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  • @user-ie2pe3wq7s
    @user-ie2pe3wq7s 3 місяці тому +37

    > Ten thousand years
    Warhammer players: They're in danger. 😅

  • @nonoyorbusness
    @nonoyorbusness 3 місяці тому +41

    The access codes haven't been updated in 10,000 years? Even a zorgon wouldn't be that thick!

    • @123Sqeakers
      @123Sqeakers 3 місяці тому +1

      no Zorgons are clueless

    • @johngray7304
      @johngray7304 3 місяці тому +1

      And isn't his friend throughout the rest of the story the same species as the people that thought him out so why all of a sudden does it change mid-story

    • @russellperry9902
      @russellperry9902 3 місяці тому

      it is a free moeny. THis is a scam. You and I dont matter... just the AI listening to the AI wrttien story for 40k times... thats all that matters... Get on chat GBT . it is literaly free moeny .

    • @Vampster19CockedD20
      @Vampster19CockedD20 2 місяці тому

      ​@@johngray7304yuppppp I caught that to.... AI written story.... Look at the guys right shoulder in the pic that's AI as well. There is a 2nd face 😅😅

  • @Rosivok
    @Rosivok 3 місяці тому +56

    It gets to the point where it doesn't matter how good the story is when you have commercials that are 5 minutes long for every 4 minutes of story

    • @17mindgate
      @17mindgate 3 місяці тому +7

      Seconded.

    • @freddieross986
      @freddieross986 3 місяці тому

      adskiller adblocker extension its like having YT premuim for free

    • @lisear2926
      @lisear2926 3 місяці тому +1

      Amazing.. 49 min in and I've had 1 min of commercials. Are you 🇺🇸❓ I'm 🇨🇦.

    • @Rynfire76
      @Rynfire76 3 місяці тому +9

      And that’s why premium membership is worth every penny.

    • @AB-gc3mr
      @AB-gc3mr 3 місяці тому

      @@lisear2926no one cares go sniff tredous seat after he gets up.

  • @Im_Not_From_Around_Here
    @Im_Not_From_Around_Here 3 місяці тому +48

    Umm in a cryopod for 10,000 years and they think he would know the the code to Earths defenses? Any idea how stupid that sounds?

    • @Grungy1
      @Grungy1 3 місяці тому +1

      Yep

    • @michelecastell8400
      @michelecastell8400 3 місяці тому +2

      don't worry kids :) its only a story created for entertainment, you don't have to listen

    • @Grungy1
      @Grungy1 3 місяці тому

      @@michelecastell8400 these conversations are just what fans do. We all enjoyed it. But the flaws make it funnier.

    • @apenny4urpodcast959
      @apenny4urpodcast959 3 місяці тому +1

      lol, yeah, I have to change my password every 3 months

    • @1988nProud
      @1988nProud 3 місяці тому +2

      I luv it how u assume that locks require a key pass maybe it is spit like a dna lock come on ppl b creative

  • @DJDrCheese
    @DJDrCheese 3 місяці тому +15

    How in the hell did the news of his heroics saving the colony spread to other colonies before he even holstered his weapons?

  • @mojopy01
    @mojopy01 3 місяці тому +25

    after hurting his dog they thawed John Wick, Aliens "oh F@%K"

  • @cosmicdrift8311
    @cosmicdrift8311 3 місяці тому +25

    Why does each of these stories have phrases that are repeated so many times? Are they bot created?

    • @Zenzo
      @Zenzo 3 місяці тому +5

      Most likely.

    • @grazzitdvram
      @grazzitdvram 3 місяці тому +8

      pretty sure they're AI generated and read

    • @macthir13en87
      @macthir13en87 3 місяці тому +2

      yep

    • @iancormie9916
      @iancormie9916 3 місяці тому +4

      Almost assuredly - they all follow the same format.

    • @chunglow7646
      @chunglow7646 3 місяці тому

      Eggzackly so

  • @irongiant7577
    @irongiant7577 3 місяці тому +12

    7:35 There are no pain receptors in the brain. He wouldn't feel a thing no matter what they did to it.

    • @jessicathurman3060
      @jessicathurman3060 2 місяці тому

      Actually there are...though they're not previlent.

    • @irongiant7577
      @irongiant7577 2 місяці тому

      @@jessicathurman3060 No, there aren't. The brain tissue doesn't contain any nociceptors. You wouldn't feel a thing. Unless you're referring to the blood vessels in the surrounding tissue. (which causes headaches). However, you wouldn't feel a single thing if someone was prodding your brain. What would happen, from someone prodding your brain, would be much worse than any pain.

  • @mllrtime25
    @mllrtime25 3 місяці тому +13

    Why would anyone in status for 10,000 years have any relevant info. Shit story.

    • @tonynelligan1930
      @tonynelligan1930 3 місяці тому

      hay i'm just 1 minute behind you with that dumb question being typed guy why would he know anything.

    • @Grungy1
      @Grungy1 3 місяці тому

      He couldn't tell you if he was still the same species of human after 10k years. Let alone what the human technology looked like or what political system they use. The important codes.... hey mr Spartan warrior dude, can you unlock my phone? And that was barely 3k years ago.

  • @barkdawg
    @barkdawg 3 місяці тому +6

    A super soldier named John nice

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 3 місяці тому +1

    Poor guy, floating through space for ten thousand years, only to be woken up to be tortured.

  • @getoffyoubassandletsfish8565
    @getoffyoubassandletsfish8565 3 місяці тому +8

    And then he found out that ZOG was not real and he was in a virtual reality room and gave out all information they needed.

  • @alexstewart8124
    @alexstewart8124 3 місяці тому +4

    I like the story

  • @MrAurelioCantu
    @MrAurelioCantu 3 місяці тому +2

    I KEPT HOPING FOR A TWIST AT THE END WHERE THE CAPTAINS STILL HAD A MIND CONTROL DEVICE IN HIS HEAD!!😔

  • @reubencarter3004
    @reubencarter3004 3 місяці тому +4

    You woke up Chris Hemsworth. He is pissed off and ready to fight as the still shot shows.

  • @shaung8182
    @shaung8182 3 місяці тому +3

    Good story!

  • @freddieross986
    @freddieross986 3 місяці тому +3

    Good story, really enjoyed it...

  • @nathanielsizemore3946
    @nathanielsizemore3946 3 місяці тому +3

    I loved the story.

  • @thoscarney6671
    @thoscarney6671 3 місяці тому +1

    Nice!!….Great story. Need More!!!

  • @rickmcqueen9760
    @rickmcqueen9760 3 місяці тому +1

    Loved the story.

  • @johnathangoldsworthy
    @johnathangoldsworthy 3 місяці тому +1

    great story enjoyed it thoroughly

  • @rb2712
    @rb2712 2 місяці тому

    Thank you well writtten

  • @williamrankin1796
    @williamrankin1796 3 місяці тому

    Like..... I love your story's there captivating, suspenseful, entertaining, well thought out!would love to see them made into movies

  • @freddy7324
    @freddy7324 3 місяці тому

    super vet heeft me echt onderhouden bedankt vriend, tot het volgende verhaal

  • @richardrinebold5512
    @richardrinebold5512 2 місяці тому

    Love stories like 4

  • @Thebestme2024WWJD
    @Thebestme2024WWJD 3 місяці тому +1

    i liked the story

  • @davidturner4824
    @davidturner4824 3 місяці тому

    Great story.

  • @Elvis87avp
    @Elvis87avp 2 місяці тому

    I love it ❤🎉

  • @not-yours-I-checked
    @not-yours-I-checked 3 місяці тому +1

    Wait a sec. I thought he killed Erickson when he first came face to face with him. "He felt his skull give way under the force of his fist"

    • @vickymolinar4248
      @vickymolinar4248 3 місяці тому

      That's what I thought but maybe he was a lab grown ericson,Ericson, knows ,but I did like the story.

    • @xephael3485
      @xephael3485 2 місяці тому

      ​@@vickymolinar4248let's not white knight for a badly written AI story

  • @MISTSHIFTGaming
    @MISTSHIFTGaming 3 місяці тому

    How can John know the zorgons can reduce world's to ashes when he just woke up not knowing where he is and what soecies his captors are

  • @howardstover5299
    @howardstover5299 3 місяці тому

    Thank

  • @perrieabad9826
    @perrieabad9826 3 місяці тому

    awesome story

  • @denzelphillips8056
    @denzelphillips8056 3 місяці тому

    Keep going I loved the story

  • @jamesdunn4865
    @jamesdunn4865 3 місяці тому

    Thank you good story

  • @charlesellis3881
    @charlesellis3881 3 місяці тому +3

    Erickson was killed in the first conflict

    • @Red-Raider
      @Red-Raider 3 місяці тому +1

      Yet he still lives… funny right?

  • @mobilegamersunite
    @mobilegamersunite 3 місяці тому +1

    You can't feel your brain matter from my understanding of it...

  • @ViewingInterests36
    @ViewingInterests36 2 години тому

    story was good

  • @christinetrue8198
    @christinetrue8198 3 місяці тому +4

    Excellent story!

  • @randaldavis8976
    @randaldavis8976 3 місяці тому +4

    10k years and still has defense codes ?

    • @russellperry9902
      @russellperry9902 3 місяці тому

      If you get the paid for chatGPT the AI will watch your videos across multiple IPs for quality assurence.. 1k times, 5 k times, 22k times... as many times as you need your video to be watched.

  • @jacobrawles8687
    @jacobrawles8687 3 місяці тому

    Interesting strory.

  • @Red-Raider
    @Red-Raider 3 місяці тому +1

    1:37:15 Erickson dies here! But… 1:42:38 Erickson at large?!?
    How can this be?????

  • @justnews9738
    @justnews9738 2 місяці тому

    I used Zorgon too clean my clothes and it works wonders.

  • @kollinbrugh1156
    @kollinbrugh1156 2 місяці тому

    Ah those dang ol zorgons are at it again I see

  • @MichaelSchisler-jx3uc
    @MichaelSchisler-jx3uc 2 місяці тому

    I did like the story it was a good read also ❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY

  • @antediluvianatheist5262
    @antediluvianatheist5262 3 місяці тому +1

    Sigma division?
    John Steele?
    Really?

  • @regnox2789
    @regnox2789 3 місяці тому +2

    Anyone else getting a Halo rip off vibe? Zog's just an arbiter. John is....well John. Ascended = Flood. Neat story for sure, but wow a little on the nose.

  • @haroldbrown5887
    @haroldbrown5887 3 місяці тому

    I like story it's kind of like a 40s or 50s genre but it was a good story.

  • @markclarkson7229
    @markclarkson7229 3 місяці тому +1

    Good story but what's his name again and where was he forged 😂

  • @douglashibma1688
    @douglashibma1688 3 місяці тому

    We should all strive to be a hero like Steele, and a friend like Zog. That being said, please avoid having the main character kill the bad guy more than once! The inconsistencies are annoying.

  • @richardplatts1096
    @richardplatts1096 3 місяці тому +1

    These people are new writers give them a break they are learning if you're so good wright one yourself

    • @thebrokenhandle7691
      @thebrokenhandle7691 3 місяці тому

      I’d recommend looking at more of their videos, they publish a 1.5-2.5 hour long videos every two hours daily, saying they write them all with a near identical blurb in the description, it’s likely ai generated, read, then uploaded automatically

  • @genocanabicea5779
    @genocanabicea5779 3 місяці тому +1

    Excellent story.

  • @davidcollins2993
    @davidcollins2993 3 місяці тому +8

    Why are all the bad guys called zark or something similar.

  • @Iseethegap
    @Iseethegap 3 місяці тому

    Great story, keep up the good work🤙

  • @JulioMo
    @JulioMo 3 місяці тому

    Im John Steel goddamn it!

  • @rl8750
    @rl8750 3 місяці тому +3

    why does the text go faster than the talker

    • @Tipper709
      @Tipper709 3 місяці тому

      No quality control it seems no one checked the work.

  • @Scifiland
    @Scifiland 3 місяці тому

    ❤❤

  • @louellacharlton4425
    @louellacharlton4425 3 місяці тому +2

    Is it me or did he kill Erickson twice? Bashed hos head in then again at the end?? Maybe I'm just not paying enough attention.

    • @TheRaptor1967
      @TheRaptor1967 3 місяці тому +1

      Your right, that got me too.
      And seriously, (if that word can be used here), the story is too disjointed.
      Some elements appealed to my inner child, but in general it was too puerile.
      The text being out of sync didn't help either, not that I spent too long looking at the screen.

    • @russellperry9902
      @russellperry9902 3 місяці тому +3

      @@TheRaptor1967 step one. make AI write story. step two, make AI watch story 100k times. Step 3 profit.

    • @TheRaptor1967
      @TheRaptor1967 3 місяці тому

      @@russellperry9902 Got it. In other words, that's just another way of of gaming the hell out of the system. Looks like they didn't even read the story themselves to check for inconsistencies. Posting the story is probably automated as well.

    • @thebrokenhandle7691
      @thebrokenhandle7691 3 місяці тому

      @@russellperry9902also post a 2 hour video every 2 hours, definitely automated

  • @Red-Raider
    @Red-Raider 3 місяці тому

    1:14:28 wait! I thought Zorg was a Zargon! Now he is something else!?

  • @corporealexistence9467
    @corporealexistence9467 3 місяці тому

    He killed Ericson, with blood pooling around his head; but did not?

  • @troybrice4531
    @troybrice4531 3 місяці тому +1

    An astroide chase while exciting doesn't make sense to me if there's more than one ship pursing. Let the pod risk itself dogging rocks and the other ships could just be further out watching and waiting for them to leave. It's not like a dense astroide field would extend out of the solar system.

    • @kirksnowden8023
      @kirksnowden8023 3 місяці тому +1

      So your assuming aliens thousands of years in the future bent on human destruction in an extremely brutal manner, think like you and me who live very comfortably. That’s not how war or combat works. It’s a cocktail of fear, panic, adrenaline and topped with chaos. You can even add pain and sorrow.

    • @troybrice4531
      @troybrice4531 3 місяці тому

      @@kirksnowden8023It doesn't make sense from a survival point of view. There's no need to put them selves at risk. It's an asteroid belt meaning it doesn't extend to the outer edge of the solar system. Like a boat chase near a reef, there's no need to risk the ship if you have more than one. One stays near shore the other in the open water let the fool in the middle risk running their craft aground. The person running will have to exit eventually you can catch them then. It clearly said the pursuing ships were faster.

  • @ArturiusMaxwell
    @ArturiusMaxwell 3 місяці тому

    Is the thumbnail AI generate or from a movie?

  • @noahriding5780
    @noahriding5780 3 місяці тому

    Demolition Man movie!

  • @StockyDude
    @StockyDude 3 місяці тому

    Should’ve used a thumbnail of Chuck Norris.

  • @andrewhonour9287
    @andrewhonour9287 3 місяці тому

    Gave up, 2 minutes of a great audio and then an advert.. wrote this and left

  • @brandonshelp4682
    @brandonshelp4682 3 місяці тому

    Hot take: every alien in amateur sci-fi does not require a "Z" name.

  • @scinanisern9845
    @scinanisern9845 3 місяці тому

    They want defense information now 10,000 years old? Cut me some slack.

  • @jimmills9526
    @jimmills9526 3 місяці тому

    Story is all over the place and in one part only the two were on the ship, they force other ships (not related) into a gas giant and the next thing you hear is they’re fighting, and when it’s over there are aliens and humans and paramedics….where the hell did all the other humans come from? They even have the Nexus from the other story…never hearing of it before, how did he know what it was and that he had to smash it? I love a good story but had to turn this crap off

  • @troydawson4017
    @troydawson4017 3 місяці тому

    1,000 commercials, it’s like every 5 sentences it goes to commercial!
    Exhausting trying to listen to this.

  • @henryknepp
    @henryknepp 3 місяці тому

    Not bad for a AI.

  • @benmartinworks
    @benmartinworks 3 місяці тому

    Was alright. Felt like a first draft. Or AI

  • @Tommyturbo1981
    @Tommyturbo1981 3 місяці тому

    Is this a real movie?

  • @kentchristiansen95
    @kentchristiansen95 3 місяці тому

    Not bad as AI I don't want to read it or watch it I would prefer having and seeing things done by human beings

  • @zenko247
    @zenko247 3 місяці тому

    Do all aliens names begin with Z 😂😂🤣🤣🤣

    • @xephael3485
      @xephael3485 2 місяці тому

      I asked my friends Zandra and Zoe, they said no.

  • @robw7205
    @robw7205 3 місяці тому

    Started out good, devolved into AI prattle.

  • @kurtnewyork9374
    @kurtnewyork9374 2 місяці тому

    Stupid story doesn't make any sense. 10k years old and hes to know the defense code?

  • @andrewwilkins7823
    @andrewwilkins7823 3 місяці тому +1

    I suspect this was wtitten by AI, its repetative, has basic errors in the story line and doesnt make sense.
    Shame as the initial story had promise but soon became a confused mess that made no sense.
    Pretty poor.

  • @brockdeskins5546
    @brockdeskins5546 3 місяці тому

    Just started "watching" this channel. Wondering about the hard-coded subtitles. THere's a CC option if people want subs. Wish they would stop forcing subs. One was so bad hey highlighted each word like one of those bouncing ball singaliongs. Had to turn that one off.

  • @Philip02K
    @Philip02K 3 місяці тому

    You have bad grammar look who’s talking?

  • @winstonwilliams4859
    @winstonwilliams4859 3 місяці тому

    1 minute 1 ad,min 6 ad nope cannot listen any more min 10

  • @rachelmoore1974
    @rachelmoore1974 3 місяці тому

    Yeah, the story is pretty poorly written if you start things off with expecting a soldier who's been in cryofreeze for 10,000 to know anything even remotely relevant to Earth's defenses. Also, the narrator brings no nuance to the telling of the story. It was mindnumbingly boring to listen to. I gave up about 20 minutes in because I couldn't take it anymore.

  • @bigmikeluch3589
    @bigmikeluch3589 2 місяці тому

    Ive heard some of these sci-fi stories are AI generated. 🤷

  • @iakatat2
    @iakatat2 2 місяці тому

    That’s a lot of ads……geez
    Also, how many times do you have to state who he is? We got it, stop stating it over and over.

  • @ashmoore9945
    @ashmoore9945 3 місяці тому

    I do enjoy alot of these stories, but the gaping plot hole with-in the first 3 mins is to much to handle. If the cryo-pod had been a drift for 10,000 years. How could it's occupant know anything of current events? No matter what happen from this moment, in the story, my suspension of disbelief has been broken.
    Why does this feel like something a drunken A.I. would create.

  • @ajp7860
    @ajp7860 2 місяці тому

    Ads every 3 minutes? No thanks I'll go listen to something else

    • @lostmarbles209
      @lostmarbles209 2 місяці тому

      Premium 🤔

    • @ajp7860
      @ajp7860 2 місяці тому

      @@lostmarbles209 or I could listen to a channel that isn't trying to squeeze every last ounce of joy out of the story by maxing out their ads. Which is what I am currently doing. Suggesting that I pay to not have 2 minute ads literally every 3 minutes is ridiculous. This one isn't on me.

  • @RobertCrickmore
    @RobertCrickmore 3 місяці тому +5

    If the poster actually wrote this then you more practice...hmmm just realized posting it free on UA-cam is practice. Ok some constructive comments then. The last comment is correct, after 10000 years how could he know anything? And yes all these stories have the bad guys either insects or reptiles with names starting with a Z. Been watching too many old 50's scifi movies on streaming services? I'm only 20 minutes in and when I see him discovering the good old asteroid field I stopped and just gave up. This is one cliche after another, hiding in an asteroid field or nebula has been done to death and I mean death. Of the reader. Got to be more creative than that my man but I seriously don't want you to stop trying. Just try better.

    • @seanc.cooper4669
      @seanc.cooper4669 2 місяці тому

      To the idiots criticizing others writing. Maybe check your privilege. It's not your place to tell others how to write. When have you been published? Or even had your stories read on the internet. Go do rude things to yourself. Leave young writer's alone.

  • @Red-Raider
    @Red-Raider 3 місяці тому

    Poorly written!

  • @66Perfekt
    @66Perfekt 3 місяці тому

    this is crap

  • @user-pg7ws6yi4e
    @user-pg7ws6yi4e 3 місяці тому

    A great story. RLTW !!!!