Bro, in all the animations, shorts and what ifs I've ever seen, I've never seen Discord so pissed. Ponies really don't realize how big a solid Flutters gave 'em.
You kind of have to plan for Discord to be in your story, or else he'll ruin whatever tension or horror there is. Or in this case, add to it! My favorite versions of Discord is mlp horror is when he can't do anything to stop it. THAT feels spooky.
Man I finally understood this grimdark!! Also seeing Discord so upset is something I would never think to see, plus I was expecting that consequence Discord only had one pony who really understood him and Right where Discord's life was fixed, flutter was brutally taken away from him But now that it is a loop that is rarity now it makes sense of grimdark
So all of this torture and manic nonsense is far more horrifying... It's worse then the release of death or the eternal imprisonment of Tartarus... *A time loop...*
"what do you mean you can't? this is your third loop!" god what a great fucking wham line. i was never into the original lmr (thank goodness, from what ive heard of it lol) but this has been so good. unbelievably incredible art, as well
AHHHH I can't believe It's over!! It’s sad how rarity end up like that, but that's her karma for what she did, also rainbow was awsome for saving sweetie 🤩
I love how it turned out but I kinda expected something more gore and some more about rarity rather it ending with her just in a loop punishment from discord. But I do love the art and it was sad how discord was shattered that fluttershy died from rarity..🥺 Thank you for making this comic because I enjoyed watching it because of the artwork and the lore!!🤗💜
Nice going discord, now you've unintentionally trapped your beloved in an eternity of having to be betrayed by a loved one, tortured, and murdered over and over too! Talk about Mondays :( --oh wait I just read the qna, shes all good (dead) :)
Truly a great ending to a great series. Poor Rarity, but it could have been worse. Atleast she does not remember that she is in a loop. That would be true hell.
I'm, not going to lie, this actually has a better ending then the original(not sure if i like it but it's still better) where a demon goat was basically corrupting all of ponyville and stuff(though that was before the reboot if i remember right)
i really enjoyed your whole comic story you made it got me hella scared lol and teared up its so sad how it ended and i wish there was more into it but its okay i really loved it so far
1; Your series is honestly better to me I do say so. 2;A lil theory on why I think rarity picked the opal option, I feel like apart of her assumed that if she picked to be with your friends she knew it wouldn't be the same, how could it be the same. she felt like she would hurt them again no matter how much she tried to change, (if she wasn't stuck in the loop that is} though I wonder what would happen if rarity broke the loop in one of them. would she continue? try to change it? or would discord go and loop it again? I wonder how sweetiebele is doing
Edit: I think 8:44 proves Dash is a lucky survivor thank god.. Oh god... Please don't tell me she ended up killing Dash... Seeing her at 4:23 makes me think she did... ;-;
I love this comic so much! I feel so sad for Fluttershy, whose only goal was to help everyone and be kind to everyone! And Discord, I can't imagine a worse fate for him. I'm really glad Rarity got the punishment she deserved.
To be honest, due to my little knowledge of English, I usually do not read comics in English, but this comic attracted me to something that is charming and attractive in it. With grief for the sexes, I finished reading and was impressed despite the fact that I understood almost nothing. The only thing I understood was that something creepy was going on, Rainbow showed herself as heroic as usual, Twilight was tired and Rarity was hanging out with a Pinkamina doll and did something bad with Fluttershy, which made discord angry and sent her to the end of the loop. It is very atmospheric, I hope there will be translators and I will be happy to look at my language.
To my knowledge, the official thing was a Tumblr question thing with little story behind it since it was created during the 2000’s. Creating characters and asking questions was a popular and fun idea back then lol. However, there is a script of the story from what I found. Just type “Lil Miss Rarity full story” and you’ll find a wiki fandom page about it. It’s really long and a completely different version from this remake comic.
She essentially had 1 of 2 choices: Face reality of what she did to her friends, her sister, as well as the consequences of said actions. This includes her reputation ruined, her friendships and relationships destroyed and her life essentially ruined. Or she can fall further and further into her insanity as she doesn't want to face the new reality of what she did. I imagine she chose the latter because having to face the reality of what she did was too much for her to take, as a result she decided to take comfort in her insanity as form of escapism and this will take comfort in it. Sometimes facing reality can be a cruel thing, especially when it's done by your own actions. Rarity is simply choosing to run away from taking responsibility rather than owning and accepting them.
Personally, I’d understand why Discord would be mad, but if I had to rewrite the story… WELLLLL, she would’ve never murdered Fluttershy, just breaking a wing or two, she FINALLY got therapy, rehabilitation, anddddd yeah. And her and Rainbow Dash get together- GOD WHY DO I ALWAYS MAKE STORIES HAVE HAPPY ENDINGS💀
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Bro, in all the animations, shorts and what ifs I've ever seen, I've never seen Discord so pissed. Ponies really don't realize how big a solid Flutters gave 'em.
Ahh es demasiado cine 🗣️🔈
Wasn't expecting Fluttershy to go like that, but it's a perfect alibi for what Discord does. A terriblez but fitting ending for Rarity.
The fact that she tried to justify killing fluttershy becsuse she thought it was sweetiebell 🫢
Yeesh, finally, a grimdark/creepypasta story where Discord actually does something and isn't absent or nerfed.
I agree, discord is really scary when he's mad. I'm so sick of how MLP scary stories always leaves him out.
@Constantine_Cvl8 even lost narrator admitted the reason she didn't put discord in her story is because he could fix everything.
You kind of have to plan for Discord to be in your story, or else he'll ruin whatever tension or horror there is. Or in this case, add to it! My favorite versions of Discord is mlp horror is when he can't do anything to stop it. THAT feels spooky.
I just gotta say, I love how messy everything is. The art, words, graininess, everything matches the emotions the characters are feeling,
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Me too!
Man I finally understood this grimdark!! Also seeing Discord so upset is something I would never think to see, plus I was expecting that consequence Discord only had one pony who really understood him and Right where Discord's life was fixed, flutter was brutally taken away from him
But now that it is a loop that is rarity now it makes sense of grimdark
So all of this torture and manic nonsense is far more horrifying... It's worse then the release of death or the eternal imprisonment of Tartarus... *A time loop...*
"what do you mean you can't? this is your third loop!" god what a great fucking wham line. i was never into the original lmr (thank goodness, from what ive heard of it lol) but this has been so good. unbelievably incredible art, as well
This whole story has had such INSANE twists!
Discord was the best. He finally does something.
AHHHH I can't believe It's over!!
It’s sad how rarity end up like that, but that's her karma for what she did, also rainbow was awsome for saving sweetie 🤩
this is SUCH a great retelling! wonderful art, and the writing is so so gripping. the twist of it all really got me!
Discord: prepare yourself 💀
Bros dead
He really said “PREPARE THYSELF!”
Sword phightinf
I'm so happy I FINALLY UNDESTAND THIS GRIMDARK AND HOLY SHI--- it's so good.
2:08 - I think my heart just had a seizure hearing this
I love how it turned out but I kinda expected something more gore and some more about rarity rather it ending with her just in a loop punishment from discord.
But I do love the art and it was sad how discord was shattered that fluttershy died from rarity..🥺
Thank you for making this comic because I enjoyed watching it because of the artwork and the lore!!🤗💜
Nice going discord, now you've unintentionally trapped your beloved in an eternity of having to be betrayed by a loved one, tortured, and murdered over and over too! Talk about Mondays :(
--oh wait I just read the qna, shes all good (dead) :)
Wait, where do you read the qna?
He is doing it inside her head.
Truly a great ending to a great series. Poor Rarity, but it could have been worse. Atleast she does not remember that she is in a loop. That would be true hell.
God your art is so nice. It’s so nice to see someone remake this series in such a neat way.
Discord is Pissed...Rarity is dead now
Ive absolutely loved this series, great job, its like nothing ive ever watched/read
I know what she did was VERY wrong, but I still feel bad for her. The cycle of reliving the lowest stage of your life.
I'm, not going to lie, this actually has a better ending then the original(not sure if i like it but it's still better) where a demon goat was basically corrupting all of ponyville and stuff(though that was before the reboot if i remember right)
Was not expectiang discord but the way you made him was awsome
Oh Discord coming in clutch! I love it!
i really enjoyed your whole comic story you made it got me hella scared lol and teared up its so sad how it ended and i wish there was more into it but its okay i really loved it so far
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this was literally extraordinary,, u have so much talent wow!
The ending gives me chills.
1; Your series is honestly better to me I do say so.
2;A lil theory on why I think rarity picked the opal option, I feel like apart of her assumed that if she picked to be with your friends she knew it wouldn't be the same, how could it be the same. she felt like she would hurt them again no matter how much she tried to change, (if she wasn't stuck in the loop that is} though I wonder what would happen if rarity broke the loop in one of them. would she continue? try to change it? or would discord go and loop it again?
I wonder how sweetiebele is doing
Fun fact July 4th is Rarity's birthday
So spoopy-
Don’t diss butterfly’s discord those things scared the ever loving shit out of me
Wait is this then ending? :c I wanted more (tho if it is it's alr! You did lovely over all!)
Edit: I think 8:44 proves Dash is a lucky survivor thank god..
Oh god... Please don't tell me she ended up killing Dash...
Seeing her at 4:23 makes me think she did... ;-;
Nope, Dash is alive Discord even said she's been trying to take care or Fluttershy's animals
This is a best punishment for the worst criminal good thing this isn't a real thing and that flutter shy is alive in the real show weew
Futtershy only wanted the best for everyone despite his shyness and lack of confidence, she didn't deserve to Finish like this
Ahhh es demasiado cine🗣️🔈
I realy cant wait😻💔
Oh thats good.
today I had icecream and it tasted like firework dust😡
wait there will be another part or this is final
Guess
Can someone tell me how to finish this?. I seriously didn't understand
This is so good❤
4:17 so wait, was Fluttershy ripped in half? Or was it blood loss that got her
Both
I love this comic so much! I feel so sad for Fluttershy, whose only goal was to help everyone and be kind to everyone! And Discord, I can't imagine a worse fate for him. I'm really glad Rarity got the punishment she deserved.
I'm glad that discord got to do something. He is so scary when he's angry.
Tarrance: Run rainbow dash and sweetie belle run
❤ Love it
Or is it because your done!!!!!!
WOHO
This parts so cool and ending it why again!!???
Woah 💀
Literally
It is to hard for me to understand Everything I guess
Poor discord
To be honest, due to my little knowledge of English, I usually do not read comics in English, but this comic attracted me to something that is charming and attractive in it. With grief for the sexes, I finished reading and was impressed despite the fact that I understood almost nothing. The only thing I understood was that something creepy was going on, Rainbow showed herself as heroic as usual, Twilight was tired and Rarity was hanging out with a Pinkamina doll and did something bad with Fluttershy, which made discord angry and sent her to the end of the loop.
It is very atmospheric, I hope there will be translators and I will be happy to look at my language.
What the heck rainbow dash don't swear
That ending was kind of disappointing. Is that how the official comic went?
To my knowledge, the official thing was a Tumblr question thing with little story behind it since it was created during the 2000’s. Creating characters and asking questions was a popular and fun idea back then lol.
However, there is a script of the story from what I found. Just type “Lil Miss Rarity full story” and you’ll find a wiki fandom page about it. It’s really long and a completely different version from this remake comic.
MANNNNNNNN IM TOO EARLY
Deep down, I don't understand anything about Rarity, I think it's her name, are you sorry?
Hi
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Whys it last part tell me
Pls tell Mee!!! 😭😭🥺🥺🥺
Why did lil miss rarity except to stay with pinkamea why controlling her or somwthing
Pls tell me why
Creator
She essentially had 1 of 2 choices: Face reality of what she did to her friends, her sister, as well as the consequences of said actions. This includes her reputation ruined, her friendships and relationships destroyed and her life essentially ruined.
Or she can fall further and further into her insanity as she doesn't want to face the new reality of what she did.
I imagine she chose the latter because having to face the reality of what she did was too much for her to take, as a result she decided to take comfort in her insanity as form of escapism and this will take comfort in it. Sometimes facing reality can be a cruel thing, especially when it's done by your own actions. Rarity is simply choosing to run away from taking responsibility rather than owning and accepting them.
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Personally, I’d understand why Discord would be mad, but if I had to rewrite the story…
WELLLLL, she would’ve never murdered Fluttershy, just breaking a wing or two, she FINALLY got therapy, rehabilitation, anddddd yeah. And her and Rainbow Dash get together-
GOD WHY DO I ALWAYS MAKE STORIES HAVE HAPPY ENDINGS💀
Why is this last part because rarity went and stayed with pinkamean
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