How To Write An Essay: Evidence and Citation
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I really hope that this series has been a helpful tool for anyone who wants some help improving their essays. I'm so glad I got the chance to make it and thank you to everyone who supported this on my channel!
Ariel Bissett More power to you, you Nietzsche's Superman! :)
Thanks for putting this all together, it really helps to remember the easily forgotten basics of argumentation! It also works for other assignments; I’m currently preparing my graduation oral presentation and by watching this I can check my arguments etc.
I'm just still confused on how to properly cite a sentence used as supportive evidence I know that it starts with , "put cited sentence here" but how do I go about citing the sentence from the used article after inputting the cited sentence?
it's pretty nice :)
Oh my god Ariel it really really has, I had absolutely no idea how to write an essay but I am so confident I can do it now !
I’ll I really dislike anything that deals with writing, I wish I could only focus on math and science
Agree
@@littleg3827 Same
omg go from studying for the MCAT for 6 months to having to write a 12-15 page research paper...i dont want to write i want to do experiements!!
wish I could like this 100 times
Dude legit same I hate English and history with a passion, well actually I only hate the reading and analyzing portion of history I actually really enjoy the content but math and chemistry are so much better imo
Seeing this video 5 years after it was first recorded - and still as relevant as ever! Awesome video, Ariel. Just starting a new university course and wanted a refresher of essay writing - this was SUPER helpful! Thank you.
I'm always struggling in writing essays because I have a ridiculous fear with it, I feel so burdened and stressed whenever I have to write an essay for school . I always worry about plagiarism, and the originality of my essays. These videos really help me a lot. Thanks, Ariel,😍 please keep making them!! Also I have a request here: can you make a video about experimental writing, if you have any ideas to share about it.. . Very much enjoy learning from you . 😉😊
hi. how are you?
Ariel, thank you so much for taking out your time to share the series 'How To Write An Essay.' On a serious note the things you cover, for example your delivery of fundamental or basic detail is very powerful. I just wanted you to know, since you've posted this series two years on it has been a life saver. Thanks again. E L.
I’m currently writing a 6-10 page research paper for my college composition 2 class. This series has been really helpful for me, especially since it’s the first big paper that I’ve had to write.😊
It would have been great if you had used examples from magazines or novels to show students how these things are actually done.
I'm so glad I found this. I'm currently taking a public relations course after not being in school for five years. This is helping so much!
You're one of my favorite UA-camrs and I'm so glad that when I was trying to study for college one of your older videos came up ❤️
Thank you so much for your informative series of videos on essay writing. I've been showing them in my ENG102 course at the college where I teach on Long Island. Your enthusiasm & clarity really break down the writing process in an attainable (& entertaining!) way. These videos are a vital resource for students to refer to when they're working independently.
*This is the best series* I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeves in a few months when you have more free time
Nkanyiso Innocent Khwane thank you!!! This is literally exactly how I feel. I can’t wait to have time to really work hard on my videos!
These are honestly so helpful. 💕
This was THE BEST! Thank you Ariel!!
This was really really helpful
Dana Kopsida I’m so glad!!!!!
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I'm writing a research paper on the future of journalism and this has been helping me not get lost while I'm writing the paper. Yay!
Thank you so much this was really helpful!
I love this new content!
Actually enjoyed the video, and I find it really helpful! Thanks :D
this is always the most challenging part of an essay for me! thanks for the advice
These are really basic rules but having just got a uni assignment back and going over it these points highlight every mistake and illustrate how the simplest things get overlooked and pull down your marks. Appreciate the video really helped.
I just finished a research paper this past weekend on Euthanasia/assisted suicide. I feel like I had great evidence and I hope I cited it all correctly. Thanks for these videos!
One minute in, and I was completetly strucked, loved this video, keep going Ariel!
can you please do a video on how to cite with the different formats and everything!!! I love this series so glad I found you on youtube!!
Great information. 👏🏾👏🏾🙌🏾🙌🏾👏🏾🙌🏾👏🏾
I LOVE THIS SERIES
This series is helping me write my capstone essay!
I'm writing an essay and its due today at 23:59 I'm watching your video now. I cant fail. Thank you for this.
ooo thank you for this video!!! that is so great you included this. I know your going for your masters and that is sooo impressive! I'm getting my associates but doubt i will continue school but it was a huge learning curve to learn college level paper quality. nearly almost done i personally won't need these tips anymore but it is so important to know this stuff!!!!
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Nice video! I like this series very much 😍 My research field is creativity and I’m currently finishing my studies in psychology. 🧠
When writing an essay, I also think you need to find an opposite side of the things you’re talking about - evidence that doesn’t support your thoughts - to broaden the view on the subject. Bring some nuance to the whole thing. 😇
I love this type of content. Personally, I get more out of them than from a book haul. Book hauls are quite annoying. I'd rather listen to a single book recommendation/honest review than watch a book haul. Or a video about essay writing for that matter :). It's the course I loved the most in college. Knowledge of how to write an essay is always useful in life. Keep up the good work!
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I was trying to write my essay but I notice how she speaks, she really loves what she's doing. I respect that.
You always upload when i have a essay to write. 😁💕
If I am allowed the time to do it, I always have my friends peer review my paper. I find that it helps me understand where different readers may find confusing!
Great video.
Ariel, I hate writing essays. Id rather do almost anything else than write an essay. With that being said, I've really enjoyed this series. The essay layout and paraprah layout really helped me with my first college essay since 2011. (I've recently gone back to school for my bachelors.) I would love to see more of these videos. Maybe what sources you use to help write good essays and to help people like me learn about writing. Also discussion on formatting like APA (I have no clue what APA is but I'm learning) I've always used MLA. I don't really know what the answer is to the viewer question but I'm enjoying these and hope they continue in some form.
HI, Ariel! As I am more a visual and kinetic learner, I would have liked if after your rule, you gave an example to demonstrate what you meant. Thanks, it still was helpful in a way.
I really wish I had this in college! I enjoyed this video! Thank you for making it. It may not have the most views, but it is no less important!
thank you, Jessica!!!
Omg u are a great teacher ❤️ appreciate the video continue to post more
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Thank you for "Atomic Ideas"
Watching from Thailand
Thank you
Very helpful lecture
Thank you so much! I asked my professor 3 times to explain this to me so that I wouldn’t get marks on my final. She never answered my question. She just kept telling me basically to figure it out (my class is a freshman class on how to properly write essays and research btw! 🤦🏻♀️)
But that you so, so, so much!!!!
Hi I love your videos thank you for them! I have a question about the citing so when do you actually put in the cite in the paragraph or till the end of your paper?
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Ariel it would be amazing that in your next video teach us how to cite correct, for example books or acdemic articles. This is the must difficult part for me, when writting an esssay
You are the FIRST PERSON in my life to get me excited to cite correctly! You are absolutely amazing. Thank God for you!
I admire your passion in sharing your expertise. But I don't know how to cite my evidence . is it similar to references ?
Really helpful😙
I wanna know. What if my body has three major idea and in my thesis statement I only conclude the one major idea in my body? I really don't know how to make a thesis statement. plssss help
Thanks
I would just like to think you this has help me study for a test thanks
Everything you've said, even in your previous videos, we're all FUNDAMENTAL in writing an essay. 😭😭 Excuse me while i wipe my nosebleed....
I've been researching for two essays thay I have to write:
1. one for my film history course on nouvelle vague
2. and one for my film theory course for which I have to choose a director and prove that his an auteur (the auteur theory)
Thank you for this video, it's been really helpful, especially for the second essay thay I have to write!! I really love your channel and the way it has been progressing throuhh the years channel.
Bookish Betsy Indeed, they are! And there are so many stuff to learn about them. Thank you very much, have a nice day 😊
do you have any advice for students who are unsure whether to take an English AP exam because they will get credit for a class that they actually want to take? I really enjoy schooling and learning but I also see the value in saving $$. I want to save the money, but not necessarily at the expense of my educational experience.
I’m writing an essay about the classical influence on the Renaissance and this has actually been very helpful! I also just finished an essay on the Black Death.
That's such an interesting topic!
Hello Good yeah it really is! I’m enjoying writing about it.
Ok I’m about to do a state assessment writing essay and this helped me
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Well, at the end she never taught how to cite.
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@@ameliaharper3762 ur a legend amelia harper, thanks
I have a question. Do we need to cite when we use part of the plot of the novel itself (for example, the page number, or the chapter number)? Btw... a very useful video. I can ace at my thesis writing now.
Cite every time you use a quotation (even if you have already cited the same book) so that anyone reading your essay can look up the quotation! You don't need to cite the book if you're just explaining the plot or discussing the story, only when you are using a quotation from the book. :)
Really nice content, I like it.
I learned more from you than from my college professor
thanks
I've been working on a group essay for for one of the required classes for my major (sociology) and it's been really bothering me that none of the people that are in my group either cite properly or interpret the research that they find. Like they just dump random quotes from their research with no pretext and then give it no context. I feel like it may be overly passive aggressive of me to send them your video series, but yes this is very useful and very easy to digest all of the information
Also the paper is about the effect of gender roles and gender performance in film and television on public opinions surrounding marginalized people (ie POC, LGBTQ folks, etc.)
Hi Ariel, where can i find How to construct an paragraph? God bless
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Yeah, but how would you put it into quotations? Do you have any examples?
Citation is sooo important for me in every single one of my papers- I always have to teach my group partners on how to properly quote everything 😂
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teach me lol
I'm currently writing an essay on Thomas Hobbes, a 15th century English philosopher
You saved me 😭
video on how to properly cite!!
I mean you didnt really tell us how to cite it but otherwise it was helpful
Request no 2:
Divide your channel into 2 parts. One for these kinds of videos and other for real Arriel Bisset... That we know for years.
Very Informative videos though... Love from Asia 😘😘😘
I have a group assignment and I'm working my ass off by myself y'all.
Wow never been this early.
Amrita
This may be very uhhh like open minded I guess but if you watch this video again and think about what I’m about to say finding your purpose is literally summed up in this one video. Okay, so I haven’t found my purpose yet nor the job I want but I just had a weird thought.
She talks about how we have to find evidence from other people’s ideas and mix it in your idea. In a real life example this helps you find your own motivation and what you love. This won’t be the easiest thing but getting out of your bubble and exploring and working new jobs, talking to people who love there job and getting to know what makes them love it will help u gather information. Now after years of exploring, your mind will start to develop things you hate and love and then things will just click.
Then she talks about backing up our point. If what u find is interesting but it doesn’t fit u don’t rush it (drop it in randomly) and don’t go for that random point with just assuming it’s the one. Test out all your choices and find the things you do take interest in and keep it in mind for your dream job.
After she talks about introducing relevant evidence. Explain why your evidence is important and never assume anything and find out why the evidence is important. In a real life situation I’m trying to say is to think about why you love this job or what your purpose was in the beginning. Remember why this is for you and if it isn’t then adjust and change your thesis statement/ life decisions just a tad bit.
Lastly the citation part is basically what you become. If you are happy and if you are at least in a better place then you definitely made the right step forward.
Btw this is just a huge rant and it just popped in my mind. It might and probably will not make sense but if this is at all any help, your welcome.
I'm writing a research paper about constellations right now actually.
Athena's Bibliotheca that sounds so beautiful 😭✨✨✨
I enjoy learning about them. The teacher also gave us mostly free choice on what to write the paper on. I am just typing everything out now. I hope the paper is beautiful. :)
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Great inputs,but I wish there were actual visual examples.
lemme ask you this, are you Canadian?
No visual examples?
bru I forgot how to elaborate so I watch this
I'm currently researching and writing about marriage in the 21st century!
FASCINATING. There must be so many cool statistics available!
Can someone help me with my essay
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Uuughhh but how do I cite!!!????? I don’t even know what that word means. What’s it supposed to look like when I cite 😩
Ariel bouta make me act up. 🥴
This was not in my subscription box, then i saw your instagram story, then came back to my subscriptions a day later and its there :/
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Came here after your rant on Instastories to get more views 🙋🏻♀️
am discussed in many ways I just want to do music i hate school
Readings
Anyone else here for their English lab task?
pretty librarian
(I'm sorry that comment wasn't in MLA format btw)
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it is a very informative video however you didn't tell the main thing how to properly cite.
Hi can you help me how to speak english plze 😊😊
Noice
It’s like we have to write for dumb people 😭
To save you time. She didn't teach us exactly how to cite, she just talked about how to write your paragraphs, then goes on to talk about Square space in the beginning AND end of the video...
The ONLY reason.....is to get a passing grade....
False, from A to Z - the essayist NEVER uses evidence; and NEVER tries to convince!
Here I'm talking about the true essay (as invented by Seneca, Bacon, etc.) - NOT the composition writing in school, high school, university, etc.
These points are very generic. I cant find anything that actually gives an illustration of how to do it properly