OH MY GOSH! THIS IS GORGEOUS! I honestly love how this played out, I always wished that in ALITM Squirrelflight would be the one to end Ashfur tyranny (yes I’m considering Ashfur a tyrant) cause it made more sense because basically the whole The Broken Code ark happen because Ashfur never let go of his of Squirrelflight even tho is was clear that she didn’t see him as a mate but rather a good friend, this love became a full on obsession to the point he just treated her like an object and actively trying to hurt her and ruin her life even in death because she hurt him in his eyes, Squirrelflight probably finally tired of what Ashfur has done and she decides that is time to bring a end to all and she kills Ashfur spirit to end all the pain he cause, not only for hurting her but also because he try to kill her sister kits, help a cat kill her dather, he used and manipulated other cats, exiled cats, caused multiple battles and possessed her mate, Bramblestar, Ashfur realizes that he caused his own downfall and that he could have still be Squirrelflight as a friend, in the end Ashfur downfall was not caused by Squirrelflight, but by his obsession of her, unable to let go and move on, actively trying to hurt her and make her pay for breaking his heart and ultimately his gone forever
this is epic! I love your artstyle, I love the music choice, the shots of squirrelflight's enraged faces are amazing, and that shot where she tackles ashfur is tangible! I love the choice of spending more or less time on some shots!
One thing with more realistic art is that it’s harder to catch emotion. Not only did you do amazing with that style, you kept the emotions perfect. You could *feel* what they felt during the animatic. This was just perfect. I’d love to see more from you :)
This animatic is perfect in every way. The art style, the expressions there all so perfect. “Don’t you know I would have loved you the way you were whole” this line fits so perfectly bc she’s saying how she did and would have loved him, not as a mate, but as a friend, but he ruined it by trying to sabotage her life. I love how at 0:38 Ashfur gives a smile like he thinks he still has a chance with squirrelflight but as squirrelflight gets more progressively aggressive with him, he realizes that squirrelflight doesn’t love him and doesn’t want to be with him. I also love the chase and death scene, you are criminally underrated. Subscribed!
At first I thought this was Mapleshade and Apple Appledusk because it fits them pretty well, but then I realized it was Squilf and Ash and THAT'S SO GOOD I LOVE THIS IDEA A LOT!!! Ngl while I predicted that the three were actually Leafpool's kits (literally on the first book of The Power of Three Series) I really missed the mark and actually thought Squilf killed Ashfur because of Leafpool's reaction. I was so excited to see the lead up behind it, like Squilf was betrayed by Ash for making her tell the truth about the kits but more importantly putting them in danger and felt he needed to die because he was too dangerous to her, them, and the clan because of it. Plus it would have been an interesting way to show that she still thinks of the three as her own kits even if they were not hers by blood, even going to the extent of killing to protect them. At the same point that would also mean Hollyleaf never would have met Fallingleaves, and they're way too cute of a couple to not exist lol.
GOSH THIS SO BEAUTIFUL The expressions are just so beautiful and I love the split moment where ashfur thinks squirrelflight loves and forgives him till squirrelflight grows rightfully aggressive It’s just so perfect and your style is amazing
Would’ve loved squilf taking out Ashfur, and also squilf becoming leader after this. It would’ve been so more satisfying in some ways, and squilf should be leader anyways :) (Squilf is my comfort character and my fav character in all of the series and she deserves so much better)
THE FACT THAT THEY DIDN'T THINK TO JUST HOLD ASHFUR DOWN UNDER THE WATER AND DROWN HIM IS INFURIATING AND YOU ARE A TALENTED ARTIST AND GENIUS THIS! WE NEEDED THIS IN THE STORY!
@@sorrelmoon you're welcome AND LIKE- ALSO IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN SQUIRRELFLIGHT TO DO IT! Should have pulled a Hollyleaf and cut his throat open and then drowned him Edit: tbh, my frustration comes from the fact that to me, Squirrelflight didn't seem to get any justice. Sure she got rescued and all that shit, but she wasn't able to tell Ashfur directly how she felt nor was she able to be the one to take him down like she should have been. She was just a damsel in distress and that completely contradicted her character, Imo.
@@greyisnotthefather I agree with you but hear me out. That would have been a victory for him. He is obsessive. He wants her attention no matter what. That’s why it happened the way it happened. Sometimes the way to win against your abuser is to not play their game.
Whoaaa! I saw this on my Instagram and i had to cheack it out and it didnt disappoint at all! The lines fit so well and the animation and art style is beutiful! Amazing job!!
Omggg!! I had this idea as well when i listened to it (had too much in my plate to actually do it tho lmao so needless to say i was so happy when someone actually did it) XD You did it amazingly! Ur style is really good and you are officially underrated >:0 Also yes Squilf shoulda killed him exactly like that 😭😩
I don't have anything too much to say. I just want you to know that this is a brilliant animation. I simply want the algorithm to share this with more people.
i’m so glad that someone else had the idea that squif should have taken out ashfur! it would’ve been such a badass ending! oh and, maybe this is the wrong idea but is squif drowning ashfur symbolism in a way- considering ashfur literally threatened her in a fire, or is it just death? such a great animatic, your styles amazing
OH MY GOSH! THIS IS GORGEOUS! I honestly love how this played out, I always wished that in ALITM Squirrelflight would be the one to end Ashfur tyranny (yes I’m considering Ashfur a tyrant) cause it made more sense because basically the whole The Broken Code ark happen because Ashfur never let go of his of Squirrelflight even tho is was clear that she didn’t see him as a mate but rather a good friend, this love became a full on obsession to the point he just treated her like an object and actively trying to hurt her and ruin her life even in death because she hurt him in his eyes, Squirrelflight probably finally tired of what Ashfur has done and she decides that is time to bring a end to all and she kills Ashfur spirit to end all the pain he cause, not only for hurting her but also because he try to kill her sister kits, help a cat kill her dather, he used and manipulated other cats, exiled cats, caused multiple battles and possessed her mate, Bramblestar, Ashfur realizes that he caused his own downfall and that he could have still be Squirrelflight as a friend, in the end Ashfur downfall was not caused by Squirrelflight, but by his obsession of her, unable to let go and move on, actively trying to hurt her and make her pay for breaking his heart and ultimately his gone forever
this is epic! I love your artstyle, I love the music choice, the shots of squirrelflight's enraged faces are amazing, and that shot where she tackles ashfur is tangible! I love the choice of spending more or less time on some shots!
Thank you so much! 🥰
Me watching this:
The subscribe button: wanna push me?
Me: why the heck not
Это потрясающе! Новый художник, ура! 💓💓💓
CRYINGCRYINGCRYING
One thing with more realistic art is that it’s harder to catch emotion. Not only did you do amazing with that style, you kept the emotions perfect. You could *feel* what they felt during the animatic. This was just perfect. I’d love to see more from you :)
This animatic is perfect in every way. The art style, the expressions there all so perfect. “Don’t you know I would have loved you the way you were whole” this line fits so perfectly bc she’s saying how she did and would have loved him, not as a mate, but as a friend, but he ruined it by trying to sabotage her life. I love how at 0:38 Ashfur gives a smile like he thinks he still has a chance with squirrelflight but as squirrelflight gets more progressively aggressive with him, he realizes that squirrelflight doesn’t love him and doesn’t want to be with him. I also love the chase and death scene, you are criminally underrated. Subscribed!
oh my GOSH this is just too sweet 😭💖💖💖 Thank you so much!
At first I thought this was Mapleshade and Apple Appledusk because it fits them pretty well, but then I realized it was Squilf and Ash and THAT'S SO GOOD I LOVE THIS IDEA A LOT!!!
Ngl while I predicted that the three were actually Leafpool's kits (literally on the first book of The Power of Three Series) I really missed the mark and actually thought Squilf killed Ashfur because of Leafpool's reaction. I was so excited to see the lead up behind it, like Squilf was betrayed by Ash for making her tell the truth about the kits but more importantly putting them in danger and felt he needed to die because he was too dangerous to her, them, and the clan because of it. Plus it would have been an interesting way to show that she still thinks of the three as her own kits even if they were not hers by blood, even going to the extent of killing to protect them.
At the same point that would also mean Hollyleaf never would have met Fallingleaves, and they're way too cute of a couple to not exist lol.
GOSH THIS SO BEAUTIFUL
The expressions are just so beautiful and I love the split moment where ashfur thinks squirrelflight loves and forgives him till squirrelflight grows rightfully aggressive
It’s just so perfect and your style is amazing
Thank you so much! 🥰
Would’ve loved squilf taking out Ashfur, and also squilf becoming leader after this. It would’ve been so more satisfying in some ways, and squilf should be leader anyways :)
(Squilf is my comfort character and my fav character in all of the series and she deserves so much better)
THE FACT THAT THEY DIDN'T THINK TO JUST HOLD ASHFUR DOWN UNDER THE WATER AND DROWN HIM IS INFURIATING
AND YOU ARE A TALENTED ARTIST AND GENIUS
THIS! WE NEEDED THIS IN THE STORY!
:DDDD THANK YOU!! Also holy shit YES they spent so much time in that book not doing anything 😭 JUST DROWN THE INCEL LMAO
@@sorrelmoon you're welcome
AND LIKE-
ALSO IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN SQUIRRELFLIGHT TO DO IT!
Should have pulled a Hollyleaf and cut his throat open and then drowned him
Edit: tbh, my frustration comes from the fact that to me, Squirrelflight didn't seem to get any justice. Sure she got rescued and all that shit, but she wasn't able to tell Ashfur directly how she felt nor was she able to be the one to take him down like she should have been. She was just a damsel in distress and that completely contradicted her character, Imo.
@@greyisnotthefather I agree with you but hear me out. That would have been a victory for him. He is obsessive. He wants her attention no matter what. That’s why it happened the way it happened. Sometimes the way to win against your abuser is to not play their game.
@@oneditzybrunnette ah. Good point. Didn't think about it that way
Loving Squirrelflight and letting her have closure on her trauma hours ❤️
This is the ending we deserved, and I am very sad we didn't get it. Gorgeous concept and animatic my guy!!
Thank you! 😁😁😁
oh i love how merciless she is. there is no love left here. regret, maybe, but no love
Beautiful work, criminally underrated, best use of this song possible. Well done.
I’ve followed you on TikTok for a while now, love your content!
Thank you so much! I’m glad you’ve decided to stick around 🥰
Whoaaa! I saw this on my Instagram and i had to cheack it out and it didnt disappoint at all! The lines fit so well and the animation and art style is beutiful! Amazing job!!
Thank you!! 🥰
CentaurWorld! It matches with this so well oh my godd!
Omggg!! I had this idea as well when i listened to it (had too much in my plate to actually do it tho lmao so needless to say i was so happy when someone actually did it) XD
You did it amazingly! Ur style is really good and you are officially underrated >:0
Also yes Squilf shoulda killed him exactly like that 😭😩
Also also, if i actually do my one lil animatic/pmv whatever one day, would it be okay to link yours as well because its so good, right?
I was thinking about making something like this! Nice job!
Thank you!
Your artstyle and the poses are beautiful! Perfect song choice too, the atmosphere was CHEF KISS PERFECT
wow!! Your style is so pretty, the way you draw fur is so realistic and so Gorgeous it almost feels magical in a way!! Your really underrated!!
Thank you so much!
16 hours until good soup.
I don't have anything too much to say. I just want you to know that this is a brilliant animation. I simply want the algorithm to share this with more people.
super excited for this! ik it'll be excellent your style is fantastic!
Only 9 hours! lol
You.Are.Underated.
POGGERS!!!!
I just noticed how underrated you are!
I love the centuarworld audio with this it’s perfect
Hello
Hello!
This. Is. Gorgeous. Underrated. Beautiful. I. Do. Not. Know. Anymore. Words. To. Describe. This. Level. Of. Skill. Oh. My. God. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
i’m so glad that someone else had the idea that squif should have taken out ashfur! it would’ve been such a badass ending! oh and, maybe this is the wrong idea but is squif drowning ashfur symbolism in a way- considering ashfur literally threatened her in a fire, or is it just death? such a great animatic, your styles amazing
AMAZING... Where to cry? It was powerful c.c
youre so talented i loved the expressions keep it up!!
Beautiful art!
my god is so goood
This would be a good song for a DarkStalker, Peacemaker, and FoeSlayer animatic!
aaaa,this is amazing!!^^
oooo love this!!!
This is fantastic
Yes Yes! that's exactly how it should have been but erins are erins, but anyway I loved your style and the pmv is divine.
who is ALITM?
its what the book is called. A light in the mist
Perfection!
Thank you!
Your artstyle is very lovely!!
Chills! So good!
Thank you!!
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