Butterflies [MLP Fanfic Reading] (Grimdark)

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  • @screwball6958
    @screwball6958 7 років тому +3708

    Guess it's true what they say: It's not an MLP horror story without Rainbow Dash being killed first.

    • @joey504
      @joey504 7 років тому +302

      False: It's not a MLP horror story unless Rainbow Dash is covered with blood, think back to Rainbow Factory

    • @Vavalry
      @Vavalry 6 років тому +93

      Read the apple sleep experiment

    • @palesmoke2179
      @palesmoke2179 6 років тому +63

      tyrant778 - and the friendship test,well she dies seconed in the friendship test

    • @Vavalry
      @Vavalry 6 років тому +14

      SPOILERS!!!!

    • @screwball6958
      @screwball6958 6 років тому +12

      LOL, Truth be told, I never expected this comment to become so popular!

  • @TheLastRunicorn
    @TheLastRunicorn 6 років тому +888

    I love how at the beginning pinkie exclaims that she uses a secret ingredient to her cupcakes and tried to get fluttershy to have one. And then fluttershy decided to save them for later instead of having them. It souds like a pretty obviouse nudge to cupcakes.

    • @lukaza1261
      @lukaza1261 2 роки тому +111

      the real reason why Pinkie was so upset bout dashes death, is cause she no longer could use her in the cupcakes, like she had so been looking foreward to

    • @TheManWhoErasedHisNane
      @TheManWhoErasedHisNane Рік тому +60

      Not the first time other grimdarks have crossed a bit look at The Experiments Of Twilight it mentions Rainbow Dash still having nightmares about Pinkie killing her like in Rocket To Insanity

    • @Itz_St4rilyn
      @Itz_St4rilyn Рік тому +13

      ​@@lukaza1261 nah its probs bc theyre bffs

    • @charizardunites
      @charizardunites 9 місяців тому +9

      Everytime, in these Mlp horror stories, Rainbow dash is getting tossed around like a rag doll.

    • @JuniEtique
      @JuniEtique 7 місяців тому +5

      Nah it’s a forever w3€d cupcake

  • @anewlifeanewbeginning6857
    @anewlifeanewbeginning6857 7 років тому +3429

    Rainbow dash loved pinkie.
    fluttershy loved pinkie.
    fluttershy killed dashie for loving pinkie.
    fluttershy kills pinkie for not loving her back
    CONCLUSION YANDERE

  • @coyotealienss
    @coyotealienss 8 років тому +1228

    Fluttershy: Oh, it looks like the little one are coming out
    Me: Say what?
    The bugs burst out of RD's eyes
    Me: Oh...ewwwwwww

    • @sonofcthulu8772
      @sonofcthulu8772 6 років тому +4

      I belive u mean uuuuuuuuuu fac no

    • @revaslatts8011
      @revaslatts8011 6 років тому +15

      I was grossed out, too. Seriously, dude, I nearly threw up! 😓

    • @RebelAmber6969
      @RebelAmber6969 6 років тому +4

      It sounded pretty

    • @TakumoKun
      @TakumoKun 5 років тому +3

      I read this comment right when Fluttershy said it lmao

    • @lizlon3254
      @lizlon3254 5 років тому +4

      @@RebelAmber6969 WHAT IS WRONG WITH U

  • @GamerWeeb1337
    @GamerWeeb1337 8 років тому +3604

    There's a lesson here... Don't go into fluttershy's shed.

  • @danielthemaniel1697
    @danielthemaniel1697 8 років тому +1703

    So Fluttershy was a serial killer who was in love with Pinkie Pie, but she knew that Rainbow Dash and Pinkie were very close and she knew that they were in love with each other, so out of jealousy and hatred she murdered Rainbow Dash for stealing her love and then captured Pinkie for not loving her. … You have truly destroyed my ship (FlutterDash)

    • @aimeexxgrayxx5800
      @aimeexxgrayxx5800 7 років тому +26

      LPShub I love FLUTTERDASH just if you were my friend I wouldn't want you to go through I photos heh lol

    • @momoplays9669
      @momoplays9669 7 років тому +43

      LPShub So basically. The short version of this is basically Fluttershy bein a Yandere?

    • @irislight8048
      @irislight8048 7 років тому +3

      LPShub yep.

    • @nomnomchan9695
      @nomnomchan9695 7 років тому +3

      Sandra Momo Yesh!!

    • @semiautomatic.companion
      @semiautomatic.companion 7 років тому +3

      LPShub FLUTTERDASH!

  • @retroeternity5064
    @retroeternity5064 8 років тому +717

    in the beginning I was like "hey,hey,hey! stay outta my cottage!"

    • @Chillbot17
      @Chillbot17 5 років тому +37

      What she tell you about coming in her shed?

    • @ut-fanperson.7233
      @ut-fanperson.7233 4 роки тому +18

      just a tad gay STAY OUTTA MY SHEEEEDDDD-

    • @savagegavblacksmith875
      @savagegavblacksmith875 4 роки тому +4

      @Bubbles • U stupid!

    • @trashrat7416
      @trashrat7416 4 роки тому +7

      @@savagegavblacksmith875 no, he's just spike

    • @totallynotgay6741
      @totallynotgay6741 3 роки тому +13

      HEY HEY HEY DIDNT I TELL Y'ALLS TA STAY OUTTA MAH SHEEEED?

  • @jacquesnel9898
    @jacquesnel9898 8 років тому +622

    shouldnt pinkie pies senses activated to warn her before she entered

    • @io9671
      @io9671 8 років тому +103

      If I saw that wooden trapdoor or whatever I would've noped the fuck out of there

    • @joannalfechesipad9695
      @joannalfechesipad9695 4 роки тому +7

      B O O Lmao

    • @peterbutler1232
      @peterbutler1232 4 роки тому +52

      She shouldn’t need her pinkie senses to know something was wrong, I knew when she revealed the trap door.

    • @vannyasfk7766
      @vannyasfk7766 4 роки тому +5

      B O O LMFAO

    • @XxEmpty_EscapexX693
      @XxEmpty_EscapexX693 3 роки тому +1

      @@io9671 same

  • @flower-crownedart5162
    @flower-crownedart5162 8 років тому +1461

    Now I hate the phrase 'they're are butterflies in my stomach'
    EDIT: why was I so edgy...

    • @Zenter28
      @Zenter28 7 років тому +37

      Lidz Draws Or L watever yea when someone says that now I'll feel like yelling "WAIT SHE MANAGED TO GET YOU TO?!? AHHHHH" and run away

    • @flower-crownedart5162
      @flower-crownedart5162 7 років тому +9

      ButterScotch Rose 😂

    • @flower-crownedart5162
      @flower-crownedart5162 7 років тому +3

      Flower Angel yup, same

    • @Kill3rArt
      @Kill3rArt 7 років тому +6

      ohohohohohoh...sh*t

    • @maggots7131
      @maggots7131 7 років тому +8

      there*

  • @lpssparklecake4406
    @lpssparklecake4406 8 років тому +669

    "I'm sorry I never told you that...that I love you...*sobs*"That made me cry.

  • @pkhydro2895
    @pkhydro2895 7 років тому +554

    Finally an mlp fanfic where pinkie isn't the antagonist!! This story deserves fifty points just for that.

    • @primroserain1739
      @primroserain1739 4 роки тому +35

      Yes. BUT a -15 points for having Rainbow Dash as the first victim of the friends (NOT INCLUDING THE WHITE ONE)

    • @maydayaj_3577
      @maydayaj_3577 2 роки тому +6

      Ah ha ha- "iTs tHe sEcReT iNgReDiEnT"

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 2 роки тому

      @@primroserain1739
      The White one is Rarity.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 2 роки тому

      @⭐️•RoseIsVeryHungry•⭐️
      I like The Lost Narrator

    • @ThisBirdIsLost
      @ThisBirdIsLost 8 місяців тому

      I think that rainbow wasn't the first

  • @michelleartz9718
    @michelleartz9718 7 років тому +404

    "It's the secret ingredients I use" Gee I wonder what those are

  • @Chillbot17
    @Chillbot17 8 років тому +633

    fluttershy has a pretty powerful weapon, guilt trip
    Edit: I never thought one of my comments would reach over 200 likes

  • @ScribblerProductions101
    @ScribblerProductions101 10 років тому +752

    Delightfully disturbing. Not only up to par with your reading of Cupcakes; this reading surpasses it!

    • @KerjavaFate
      @KerjavaFate 10 років тому +1

      Agreed

    • @darknessmohag6181
      @darknessmohag6181 10 років тому +2

      this one is more distubing then what cupcake ever could be!

    • @Rofloflcopta
      @Rofloflcopta 10 років тому +7

      3:52 wait...in the background... AW HEALLL NAU!!!

    • @justjay205
      @justjay205 7 років тому +4

      Rofloflcopta I thought that was Slenderman....

    • @Leamur_made_it
      @Leamur_made_it 6 років тому +1

      Scribbler Productions I agree

  • @sethimusxprime
    @sethimusxprime 2 роки тому +234

    The ending is perfect, it conveys a mixture of uncomfortably, and pure dread as Pinkie has to wait until the larvae kill her when emerging. Truly, a fate far worse than death, which Pinkie still got. Truly, a masterpiece in my opinion. A really good story, with good voice acting, and a terrifying, and gut twisting ending👍

    • @amethystrose2671
      @amethystrose2671 2 роки тому +7

      Quite literally gut twisting

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 2 роки тому +8

      @@amethystrose2671
      The pink butterfly Fluttershy is holding is really cute and pretty and boy imagine this got a sequel to it.

  • @cheyennemarie7572
    @cheyennemarie7572 8 років тому +1756

    is it just me or is Rainbow Dash used in way too many creepypastas?

  • @emilyendergirl4732
    @emilyendergirl4732 8 років тому +1956

    WHY DOES CREEPYPASTA MAKERS MAKE EVERYTHING SCARY?!?! CUPCAKES NOW BUTTERFLIES?! WHAT'S NEXT? FLOWERS!?!?

    • @zapruderofficial69
      @zapruderofficial69 8 років тому +209

      Coming up next from TheLostNarrator "Flowers", a creepypasta about Seabreeze the breezie killing one of the other breezies.

    • @alexpritchard9200
      @alexpritchard9200 8 років тому +31

      Yeah probably

    • @brianhester1371
      @brianhester1371 8 років тому +101

      Well, there's a creepypasta that makes candy scary

    • @emmigummi2895
      @emmigummi2895 8 років тому +63

      +Emma PowerPuff
      nightmare night
      What a fright
      Give us something sweet to bite,

    • @brianhester1371
      @brianhester1371 8 років тому +19

      Grim Meeper you know the story oh my god
      We are best friends

  • @disappointingjuice5553
    @disappointingjuice5553 8 років тому +814

    I may be a horrible person to want to show this to the mean girls at school that are scared of bugs
    Guys this comment is 4 years old...I was edgy and 12 please stop responding lmao

    • @StrwbrrzDrmz
      @StrwbrrzDrmz 8 років тому +8

      rainbowsmash21 so, did you do this yet

    • @StrwbrrzDrmz
      @StrwbrrzDrmz 8 років тому +8

      rainbowsmash21 So did you do it, yet.

    • @disappointingjuice5553
      @disappointingjuice5553 8 років тому +9

      yess

    • @Nobody-707
      @Nobody-707 7 років тому +3

      I want to do that too :c

    • @brooke5202
      @brooke5202 7 років тому +17

      rainbowsmash21 nope you are a good person 👍🐛

  • @nicolemcdonald5759
    @nicolemcdonald5759 6 років тому +416

    Me:I'm a brave boy.
    (See's Rainbow Dash's dead carcass covered in maggots)
    Me: Not a brave enough boy for this.

  • @sourapplerings
    @sourapplerings 7 років тому +246

    This brings the phrase "Butterflies in my stomach" a new meaning

    • @Lucidtundra
      @Lucidtundra 2 роки тому +9

      Yessir…. Would you want flutters to assist you or twilight?

  • @RedBlueNinja
    @RedBlueNinja 4 роки тому +202

    I avoided this story for awhile because I expected something less interesting but wow... This is actually really good and actually makes sense. Fluttershy taking her love of animals too far is actually believable. Also love the 50's B movie-ish concept.

    • @Lucidtundra
      @Lucidtundra 2 роки тому +2

      You avoided it because it would be boring…? I avoided and well… deliberately forgot about it because this story and apple sleep freaked me out… haha

  • @megs8443
    @megs8443 8 років тому +294

    For some reason I haven't noticed that it was zooming in on Fluttershy

    • @projectz1363
      @projectz1363 5 років тому +7

      I only noticed it after reading this then looking at the picture again

    • @patchwork_asylum
      @patchwork_asylum 5 років тому +1

      It probably wasnt

    • @sunshinemilkshake9152
      @sunshinemilkshake9152 4 роки тому +3

      Leafeyu It was, when I lost my place and started going forward I noticed it was.

  • @mental919
    @mental919 8 років тому +504

    3:56
    Okay, am I the only person who thought that white blob was slender man for a second or do I need to get glasses

    • @GracieTheWolfie
      @GracieTheWolfie 7 років тому +21

      There's a reason people call me Mental, same

    • @roxyxgamer903
      @roxyxgamer903 6 років тому +16

      No i did as well

    • @_shinyyj183
      @_shinyyj183 6 років тому +14

      There's a reason people call me Mental I have glasses and I still thought it was slender man!

    • @eloise4170
      @eloise4170 6 років тому +16

      You don’t need glasses, it’s actually a cocoon, but at first glance it DOES look like Slenderman.

    • @CourtneyIsLovely
      @CourtneyIsLovely 6 років тому +3

      Wow

  • @rayrasner9659
    @rayrasner9659 8 років тому +589

    POOR RAINBOW DASH ITS ALWAYS HER

    • @hoods8939
      @hoods8939 7 років тому +30

      Ray Rasner When will the Dash abuse end!?

    • @Kill3rArt
      @Kill3rArt 7 років тому +8

      +Ziccronwarrior when the creepypasta fandom ends

    • @kathiedraws637
      @kathiedraws637 7 років тому +12

      *ahem* RAINBOW FACTORY!!!

    • @timekidink8376
      @timekidink8376 7 років тому +2

      RAINBOW DASH ABUSE

    • @kaliekitten8390
      @kaliekitten8390 6 років тому +7

      Ray Rasner yeah well I don’t feel bad after rainbow factory lol

  • @Magpiepony
    @Magpiepony 10 років тому +1039

    Mwhahaha so delightfully disturbing ^^ love it! It was a lot of fun to be brutally murderer yup yup yup! ;)

    • @thelostnarrator
      @thelostnarrator  10 років тому +69

      Thank you again! You did an amazing job as Pinkie! :D

    • @emilylarson8837
      @emilylarson8837 10 років тому +30

      TheLostNarrator I have a question.
      What the fuck is Celestia doing during all this?
      Police ponies?
      What the hell xD

    • @patmcdonald4955
      @patmcdonald4955 10 років тому +16

      I KNOW!!! WHERE THE HELL ARE THE POLICE IF ANY???

    • @odriosplays4058
      @odriosplays4058 9 років тому +9

      Where is Celestia during all this!?

    • @mysterioncos
      @mysterioncos 9 років тому +4

      what is wrong with you

  • @Navisparxx
    @Navisparxx 8 років тому +221

    Fluttershy the evil overlord of the butterfly.

  • @Ana-hg3zb
    @Ana-hg3zb 8 років тому +446

    Well, I can add Fluttershy to the list of ponies that now creep me out

  • @aquamarine3253
    @aquamarine3253 7 років тому +442

    *WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT YOU COMIN' IN MY SHED?!*

    • @primroserain1739
      @primroserain1739 4 роки тому +18

      Ahhhhhh. I get it. Hay hay hay what I tell ya'll about comin' in my Shed???

    • @neogold4796
      @neogold4796 4 роки тому +18

      Welp, we’re f**ked.

    • @primroserain1739
      @primroserain1739 4 роки тому +9

      @@neogold4796 take it away, fellas

    • @neogold4796
      @neogold4796 4 роки тому +14

      **Music begins to play**
      I'M GONNA SING A SONG FOR YOUHOOOO!

    • @primroserain1739
      @primroserain1739 4 роки тому +9

      @@neogold4796 and I'm gonna show you a thing-or-two!!

  • @fastbreak383asks6
    @fastbreak383asks6 7 років тому +213

    Pinkie Pie then woke from bundles of chains wrapped around her hooves tightly keeping her from moving. Pinkie struggled trying to get out of the chains and away from this horror scene. Fluttershy looked down at the earth pony with a gleaming but twisted look. She holds the scalpel which was covered in the blood of the cyan Pegasus. Fluttershy cut ever so delicately putting a sharp mark on Pinkie's stomach. Pinkie tried to wriggle away but it made the cutting even worse as she screamed at the top of her lungs in pain. Pinkie suddenly blacked out and the yellow Pegasus got to work quickly before the pink earth pony had awoken. She had done it many times that she knew where to cut and where to put the eggs. Fluttershy cut deeply into the passed out party pony and revealed the organs. She placed the eggs in the intestines and stitched her back up. The pink party pony awoken finding herself in much pain as she looks down at the stitches that vertically cover her stomach. She felt them crawling around in there and it made her violently gag. The yellow Pegasus looked at her where her eyes locked with a big smile and widened cyan blue eyes. "Their about to bloom!" She said excitedly clapping her hooves together. "Aren't you excited Pinkie and new row of butterfly larvae are about to awake and start a new life." Pinkie shook her head at the sudden after the words. Fluttershy looked very disappointed at her and turned her back. Suddenly Pinkie could feel the eggs breaking and they broke free climbing out of Pinkie's intestines and on to her coat of flesh. Pinkie screamed and screamed and screamed until she was about to black out for the last time. The yellow Pegasus looked at the party pony and said "Thank you for your help Pinkie Pie." The pink party pony spoke her final words before she died. "Y-Y-You're Welcome." Then everything went black as the party pony hung from the chains that bounded her.

    • @Spookythereaper3
      @Spookythereaper3 4 роки тому +9

      @Fasterbreaks383 Asks That was a more better ending.

    • @Enter_the_Toshiverse_1996
      @Enter_the_Toshiverse_1996 3 роки тому +20

      @Dejah dream Because even in death, even as unrelenting terror grips at her heart and she's about to take her final breath, Pinkie Pie will always be nice to her friends

  • @someone5967
    @someone5967 7 років тому +263

    eating mike and ike's while listening to ponies kill eachother....
    what is my life

    • @necrozma5639
      @necrozma5639 4 роки тому +7

      I’m eating some really good popcorn :p

    • @primroserain1739
      @primroserain1739 4 роки тому +4

      I'm eating Air. Imma poor boy

    • @Ray.Ray1597
      @Ray.Ray1597 4 роки тому +6

      @Daniel Howard why, just... Why 😂

    • @evilmontica1848
      @evilmontica1848 3 роки тому +2

      I'm eating tricuits and potato chips.

    • @Lamamsl
      @Lamamsl 3 роки тому

      Im eating a fruit by the foot ✌️

  • @broadwaydummy15
    @broadwaydummy15 4 роки тому +184

    Bruh I remember listening to this as a little kid, at first thinking it was some cute story about Fluttershy....
    Boy was I wrong. Tiny me was absolutely mortified. 🗿

    • @lillytheoutsider2618
      @lillytheoutsider2618 4 роки тому +15

      Lol. I was a weird kid 2nd grade I had drawn my enemies and friends being mudered but they were there mlp oc.

    • @pratibhaaa7265
      @pratibhaaa7265 2 роки тому +6

      💀

  • @purrpletiger2159
    @purrpletiger2159 8 років тому +517

    Oh what a wonderful children's show!

  • @lolbitproductions6214
    @lolbitproductions6214 7 років тому +127

    I think Fluttershy had too much coffee this mornin

  • @imgaley
    @imgaley 8 років тому +345

    God dang it! Why dos Rainbow dash die all the time??!!

  • @jazlyncotton6891
    @jazlyncotton6891 8 років тому +136

    when pinky pie said i love you my heart
    S
    A
    N
    K

  • @ughmoved9093
    @ughmoved9093 8 років тому +485

    i fall asleep to this and sleep peacefully? is that weird?

    • @thegaang2829
      @thegaang2829 7 років тому +20

      Terezi Pyrope my brother peacefully falls asleep to screamo and heavy metal so not that weird lol

    • @amiitroychowdhury
      @amiitroychowdhury 7 років тому +2

      ugh moved

    • @Littlecults
      @Littlecults 7 років тому +3

      ugh moved nope same

    • @Kill3rArt
      @Kill3rArt 7 років тому +3

      same, I am same

    • @timekidink8376
      @timekidink8376 7 років тому +3

      ITS WEIRD ._.

  • @amarachukwuonaga7385
    @amarachukwuonaga7385 8 років тому +81

    Fluttershy: But I want to share it to u because ur...special.

    • @kaydeevi
      @kaydeevi 8 років тому

      Amara Onaga+ Hey! My name is Amara!😃😃😃

    • @amarachukwuonaga7385
      @amarachukwuonaga7385 8 років тому

      OMG!! Looks like we are twins! (Not in real life) Wanna be friends? :-)

  • @buggy_b0nez
    @buggy_b0nez 5 років тому +65

    “This is my masterpiece it’s Absolutely stunning”
    *while pinkie throws up*

  • @marchella9693
    @marchella9693 8 років тому +164

    14:21 why am i laughing at pinkie's screams XDDDD

    • @buggy_b0nez
      @buggy_b0nez 5 років тому +5

      Dear god

    • @chemWafer
      @chemWafer 4 роки тому +3

      Same i was thinking it funny like a ballon blown out

    • @zaybug
      @zaybug 4 роки тому +1

      ME TOO ABAHAH

    • @sketch4846
      @sketch4846 4 роки тому +7

      *aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaæaaaaaaaa*

    • @Dayday-6297
      @Dayday-6297 4 роки тому

      I am to XD

  • @arikansas_animation5272
    @arikansas_animation5272 5 років тому +164

    “I wanna show you something...”
    Pinkie,what she’s showing you is death.

  • @icesswolvescats404
    @icesswolvescats404 7 років тому +140

    2:54 , 3:32 / 3:34 FlutterXPie shippers GOING WILD AGAIN
    21:15 / 21:16 / 21:17 *RainbowXPie shippers going wild yet again*
    and question...why is always rainbow dash, i mean...
    every single time, that someone dies (the victim) THE FIRST VICTIM IS ALWAYS RAINBOW DASH

  • @thequeenofsinsarchieved3466
    @thequeenofsinsarchieved3466 7 років тому +69

    *HEY HEY HEY..*
    *WHAT DID I TELL Y'ALL ABOUT COMIN' IN MY SHED?!*

  • @sashascarah6533
    @sashascarah6533 8 років тому +62

    This is going to be a flutters goes crazy and kills everypony again X3
    Let's listen and see.

  • @buffmaeda4553
    @buffmaeda4553 9 років тому +270

    "I'm sorry, Dash. I'm sorry I never told you... that I loved you..."
    I'm sorry, WHAT!!!!!!

    • @ryanhughes6405
      @ryanhughes6405 9 років тому +6

      same reaction

    • @buffmaeda4553
      @buffmaeda4553 9 років тому +8

      ikr!?

    • @ryanhughes6405
      @ryanhughes6405 9 років тому +11

      The Emerald Dragon like why dose every mlp fanfiction mack 1 of the ponys lesbians like why why why why why why why why????

    • @buffmaeda4553
      @buffmaeda4553 9 років тому +3

      Oh, excellent spelling...

    • @ryanhughes6405
      @ryanhughes6405 9 років тому +4

      The Emerald Dragon thank you

  • @corzzabear9030
    @corzzabear9030 7 років тому +66

    Was already scared of butterfly's and moths.. This just feed my fear even more aha

  • @DoctorTex
    @DoctorTex 8 років тому +69

    I cannot tell if I'm still sick, or that there are butterflies in my stomach.....
    GOD DAMMIT WRITER!!! YOU ARE CLEVER!!!

    • @amandadepuy3984
      @amandadepuy3984 2 роки тому +5

      Whenever I get nervous butterflies in my stomach I'm going to have a full on breakdown cause of this story

  • @carcino.trickster9517
    @carcino.trickster9517 8 років тому +235

    3:59 slenderman confirmed

  • @morganballard8900
    @morganballard8900 8 років тому +104

    wait, in the beginning when Pinkie Pie gave Fluttershy a cupcake, Pinkie Pie said something about a "secret ingridient"... so that would mean that "Cupcakes" has happened while this was happening... BUT, in "Cupcakes" Rainbow dash died, but in this story, Rainbow dash is already dead. how is this possible? anyone please respond, i am so confused!

    • @alexiaguajardo6914
      @alexiaguajardo6914 8 років тому +37

      masked person I'm 100% certain that this doesn't take place in the same universe as Cupcakes. I'm sure that when Pinkie said there was a special ingredient she meant something like cinnamon or butterscotch or whatever.

    • @morganballard8900
      @morganballard8900 8 років тому +7

      alexia guajardo
      oh, okay! that actually makes sense! thanks!

    • @alexiaguajardo6914
      @alexiaguajardo6914 8 років тому +4

      masked person No problem :)

    • @nuttywizard-xg1sb
      @nuttywizard-xg1sb 8 років тому +8

      masked person this story is about how pinkie found out that fluttershy has a crush on her but i guess you could say she is a yandere so this is just another alternate reality of when fluttershy is a yandere killer for pinkie senpai😄

    • @LNYFIRELLC
      @LNYFIRELLC 7 років тому +6

      masked person rainbow wasn't the first pony in cupcakes their were many others that weren't documented so it must have been another pony

  • @Satnanat
    @Satnanat 8 років тому +26

    0:41 "It's the 'secret ingredient' I used! 😸"
    me: secret ingredient?!?! FLUTTERSHY!!! DON'T EAT THE CUPCAKE! PINKY PIE CUPCAKES IS PONIES!

  • @henryb8513
    @henryb8513 8 років тому +210

    wtf is with ponies killing each other!

  • @patient1018
    @patient1018 8 років тому +447

    why am i watching this
    in my dark room
    with my closet door open
    and i have no weapon or defence...
    oh...that's right...i'm crazy...
    (Edit: wow. Looking back at my old edgy comments is so weird. Thanks for the likes anyways!
    Edit 2: 420 likes ayyyyyyy)

    • @hasbrogirl452
      @hasbrogirl452 7 років тому +5

      Red Panda Cat :3 here 🔪 🔫
      No you have one

    • @patient1018
      @patient1018 7 років тому +3

      +Hasbro girl thanks! now i can fight off the.....butterflies...it's doesn't sound scary...but it is...

    • @brooke5202
      @brooke5202 7 років тому +2

      Red Panda Cat :3 here u go 🔪🏏🔦💡🏮🗡🔫🛡🏹

    • @theawesomeone6856
      @theawesomeone6856 7 років тому +4

      You might want this too. 🦋
      .......NOPE! Wrong thing. I meant to give you this. 💣⚔️🚪🗝☎️
      😅

    • @patient1018
      @patient1018 7 років тому +1

      The Awesome One Thanks....i really need a bomb.....and a phone.......and a door?

  • @mrsfuckingfabulous
    @mrsfuckingfabulous 8 років тому +51

    The ending made me cry it is so beautiful how much pinkie loved rainbow.....

  • @janieepperson1899
    @janieepperson1899 8 років тому +72

    i dont want to see another butterfly EVER again.

  • @psychofilm6976
    @psychofilm6976 3 роки тому +39

    She took the saying “circle of life” to the next level 👁👄👁

  • @SydneyHarvest
    @SydneyHarvest 9 років тому +137

    they really need to make an animation of this

    • @Xavion29
      @Xavion29 8 років тому +1

      Your not no mlp fan!!!

    • @SydneyHarvest
      @SydneyHarvest 8 років тому +13

      So a person can't be an MLP fan and a creepypasta fan?

    • @leabetancourt8007
      @leabetancourt8007 8 років тому +1

      yes . yes they do

    • @queenperrytheplatypus458
      @queenperrytheplatypus458 8 років тому +3

      +Mlp Fan I respect ur opinion but for my opinion, *_NOOOOO WAAAAAAAYYY_* While listening to it I felt like Pinkie Pie. I don't wanna see the torture and the larva and the... _almost pukes_ >.

    • @rainbowcrush8761
      @rainbowcrush8761 8 років тому

      +Mlp Fan They should BUT WTF WHY DID FLUTTERSHY DO THAT SHE IS SO NICE IN THE SHOW

  • @MissBoxxx
    @MissBoxxx 6 років тому +41

    I love the macabre! You, madam, are a narrator of the highest caliber. The way you set the tone of a story and draw viewers in is inspiring.

    • @Lucidtundra
      @Lucidtundra 2 роки тому +1

      Hahaha you should give yourself credit too hah lost is just showing you the final result shes not perfect either, like everyone

  • @bloodmoonmonsters990
    @bloodmoonmonsters990 5 років тому +24

    Flutter Shy: “let me show you my cave. Bloody decaying body’s”

  • @remcat03
    @remcat03 10 років тому +76

    This is like a Fluttershy version of cupcakes.

    • @lunarservant6781
      @lunarservant6781 10 років тому +8

      Yeaaaaa...... Except this involves "harmless" butterflies.

    • @Rofloflcopta
      @Rofloflcopta 10 років тому

      3:52 wait... In the background...AW HEEAAAAAAALLL NAU!!!

    • @Rofloflcopta
      @Rofloflcopta 10 років тому +3

      It's always the quiet ones...

    • @TheFreakyJhonny
      @TheFreakyJhonny 10 років тому +6

      cupcakes is kindergarden compared to this
      this is way worse, you live for days without food or water, hangin on the wall and feeling that these bugs are inside you and eating you from inside as you slowly, very slowly die in unimaginable pain...

    • @lunarservant6781
      @lunarservant6781 10 років тому

      lukas anton j. well i guess pinkameana has some-oh waiiit.... shes dead

  • @SnazzGirl
    @SnazzGirl 3 роки тому +17

    Pony: gets within one mile of Ponyville
    The mane six: so you have chosen death.

  • @stardust1265
    @stardust1265 6 років тому +21

    Pinkie: "I brought CUPCAAAAKES!"
    Me: OH HAAAIL NO!!

  • @thelonelydonutgirl8931
    @thelonelydonutgirl8931 7 років тому +230

    did i just notice slender in the second picture?

    • @OniOmelette
      @OniOmelette 7 років тому +16

      The Real Flowey The Flower And Bill Cipher its what I thought till I realized it was a cocoon and the dark room makes it look like slender

    • @thelonelydonutgirl8931
      @thelonelydonutgirl8931 7 років тому +2

      oh sorry

    • @OniOmelette
      @OniOmelette 7 років тому +2

      The Real Flowey The Flower And Bill Cipher meh its fine me and my friend thought it was also slender xD

    • @thelonelydonutgirl8931
      @thelonelydonutgirl8931 7 років тому +2

      yay im not alone!LLOLO)OLOLOOLOLOLOLOLLLOL!XD

    • @thelonelydonutgirl8931
      @thelonelydonutgirl8931 7 років тому +2

      lol

  • @rycol
    @rycol 8 років тому +73

    Chewing gum while watching this...bad idea

    • @lisaafuang7402
      @lisaafuang7402 8 років тому +2

      +Frisk x sans AJ the larva sound and the gum sounds disturbing as FUCK

    • @emmigummi2895
      @emmigummi2895 8 років тому +2

      Do you know what sucks as well?
      Wasting mother fucking Cheetos during this.

    • @emmigummi2895
      @emmigummi2895 8 років тому +1

      +Grim Meeper *eating

    • @ellejain1225
      @ellejain1225 8 років тому +2

      I'm chewing gum to 😰

    • @Crimson_Slushie
      @Crimson_Slushie 6 років тому +3

      How ir feels to chew 5 gum

  • @unicorncandypop1585
    @unicorncandypop1585 8 років тому +74

    ok this was a good video but IN EVERY MLP CREEPYPASTA WITH PINKY IN IT ITS ALWAYS RAINBO DASH WHO DIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    • @marymay7998
      @marymay7998 5 років тому +2

      Rockets to Insanity 😃

    • @Blurhu
      @Blurhu 4 роки тому +1

      Even the strong ones can fall

  • @queenperrytheplatypus458
    @queenperrytheplatypus458 8 років тому +44

    This reminds me of cupcakes so much!! Gosh I almost feel what Pinkie is feeling!
    What makes this even worse is the noise effects! eesh!

    • @seashell9570
      @seashell9570 8 років тому

      +Silver Song Yeah but instead Fluttershy is the killer and Pinkie is the one dying. In cupcakes its reverse.

    • @queenperrytheplatypus458
      @queenperrytheplatypus458 8 років тому

      I know, but still! >.< I kept holding my breath!

    • @seashell9570
      @seashell9570 8 років тому

      I read that and I agree. I'm pretty sure twilight was just drunk :P

    • @kayleekick4039
      @kayleekick4039 8 років тому

      I am her! I turned into her last week! I could almost feel the little larvae inside of me but I'm glad it didn't happen to me in real live! I do love Dashie a whole bunch! she is the best friend a pony could ever want!

    • @queenperrytheplatypus458
      @queenperrytheplatypus458 8 років тому +2

      Kaylee kick *life

  • @alexisfillmore7374
    @alexisfillmore7374 9 років тому +32

    Oh yeah play THAT music during the torture. Fuck that music. Fuck. It.

  • @jewelmine442
    @jewelmine442 7 років тому +20

    *reads recomendations for this video*
    *sees the sweet apple massacre* NOPE NOPE NOPE *clicks video and gets glued to the screen* NOPE NOPE
    head: U HAVE TO WATCH DONT BE A BABY!
    *mumbles: why?*

  • @maxfan4569
    @maxfan4569 9 років тому +225

    Of course it is rainbow dash! it's always rainbow dash!!! SERIOUSLY WHAT THE FUCK IS UP WITH WRITERS ALWAYS KILLING RAINBOW DASH!!!!!!!!

    • @animationscomplications9183
      @animationscomplications9183 9 років тому +6

      cuz rainbowdash is a favorite

    • @scottmaurning9591
      @scottmaurning9591 9 років тому +4

      +Morgan Stace because she's friends with everyone so when she is dead it would be extra dramatic

    • @andreschristiansen7542
      @andreschristiansen7542 9 років тому +7

      +Morgan Stace its like the stoner guy in horror movies, you ALWAYS have to kill them XD

    • @zgirl8572
      @zgirl8572 8 років тому +3

      +Morgan Stace it's like in horror movies the guy that always thinks he'll out live every one always ends up..... well think back to that jackass from the Hunger Games he got cocky BAM!!! by the end of the movie he got eaten by a wolf. Silent Hill preast bitch how thought she knew everything BAM riped to shreds!!Anyone who thinks there tough shit always ends up dead!!!

    • @crybabybitch7501
      @crybabybitch7501 8 років тому

      yeah why rainbow what is up with rainbow just HAVING to die😣😤😣😤

  • @coolcatcoolcat5312
    @coolcatcoolcat5312 8 років тому +87

    my baby sis loves fluttershy....she would die if she saw this....😾😾😒😒😣😥😥😣😣😾😾😾😾

    • @spagari
      @spagari 8 років тому

      CoolCat CoolCat Nobody cares

    • @savannahbradley1004
      @savannahbradley1004 8 років тому +6

      CoolCat CoolCat I know what you mean

    • @jewelmine442
      @jewelmine442 7 років тому +1

      ikr if i had a younger silbing who loved a charater this much she or he would be scared and kill it probs

    • @mr.vinsanity9488
      @mr.vinsanity9488 7 років тому +2

      CoolCat CoolCat *whispers* show this to her. lol jk jk

    • @micahgaming4022
      @micahgaming4022 7 років тому

      CoolCat CoolCat my lil brother loved rainbow dash thenwhen he saw cupcakes and knew rainbow was killed it crushed his heart now me i love fluttershy and this crushed my heart too its like karma i showed cupcakes to him now i saw this and got scarred for life from fluttershy

  • @jennsummers3497
    @jennsummers3497 8 років тому +308

    I laugh at stuff like this.... do I need help?

    • @jennsummers3497
      @jennsummers3497 8 років тому +5

      +Violet Moon yay

    • @jennsummers3497
      @jennsummers3497 8 років тому +5

      +Violet Moon thats good to know! X3

    • @mangosoda114
      @mangosoda114 8 років тому +3

      Nope I laughed too

    • @henryb8513
      @henryb8513 8 років тому +4

      umm i love mlp too, and I found this funny

    • @fullnetalanimejasmine7297
      @fullnetalanimejasmine7297 8 років тому +1

      ***** oh I I I um am sooooo sorry I I I did not mean to oh my gosh what have I done in little Jasmi e it supposed to be jasmine there's something wrong with my key board

  • @texzee
    @texzee 8 років тому +23

    I can't help but to laugh at the way the voice actor as pinkie said "LOVE IT!"

  • @lucystewart29
    @lucystewart29 7 років тому +54

    The ending got sad and shippy

    • @ginxclub567
      @ginxclub567 7 років тому +1

      this is why i aboulaby hate and loath fluttershy.

  • @georgethefriend29
    @georgethefriend29 7 років тому +16

    It's interesting, really. This was the story that brought Mag and Lost together. The story is not romantic at all, but it somehow spawned one of the greatest love stories ever told. Like the green pushing up between the cracks in the pavement, it just proves that love can be found in all places, with any catalyst.

  • @Marquiseio
    @Marquiseio 8 років тому +45

    WTF DID I STUMBLE ACROSS AT 12:27 AT NIGHT I THOUGHT IT WAS A SAD NOT SYCO VIDEO

  • @KalaschniKlown
    @KalaschniKlown 9 років тому +47

    Did anyone notice slenderman at 4:59 ?
    UPDATE: I now know it's a cacoon, sorry I just went full Brain dead mode... But you never know

  • @mynameiskitten5665
    @mynameiskitten5665 7 років тому +49

    THERE'S NO PLACE SAFE IN EQUESTRIA AS A EARTH PONY, UNICORN EVEN A PEGASUS!!!!!!

    • @satan3488
      @satan3488 6 років тому +5

      POTTERHEAD 107 its not even safe as a griffin.

    • @katelynbodiford5680
      @katelynbodiford5680 5 років тому +4

      @@satan3488
      And Timberwolves too.

  • @MsACP2012
    @MsACP2012 3 роки тому +62

    The voice actors always do an amazing job with these

  • @misteria247
    @misteria247 8 років тому +127

    And this ladies and gentlemen is why I fucking hate nature and bugs, they're fucking horrifying

    • @RaptorsClub95
      @RaptorsClub95 8 років тому +4

      same inside is the only safe place

    • @misteria247
      @misteria247 8 років тому +1

      Pure Gray The inside is the safest place around

    • @RaptorsClub95
      @RaptorsClub95 8 років тому

      +misteria247 if you could raise ether discord, nitemare moon, sombra, or crisolis who?

    • @misteria247
      @misteria247 8 років тому

      +Pure Gray Discord, he seems like my kind of guy I'd have fun with

    • @RaptorsClub95
      @RaptorsClub95 8 років тому

      +misteria247 I'd take crisolis for 2 reasons 1 she is best villain 2 my OC is a changeling so ya

  • @you-ro6cf
    @you-ro6cf 4 роки тому +23

    I just-
    I mean-
    Well-
    Actually-
    Uh-
    Y'know-
    I'm at a loss for words.
    L e t t h e n i g h t m a r e s . . .
    C o m m e n c e .

    • @gachamoon_xx5235
      @gachamoon_xx5235 3 роки тому +1

      @Bigot Sandwich
      W H A T
      T H E
      F U C K
      B R O
      O - O

  • @zapruderofficial69
    @zapruderofficial69 8 років тому +19

    I nearly threw up! Y put in those gross nioses lost?! Y?!
    PS. Fluttershy was humming as she did it! And at 21:08 when pinkie say those last lines, I could feel the tears stinging my eyes. T_T

  • @fmlchile-vaporizedmoon3007
    @fmlchile-vaporizedmoon3007 7 років тому +75

    I love Fluttershy....
    i need a new oc..
    Save me before i get plummeted by hate..

  • @pun_wrry
    @pun_wrry 7 років тому +27

    this is my favorite MLP grimdark you made! you inspire me to be a UA-camr one day, I really hope that you keep on making content like this in the future!

  • @Bayden-Bluedash
    @Bayden-Bluedash Рік тому +7

    I think we've found a story scarier than cupcakes. And at the same time, more disturbing than cupcakes!

  • @saturn_edgee
    @saturn_edgee 2 роки тому +9

    Pinkie Pie : "Its the secret ingredient I use!"
    -gets cupcakes flashbacks-

  • @arthyem21320
    @arthyem21320 4 роки тому +19

    You take "Cupcakes", you put Fluttershy instead of Pinkie, and put a love triangle.
    Now guess what you have ?
    Butterflies !!

  • @manglewire9709
    @manglewire9709 8 років тому +78

    this makes my stomach twisted

    • @jadeak6550
      @jadeak6550 8 років тому +3

      Same

    • @damiendelacerda1014
      @damiendelacerda1014 8 років тому +4

      ikr my stomach herts because of this 😢

    • @spagari
      @spagari 8 років тому

      Damien Delacerda My head hurts because of your grammar

    • @damiendelacerda1014
      @damiendelacerda1014 7 років тому +2

      Well I hope you have cancer

    • @jadeak6550
      @jadeak6550 7 років тому +4

      Damien Delacerda Little girl i hope you get cancer

  • @Manu-oq6ki
    @Manu-oq6ki 7 років тому +16

    Me: *just finished listening to this story*
    Mom: go outside u have been on your phone all day
    Me: *goes outside and sees a butterfly* Me: OMG KILLL IT WITH FIRE AAAAAAAAAAAAAA
    Mom: wtf

  • @ridingriptide2644
    @ridingriptide2644 3 роки тому +16

    Coming back three years later, seeing my cringe comments kills me, lmao.
    Great to see how even three years later, I still love this content, even if I’m not a fan of the show anymore.

  • @frame9964
    @frame9964 5 років тому +13

    It hurts when I hear these because all Pinky had to say was "yeah, looks cool" and she would've made it out alive :,)

  • @starsong9711
    @starsong9711 8 років тому +371

    why is it always dashie why not twighlight or aj

    • @blixblox-left
      @blixblox-left 8 років тому +3

      Cuz

    • @starsong9711
      @starsong9711 8 років тому

      +mosskit yellowfang bluestar are epic :3 but I like dashie

    • @rissamab9852
      @rissamab9852 8 років тому

      +mosskit yellowfang bluestar are epic :3 i don't get the story that much

    • @rissamab9852
      @rissamab9852 8 років тому

      +mosskit yellowfang bluestar are epic :3 i don't get the story that much

    • @rissamab9852
      @rissamab9852 8 років тому

      +mosskit yellowfang bluestar are epic :3 i don't get the story that much

  • @cheycheywantscookies9740
    @cheycheywantscookies9740 3 роки тому +8

    Fluttershy: pegasus ponies can be so difficult you know!
    Me: bruh ur a pegasus

  • @cesaralejo8886
    @cesaralejo8886 8 років тому +29

    okay not that important but slenderman in the background that's so cool and a terrifying thing to experience at least they didn't get caught by him

    • @beesfiles1460
      @beesfiles1460 8 років тому

      Thats not slenderman. Those are caccoons. (I dont know if you write it that way, im sorry. English is not my main language.)

    • @cesaralejo8886
      @cesaralejo8886 8 років тому

      +Bibi Anker thanks for letting me know just the white and tall creature looked like him and that's all right it is spelled with 2 c's

    • @MLPDethDealr32
      @MLPDethDealr32 8 років тому

      that's ok, it's Cocoons actually. :)

    • @katelynbodiford5680
      @katelynbodiford5680 5 років тому

      @@MLPDethDealr32
      Fluttershy does have a point Ponies and people don't think about death because they're sheltered from it.

  • @smc0718
    @smc0718 4 роки тому +11

    *"What did I Tell you About COMIN' IN MY SHED!!??"*

  • @Flowerbarrel
    @Flowerbarrel 4 роки тому +9

    When each of the main characters (including Spike) have had a canon mental breakdown, I’m not surprised these stories exist.

  • @coyotealienss
    @coyotealienss 8 років тому +42

    WHY!!? WHY?! WHY IS ALWAYS RAINBOW DASH!!!???

  • @Liteheuz
    @Liteheuz 9 років тому +16

    The voice acting in this are incredible, whoever voiced the characters did an amazing job!

  • @JakauYT
    @JakauYT 4 роки тому +14

    this made my friend scared of butterflies when we listened to this back in 2014, love remembering how grossed out they were.

  • @blackrosesthorn9451
    @blackrosesthorn9451 8 років тому +17

    Me: *sees a butterfly* Me: *screams and flails* My friends: "wtf..."

    • @katava521
      @katava521 4 роки тому +1

      XD
      But... me too...

  • @johncarrillo518
    @johncarrillo518 9 років тому +31

    First cupcakes, then the rainbow factory and now this. What's next. Applesauce.

    • @Zidabrine1
      @Zidabrine1 9 років тому +4

      John Carrillo Dont give them ideas!!

    • @Uberchix02
      @Uberchix02 9 років тому

      Zidabrine Every member of the apple family, when they die, get squeezed in to applesauce. And Applejacks knows this, so she loves to eat it! I just wrote a fanfic, i'm amazing, give me a round of applesauce! Get what I did there, applause and applesauce? I'm so smart and witty!

    • @WhirlwindDrums
      @WhirlwindDrums 9 років тому +1

      John Carrillo Rarity's New Patterns

    • @Uberchix02
      @Uberchix02 9 років тому

      She uses ponies flesh???? I don't know, good idea!

    • @cindyvindman5847
      @cindyvindman5847 9 років тому

      What's apple sauce ??

  • @weirdjess2427
    @weirdjess2427 7 років тому +25

    I love it!! Even if it made me sick to my stomach I find it pretty awesome and interesting with great details! 😂

  • @justinschenck5700
    @justinschenck5700 7 років тому +7

    This was an awesome MLP creepypasta, I never thought Fluttershy could be horrifying