The ending is a mix of disturbing, yet kinda cute as you can tell how much Octavia and Vinyl love each other. I'd love more of this story. Perhaps seeing more of their relationship, and how it came to be.
I like how it went from lighthearted to horror then back to lighthearted again. Also fitting chosing Dash the iconic "lesbian" (i mean shes literally rainbows) as prey for a lesbian couple.
i'm calling it now: this video is a joke about how similar lost's voices for rd and vinyl are!! vinyl's gonna be some kinda Frankenstein sewn together from pieces of ponies. and octavia's gonna give her rainbow's voice box by cutting her neck open. which is why the thumbnail shows strings around rd's neck. octavia killing ponies with strings kinda reminds me of "puppet to her fame" and "blood on my bow"
Seems like you came from that one about Pinkie Pie and RD and the jigsaw puzzle shaped cutie mark. I'm withholding my tongue and find out later like "Want" story with DT and SS.
I dunno why but i just like the sharp turn to Horror of Rainbow getting mutilated by losing her eyes and voicebox then immediately to some Vinyl x Octavia romance/fluff.
Very interesting on the take that Rainbow Dash and Vinyl having the same eye color and the fact that well Lost narrates both Rainbow Dash and Vinyl. I love the dark twisted tone of the whole thing. Amazing work, Magpie, Lost and even Scribbler!
Oh wow, this fic is truly masterful. The ending is horrifying, but it also gave me this sick sense of….happiness? I felt weirdly happy for them and their domestic bliss despite the fact they joke so casually about the atrocity they just did. It’s a very strange feeling knowing they did something so horrible and yet still feeling some type of joy watching that ending scene. Idk if that was purposeful, maybe I’m just weird, but it added to the story for me. Wonderful job you and Mag!
Well, that would explain a lot right now! Fandom Vinyl and Rainbow sound alike. This explains their uncanny similarities. Also, I guess Vinyl is a confirmed demon.
Must say, despite Vinyl maybe or maybe not being an otherworldly lovecraftian horror, shes a real sweetheart, of commitment and sheer ducking will! Also kinda supportive in a way Dashie was able to help out, maybe could be a little less judgmental, but very loyal gotta say! Im sure she's fine, probably... but still rocking out with some new friends, again probably. Must say, this really is really scratching my heart! In a lovely bloody way I'll say!
It’s really interesting to see Romance and Horror colliding. You always have the best stories to tell. I wish you and Mag a happy Halloween! Keep up the good work, Lost.
I could tell how this ends the moment the fic started, the delivery tho~. Man, the moment Vinyl started to talk with Rainbow's voice was just so unnerving, I looove it
@@mlpfanficstories9799 I agree! I just said "one of" because there's also Scribbler and many others. But there's not doubt about it that Lost is in that list! Am I right?
@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash Oh yes! Totally right! My two all-time favorite readers will always be Scribbler and Lost! :D Speaking of Scribbler (and Lost too cause she voices in it), anyone here watching Scribbler’s audio drama “Friendship is Tragic”?
I knew Dash was gonna end up with a few missing pieces based on the video description (yes I actually check lol), but how it was done was absolutely phenomenal! Great work from both of you, and to everyone who helping bring this reading to life! After finding your channel a few years ago, your Halloween specials have been something I look forward to every year. I'm glad you didn't try to go above and beyond this year like you usually do. I love your other works, don't get me wrong, but sometimes it's good to think on a smaller scale. I'm excited to hear what you guys come up with in the future!
@@thelostnarrator Of course! I know these past couple years have been extremely stressful for everyone with COVID and everything, so it makes me smile knowing one of my favorite storytellers is taking it easy this year.
Such a delightful and spook-tacular Reading Lost i love it, everyonedid a truly marvelous job narrating this story i always enjoy a good OctaScratch fanfic reading, thank you ever so much for this Losty and friends major kudos to you all and Happy Nightmare Night!!!👏👏👏👏
This was really well written and the voice acting made it a fantastic reading. The ending made me almost forgot about the horror aspect. The two genres were mixed in well. Amazing work to you guys.
You have a twisted mind... and it made a really interesting theory! That would be traumatizing for RD. But hey! That's just a theory! A PONY theory! But... doesn't Vinyl already talk? Like, in the series?
The more I thought about your theory, the more I realized your probably right! I agree with you on this, and now I’m both scared and excited to hear this fanfic at the same time lol
@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash and as for the twisted mind thing it’s not so much that as being on this channel long enough to make connections like rainbow and vinyl sound similar at least when voiced by this person (In some fanfic she can talk)
I LOVE YOUR GRIMDARK READINGS SO MUCH! I listen to them all the time. My Favorites Would Definitely Be Rainbow Factory, The Friendship Test, An Apple Sleep Expirament, And Rocket To Insanity. So Seeing Another One Of Your Readings Come Up Made Me Very Happy!
Love this! It's super sweet OctaScratch with nasty eye stuff. Just *chef's kiss* It's like Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovette mixed with Frankenstein but gay
Vinyl was not a bad pony. Well if pony is a word you could use on someone like her, or more something. She had remembered every single name who was there that night she was torn apart. The first thing she remembered was how cold the world was The second, was the realization she had been called from her quiet and peaceful slumber. And the awful disgusting third, was there was more than one summoner that night, usually other creatures only summoned things like her when they had a selfish, yet shameful deal they would like fulfilled without notice. She was only a small cambion when the three younger looking ponies called to her. She remembered them so well.One was a pure white unicorn filly who had the most beautiful of fur, the second was a light shaded purple Pegasus colt with an interesting mane color, and most notable had a marking of three rain drops, the third was a cyan winged filly with the reddest eyes Vinyl had ever seen. Vinyl felt their gazes on her small, dark and fluid form,she wished she was back in her slumber where the cyan filly wouldn't burn her gaze into her shaded and waving outline. The colt spoke first, he sounded nervous as he looked up to the cyan filly, "Are you sure this is a good idea Rainbow?It doesn't look like the same one who stole your friends-" The cyan filly, "Rainbow" snapped back seeming annoyed "Look,Serenity all I know is one day Rose luck had a horn and the next she didn't! She said one of these monsters took it from her!" one of those glowing cyan hooves pointed at her in accusation and she felt the need to break the summon and go back to her warm and safe habitat. The white filly unicorn spoke, her voice being tinted in a different dialect than "Rainbow" and "Serenity" "Rainbow is right!Poor Rose can't even hold a sewing needle now!" Her purple swirled mane didn't hide the anger and spite when she turned back to vinyl. Even serenity looked back at her, his eyes filling with hate "Rarity, your right! Lets get this demon a lesson it won't ever forget!" Vinyl did not remember much after that, only the pain each lash gave her, she attempted to beg for mercy, but her native tongue was not comprehensible on her attackers ears. Vinyl was too weak to go back to her place of slumber, too weak to move, she thought if it were possible, she would be dead. They had been gone for hours when some pony had found her. The same pony, as to why she would earn her revenge and the reason Vinyl had chosen to stay, her love, Octavia
This was an amazing return! You’ve been able to help me quite a bit. I’ve been watching all of your old content and it has made life a little easier to deal with. Thank you :)
Always look forward to your readings Lost Halloween or any day all the way! Hope you have a great Halloween! Keep it up plus your Rd and Vinyl voices are just rad!
Yesss! Finally, Lost posted!!! I’ve missed you and your vids so much! They always make my day :) sense Halloween is this weekend, I was starting to worry you weren’t gonna have anything new out by then, but here you are with another Grimdark! You never disappoint, Lost :) and it’s a good thing, too, cause this Halloween wouldn’t be the same without you! 😉🎃
@@thelostnarrator Your soooo welcome!! You are amazing and an inspiration to me, so thank YOU for all these flawless readings you’ve done and continue to do. There really are no words to describe your talent. You’ll just keep getting better and better, and I hope you stay with the fandom for a long time to come. Keep up the amazing work, and thank you so much for the reply, it was such a pleasant surprise!! :) 😃
Words cannot describe the beauty of this Piece of work, it’s simply perfect in all ways imaginable.. though I’m no critic and although this is just another opinion thrown in with the many others. I just wanted to express my feels for I couldn’t just bottle them up and walk away without saying anything. Oh and how could I forget about the perfect narrative? The way you made her express pain was beautiful, It sounded as if she was choking on her own blood as they were ripped to shreds. And the wonderful little love story it was made out in the end. Absolutely perfect! What more could I say?
This looks gooooood! I’ve been waiting to hear from ya! So excited and I’m glad you posted and glad to see you’re still alive LOL This story was great as always! You’re doing great Losty!
I thought it would be similar to the black and white French movie "The Eyes without a face" judging by the description but this went HP Lovecraft with a bit of Italian filmmaker Dario Argento. And ya know, I LOVED IT!!!
It never fails to surprise me by just how much effort you put into your videos, and all just for our entertainment. Thank you for dedicating your time for these videos and your channel, we seriously appreciate it. It amazes me that you are still posting such amazing content and you and Mag deserve all the best! Have a great halloween!
MAGPIE!!! You brilliant writer you!!!! This was sooo good!!! Especially since Lost can voice both Vinyl and Rainbow. I bet that was your inspiration for this story wasn't it? XD Either way, this one was a goodie!! Great work to you and everyone involved!!
Did I leave the mlp fandom years ago? Yes Am I going to listen to this because it’s Halloween weekend and some of these are scarier than modern horror? Also yes
hello old friend, I havent seen you in years Im glad the world hasnt destroyed the beauty you have created in your stories I say this in the voice you most need to hear it from IM SO DAMN PROUD OF YOU♡♡
That was spooky awesome!! I especially love the subtle transition to dubstep in the background, and such a surprisingly wholesome ending, considering what happened. Wonderful job, all of you!
it's great tavi finished building vinyl, but how long until the other bearers get sus of rd disappearing and learn vinyl's house is rainbow's last known location. octavia and vinyl might've killed one of the strongest bearers, but twi's one of the strongest unicorns on the planet, they definitley shouldn't get on her bad side by murdering one of her ride-or-die bffs
Illya truly Beautiful Narration. Scribbler & Lost Narrator amazing job. All artists did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed this Grim Dark story. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful Spooky day everyone.
So Dash dies yet again huh XD! How many times has Dash died in alot of horror fics anyway? Ive lost count at this point XD! Poor Pegasus cant catch a break at all XD!!!!!!!!
This was the best story I ever heard there was romance and brutal demonic murder with a pinch of funny and more love at the end a perfect story. Great reading Lost👍
Honestly when i saw the magic circle on the floor i though Vinyl was gonna pull an Ursula and magically steal Dash's voice Things went from 0 to a 100 real fast. Vinyl being an edlrich/demon horror was sure a choice i didnt see coming
I absolutely enjoying watching your grimdark mlp videos. They're always so interesting and they make me imagine how the show or movies would be if they were written like this. Amazing job as always.
I am sad that I missed the premier, had work, but I'm so glad to be able to finally be able to listen again to you and Magpie's lovingly grim collaborations.
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I was here to see this pls pin me love your vids
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He stole her voice box
It was that easy? Wow 👏
@@mikerainbolt3842Stupid beggar…
I love that Vinyl is a demon in this, striving to be "complete" for her lover
I love that, and the twist on the whole thing
Eu nao concordo.
@@robertomaciel9281 It's fine if you don't agree (I had to use translate I only speak English)
@@robertomaciel9281keep your opinions to yourself
@@Stocking_Panty_Simp why
The ending is a mix of disturbing, yet kinda cute as you can tell how much Octavia and Vinyl love each other. I'd love more of this story. Perhaps seeing more of their relationship, and how it came to be.
I like how it went from lighthearted to horror then back to lighthearted again. Also fitting chosing Dash the iconic "lesbian" (i mean shes literally rainbows) as prey for a lesbian couple.
Ik this is a very late response but they could've went ez on dash since she supports gay couples 😭
@@izzychan8899 True,but this is a grimdark so there is no really any happy endings in them.
Story: grim
The dubstep in the background of slaughter: slaps
i'm calling it now: this video is a joke about how similar lost's voices for rd and vinyl are!! vinyl's gonna be some kinda Frankenstein sewn together from pieces of ponies. and octavia's gonna give her rainbow's voice box by cutting her neck open. which is why the thumbnail shows strings around rd's neck. octavia killing ponies with strings kinda reminds me of "puppet to her fame" and "blood on my bow"
Uhhhhhh, you're half right!
You were so close
close but no cigar
Seems like you came from that one about Pinkie Pie and RD and the jigsaw puzzle shaped cutie mark. I'm withholding my tongue and find out later like "Want" story with DT and SS.
YESSSSS
Leave it to Lost to return from a four month hiatus with a story that *immediately* brutally murders Rainbow Dash.
We wouldn't have it any other way.
It’s not a grimdark without Rainbow Dash getting killed or mutilated/brutalized
Nao eu nem gosto de ver a minha pegasuzinha azul sendo assassinada.
Only cause Dash kept being a pain in the bloopers
I dunno why but i just like the sharp turn to Horror of Rainbow getting mutilated by losing her eyes and voicebox then immediately to some Vinyl x Octavia romance/fluff.
Very interesting on the take that Rainbow Dash and Vinyl having the same eye color and the fact that well Lost narrates both Rainbow Dash and Vinyl. I love the dark twisted tone of the whole thing. Amazing work, Magpie, Lost and even Scribbler!
Oh wow, this fic is truly masterful. The ending is horrifying, but it also gave me this sick sense of….happiness? I felt weirdly happy for them and their domestic bliss despite the fact they joke so casually about the atrocity they just did. It’s a very strange feeling knowing they did something so horrible and yet still feeling some type of joy watching that ending scene. Idk if that was purposeful, maybe I’m just weird, but it added to the story for me. Wonderful job you and Mag!
It's something that I like to call 'Morbid Enjoyment'
This just warms my lesbian, horror, and romance loving heart
It is my favorite genre after all XD
I don't like homosexuality
@@thelostnarrator same XD
@@wolfgangamadeusmozart1293 If you're going to bait at least put some effort into it buddy. This is the dullest rage bait I've ever seen.
@@kaiser8659 bait? Whoever said anything About bait?
Damn, didn’t expect Rainbow to die to an aggressive make-out session! 😭😭
Well, that would explain a lot right now!
Fandom Vinyl and Rainbow sound alike.
This explains their uncanny similarities.
Also, I guess Vinyl is a confirmed demon.
Must say, despite Vinyl maybe or maybe not being an otherworldly lovecraftian horror, shes a real sweetheart, of commitment and sheer ducking will! Also kinda supportive in a way Dashie was able to help out, maybe could be a little less judgmental, but very loyal gotta say! Im sure she's fine, probably... but still rocking out with some new friends, again probably.
Must say, this really is really scratching my heart! In a lovely bloody way I'll say!
It’s really interesting to see Romance and Horror colliding. You always have the best stories to tell.
I wish you and Mag a happy Halloween! Keep up the good work, Lost.
I could tell how this ends the moment the fic started, the delivery tho~. Man, the moment Vinyl started to talk with Rainbow's voice was just so unnerving, I looove it
Rainbow Dash has always been the victim of grim dark stories since Cupcakes. Poor Dashie. 😩🤣
That was beautiful blended, slice of life, to horror, to romance, it never felt off, I love it.
Who agrees that Lost is one of the all-time greats with readings?
Not just “one of the” she’s “the” best!
@@mlpfanficstories9799 I agree! I just said "one of" because there's also Scribbler and many others. But there's not doubt about it that Lost is in that list! Am I right?
110% facts
@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash Oh yes! Totally right! My two all-time favorite readers will always be Scribbler and Lost! :D
Speaking of Scribbler (and Lost too cause she voices in it), anyone here watching Scribbler’s audio drama “Friendship is Tragic”?
@@mlpfanficstories9799 I am! And it is a certified hit series!
... Why is it always Rainbow Dash? (Amazing job with the story by the way!)
I knew Dash was gonna end up with a few missing pieces based on the video description (yes I actually check lol), but how it was done was absolutely phenomenal! Great work from both of you, and to everyone who helping bring this reading to life!
After finding your channel a few years ago, your Halloween specials have been something I look forward to every year. I'm glad you didn't try to go above and beyond this year like you usually do. I love your other works, don't get me wrong, but sometimes it's good to think on a smaller scale. I'm excited to hear what you guys come up with in the future!
Thank you so much for the kind words
@@thelostnarrator Of course! I know these past couple years have been extremely stressful for everyone with COVID and everything, so it makes me smile knowing one of my favorite storytellers is taking it easy this year.
Such a delightful and spook-tacular Reading Lost i love it, everyonedid a truly marvelous job narrating this story i always enjoy a good OctaScratch fanfic reading, thank you ever so much for this Losty and friends major kudos to you all and Happy Nightmare Night!!!👏👏👏👏
This was really well written and the voice acting made it a fantastic reading. The ending made me almost forgot about the horror aspect. The two genres were mixed in well. Amazing work to you guys.
Calling it now rainbow gets her vocal cords ripped out so vinyl can talk
You have a twisted mind... and it made a really interesting theory! That would be traumatizing for RD.
But hey! That's just a theory! A PONY theory!
But... doesn't Vinyl already talk? Like, in the series?
The more I thought about your theory, the more I realized your probably right! I agree with you on this, and now I’m both scared and excited to hear this fanfic at the same time lol
@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash I just clicked on the video and saw your reply to answer your question in the series no she doesn’t in the fandom it depends
@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash and as for the twisted mind thing it’s not so much that as being on this channel long enough to make connections like rainbow and vinyl sound similar at least when voiced by this person (In some fanfic she can talk)
Reading what I just wrote yeah I am pretty twisted
I LOVE YOUR GRIMDARK READINGS SO MUCH! I listen to them all the time. My Favorites Would Definitely Be Rainbow Factory, The Friendship Test, An Apple Sleep Expirament, And Rocket To Insanity. So Seeing Another One Of Your Readings Come Up Made Me Very Happy!
do you prefer the original "rocket to insanity" fic or the way longer comic dub adaptation?
@@gren8te319 I Like The Fic, But personally my favorite would be thelostnarrator’s reading of it.
that was sweet in a dark way, like a dark chrocolate cake with a delicious frosting ending. i love the ending.
I’ve always loved mlp grimdark, I can tell this one is gonna be good.
R.I.P RAINBOW DASH WHO DIED 2'500 TIMES
Another day bites the dust. *adds tally mark*
@@revaslatts8011
I think you meant,
"Another DASH bites the dust."
This was one of the best stories I've ever heard!! Keep up the amazing work!
Love this! It's super sweet OctaScratch with nasty eye stuff. Just *chef's kiss*
It's like Sweeney Todd and Mrs. Lovette mixed with Frankenstein but gay
Vinyl was not a bad pony. Well if pony is a word you could use on someone like her, or more something. She had remembered every single name who was there that night she was torn apart.
The first thing she remembered was how cold the world was
The second, was the realization she had been called from her quiet and peaceful slumber.
And the awful disgusting third, was there was more than one summoner that night, usually other creatures only summoned things like her when they had a selfish, yet shameful deal they would like fulfilled without notice. She was only a small cambion when the three younger looking ponies called to her. She remembered them so well.One was a pure white unicorn filly who had the most beautiful of fur, the second was a light shaded purple Pegasus colt with an interesting mane color, and most notable had a marking of three rain drops, the third was a cyan winged filly with the reddest eyes Vinyl had ever seen.
Vinyl felt their gazes on her small, dark and fluid form,she wished she was back in her slumber where the cyan filly wouldn't burn her gaze into her shaded and waving outline.
The colt spoke first, he sounded nervous as he looked up to the cyan filly, "Are you sure this is a good idea Rainbow?It doesn't look like the same one who stole your friends-"
The cyan filly, "Rainbow" snapped back seeming annoyed "Look,Serenity all I know is one day Rose luck had a horn and the next she didn't! She said one of these monsters took it from her!" one of those glowing cyan hooves pointed at her in accusation and she felt the need to break the summon and go back to her warm and safe habitat.
The white filly unicorn spoke, her voice being tinted in a different dialect than "Rainbow" and "Serenity"
"Rainbow is right!Poor Rose can't even hold a sewing needle now!" Her purple swirled mane didn't hide the anger and spite when she turned back to vinyl.
Even serenity looked back at her, his eyes filling with hate "Rarity, your right! Lets get this demon a lesson it won't ever forget!"
Vinyl did not remember much after that, only the pain each lash gave her, she attempted to beg for mercy, but her native tongue was not comprehensible on her attackers ears.
Vinyl was too weak to go back to her place of slumber, too weak to move, she thought if it were possible, she would be dead.
They had been gone for hours when some pony had found her.
The same pony, as to why she would earn her revenge and the reason Vinyl had chosen to stay, her love, Octavia
Vinyl is a Cambion? Holy $#¡%cakes!
But I highly doubt Rainbow Dash did it.
"lyra and bon bon are an obvious couple but nopony gives them shit"-rainbow dash
This was an amazing return! You’ve been able to help me quite a bit. I’ve been watching all of your old content and it has made life a little easier to deal with. Thank you :)
I'm so glad I could help! I hope you feel better soon!
Damn, RD is really the perfect victim in these fanfics.
Always look forward to your readings Lost Halloween or any day all the way! Hope you have a great Halloween! Keep it up plus your Rd and Vinyl voices are just rad!
Yesss! Finally, Lost posted!!! I’ve missed you and your vids so much! They always make my day :) sense Halloween is this weekend, I was starting to worry you weren’t gonna have anything new out by then, but here you are with another Grimdark! You never disappoint, Lost :) and it’s a good thing, too, cause this Halloween wouldn’t be the same without you! 😉🎃
Thank you so much for the kind words. Seriously, it means so much :)
@@thelostnarrator no thank you for all the hard work you all put in to make our experience the best it can be
The more horrific it is the BETTER lol
@@thelostnarrator 👍
@@thelostnarrator Your soooo welcome!! You are amazing and an inspiration to me, so thank YOU for all these flawless readings you’ve done and continue to do. There really are no words to describe your talent. You’ll just keep getting better and better, and I hope you stay with the fandom for a long time to come. Keep up the amazing work, and thank you so much for the reply, it was such a pleasant surprise!! :) 😃
@@thelostnarrator can you do a mlp funny comic again? You haven't do that in years, and you are funny.
On the one hand, horrifying, on the other, this is a real romantic story!
Words cannot describe the beauty of this
Piece of work, it’s simply perfect in all ways imaginable..
though I’m no critic and although this is just another opinion thrown in with the many others.
I just wanted to express my feels for I couldn’t just bottle them up and walk away without saying anything.
Oh and how could I forget about the perfect narrative?
The way you made her express pain was beautiful,
It sounded as if she was choking on her own blood as they were ripped to shreds.
And the wonderful little love story it was made out in the end.
Absolutely perfect!
What more could I say?
This looks gooooood! I’ve been waiting to hear from ya! So excited and I’m glad you posted and glad to see you’re still alive LOL
This story was great as always! You’re doing great Losty!
I just got home from work! First thing I did was clicking on this video! It's good to listen to another story! Mag yet again wrote an amazing story!
Wow Lost. You seriously must congratulate Mag for making such great fanfics. I loved this. :D
Every Halloween I listen to your stories and song. You’re amazing, keep up the great work and feel better. 🎃💕
looooSSST!!! You n Mag killed this one I adore it!! The entire idea of this fic is so interesting, Totally gonna have to do some fanart sometime~! X3
Oh, this looks like it's going to be awesome!! I was worried for a good bit if you weren't doing grimdark stories this year!
I'm so excited for this! I love all the work you put into these and I just know I'm gonna love this too!
I thought it would be similar to the black and white French movie "The Eyes without a face" judging by the description but this went HP Lovecraft with a bit of Italian filmmaker Dario Argento. And ya know, I LOVED IT!!!
It never fails to surprise me by just how much effort you put into your videos, and all just for our entertainment. Thank you for dedicating your time for these videos and your channel, we seriously appreciate it. It amazes me that you are still posting such amazing content and you and Mag deserve all the best! Have a great halloween!
MAGPIE!!! You brilliant writer you!!!!
This was sooo good!!! Especially since Lost can voice both Vinyl and Rainbow.
I bet that was your inspiration for this story wasn't it? XD
Either way, this one was a goodie!!
Great work to you and everyone involved!!
That was dark and awesome, loved the acting and writing in this story, kudos to everybody involved
Did I leave the mlp fandom years ago? Yes
Am I going to listen to this because it’s Halloween weekend and some of these are scarier than modern horror? Also yes
I'm honestly honored you think that. Thank you :)
@@thelostnarrator you’re welcome. And thank you
Always look forward to your Halloween reads Lost!
Yes! Totally agree 😁
I freaking loved it. It was like a love story infused with a horror story
This is one of the best Horromance grimdarks I've heard! I loved watching it during the premiere, and I was right, I knew I was going to love this!
💀 so we’re gonna forget they just killed dash then turned to being a sweet story again
hello old friend, I havent seen you in years
Im glad the world hasnt destroyed the beauty you have created in your stories
I say this in the voice you most need to hear it from
IM SO DAMN PROUD OF YOU♡♡
That was spooky awesome!! I especially love the subtle transition to dubstep in the background, and such a surprisingly wholesome ending, considering what happened. Wonderful job, all of you!
Yay! I'm glad someone caught that! Lol
Wicked! I’m listening to y’all while enjoying my Halloween night. This sent some chills down my spine. 🖤🎃💀😈🩸
Everyones voice acting is so good 🤌
I love how this story is kinda like a medifore for mags and losts relationship.
Octavia:have u ever been in love .rainbow dash's thoughts:dont say apple jack dont say apple jack!!!
The eyes maybe 👀👀 my guess
Can’t wait to watch this one lostie! We’ve missed you, have an amazing Halloween! ❤️
it's great tavi finished building vinyl, but how long until the other bearers get sus of rd disappearing and learn vinyl's house is rainbow's last known location. octavia and vinyl might've killed one of the strongest bearers, but twi's one of the strongest unicorns on the planet, they definitley shouldn't get on her bad side by murdering one of her ride-or-die bffs
Illya truly Beautiful Narration. Scribbler & Lost Narrator amazing job. All artists did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed this Grim Dark story. Keep up the good work. Have a wonderful Spooky day everyone.
The fact that our real-world DJ actually changed their name to that so canonically it is even pronounced as "DJ Pon(3)Three" I still cringed, hard.
Incredible video. Everyone did a fantastic job. And I hope you feel better lost
That dubstep that faded in was AMAZING
Grimdark and romance oddly work well, and this was no exception. You delivered a fantastic reading as always.
Can't wait! Your videos (and Mag's) always make my day and give me hope!
Same! They’re both so incredible :)
The deeper voice at the end... * MIND * * BLOWN *
Oh my God, vinyl's voice. I forgot how nice it is
This rocks - well-acted, well-narrated and well-produced! I love that ending, gosh
YES! LOST HAS POSTED! Vengeance! I really did miss your readings!!!
saw this in my recommended before the premiere, havent watched one of these in years, super excited!
Years? When did you last watch Lost's videos? She's only had a break for 4 months!
@@FriendsOfSon-uvaDash fell out of the mlp fandom for a while haha, saw this and decided its time to come back
Ah this is so exciting! Good to see you back :)
So Dash dies yet again huh XD! How many times has Dash died in alot of horror fics anyway? Ive lost count at this point XD! Poor Pegasus cant catch a break at all XD!!!!!!!!
23:10 BRO GOT ME DEAD 💀
OMG YAAASSSS!!!! this Halloween would not be the same without you lost 💝💝👻👻 hope you and your boo are holding up in these crazy times 💛💛
Just in time for Halloween, too! I repeat, just in time!
Ooo I'm looking forward to this one, Can't wait!
Oh damn! New horror romantic dynamic, thats just awesome!
Does anyone ever feel bad for Rainbow Dash because nine times out of 10 whenever I hear Horror Story die some horrific death
This was the best story I ever heard there was romance and brutal demonic murder with a pinch of funny and more love at the end a perfect story. Great reading Lost👍
Honestly when i saw the magic circle on the floor i though Vinyl was gonna pull an Ursula and magically steal Dash's voice
Things went from 0 to a 100 real fast. Vinyl being an edlrich/demon horror was sure a choice i didnt see coming
This was very good to listen too. Well done lost, and welcome back to UA-cam!
BETTER LOVE STORY THAN TWILIGHT! FIGHT ME I DARE YOU!
Plus happy Halloween!
It’s that time of the year again! That means it’s time for the Grimdark binge!
The narration was amazing from everyone involved. Great work!
I absolutely enjoying watching your grimdark mlp videos. They're always so interesting and they make me imagine how the show or movies would be if they were written like this. Amazing job as always.
Dashie is always the killer or the victim, give this poor mare a break-
That was an amazing video Lost, it was scary but still amazing at the same time
What is it with Rainbow Dash being murdered? Like when she the one not being killed someway sharp or form. Love your videos BTW.
loooosstt this is just ???? awesome ????? i adore this
The slience's broken.. in sacrfice. Awesome GrimDark! @TheLostNarrator.🎃
*_MUST. HAVE. SEQUEL!!!!_*
Let's GOOO gotta love month of horrors baby. Spoopy stories
This was sweet, in a morbid, twisted way
Nonetheless, it was enjoyable :D
Finally my spooky unicorn has returned in time for the spookiest night of the year! Spooky Hugs!!!
Oh! I didn't know you uploaded these mlp creepy pastas still. I love listening to them while drawing.
I am sad that I missed the premier, had work, but I'm so glad to be able to finally be able to listen again to you and Magpie's lovingly grim collaborations.
*Me jamming out to the beat as Rainbow Dash is being torn about*
Apart*
Yay another creepy mlp fanfic
I love your creepypasta fanfic ^-^♥