2020 UPDATE: Hey guys! I thought I would leave this comment reflecting a bit on this video. In hindsight, I feel this video was quite poorly researched and I got a few things about these characters wrong, which I have been notified of, though getting definitive and solid information about these characters can be tricky. Still, I believe I could have researched things a bit better. I also feel I come across as a little pretentious and elitist in the video, which is unfortunate, but what can ya do, you live and you learn. Please note that if you have another opinion on the stories or characters mentioned, that’s totally cool, please don’t forget that! Also, to repeat it, having a character be overpowered does NOT mean it is a bad character! For example, I claim that the character of Sally most likely kills people, though some commenters have suggested that the character does not in fact kill people but simply haunts them, and that she can’t actually summon evil spirits. I have heard conflicting reports on this subject, so I am unsure which is true, but I thought it was still worth acknowledging. According to some commenters, the reason why Laughing Jack is so powerful is due to him being an imaginary friend, which would give him a reason for having his powers. That's honestly fair enough! With this video, I simply went off of the information I got of the character from his original story, not his origin story, hence why I was confused as to why the character was so powerful. Some have also mentioned that in the story of Happy Appy, the clay apple character may not be the one doing the killing, but actually, the man behind the show, Freddrick Gorgote is, which makes more sense... so hey, there’s that acknowledged as well. It was lazy and stupid of me not to go back and fact-check the story to see if my points in this video made sense, which is something I won't do again. For another example, I also originally claimed in this video that in the “original” Jeff the Killer story, Jeff was 13. However, as I have been told, the story I referred to as the “original” was actually not the first Jeff the Killer story out there, but simply the one that became super popular back in the day and which a lot of people based their interpretation of the character on. The ACTUAL original Jeff the Killer story was written before the popularized version, and this original story was written by an author known as Sesseur and in that story, Jeff isn’t 13. Another thing I would like to mention which I consider a mistake in hindsight is my tangent on the Jeff the Killer spinoff I mention at 17:23 called Go to Sleep - “Jeff the Killer vs Jane the Killer”, narrated by MrCreepyPasta. While making this video, I treated the story as a fully legitimate interpretation of the character as a whole and went on to make a few blatantly wrong statements. I took this random fan-made spin-off story as a basis for judging the entire character and his fanbase as a whole and this was wrong and also unfair; a simple spin-off story written by fans cannot define a character and I should not have taken a fan-written spin-off story as a complete canon interpretation of the character, which a few commenters have also pointed out to me. To minimize the spread of misinformation I have therefore decided to go back and remove that specific section of the video around 17:30, claiming the events of the spin-off story as fact and canon and that in the “original” story, Jeff was 13 when this was wrong information, so that people do not get mislead in the future. Finally, I decided to switch thumbnails to Jeff the fish because I think it'd be a whole lot funnier. Hopefully this comment clears a few things up! I hope that is understandable and I wish you all a good day, and once again, if you enjoy these stories or characters that is totally okay! Have fun with the stories you enjoy. Thank you for reading!
It is awesome to see that you are going back and realizing the faults of the past! I'm happy that I got the notification from your reply to my comment as it really shows how willing you are to grow and improve! You're content is really awesome and great binge material! and in your words: "Keep writing, Keep improving" Have an awesome day, my dude!
Awkward Animations Thank you so, so much for the kind words! Your initial comment really motivated me to go back and correct the things I got wrong, so it was again much appreciated. Thank you!
That’s alright! It’s awesome that you can reflect on your past work, and that you realize what you could’ve done better. It shows how much you’ve grown and matured. Keep up the good work! 😁
@@HoodoHoodlumsRevenge I would like to say I don't blame you for this things. And also, having an explanation for the powers of a character doesn't mean they are overpowered. It simply is an explanation for their overpowerement.
Can we all just take a moment to realise that clockwork shoved a clock in her eye for the purpose of: Having a ‘edgy’ look Having a catch fraise Having a name None of the reasons for shoving a clock in her eye are to do with her story which is mainly why creepy pastas look the way they do. No. Purpose
Happy Appy can be killed by a rock... TRY IT! No, literally... In the "final episode" he dies. BECAUSE A KID THREW A ROCK AT HIS VAN AND... I can't write it without laughing in real life... HE CRASHES HIS FUCKING VAN AND HE DIES.
Slenderman can grow tentacles from his body. He can stretch his arms to inhuman lenghts. He can manipulate space and time electronics and much more. He has existed since the dawn of man. He can't be killed or harmed. He can teleport left and right. He can drive people insane and turn them into his manservants. But can he see why kids love the taste of Cinnamon Toast Crunch?
So glad Zalgo got props. Unlike the edgefests of Jeff and Clockwork, Zalgo is a beautiful modern take on dark folklore and lovecraftian horror, complete with over-the-top rules and descriptions that anyone who has studied dark mythology can appreciate. Zalgo IS, he doesn’t do or act, he doesn’t need to be scarry; the mere fact that he exists is where his horror comes from. Zalgo is the uncaring shadow that mass murderers and cultists beg for attention, though he has never asked for it; the unspeakable evil that doesn’t care about being scarry, because the suffering of mortal minds is beneath him. He is what ‘Exe’ tried so hard to be, and failed horribly.
Lovecraftian horror is the horror when you know you can't do anything about the creature which is very horrifying. Zalgo will destroy the fucking universe and reality for fuck's sake!
Sometimes, when I think characters I created are bad I just take a quick look through the creepypasta community for a confidence boost. At least I try to put logic and PERSONALITY into my characters. But then again, one of them is a Deadpool rip off and another was created out of a UA-cam comment I made once.
Plus, I remember having my Main character, (who is a wolf-dragon hybrid working as an assassin.) sent to once murder Jeff and she accomplished without fail. (Trust me, she was slightly wounded by his knife.) but keep this in mind; she's a wolf-dragon hybrid against a thirteen year old human boy. Who do you think is gonna win? Anita (that's her name.) or Jeff?
That is not the original Sally story. The story goes as so. A family moves into a house were there daughter makes a ghost friend. Sally only plays with the girl, no murder.
Vincey TheSavage He would still go blind, because the eyelids are there to protect your eyes from rain, dust etc. Even with eye drops or whatever, something could easily fall in his eyes and damage them. Also most people have the usual stuff at home. Mostly pain killers or something against a cold. Without the access to a hospital or a real doctor, we would totally go blind
Oh so when Jeff drinks a whole bottle of alcohol and is deemed cool and I can't even drink a whole bottle of hot sauce away and be deemed stupid and weird this is outrages I sentence him to death by hot sauce
This comment section is GOLD, the video is GOLD, my goodness, this is why I left the fandom. Nothing was realistic anymore and none of the characters could provide true horror. And I agree, Silent Hill is 10/10
This is precisely why I don't read creepypastas based around Slenderman, because the more you know about him, the less scary he becomes. Slenderman is entirely based on the fear of the unknown and uncanny, and so the less mysterious he becomes, the less scary he becomes too. It's a pity, 'cause I used to find Slenderman pretty scary and interesting, but he's been done to death.
Exactly. Since reading the original story, I've kept my exposure to him at a minimum, say for some spooky pics. It really makes him more scary the less you know
I've only read two good stories based on him. And they weren't fangirl/fanboy fantasies. They were about people who encountered him as he was originally meant to be; a mysterious entity.
Niobesnuppa I totally agree... he was scary when he was new and know one knew what he could do or when or how he kills people. And then the spin offs came along.... -_-
Niobesnuppa EXACTLY!!! I feel like the old, mysterious Slenderman stories like Marble Hornets were somewhat of a love letter to H.P. Lovecraft. Both Slenderman and Cthulhu were scary because they were powerful entities that the human brain can't comprehend. They weren't running around slaughtering, they killed you mentally due to sheer lack of comprehension. Now, modern interpretations ruin both.
Daniel Kempson Not all. SCP 001- 4 the broken machine SCP- 666 the daughter of darkness Nt to mention shy guy, blood plague, judgement, plague doctor, and the song of Genesis. As well as many many more.
Actually about jeff... None of those happened; him being an alcoholic, him being more superior to slender, him RAPING jane. I support the REAL origin, and the 2015 one just made him look worst.. Just my oppinion, dont hate me
It’s all good! I appreciate the original one more! It’s just with people trying to make some creepypastas over edgy and “insane” it just made me lose interest in the fandom as a whole.
Maybe Jeff gains supernatural powers from the amount of fans he has. The more people who know about him, the stronger he becomes. I dunno. I'm just mumbling to myself.
I'm pretty sure most of the time Appy was being moved like an actual puppet by Fredrick and his followers. Though I think at one point Appy jumps at the main character as he's about to drive off, but it's not like he does much damage. He actually gets run over I think.
when Sally said play with me what do you think happened? Me: The teen pulled out her tea set and asked her what color does she want her cup , blue, yellow or purple ? '_' XD
-Bloody- Sapphire The Killer AJ, seeing as jeff in the original story was human, i think its safe to assume he has a nose, i mean, we weren't told he cut his nose off or anything, or that he was noseless due to birth defects or crazy stuff like that. I am pretty sure, almost positive, that Jeff has a nose.
"Why do people still root for Jeff the killer?" Bitch you know why, he's a 13 year old white boy with a tragic backstory. The perfect waifu bait for every 11 year old straight girl anime fanartist on the internet
you know I wish who would kill him? Aku(from Samurai Jack) Jason (from friday the 13th) and Chris walker (outlast) Jeff would get easily killed by them.
Peridot I have been reading creepypasta since I was 6. For a few weeks I was stupid Jeff fan girl then I realized all the idiots that also did. It then moved to Ben, in which it also lasted a few weeks. I then took notice I was a stupid fan girl and stopped with the weird things. I'm currently 11 and my friends know of creepypasta due to me. We laugh our asses off due to how many people make it off to be only 11 year old weaboos.
Ya know, I don't even consider Jeff fangirls the worst of em; it's the Ben fangirls. Not in the way they act or their fanart(I mean, it's all still abysmal but not quite as bad as Jeff), but in the concept itself. Ben is, what? 7? 9? Having a crush on him is creepy as all hell.
I honestly like the old Slenderman better. The fans just ruined him so much. Most of his abilities tend to be non-canonical as they're from Slenderseries and not Victor-Surge. He's not scary but certainly not something you want in real life. The only scary thing about him is when two idiotic fangirls thought he's real and stabbed their classmate to near death. All of that coming from a Slenderman fan.
here are 3 things I don't get about the original Jeff the killer creepypasta 1: how the fuck is he EVEN buying the alcohol if he is 13? 2: I thought Jane and Jeff were mortal enemies not two teen parents!! 3: how the hell is he EVEN still alive for god sake if he burned of is eye lids?!?
baby strawberry These stories aren't thought out at all, the authors just typed whatever they wanted without any logic or reasoning behind it. It actually takes effort to write something good
Alright guys, real talk for a minute. Again, I honestly apologize for practically re-hashing pretty much every character in this video, as I have talked about them before. Finding new and interesting Creepypasta characters to talk about is really, really hard for me to do. In fact, finding new subjects to talk about regarding Creepypastas has proven tricky for the past few months. We'll see how the future of the channel goes. I may or may not take a new direction and/or expand the channel, but we'll see. If you have any ideas for future videos, please let me know on this comment and I'll see what I can do. Thanks for reading, and thanks for sticking with me during these crazy goofy times. Thanks again!
I think a "Top 10 Creepypasta Quotes" (A la, the quote from the end of the Russian Sleep Experiment) would be a good one where you could cover a lot of good stories and moments. You could also do Top 10 Bad Quotes (A la a certain line from a certain brother in Clockwork), also you could do more underrated creepypastas(I'd love to get some more to read) and another plot twists video would be interesting, too. Thanks, Hoodo!
AchievementAssault, are you sure thats where the police officers were trained, cause i could have sworn that they were trained in the same place stormtroopers were....
Nathan Karr He probably read Jeff the Killer and went "This is such a fucking mess of a story, the fact someone wrote this is mind boggling'. Fuck this I'm moving to Mars."
Sorry, but the story Jeff the Killer sucks ass. It's poorly written, and the plot is such a mess. Most mainstream creepy pasta sucks ass. Sorry not sorry.
@@ScourgeofShadows9869 i dont think it matters at this point, since slenderman is now so OP it's best to just tell people he has a weak spot to make him less OP.
A lot of creepypasta fans don't even know the origins of tails doll. In the comics he is a robot designed by dr.eggman to be able to not look suspicious and crawl through the vents to spy on the freedom riders. That's what that gem thing on his head is. It's a radio antenna.
............ Okay for the Brad Dourif you get so totally a like, buddy Also thanks for tearing Jeff and Laughing Jack apart. No matter how you approach these guys, their story is simply ridiculous. Was a bit sad to see the Slender here, but more since it is sorta a tragic to see a cool character fall like that. I mean, he was supposed to be an lovecraftian eldritch entity on father Dagon level, you cannot stop, because you simply drive insane before you can do anything. But just like Cthulu Pop-Culture *had* to overexplain and decipher the guy. And if it wasn't enough already we got Jeff vs Slendy. Dammit e____e
I really wish I could turn around and slap them across the face and say "It's people like you who piss me off, why would Jane submit herself in having romantic feelings for the boy who murdered her parents and burnt her alive? You'd have to be a fucking masochist to want to be with someone like that!" Plus Jane is a lesbian
Not to sound like a stereotypical fanboy but isn't slender considered a 4th or 5th dimensional being? Meaning our reality is like playdough to him? Wouldn't that in some way justify his OP nature? Correct me if I'm wrong.
Tristan Welke no slender originally was just a demon/ghost in the england woods who stole children when they played where they werent suppose to. Technically slenderman isnt even a creepypasta
+Raymond13557 Jeff can be killed by saying "You're a stupid looking fishfaced Hot Topic reject and your photoshopped picture on the internet sucks. All your stories are terrible, fuck off."
+Be N S O N Also, when he tells you to "GO TO SLEEP," just say "nah, I'd rather not." The contradiction will break him because no one has ever said no to him before because he's so ~perfect~ and ~amazing~. Poof! Gone.
My head canon for Lj is that the kid (can't remember his name) was delusional and had schizophrenia. He thought Lj was was real and eventually it drove him insane. Not very good i know but it kinda makes sense to me...
@@art-iculatelycatastrophic So what you’re suggesting is that it’s a ‘Babadook’ situation, that would at least be interesting but non of the events of the stories add up to that idea, mainly in the origin though.
@@art-iculatelycatastrophic It’s alright, it’s an interesting idea, but unfortunately in the ‘origin’ Jack is a tad too corporeal to do so. Again, it’s an interesting ideas and if the story was tweaked it would work.
Most underpowered Creepy-Pasta characters next time? Personally Jeff the Killer springs to mind. Literally just a teenage burn victim with no eyelids. You could probably defeat him with pocket sand alone.
Missing No. No eyelids = dirty fucking eyes, so yeah, blind and crying constantly. Not exactly the most intimidating thing in the world. Plus _what does he eat?_ Kid can't keep wandering around in the woods doing nothing but kill people forever. He's either gonna pass out and starve to death or start eating poisonous berries and start chronically shitting himself. Those things can give pretty vicious diarrhea, assuming you survive.
Man, I honestly can't see him at anything but dead from infection. It's such a stupid story when you take it apart. Or think about it for all of five minutes using common knowledge and critical thinking.
Missing No. Yeah. Shame it's become one of the cover stories for the whole community, considering there's actually some really competently written stuff out there.
OnEiNsAnEmOtHeRfUcKa Yeah, it's okay for people who know that story is older now, and overhyped, and that there's better stuff out there - but people just trying to get into the community are either going to be annoyed and disappointed at one of the most favourite stories, or else latch onto it (especially younger people, I've found) like some Holy Grail, keeping it famous long after it should be dead and buried. I wonder how the authors feel about their work now?
Piper Jenkins Most are. The Russian Sleep Experiment has a lot of quality and, for its release, was quite original. But you are somewhat correct. There are a lot of bad creepy pastas that are very bad and very popular. It's sad too, since it feels like many great creepypastas and creepypasta writers don't get the credit they deserve..
PolarPanda653 Ben drowned is pretty everyone just kept copying off it the rake is fucking bad ass the Russian sleep experiment was awesome that is just my opinion though 😃
PolarPanda653 Yeah youre right. Ticci Toby and Bloody Painter are the absolute best creepypastas though imo. Clockwork is way overrated; Ben and Jeff are meh. Sally is cool.
PolarPanda653 Because of fangirls who take the fun out of it. They desensitized the horror and made it into a high school love story for 8 year old and 9 year olds to fantasize about.
ClockWork would be better if her story and character development weren't total shit and if she wasn't shipped with every single creepypasta. (fr creepypasta ships are terrible)
I agree with you 100%. I am a shipper as well but when it comes to creepypastas, I just can't ship any of them. Creepypastas pretty much are meant to bring fear, not make you ship them together.
As a person with borderline personality disorder, it pisses me off there are so many creepypastas that bank on the whole 'psychotic serial killer' stereotype. It was a big hindrance in getting help in my teenage years, because I was so scared my therapists would lock me up for lacking empathy and having dark thoughts. Turns out they're a lot more common than you think, and most of the people who deal with that actually *don't* become serial killers. Go figure.
Is it bad I wanna rewrite these into good horror that made SENSE?! (*triggered*) Would it be bad if I did?(except 4 Zalgo, BEN and Slender, they aren't too bad! Also, I don't mess with classics :P)
I've actually toyed with the idea of writing a story where Clockwork is an actual clockwork automaton that somehow developed life and sapience, but without any capacity for morality. She sees humans and wishes she were one, so in a dark twist on the "become a real boy" scenario, she murders her creator, the one who built her as a machine, and begins killing people, using their flesh to cover her mechanical body, in the hopes that this will make her like other humans, despite still being a cold, heartless mechanical being inside.
No it’s not, ive thought of it myself. My friend thought of an actually good version of Clockwork that’s a pretty decent read. I’ll have to find it. I thought of an idea for improving Sonic.exe where it takes place in the Sonic universe rather than being a spooky game story. If I were to try to improve Slendy I’d make him so mysterious no one knows what he’s truly capable of. For Jeff I’d make him a long dead, but ultimately feared serial killer (that is also not 13) who would inspire tons of copycat killers, mostly of the edgy teen variety. Zalgo would remain a cosmic entity but only rarely interacts with our mortal realm. Ben would still be a ghost, Sally would have no origin story to reduce the cringe monumentally, and laughing jack would be a normal psycho and would kill a few people before being shot dead. These are just a few ideas.
For the uninformed, Jeff the Killer's actual original creator (NOT the author of the 2011 creepypasta) was a UA-cam user named Sesseur (whose account was terminated). The original video was made in 2008, and in it, Jeff's age was never even mentioned. It's a simplistic story where Jeff takes acid to his bathroom to clean the bathtub but then slips on soap and spills the acid on himself. His neighbours hear him screaming and he comes out of the hospital looking like that later on. (Yes, Liu was called Liu in that video, and I'm not sure what kind of name it's supposed to be.) Sesseur has actually been interviewed and he said he wasn't too happy that the creepypasta version of Jeff was more popular than his. Hell, the 2011 author pretty much took the idea, twisted it into something shit and then disappeared off of the internet. Jeff's age in the creepypasta stories plays no real factor in them besides reinforcing the character as a self-insert. Sesseur's version of Jeff would NOT kill Liu.
@@Profile_Profile_Underscore here's the story of the original Sonic movie design the company grabbed a kid and also grab a hedgehog the painted the spikes blue and use their mutating machine and boom we got the original Sonic movie design
Slender Man and Jeff are so boring nowadays due to how overpowered and overexposed they are, but I have burning hatred for Sonic.EXE and any story he appears in.
Slender isn't even a creepypasta so of course he's over powered. He has all those abilities cause he is an entity for a challenge which the point was to make a scary monster,he was designed to make you feel as though you couldn't escape so that's why he's over powered.
kiley giese Well, actually, Proxies are more Slenderverse than they are actual Creepypastas. Things like Marble Hornets and it's characters are considered Slenderverse.
Hi Hoodz! I just wanted to point out something regaurding your Sally portion. My parents used to be paranormal investors. It is common thought among the ghost believing community that a ghost can haunt any place. What determines the place is the dececeased person's emotional attachment to that place. For example, if Sally was killed in the car, but feels an even stronger emotional attachment to her home, her spirit will naturally gravitate there. Thanks!
I love Ben drowned it's one of my favorite Creepypastas. Slender man turning people into his manservants is actually true because of how powerful he is
Lenora Chan Yeah! All 10 year old kids ruined it! Do they even know all the characters? Creepypasta is used to be scary, not full of love and.. ponies and rainbows!
Ikr like half of them are just kids like WHERE THE FUCK DID THEY COME FROM?!? I'm not trying be offensive but I'm just questioning myself to where are all the fangirls come from.
7:55 “You cannot make Sonic the Hedgehog scary.” Oh really, what about the Sonic movie? Also, here’s this. Sonic In the Closet Sonic hides in the closet getting nearer and nearer to being completely white. He hears his friends screaming, and they are getting tortured by Sonic fans. He tries to be absolutely silent, but he accidentally hits a baseball bat with his arm. The doors of the closet open, and that Sonic fan says with a horrifying smile, “here’s your dipper, Daddy.” This is a story I wrote in a short amount of time. You can copy and paste it, but you should credit me, please.
+Toxic Voltage That would belong on Top 10 Worst/Funniest. I meant like quotes that truly inspired fear or are just eloquently written like the end of the Russian Sleep Experiment, or most things from Psychosis.
+Guy Gardner Yes! We totally need a "Top 10 Creepypasta Quotes"! That would be amazing! My number one would be the quote from....eeeeh, I forgot the name XD. Well, it was about a really weird (more like scary as sh*t) woman that was transported to hospital and well, she had really sharp teeth and didn't speak at all. I also remeber that she had a kitty in her mouth when they transported her there. After some time, she killed a doctor (maybe doctors? But I think he was just one.) and a nurse that saw it asked the woman something like: "What the hell are you?!" And the woman answered: "I am God." It doesn't sound that scary, but it really was when I read it. It just filled me with fear that something so horrible like that woman could be God. Yeah, it was a scary story. I think the name was something with....blank? Faceless? I can't remember, sorry.
+Twofaced Angel I know what story you're talking about but I also forget the name XD. Another one came to mind, "Gateway of the Mind" when he says "I've spoke to God and he has abandoned us." You reminded me of that one lol
Jeff would be pretty easy to kill, assuming he isn't protected by any supernatural bullshit. The answer is a gun. And if that doesn't work, use more gun. EDIT: That was a Team Fortress 2 reference! Why didn't anyone catch it?
+Andrew Collier Blew the fuck out of him? If the government is endeavored to putting an end to his skinny whitey ass they should just capture him (because I doubt that a 13-years-old kiddo could outsmart a fucking CIA agent) and, then, blasting the shit out of him with some bigass antiaircraft gun.
Ok I'll make my own list 1.jason 2.BEN 10 LOL Really 2.slender 3.freddy 4. Miacl myers (I think I spell it wrong) 5.killer clown person 6.happy APP..y (wut) 7.silent hill (.......um....k) 8.residen...t..evil.. 9.chucky (god knows how he dies) 10. JAKE PAUL .....yup Wut no...no.. SHRIEK PAKDJDNENWNS
2020 UPDATE: Hey guys! I thought I would leave this comment reflecting a bit on this video. In hindsight, I feel this video was quite poorly researched and I got a few things about these characters wrong, which I have been notified of, though getting definitive and solid information about these characters can be tricky. Still, I believe I could have researched things a bit better. I also feel I come across as a little pretentious and elitist in the video, which is unfortunate, but what can ya do, you live and you learn. Please note that if you have another opinion on the stories or characters mentioned, that’s totally cool, please don’t forget that! Also, to repeat it, having a character be overpowered does NOT mean it is a bad character!
For example, I claim that the character of Sally most likely kills people, though some commenters have suggested that the character does not in fact kill people but simply haunts them, and that she can’t actually summon evil spirits. I have heard conflicting reports on this subject, so I am unsure which is true, but I thought it was still worth acknowledging.
According to some commenters, the reason why Laughing Jack is so powerful is due to him being an imaginary friend, which would give him a reason for having his powers. That's honestly fair enough! With this video, I simply went off of the information I got of the character from his original story, not his origin story, hence why I was confused as to why the character was so powerful.
Some have also mentioned that in the story of Happy Appy, the clay apple character may not be the one doing the killing, but actually, the man behind the show, Freddrick Gorgote is, which makes more sense... so hey, there’s that acknowledged as well. It was lazy and stupid of me not to go back and fact-check the story to see if my points in this video made sense, which is something I won't do again.
For another example, I also originally claimed in this video that in the “original” Jeff the Killer story, Jeff was 13. However, as I have been told, the story I referred to as the “original” was actually not the first Jeff the Killer story out there, but simply the one that became super popular back in the day and which a lot of people based their interpretation of the character on. The ACTUAL original Jeff the Killer story was written before the popularized version, and this original story was written by an author known as Sesseur and in that story, Jeff isn’t 13.
Another thing I would like to mention which I consider a mistake in hindsight is my tangent on the Jeff the Killer spinoff I mention at 17:23 called Go to Sleep - “Jeff the Killer vs Jane the Killer”, narrated by MrCreepyPasta.
While making this video, I treated the story as a fully legitimate interpretation of the character as a whole and went on to make a few blatantly wrong statements. I took this random fan-made spin-off story as a basis for judging the entire character and his fanbase as a whole and this was wrong and also unfair; a simple spin-off story written by fans cannot define a character and I should not have taken a fan-written spin-off story as a complete canon interpretation of the character, which a few commenters have also pointed out to me.
To minimize the spread of misinformation I have therefore decided to go back and remove that specific section of the video around 17:30, claiming the events of the spin-off story as fact and canon and that in the “original” story, Jeff was 13 when this was wrong information, so that people do not get mislead in the future.
Finally, I decided to switch thumbnails to Jeff the fish because I think it'd be a whole lot funnier.
Hopefully this comment clears a few things up!
I hope that is understandable and I wish you all a good day, and once again, if you enjoy these stories or characters that is totally okay! Have fun with the stories you enjoy. Thank you for reading!
It is awesome to see that you are going back and realizing the faults of the past! I'm happy that I got the notification from your reply to my comment as it really shows how willing you are to grow and improve! You're content is really awesome and great binge material! and in your words: "Keep writing, Keep improving" Have an awesome day, my dude!
Awkward Animations Thank you so, so much for the kind words! Your initial comment really motivated me to go back and correct the things I got wrong, so it was again much appreciated. Thank you!
That’s alright! It’s awesome that you can reflect on your past work, and that you realize what you could’ve done better. It shows how much you’ve grown and matured. Keep up the good work! 😁
@@HoodoHoodlumsRevenge I would like to say I don't blame you for this things. And also, having an explanation for the powers of a character doesn't mean they are overpowered. It simply is an explanation for their overpowerement.
*Fish Jeff too op pls nerf*
I want a Clockwork parody called Glockwork and I don't need to explain the hypothetical plot or character design, the name says more than enough
Some chick running around with a Glock for an eye
*Cough* Cockwork* *Cough*
@@funnytrolllface just a dick for an eye
but glockwork must have a gun
@@gulmple an eye for a dick*
05:11
WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO? THIS WASN'T JUST "SOME" APPLE IT WAS JERRY! HE HAD A WIFE AND 2 HAPPY KIDS
WHY JUST WHY WOULD YOU DO SUCH THING?
Because he read too much creepypasta, and snapped
R.I.P Jerry
Hoodoo the killer for smash
Oh no, we all saw 096, we dead
cursed profile picture
Can we all just take a moment to realise that clockwork shoved a clock in her eye for the purpose of:
Having a ‘edgy’ look
Having a catch fraise
Having a name
None of the reasons for shoving a clock in her eye are to do with her story which is mainly why creepy pastas look the way they do. No. Purpose
I don't blame her if I'm insane I might as well do some sick body modding to get a brand in.
@fandomtrash. exe ye you can't argue with that.
@fandomtrash. exe oh no don't i wasn't insulting you i was just playing along, don't worry.
And she has a disadvantage if she can't use both her eyes.
@@charamcnuggers9534 true.
"This tall skinny-as white man..."
Yep this is now one of my favourite terms to describe the suit-wearing white enderman
Why he calling me out like this?
NEXT CREEPYPASTA: the grill murderer. He kills your grills after you had a BBQ
Some Face somebody better make that into a troll pasta
Its the nightmare of every American on the Fourth of July and to every Australian ever.
Some Face i think that may be an SCP. Search what SCP are and you would undestand. 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Some Face still better then Jeff the killer 😂😂👌
Some Face I would definitely read it.
god why can't my "mental drugs" make me a super strong deity?! they just make me act like a normal person
Lyric damn me too man big mood
Lyric
Same
Lyric lel
Same here
same
Happy Appy can be killed by a rock...
TRY IT!
No, literally... In the "final episode" he dies.
BECAUSE A KID THREW A ROCK AT HIS VAN AND... I can't write it without laughing in real life... HE CRASHES HIS FUCKING VAN AND HE DIES.
But it is proven that Happy is not an actual apple because he can bleed and he has bones. He's probably just a deformed guy.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Armless Happy appy is better tbh
Alpha WhiteWolf ... Best ending ever
Alpha WhiteWolf ppffFFFFF HA wow
Only fan girls can kill jeff the killer
Edit: Why the fuck did this blow up, this is not even funny just stop please.
I'm pretty sure Jeff's fangirls make him WANT to kill himself. XD
Jeff running from the fangirls: ua-cam.com/video/_1ZySXYTIf0/v-deo.html&feature=share
And my friend Jane The Killer
Nina can probably kill Jeff with a kiss ha😸😹😸
@@HazbinCovenWitch same XD
I know one thing that Slender man can't do
Cure my depression
Don't say that your better than Jeff and Jeff popular
He cured mine creepypasta makes me feel better and stronger.
U IS EPIC!!!!
I think that slenderman is better than jeff no offense
(late as hell but)
Jevil can!
Slenderman can grow tentacles from his body. He can stretch his arms to inhuman lenghts. He can manipulate space and time electronics and much more. He has existed since the dawn of man. He can't be killed or harmed. He can teleport left and right. He can drive people insane and turn them into his manservants.
But can he see why kids love the taste of Cinnamon Toast Crunch?
........no I dont think he can
+Clock Work agreed, he doesn't even have face, unless he's a telepath, which could make him even more powerful.
Shadoboy that made my freaking day
Marty Plays
Because the stories tend to play the paranoia factor very well.
Shadoboy :0
6:26 I can just imagine her saying "I'm 11 so stfu"
HAHAHAH
lol same
Epic Fpv Videos Creature like Lt Corbis
WHEN WILL YOU LEARN?!?
WhEn WiLl YoU LeArN?!?!??
THAT YOUR ACTIONS HAVE CoNsEqUeNcEs!!!!
Unicorn_Chibi Love *intense screeching*
*_FRICKIN' FRICK FRICK FRICKKITY_*
I can hear this comment and I hate that I can
WHY SONIC WHY SONIC WHY SONIC WHY SONIC WHY SONIC WHHHYYYY!!!?!?!
when wiII you Iearn
WHEN WIii YOU iEARN
So glad Zalgo got props. Unlike the edgefests of Jeff and Clockwork, Zalgo is a beautiful modern take on dark folklore and lovecraftian horror, complete with over-the-top rules and descriptions that anyone who has studied dark mythology can appreciate. Zalgo IS, he doesn’t do or act, he doesn’t need to be scarry; the mere fact that he exists is where his horror comes from. Zalgo is the uncaring shadow that mass murderers and cultists beg for attention, though he has never asked for it; the unspeakable evil that doesn’t care about being scarry, because the suffering of mortal minds is beneath him. He is what ‘Exe’ tried so hard to be, and failed horribly.
Spyrocrab Finally! Someone with some appreciation for Lovecraft and the stories he inspired!
Spyrocrab True. Though, it’s too bad that his image was completely butchered by the retarded ‘I Eat Pasta For Breakfast’ series.
Woeful_Donut OH THANK GOD!!! I thought i was the only person that hated that shit series.
Lovecraftian horror is the horror when you know you can't do anything about the creature which is very horrifying. Zalgo will destroy the fucking universe and reality for fuck's sake!
@@leru556 Oh god, not that. It's so boring. I can't even remember the main character's name. I think it started with an L?
Sometimes, when I think characters I created are bad I just take a quick look through the creepypasta community for a confidence boost. At least I try to put logic and PERSONALITY into my characters. But then again, one of them is a Deadpool rip off and another was created out of a UA-cam comment I made once.
Plus, I remember having my Main character, (who is a wolf-dragon hybrid working as an assassin.) sent to once murder Jeff and she accomplished without fail. (Trust me, she was slightly wounded by his knife.) but keep this in mind; she's a wolf-dragon hybrid against a thirteen year old human boy. Who do you think is gonna win? Anita (that's her name.) or Jeff?
Silver Heart I get why you named her Anita ;)
Oh really? I actually got the name from a book I used to read as a kid. Besides Anita is just her middle name, her real name is Adeline.
Oh i thought you were referring to someone else....
No one cares about your characters buddy
That is not the original Sally story. The story goes as so.
A family moves into a house were there daughter makes a ghost friend. Sally only plays with the girl, no murder.
Help Thank you
It isn't the original, but it is the most well known one, so I think that's the version he was going off of
Ok I wouldn't mind having a ghost best friend. It would be like having a stand
Huh I thought the other one was the original. Welp guess I didn’t do enough research
That is irrelevant, as the story with murder is the one Hoodo is talking about here.
Also shouldn't Jeff be blind? He has no eyelids so his eyes should be dried out
NightEnder his eyes would still get infected by germs
he probably puts bleach in his eyes
Lee Kasa he gets medication medicine and crap from people's houses after he kills them or before
Vincey TheSavage He would still go blind, because the eyelids are there to protect your eyes from rain, dust etc. Even with eye drops or whatever, something could easily fall in his eyes and damage them. Also most people have the usual stuff at home. Mostly pain killers or something against a cold. Without the access to a hospital or a real doctor, we would totally go blind
Lee Kasa he probably licks his own eyeballs like a gecko.....oh dear
In the creepypasta world, insanity with the desire to hurt people = your skin turns into chobham armor and you become a demigod of death.
I thought that was just the spore carnivore evolution three.
Oh so when Jeff drinks a whole bottle of alcohol and is deemed cool and I can't even drink a whole bottle of hot sauce away and be deemed stupid and weird
this is outrages
I sentence him to death by hot sauce
That would be a very fitting death.
Carlos D Rodriguez ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Le Lenny?
My lord?
Un Fair i fucking agree
Anime bubble Damn straight
This comment section is GOLD, the video is GOLD, my goodness, this is why I left the fandom. Nothing was realistic anymore and none of the characters could provide true horror. And I agree, Silent Hill is 10/10
Cat Moonstream tbh I think most of the recent pastas are more of just horror stories
so
anyone hear a unsettling story
This is precisely why I don't read creepypastas based around Slenderman, because the more you know about him, the less scary he becomes. Slenderman is entirely based on the fear of the unknown and uncanny, and so the less mysterious he becomes, the less scary he becomes too. It's a pity, 'cause I used to find Slenderman pretty scary and interesting, but he's been done to death.
Exactly. Since reading the original story, I've kept my exposure to him at a minimum, say for some spooky pics. It really makes him more scary the less you know
I've only read two good stories based on him. And they weren't fangirl/fanboy fantasies. They were about people who encountered him as he was originally meant to be; a mysterious entity.
Niobesnuppa nobody's really creative anymore
Niobesnuppa I totally agree... he was scary when he was new and know one knew what he could do or when or how he kills people. And then the spin offs came along.... -_-
Niobesnuppa EXACTLY!!! I feel like the old, mysterious Slenderman stories like Marble Hornets were somewhat of a love letter to H.P. Lovecraft. Both Slenderman and Cthulhu were scary because they were powerful entities that the human brain can't comprehend. They weren't running around slaughtering, they killed you mentally due to sheer lack of comprehension. Now, modern interpretations ruin both.
zalgo is a god basically, so there's a bit of an excuse there as to how he can destroy everything
The truely overpowered characters are the SCPs
But even then, the Foundation has ways of dealing with them.
Daniel Kempson Not all. SCP 001- 4 the broken machine
SCP- 666 the daughter of darkness
Nt to mention shy guy, blood plague, judgement, plague doctor, and the song of Genesis. As well as many many more.
Daniel Kempson somehow
You sir are damn right
Two words: Scarlet King
Actually about jeff... None of those happened; him being an alcoholic, him being more superior to slender, him RAPING jane. I support the REAL origin, and the 2015 one just made him look worst..
Just my oppinion, dont hate me
Aria V. No, you’re absolutely right.
Yeah, it was nothing more than poppycock with BS icing
When did he rape jane
You right.............but it’s for da fandom UwU
It’s all good! I appreciate the original one more!
It’s just with people trying to make some creepypastas over edgy and “insane” it just made me lose interest in the fandom as a whole.
New Drinking Game: Take a shot every time Hoodo brings up Silent Hill
Wonhomosexual im out
Elliotter I can't drink alchohol
Welp... I am dead
Oh shut up you flying unicorn!
Elliotter gahh...that was not a fun hangover
Maybe Jeff gains supernatural powers from the amount of fans he has. The more people who know about him, the stronger he becomes.
I dunno. I'm just mumbling to myself.
Rosie Auseer this comment should have more likes. It made me lol.
I came up with a similar explanation for Sonic.exe as part of a fictional universe a friend and I came up with based on the Internet. Funny idea
Rosie Auseer so if the whole world knows about him, he will become a god? o.O
That would be kinda clever to be honest.
Rosie Auseer yeah #fangirlin4life
Imagine if Dark Souls 4 had these characters, it would probably the hardest game of the Dark Souls series
+Emperor Emotion Now I want to play Creepy Souls.
Pretty sure the 3rd one is the last one they wanted to make.
I know, but you can still make a fan made game
FromSoft, plz add to bloodborne 2, modern-edition :3
this HAS to be a fan game SOMEWHERE
How could a clay apple murder adults ?
yes
Leah Warren good question
How can he be on this list
I'm pretty sure most of the time Appy was being moved like an actual puppet by Fredrick and his followers. Though I think at one point Appy jumps at the main character as he's about to drive off, but it's not like he does much damage. He actually gets run over I think.
How could a clay apple murder anyone?
when Sally said play with me what do you think happened?
Me: The teen pulled out her tea set and asked her what color does she want her cup , blue, yellow or purple ? '_'
XD
sally: play with me
teen: * pulls out barbies * ok
amy french "Play with me" ;)
amy french hj
Amy french
*Sally:* play with me
*Me:* yay, can we play with the stuffed animals, draw? what would you want to do first? :D
“Sure, you like video games?”
The not contrived killer version of Sally doesn’t sound all that bad, lol
anything slenderman can't do ?
get a face
Antoine Croes This made my day
Antoine Croes That's a good roast right there
Antoine Croes nope. there's one where he rips off some skin and he has a face.
Antoine Croes his limbo has a lovely smile though
Antoine Croes Or become short.
I just realized Jeff has no nose
EDIT: o my gawd look at all those likes
lol I have been wondering about That my whole life
He's the reincarnation of Voldemort after the seventh book
Except that Voldemort was a great villain, whereas Jeff is a shitty excuse for antagonist.
Stacyann Sanders he could have a nose no one really knows his creater never said anything about him having a nose :0
-Bloody- Sapphire The Killer AJ, seeing as jeff in the original story was human, i think its safe to assume he has a nose, i mean, we weren't told he cut his nose off or anything, or that he was noseless due to birth defects or crazy stuff like that. I am pretty sure, almost positive, that Jeff has a nose.
•-•
16? She looks 19 or 20
Also "tall pasty white dude"
😂
Anna Baik have you liked now?
"Why do people still root for Jeff the killer?" Bitch you know why, he's a 13 year old white boy with a tragic backstory. The perfect waifu bait for every 11 year old straight girl anime fanartist on the internet
you know I wish who would kill him? Aku(from Samurai Jack) Jason (from friday the 13th) and Chris walker (outlast) Jeff would get easily killed by them.
Pedro Saabedra Jason picks Jeff off the ground and the fight is over
Aku kills Jeff with his lasers eyes, end of fight
Chris walker lifts up Jeff with his one arm and rips Jeff's head off, end of fight.
Peridot I have been reading creepypasta since I was 6. For a few weeks I was stupid Jeff fan girl then I realized all the idiots that also did. It then moved to Ben, in which it also lasted a few weeks. I then took notice I was a stupid fan girl and stopped with the weird things. I'm currently 11 and my friends know of creepypasta due to me. We laugh our asses off due to how many people make it off to be only 11 year old weaboos.
Ya know, I don't even consider Jeff fangirls the worst of em; it's the Ben fangirls. Not in the way they act or their fanart(I mean, it's all still abysmal but not quite as bad as Jeff), but in the concept itself. Ben is, what? 7? 9? Having a crush on him is creepy as all hell.
I honestly like the old Slenderman better. The fans just ruined him so much.
Most of his abilities tend to be non-canonical as they're from Slenderseries and not Victor-Surge.
He's not scary but certainly not something you want in real life. The only scary thing about him is when two idiotic fangirls thought he's real and stabbed their classmate to near death. All of that coming from a Slenderman fan.
Ah, I miss marble hornets' slenderman
KaleidoSnakes I agree
That was the longest hashtag I've ever created.
True
KaleidoSnakes iiiiiiii
"random sexy viewer"....
how to flirt 101
*wink* *;]*
Why did you comment this?
Kalina Tankova w o n k
Kalina Tankova ah.the new lessons you get in highschool
Someone had to bring it up.
@@thecommentdetective374 why not
Sally be like... "Yo satan can you come over here" ...(satan)*yea friend owo uwu*
She friends with the bedtime story reading, nightlight summoned Satan from the SCP Foundation? If that's the case, that makes sense.
She can turn Hitler into a law abiding citizen
it is 55the right way unless ji
I mean you can't really hurt Sally. ☺️😌
*Shows a picture of normal ben* Little boy. *Shows another picture of ben with Lil Uzi hair style and shades* Lil boi (Happy new year y'all!)
Bethany Davis bless this comment
Anime bubble it shall be blessed. 🍆
Bethany Davis why dose he call him a little boy just call him link
I liked this bc i thought that this comment was commented 2019 but when i checked it was 1 year ago...xD *wow*
here are 3 things I don't get about the original Jeff the killer creepypasta
1: how the fuck is he EVEN buying the alcohol if he is 13?
2: I thought Jane and Jeff were mortal enemies not two teen parents!!
3: how the hell is he EVEN still alive for god sake if he burned of is eye lids?!?
baby strawberry These stories aren't thought out at all, the authors just typed whatever they wanted without any logic or reasoning behind it. It actually takes effort to write something good
baby strawberry Jeff most likely raped Jane
baby strawberry 3: high pain tolerance?
baby strawberry bad imagination?
baby strawberry Yeah and if Jeff can beat Slender
How the heck he is weaker than Jane?
Alright guys, real talk for a minute.
Again, I honestly apologize for practically re-hashing pretty much every character in this video, as I have talked about them before. Finding new and interesting Creepypasta characters to talk about is really, really hard for me to do. In fact, finding new subjects to talk about regarding Creepypastas has proven tricky for the past few months. We'll see how the future of the channel goes. I may or may not take a new direction and/or expand the channel, but we'll see.
If you have any ideas for future videos, please let me know on this comment and I'll see what I can do. Thanks for reading, and thanks for sticking with me during these crazy goofy times.
Thanks again!
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge why don't you make a video of weird creepypastas?
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge FeelGoodInc?
I think a "Top 10 Creepypasta Quotes" (A la, the quote from the end of the Russian Sleep Experiment) would be a good one where you could cover a lot of good stories and moments. You could also do Top 10 Bad Quotes (A la a certain line from a certain brother in Clockwork), also you could do more underrated creepypastas(I'd love to get some more to read) and another plot twists video would be interesting, too. Thanks, Hoodo!
+HoodoHoodlumsRevenge You know you want to let's play Silent Hill.
I also really love your blind readings. Those are great. Hell, you giving commentary on any story is great.
Hoodo: Destroying the earth is overpowered
SCP Foundation: Hold my Beer
SCPs > Creepypasta Characters
Have SCPs always been popular, or have I just started noticing it when I started to like it?
Just some Karen with internet access Eh wouldn’t say popular, but ig its up there with Creepypasta. It’s got a strong fanbase.
Seiries 1 was a cringe fest but at least now there are SCPs that can cause an XK class scenerio that aren't poorly written without cliches
@@LittleIcarus you just started noticing
Hoods: I found more than I bargained for!
Me: *slaps on fedora*
Me: *tunes guitar*
Me: aM I MORE THAN YOU BARGAINED FOR YET
"Nothing personell, kid"
+Jess The Mess this comment is going down down
+Instantly Broken in an earlier round
+Jess The Mess ay ay
found you guys
I'm 100% certain Zalgo is just a different version of Cthulhu.
He's certainly Lovecraftian, but he's more like Yog-Sothoth. Not evil, not good, just there and powerful.
Treecko666 I was thinking the same or somebody from the mythos
I thought he seemed to have more influence from Geiger.
"and played tear time with Mr Teddy?"
DONT YOU GET IT?! YOU SEE THE HAT?! That was Misses... *N E S B I T*
*o h s o r r y*
The police officers can't hit Jeff the killer because they got there training in gta 5
AchievementAssault Congrats on being the first comment here that honestly made me laugh.
thanks
AchievementAssault, are you sure thats where the police officers were trained, cause i could have sworn that they were trained in the same place stormtroopers were....
AchievementAssault wouldn't that make them hit Jeff dem GTA V cops don't play man😂
+Tornaidis Dark (DarkTornaidis32) XD
Well marble hornets slender man is much better in my opinion then he got mainstream
Is there anything he can’t do
CAN HE MAKE ME AN SANDWITCH
Go back to sleep, and starve
Hello cosplayer how do you want to die
CAN HE THO???
Alinka Golovach ok
Alinka Golovach death by waffles
I'd say Zalgo should eat Jeff the Killer but the twerp would just make him sick, probably.
Nathan Karr He probably read Jeff the Killer and went "This is such a fucking mess of a story, the fact someone wrote this is mind boggling'.
Fuck this I'm moving to Mars."
Nathan Karr *stabs you in the face*
Jeffrey Woods ....just.... Don't.... please....
Aiming too high there, Jeffy boy. You'll never reach my face while standing up.
Sorry, but the story Jeff the Killer sucks ass. It's poorly written, and the plot is such a mess. Most mainstream creepy pasta sucks ass. Sorry not sorry.
Slenderman can actually be damaged by shooting him in the head and his weak spot is his head
Optional Rex6200 That's most people's weak spot m8
Which website said that Slenderman's weakness is the head?
@@ScourgeofShadows9869 i dont think it matters at this point, since slenderman is now so OP it's best to just tell people he has a weak spot to make him less OP.
wtf was that Winnie the pooh picture 😂😂😂
What was it? It was badass that’s what it is!
HI itachi
Blackboy-_-1st Kuro Heya Itachi
Wait when?
A lot of creepypasta fans don't even know the origins of tails doll. In the comics he is a robot designed by dr.eggman to be able to not look suspicious and crawl through the vents to spy on the freedom riders. That's what that gem thing on his head is. It's a radio antenna.
12:25 Obviously Clockwork did it the best like DUH
I'm a person who's not to be taken seriously.
10:11 Hey that's my favorite movie, you know...
Clockwork Orange?
DarkCultistGloomy 049
Wow. 049 has a channel
I like your pfp
those characters are overpowered, but that can be fixed with a bit of efort and care
............
Okay for the Brad Dourif you get so totally a like, buddy
Also thanks for tearing Jeff and Laughing Jack apart. No matter how you approach these guys, their story is simply ridiculous.
Was a bit sad to see the Slender here, but more since it is sorta a tragic to see a cool character fall like that. I mean, he was supposed to be an lovecraftian eldritch entity on father Dagon level, you cannot stop, because you simply drive insane before you can do anything. But just like Cthulu Pop-Culture *had* to overexplain and decipher the guy. And if it wasn't enough already we got Jeff vs Slendy. Dammit e____e
I hate that ship "Jeff X Jane "it's just edgy
Memes Dabestbro It's not really 'edgy' as such, but it's just a case of "heY THEY HAVE ThE SAmE COLouR HAiR MatCH MadE iN HeAVEN"
Aya Drevis true
Memes Dabestbro I KNOW RIGHT they're enemies, like Jane's trying to kill him
Yeah. Jane Hates Jeff. Jeff murdered her family I think.
I really wish I could turn around and slap them across the face and say "It's people like you who piss me off, why would Jane submit herself in having romantic feelings for the boy who murdered her parents and burnt her alive? You'd have to be a fucking masochist to want to be with someone like that!"
Plus Jane is a lesbian
Not to sound like a stereotypical fanboy but isn't slender considered a 4th or 5th dimensional being? Meaning our reality is like playdough to him? Wouldn't that in some way justify his OP nature? Correct me if I'm wrong.
Tristan Welke no slender originally was just a demon/ghost in the england woods who stole children when they played where they werent suppose to. Technically slenderman isnt even a creepypasta
Anime bubble
👆
This person is right
Tristan Welke true
Anime bubble I'm English I haven't seen him
Anime bubble he pretty much count's as a kidnapper
just bite the clay apple
Don't mind that it's clay
Kenyada Bethea what i was thinking lol
killbrew dude but clay tastes bad... D'=
Boi have you ever smelled play dough? I cant even image how it tastes
* bite *
**VOMITS**
Hoodo:You cannot make Sonic the Hedgehog scary (proceeds to use footage from Sonic 0’6)
Me:I think you just proved yourself wrong
laughing jack can be killed with the sentence " you don't exist, please go play in traffic." from what i heard..
Except you know, he's not real so who gives a shit
precisely.
+Raymond13557 Jeff can be killed by saying "You're a stupid looking fishfaced Hot Topic reject and your photoshopped picture on the internet sucks. All your stories are terrible, fuck off."
+Be N S O N Also, when he tells you to "GO TO SLEEP," just say "nah, I'd rather not." The contradiction will break him because no one has ever said no to him before because he's so ~perfect~ and ~amazing~. Poof! Gone.
or the classic "no you" he might become confused and attack himself or implode into nothing
You're sure that the kiss in sonic '06 isn't creepy.
OP Creepypasta characters? Ok let me try...
Saitama.EXE, he has double the punching power of the origional Saitama
666x the power
Here's an op character: One Punch Man. He can defeat anyone with only one punch!
The double punch is the serious series punch
Sally and Ben are both ghosts thats why they seem over powered, Jack is also an Imaginary friend or so I think idk
My head canon for Lj is that the kid (can't remember his name) was delusional and had schizophrenia. He thought Lj was was real and eventually it drove him insane.
Not very good i know but it kinda makes sense to me...
Laughing Jack reminds me of the imaginary friends episode in Supernatural.
@@art-iculatelycatastrophic So what you’re suggesting is that it’s a ‘Babadook’ situation, that would at least be interesting but non of the events of the stories add up to that idea, mainly in the origin though.
@@The.Orange.Wizard Yeah i know, it just makes sense to me so I just kinda go with it
@@art-iculatelycatastrophic It’s alright, it’s an interesting idea, but unfortunately in the ‘origin’ Jack is a tad too corporeal to do so.
Again, it’s an interesting ideas and if the story was tweaked it would work.
Slender an been around since dawn of man? Bullshit because he wouldn't be wearing a suit XD
BUBBAKJW 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
BUBBAKJW Maybe he used loincloth before suits were invented.
Haispawner Someone draw fan art of this
don't you just love how clockwork's hair length changes every time there is art made of her?
Dude... we get it, you like silent hill
You CAN make sonic scary
The sonic movie design (as of now)
Clockwork sounds like a boss you fight in fucking Fallout 4.
xD
I don't think any of these fuckers can beat Shrek. Because Shrek isn't just overpowered, he's ogrepowered!
Most underpowered Creepy-Pasta characters next time?
Personally Jeff the Killer springs to mind. Literally just a teenage burn victim with no eyelids. You could probably defeat him with pocket sand alone.
OnEiNsAnEmOtHeRfUcKa Infection alone should have killed him. Hell, he should already be blind.
Missing No.
No eyelids = dirty fucking eyes, so yeah, blind and crying constantly. Not exactly the most intimidating thing in the world. Plus _what does he eat?_ Kid can't keep wandering around in the woods doing nothing but kill people forever. He's either gonna pass out and starve to death or start eating poisonous berries and start chronically shitting himself. Those things can give pretty vicious diarrhea, assuming you survive.
Man, I honestly can't see him at anything but dead from infection. It's such a stupid story when you take it apart. Or think about it for all of five minutes using common knowledge and critical thinking.
Missing No.
Yeah. Shame it's become one of the cover stories for the whole community, considering there's actually some really competently written stuff out there.
OnEiNsAnEmOtHeRfUcKa Yeah, it's okay for people who know that story is older now, and overhyped, and that there's better stuff out there - but people just trying to get into the community are either going to be annoyed and disappointed at one of the most favourite stories, or else latch onto it (especially younger people, I've found) like some Holy Grail, keeping it famous long after it should be dead and buried. I wonder how the authors feel about their work now?
old classmate of mine described geoff the convict as "vampire clown"
Hoodo say"This tall skinny ass white is op as all hell"😂😂😂😂😂
I died when he said that
*Dead Inside*
taliah & chevy 😂😂😂😂
2 op plz nerf
i feel like all popular creepypastas are bad
Piper Jenkins
Most are. The Russian Sleep Experiment has a lot of quality and, for its release, was quite original. But you are somewhat correct. There are a lot of bad creepy pastas that are very bad and very popular. It's sad too, since it feels like many great creepypastas and creepypasta writers don't get the credit they deserve..
mach6247 yes thats true but i meant more popular than the RSE, like jeff the killer and ben drowned
PolarPanda653 Ben drowned is pretty everyone just kept copying off it the rake is fucking bad ass the Russian sleep experiment was awesome that is just my opinion though 😃
PolarPanda653 Yeah youre right. Ticci Toby and Bloody Painter are the absolute best creepypastas though imo. Clockwork is way overrated; Ben and Jeff are meh. Sally is cool.
PolarPanda653 Because of fangirls who take the fun out of it. They desensitized the horror and made it into a high school love story for 8 year old and 9 year olds to fantasize about.
ClockWork would be better if her story and character development weren't total shit and if she wasn't shipped with every single creepypasta. (fr creepypasta ships are terrible)
I hate how in every fan art of Clockwork, they oversexualiz her. (Sorry about the grammar)
I agree with you 100%. I am a shipper as well but when it comes to creepypastas, I just can't ship any of them. Creepypastas pretty much are meant to bring fear, not make you ship them together.
Lol the creators of Clockwork and Ticci Toby confirmed that Clockwork is Tici Toby's love interest.
+PikaWolf No they don't.
AIY!
As a person with borderline personality disorder, it pisses me off there are so many creepypastas that bank on the whole 'psychotic serial killer' stereotype. It was a big hindrance in getting help in my teenage years, because I was so scared my therapists would lock me up for lacking empathy and having dark thoughts. Turns out they're a lot more common than you think, and most of the people who deal with that actually *don't* become serial killers. Go figure.
Is it bad I wanna rewrite these into good horror that made SENSE?! (*triggered*) Would it be bad if I did?(except 4 Zalgo, BEN and Slender, they aren't too bad! Also, I don't mess with classics :P)
I've actually toyed with the idea of writing a story where Clockwork is an actual clockwork automaton that somehow developed life and sapience, but without any capacity for morality. She sees humans and wishes she were one, so in a dark twist on the "become a real boy" scenario, she murders her creator, the one who built her as a machine, and begins killing people, using their flesh to cover her mechanical body, in the hopes that this will make her like other humans, despite still being a cold, heartless mechanical being inside.
I already thought about that multiple times.
For example, Jeff could be posessed by some kind of ghost or demon (which would explain his power).
Dreigonix Please write that story. Pretty please.
+I like cringe And I don't know why
I already have started. I'll let you know when it's up. ;D
No it’s not, ive thought of it myself. My friend thought of an actually good version of Clockwork that’s a pretty decent read. I’ll have to find it. I thought of an idea for improving Sonic.exe where it takes place in the Sonic universe rather than being a spooky game story. If I were to try to improve Slendy I’d make him so mysterious no one knows what he’s truly capable of. For Jeff I’d make him a long dead, but ultimately feared serial killer (that is also not 13) who would inspire tons of copycat killers, mostly of the edgy teen variety. Zalgo would remain a cosmic entity but only rarely interacts with our mortal realm. Ben would still be a ghost, Sally would have no origin story to reduce the cringe monumentally, and laughing jack would be a normal psycho and would kill a few people before being shot dead. These are just a few ideas.
For the uninformed, Jeff the Killer's actual original creator (NOT the author of the 2011 creepypasta) was a UA-cam user named Sesseur (whose account was terminated). The original video was made in 2008, and in it, Jeff's age was never even mentioned. It's a simplistic story where Jeff takes acid to his bathroom to clean the bathtub but then slips on soap and spills the acid on himself. His neighbours hear him screaming and he comes out of the hospital looking like that later on. (Yes, Liu was called Liu in that video, and I'm not sure what kind of name it's supposed to be.)
Sesseur has actually been interviewed and he said he wasn't too happy that the creepypasta version of Jeff was more popular than his. Hell, the 2011 author pretty much took the idea, twisted it into something shit and then disappeared off of the internet.
Jeff's age in the creepypasta stories plays no real factor in them besides reinforcing the character as a self-insert. Sesseur's version of Jeff would NOT kill Liu.
I'm gonna call Slenderman the Tall Skinny Ass White Boy from now on
brilliance
You mean man, he isn't a boy.
same
No let's call him "That white rich kid that thinks he's a thug" as said by Maxx from SIO
He's not a boy, he's about 5134 years old
"You can't make sonic scary" someone hadn't played the Sonic Dream Collection...
Or watch the original Sonic movie trailer
@@snowball9616 yup fck that trailer
@@Profile_Profile_Underscore here's the story of the original Sonic movie design the company grabbed a kid and also grab a hedgehog the painted the spikes blue and use their mutating machine and boom we got the original Sonic movie design
Ohh and don't forget Deviantart! It has scarred over 1m ppl around the world!
Am I the only 1 who is like "eyyyy your old profile pic was 2D!"
No ok I'll go now
i have mental issues does that mean im going to be a murderer?
YourFavoriteNightmare s Without a doubt.
Missing No. Stop creeping out the poor guy/girl
YourFavoriteNightmare s naw. It's not literally the only possibility. You can live a moderate life.
_definitely. Totally. Yep there's no other option you and me both we're gonna be hackin' our way to the white house one day._
YourFavoriteNightmare s
f u c k
We all have to agree that the best, most interesting and sexiest creepypasta is Donald Trump
Hillary is spookier
19:20
i am italian, and i can say that the pronunce of thet "numero uno" was marvelous...
i can confirm that nummer ett was perfectly pronounced
found out he's Swedish so it makes sense.
@@willowof4825 stonks
Annoying orange is way spooky than the apple thing.
When I heard of “happy appy”
I was like, who the hell is dat
this is what happens when you let kids get into these types of things
Cas Guinn Now I just wanna see a style slender where if you get caught your taken to another time period..
CAVE MAN SLENDY
"Legitimate horror."
*puts a picture of The Shining*
Respect grows to 1000.
Not as overpowered as Bayonetta in sm4sh
G O L D
*Y E S*
Omg yus xD
GreedyOysterGaming *nodding and clapping*
Patch 1.1.6 sorta raped her tho xd
Slender Man and Jeff are so boring nowadays due to how overpowered and overexposed they are, but I have burning hatred for Sonic.EXE and any story he appears in.
Masterge77 well no slender was always like that
Agreed....
Jeff the Killer looks like edgy Voldemort
Jelly Cactus FUCKING TRUE
Nobody:
Nary a soul that has ever or will ever exist:
Laughing Jack: *P O O F*
Slender isn't even a creepypasta so of course he's over powered. He has all those abilities cause he is an entity for a challenge which the point was to make a scary monster,he was designed to make you feel as though you couldn't escape so that's why he's over powered.
Krayheishere babcock says the slenderman fan
Though it still stays that Slender is from marble hornets.
yeah slenderman is from the slenderverse fandom, not creepypasta
Yeah his proxies are the creepypasta
kiley giese Well, actually, Proxies are more Slenderverse than they are actual Creepypastas. Things like Marble Hornets and it's characters are considered Slenderverse.
Ben Isnt Exactly UNSTOPPABLE cuz he drowned so he's Usually described to be afraid of water :3
Also The Slender Movie Rlly Sucks At Least Ta Me ...
+WaffleKiller27 (tigress862) Wait howd you see it?
always watching .... my friend ibxdogman gave me the disk xD
WaffleKiller27 Always Watching is shit. Look up Night Mind's analysis of it.
yea it was crap :P but hey I heard there's a JTK movie coming out ... that Might Be Better ... Probably not but still xD
Can slenderman explain why kids love Cinnamon Toast Crunch?
AJSSPACEPLACE cuz it tastes good😓
Hi Hoodz! I just wanted to point out something regaurding your Sally portion. My parents used to be paranormal investors. It is common thought among the ghost believing community that a ghost can haunt any place. What determines the place is the dececeased person's emotional attachment to that place. For example, if Sally was killed in the car, but feels an even stronger emotional attachment to her home, her spirit will naturally gravitate there.
Thanks!
I love Ben drowned it's one of my favorite Creepypastas. Slender man turning people into his manservants is actually true because of how powerful he is
Savvy shabby yuuup slender is great
Slender was never designed to DO this. The fucking fandom ruined a very well writen mysterious charakter
i love creepypasta sooo freakin much...
AND NOW THE FANDOM RUINED IT FOR ME
Lenora Chan I agree. I love Creepypasta but the fandom.. meh, all the fangirls/boys ruined it. All the ships, all Creepypasta oc's.. like, really?
MiffyMix it's so dumb! And half of the fandom is 10 years old kids!!
Lenora Chan Yeah! All 10 year old kids ruined it! Do they even know all the characters? Creepypasta is used to be scary, not full of love and.. ponies and rainbows!
MiffyMix im 10 :(
Ikr like half of them are just kids like WHERE THE FUCK DID THEY COME FROM?!? I'm not trying be offensive but I'm just questioning myself to where are all the fangirls come from.
wait Jeff the killer wasn't number one?
what is this madness
(he can kill anyone without being damaged)
doggie doo dalmatian technically he can't be killed because if slender man can kill him no one can
+Ms J we got Zalgo bro
ERM... you know Zalgo, bro?
7:55 “You cannot make Sonic the Hedgehog scary.”
Oh really, what about the Sonic movie?
Also, here’s this.
Sonic In the Closet
Sonic hides in the closet getting nearer and nearer to being completely white. He hears his friends screaming, and they are getting tortured by Sonic fans. He tries to be absolutely silent, but he accidentally hits a baseball bat with his arm. The doors of the closet open, and that Sonic fan says with a horrifying smile, “here’s your dipper, Daddy.”
This is a story I wrote in a short amount of time. You can copy and paste it, but you should credit me, please.
Yesssssss. Fantastic! Great top 10! Hoodo, would you consider doing a "Top 10 Creepypasta Quotes" list?
#1 would definitely be the quote from the prisoner in the Russian Sleep Experiment
+Toxic Voltage That would belong on Top 10 Worst/Funniest. I meant like quotes that truly inspired fear or are just eloquently written like the end of the Russian Sleep Experiment, or most things from Psychosis.
+Guy Gardner Yes! We totally need a "Top 10 Creepypasta Quotes"! That would be amazing!
My number one would be the quote from....eeeeh, I forgot the name XD. Well, it was about a really weird (more like scary as sh*t) woman that was transported to hospital and well, she had really sharp teeth and didn't speak at all. I also remeber that she had a kitty in her mouth when they transported her there. After some time, she killed a doctor (maybe doctors? But I think he was just one.) and a nurse that saw it asked the woman something like: "What the hell are you?!" And the woman answered: "I am God."
It doesn't sound that scary, but it really was when I read it. It just filled me with fear that something so horrible like that woman could be God. Yeah, it was a scary story. I think the name was something with....blank? Faceless? I can't remember, sorry.
+Twofaced Angel I know what story you're talking about but I also forget the name XD.
Another one came to mind, "Gateway of the Mind" when he says "I've spoke to God and he has abandoned us."
You reminded me of that one lol
+Guy Gardner Yeah, that one also sent shivers down my spine.
By the way, I recalled the name of the story just now! It was named "Expressionless".
the reason spender is not scary is because FANGIRLS FUCKING MADE FANFICS
Clock Work Not all of them. Some were actually quite original at the time and came from different places.
Jeff would be pretty easy to kill, assuming he isn't protected by any supernatural bullshit. The answer is a gun. And if that doesn't work, use more gun.
EDIT: That was a Team Fortress 2 reference! Why didn't anyone catch it?
But what if more gun doesn't work? We can't possibly use even more gun, can we?
+Andrew Collier
Blew the fuck out of him?
If the government is endeavored to putting an end to his skinny whitey ass they should just capture him (because I doubt that a 13-years-old kiddo could outsmart a fucking CIA agent) and, then, blasting the shit out of him with some bigass antiaircraft gun.
Andrew Collier You can never use too much gun.
Sauce Uchihahahahahaha Just use a tank and run him over.
Paul Smith sand will do
Ok I'll make my own list
1.jason
2.BEN 10 LOL
Really 2.slender
3.freddy
4. Miacl myers (I think I spell it wrong)
5.killer clown person
6.happy APP..y (wut)
7.silent hill (.......um....k)
8.residen...t..evil..
9.chucky (god knows how he dies)
10. JAKE PAUL
.....yup
Wut no...no.. SHRIEK PAKDJDNENWNS
But most of them aren't even creepypastas.
@@themilkywaygalaxy8387 It seems to be satire.
@@themilkywaygalaxy8387 But you aren't really the Milky Way galaxy.
idc if chuky isent one bc I like that movie so much