A HFY Story : The Girl Next Door | 2174 ~Deathworld, War, Terran and Humans

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  • @j.vincentlee9578
    @j.vincentlee9578 Рік тому +47

    Those are the kind of stories I like… adaptability and proper moral values.. Thank You.

  • @MidnightSmoke
    @MidnightSmoke Рік тому +90

    A romance story for today, well done. Here is a like and comment to help your channel grow and get you the recognition you deserve.

  • @zuzax1656
    @zuzax1656 Рік тому +172

    A wonderful story, and a thought provoking one as well. If the book that Jeremy was reading was 'The Swiss Family Robinson', then the timeframe of this universe would be approximately our current one. Given that, and the usual nature of the HFY stories narrated here, when humanity finally reaches for the stars, we would have orcs and worgs beside us, as well as dogs and cats. I can imagine a whole new branch of stories from that.

    • @evilgasm5320
      @evilgasm5320 Рік тому +11

      Excellent extrapolation!

    • @markfergerson2145
      @markfergerson2145 Рік тому +5

      @@evilgasm5320Indeed. You reading this, author?

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +14

      ​@@markfergerson2145I might dive further into this universe someday, but right now my "to be written" docket is a bit full. 😅
      Still, I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😁

    • @Sum-kj8jo
      @Sum-kj8jo Рік тому +5

      ​@@BlackJack-qg3wskeep up the good stuff

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +7

      ​@@Sum-kj8joWill do! I'm writing 4 chapters a week for my book, and 1 short story on Fridays more often than not. Got plenty of content to go! 😉

  • @beingsneaky
    @beingsneaky Рік тому +140

    Every teenage boys dream 'Marry the girl next door'

    • @mbdzel
      @mbdzel Рік тому +9

      It was 3 houses down..

    • @Kira_Laeloria
      @Kira_Laeloria Рік тому +7

      and my dad actually did so

    • @maylabrown4584
      @maylabrown4584 Рік тому +8

      I had that but it was the girl across the street to the right, I still remember her but never had the strength to tell her, but funnily enough not only did a girl across the street to the left of me apparently have a crush on me but so did a girl to my right that I also liked in return. It didn't go anywhere, her family was too different from mine and we just grew apart. I'll never forget that time though.

    • @KeithJones82
      @KeithJones82 Рік тому +3

      Until she wound up pregnant at like 15 yeah.

    • @carlfranz6805
      @carlfranz6805 Рік тому +1

      My girl next girl was a complete waistoid. Sigh.

  • @MrTiberus1701
    @MrTiberus1701 Рік тому +43

    I remember playing D&D as a young lad back in the early 80’s and wondering what Elven and Orcish girls would be like. This would be a cool world to live in.

    • @12gagebastis
      @12gagebastis Рік тому +6

      elves would maybe like us and depends on the type of orc and which universe.

  • @wngimageanddesign9546
    @wngimageanddesign9546 Рік тому +25

    Oh she was a keeper when she could build a treehouse! Like finding a human girl who can overhaul a V8.

  • @Nerdcoresteve1
    @Nerdcoresteve1 Рік тому +33

    Loving the wholesome stories like this and skeleman.

    • @GyorBox
      @GyorBox Рік тому +1

      Yes, I agree. This one and Skelleman both were a couple of good stories.

  • @nooneofimportance2110
    @nooneofimportance2110 Рік тому +74

    All jokes about orc waifus aside, I think this was a great story. Kinda hope the author expands on it a little bit more.

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +13

      It's on my list of worlds to come back to, but that's a long list! I put out 4 chapters a week to my main series, right now "Of Men and Dragons" and save Fridays for one off stories. Right now I got about 20 to 30 one offs with the bare bones jotted down waiting to be written! 😅 too many ideas and not enough time, that's a first world problem for ya!

    • @nooneofimportance2110
      @nooneofimportance2110 Рік тому +10

      @@BlackJack-qg3ws Oh Hell yes! Whenever you get the time and inspiration my dude. Quality can't be rushed, and I like what's on the page.
      I'm gonna have to check out that series.

    • @kitemaywilder1792
      @kitemaywilder1792 8 місяців тому +1

      @@BlackJack-qg3wsholding my breath hoping for a follow up too ^^

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws 8 місяців тому

      @@kitemaywilder1792 Well, I havent gotten back to this one YET. Atm I'm working on my new story, Of Men and Spiders, (lots of cute and wholsome moments with a few heavy and serious ones for spice) but a little while back I did write a two part "light horror" story about a man who suspected his girlfriend might be a wendigo that actualy ended in a pretty sweet and wholsome way. "My Girlfriend Never Eats" is part one if you wanna give it a gander.

  • @nickpossum3607
    @nickpossum3607 Рік тому +6

    As sweet as shepherd's pie, body like the farmer's daughter and can Hit like a MACK Truck!
    Jeremy, you didn't hit the Jackpot, you got the Whole Dang Slot Machine thrown at you from a moving vehicle!
    Good on yah man!

  • @jeffreyharris3440
    @jeffreyharris3440 Рік тому +7

    Terriers were bred to hunt mice, rats and other vermin. The smaller size helps to hunt around the food storage and home rather than the fields.

  • @BlackJack-qg3ws
    @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +6

    Always good to hear another one of my stories from ago! For the algorithm!

  • @timothyterrell1658
    @timothyterrell1658 Рік тому +16

    That was significantly cuter and far better done then I anticipated. Thanks for that.😂

  • @henrythered3139
    @henrythered3139 Рік тому +10

    Just lovely

  • @crazycatboysolomon7006
    @crazycatboysolomon7006 Рік тому +9

    16:05 I like to imagine that Naz wasn't actually at all concerned about the prospect of fighting in school, she just wanted to show off what she learned in human class

    • @geoshark12
      @geoshark12 Рік тому

      The problem was the fact that she would have to be careful especially since the teachers didn’t seem too fond or orks

  • @christophercunningham3679
    @christophercunningham3679 Рік тому +11

    For a story about ORC SMASH this was borderline terminally wholesome and sweet.
    Nearly had dirt in my eye.

  • @tarsinsigmundson2714
    @tarsinsigmundson2714 Рік тому +2

    Amongst a range of good stories that one stands out .

  • @greanstreak04
    @greanstreak04 Рік тому +32

    Your enthusiasm for narration is very entertaining. As I have said before, the new format with your expressive POV is perfectly rendered keep it up and you will succeed...

    • @widdershins5383
      @widdershins5383 Рік тому +1

      I really wonder how many takes some of these are, it looks like he does it all, different voices included, in one go. Very impressive lol

  • @jeanannd
    @jeanannd Рік тому +44

    Orcs as next door neighbors? As a kid I'd have loved playing with young orcs. We could go imagine great battles through out the neighborhood. Tug a rope would be great, or tie a rope to a tree and swing on it. Jeremy could put the book away for a while. It will still be there later. The orc girl - bike riding and fun is NOW!!!! How wonderful, childhood friends and sweethearts grow up and marry.

    • @alganhar1
      @alganhar1 Рік тому +1

      I would not have, like the Jeremy in the story I was a book worm.... a book worm who ran marathons, but still a book worm. The point of this story is it was about MUTUAL respect. Jeremy had his interests, Naz had hers, they met in the middle....

  • @Wotan874
    @Wotan874 Рік тому +6

    For the Story, for the Author, for the Narrator for the Algorithm! A great story, I love it! I could write so much more, but others already were faster expressing all my thoughts.

  • @QuakeMidaro
    @QuakeMidaro Рік тому +5

    Need more of these style of stories it's all around a good one and puts a smile in the face

  • @Kualinar
    @Kualinar Рік тому +3

    That's a fun one. Had me laughing and giggling.

  • @NinaJnoland
    @NinaJnoland Рік тому +15

    Truly an awesome story!!! Hit me in the feels!!! Good stuff!!!! ❤❤❤

  • @toraxmalu
    @toraxmalu Рік тому +4

    🤣 - your face at 23:18 🤣👍it fits so perfectly to the "usually"! - thank you for reading it, was a relly nice story.

  • @Zael_Moonblade
    @Zael_Moonblade Рік тому +2

    Ah! The Swiss Family Robinson! Such a good book especially in 'Classics' format!

  • @leonievanheerden7090
    @leonievanheerden7090 Рік тому +10

    Another uplifting and sweet/funny story ❣️ For the author and narrator 💐⭐⭐💐

  • @Danodan94
    @Danodan94 Рік тому +3

    When I saw the name and thumbnail I thought to myself "Oh no. Agro's posting thirst..."
    Wonderful story by the way!!

  • @rainynight02
    @rainynight02 Рік тому +1

    That was way more adorable than I expected it to be!

  • @walterroche8192
    @walterroche8192 Рік тому +20

    The annoying problem with multiple races is that whole 'aging' issue! An elf who looks 20 could be 12-700 yo. A 10 to Oni girl could look 15-19! A dwarf guy could look 8 but be an 'adult' of 45! Lots of remembering how old who is and finding 'polite' ways to ask! 😆

    • @nvfury13
      @nvfury13 Рік тому +8

      Thing is, you have to individually ask with humans too. I went to High School with a girl who was 15 and looked like a rough late 30s, while her mother was in her late 30s and looked about 16. Also had a teacher you’d swear was a student, but was in her 40s; and other teachers that looked like they were rounding 50 but were in their mid to late 20s.

    • @ShneekeyTheLost
      @ShneekeyTheLost Рік тому +3

      I think there was an anime that took this on in an interesting manner. The viewpoint wasn't the 'hero', but one of his supporting cast, the elven mage. Who had a lifespan into the centuries, and a centuries long view on things. When the hero passed from old age, it prompted her to go on and finish other projects she'd put aside to help him out. The age gap and the different perspective in time flow is a central element.

    • @JacenHawk
      @JacenHawk Рік тому

      @@ShneekeyTheLost that series does not yet have an anime adaptation, it is coming later this year.

    • @juliusnesakysiu4778
      @juliusnesakysiu4778 Рік тому

      ​@@JacenHawkwhat is it called?

    • @JacenHawk
      @JacenHawk Рік тому

      @@juliusnesakysiu4778 Sousou no Frieren, anike airs this Sep.

  • @Maeshalanadae
    @Maeshalanadae Рік тому +39

    Only thing is, when you’re greeting new orc neighbors, I’d imagine they’d appreciate a nice pork roast or such more.

    • @randolphphillips3104
      @randolphphillips3104 Рік тому +3

      Don't roast it. Walk it over alive.

    • @ShneekeyTheLost
      @ShneekeyTheLost Рік тому +5

      Then I'll extend my southern hospitality by offering a smoked brisket, and introduce them to BBQ.

    • @Maeshalanadae
      @Maeshalanadae Рік тому +1

      @@ShneekeyTheLost
      Now that’s the mark of true friendship. Nothing better than a good authentic barbecue.

  • @anticarrrot
    @anticarrrot Рік тому +22

    "Ray, if a girl your own age asks 'Do you want to wrestle?', you say 'YES'!"

    • @blackg0076
      @blackg0076 Рік тому +7

      well maybe after a few months of building up muscle mass.

    • @MidnightDStroyer
      @MidnightDStroyer 7 місяців тому

      That's probably the kind of "trouble" Naz was thinking about, there at the end of the story but only *after* getting back home from Thom's dinner...
      😉

    • @samsignorelli
      @samsignorelli 5 місяців тому

      I read that in Winston's voice!!

  • @rafaelsanches501
    @rafaelsanches501 Рік тому +4

    Finally, some orc appreciation, love this story.

  • @someoneawesome8717
    @someoneawesome8717 Рік тому +3

    Dash being a Terrier means he would absolutely hunt, but his prey would be something like rabbits (or in my doggo's case possums and raccoons

  • @MyrdinAnnoth
    @MyrdinAnnoth Рік тому +2

    Well written and executed. Also love the happy ending haha.
    In fact this was one of those stories that you just want to see more of. All the "in between" the beginning and the end in fact!
    Hope the author decides to write more on the adventures of these two from being kids to growing up, getting together and all that jazz.

  • @soubigo
    @soubigo Рік тому +2

    this story warmed my heart X3

  • @islemrebiai9188
    @islemrebiai9188 Рік тому +4

    Yep, this right here the best romance story I've ever read in my whole life 😊😄💯

  • @maelglorious
    @maelglorious Рік тому +30

    Well, this is an absolutely new take on marrying the tomboy nextdoor neighbor. Never expected to consider greenskins "cute".

    • @nightmarereaper5601
      @nightmarereaper5601 Рік тому +4

      Never thought feet would look "cute" but apparently there is someone who likes that

    • @nooneofimportance2110
      @nooneofimportance2110 Рік тому +8

      Maybe he's just into muscle chicks. Or more likely, he loves the girl for who she is.

    • @timothyterrell1658
      @timothyterrell1658 Рік тому +7

      The color of ones skin is not nearly as important as the color of ones spirit.
      10 on the outside,2 on the inside,...Pass it by...
      Remember this.5 on the outside plus 8 on the inside is a 13..
      A 13 is very good...🤨

    • @markfergerson2145
      @markfergerson2145 Рік тому +2

      @@timothyterrell1658This. If only today’s humans could manage it…

    • @ratzelbarreto2070
      @ratzelbarreto2070 Рік тому +1

      Flashbacks to UP opening story, hitting me hard here. Please it late at night for me to cry.

  • @hammerspace8866
    @hammerspace8866 5 місяців тому

    I just listened to this story again. I just feels good to come back to story like this once in awhile. I just like agro squirrel's reading of this story. It's a pity I can only give it 1 tumbs up.

  • @thelaughinghyenas8465
    @thelaughinghyenas8465 Рік тому +2

    I really liked that story. Thank you!

  • @johnmccarty5315
    @johnmccarty5315 Рік тому +3

    That was a great story. I really enjoyed that.👍

  • @LegendStormcrow
    @LegendStormcrow Рік тому +3

    Made me smile, friend.

  • @normiesalvador1854
    @normiesalvador1854 Рік тому +1

    This was wholesome.

  • @scottclark3761
    @scottclark3761 Рік тому +3

    Yeah.....humans will bone anybody. We're that way. And we'll bond to anyone. Even things. Pretty much the way it would work. Good story! Boy meets Girl.....classic.

  • @reighniz4488
    @reighniz4488 Рік тому +1

    Oddly enough despite my general distaste for fantasy style stories like this I really love everything about this one.

    • @geoshark12
      @geoshark12 Рік тому

      Probably because its written quite well and seems to be more of an urban fantasy ( fantasy aspects in the modern day) well the ones that are not doing the hidden world trope anyways
      Might be something to look into

  • @pauldockins9635
    @pauldockins9635 Рік тому +3

    That was excellent

  • @Obligate.Carnivore
    @Obligate.Carnivore 11 місяців тому

    What a fun and enjoyable story! Really loved it. I’ve always had a thing for Orcs just never had the guts to try!!

  • @nexrese1160
    @nexrese1160 Рік тому +2

    Thanks fam! It's a cute n wholesome story I didn't know I needed. Stay awesome

  • @barelyasurvivor1257
    @barelyasurvivor1257 Рік тому +1

    A great story, and a great concept.

  • @jfpalermo
    @jfpalermo Рік тому +2

    Great story!!!!! Thoroughly enjoyed it!!!!!

  • @13thBear
    @13thBear Рік тому

    That’s a good one. I like it. It’s a nice twist on the usual characteristics of human/orc relations. And, yes, Virginia! That’s where half orcs come from!

  • @wavegun
    @wavegun Рік тому

    Charming and instructive. Exactly why i tune in! Thanks again, Agro!

  • @timfielder9893
    @timfielder9893 Рік тому +2

    That was a wonderful, and unique, story! More please

  • @scotthinger6397
    @scotthinger6397 Рік тому +2

    A very good story Sir. Well done!! I am so glad I found you on YT! Thank you so very much for what you do and how well you do it!!!

  • @LDSG_A_Team
    @LDSG_A_Team Рік тому +1

    That was so adorable. Kudos to the author, and thank you for sharing it with us :)

  • @lunkystraydog6572
    @lunkystraydog6572 10 місяців тому

    what a life to have lived............... my man is a God amongst men

  • @alganhar1
    @alganhar1 Рік тому

    That was actually a rather sweet story.
    One thing I will say though, is Terriers were actually hunting dogs. Most Terrier breeds were bred as vermin hunters. Mostly rats, which is why many terriers are small, though not all of them.

  • @PanduPoluan
    @PanduPoluan Рік тому

    Ahh, such a cute and wholesome story! A nice change of pace 😊
    Really like how we not only made peace with orcs but also actively integrating... in more ways than one 😄

  • @MatthewScur
    @MatthewScur Рік тому

    Good story, made my heart smile. Thanks for reading it for us.

  • @Psalmster023
    @Psalmster023 Рік тому +1

    A very cute story!

  • @renaissancepress247
    @renaissancepress247 Рік тому +1

    Good one

  • @alanblack6500
    @alanblack6500 Рік тому +1

    This was a very fun and sweet story, loved it, thank you.

  • @gearhead1807
    @gearhead1807 Рік тому +2

    Quality content

  • @whimsicallychrissy
    @whimsicallychrissy Рік тому

    Cute. The story would probably do good expanded into a book, I know I would read it.

  • @Xerdar36
    @Xerdar36 Рік тому +9

    Human married, a female orc… he was a man of culture I see…

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +3

      I seem to have a habit of writing stories with strong female characters... the original story link ageo posted has a link to my wiki if you wanna read more of them. (And maybe talk agro into reading more too. Of course, he's already read several, but there's still plenty to go!)

    • @appachaihoppachai1246
      @appachaihoppachai1246 Рік тому +2

      Brother was living the dream.

  • @ArcangelOrtiz
    @ArcangelOrtiz Рік тому

    Cool story. Thanks for sharing.

  • @Dragonbear13-k2r
    @Dragonbear13-k2r Рік тому

    Delightful story!

  • @dragon1011dk
    @dragon1011dk Рік тому

    Soo Sweet! Loved this story.

  • @christopherandera2039
    @christopherandera2039 Рік тому +1

    That seems like it would be a worth wild anime

  • @RealArcalian
    @RealArcalian Рік тому

    Greetings, Mentlegent!
    For the Rhyhtm that is Algo
    Yeah, it was pretty clear Naz had decided which way their relationship would go.

  • @HavocPrime8989
    @HavocPrime8989 Рік тому

    This was a cute story. I like these cross species romances, probably due to watching Gargoyles growing up...

  • @chrisreadwells
    @chrisreadwells Рік тому +1

    Wholesome.

  • @wrenchpony9735
    @wrenchpony9735 Рік тому +2

    Well that was surprisingly cute.

  • @SnowKing1823
    @SnowKing1823 Рік тому

    Love your voice !! I listen to stories like these alot on the sides , but ur voice actually makes me pay attention aswell !
    It perfect for story telling !
    Big thumbs up , and keep up the amazing stuff!

  • @theblackswan2373
    @theblackswan2373 Рік тому +1

    Delightful

  • @norby511
    @norby511 Рік тому +1

    that was a good one

  • @Keith_WB2VUO
    @Keith_WB2VUO Рік тому

    Ah, probably not a series, but this would be a great one! One can hope, and when I send the link for this story to my son-in-law, he's just going to add to the "CrazyCrap Dad likes & does" list, heh...

  • @wasa1207
    @wasa1207 Рік тому +2

    da red unz go fasta!

  • @lettmien218
    @lettmien218 Рік тому +1

    Adorable

  • @allenw794
    @allenw794 Рік тому +1

    I rather like that one. I hope we get more slice of weird life stories.

  • @bufordbaberiii2398
    @bufordbaberiii2398 Рік тому

    That was a fantastic one!!

  • @stupidclipsinc.2269
    @stupidclipsinc.2269 Рік тому

    NOW THIS
    this a great story
    i hope this person gets all the attention he deserves for this, cause this is a great story
    such fluent storytelling
    great work on the steriotypes
    great ending
    this guy has so nuch potential
    i hope they will write more cause this work is addicting to say the least.

  • @emperorg9910
    @emperorg9910 4 місяці тому

    I thought it was going to end like "My girl", luckily it did not.

  • @maitemarinseguer8558
    @maitemarinseguer8558 Рік тому

    Wonderful story! I must say that I miss seing you painting or ordering cards and your tatoos, I'm still getting uded in seeing your face

  • @sinpathicenderson1198
    @sinpathicenderson1198 Рік тому

    wow that was suprisingly good

  • @t3h_m0nk3y
    @t3h_m0nk3y 3 місяці тому

    Resistencia a 3rd time really enjoy this story

  • @Sum-kj8jo
    @Sum-kj8jo Рік тому

    Aaaahhhhhh, the good stuff.....

  • @draconusspiritus1037
    @draconusspiritus1037 Рік тому +11

    You ain't never been hugged till you been hugged by an Orc Female.

    • @maelglorious
      @maelglorious Рік тому +6

      You ain't never considered how important your ribcage is till you been hugged by an orc female.

    • @williamcastro3017
      @williamcastro3017 Рік тому +2

      That will pop You’re ear drums! 😁👍🏽

    • @draconusspiritus1037
      @draconusspiritus1037 Рік тому

      @@williamcastro3017 cheaper than a chiropractor

  • @allensheets9369
    @allensheets9369 Рік тому

    what a great story

  • @CaptainShield
    @CaptainShield Рік тому

    Love is love.

  • @GyorBox
    @GyorBox Рік тому +2

    This was a pretty good story, actually.. 😅

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому

      You sounded like you doubted it would be... I find your lack of faith disturbing! 😉

  • @MrGoesBoom
    @MrGoesBoom Рік тому +3

    Reminding me of Merryweathers Oni Girldfriend series

  • @allanmonroe692
    @allanmonroe692 Рік тому

    Good story!

  • @jimmycoyote74
    @jimmycoyote74 Рік тому

    Nice one. And for the algorithm

  • @chrstfer2452
    @chrstfer2452 Рік тому +1

    Oh this is a fun one

  • @mikecoatsworth6048
    @mikecoatsworth6048 Рік тому +1

    I saw the worg as soon as they wrote vet.

  • @AlexanderBushi
    @AlexanderBushi Рік тому

    Thanks

  • @danachim5932
    @danachim5932 Рік тому +1

    superb

  • @bananabreadguy7960
    @bananabreadguy7960 Рік тому +2

    Anime alternative title : "That time when an orc girl moved into my neighborhood"

  • @acefire4050
    @acefire4050 Рік тому +1

    11 hours ago my house caught on fire destroyed it and it's all over the internet and I hear it was on some news. I'm nearly broke.

  • @hilmarheathkliff9511
    @hilmarheathkliff9511 Рік тому +7

    the internet has ruined the name "Naz" for me. the author of "strawberry flavored chocolate" goes by the name "Naz".

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +3

      Sorry! In my defence, I just got the name from a list of orc names taken from elderscrolls. I thought it sounded cute was all. 😅

    • @elduquecaradura1468
      @elduquecaradura1468 Рік тому +1

      @@BlackJack-qg3ws oh, look at you, or it's just a coincidence that your name matches with the author's, to be honest, I do not care
      if you are, nice story

    • @BlackJack-qg3ws
      @BlackJack-qg3ws Рік тому +1

      @@elduquecaradura1468 Thank you kindly! And yes, it's me. I also cross-post a lot of my stories onto imgur. I get around!

    • @hilmarheathkliff9511
      @hilmarheathkliff9511 Рік тому +1

      @@BlackJack-qg3ws theres nothing to apologize about. Its a cute story. Also i made that comment before right after she introduced herself

  • @CHRF-55457
    @CHRF-55457 Рік тому +1

    Dang. That girl is a good one.