D':
And Anne ruined their moment :(