"Final Night" | Creepypasta Storytime
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- Опубліковано 8 кві 2024
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I love a good redemption story.
Peytonmac
I like redemption arcs especially for reformed villains in my favorite movies shows and videogames.
Now that the screaming in my basement has momentarily subsided and the thing in the corner has moved to the other corner I can enjoy this spooky tail from our eldritch storyteller
@jacobdavis3359 its "tale" lol "spooky 'tail' "makes me think of someone having a spooky booty call 😂
But I mean maybe you can have both- there is that thing in the corner, maybe it wants to be screaming like the thing in the basement lmao
Excellent 🤣
MrCreepyPasta is human. Now Viidith22 has something eldritch possessing him...
Thing In the corner here, this story was great
Cringe
This should be a series. Great story and narration.
Would love this to be a series, yes!
Absolutely would love it!
I just wrote that in the comment section! 👍✔️
Thanks for the brilliant feedback. I set off writing this as a cathartic one off, but Hagar now lives in my head rent free and he fancies a sequal too!
yas this woukd be awesome as a series
I regularly listen to multiple creepypasta narrators. Have done so for over a decade. This is one of the best stories I’ve heard in quite awhile. Kudos to the author, John Taylor. Top notch narration as always by MrCreepypasta.
Thanks for the support, really appreciated.
@@sirgenttaylor13 what a lovely tale you wrote. I believe that no one is past the point of returning to Source and redeeming themselves.🙏🏼💜
@@cathrinewhite7629 thanks for your feedback, you're very kind. Redemption is a fascinating concept in its own right, but especially in a supernatural story. Glad you enjoyed it
THANK YOU FOR THAT I WAS LOOKING FOR A COMMENT WITH THE AUTHOR
@@ShatteredSong Thanks for your engagement and comments, glad you enjoyed it.
Great story. I hope we get more adventures from demon Hagar.
Loved this one. Always loved the idea of risen demons as opposed to fallen angels.
Thank you for the kind words, glad you liked it.
@@sirgenttaylor13
I like that too besides if not all demons are evil then not all angels are good.
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 thanks for listening. Agreed, it's an exploration of free will in a deterministic system. Glad you enjoyed it.
@@sirgenttaylor13
Yeah I agree with you and you're welcome
I'd never considered it but I love it too now--
This story just hit my favorite one ever. Please more about Hager.
Hi, author here.
Thank you so much for the feedback.
It means more than you imagine !
Listen to Danny's Story by Chilling Tales
Bloody awesome story dude. Very much hoping there are many more chapters to come. Written with brilliance and in so many genres . Narrated like a bos and written with great style Cheers guys, Lee
This is a friend of mine I helped edit the story over a few beers. He is a great writer.
Thank you so much for the words of support, more stories to follow.
I love the dichotomy of the spirit stories. Sooo hope there's a chapter 2
Very well written and narrated. 10/10
I wasn't ready! Why am I crying? I love this so much❤
Hi, author here.
Sorry to be the cause of tears, I'm sending kind thoughts of a tissue!
@@sirgenttaylor13 No need to be sorry! These days, any emotions are positive.
Best story this year so far!!
Thank you so much , I'm humbled.
Amazing story!
DEMON HAGAR needs a series on his own!
FINALY Episode: ARCHANGEL HAGAR!
You get this! .. But think bigger than Archangel
As I sit here on this Tuesday night, I will continue my campaign to hear the narrative of the final two books of the 2015 Jeff The Killer series!
History
Oh I like Jeff
I like this premise. There was something similar i read in a short story maybe 30 years ago about a shapeshifter cop hunting down another shapeshifting serial killer and i always wanted more of that idea explored and this was perfect. Id love to hear more of this played out.
Author:
Hey there, thanks for your feedback , it means a lot, glad you enjoyed it!
this would make a great series, reformed demon trying to save souls from other demons and do as much good as he can and maybe be allowed to join the cop when hes ready to go to heaven, id like that idk if other ppl would but id bet yes
That's exactly what i was going for. But I have a second darker deeper layer of story running through sequels as well. Think of this as an appetiser. 😅
Love this premise. Hope it's a series.
Author:
Me too!
... Thanks for liking
Super excited for this one!! Will we get any installments of City of Midnight or Bonesaw Vic soon?? Those are my favorites by you!
I really liked this story! I think it'd be a great start to a series. So many different options and ideas to go with. The Author really nailed the feel of it. John Taylor, if you're reading this. please give us more of this!
Author:
Thank you for your generous words. I'm overwhelmed by so much support here for a sequel or serialisation, I have ideas for a much larger story arc for Hager... but in the meantime I'm working on another short for the chanel...
Very different, Very dark.
@@sirgenttaylor13 Cannot wait!!!
@@sirgenttaylor13
Yeah if Angels can do whatever and remain in the sky? The rules are shades of gray when you don't do as you say when you make the Wretched suffer just to kill them again.
@@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 I think Hagar would fall on the side of Kant
@@sirgenttaylor13
Yeah I like All Dogs Go To Heaven and Hazbin Hotel.
Amazing story
I can totally see this happening in The Creepypasta Series.
Awesome story and fantastic narration. I hope there are more of these to come. I love the idea of a demon doing good. Thank you for your hard work.
Thank you
This was such an amazing story. Very awesome. Please more!!
Good story man
I truly wish you and your family prosperity and peace
I absolutely love your narration and stories. So glad you're back!!!! You are my favorite!
Great story!
More of this please❤❤
Mr creepy pasta your the best look forward to your stories bro. I listened to almost all your library on UA-cam over a 3 day strait bing
Would love to hear more of Hagar.
Gosh that was AWESOME. Really hoping this will become a series!!!
Author:
Hey thanks so much for your comments, glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on something new at the moment (a bit darker),but I don't think this is the last you'll hear of Hagar.😉
@@sirgenttaylor13 Omg thank you so much for replying and yesssss how exciting! You have a real talent!!
Fantastic story and equally fantastic narration.
Author:
Hey there, thank you for the great feedback . Glad you enjoyed it!
Awesome story!! Loved it!! Hope there’s more!!
This is so good, compared to everything I've listened to in a while holy shit.
Yeah I most definitely didn't see a new countdown in my future! Can't wait... But I'll still be late due to scatterbrain...
God I love a good redemption story this one slapped mcp. Keep it up!
loved this story
Thank you for the upload as always ❤
Finally i can fall asleep again miss your videos, had a hard time sleeping for a while now with you gone. Never stop bro ❤
Great read, MCP.
This story gives me the same vibe as 'Grey Michael', by Micah Edwards. Excellent choice. Excellent performance.
Hell yeah!!!❤
Oh hell yeah!
Brilliant.
Thank you MrCreepypasta for another awesome pasta. Excellent story and narration as always, and props to the author. Definitely a good one. Thank you for making my morning. 🖤🖤🖤🖤
Glad your back MCP but i need a new long story from u this was a pretty good one thanks man
This was fantastic! I really hope we get another installment of this story!
Hello there, I'm the writer of Final Night, thank you so much for your support.
Just maybe... Hagar will turn up again someday.
@@sirgenttaylor13 here's hoping!
This was an amazing story! Even though its on the shorter side there was a good amount of world building and left it open for possible continustion. Would make w great series! Otherwise a captivating one off, shoutout to the author.
Hey there , thanks so much for your comments. More stories on the horizon!
Charlie would be proud.
Great story and narration!
Strange
I love Hazbin Hotel and Charlie is my favorite character along with Vaggie and Angel Dust.
If we get a Creepypasta Animated Series the animation style should look like Hazbin Hotel with Jeff and Smile as the main protagonists and their girlfriends Jane and her white german shepherd pup and best friend Princess as the deuteragonists and Laughing Jack as their best friend and the characters should have adaptational heroism while Zalgo has adaptational villainy and a foil to Jeff and his husky pup and best friend Smile there should be songs for the characters character development and a story driven plot too.
This is yet another story which has the potential to be further developed into a serial.
Your story telling technique was impeccable as always. 😊
Author:
Hey thanks for your awesome feedback and support. Stay tuned for more stories, and maybe one day a Hagar serialisation.
Hope this is the beginning of a series
Great story Mr C
wow did not see this coming at all! Great narration and great story! Cant ask for more than that!
Hi there, I'm John Taylor, the writer behind Final Night. Thank you so much for your support, glad you enjoyed the twists and symmetry. I'm working on a new story already.
@sirgenttaylor13 hell yeah! Glad to hear that! Will be looking forward to it!
this is so cool
a demon trying to be good is always interesting
Excellent!!
Ooo i love this , free will!
Of course free will... we don't have a choice😂
Hey glad you enjoyed it
Series incoming? We can hope.
Awesome story!!❤
I don’t think Hagar will actually go next time, but I doubt he minds.
Dope story awesome narration the world needs more good guy demons
Thanks for your support, I enjoyed writing this one.
Excellent!!!
"... My father Sammy Hagar-"
_Shadow Monster starts roaring_
"... do you mind?"
This one is pretty funny.
You gotta keep those shadows in their place 😂
Good one thanks
Great twist!
i hope whoever made this keep it going i love this story
Author: Hi there, thank you for your kind comment it keeps me going.
I have a new story hopefully dropping soon, look out for "Dark Harbor" it's horrible 😂
Dude, I've been listening to you for 12 years, and today the holder series was on my mind. Would you ever consider going back to it?
Good story
Very very good...❤
I love ❤this
I do hope this becomes a series!!
Hagar agrees
Neato!
You’re the MF’ing GOAT bro!
Love me some new hazbin hotel lore kek
Sheeplorde
I LOVE Hazbin Hotel and Creepypasta and we need a Creepypasta Animated Series with the animation style looking like Hazbin Hotel with Jeff Smile and their girlfriends Jane and Princess as the lead roles with Jeff and Smile as the main protagonists and Jane and Princess as the deuteragonists and Laughing Jack as their best friends The Creepypasta Characters having adaptational heroism while Zalgo has adaptational villainy and is a foil to Jeff and Smile and the characters' backstories are changed and their personalities are changed too.
Jeff and Smile would the optimistic main protagonists while Jane and Princess would be the gruff goth girl and dog who are in love with Jeff and Smile and Jeff and Jane and Smile and Princess are already boyfriend and girlfriend and dog boyfriend and dog girlfriend in the series.
I like Jeff x Jane and Smile x Princess and Slenderman is the adoptive father of Jeff Smile Jane Princess LJ and their friends.
I can totally see Zalgo voiced by Alex Brightman and Slenderman's voiced by Jeremy Jordan.
For some reason i got visions of the final night at hazbin hotel with this intro 😅
Hello listeners, I'm John Taylor; new writer to the channel & the author of
Final Night
Just blown away by your feedback and comments so far.
Shout out to Dale Drake for his support and MrCreepyPasta for his awesome narration.
* Look out for my next original story
"Dark Harbor"
I loved the story. I only caught maybe one possible inconsistency. When Hagar says everyone thinks Hell is down, but he says everyone can rise, and mentions ascending from hell. I am probably reading into it too much, would one have to ascend from hell to a gateway that would be up from earth? Like hell is overlapped with earth and just on a different plane of existence? Regardless, I can't wait to hear more stories! Loved this one! Keep up the great writing.
As Hagar changes to demon form, youll notice how dimensions/geometry shifts. In 3 dimensions you're not wrong...well not from all the way down here in the 4th 😂
Glad you enjoyed it
It makes such a good change to have a demon story that gives the usual villains free will and the hope of redemption.
Huh, I hope there's more from this series
Sweet, demon cop...
Let's go Mr C
"Everyday minimum income worker unphased by eldritch bullshit" and it's many derivatives has got to be the most satisfying subversion of this genre.
Oh....OH WOW that is good.
Author: Hey thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed Hagar's story... your right,
He ain't got time for that!
WOW.
Thumbnail Image- A blue demon come to participate in the Final Night.
Story wasn't what I expected at all. It was pretty good.
Thank you : see my avatar for Hagar in full demon mode 😂
Quite creepy
Interesting...
Symbiote.
Bam
Most angels don't even practice what they preach, so are demons really evil... or misunderstood?
-Tucker
❤
You did the infected town case files but not the rest of the whole story, would you ?
Where's the original story from? I really want to read it.
Author: Hi there I wrote this as my debut for the channel, hope you enjoyed it. More original story's coming soon.
2.8 liter..
What's the music and animation at the being of the premiere?
🖤👍
Any other parts released?
Author:
This is my first ever story to drop, I would love the opportunity to do more here
He got punked 💀
Sammy Hagar? Really...🤣
I just couldn't get away with Diamond David Lee Roth 😂
beans
Whoop Whoop
✌🏻🐵✌🏻
Most of them are finally seeing the math. I could have sworn I sat down. I couldn’t move. I got up and walked over to her. I left my mom. She looked at me like sweety what do you like? I gasped. I caught my breath… I couldn’t see. A dragon smell came out of the ground. I made a mistake. I shkt…. I just shot my eyes to the ground. I’m not sure it’s who I remember. His beard was Thic…. I can’t breathe. My eyes focus on that women in front of me. I blink rapidly. Fuck. To so fast. I’m sinking. I know what the witch is real.
Oh my lord. I WANT MORE OF HAGAR
AUTHOR: Hey there love your enthusiasm, glad you liked this . Look out for my new original story " Dark Harbour" coming soon. There may be another Hagar sometime after that.
It was a neat story until the cop became a demon himself. It got kinda bleh after that.
First 😊
This is such a great scary story! Check out the one I just posted!