Earth's Secret Fleet Shocks Galactic Council | Best HFY Stories

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КОМЕНТАРІ • 73

  • @troybradshaw8781
    @troybradshaw8781 3 місяці тому +9

    Note to self; Don't become allies with the galactic federation. Allies who argue about being allies are worthless.

  • @robdevereux2740
    @robdevereux2740 3 місяці тому +13

    Why is everything 'the fate of the galaxy hangs in the balance'..... "Captain Avery needed a cup of coffee and the fate of the galaxy hung in the balance!"

  • @BjornoPeter
    @BjornoPeter 3 місяці тому +1

    Add 70 pct. Trek, 20 pct. Star Wars and 10 pct. Halo to a bowl and stir vigorously.

  • @darrinwebber4077
    @darrinwebber4077 4 місяці тому +7

    "Like a hot knife through butter...".
    I think that's in every one of these AI Sci-fi videos.... It gets old but I still like them. They kill a lot of time.

    • @thenecessaryevil2634
      @thenecessaryevil2634 4 місяці тому

      The stories are mostly from the 'Humanity Fuck Yeah' reddit and the AI generated ones use the existing stories to determine best phrases so stuff from stories reposted a lot or from really prolific authors gets used more. There was an author who did a lot of LitRPG stories and even a couple novel length stories who loved that phrase for magic swords.

    • @alisonmacbride3403
      @alisonmacbride3403 3 місяці тому +1

      Another word that gets used much too often, but has to be included in any story if you want to be welcomed into the secret society of fictional writers. And the word is "clambered." I mean have you ever clambered? Know anyone who has? 😂

    • @CrashPCcz
      @CrashPCcz 3 місяці тому

      As Teal'c would say, Indeed! Spotted that too. Also their names are so repetitive and same. Like, Zandar (ish) and Glurk (ish). 😂

  • @edtrine8692
    @edtrine8692 4 місяці тому +14

    The #1 mistake of the nuclear power plant in Japan was putting the emergency power for the power plant in the basement in a Tsunami zone!

  • @Ripsaw17
    @Ripsaw17 4 місяці тому +4

    Us humans also have a saying f*** around and find out

  • @AtomicSquirrelHunter
    @AtomicSquirrelHunter 3 місяці тому +6

    So let me get this straight....
    Admiral Avery is Captain Kirk?

    • @kevinafrank104
      @kevinafrank104 3 місяці тому +1

      Maybe not, but his engineer is definitely Scotty. “Captain, she can’t take much more of this!”

  • @cwartner
    @cwartner 4 місяці тому +4

    "Earth has secured its place in the galaxy and now it would never be the same" - truly chilling and creepy ending. Poor galaxy ...

  • @thelinuxlearningcurve5394
    @thelinuxlearningcurve5394 4 місяці тому +4

    Yeah the chapters are really our of order - such a shame for a good story

  • @jimwhiteford443
    @jimwhiteford443 3 місяці тому +7

    I’ve never had the word “bristling” so much

    • @jimwhiteford443
      @jimwhiteford443 3 місяці тому +1

      This story should’ve been called fiction tropes you’re sick of and didn’t make sense the first time you heard them

    • @cpcw06
      @cpcw06 3 місяці тому +1

      or butter

    • @marwerno
      @marwerno Місяць тому

      Same "with grim determination" or "roar of defiance" (which are also in heavy use in other stories of this type... is this all written by the same AI?

  • @user-xr5oz5dk9c
    @user-xr5oz5dk9c 3 місяці тому +3

    It's amazing that in one guys life the stake of the galaxy was at stake like fifteen times

    • @cpcw06
      @cpcw06 3 місяці тому +1

      Don't forget all that butter too!

    • @Perurikun
      @Perurikun 3 місяці тому

      @@cpcw06 sooooooo much butter! 🤣🤣🤣🔪🧈

  • @osvaldocristo
    @osvaldocristo 3 місяці тому +2

    So Avery is the king of humanity and probably the galaxy that takes in his own hands all power and decision. Additionally he doesn´t allow anyone take the minimum responsibility besides himself, so he is the supreme commander of the ships as well commandos in the surface. Personally.
    Oh, please, I know all is fiction but I think author needs a little bit of reality.

  • @keithhughes8010
    @keithhughes8010 4 місяці тому +1

    Great video

  • @user-ul6dc4qc4j
    @user-ul6dc4qc4j 4 місяці тому +4

    Better than star trek though. Also, Sol is such a cool name for our system.

  • @charlesregan9917
    @charlesregan9917 4 місяці тому +6

    Another AI gets boring

    • @edtrine8692
      @edtrine8692 4 місяці тому

      There are several words AI can't pronounce. Bow, Lead are just a couple?

  • @jbodden6977
    @jbodden6977 3 місяці тому +4

    are these alien names courtesy of CAlvin and Hobbes?

  • @JackT1961
    @JackT1961 4 місяці тому +1

    Good story. The timeline needs a little work though

  • @tazmokhan7614
    @tazmokhan7614 3 місяці тому

    Lots of Fate and butter in telling this story, but its pretty damn good read.

  • @XxiceBlokxX
    @XxiceBlokxX 4 місяці тому +4

    My favorite part is the 1,753,000 commercials. Can you guys add more commercials?

    • @edtrine8692
      @edtrine8692 4 місяці тому +1

      Just damn!

    • @Dr.Westside
      @Dr.Westside 4 місяці тому +2

      Yeah you can just scroll all the way through and then hit restart at the end and you won't have any commercials . You're welcome

  • @Scifiland
    @Scifiland 3 місяці тому +1

    Better than gotg ❤🔥

  • @matthewmeans8360
    @matthewmeans8360 3 місяці тому

    Bro needs a Thesaurus

  • @clintdodson44
    @clintdodson44 Місяць тому

    Enjoy your storys

  • @mircsmurf
    @mircsmurf 4 місяці тому +2

    this needs somewhat better editing cause the story is fragmented

  • @Xdbd1
    @Xdbd1 3 місяці тому

    I work ina legal chop shop. We take in wrecked cars and sell the good parts. I spill oil on the daily. I also live in the woods, where the bugs are. They get it too.

  • @elfeintwentyfives1620
    @elfeintwentyfives1620 4 місяці тому +1

    silly request could you put stories in same continuity or same "book"?

  • @frankg3243
    @frankg3243 3 місяці тому

    Admiral Marcus Avery has sacrificed too much including Commander Raxos from Valkorians. To bow down to tyranny or oppression that dared to challenge them. I would like to hear the rest of this story, Parts 2, 3, 4, 5, you know to the END!

  • @rev.mathewgaines3160
    @rev.mathewgaines3160 4 місяці тому +1

    Not if you have UA-cam premium then no commercials

  • @mynameismud1776
    @mynameismud1776 3 місяці тому

    Is this a video game? Seems just like a narrative of a StarCraft like scenario

  • @lippoe
    @lippoe 3 місяці тому

    One obvious problem with this narrative is the fact that a Captain is basically conducting all the diplomacy in the story. Where are Earth's leaders and diplomats?

    • @thomaslemay8817
      @thomaslemay8817 3 місяці тому

      Hiding at home waiting for the combat to end so they can rush out and claim the credit after the danger is finished like all diplomats.

  • @robertwhitehead8671HMCS
    @robertwhitehead8671HMCS 4 місяці тому

    Divert all power to sheilds lmao is it Star trek?

  • @CrashPCcz
    @CrashPCcz 3 місяці тому

    So basically (story of) European Union on roids. 😂

  • @1WhiteKnight85
    @1WhiteKnight85 3 місяці тому

    While, I like the tone of the computerized voice used. It is just slightly annoying when you hear advanced weapons pronounced as weepons.

  • @jasonrodgers4865
    @jasonrodgers4865 3 місяці тому

    the story does have a lot of potential yet it has a glaring pacing issue. a lot of the story feels like it does a lot of and then and then and then and then and then. no real time frame discussed just this happened in this happened in this happened and this happened and this happened and this happened. also it was humans great human suck humans great human suck humans great human suck humans great.

  • @edwardroche2480
    @edwardroche2480 3 місяці тому

    First, there are uncountable galaxies in space . Too many things are repeated too many times to pad this story. This makes it a little monotonous and boring. I like the story.

  • @Denpachii
    @Denpachii 4 місяці тому +1

    Meh.

  • @theguy0526
    @theguy0526 Місяць тому

    Wtf is this sheeeiiit

  • @DontAskHowIGotIt
    @DontAskHowIGotIt 3 місяці тому

    AI writer much?

  • @markwestfall9410
    @markwestfall9410 3 місяці тому +1

    Is this AI created? Its all over the place and very repetitive.

  • @patlab555
    @patlab555 3 місяці тому

    So all bad ET's names start with a Z... You might want to be a bit more creative.

  • @lkuhhdsfgasdgvdadfg
    @lkuhhdsfgasdgvdadfg 3 місяці тому +10

    This story is terribly writen.

    • @duanecarr6712
      @duanecarr6712 3 місяці тому +6

      Yours are way better I imagine

    • @delilighfrost9374
      @delilighfrost9374 3 місяці тому +3

      ​@duanecarr6712 i dont need to write stories to know crap when i read/hear it. You want my credentials? Ive read thousands of books at a time when people barely know how to read, and starting to listen to dozens more on these sights. This one is practically bad.

    • @TheBoss-pz9rf
      @TheBoss-pz9rf 3 місяці тому +3

      @@delilighfrost9374 big deal. I listen to Japanese voice acting and understand the Japanese while reading the English subtitles whilst still watching the anime. Get bent.

    • @delilighfrost9374
      @delilighfrost9374 3 місяці тому

      ​@@TheBoss-pz9rf You still use subtitles?!?.... N00B

    • @TheBoss-pz9rf
      @TheBoss-pz9rf 3 місяці тому +3

      @@delilighfrost9374 obviously you don’t read. I don’t need the subtitles but it’s fun to compare the original intent to the English translation.

  • @user-qg2xp3dz3b
    @user-qg2xp3dz3b 4 місяці тому

    I'm not sure its A I all these or most of these stories are same old nonsense

    • @cseale61
      @cseale61 4 місяці тому

      Can you do better? If so, put your stuff out there. We'll let you know what we think.