It's surprisingly fitting given how easily she flies off the rails. I mean she gives aj, twilight, and rarity a run for their money on details & obsession. She rivals rd in passion for a hobby she loves and fluttershy for emotional wiplash. *(and I say this as a die hard fluttershy fan.)*
I’m pretty sure the original quote was “You must always keep your friends close, but your enemies closer” (Can’t remember when was the last time I heard it)
Referential subversion of expectations. The narrator speaks in a suggestive tone about Applejack's desires for a book. As "50 Shades of Grey" is a horrible mess of abusive relationship rape-fic, calling it "50 Shades of Hay" leads us to think it's a novella on sex with the usual horse-play-on-words seen in most pony stories.
@@ashleyvanhammer3448 Actually there is no rape in it, but it does get close to it multiple times. Well, at least that's what I know from Dominic's review on it. I refuse to read it though.
If you're targeted by Pinkie Pie you have 1 of 2 options. A: Cooperate. B: Face Pinkamena. And if Rainbow Dash can't escape, I don't see Apple Jack's odds being any better and this story is the proof.
So, here I am. I'm not a brony, but I've been following this channel for a while now. Damn it man, your videos are just so impressive, even if I couldn't understand a lot of what was happening.
Oh my gosh that thumbnail. I remember it from that one episode where Pinkie pie played the bag pipes and got all depressed when he friends asked her to stop. She was making cupcakes with Rainbow Dash, the writers knew EXACTLY what they were doing. Loved the story and voice work! Well done!
“L-lemme l-lemme in l-let let me in!” “Hi nice to see ya! OPEN THE DOOR!-“ “apple jack apple~ jack” “nothing will stop me from being with you” “we gonna have some fun~” pinkie REALLY likes apple jack-
This reminds me of that urban legend about 'black-eyed children' that come to the door. Basically, the myth boils down to the following: Don't open the door for them or you're more than screwed.
" hi its me , pinkamena ...OPEN THE DOOR !!! " " wanna hang out huh huh HUH HUH !?!?" " c'mon applejack let me in " And last but not least " let me in , LET ME IN !!!" those made me laugh so hard I cried
I tend to envelope myself within the story believing I'm IN the story so this got me holding my dessert eagle 357 ready to pop a cap in the next thing that sneaks up on me. ESPECIALLY PINKY.
I really like the bait-and-switch at the end. Given that Pinkie Pie is such a perfect character to write horror fanfics about and some of the most popular MLP horror stories are centered around Pinkie, it is clever how this story sets her up as a manic only to reveal at the end she never had any plans to hurt Applejack.
Love your readings. You should think about uploading your narrarations on podcast apps like stitcher or soundcloud. ♡♡ Heehee, that way I can secretly listen to them while at work. ^^
(Panting)....Here just in time!!!!! Early squad rollcall!!!! you and your friends impressive Mlp impressions always puts a smile on my face losty!!!! Keep up the outstanding work my friend!!! I love applejack freak out when pinkie licks her (7:11) too funny! And have Happy early Easter & Earth day !!! And My Easter & Earth day cover May there be peace from Disney the Lion guard May take a while but it’s totally worth it!!
Very well read. Great inflection in vocal storytelling. The biggest issue I have has to go to UA-cam. Het UA-cam- Thanks for interrupting the tense atmosphere with ads twice. I didn't need to enjoy that immersion.
Its time yet again for another story time with everyone's number 1 narrator TheLostNarrator! Lost I was hoping for this story! You did an amazing job yet again seriously you are without a doubt the best Narrator/Voice Actor in the entire galaxy! You are awesome! Keep it up Lost stay rad!
Jesus Christ, Lost. This was actually very scary. Now I see why you read mostly grimdarks and creepypastas. You can really bring a chill to anyone. Say, had Mags ever considered doing fanfic readings? I'd really like to see her tackle them in the future.
0:17 It's a beautiful day outside, birds are singing, flowers are blooming, on days like this, Ponies like you *eyes become empty sockets* ShOuLd Be BuRnInG iN hElL *Megalovania intensifies* Don't leave me so "bonely" Pinkie (Heh I'm a weirdo)
Damn I really didn't see the ending coming... I mean I knew it was going to fake out and she wasn't going to go all "cupcakes" on apple jack, but I did not see them playing go fish together...
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Dark.... Comedy..?
_Oh no_
What could possibly go wrong?
🧁🍖 oh no In ded
Rogelio Paul Cavazos Sandoval lol
@@darkpince1310 everything
Its a black comedy
I shouldn't laugh I know this is supposed to be a dark story but the idea of Pinkie Pie being a Yandere is hilarious to me at the moment.
Oh my fiking gosh yes
It's surprisingly fitting given how easily she flies off the rails. I mean she gives aj, twilight, and rarity a run for their money on details & obsession. She rivals rd in passion for a hobby she loves and fluttershy for emotional wiplash. *(and I say this as a die hard fluttershy fan.)*
Why not? Its just a story set in a fantasy land with ponies lol
"Applejack has always been the least sociable." More so than Fluttershy?
"Pinkie has always been the most delicate." More so than Fluttershy?!
XD
Oh my
Inky Adres Izzain 🅱️0nl3ss
RockHoppr3 wooowww.
Well, Fluttershy isn't really unsociable, just shy, there's a difference. And Pinkie is more mentally delicate, I think
You must keep your friends close and your enemies even closer. Pinkie Pie would cover both equally at the same time. XD
There was 69 likes and I ruined it
I’m pretty sure the original quote was
“You must always keep your friends close, but your enemies closer”
(Can’t remember when was the last time I heard it)
'BANG'
" hey nice to see ya! -open the door- "
that got me good
that part disturbed me so much at first😭😭
That small part is the main reason I come back to this story over and over 🤣🤣🤣🤣
9:39 the book she chose was 50 shades of hay
Me : WHAT?
Narrator: a book about something else. . .
Me: ok but why is it called like that?
Because comedy!
Referential subversion of expectations.
The narrator speaks in a suggestive tone about Applejack's desires for a book.
As "50 Shades of Grey" is a horrible mess of abusive relationship rape-fic, calling it "50 Shades of Hay" leads us to think it's a novella on sex with the usual horse-play-on-words seen in most pony stories.
@@ashleyvanhammer3448 Actually there is no rape in it, but it does get close to it multiple times. Well, at least that's what I know from Dominic's review on it. I refuse to read it though.
It’s about 50 shades of colors for hay
So like 50 shades of grey
13:45 “I don’t know who you are, but In’t scared of y’all”
That was a lie.
Honest Applejack LIED!!
Itzia Manriquez...
She has lied on the actual SHOW a few times
Blue-Red Dare that’s because discord did something to her
Honest apple horse is a lie!
@@Magicalwolfgamer I'm pretty sure she lied to Pinkie Pie when it was her birthday
Maybe that. Why pinkie stalking her
When Pinkie muttered " best friend " it was at that moment I knew applejack was screwed.
If you're targeted by Pinkie Pie you have 1 of 2 options. A: Cooperate. B: Face Pinkamena. And if Rainbow Dash can't escape, I don't see Apple Jack's odds being any better and this story is the proof.
“Nods” cants find a way to disagree
You think she's crazy now, AJ? Just wait and see what she's like on date night with her Dashie! ;)
*C o u g h* *C o u g h*
*Never mention that ship ever again.*
*C o u g h* *C o u g h*
@Inky boy :v XD
@Inky boy :v It's funny because it's true.
@Inky teen :v Tell that to Lost and Mag XD
I’d watch that xD
7:11
“This is the taste of a liar, Applejack!”
*giorno theme earrape*
😂 Not the ending I was expecting, but thank Celestia. I thought for sure Pinkie was gonna make some "apple" fritters.😂
fr tho
Pinkie: Notice me Applejack senpai!
So, here I am. I'm not a brony, but I've been following this channel for a while now. Damn it man, your videos are just so impressive, even if I couldn't understand a lot of what was happening.
Oh my gosh that thumbnail. I remember it from that one episode where Pinkie pie played the bag pipes and got all depressed when he friends asked her to stop. She was making cupcakes with Rainbow Dash, the writers knew EXACTLY what they were doing. Loved the story and voice work! Well done!
You know what? My homework can wait.
Yea, ya can do it while you're laying away at night.
I wish I could lay off my work ... but I don’t want it to pile up
same
My sleep can wait
“L-lemme l-lemme in l-let let me in!” “Hi nice to see ya! OPEN THE DOOR!-“ “apple jack apple~ jack” “nothing will stop me from being with you” “we gonna have some fun~” pinkie REALLY likes apple jack-
Spectacular reading Losty. This is just like the Fluttershy version of Let Me In only with a twist at the end
“50 shades of hay, a how to book for become a successful farmer”
UMMM... YEAH SURE. THATS TOTALLY WHAT THAT BOOK IS ABOUT.
The door encounter was the funny part for me. "L-let me in. Let me in. LET ME IN" 😂 I think pinkie took best friend a little too far
*the lost narrator uploads* Me:*clicks video like if my life depended on it*
I was sure that Pinkie was gonna say "This taste. . . It's the taste of a liar!" on the second lick.
The birds are singing, the flowers are blooming
On days like these, kids like you
Should be burning in [[HECC]]
How is one able to make horror and comedy at same time?!
Watch Gremlins 1 and 2 bro XD!
Or nightmare on elm Street
Or my life
nobody:
pinkie pie: LETME IN LETMEE INNNN!!!
Aj: have you been stalking me?
Pinkie: uh-huh
Well then 😂😂
AJ: ‘well I have other things to take care of-‘
Also AJ a second later: ‘Did you just lick me?’
Well that escalated quickly-
17:21 "huh? Huh!? Huh!?! HUH?!" I couldn't stop laughing 😂
"This is why i call her the pink nightmare"!
A truly marvelous and astounding reading Lost i love it, once again you guys did such a superb and fabulous job with this project.
50 shades of hay...wow. Also cool story today, lost👍
You know what else is Dark comedy? Pokemon lets play
I honestly had no remote clue what to follow that with and that’s what came out
17:22
When her ‘huh’s were lowering pitch, I thought “she’s gonna go pinkamina ‘crazy’ pie”
A good book! 50 shades of hay
A guide on how to be a good farmer
I thought she was already a great cow mare ❤️
While it had a nice comical ending, the story still freaked me out. Magpie did a GREAT job on making a creepy Pinky.
FINALLY a fanfic with my kind of taste!
“And it caused her to forget to lock the window..”
NOOO
L-l-let me in, l-let me i-in- LET ME IN!!!😂😂😂😂
Just Pinkie (instead of Just Monika)
@@Frostblitz96 *Just Pinkie Pie song intensifies*
18:13
XD
It was adorable but also perverish(maybe it's just me?)
And also really funny.
This reminds me of that urban legend about 'black-eyed children' that come to the door. Basically, the myth boils down to the following:
Don't open the door for them or you're more than screwed.
" hi its me , pinkamena ...OPEN THE DOOR !!! "
" wanna hang out huh huh HUH HUH !?!?"
" c'mon applejack let me in "
And last but not least
" let me in , LET ME IN !!!"
those made me laugh so hard I cried
When I get grounded for nothing and they lock me in my room 15:33
Yay lost narrator finally release something after a decade lmao
Wonderful as always and it just flipping started.
Amazing as ever lost ! Love your readings. - Spade
I tend to envelope myself within the story believing I'm IN the story so this got me holding my dessert eagle 357 ready to pop a cap in the next thing that sneaks up on me. ESPECIALLY PINKY.
Darn thought it was gonna end with...
Pinkie: now come here and get in this cake!!!
I never shook so hard or laughed so sincerely.
Doctor: 50 shades of hay doesnt exist.
50 shades of hay:
13:02 you got that right. This could become a Grimdark story at any second!
The scene in the house was pretty cliche, but this was a really interesting read. :) And Magpie, your performance was quite marvelous! :D
I really like the bait-and-switch at the end. Given that Pinkie Pie is such a perfect character to write horror fanfics about and some of the most popular MLP horror stories are centered around Pinkie, it is clever how this story sets her up as a manic only to reveal at the end she never had any plans to hurt Applejack.
50 shades of Hay, a book on how to become a better farmer, sure, that's totally likely.
That... That wasn't what I was expecting when Dark and Comedy are put together... I like it
amazing fanfic reading as always love it! pinkie pie can be creepy when she wants to be O_O (this kinda gave me chills) but still MLP forever!
The juxtapositions in the story are so sudden they're almost whiplash inducing 😅
A dark comedy, this could only mean one thing......I forgot....
This is a good one. Pinkie has always been psychotic or as everyone would say "Delicate"
Love your readings. You should think about uploading your narrarations on podcast apps like stitcher or soundcloud. ♡♡ Heehee, that way I can secretly listen to them while at work. ^^
I actually offer mp3 downloads of all of the readings in the description of each video :)
Your readings are awesome Losty!
(Panting)....Here just in time!!!!!
Early squad rollcall!!!! you and your friends impressive Mlp impressions always puts a smile on my face
losty!!!! Keep up the outstanding work my friend!!! I love applejack freak out when pinkie licks her (7:11) too funny! And have Happy early Easter & Earth day !!!
And My Easter & Earth day cover May there be peace from Disney the Lion guard May take a while but it’s totally worth it!!
comedy grows dark
Man if you look closely at the window u can see pinkey pie. Also great job lost and mag can't wait till the next narration !
Demonitize bots: do I smell... NON-KID FRIENDLY CONTENT! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Very well read. Great inflection in vocal storytelling.
The biggest issue I have has to go to UA-cam. Het UA-cam- Thanks for interrupting the tense atmosphere with ads twice. I didn't need to enjoy that immersion.
Its time yet again for another story time with everyone's number 1 narrator TheLostNarrator!
Lost I was hoping for this story! You did an amazing job yet again seriously you are without a doubt the best Narrator/Voice Actor in the entire galaxy! You are awesome! Keep it up Lost stay rad!
17:59
I swear that's exactly what my sisters sound like when I have a friend over lol
6 views, 9 likes, and even more comments? UA-cam, you're drunk.
Loved it, good job Lost and Mag!
Damn it I was expecting a jump scare
Now that ending was unexpected. Great job 🙂👍
Great fantastic reading Lost i did enjoyed your fanfic
I was having a panic attack listening to this to find out the end wasn't a horror story
pinkie is me when my friend has cookies, coffee, and pocky
Kinda Like "Its Cold Out Here" When Fluttershy was looking at applebloom everynight but in this its funny.
Wow, it's really felt weird when listening Dark story after all of those Grimdark.
Superb!
I thought pinkie was going to turn her into a cupcake
50 Shades of Hay? Hiw to for....... farming? You sure she doesn't just like reading things like that and wants to cover it up?
Hmm; A story about Pinkie pie terrorising and stalking Applejack...
Seems like comedy to me
Me finding this: Eh… not looking for something like that rn. Maybe later.
*Realizes it’s by TheLostNarrator:* * click *
I like the voice actors they did a good job
Hey, this wasn’t as bad as I thought it was going to be!
Hi blue!
Eeeyyyyyyyy!!! :D
Your fanfic’s are always amazing!!! :O
Ora ora ora
Jesus Christ, Lost. This was actually very scary. Now I see why you read mostly grimdarks and creepypastas. You can really bring a chill to anyone. Say, had Mags ever considered doing fanfic readings? I'd really like to see her tackle them in the future.
Ooh, I'm chilly and it's still warm in my house
I love me some Dark humour! XD
From the 50 shades of hay to the ending i've been on a rollercoaster of emotions...
0:17 It's a beautiful day outside, birds are singing, flowers are blooming, on days like this, Ponies like you *eyes become empty sockets* ShOuLd Be BuRnInG iN hElL
*Megalovania intensifies*
Don't leave me so "bonely" Pinkie
(Heh I'm a weirdo)
The mane 6: 🌟 twilight sparkle, 🎈 pinkie pie, 🌩️ rainbow dash, 🍎 applejack, 💎 rarity, 🦋 fluttershy
Awww nice ending :3
Pinkie: Hey nice to see ya! OPEN THE DOOR
Me if I was Applejack: OH HELL NO-
*Applejake reading Fifty shades of hay*
Me: Wait what!? 🤣
From creepy to funny and then a happy ending. Lol!
I’m sorry FIFTY SHADES OF HAY?!!!
Yo, you got me spooked. Why did I watch this at 2:00 in the morning?
Damn I really didn't see the ending coming... I mean I knew it was going to fake out and she wasn't going to go all "cupcakes" on apple jack, but I did not see them playing go fish together...
9:39 we all know what she was actually reading 😏
Do you now what I think is that pinkie pie kind of bothered apple jack in the house and pinkie pie kind of stalks apple jack
who was expecting a cupcakes type of ending?
Hmm “Someone taking what someone said literally Cliche” I feel like I’ve seen this before
Anyway good story Lost
Am I the only one who thought the shadows outside the window looked like Pinkie Pie?