Something in my body is trying to escape

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  • Опубліковано 30 вер 2024
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 154

  • @hi_shay
    @hi_shay 3 місяці тому +13

    not the mpreg creepypasta 😭🙏

  • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
    @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому +61

    Must be the main protagonist's dark side trying to escape their body

    • @thedevilman.
      @thedevilman. 3 місяці тому

      0:03 YES! THIS VIDEO, the start is literally the same situation rn with me.

  • @Tinker_Nerd
    @Tinker_Nerd 3 місяці тому +72

    I think the most unrealistic thing about this story is the fact that the narrator never asked how a 6-foot tumor of a supposed person came out of his body without there being any visible indication it was inside him

    • @treeherder42
      @treeherder42 3 місяці тому +17

      Straight after it mentions a hand but smaller, which makes me think it was misread since 6ft vs 6 inches is 6'/6"
      Edit - got it backwards myself when typing this

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 місяці тому +6

      Lol. If the tumor was 6', that would be hilarious.

    • @user-qb3yp9dm4y
      @user-qb3yp9dm4y 3 місяці тому +6

      @@treeherder42 it says 6 pound in the og post

    • @pippasouthern8760
      @pippasouthern8760 3 місяці тому +1

      I just assumed it had grown since the 10 hour incubation maybe? Idk

    • @sbrown9531
      @sbrown9531 Місяць тому

      psychological issues, not physical issues. I think it's metaphorical.

  • @druidictroy1157
    @druidictroy1157 3 місяці тому +9

    Ummm...I really hope that was a mistake when you said a six FOOT lump of flesh and that you meant six INCHES! 😮

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 місяці тому +3

      Nah, six foot. 😂

    • @tethilia
      @tethilia 3 місяці тому +1

      Nah 6 human feet with toes

  • @askiadiepie8288
    @askiadiepie8288 3 місяці тому +17

    I have these symptoms, This would be considered somatization disorder. Google says Somatic symptom disorder is diagnosed when a person has a significant focus on physical symptoms, such as pain, weakness or shortness of breath, to a level that results in major distress and/or problems functioning. The individual has excessive thoughts, feelings and behaviors relating to the physical symptoms. I saw my feet under bathroom lighting and I thought they were turning blue and purple. I had a panic attack and woke my mom up, she showed it was just the lighting and pressed on my toenail to show how quickly the color returned when she let go! I also have IBS and I'm still convinced it's actually a hernia of some kind. Then again I forgot what feeling hungry was like and starved myself for weeks while complaining that my stomach hurts, so this is very relatable. 😮‍💨🤣 Happily medicated now lol.

    • @scout9237
      @scout9237 3 місяці тому

      It’s still a version of OCD

    • @draw2death421
      @draw2death421 3 місяці тому

      I think i also have this, i havent had it diagnosed tho. When ive multiple times seen wierd bumps on my arm thinking it was a tumor or a blood clot, i even have went into panic due to it but its allways just dissapeared or been normal.

    • @askiadiepie8288
      @askiadiepie8288 3 місяці тому

      @@draw2death421 mines started around 16 but peaked around 18-20 this is around when symptoms will peak for most people my suggestion would be to always try to get a second opinion from a friend or family member before going to the hospital don't try to rely on Google you will end up learning a lot about stuff you will never have and last never be scared to go to the doctor it can feel embarrassing when you don't know if it's somatic I tend to think I'm wasting time/money but that's what doctors are there for they will help you to understand which symptoms are real and which ones aren't

    • @draw2death421
      @draw2death421 3 місяці тому

      @@askiadiepie8288 mine have been bad since i was 6. Tbh im now 21 and its going down now if anything.

    • @askiadiepie8288
      @askiadiepie8288 3 місяці тому

      @@draw2death421 yea I definitely had OCD like since I was sentient 6ish🤣 but this didn't start till a little later. That's great, Your past the worst part then mines is also getting easier now I'm 24.

  • @jentinkers1316
    @jentinkers1316 3 місяці тому +27

    I really, really hope this isn’t just another story that keeps us hanging. I know that Creepypasta’s often end without a conclusion to allow the listener to speculate on what may happen next, but I feel like more and more every single one I listen to on this channel just ends abruptly. It was a great start to what could be a good story though…

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому +2

      Jen
      I always liked the idea of Creepypasta Stories getting sequels I like Sequels.

    • @jentinkers1316
      @jentinkers1316 3 місяці тому

      @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 I definitely hope there’s a sequel, I love them too, but I don’t know if there will be with this story. I’ll keep my fingers crossed…🤞😊

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому

      @@jentinkers1316
      Yeah and I like movie sequels to my favorite movies and childhood animated movies too.

  • @UndeadGhostGirl
    @UndeadGhostGirl 3 місяці тому +6

    *Pretty* sure that was supposed to be six inches, not six feet. The surgical cut was six inches, it was in the narrator's stomach, the hand is described as being fully grown but tiny, etc. Still, can't fault the literal narrator for reading what's written.

    • @nevermorehollows
      @nevermorehollows Місяць тому

      I caught that too. But it was still great! Well narrated other than that.

  • @tonithetiger6226
    @tonithetiger6226 3 місяці тому +8

    sukuna creepypasta

  • @BradStarnes
    @BradStarnes 3 місяці тому +17

    A bit of body horror's always interesting to me. Just something about it.

    • @nevermorehollows
      @nevermorehollows Місяць тому

      Not typically a fan of body horror. But this one was great!

  • @VindictiveShadowWolf
    @VindictiveShadowWolf 3 місяці тому +6

    *Holy shit*. This is definitely one of those creepypastas that I only come across once every blue moon, and it's absolutely terrifying. This one is clearly a gem! And as always, you narrated it so beautifully.

    • @nevermorehollows
      @nevermorehollows Місяць тому

      Agreed! I wasn't expecting this. Even though I'm not typically a body horror guy. This was great!

  • @HiroshiMizushima
    @HiroshiMizushima 3 місяці тому +25

    On the surface, listening to the guy describe his ADD and OCD sounds kinda ridiculous. That aside I found the story pretty compelling up until the tailend when it feels like the writer had to force some sorta angle. Like, couldn't what happened have been enough for the story? Did they need to take a sharp detour into paranoia/jealousy town only to abruptly end it?

    • @scout9237
      @scout9237 3 місяці тому +5

      How was him describing his ADHD and OCD ridiculous?

    • @kishaa819
      @kishaa819 3 місяці тому +3

      I don’t know, I kind of liked it. Sure it’d be great as a shorter story with just the beginning and middle, but I liked the end too.

    • @draw2death421
      @draw2death421 3 місяці тому

      Its kinda relatable to me. Not to this extend but partly still.

  • @squirlis1189
    @squirlis1189 3 місяці тому +14

    This story gives me ptsd of getting appendicitis. That shit almost ended me a few years back and felt like someone was stabbing me in the guts for hours...good creepypasta

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 місяці тому +2

      I think Appendicitis was the first time I told my Mom that I felt like I was going to die. It was probably the worst pain I had ever experienced.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому

      ​@@EternityUnknown
      What's Appendicitis?

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 місяці тому

      @@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 When the appendix gets inflamed and expands causing pressure on the large intestine. If the appendix bursts, it can be fatal.

    • @YUN6_V3NUZ
      @YUN6_V3NUZ Місяць тому

      ​@@EternityUnknown does an inflamed gallbladder do this too?

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown Місяць тому

      @@YUN6_V3NUZ I'd guess so, but the pressure would probably be on the liver. If any organ in your body bursts, then it's probably fatal. Lol.

  • @ZedMazaus480
    @ZedMazaus480 3 місяці тому +13

    (shwarzinager voice) "It's not a toomma!!"
    Yeah, that'd make me paranoid level suspicious too. Something is seriously wrong there.
    Thanks for another fantastically chilling tale. 😮❤

    • @kathrynbillinghurst188
      @kathrynbillinghurst188 3 місяці тому +2

      Well said…Arnie!
      Lols…😅👍
      👏👏👏

    • @roden70
      @roden70 3 місяці тому +2

      It's Schwarzenegger. You're not even close.

  • @ElderJack-ye7sb
    @ElderJack-ye7sb 3 місяці тому +9

    "And what does it want?!" Bro, the protagonist needs to calm down. Its a dying '6-foot' (what?) fetus with 1 arm and no head. The writer didn't mention anything to suggest supernatural or alien elements. I suspect the writer is just young and still new. Hopefully they continue growing their skills as they write more.

  • @MystiShroom
    @MystiShroom 3 місяці тому +9

    I should have waited to listen to this until after my stomach ache was gone

  • @bungerimpact
    @bungerimpact 3 місяці тому +5

    Ain't no way this is how I find out what I've got going on is called tocophobia lmao

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 3 місяці тому +5

    26:45 that’s odd for the hospital to have to sign an NDA about a medical anomaly? It’s usually in the best interest for any type of strange case to be shared worldwide so if it were to happen again, at least it would not be unprecedented. And they could have some kind of basic understanding and knowledge about it. Makes no sense.

    • @VictorRobotov00
      @VictorRobotov00 3 місяці тому +2

      Yeah, I agree. And could they even get the patient sign and go along with all this. Technically, it’d be his property.

    • @stinkwalker
      @stinkwalker 3 місяці тому +1

      That part was unbelievable yea, not to mention due to HIPAA law medical staff can’t disclose personal conditions anyway so the most that could be done would be as you said, without naming the patient.

  • @jackdurden466
    @jackdurden466 3 місяці тому +4

    Ending was a huge miss. Without a sequel, it’ll be long forgotten. So let’s hope for a better sequel than the first part.

  • @lyndellrobinson3611
    @lyndellrobinson3611 3 місяці тому +5

    Probably not the best thing to listen to when nauseated with a tummy ache. 😂

  • @46PsychoFox64
    @46PsychoFox64 3 місяці тому +9

    I can't believe I was tricked into listening to a pro-choice MPreg story.

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 місяці тому

      Yeah, really. Cus people don't talk about Men's rights anymore. Why don't us men get abortions. It's our state right to make doctors rip 6 foot tumors out of our stomachs!

  • @beloveduser
    @beloveduser 3 місяці тому +12

    his OCD hatched...

  • @Coyoteari
    @Coyoteari 3 місяці тому +5

    Damn I wish I could just get rushed to the hospital & get my tokophobia removed.
    Guess I gotta save up for a hysterectomy the normal way 😪

  • @bizzyizzy9526
    @bizzyizzy9526 3 місяці тому +5

    At first It sounded like he had an alien xenomorph inside of him 👽

  • @Sumdumbas12
    @Sumdumbas12 3 місяці тому +2

    I’ve been thinking about Jonas Venture Jr since throughout the entire video

  • @stonedjasonvoorhees5959
    @stonedjasonvoorhees5959 3 місяці тому +7

    I ain't no taco man that's for sure

    • @logmaster27
      @logmaster27 3 місяці тому +4

      Phew…I was trying to find you…thought you didn’t make it to this one…what a relief.

    • @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376
      @katelynthewhitewerewolf6376 3 місяці тому +1

      ​@@logmaster27
      Sweet

  • @kathrynbillinghurst188
    @kathrynbillinghurst188 3 місяці тому +2

    My OCD phobia is dog slobber! 🤢

  • @darthderek
    @darthderek 3 місяці тому +6

    Two CreepsMcPasta videos in one week? Hell yeah!

  • @sime3690
    @sime3690 2 місяці тому +1

    This is similar to The Venture Bros Season 1 Episode 13 - Return to Spider-Skull Island
    Except this is more Creeper and mess up

  • @notyobltch9231
    @notyobltch9231 3 місяці тому +1

    I have an important job interview tomorrow, please wish me luck n pray I get the job, thank yall sm 🙏🏻💪🏻😮‍💨

  • @conedome6845
    @conedome6845 3 місяці тому +13

    This has to be one of my favorites you’ve done in a while!!! The craziness of it all makes me wanna see a scientist perspective or something. I hope the author continues it!!

    • @RiDankulous
      @RiDankulous 3 місяці тому +1

      The buildup was good, but also I think it’s important that it wasn’t too long. It was the right length.

    • @notcomfortable_here
      @notcomfortable_here 3 місяці тому +2

      @@RiDankulousno way man, most of my favorite creepypastas are 1+ hours!!

    • @conedome6845
      @conedome6845 3 місяці тому

      @@notcomfortable_here exactly why I need them to continue it w longer story!!

  • @MarieStone-y5j
    @MarieStone-y5j 3 місяці тому +3

    This needs a 2nd part to it please

  • @jonathancunningham786
    @jonathancunningham786 3 місяці тому +16

    Anyone else think Biden sucks

  • @Flamsterette
    @Flamsterette 3 місяці тому +3

    Thanks for the upload.

  • @bethanyhaffey975
    @bethanyhaffey975 Місяць тому +1

    Spoiler alert!
    CONGRATULATIONS YOU'VE GOT A BASKETCASE TWIN!!!!

  • @arsacyclopentadiene6865
    @arsacyclopentadiene6865 3 місяці тому +3

    Damn

  • @REDDeadFishy
    @REDDeadFishy 3 місяці тому +1

    I must have a twin instead of a beer gut, makes way more sense

  • @JanaSzIsBasicGlitch
    @JanaSzIsBasicGlitch 3 місяці тому +2

    Woof, ouch

  • @jairgami
    @jairgami 3 місяці тому +1

    When you thought you'd heard it all😅

  • @al145
    @al145 3 місяці тому +1

    Me when I've made food or booze mistakes, and it becomes the day of reckoning

  • @kellygoetzke6905
    @kellygoetzke6905 3 місяці тому +2

    Yay! This made my day

  • @alicemilton8756
    @alicemilton8756 3 місяці тому +1

    🌮 tacophobia 🌮

  • @druidictroy1157
    @druidictroy1157 3 місяці тому +1

    The constant pain I have in my legs gets so bad that there is around an hour of each day where my internal monologue is just a loud scream! It sucks! 😒😵‍💫😫😵

  • @farixxx5555
    @farixxx5555 3 місяці тому +1

    This needs a part 2 lol

  • @Dr_1212
    @Dr_1212 3 місяці тому +1

    😈

  • @jazzbutterworth
    @jazzbutterworth 2 місяці тому

    The origins of this creepypasta are actually true. There was a case about an Indian man that had his partially developed twin brother inside of him for decades until doctors were finally able to remove it.

  • @NicholasSorrells
    @NicholasSorrells 2 місяці тому

    This violates all sorts of medical ethics, consult a lawyer about your rights. You can't be forced to sign an NDA, and rights regarding your medical information are some of the most stringent and comprehensive in the world. Good luck!

  • @aotuxx
    @aotuxx 2 місяці тому

    It doesn’t want anything I think it simply just exists 😂
    I don’t think they can actually be alive tho, I’d like to know fs. More or less it’s just a dead morsel of flesh inside of you.
    Fetus in Fetu is a really creepy and gross condition

  • @gingersnapps
    @gingersnapps 3 місяці тому

    This reminds me of how I felt when suffering a ruptured gallbladder. It was horrible i thought my bottem half was going to slide apart from each other and when i got to the Emergency room the doctors took one look at me and paniced because my kidneys were shutting down and my eyes were pure yellow,!! Very scary but at least it wasn't this guys problem...yikes

  • @pataki2666
    @pataki2666 3 місяці тому +1

    Egg crêpespaste

  • @notyobltch9231
    @notyobltch9231 3 місяці тому

    I have an important job interview tomorrow creeps, please wish me luck, and pray I get the job 😂😭💪🏻 ly all

  • @tnwtr7097
    @tnwtr7097 3 місяці тому

    This was really good, actually it may in the top 1 or 2 spot on this channel for me. Very entertaining and attention grabbing. Just what it's supposed to do. Thanks

  • @brianvannorman1465
    @brianvannorman1465 3 місяці тому

    I'm the kind of asshole that won't entertain the pronoun game. I don't have to play pretend with whoever is suffering from that delusion.

  • @TheDarknessDiaries
    @TheDarknessDiaries 3 місяці тому +1

    Ooohhhh I like this so far

  • @Megrov
    @Megrov 3 місяці тому +4

    Story is great, except the pronouns part.

    • @EternityUnknown
      @EternityUnknown 3 місяці тому +1

      Yeah, really. It wasn't bad until they had to lecture us on the most authoritatively abused psyop in modern history.

  • @alexandriav3956
    @alexandriav3956 3 місяці тому

    I called it from the beginning! I generally wouldn’t have listened to this story based on the title but it auto played from the last one and I’m glad it did!

  • @victoredgefield141
    @victoredgefield141 2 місяці тому

    I have to add. It or He had some consciousness it wanted to be out of that poor kids body. I figure if it were evil it or he would want to stay.

  • @AlexielHellsing2
    @AlexielHellsing2 3 місяці тому

    I'm not going to lie the narrator has a right to his feelings but the fact is that the twin isn't accepted by the family is really sad.

  • @nirriii
    @nirriii 17 днів тому

    Extra bad case of the Hinamizawa syndrome. 💀

  • @danajones9631
    @danajones9631 3 місяці тому

    😳 I've read stories and seen movies about this very thing, thanks Creeps it was interesting .

  • @shenronsamma4650
    @shenronsamma4650 2 місяці тому

    something terrifyn bout havn sonthing hellish n ur body dat shouldnt be there 👀

  • @warrsythe7929
    @warrsythe7929 3 місяці тому +1

    Rev up your engines!

  • @TemplarOrder
    @TemplarOrder 3 місяці тому

    I can’t tell is this is supposed to be a ani-abortion or a pro abortion creepypasta

  • @noahhecker6672
    @noahhecker6672 2 місяці тому

    Jesus Christ. Body horror never fails to freak me the hell out

  • @chryssmetzler2098
    @chryssmetzler2098 3 місяці тому

    And I thought malignant was messed up.

  • @vividesiles3763
    @vividesiles3763 3 місяці тому +1

    Fascinating story

  • @KentuckyBlue502
    @KentuckyBlue502 3 місяці тому

    You better love your twin brother ❤️

  • @VictorRobotov00
    @VictorRobotov00 3 місяці тому

    Wow, what a basket case. *snickers*

  • @Billy-xi7iu
    @Billy-xi7iu 3 місяці тому

    I have ENJOYED you doing the stories. Your great channel is the bomb!!! . I fall asleep to the stories EVERY night. A happy customer 😎🤙🏽

  • @stephenhunt2666
    @stephenhunt2666 3 місяці тому +1

    Pass on this one

  • @lingaustin2854
    @lingaustin2854 3 місяці тому

    It’s the human equivalent of a cuckoo bird…they lay their eggs in other birds’ nests essentially forcing those birds to raise their offspring

  • @JimmmyRaynor
    @JimmmyRaynor 3 місяці тому

    something that shocked me to my very core was when I was transporting a platinum chip through the mojave when a man in a checkered suit named Benny told me the game was rigged from the start before shooting me

  • @tabithaerinlane6914
    @tabithaerinlane6914 3 місяці тому

    As someone who absorbed their twin due to birth defects this is terrifying.

  • @thedevilman.
    @thedevilman. 3 місяці тому

    0:03 YES! THIS VIDEO, the start is literally the same situation rn with me.

  • @darkangel6742
    @darkangel6742 3 місяці тому

    Part 2????

  • @victoredgefield141
    @victoredgefield141 2 місяці тому

    Awesome

  • @uvbe
    @uvbe 3 місяці тому

    part 2?

  • @taylorfain6957
    @taylorfain6957 3 місяці тому

    Well we are gonna chalk that up to a new fear.

  • @LeoHark
    @LeoHark 3 місяці тому

    "It turn out it was my own fart"

  • @-JA-
    @-JA- 3 місяці тому

    🖤👍

  • @IsolationLifts
    @IsolationLifts 3 місяці тому +2

    How feminists think of babies

  • @roden70
    @roden70 3 місяці тому

    Great story and top notch narration!

  • @Coyoteari
    @Coyoteari 3 місяці тому +1

    Pro choice creepypasta is actually based af

  • @wewerewerewolves4979
    @wewerewerewolves4979 3 місяці тому

    Great story

  • @roden70
    @roden70 3 місяці тому

    Great story!

  • @Goldwodka
    @Goldwodka 3 місяці тому

    Thx a lot!!!

  • @pNEPic99
    @pNEPic99 3 місяці тому +1

    "I've never been the kind of person not to respect pronouns-" Okay author, nice virtue signal lmao

  • @sshreddderr9409
    @sshreddderr9409 2 місяці тому +1

    for the love of God, cut the woke propaganda out of those stories. These videos become unwatchable when poisoned with this evil crap

    • @PorkSzoda
      @PorkSzoda 2 місяці тому +1

      What are you talking about 💀💀

    • @sshreddderr9409
      @sshreddderr9409 2 місяці тому +1

      @@PorkSzoda the fact that you did not notice it during the story means that you are already too brainwashed to reason with

    • @PorkSzoda
      @PorkSzoda 2 місяці тому

      @@sshreddderr9409 bruh its a piece of creative writing, no shet the author is gonna insert their own views and opinions. Just dont watch it snowflake

  • @MrShArInGaNKAMI
    @MrShArInGaNKAMI 3 місяці тому