IELTS Task 2 Discussion Essay Band 9 Structure

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    @Shaxlo-e5i 10 місяців тому +29

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  • @NafaS-q3p
    @NafaS-q3p 9 днів тому +2

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  • @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld
    @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld Рік тому +20

    Hello Chris!
    Yesterday I struck with strange writing question in Cambridge IETLS 4:
    Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of following as media for communiting information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
    *Comics
    *Books
    *Radio
    *Television
    *Film
    *Theatre
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
    It was really difficult to answer and if I had struck with such a writing question in real IELTS exam, I definitely wouldn't have known what to do whatsoever!
    Specially, I wouldn't have known how to paraphrase the question in introduction 🤷‍♂️
    I wish you explained it in one of your videos.I think it would be interesting for other subscribers too.

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    @harjeetkaur9110 2 роки тому +26

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      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому +1

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    @rikamunchenmartins2235 16 днів тому

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    @highiamsaay Місяць тому

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  • @shahnazbakri5962
    @shahnazbakri5962 2 роки тому +5

    It is sometimes concurred that freedom of speech is a basic human right that should not be regulated because expression is a part of checks and balances. However, I agree that censorship is needed because allowing unlimited speech to all can create hate speech.
    On the one hand, it is argued that every human should be free to announce any opinion because it will contribute to check and balances of the community and government. In a sense, the moral compass of what is right and wrong can’t be decided by one view and people should be allowed their opinion to open a further discussion. For example, slavery was once seen as a standard practice without allowing the opinions of the opposed. Further advocacy allowed the government’s moral compass to act more reasonably and started to consider to opinions of the enslaved. In certain issues, the right to freedom of speech can be seen as vital.
    On the other hand, censorship can be perceived as necessary to avoid discriminating and inappropriate language. When we allow full freedom of speech, we are also allowing racism, discrimination, and hateful words. This would cause the most harm for certain minority groups because the speech of one racist can create an army and even can escalate to physical attacks. In the 21st century, our general government’s moral compass is assumed to be more logical. Thus, I fully agree that some censorship is needed to regulate people freedom of speech in order to avoid hate crimes.
    To conclude, although freedom of speech is a basic need to keep everyone’s morality in check-regulating hurtful topics that target minority groups through discrimination is needed to hinder any terrorist actions. I believe that enforcing a level of censorship to people’s speech is for the greater good.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому +1

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  • @desishoppingvlogs
    @desishoppingvlogs 2 роки тому +61

    This video is a little bit difficult for me because I think you take an example rather than mention viewpoints 1 or 2. This will be more clear for understanding. Thanks

    • @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld
      @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld Рік тому +6

      I have watched this video more than 5 times and had the same problem with it.I wish Chris had written a full text, not just an structural sample.

    • @aimy7679
      @aimy7679 Рік тому

      True

    • @dilnoza6450
      @dilnoza6450 10 місяців тому +2

      Watch other videos created before this then would be easier

    • @chikaokpalajesusbaby6946
      @chikaokpalajesusbaby6946 4 місяці тому

      Same thing,I experienced too

    • @oshoanu-or5uc
      @oshoanu-or5uc 4 місяці тому

      exactly my thought

  • @nasibkadavlatova4307
    @nasibkadavlatova4307 Рік тому +7

    Assalam alaikum! Thank you for such a useful information, and of course , clear explanation. I NOW understand what is this😍🙏👍👍

  • @sinijacob2573
    @sinijacob2573 Рік тому +3

    There should not be a comma after Although but there is after the Although clause to differentiate it from the principal clause

  • @cutestanimalsofworld6698
    @cutestanimalsofworld6698 2 роки тому +4

    Amazing explanation in a very short amount of time.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

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  • @karunasunar1232
    @karunasunar1232 Рік тому +1

    Thank you so much chris sir with your help ...😊

  • @ShamimSediqi
    @ShamimSediqi Місяць тому

    Thanks teacher 😢❤

  • @cheikhdiop4082
    @cheikhdiop4082 8 місяців тому +1

    It is crystal clear.
    Thank you!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  8 місяців тому

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  • @axrorbekanvarxanov6770
    @axrorbekanvarxanov6770 2 роки тому +3

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      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

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  • @iramnaz7236
    @iramnaz7236 Рік тому

    Appreciated 👍🏻 I learn from your video

  • @kanushkaperera4789
    @kanushkaperera4789 Рік тому +3

    Hi Chris, thank you for sorting out the most confusing essay type. in the introduction stage, are we stating that we disagree with a certain view or is it enough only to mention that we agree with a view.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  Рік тому +1

      Hi Kanushka, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing: Agree or Disagree Lesson with Sample Answer'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @ielts_focus7729
    @ielts_focus7729 2 роки тому +2

    Hi Chris, Thank you very much bro, You are the best of the bests👍🏻

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  • @nikitamaurya4518
    @nikitamaurya4518 Рік тому

    thank you for this! Very helpful and informative! saved my time

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  • @whitekingcat5118
    @whitekingcat5118 2 місяці тому

    i'm going to write a discussion essay tomorrow. Thanks

  • @tamjidaislam4364
    @tamjidaislam4364 2 роки тому +4

    Hi Chris..highly recommending you to create new video of every types of task 2 questions just like discussion and double questions essay, Please.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому +1

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  • @AbdulAhmed-gx2rh
    @AbdulAhmed-gx2rh 2 роки тому +4

    Absolutely Amazing technic. Thank You Teacher.

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      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

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  • @НаргизаСаибова-ж5ч

    Thanks for useful video

  • @somyughanze2075
    @somyughanze2075 8 місяців тому

    This was my task 2 question type today, I'm glad I watched this video last night! I will come back in 13 days to testify

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  8 місяців тому +1

      Best of luck!

    • @somyughanze2075
      @somyughanze2075 8 місяців тому +4

      My result is out and I made a band 7 in writing, it wouldn't have been possible without you🎉 Thank you so much for the tips.
      First time writing and I got an overall of 7.0 which is good enough for my applications

  • @hfgjbvn
    @hfgjbvn 2 роки тому +1

    thanks a lot

  • @okall1087
    @okall1087 Рік тому +1

    Hi Chris, great explanation but can u also explain how to write task 1 tables?

  • @WowUsernameAvailable
    @WowUsernameAvailable Рік тому +1

    As a 38-year-old, I really can't see what is so difficult about following the plan you lay out here naturally, without being walked through it. I mean, the task clearly and concisely says "Discuss both views and give your opinion". Well, discuss view #1, discuss view #2, then give your opinion, it's plain as day.
    One thing I've also noticed is that students will replace the thing the task requires them to write about with an idea that's close but not the same. For instance, for your topic, they must think of why free speech is good and why censorship is good; but students might write why free speech is good and why it's bad, which isn't exactly the same.

  • @Mjayy_onyekwere
    @Mjayy_onyekwere 2 роки тому

    Amazing explanation

  • @gurleen2095
    @gurleen2095 Рік тому

    Thanku for such an informative video.pls provide similar type of video on advantages and disadvantages type of essay

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  Рік тому

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  • @alphinthomas8074
    @alphinthomas8074 2 роки тому +5

    Sir, you are such a great tutor. Thanks for the valuable tips

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  • @febymoljames2487
    @febymoljames2487 2 роки тому

    Thank you so much for an excellent class

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  • @jonathancollins3870
    @jonathancollins3870 Рік тому +1

    Dear Chris,
    You are awesome and your lessons are awesome as well. I have been reading more sample essays from "Simon" just to get some ideas and learn some writing techniques with which Iam really fond of nowadays
    Do you think Simon's essays are worth to read?

  • @gamesturdytuber5678
    @gamesturdytuber5678 7 місяців тому

    could you bring like this explanation on advantages outweigh disadvantages also in opinion questions?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  7 місяців тому

      Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Essay Lesson'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы
    @ЯЧеловек-ю8ы 5 місяців тому

    thank you

  • @zariyarai
    @zariyarai Місяць тому

    Can you please share an example or sample with this strategy?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  Місяць тому

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  • @bridgetosadaniels3232
    @bridgetosadaniels3232 2 роки тому +3

    Thank you very much, please can you give me access for the free class on body building for writing task 2

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  • @rehanafzal6636
    @rehanafzal6636 4 місяці тому

    INTERESTED

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  • @jinal-e2n
    @jinal-e2n Рік тому +2

    Hello, Good and clear matter for essay. I am interested for free tools for how to build Main Body Paragraph

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  • @aqsaidris2946
    @aqsaidris2946 5 місяців тому

    Please tell me in discussion essay should we give opinion in introduction or in conclusion?

  • @Mr_Dreamer007
    @Mr_Dreamer007 2 роки тому +1

    Hi chris ..thanks for a wonderful explanation ..but can you please share the full answer of this discussion essay as i did understand all the things but i'm confused in do we have to write a whole other paragraph regarding our view point or we just have to add 1 line in the end of MBP2 as "I agree with this view" ?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

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  • @SoroushHosseini-v8w
    @SoroushHosseini-v8w Рік тому +1

    Hi. Thanks for the great insight you're providing. I have a question: There's an article on IDP website that emphasizes writing 3 body paragraphs for discussion essay (1st body, 2nd body, and your opinion in a separate paragraph). I would appreciate your stance on this. Thank you in advance

    • @darimi.b
      @darimi.b Рік тому

      You may state your opinion in a separate paragraph, and this paragraph is optional.

  • @daun55
    @daun55 2 роки тому

    you are genius

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    @samuelotoo7277 Рік тому

    Nice, how do I link up for more tutorials??

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  • @prabuddhibhagya4924
    @prabuddhibhagya4924 9 місяців тому +5

    I got 6 for writing but 9 for reading, 8.5 listening, 7 speaking overall 7.5. I should thanks Cris. I am never good at expressing myself and this must be my downfall and I know how much I try this will let me down. I know all the tips and tricks. I studied myself. I watched lot of your videos. I really feel unhappy. I need 7 from each.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  9 місяців тому +1

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      @sadiahsan5902 5 місяців тому +1

      How did you get so good at reading

  • @HieuMinh-io5ev
    @HieuMinh-io5ev 3 місяці тому

    It is a great lesson. But is it OK if I only discuss views in main body parts and give my personal opinion in conclusion?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  3 місяці тому

      Hi there, please refer to this article on our website 'IELTS Advantage - IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. We also have a range of paid and free courses to help you in Writing. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!

  • @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld
    @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld Рік тому

    Hello, Chris.
    I wish you discussed different types of ielts writing task 2 questions and how to deal with them in one video.🙏

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      @Ieltsadvantage  Рік тому +1

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    • @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld
      @SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld Рік тому

      @@Ieltsadvantage By the way, I have already watched almost all of them.They are great and really helpful 👍
      TNX

  • @queen_lizzy4598
    @queen_lizzy4598 2 роки тому

    Hello Chris, I'm just joining you today, pls I need to build my writing for the easy. I will be glad to get a reply. My exam is next month pls help me out. Thanks

    • @Ieltsadvantage
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  • @dorothyphiri1327
    @dorothyphiri1327 Рік тому

    This is simple and straight forward, but is it alright to conclude every paragraph e.g putting a conclusion on introduction and the rest of the paragraphs?

  • @MarufR27
    @MarufR27 3 місяці тому

    Hello,do i have to maintain the sequence of main body paragraph? Like i have to write the one which i agree later???

  • @sinijacob2573
    @sinijacob2573 Рік тому

    What's the need of furnishing a 'why' reason in the introduction ,as u did in the second sentence , cos the reasons are to be mentioned in the body paragrahs..

  • @al_aminhussainmohammed3537
    @al_aminhussainmohammed3537 Рік тому

    Could you please make a sample answer of this question??

  • @homayounkhan7035
    @homayounkhan7035 2 роки тому +1

    Sir it is different from the structure that you have provided on your website.
    Can you write an introduction for the following topic your website. Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.

    • @popoolaayotunde9143
      @popoolaayotunde9143 Рік тому

      Let me attempt to answer your question. The introduction for your above Essay will look something like
      "While some people think that the introduction of computer into our educational system has negative effects, I agree with those who believe that technology has more positve impact as it provides the student with more information and facility in the same place and at the same time"

    • @popoolaayotunde9143
      @popoolaayotunde9143 Рік тому

      Pls Chris, kindly critic the introduction I wrote here

  • @farfromaverage2712
    @farfromaverage2712 2 роки тому

    Chris, I have one question for you. In the MBP 2, after writing view 1, explanation, example and you said that we should write ''I agree with this view''.
    So do we just need to write just 1 sentence ''i agree with this view'' to end the MBP 2 or the sentence ''I agree with this view'' means that we need to explain more? Since you don not have a sample essay, I do not really understand that.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Essay Lesson'. I'm sure it can help answer your question. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

    • @farfromaverage2712
      @farfromaverage2712 2 роки тому

      @@Ieltsadvantage thank you Chris!

  • @SharingwithCaring
    @SharingwithCaring 2 роки тому

    Is it compulsory to write about the view 2 in the beginning?

  • @StephenKing-wb2ve
    @StephenKing-wb2ve 8 місяців тому

    Hi Chris. I’ve noticed a lot of people only talk about benefits of “having the right to free speech”, they don’t write what makes some people believe that way. Is this wrong?

  • @anikahmed1354
    @anikahmed1354 2 роки тому +1

    Sir, could you give me a sample of this discussion essay following this instruction?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

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  • @wajidkhansu-0867
    @wajidkhansu-0867 Рік тому

    Plz make a new video on discussion essay I don't understand

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    @idahosaprovidence 2 роки тому

    Hi Chris, your lecture has been helpful but I can't access the website anymore, I keep getting access denied.

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  • @miss_anonymous16
    @miss_anonymous16 2 роки тому

    Hi i just have one doubt, lets say i have the following task -
    "The idea of having a single career has become an old fashioned one. Multiple careers are in demand because of increasing growth opportunities and higher earning prospects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.". Here, it looks like it's a discuss and give your opinion type question. But, it feels like the second sentence is like giving the back up or answering the sentence 1. Can you help me understand this. As at this point it looks somewhat confusing like what are we supposed to do here.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi Bhumika, you should check this article on our website titled 'Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Lesson - IELTS Advantage'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @Bek571Bek
    @Bek571Bek Рік тому

    Hi Chris Pell, I've got a question. Can I start the second body paragraph with my view in discussion essay?

  • @RachanaShrestha32
    @RachanaShrestha32 6 місяців тому

    In introduction part we were supposed to write paraphrase statement and thesis statement right instead of giving both views? If I am wrong please correct me...

  • @MahiModi-ru3yd
    @MahiModi-ru3yd 9 місяців тому

    Hey chris! I would like to ask about my problme which I have been suffered for a month.
    If we do not know a one word meaning in writing ,so can we ask to the inspection's? Please let me know about it beacuse I am going to book my exam in up coming month.
    And I also try to explain a question which makes me confused.
    1) Many people feel that media covrage has significently biased today.
    I do not about biased and my whole essay has gone irrelevant.could you please help me!!!

  • @queenimogu4413
    @queenimogu4413 2 роки тому

    Pls Chris, I need to know how to get ideas in writing

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, you'll find our complete guide to generating ideas on our website. Simply look for the article 'How to Think of Ideas for Writing Task 2'. If you need further help, please don't hesitate to reach out to us.

  • @afastudy3316
    @afastudy3316 2 роки тому +1

    hi Chris) first of all thank you for you videos they really help. but i cant join ielts advatage web site, it is not allowed in my location so access is denied 😭 but i want to give some ques to clarify one thing. i always been given suggestion to write 2 ideas for MBP each: 2 ideas with supportive statement and example to MBP1 and the same to MBP2. but you always in your videos say one idea with good explanation in enough for one MBP. so i am confused what guidance and tactic i should follow to get 7< in ielts writing?
    and if there anyone who got 7-9 in writing please share your experience.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому +1

      Hi there, it's unfortunate that our website is no longer accessible in your location. Our VIP course is hosted on a different platform that can be accessed from anywhere in the world so you can get the 24/7 support that you need. In the meantime, feel free to browse this channel for some helpful materials or email us anytime.

  • @prodigyfreeman3935
    @prodigyfreeman3935 2 роки тому

    If I'm restating my opinions from intro back in conclusion, there seems to be a high chance of re-stating the same sentence in different manner(paraphrasing the line), will this effect my score? As of now, I know that restating same opinion twice or thrice results in in negative/ poor marking? TIA

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, you can refer to this article 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures' in our website. I'm sure it will help you a lot. If you have further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS test, please email us anytime and we'll be happy to help.

  • @syedarabia2769
    @syedarabia2769 Рік тому

    Hey Chris,
    I'm learning a lot from your lessons, thank you so much for creating authentic content for free.
    Can you please refer to a sample of 'discuss both the views' essay.

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  Рік тому

      Hi there, I'm glad you find it helpful.
      Regarding the 'Discuss Both Views' essay, you should refer to the article 'IELTS Advantage - Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Lesson' on our website. If you have further questions or need our team's help to prepare for your IELTS test, please reach out to us.

  • @anikahmed1354
    @anikahmed1354 2 роки тому

    Could you please tell me the structure if I agree with view 2?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, please visit our website to learn more about strategies and structures. If you need further help, send us an email and we will be happy to assist.

  • @michaelgill665
    @michaelgill665 2 роки тому

    Yes sir , i want to know about how to build a essay please help me .
    I'm Michael gill from India .

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, you should try our 5-Day Challenge Course on our website. I'm sure it can help you. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @oshoanu-or5uc
    @oshoanu-or5uc 2 місяці тому

    Pls, are you now saying we are to discuss view 2 before discussing view 1 and pls, y not view 1 first, so that we won’t get stucked on along the line…

    • @kave012
      @kave012 2 місяці тому

      Not like that. He's saying,
      First, talk about the view you DON'T support.
      Then, talk about the view you support and finish the paragraph saying you support this view.
      This is to improve the coherence, logical organisation of your essay.

    • @oshoanu-or5uc
      @oshoanu-or5uc 2 місяці тому

      @@kave012 ok, thanks…

  • @selintamsoz5021
    @selintamsoz5021 Рік тому +1

    Hi, Chris! On your website, it is written that we should explain why we disagree and why we agree with viewpoints. But you said in your video that we should write just why we agree with the viewpoint that we defend. Could you please clarify?

  • @leah2003
    @leah2003 Рік тому

    Hey. Is it necessary to write main body para 3 for opinion? I have seen idp suggesting 3 body paras in total for discussion essay

  • @yassminedabagh8082
    @yassminedabagh8082 11 місяців тому +1

    The problem is that 40 minutes it's not enough...

  • @saritasuman7373
    @saritasuman7373 2 роки тому

    Sir i wrote 2 paragraph for 1st view and 3rd paragraph for 2nd opinion and in conclusion I wrote my opinion. Is it right?

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Essay Lesson'. I'm sure it can help you. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @NatsuDragneel-g1l
    @NatsuDragneel-g1l 4 місяці тому

    Can't we agree on both views

  • @Bisnuhorra
    @Bisnuhorra 5 місяців тому

    I love crish

  • @ravpannu1274
    @ravpannu1274 2 роки тому +2

    🥰

  • @RNRezamohammadi
    @RNRezamohammadi Рік тому

    📖✅

  • @herodescorporan3126
    @herodescorporan3126 9 місяців тому

    I don't know as is program and student s import for my there where

  • @Travel_photography327
    @Travel_photography327 2 роки тому

    Is okay to have 5 paragraphs because I could see it's coming 5 para

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi Sonam, please watch this video: ua-cam.com/video/yvt8RzGNhBc/v-deo.html. I'm sure you will find it helpful. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @huongcao4829
    @huongcao4829 2 роки тому

    Isnt open every day

  • @dilaniannaththurai5207
    @dilaniannaththurai5207 8 місяців тому

    How many paragraph write to this essay? 4 or 5 ?

  • @manjeetror9273
    @manjeetror9273 2 роки тому

    😘❤️🙏

  • @elisa826
    @elisa826 2 роки тому

    Greetings.
    I am confused about the agree/disagree when I want to partially agree or give a balanced opinion.
    I understand that I need to state both sides when I write this. But should I still emphasize on one side?
    For example
    Thesis: "Although, I think ~~(disagree), I fundementally believe that ~~(agree)" So here, I emphasized that I agree but also stated other side.
    Body 1 : disagree and why
    Body 2 : agree and why
    Conclusion: "In conclusion, although ~~(disagree), I am in favour of ~~(agree)" Here again, I emphasized on the agreement while I also mentioned the other side.
    Is this a correct way to write? Or can I just write the partially agree essay without emphasizing on one side? (I need band 7+)
    Has a positive/negative development essay to be written in the same way as the agree/disagree essay like above?
    Thank you!

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, please visit our website to learn more about strategies and structures. If you need further help, send us an email and we will be happy to assist.

  • @tarikhasyraf5059
    @tarikhasyraf5059 2 роки тому +1

    I have a question on the opinion essay that states, " xxx should limit A and do B instead."
    Is it okay if my opinion is about (I agree with the statement, let's say) :
    1. what happens if we do not limit A
    2. The benefit of doing B
    Or the specific question is addressed to the benefit of B, so I should write two benefits of B?
    Thank you

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

      Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Agree or Disagree Writing Lesson with a Sample Answer'. I'm sure it can help answer your question. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @humanawsin-eq2di
    @humanawsin-eq2di Рік тому

    Confusing

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  Рік тому

      Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.

  • @appleeye1356
    @appleeye1356 10 місяців тому

    Very complicated...

  • @SantoshSharma-ye8lz
    @SantoshSharma-ye8lz 2 роки тому +1

    Greatings from India Chris. I have booked date for 26 FEB but i am getting only 20 and even low in reading i only have 6 days should i go for it or postpond the date. PLEASE HELP me out🙏

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому

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  • @mobinm3373
    @mobinm3373 2 місяці тому

    Stop repeat vip Stu 😕

  • @oanafelicio7764
    @oanafelicio7764 6 місяців тому +2

    It isn't one of your best videos, not very clear once you started writing, I am a fan of your channel thank you

    • @ShavkatMirzayev-zi5vz
      @ShavkatMirzayev-zi5vz 3 місяці тому

      Take your sour ass somewhere else.Who are you to judge ?
      I got 8 from writing watching this video.

  • @gulnarmammadzada4955
    @gulnarmammadzada4955 5 місяців тому

    don't write with that pen pleaseeee.the sound distracts and irritates soo muchh(((

  • @stanpoatan
    @stanpoatan Рік тому

    Hey chris, is it compulsory or very much necessary to state and explain out points in the INTRO part? Like for adv/disad mention the ad disav in intro, rather than just writing This essay will …. Merits and demerits??

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  Рік тому

      Hi there, this article will help answer your question 'IELTS Advantage- IELTS Writing Task 2: How To Write an Effective Introduction'. If you have further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please feel free contact us.

  • @bhargavimangalagiri4894
    @bhargavimangalagiri4894 5 місяців тому

    thank you

  • @nimmy97
    @nimmy97 2 роки тому

    Thanks a lot

    • @Ieltsadvantage
      @Ieltsadvantage  2 роки тому +1

      You're welcome! If you have any questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.