Otis Jiry, you sir truly are a master narrator and the authenticity you put into your voice as if actually in the shoes of these stories' characters does admittedly chill me at points. Story telling, to me, has always been as much an art as writing because a narrator understands the material and how the mind will react to the way it is spoken. This ability to manipulate the psyche into indulging the plot and becoming immersed in its twists takes talent. I for one hope to share my stories with people one day as well in film, though I have considered thoughts for books here and there. Bless you Mr. Jiry, and please keep up the great work.
Keith Harris Thank you Keith, and good luck with your efforts. I don't know if you know or not, but Chilling Tales For Dark Nights, has a monthly story competition. You might consider entering a tale or two. I do on occasion, narrate some of the submissions. Bless you.
Thank you so much for getting back to me. Please don't think for one split second I'm not listening to you every day & or night as I fall asleep. You've never before disappointed me. Like you've said it was over a long period of time put together. It definitely shows you care about your listeners. The way you do your reading pulls me into the stories like if I was right there watching or experiencing it. I'm always hanging on your next word. Thank you again for being the man you are, taking your time to scare me.. I LOVE IT!!
The MOST AMAZING THING about all your readings is YOUR VOICE. You have a way to draw us in TOTALLY captivating. The stories you choose are equally captivating. I'm Always looking forward to hearing your voice on the next read. You know what is scary & will hold our attention. Thank you. You're a blessing late at night when I put on my headphones & fall asleep to your stories. . If course I listen to them over & over. Thank you for choosing to read to ME. . Good night & sweet dreams.
Hooray! A happy ending! This story was awesome! This should be a film! Horror, of course. It's certainly long enough to be one. Otis should, if not play the main character when he's older, then at LEAST serve as narrator!
Those monster/ghosts make me think of the demon from Insidious 3. I can't understand why parents are so quick to dismiss night terrors, or anything else, that has their child(ren)losing sleep and looking sickly? Every excuse seems to be, "Oh, we can't leave, because our funds are exhausted", which, I totally get. The most important thing, and number one fact... those are their babies, and nobody living or dead, has the right to hurt them. I know this is a story(wonderful story, and one of my favorites)but evil is real, and it comes in many different forms. Innocent children are no exceptions, so they should be protected. Wonderful narration, Mr. Jiry!
I so LOVE how you read your stories. You make sure I get pulled in. Thank you. I have no idea why or what was going through your mind, but with this story was disappointing. You read so fast I couldn't get into it. You've always had hesitation & that's what draws your listeners in. Along with the tone of your voice makes every story SCARY. That's exactly what I'm looking forward to, being scared. Nothing much scares me, supernatural, or whatever. I've experienced so SO MUCH in my 49 years of life it's almost impossible to scare me. . Even though I LOVE LISTENING TO YOU. PLEASE next story.... Take your time, draw me in, give me a chance (what I really want) to be scared. Thank you... . Susie
+susie o'hanlon I'm sorry to disappoint you. This story, mind you, was recorded over several days in parts and then assembled together. Also, it was recorded well over a year ago. I sincerely hope you mind my more recent material more to your liking! Bless you.
Please don't think you've disappointed me in anymore then this single one.. I love so far everything I've listened to, but this one. I will definitely keep listening & looking forward to more from you.
I love your stories Otis! your voice fits in to them so well and adds the athmosphere and makes it exciting to listen to, you sir are a legend! (sorry for my bad english)
Years ago I was a news/sportscaster, plus I do audiobooks, commercials, eLearning and other voice acting genres. I've also done some movie work and video games.
Coffee Cat In a vague sort of way, yes. It kind of felt like the game was trying to use the story (literally putting in the text) to "improve" the game. Not that it was all bad. There were some good concepts, like the demonic face slowly forming on the screen, but it wasn't overly remarkable.
Dick Fungus ah yes Mr.Dick fungus do you take Mr.Jiry voice DF: I do AND DO YOU Mr.Jiry voice do you take Me.Dick fungus to be your lawfully wedded husband?..... JV:I do! And they lived happily ever after
Bedtime with my step-daughter is a nightmare. She's 8 now and has been this way since she was 5. Every night she says "Papa, ich will noch nicht ins Bett gehen." I don't want to go to bed yet.
+Dodil Gamez I often wonder myself. I'm hoping everyone who likes my work subs and then shares with everyone they know. That will definitely help. Bless you.
+Otis Jiry I will definitely show you to others. Your voice makes me wanna sleep... But in a good way. I can never usually sleep but this is so... soothing. Even the scary stories. But I remember to listen to the whole thing afterwards the next day or in parts, because of some of the long videos.
marxsman115. Sniper Thank you for the suggestion. More subs would be a wonderful Christmas present. As far as this being a game, I am not sure if that is the case. I haven't heard of anything regarding that. Bless you.
My mother:"why do you listen to horror stories to get to sleep?it will only give u nightmares" Me:"nah it keeps the nightmares away" My mum who starts to think about how dark my nightmares must be and does not know how to respond:"oh ok aslong as you look after yourself"
I'm confused, wasn't there two of these monsters? Didn't the parents confront it too? Several holes. Also mary left him after that one false accusation?
Mary left him because she thought he attacked her, you should not let something like that wrong I mean sure he didn't do it but it would be such a hard thing to convince her that a monster did it. Also it makes for a better story
Look here, this is why kids get traumatized, and need therapy ain't no ghost/demon getting more than one or two opportunities to scare my tail. Then I leave that place altogether, mom and Dad can sleep with me or get rid of the bed and I have NO Problem telling my parents the bed they got me was haunted. Not speaking leaves you open to more victimization that includes more than just being haunted.
food for thought science conveniently ignores over two thousand years of oral and written tradition of things that go bump in the night (dismissed as the ravings of 'primitives') but.. if you compare all the stories to all the others from all the other civilizations and cultures around the world you will find that they share far too many similarities add all the accounts and blurry photos (some of which haven't been disproven ) and you start seeing a trend... and i wont argue about this but there IS evidence and if you think about this quote ' once is chance twice is coincidence three times is enemy action then modify it like iv'e sen it done so it reads 'once is chance twice is coincidence three times is a pattern' then take that into account ...what do you think the countless legends , folk tales , oral traditions and first hand accounts all uncomfortably similar to each other all mean now ? >_>
+komori88 Consider that at night everything is silent so any active sound stands out rather loudly. Houses, apartments, furniture, electrical appliance's, all make a creaking noise at night. TV especially. It happens because warm/cold is changing during the night. I have lost hours of sleep scanning my room for the reason of this cracking noise as a child. Then during the night your mind get's a better of you. You get paranoid, you start imagining things in the dark... And that is in a safe environment, now consider you are out camping in the woods or in a cave like our primitive ancestors were. Branches falling in the woods, animals walking around, wind blowing..and you don't see into the darkness. Only your imagination to fill up the blanks of what you can't see! When you input into account that we come from species that were and as early humans were hunted and killed for food by predators there is a good reason to have a healthy fear of dark! As we are rather weak, cant see well in the dark (if at all), most predators are active at night. No wonder that the dark holds such hold on our psychi. Night presented a very real danger to us before. We are maybe not hunted by predators for food today (most of us that is) but that fear and instinct that served us well in our past is still within our genes. So, while is "romantic" to view ghosts as something that may be real, but it's complete bullshit. Everything we know about nature tells us that this can not exist.
Aemon21 and science used to think the world flat and flight impossible just because we can't detect something with current technology does not mean that spiritual phenomena doesn't exist and 'everything we know' changes all the time the absence of evidence is not the evidence of absence say what you will I'm not going to close my mind about possibilities
+komori88 Actually, science is the act of running repeatable experiments and gathering evidence to prove or disprove hypothesis. And I don't think your argument really stands, have you watched the history channel lately? There are plenty of people looking into what you are talking about. Then, I think the flat world thing was just specifically Europe during a short time(the ancient Greeks knew the earth was round) and was a belief perpetuated by ignorance not scientific support. As for flight being impossible, check out Da Vinci. I agree that you should never just believe what someone tells you, but if you tell me there are monsters out there, just because a lot of people have said so, I'm going to say show me the (*car*) facts.
agg adfgawdgv No. Just a scorch mark on the wall in the shape of a man. It may be alive, but it was unlikely to ever face him again. Not after nearly dying twice.
Perfect example of a typical creepypasta pitfall: unnecessary follow-ups to the story. I respect Whitehouse as a storyteller and think he's written good stories, I also love Otis Jiry's voice and narration, but dear god does this story go downhill after the first part. I still hold the original Bedtime as one of the best creepypastas of all time - it hits all the right marks, it's brilliant. It's an amazing mixture of good writing with a simple yet relatable childhood fear played out with class and amazing subtlety. It's creepy, smart, subtle and charming, what more could you possibly ask out of a creepypasta? Then the story is basically turned into run of the mill zero-subtlety monster creepypasta number 1930587395. Shows the monster, describes him, turns the childhood relatable fear into some sort of obsession on the part of the ghost, throws in plenty of cringe and angst. Jesus... The first two follow-ups are already kind of sub-par but the last two, holy crap man. I'd like to add Otis' narration of the first part to my good creepypastas playlist but the others are so bad I'm just going to find some narration that is divided by parts.
Seriously, commercials. I made it through the first part. Great voice+ story but as soon as I fall asleep commercials. I have to physically turn them off or they continue on and on, it's so annoying. I used to subscribe but had the same problems listening to Playlist so I thought I would give it a try again.
+Stephen Jordan If you're promoting using adblock, I'd prefer you not listen to anything I've done and go rip off other narrators. Sorry to be blunt, but you're not entitled to prevent us from making an income from our hard work.
+Otis Jiry that was not my intention sir. I am not fully aware how that all works. I personally have trouble with my computer due to the ads. I never realized thats how you gain money from the videos.
Jasmine Moore This story may have been in a published book, because I work closely with Scottish author Micheal Whitehouse who has several titles on Amazon.com I have done a few of his works in the past and will do more in the future.
I was hoping for a monster wolf/werewolf as there is one at the thumbnail but it seems this is a ghost story... Shame but ok... Werewolf is a scarier material then ghosts.
i don't like this story. it would be better if it ended at part one, but the author decided to ruin it and milk the idea for all it was worth. I'm sure a lot of people like it, just i don't.
Patrick DaMao Thank you for you opinion, Patrick. Actually part one is not a separate story, but the beginning only of the full short story. It's always just been broken down that way by narrators who don't want to do the full story. Bless you.
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I love listening to Michael Whitehouse but hearing to your voice narrating his story, I'm going to enjoy listening to you as well.
Otis Jiry, you sir truly are a master narrator and the authenticity you put into your voice as if actually in the shoes of these stories' characters does admittedly chill me at points. Story telling, to me, has always been as much an art as writing because a narrator understands the material and how the mind will react to the way it is spoken. This ability to manipulate the psyche into indulging the plot and becoming immersed in its twists takes talent. I for one hope to share my stories with people one day as well in film, though I have considered thoughts for books here and there. Bless you Mr. Jiry, and please keep up the great work.
Keith Harris Thank you Keith, and good luck with your efforts. I don't know if you know or not, but Chilling Tales For Dark Nights, has a monthly story competition. You might consider entering a tale or two. I do on occasion, narrate some of the submissions. Bless you.
Thank you so much for getting back to me. Please don't think for one split second I'm not listening to you every day & or night as I fall asleep. You've never before disappointed me. Like you've said it was over a long period of time put together. It definitely shows you care about your listeners. The way you do your reading pulls me into the stories like if I was right there watching or experiencing it. I'm always hanging on your next word. Thank you again for being the man you are, taking your time to scare me.. I LOVE IT!!
Michael Whitehouse + Otis Jiry = Best
Otis you have a way of telling stories that brings them to life, you always pull me into the story and keep me listening. Thank you and bless you
+Nightmare Freddy What a kind comment! Thank you for listening and for choosing me to entertain you.
+Otis Jiry you are very welcome otis I hope all is well with you and those around you and happy Halloween when it comes friend
Awesome reading Otis
Tyvm... Excellent author & you are a master at storytelling!
Amazing! Thank you so much
The MOST AMAZING THING about all your readings is YOUR VOICE. You have a way to draw us in TOTALLY captivating. The stories you choose are equally captivating. I'm Always looking forward to hearing your voice on the next read. You know what is scary & will hold our attention. Thank you. You're a blessing late at night when I put on my headphones & fall asleep to your stories. . If course I listen to them over & over. Thank you for choosing to read to ME. . Good night & sweet dreams.
Hooray! A happy ending! This story was awesome!
This should be a film! Horror, of course. It's certainly long enough to be one. Otis should, if not play the main character when he's older, then at LEAST serve as narrator!
manegirl93416 I think there is a game based on this pasta, one of them RPG pixel style ones I'm pretty sure.
Yep. Markiplier played some of it.
+manegirl93416 LOL I don't know how much older you want me to be. I'm 59 now LOL Bless you
God bless you too! You sound like a very nice guy.
manegirl93416
Those monster/ghosts make me think of the demon from Insidious 3. I can't understand why parents are so quick to dismiss night terrors, or anything else, that has their child(ren)losing sleep and looking sickly? Every excuse seems to be, "Oh, we can't leave, because our funds are exhausted", which, I totally get. The most important thing, and number one fact... those are their babies, and nobody living or dead, has the right to hurt them. I know this is a story(wonderful story, and one of my favorites)but evil is real, and it comes in many different forms. Innocent children are no exceptions, so they should be protected. Wonderful narration, Mr. Jiry!
Faith Ruckdeschel You don’t mean to imply this could be a real thing?
I so LOVE how you read your stories. You make sure I get pulled in. Thank you. I have no idea why or what was going through your mind, but with this story was disappointing. You read so fast I couldn't get into it. You've always had hesitation & that's what draws your listeners in. Along with the tone of your voice makes every story SCARY. That's exactly what I'm looking forward to, being scared. Nothing much scares me, supernatural, or whatever. I've experienced so SO MUCH in my 49 years of life it's almost impossible to scare me. . Even though I LOVE LISTENING TO YOU. PLEASE next story.... Take your time, draw me in, give me a chance (what I really want) to be scared. Thank you... . Susie
+susie o'hanlon I'm sorry to disappoint you. This story, mind you, was recorded over several days in parts and then assembled together. Also, it was recorded well over a year ago. I sincerely hope you mind my more recent material more to your liking! Bless you.
+Otis Jiry Otis plz don't be sorry your a legend.
Please don't think you've disappointed me in anymore then this single one.. I love so far everything I've listened to, but this one. I will definitely keep listening & looking forward to more from you.
Your voice is like butter, smooth and wonderful. I cannot help but love everything you read to us.
+jadefox33445 Thank you for the kind words. Bless you.
Great story and very well read. Thank you, Mr Jiry: You never fail to intrigue us
well, listening to this in bed, alone in darkness was not the best idea. well read
You made a fine choise in picking this one up Mr Jiry, good narration to!
The first part was definitely the best of them, but it still had a pretty satisfying ending.
Loved revisiting this particular creepypasta. Thank you, yet again, for the awesome reads, Otis!
Kevin M. Thank you Kevin. It's a very good tale, and good to hear in it's entirety.
Heard before but worth a second listen just to hear master jiry 👌👍🇬🇧
Excellent Narration as always 🦋
I love your voice Mr. Ottis Jiry..great story too
That was quite a nicely made story.
Amazing! Would make an excellent horror movie.
I love your stories Otis! your voice fits in to them so well and adds the athmosphere and makes it exciting to listen to, you sir are a legend! (sorry for my bad english)
You sir got a new subscriber!! I have showed my friends all of these stories!
Otis, what did you do before becoming such a superb narriator ? it's hard to imagine you doing anything else.
Years ago I was a news/sportscaster, plus I do audiobooks, commercials, eLearning and other voice acting genres. I've also done some movie work and video games.
Excellent story! Richly descriptive and so real. Your voice is similar to Donald Sutherland, very pleasant to listen to 😌
Wasn't this made into part of the creepypasta game? it vaguely seems familiar... excellent work as usual, Mr. Jiry. Bravo!
Coffee Cat In a vague sort of way, yes. It kind of felt like the game was trying to use the story (literally putting in the text) to "improve" the game. Not that it was all bad. There were some good concepts, like the demonic face slowly forming on the screen, but it wasn't overly remarkable.
Why?! Why do I listen to these stories before bed?! 😩
Epic is right! Bravo to all!
Simply amazing story and a great voice.
+fullor Thank you, and bless you!
I've always wanted stories read to me by Kenny Roger's. This is awesome
I love your voice it makes me sleepy and some of the story's you read i have dreams about lol ur kinda like a bad reading a bed time story thx alot
Otis jiry you are the best
Mr. Jiry if I could marry your voice I would do it in a heartbeat.
Dick Fungus ah yes Mr.Dick fungus do you take Mr.Jiry voice DF: I do AND DO YOU Mr.Jiry voice do you take Me.Dick fungus to be your lawfully wedded husband?..... JV:I do! And they lived happily ever after
Listening to this and the only thing that comes to mind...Golem. He wants his preciousssssssss.
Great story telling Otis! I assume it was just bringing it over into UA-cam but there's some audio skipping at 1:03:00 area.
Probably shouldn't have listened to this as something to help me sleep. O_o
There is just one problem. The watcher is still there.
You should read the origin of laughing jack by snuffbomb.
Bedtime with my step-daughter is a nightmare. She's 8 now and has been this way since she was 5.
Every night she says "Papa, ich will noch nicht ins Bett gehen." I don't want to go to bed yet.
Awesome voice/awesome story.... Why don't you have more subs :D
+Dodil Gamez I often wonder myself. I'm hoping everyone who likes my work subs and then shares with everyone they know. That will definitely help. Bless you.
+Otis Jiry I will definitely show you to others. Your voice makes me wanna sleep... But in a good way. I can never usually sleep but this is so... soothing. Even the scary stories. But I remember to listen to the whole thing afterwards the next day or in parts, because of some of the long videos.
this guys needs more subs and one more thing did thay make a game out of this i think markiplier played this?
marxsman115. Sniper Thank you for the suggestion. More subs would be a wonderful Christmas present. As far as this being a game, I am not sure if that is the case. I haven't heard of anything regarding that. Bless you.
all good my friend keep up the good work
Otis Jiry's Creepypasta Crypt this guy it really nice i like him i want to hear more creepypasta from this guy
I have an upcoming story by MW next month. He is a very good writer and I enjoy narrating Michael's stories.
epic cant wait
I did not rip her hair out... I DID NOT!
...oh hi Mark.
hahahahahahahahaha Oh man The Room.
crap forgot to say this story is what got me thinking about this
I was like wtf are you talking about... Oh...
My mother:"why do you listen to horror stories to get to sleep?it will only give u nightmares"
Me:"nah it keeps the nightmares away"
My mum who starts to think about how dark my nightmares must be and does not know how to respond:"oh ok aslong as you look after yourself"
Aaaaaaaaaand I’m not sleeping.
God damn this was refreshing after a bunch of crappy creepy pastas
+Vincent Savoretti This is one of the very best. Thanks for listening! It was a doozy to record this one.
I'm confused, wasn't there two of these monsters? Didn't the parents confront it too? Several holes. Also mary left him after that one false accusation?
Mary left him because she thought he attacked her, you should not let something like that wrong I mean sure he didn't do it but it would be such a hard thing to convince her that a monster did it. Also it makes for a better story
That was so dumb to return there. Edit: just finish the story, not bad at all!! many dumb decisions xD, but in all I was on edge from start to finish.
Is the tighter English/Irish/Scottish/Welsh? The way he writes seems British~
If that's a thing....
* writer.
Janine Hosë He is Scottish
It's a thing... lol
When i first heard the narrator's voice, i thought of Morgan Freeman haha!
Fatima L You're not alone Fatima, if I had a nickle for everyone who has said this, I could retire .... well, for about two weeks anyway :)
Otis Jiry's Creepypasta Crypt haha nice! Well, it's a compliment ofcourse! Morgan Freeman has an amazing voice :)
Otis Jiry you are so cool
Good choice miss... And thats not dirty...
1:27:11 heard this while on Cod Black Ops Zombies lol.
It's 10am I m in my bed, house full of kids and hubby am scared to death!!!
Look here, this is why kids get traumatized, and need therapy ain't no ghost/demon getting more than one or two opportunities to scare my tail. Then I leave that place altogether, mom and Dad can sleep with me or get rid of the bed and I have NO Problem telling my parents the bed they got me was haunted. Not speaking leaves you open to more victimization that includes more than just being haunted.
Why can no one pronounce "Disorienting" correctly?
food for thought
science conveniently ignores over two thousand years of oral and written tradition of things that go bump in the night (dismissed as the ravings of 'primitives') but.. if you compare all the stories to all the others from all the other civilizations and cultures around the world you will find that they share far too many similarities add all the accounts and blurry photos (some of which haven't been disproven ) and you start seeing a trend... and i wont argue about this but there IS evidence and if you think about this quote
' once is chance twice is coincidence three times is enemy action
then modify it like iv'e sen it done so it reads
'once is chance twice is coincidence three times is a pattern'
then take that into account ...what do you think the countless legends , folk tales , oral traditions and first hand accounts all uncomfortably similar to each other all mean now ? >_>
+komori88 Consider that at night everything is silent so any active sound stands out rather loudly.
Houses, apartments, furniture, electrical appliance's, all make a creaking noise at night. TV especially.
It happens because warm/cold is changing during the night. I have lost hours of sleep scanning my room for the reason of this cracking noise as a child.
Then during the night your mind get's a better of you. You get paranoid, you start imagining things in the dark...
And that is in a safe environment, now consider you are out camping in the woods or in a cave like our primitive ancestors were. Branches falling in the woods, animals walking around, wind blowing..and you don't see into the darkness. Only your imagination to fill up the blanks of what you can't see!
When you input into account that we come from species that were and as early humans were hunted and killed for food by predators there is a good reason to have a healthy fear of dark! As we are rather weak, cant see well in the dark (if at all), most predators are active at night. No wonder that the dark holds such hold on our psychi. Night presented a very real danger to us before.
We are maybe not hunted by predators for food today (most of us that is) but that fear and instinct that served us well in our past is still within our genes.
So, while is "romantic" to view ghosts as something that may be real, but it's complete bullshit. Everything we know about nature tells us that this can not exist.
Aemon21 and science used to think the world flat and flight impossible just because we can't detect something with current technology does not mean that spiritual phenomena doesn't exist and 'everything we know' changes all the time
the absence of evidence is not the evidence of absence
say what you will I'm not going to close my mind about possibilities
+komori88 Actually, science is the act of running repeatable experiments and gathering evidence to prove or disprove hypothesis. And I don't think your argument really stands, have you watched the history channel lately? There are plenty of people looking into what you are talking about. Then, I think the flat world thing was just specifically Europe during a short time(the ancient Greeks knew the earth was round) and was a belief perpetuated by ignorance not scientific support. As for flight being impossible, check out Da Vinci. I agree that you should never just believe what someone tells you, but if you tell me there are monsters out there, just because a lot of people have said so, I'm going to say show me the (*car*) facts.
this wasn't bad until part eleven. so when the fire brigade showed up, did they find the demon's burnt corpse?
agg adfgawdgv No. Just a scorch mark on the wall in the shape of a man. It may be alive, but it was unlikely to ever face him again. Not after nearly dying twice.
Sad the parents didn't even say oh honey were so sorry we didn't know
Perfect example of a typical creepypasta pitfall: unnecessary follow-ups to the story. I respect Whitehouse as a storyteller and think he's written good stories, I also love Otis Jiry's voice and narration, but dear god does this story go downhill after the first part. I still hold the original Bedtime as one of the best creepypastas of all time - it hits all the right marks, it's brilliant. It's an amazing mixture of good writing with a simple yet relatable childhood fear played out with class and amazing subtlety. It's creepy, smart, subtle and charming, what more could you possibly ask out of a creepypasta? Then the story is basically turned into run of the mill zero-subtlety monster creepypasta number 1930587395. Shows the monster, describes him, turns the childhood relatable fear into some sort of obsession on the part of the ghost, throws in plenty of cringe and angst. Jesus... The first two follow-ups are already kind of sub-par but the last two, holy crap man. I'd like to add Otis' narration of the first part to my good creepypastas playlist but the others are so bad I'm just going to find some narration that is divided by parts.
kirisaki Hey, I liked the last chapter. After all the shit this thing put him through, him fighting back is a good way to end it.
Seriously, commercials. I made it through the first part. Great voice+ story but as soon as I fall asleep commercials. I have to physically turn them off or they continue on and on, it's so annoying. I used to subscribe but had the same problems listening to Playlist so I thought I would give it a try again.
+gesturestear Google Chrome add-on AdBlock Plus works really well.
+Stephen Jordan If you're promoting using adblock, I'd prefer you not listen to anything I've done and go rip off other narrators. Sorry to be blunt, but you're not entitled to prevent us from making an income from our hard work.
+Otis Jiry that was not my intention sir.
I am not fully aware how that all works. I personally have trouble with my computer due to the ads.
I never realized thats how you gain money from the videos.
+Otis Jiry just wow
WAS THIS STORY IN A BOOK SOME WHERE? IM POSITIVE I HAVE READ IT SOMEWHERE ELSE. I HOPE THIS ISNT PLAGERIZED.
Jasmine Moore This story may have been in a published book, because I work closely with Scottish author Micheal Whitehouse who has several titles on Amazon.com I have done a few of his works in the past and will do more in the future.
Jasmine Moore I'm pretty sure it was plagiarized in an rpg maker game that manlybadasshero lp'd
+Otis Jiry's Creepypasta Crypt I had no idea Michael Whitehouse was Scottish. Nice little fun fact.
I was hoping for a monster wolf/werewolf as there is one at the thumbnail but it seems this is a ghost story...
Shame but ok... Werewolf is a scarier material then ghosts.
Morgan Freeman?
Dale Kammer I wish :) Thank you for the kind compliment though.
Yes? ;)
I think he did it
😎
Why ? Why ? Don't you have a better voice for these great stories?
i don't like this story. it would be better if it ended at part one, but the author decided to ruin it and milk the idea for all it was worth. I'm sure a lot of people like it, just i don't.
Patrick DaMao Thank you for you opinion, Patrick. Actually part one is not a separate story, but the beginning only of the full short story. It's always just been broken down that way by narrators who don't want to do the full story. Bless you.
Frustratingly stupid protagonist is frustratingly stupid.
I like this story but to talk about God as if he was Santa Claus
Basic...
First.
It's not like your going to get a F###ing medal.