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When They Deflate [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark / Romance)
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- Опубліковано 18 жов 2018
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"When They Deflate"
Written by Magpiepony
Narrated by TheLostNarrator
With Special Guest VAs
Magpiepony as Pinkie Pie and herself
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PegasusPitchVA as Cheese Sandwich
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Agent0Fluffy as Rarity
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Flurry Palette as Apple Bloom
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Caitbug as Diamond Tiara
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Quill N Lead as Pokey Pierce
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Mary Medley as Ink Dye
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Kevin Macleod
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Ṡ̵͓̹̘͍͛͒͐̆͘͟͢͡ͅH̴̥̲͖̯́͒͒͐̅͊̚͟E̢͎͙̙͇̹̙̭̤͌̒͛̎́͠ͅ Ẃ̴̨̖̗̣̥̃͆̾̚I̢̙͕̺̠͖̳̠͑͂͂̒̎́̓́̆͟͠ͅĹ̡̺̤̮̏̎̉͗̉̓͟L̶̡̧̨̺̻̆̂̈̊̾̾̓̒͡ B̵̨̢̘͙͍͕̲̟̙̒̋̓̊̃̃͘͡͝Ę̛̖̻̰̠̝̪̔̾̀̿͝ Ḿ̜̟̳̼̣̹̻̩̬͐̂͒̐̽͘͝͠Į̶̛̹͕̤̯̫̩̖͙̂͗̿͆͒̓̽̔͝N̺̗̲͎̩̬̣͆̓́̐͊͒͘̕͠È̷̛̟̖̹̬̲͎̣̏̓͐͋̅̄͛͢͝ S̶̭̙̳̬̻̯͎̹̩̄͛͐̈́̀̾͠O͕̞̰̝͍͕̿̎͂̏̕O̷̮̩͉̙̣̼̹͎͔͌̈̎͝͠N͍̘̥̳̙̮̄̀̍̿̐̑͊̚͞
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TheLostNarrator wrong!!! Mag's heart belongs to Lost
Wrong!! Mag's heart belongs to Lost
WOW....hey im new here do you take fan mail 😊😊😊
S.S.S.S .B that's what I said XD
Ah Crap we got a Containment Breach
Cheese Sandwich... If we follow the Pinkamina Diane Pie logic with him, I could see his name potentially be Chester Elliott Sandwich. Not sure why, but in such a dark way, he feels like a Chester.
That's perfect
I can't wait for the creepy pasta's of this!
Chester the jester!
He does look like a Chester
M.I.D Productions Why Elliott though?
Wait wait. Diamond tiara saying "insane pink pony" is like a human saying "crazy white woman"
LMAOOOOOOOO
PFFFFFF-HHHHHHHHHHHHHHH-
"crazy white woman" is the best description for a karen💀
I think in real life diamond tiara as an adult would be a Karen lol
LMAO
“I let you out of the cage one time and this happens?!”
Best reaction to death ever
My first thought was "Wait? Cage? What were YOU doing with a cage???" lol
I'm asking why the hell that pony was in a cage and why they would need one anyways.
Pegasi and all
Y'know it took me a minute to get the joke and hopefully by now y'all figured out that Lost was referencing the cage joke with Pitch and Magpie 😅😅😅
MINNEN
Just imagine the children.
Twice as insane and twice as adorable.
Oh dear god that would be so adorable yet terrifying
that guy I agrrrreeeeeee
Thier kids would be 4 times as insane and adorable,and so on.
Oh no don't make me get a mental picture
...
I can just imagine them teaching their killing skills to Lil' Cheese.
OH NO-
@@bunny-sama1015 OH YES xD
Pinkie: *Recounting the tale of her and Cheese's first date as a bedtime story*
Cheese: And that's how you deal with bullies!
Lil' Cheese: *Dazzled by his parents' story* Ohh!
@@skylerwilliams5058 lil cheese is actually a colt; the writers confirmed it, they just re-used the filly model for pinkie pie.
I love this idea so much please yes
Ignoring all the murder and death and such, i couldnt stop smiling at how adorable they are lmao
This is one of the only ships that makes sense? Am I right
@@fedoraspeaks8962no I don’t think so
Took the words out of my mouth 😂
23:03 - THAT “NU” WAS TOO CUTE TO BE COMING OUT OF A KILLER’S MOUTH O . O
Agreed
Sounds like a Neko.
I KNOW!!!! XD
Insane or not, pinkie will always be pinkie
15:12...aaaaaaaaaaaaa none kno no nononononono, ,, I can take the story but not those faces! !!!!
MY FATHER WILL HEAR ABOUT THIS love the reference
Malfoy
Thats a Harry Potter refence UwU
Oh draco... *sighs*
Dracoooo 😍😍😍😍
-stuffs gem into her mouth-
“Aww I’m sorry you had to see this I really wanted to spare yo-“
“You do this stuff too?!”
Pinkie:😳
Cheese is evil?
*MIND BLOW*
my dad is a sweetheart!! I swear!! 😭😭
*explosion*
Those two truly are alike. Is it wrong to like his inner devil? I was thinking of calling him Cheesamino. Whaddya think?
@@revaslatts8011 I like it
Reva Slatts It sounds so evil yet so beautiful
The binary code in the description translates to "HELP ME..."
My first assumption is that Lost is calling for help, since it's her video and her channel. In the terms of Lost's story, however, Mag is probably calling for help. I won't spoil anything, just go watch the videos and you'll know what I mean. (BTW, great videos! Including this one!)
What is the story of Lost and Magpie?
@@dr.dreamer8914 I think it's under one of Lost's playlists on her channel
@@dr.dreamer8914 there are 3 videos and they both hold a different view of the bigger picture
What is a binary code
@@dimaosin 1s and 0s
Strangely it's not as scary when you have this adorable couple.
The binary translate to HELP ME
I love these little messages that lost leaves
The real shock of the story : Mag cares about Pitch.
I laughed at this harder then I should have xD
Hello Nomusa how are things going in today as your roads and your family is open nothing nothing you can borrow your weekend
@@Magpiepony wat is ink, I know why she's pissed but who is she I'm hella confused
@@lightshade1960 Go listen to Lost's Magpie and Inky's story from the beginning Lost tells her Inky tale every Halloween in Chapters it's one continuous story the beginning of the story would be Tales of the Lost Narrator under Halloween specials .
@@rukiakuchki1591 oh I did I just don't get it tho
Why am I not surprised that Mag wrote this
Jordan Martinetti haha same😂
Ok now I know the Lost Narrator is up to something. I may have enjoyed this a little too much. I enjoy the theory of Pinkie Pie having a dark side. It is always the happy ones. Nice rope in with Cheese Sandwich being the same way.
A match made in Tartarus. The Grimdark and romance actually works. I got a bit of a vibe hearing Magpie pony's voice. High pitch voices would usually annoy me, but Magpie has a flair in her tone. Now this may be me but the fact the ponies never question her cupcakes kind of rubs me the wrong way.
I am not sorry for enjoying this. I found myself laughing along with Pinkie and Cheese. Magpie has a way with writing that only comes with practice. A collection of creative artists. Oh and that little surprise at the end was the cherry on top.
There is clearly nothing going on here(sarcasm). We all have a dark side. Anyway this somehow became an essay. That happens when the work speaks to me. Keep up the great work and thank you for allowing us to enjoy the fruits of your labor.
Why the paragraph.
They rule the chat
FRICK YES. Best combo and best genre. I love it already. >W>
I know wright ii love this tope of story.
@@mrpopogaming3299 Me too! Looks like we've got a new Bonnie and Clyde style mashup in Ponyville right about now. What a delightfully dark surprise! They're an adorable OTP though...
Anamaria Ramirez: I wish their was more and my xbox gamer pick is pinkermena/pinkis cupcake lol
Make an animation plz
Thank you Lost for the opportunity for having me as Rarity! :) This was a lot of fun to do! :)
I loved it, you sounded great!
Wish me luck with the nightmares ppl, but great job fluff
Foamy Gray Thank you!
Bill Cipher Thank you!
@@Agent0FluffyBoxOfVoicesCom you were amazing
i ship cheesepie
I agree the perfect of jokers
Mhmm!!
Cheese pie the food is good
It's a good one (pun intended)!
Ha cheesepie never heard that before but i have her cheese cake... LOL that can be their child XD
I already ship them. I just didnt know I needed a story where they murdered ponies together
It's canon
Actually, it's a headcanon.
Sabre Bladezz what the ship or the murders?
Ikr
@@BeesMeliss nope, it's cannon. The ship is Cannon
*Pinkie Pie: I mean, I love a good barbecue bonfire as much as the next pony*
Me: oh my God please tell me they didn't bonfire BonBon......oh wait, they bonfired a random Pegasus Pony, nevermind
They killed Pitch, one of the VAs of this fic.
Not bon bon
Cheesamino, huh? I like it! Pinkamina and Cheesamino make the perfect pair. It's like they say, Losty. Two murder ponies are better than one. So, what do you think? Is that a good name for Cheese's inner devil? 😍
Cheesamino XD
@@kennethwilliams2157 Yay, someone agrees with me!
Chester is better
@@Nyxedmisfit Shut up!
Mine is way better, you poser.
@Tyler Hall Thanks, Tyler!
Chester sounds very ridiculous.
Kinda like a Cheshire Cat ripoff.
My name rolls right off the tongue better.
I could see myself being way more interested in romance if it were associated with the murderous tendencies portrayed in this story.
That better be a joke, or else you're completely sick.
My psychopathic proclivities only show themselves when tempted.
@@matthewbrodnitz1047 I think a love story between a serial killer and a schizophrenic would be fun. A romantic comedy slasher film has never been done before, it could work.
@@Chronicsonic23 I'm like a year late but now i think about it it could be a nice story
The early viewers get the trauma
At least it's not us
Cause there's not much comments to hide under
I am a disappointment to my parents I don’t see what the trauma is I found that quite ENJOYABLE who doesn’t love ponies WORKING TOGETHER to MAKE some NICE CUPCAKES.heheheHAHAHA😁😄
Lol
Nothing better than a grimdark after a hard day of school.
Ikr?
True.
WhiteVan Pony
Yup...
Or work lol
16.09 every 27 years, from IT, is playing in background! this made it even better!
16:09
Cuite and deadly XD. Also more blood cakes anyone?
Black Crescrent nah I’m vegetarian
Black cresent no thanks i already ate,I'll have some later though
@@cyclopsproductions9412 Same here
No thanks, Mr. Crescent, I lost my appetite after an hour or two.
Diamond Tiara: My father will hear about this!
Draco: *muttering* my father will hear about you stealing my catchphrase you unruly little pastel thing.
AAAAAAAA CUPCAKES PART TWO WOOOOOOO❤️❤️❤️❤️
Whoa... That was what I'd call a ponified version of Bonnie & Clyde mixed with Natural Born Killers! Great work by everyone, and again, well done Mag with the twisted writing! Looking forward to more spoopiness!
They're such a great couple, even when they're killers.
(16:01) - I probably laughed way too hard at that joke.
Same....
I don't fully get it
@@atlas1924 "Execute" is both synonym to "doing" something or "killing" someone
So when Cheese says "I gotta see you execute it!'' he means "doing it"
And Pinkie says "execute her" she means "killing her"
It's just a pun
Me to lmao
Headcannon accepted.
These two are perfect for each other.
Didn't think that those genres could mix, very well too. Amongst my interest in this combination and story, the voice acting from everyone was absolutely amazing as well as the ambience (background noises/music) that fit well with the scenario. The visual that kept changing throughout each transition was a cool touch as well. The altering tones are still present in this narrative too. You've really outdone yourself from previous readings and I hope this effort keeps continuing! I couldn't find any flaw in this production, really.
I ship it still
(Great Darkfic tho)
Same
This is amazing Lost and I am so happy that you like the "Tale of the Lost Narrator " pic my friend AlexaLynn sent you
Their evil laughs were totally awesome!
I never thought I’d love crazy pinkie! But match her with crazy Cheese and it’s demented and beautiful.
Take a shot everytime you hear "said-uh" or just any "-uh" at the end of a word
*everyone dies from too much alcohol and dies again*
nu-uh- *passes out*
I almost fell asleep listening to this
When I opened my eyes Pinkie and Cheese were looking at me with their tiny dot eyes and I just about fell out of my bed 😅
I noticed that when they deflated, the piano went of tune, giving the narration a weird vibe. I loved it! Nice job, Losty! 15:00 EVERYPONY FOR HERSELF!! RUNN!! THE EYES! THE EYE-. . . .
“My father will hear about this!”
I heard that in Draco Malfoy’s voice.
(My Little Pony) Diamond Tiara - “My father’s going to hear about this!”
Me - Wait a minute haven’t I heard of that sentence before but a bit different?
(Harry Potter) Draco Malfoy - “My father will hear about this!”
Me - Oh yeah, now I remember
i read this right as she said that 😂
I love the good old cupcakes grimdarks!
And what'd we learn kids?
never trust your party planner...
I had to look up who Pokey Pierce was, and the first video of him popping Pinkie's balloons, it all made sense 😂
I'm re-listening a bunch of my favorite fics, and I just have one thing to say about this one:
a couple that slays together, stays together >:)
I know what that binary means. Don't worry lost I'm trying
T̬͑̃̌̑͂ȟ̟̻̦͉̤̝̞̇͂̌̃̑e̝̬̹̻ͦͤͦ̀ŕ̛̲͎̠̩̭͚̇̔̎̄̀ͨę̫̣̀̓̀ͧͦ͆̚'̔͠s͖̝̮ͫ̅ͧ̀͑͠ͅ ͔̬̬͆͆n͔̰̪̩͕̬̤̊̋ͧ̐́͛o̷͈̩̲̩̰͙ͮ̉ͪ͒ͧͬ͒ ̨͉̟̯ͭ͋̇ͯ͋̏̈́h̺̲̭̥̒̚o͉ͪͩͤͪͩ́p̰̬̓͛͌͛̓ͮ̓eͯ͘ ̡͍̰̣̳̗͚͌̌ͧ̐ͬf̠̱͇̐ͥ̈o͔͑͋͌͠ͅr̖͙͍̉̐̐͛͛̓̿̀ ̶̼ͅȁ̼̹̙̲̗̅ͭ̂ͩ̅ ̙̥̠͙d̨̺͈̰̯̲̹̗͐̔̈͐͐͒̽é͍̋ͬ̚g̱ͯ̀̑̎ͣ͌̿é͖̝̬̦͎͟n͖̘̲̜͉̪̓̍̊ͩ̒̋̚e̴͕̜̼̫͇̺ͅrͧ̒ͦ̋́̈́̚ḁ͕͓̺͚ͤ̀̊ͩ̒͑ͥͅt̹̹̺͖̣̠ͧͅe̺̟̲͓̰͕͎̚ ̩̲̰̤̬̙̀l̔͆͌̍̋ͮ̌͏͍̱̫̩̩̘ͅị̙͖͓̰̀͡k̭̼̺̺̭ͭ̃͊̽e̺̱̱̩̬̊̐̋̆̒͝ ̮͔̜͉̙̦h̋҉̣̞̜͔̫ẻ̟̖͒ͨͭ̅͋ͤ͜r̯̲̞͈̦̯̱͐̿̀
Sticks and stones my dear. You may hold the power but it won't last. She's still in there and won't let a little bit of ink blind her way
@@thelostnarrator INK GET LOST ALREADY!!!! 0_0 there was no pun intended, I just need her to take a damn hike already!!
Have they met Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde yet? DON'T REPEAT HISTORY'S MISTAKES!
@@dr.dreamer8914 ??
Honestly relationship goals.
We stan.
I love Cheese Sandwich's voice
I loved this! This is one of the best Cheesepie fanfics I've ever heard!
Yay a new story! * jumps up and down*
Omg,first a positively astounding animatic from Magpie and now a truly marvelous Grimdark fanfic reading from Lost *BONUS* i love it,Lost you and your associates did such a superb,fabulous and masterful job with this fanfic reading kudos to all of you.
I don't know much about mlp, but still enjoy these stories, so I wondered why Cheese Sandwich would have an issue with Pokey Pierce
Looked it up, then realized when i read he had an affinity for popping balloons
Makes sense
*SHIP!!!!!* AHHHHHHHHHH THIS IS THE *BEST* SHIP ITS *OTP!*
ikr???
That IS the best ship
@@user-oe7lf1ki4x It's the best ship in the history of MLP!
@@anamariaramirez9341 yes it is
441 views
93 likes.....
Somebody grab my blade I have some people to "talk" To....
(I'm not trying to offend anyone because they didn't like the story)
Pinkie: no no killing Appleabloom
Cheese sandwich: but
Pinkie: no
Me: Assad pinkie was so cute just then :3
what an adorable couple.
(Cheese sandwich) “Wow! You do this kind of stuff too??”
(Me watching this video for the first time): PPPFFFFFTTTTT🤣...this...is going to be interesting...
At least Pinkie said not to kill Apple Bloom that part made me happy, I love this story
Five minutes in: CUTE SHIP GAAAW I hope this is fluffy all the way through. I mean dark fluffy but still cute. It'll probably turn darker just because.. Ya know, grimdark, but I can hope~
Edit: YES YES SUPER FLUFFY AND CUTE
Hmmmm... Pinkie's Dark persona is Pinkamena, wonder what Cheese' Dark persona is called? o.O
CreepCheese
RottenSandwich, idk
Cheesamena
Chester
Someone else in the comments suggested Chester. Chester Elliott Sandwich... For some reason
Dudette I've been preparing myself for this!!!!!!!!!
Seriously this is one heck of an awesome reading keep it up Lost! I'll keep coming back for more awesome stuff you make!
As a fan I say keep on doing what you do! Hope you stay awesome feel awesome and be awesome!
BTW ink dye will never win!
Damn, this was incredible! The writing was awesome, Mag truly outdid herself! And the voice acting was incredible as always! Also, nice use of binary code in the description ;)
Its *S P O O P Y*
31:41 Ink Dye....She's up to no good....
#LostMagForLife
Edit: Mag is so great a writing stories!!! I hope she knows how much her fans love her :-) :-) :-) :-)
YESSSSSSSS
I love grimdark stories! You're voice is so magical!! Who ever did the art is amazing!
“I let you out of your cage one time and this happens?!”
LMAOOO
"My father is going to hear about this"
Diamond Malfoy?
That moment when you're not a fan of horror but you're so starved for content for your OTP that you take what you can get.
Bruh I love this I always like the Dark Side of Things Magpie you done it again with your great writing, and good job to you too lost narrator for the great narration.
kevinbeast589 approved!
And also hold up was that pitch and Magpie OC's getting killed at the end?! XD 29:09 30:15
Eeyup!
Pinky pie : Oh I was hoping you wouldn’t see this and I could spare you from your~
Cheese sandwich : You do this kind of stuff to
Then there’s me dying in the corner from laughter
Seems like the "little bird" isnt the only one being able to see people with out being there (if you dont understand this watch the oc video both of them)
Fantastically spine tingling.
17:26
Me: Oh shut up Malfoy- wait wrong fandom
The Perfect Party Murder Duo~ 🎈🔪🎈
They’re perfect for each other~ Perfectly twisted and dark Lost~
Oh, Cheese is gonna have a bunch a victims at the end. Not everyone knows him, you know.
Holy crap, Pitch sounds exactly like Weird Al! :D
😱 DAH!!! PINKAMANIA!!!!
You did not spell pinkamena right
24:46 ZOOWEE MAMA-
That “Can I?” Really had me
R.I.P minion and mag
also the description translates to "HELP ME"
Đã🤶
G cutting
Probably from MagPie Pony.
Is it weird that this makes my heart skipped a beat! Despite how disturbing it is......
“Who wouldn’t like a Cheese Sandwich party?”
Me: A true monster.
Ink Dye is an Anti-Hero and a failure of a person/ pony, even more so in here mutated state. Still a well built and crafted character. Ink Dye deserves the Grimdark fate.
I looked at this and didn't know why I wanted to watch it so much bc I haven't watched anything MLP related for like- 1 year, then I realized "( Grimdark/ *ROMANCE* )"
Wow, this is awesome! I don't know why I never thought of it. It reminds me of Muffins. It's also a continuation of Cupcakes by Reitanna Seishin. It's a super long story (in different parts) and it's still being written! (I recommend it~!)
*"wow you do this kind of stuff to?"*
Imma be honest, I lauphed a lot, it was hilarious
They are both crazy
🎶 *_Love is an bloody kniiiiiiiiiife!!!_* 🎶
loved this! seeing pinkie and cheese as a murderous romance team is twice the crazy fun!! ;3
Fluttershy should know better than to break a pinkie promise. This also creeped me the hell out, who knows how far they will descend into madness.
They are adorable together!
But this is the only time I feel simply for Diamond Tiara.
They're like Harley Quinn and the Joker
Yuri yay
The Joker was abusive.
Pinkie is the Joker
Doodle Wing I really don’t get why people shiped Harley and joker. I am not really a fan of the ship
@@Magicalwolfgamer I'm not either. I don't understand.
Anyone else binging these to drown out the boredom of quarantine?
We need a sequel with Lil Cheese
Y E S
Y E S S S
30:12
"I LET YOU OUT OF THE *CAGE* ONE TIME AND THIS HAPPENS"
hol up
i forgot fluttershy was a yellow pegasus until pinkie did an impression of her-
Me: *Watching this after having not finished it for like 3 years* this reminds me so much of my character and his boyfriend
Edit: *Bop* " No, no killing Applebloom." I actually love that scene
I just listened to this again and I still think this is a very cute couple story and I love the normalizing of a murderous couple in love, it's oddly sweet
Same :,D
That would be an interesting movie idea...
A love story between a serial killer and a schizophrenic. Think "The Notebook" meets "SAW"
A friend will help you move.
A good friend will help you move a body.