Hi. Just nitpicking here, but at 21:39 when the lady say that kids can be easily manipulated by others, I feel it's quite relevant to the topic at hand. That's because impressionable teenagers out with their friends unsupervised by their parents can be manipulated into doing stupid things by their peers. By the way, great work as always.
Hi again.teacher l do not know but l can not access to yor messages if it is possible to you please give me a number which l con connet to you in whats app
Hi Chris ! A big thank you for the guidance provided for the writing test. I watched your video a day before my exam and I was able to score a 8 in writing and a 9 in listening thanks to your tips ! They were of great use..Gave me the right direction ! God bless 🙌
So the conclusion that I’ve made after this video : have a very clear understandable structure and 2-3 main ideas. Avoid filler “background” sentences because they can be confusing to the examiner. If the sentence doesn’t backup your answer- it is unnecessary
Thanks alot Mr.Chris. How do you deal with the questions of ; what are your views?? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion? I will be greatful for your help and clarity
Hi there, we'd like to help you out. We have an article on our website that will teach you how to write ‘agree or disagree’ or ‘opinion’ IELTS task 2 essays that could score a Band 7+. Please visit our website and search for the article titled "IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures". If you have other questions, please send us an email. You can find our contact details in the video description above.
MBP1: Topic sentence: Unsafe Explanation: teenagers are not mature enough and they are not able to keep themselves safe from an unfortunate circumstances. Therefore, easily get harmed by criminals. Example: In India, the number of thief has increased who often make target of teenagers who usually roaming on the street and attempted crime.
Sir i think the introduction does not match exactly the main thought of the given statement. From what i understand is that the curfew is being implemented by the US govt, not mainly by the parents.
Sir, i have a doubt, by looking at the qs, how can we imply that these restrictions are imposed by parents. At the first glance, it seems as if these curbs are put in by the admin in certain parts of US. I think i got it wrong at the first sight.
Mbp1:dangerous - The one reason for restriction on teenagers at night time without adult companion is that streets might be dangerous at this time. Explanation : Because, in western world night life is regarded as time that everyone can do what they want, irrespective of level of being dangerous not only for themselves but also for others. Teenagers may easily be participant or witness of some kind of irresponsible affairs that can be life-threatening. Example: A recent research found that more than 70% of movements consciously or unconsciously done by people at night time is very dangerous for alone pedestrians whose age is 15-19.
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Dear Chris,I highly appreciate your work for students to study IELTS online with the help your classes and wish the best of luck in further endeavors.I have got a question about the topic introduced in this video.If I live in the other corner of the world,namely Azerbaijan, how I should answer to the US related topic?Can you help me to find an answer to this challenge?
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One person was arguing on how to write the opinion essays saying it doesn’t need to contain outline which has idea 1 and idea 2, so based on your teaching I firmly stood on my point and explained your way of teaching. Then he showed me a high level essay sample without two ideas in the introduction. Still, I disagree his point but dunno how to prove that high level essay got that mark without an outline. Or do we have other ways of writing an opinion essay? Thanks for your reply in advance
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Hii sir ....thanks ... firstly I didn't know how to tackle the problem of writing task 2 ...but now I am very happy as you helped me a lot ....thnks sir thanks so much
Good day!i have a terrible mistakes on my writing 2 test but writing task1 i think i did the whole task well however on writing task 2 i didn’t finished the exam only few paragraphs with no conclusion.please let me know if this will give a bad score or 4 .i am so worried its been a week i haven’t sleep becoz of that .please help me i am asking for your opinion regarding this problem .
It is normal to feel nervous after doing a test but there is nothing you can do about it now. What you should do is just wait until you get your results and we will provide you with the help you need, if you need it. Best of luck with your scores!
Hi there, a third person narrative is a device for story writing and is not appropriate for IELTS. In an IELTS essay, if you are asked to give your opinion, use first-person (I believe). When discussing the thoughts, feelings, and actions of others, use impersonal language like 'they' or 'them. If you need further help with your IELTS preparation, please visit our website or email us anytime.
For OPINION essay, should we stick With only one opinion throughout the essay ? Should we also mention the other opinion ? Just intro P1 our opinion with supporting reason 1 P2 our opinion with supporting reason 2 Conclusion Please help
Hi Ramandeep, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures - IELTS Advantage'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
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Hi there, here is a link to help you with this: www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/23/how-many-words-ielts-exam/ If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
Hi Chris, your materials regarding IELTS writing are amazing and after you have explained everything, it seems not so tough to write a decent essay. However, I do have a question. In most of your essay samples and those you are explaining in your videos, there are only the main advantage and the main disadvantage (problem - solution as well). I mean, a myriad of IELTS resources tell you that you need to write at least two reasons (or whatever you are asked) if it is said in the plural, and you are getting penalized if otherwise. I am not talking about so-called "trainers" on the internet, I mean the official materials. For example, IDP, the organisation responsible for providing IELTS in Russia, organize webinars for the participants where I have heard this information. So, the question is, is this obligatory for scoring 7 or above? I find it quite difficult to squeeze in a few reasons (or whatever) and explain/develop them properly. since time and space is not infinite. That is a really pressing issue and I would be extremely glad if you elucidate it. Perhaps, it is worth recording a video about it with some examples because it is essential for many students struggling with Writing. I am looking forward to your reply.
It is certainly possible to score a 7 or higher by fully developing one main idea in each paragraph. Having only one main idea allows you to fully develop your explanation and example and this will lead to a well-developed essay overall. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@@Ieltsadvantage Thanks. That is such a relief. Actually, it sounds logical, it is not a test on your counting skills. However, why it is so? I mean, an overwhelming amount of reputed sources keep saying so and paying attention to it, what is the reason behind this? As I said, it is official info if I can say it about IDP. I mean, that is extremely weird.
Hi, Chris, I thought there was not any problem in making up the examples, because they are not testing our veracity but our English. So I'm a little confused when you corrected her sentence "Ireland doubled the police force". Moreover, you added something about the weekends and In that case, I will be worried about the examiner will think I'm out of topic.
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Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures - IELTS Advantage'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@@Ieltsadvantage like this question (Most people have forgotten the meaning behind the traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves There are two portions one is about forgotten the meaning behind tradition and the second is enjoy
Thank you so much for the perfect structure and most helpful video. I had been googling for how should I start with the essay because all I could find was strategies. God Bless!
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@@Ieltsadvantage Hi, I follow you regularly on UA-cam and Facebook. 💗 I have got a question. Do you think word count has an impact on score? Would it be better for me to take extra pages if the answer isn't irrelevant? What would you suggest?
Hi Chris hope you are safe and great, I'm always admire and follower of your work, in this essay writing don't u think there is error of subject verb agreement and another point is don't we need to write other side of subject contradict or any disadvantages/ disagree paragraph or taking one side is good enough ... pls help as I'm waiting for your replay
Hi there, the speaking test is supposed to represent a normal conversation between two people, which means it is informal, but you shouldn't use slang or taboo language or anything else that could be considered extremely informal. If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your IELTS preparation, please feel free to email us.
your videos are awesome Chris! I am a huge admirer of your channel and presently taking help from your channel to get the desired scores in my IELTS academic test. Hope I get the desired results by watching and then putting into practice your great tips.
Very nice video and a clear step by step explanation. But i do have a simple question if you don't mind. When Explaining the main topics in MBP1 or MBP2, should i present let's say 2 explanations per 1 topic as a chain or can i deliver them separately. Or does it depend on the type of essay? You mentioned in this video that it's better to have a chain of explanation regarding topics in this "Opinion essay", but i do notice separate explanations in other types of essays as well. Thank you in advance.
Hi there, you are correct. There is a different type of strategy for each different type of essay. If you need our help withy our IELTS test preparation please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Dear chris plz tell me can i put 3&4 reason rather puting 2 if i can mange and does this will be okey? Plz let me know, and is there will be any problem if i will use my question paper as my ledger?
Would there be any issue when we add additional info such as 'permitted by their parents' as the question never state the curfew is actually coming from the authority or parents itself?
Hi there, you should pick a side and write about the choice you have made. If you need help withy our IELTS test preparation please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Hi there, yes you can use either of your suggestions. If you have any other questions about your IELTS test preparation feel free to email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Sir Could you kindly help on how to answer 2 contradictory sentences Opinion essays. For Instance " some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species, while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is you opinion.? I know, in opinion essay we should only discuss supporting side with 2 arguments in 2 separate body paragraphs. It is annoying but I would be grateful if you could help.
Hi there, you should read this article on our website: 'IELTS Advantage - Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Lesson'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. However, if you need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Hello Chris, I thought of getting a clarity when it comes to the structure of this question. Is it okay to expand to 4 paragraph? or should we restrict to 3 paragraph in total?
Hi Ashwin, Thanks for your comment. You should out this link: www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/03/ielts-writing-task-2-essay-structures/ This will help you understand each essay structure. I hope it helps!
But what if the question is like below An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? If this is the case, then do we need to explain both the advantages and disadvantages eve if I agreed only with the advantages?
Hi there, the question asks you to list down the advantages and disadvantages, therefore, you should write 2 advantages and 2 disadvantages. If you have further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please feel free contact us.
You can start with the Cambridge IELTS books is a good idea. We also have a range of course options to help you with your IELTS preparation. Send us an email so we can discuss the options available to you.
Sir as I am beginner to start with ielts,,i am from India ,,, everyone recommend to go to traning center of ilets to prepare,,, because i think your vedios our enough. For me to prepare,,but sometimes think if i write my essay ,,who will check my essay ,,and how I can prepare for speaking ,,as I am not willing to go any center,,i think it's wastw of time ,,,can u tell me ,,how can I check my writing my own self,,,and my speaking mistakes,,,,or should I go to ielts to prepare,,,
Hi there, we would love to help you achieve your desired band score. Please email us so we can further assist you or visit our website. You can find our details in our home description box. I look forward to hearing from you.
Hi there, here is a link to some sample essays with the same structure: www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/16/writing-task-two-opinion-essay/ Let me know if this helps. If you have any other issues or queries, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
It looks like the question asks about our opinion on Government's decision of imposing night curfew to teenagers in certain parts of US. I am confused in this part only.
Hi there, that is right! If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your IELTS preparation, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
SIr Please help to provide band score on my essay. Travel restriction at night for young people is beneficial and helps them to protect by an untold incident. In certain areas of US a movement band has been ordered so that children should not be allowed to go out of their homes else they should be along with their elder family members. In my opinion, this has positive effects on the wellbeing of adults and the prosperity of society. The first and foremost benefit is that the children will be safe from any crime such as theft or robbery. Many dangerous people come out at night in order to do some robbery of money or snatch mobile phones. Mostly they look for young individuals as they have less power and energy to protect themselves. In fact, there are investigative reports in US which state that 80% of crime happens with young people at night time. Secondly, young individuals have the tendency to indulge in wrong activities such as going to pubs, drinking alcohol and starting any prohibited addiction. There is no one to see them when it is dark and they can start such unethical activities with their friends. All these activities have a negative impact on their families as well as society. There are minimal chances that they can start a good career or support their family in a good way if they involved in such activities from an early age. In conclusion, ban to travel by government for young individuals have more pros for them to protect their future life and society. In order to stay away from the stressful movement, the parents should overlook their children and advise them wisely to strictly follow such late hour travel restrictions made by the government.
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Sir iwant to know that you recommended that students mustprepare on genuine ielts material specially cambridge book , so what I should do because I obtaining approximately20score in ielts reading which donloaded online so please give me regarding this serious delema.
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Hi there, we did not determine a band score for this essay. However, here is a link for you to check out some scored essays: www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/09/18/ielts-writing-task-2-sample/ I hope this helps.
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Hi Chris, thank you for your job .Your tutorials are really helping me so I'd be happy to watch the explanations for problem solution and cause and effect quastions
Hi there, you're very welcome! You should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Hi there, we'd be delighted to help you achieve your desired band scores. We have a range of course options which are suitable for your needs. Send us an email so we can discuss the options available to you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
Yes, you can. However, you need it to use them appropriately. You should visit our website and search for the article "Cohesive Device" to know how you can use them properly. If you have any further questions, please feel free to email our team anytime.
Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Speaking Topics'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you so much, Chris. I am writing to you from Azerbaijan to express how I have enhanced my confidence in handling Writing Task 2. Your elucidations and persuasive efforts have been truly enlightening. I now have faith in my ability to articulate my ideas in the essay adhering to the proper regulations. This transformation is a result of your guidance.
A curfew has been exercised in some states of the US and it is strictly prohibited for children to go out of the home without accompanying an adult, especially at night. Although these rules and regulations seem like a bit tough for a child at a young age, they have been imposed by considering the safety and health of every citizen. Personally, I agree with this view as teenagers can be irresponsible sometimes and often adult guidance is needed to understand society. Teenagers are easily distracted by fun activities in society and can be irresponsible. In other words, they are more likely to seek for pleasure even during a pandemic and can put the whole community in danger. In addition, teenagers tend to underestimate the consequences of these tough situations. During COVID-19 pandemic, when everyone is told to practise social distancing, teenagers in the US did not follow the said request and continued their usual daily routine in shopping centres and beaches. As a result of that, authorities had to impose strict rules against teenagers’ outdoor activities in order to protect the whole community. Also, adult guidance is mandatory for them in a danger period. It is known that adults are knowledgable and aware of what is happening around the globe. While youngsters spend most of their time watching movies and playing games, adults seek information about the country’s status by watching the news and reading newspapers. Hence, grown-ups know how to behave during a curfew period than youngsters and adult guidance is needed for them. For these exact reasons, an adult should stay with children every time they are going out. To conclude, it is apparent that children can be irresponsible sometimes and tend to take curfew measures lightly. We must not forget that these rules have been implemented to their own safety and one small mistake can cost thousands of lives and millions of dollars to a country. Therefore, the decision which has been taken by the US government is practical and completely justifiable. Words count: 336
Hi there, this article 'IELTS Advantage- IELTS Writing: Agree or Disagree Lesson with Sample Answer' will help answer your question. If you have further questions, please feel free to contact us.
Hi there, you are welcome to watch our writing playlist here: ua-cam.com/video/1aQZ7_tfgps/v-deo.html Please enjoy it. If you need help with your IELTS test preparation, send us an email and we'll be happy to help.
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@IELTS Advantage.hi would you please tell how to make an intro for discuss both views and tell your opinion..revert would be highly appreciated
Hi. Just nitpicking here, but at 21:39 when the lady say that kids can be easily manipulated by others, I feel it's quite relevant to the topic at hand. That's because impressionable teenagers out with their friends unsupervised by their parents can be manipulated into doing stupid things by their peers.
By the way, great work as always.
Hi again.teacher l do not know but l can not access to yor messages if it is possible to you please give me a number which l con connet to you in whats app
Hi Chris ! A big thank you for the guidance provided for the writing test. I watched your video a day before my exam and I was able to score a 8 in writing and a 9 in listening thanks to your tips ! They were of great use..Gave me the right direction ! God bless 🙌
Fantastic! Congratulations! Best of luck in your future endeavors.
Wow how you did it ..I m still struggling for ielts😢😢😢😢
Say thank you to Silvana for allowing to share her lessons with us. I hope she has been able to achieve her desired IELTS score.
So the conclusion that I’ve made after this video : have a very clear understandable structure and 2-3 main ideas. Avoid filler “background” sentences because they can be confusing to the examiner. If the sentence doesn’t backup your answer- it is unnecessary
Thanks alot Mr.Chris.
How do you deal with the questions of ;
what are your views??
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
I will be greatful for your help and clarity
Hi there, we'd like to help you out. We have an article on our website that will teach you how to write ‘agree or disagree’ or ‘opinion’ IELTS task 2 essays that could score a Band 7+. Please visit our website and search for the article titled "IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures". If you have other questions, please send us an email. You can find our contact details in the video description above.
MBP1: Topic sentence: Unsafe
Explanation: teenagers are not mature enough and they are not able to keep themselves safe from an unfortunate circumstances. Therefore, easily get harmed by criminals.
Example: In India, the number of thief has increased who often make target of teenagers who usually roaming on the street and attempted crime.
Thanks for sharing this video, it gave me confidence and more insights about essay writing 😊💓
I'm glad you found it helpful. If you need any help with your preparation, please feel free to contact us.
@@Ieltsadvantage thank you 😊
Sir i think the introduction does not match exactly the main thought of the given statement. From what i understand is that the curfew is being implemented by the US govt, not mainly by the parents.
Sir, i have a doubt, by looking at the qs, how can we imply that these restrictions are imposed by parents. At the first glance, it seems as if these curbs are put in by the admin in certain parts of US. I think i got it wrong at the first sight.
Mbp1:dangerous - The one reason for restriction on teenagers at night time without adult companion is that streets might be dangerous at this time.
Explanation : Because, in western world night life is regarded as time that everyone can do what they want, irrespective of level of being dangerous not only for themselves but also for others. Teenagers may easily be participant or witness of some kind of irresponsible affairs that can be life-threatening.
Example: A recent research found that more than 70% of movements consciously or unconsciously done by people at night time is very dangerous for alone pedestrians whose age is 15-19.
U shld write all these in one sentence and not in paragraphs. I mean mbp1
Waaaao amaaaazing Mr Chris thanks a lot
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This is very simple to understand. I wish I could get a lecture like this on discussion essays.
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Well you cant
Today I got my result with writing 7, thank you Cris, i followed your writing tips.
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@@Ieltsadvantage You are amazing Chris lots of love from India
Very easy to understand on the structure and grammar of essay writing. I definitely bookmark this video for future use 👍🏻
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for tuning in.
Can you make informative video like this for discusing on both views asap.??
Thank you Chris, I enjoyed it
I'm glad to hear it. Thanks for your comment!
Thank sfor such amazing and informative video!
I just have a question. What band score would you give her ?
Dear Chris,I highly appreciate your work for students to study IELTS online with the help your classes and wish the best of luck in further endeavors.I have got a question about the topic introduced in this video.If I live in the other corner of the world,namely Azerbaijan, how I should answer to the US related topic?Can you help me to find an answer to this challenge?
Hi there, thanks for your question. You can find the answer to most of your IELTS- related questions for free on our website or by watching our YT videos.
However, if you want help from an expert IELTS teacher, please email us and we can find a course suitable for you. You can check the description box for our contact details.
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One person was arguing on how to write the opinion essays saying it doesn’t need to contain outline which has idea 1 and idea 2, so based on your teaching I firmly stood on my point and explained your way of teaching. Then he showed me a high level essay sample without two ideas in the introduction. Still, I disagree his point but dunno how to prove that high level essay got that mark without an outline. Or do we have other ways of writing an opinion essay?
Thanks for your reply in advance
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@@Ieltsadvantage thanks 😊
I really want to have your article lectures. I am so confused why there should be an article.
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thank you Sir, writing an essay has been so difficult for me but with your lessons am getting there thank you so much
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Hii sir ....thanks ... firstly I didn't know how to tackle the problem of writing task 2 ...but now I am very happy as you helped me a lot ....thnks sir thanks so much
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Good day!i have a terrible mistakes on my writing 2 test but writing task1 i think i did the whole task well however on writing task 2 i didn’t finished the exam only few paragraphs with no conclusion.please let me know if this will give a bad score or 4 .i am so worried its been a week i haven’t sleep becoz of that .please help me i am asking for your opinion regarding this problem .
It is normal to feel nervous after doing a test but there is nothing you can do about it now.
What you should do is just wait until you get your results and we will provide you with the help you need, if you need it.
Best of luck with your scores!
This channel deserves 2 M subscribe within two months.
Good luck!
Does writing the task 2 essay in third person narrative impact its band score?
Hi there, a third person narrative is a device for story writing and is not appropriate for IELTS.
In an IELTS essay, if you are asked to give your opinion, use first-person (I believe). When discussing the thoughts, feelings, and actions of others, use impersonal language like 'they' or 'them.
If you need further help with your IELTS preparation, please visit our website or email us anytime.
For OPINION essay, should we stick With only one opinion throughout the essay ?
Should we also mention the other opinion ?
Just intro
P1 our opinion with supporting reason 1
P2 our opinion with supporting reason 2
Conclusion
Please help
Hi Ramandeep, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures - IELTS Advantage'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
thank you
its a very helpful video, thanks a lot sir, could you please make one video like this on DISCUSSION ESSAY, please
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is there any min.- max. limits upon how many pages do we have to write for our essay?
Hi there, here is a link to help you with this:
www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/23/how-many-words-ielts-exam/
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Hi Chris, your materials regarding IELTS writing are amazing and after you have explained everything, it seems not so tough to write a decent essay. However, I do have a question. In most of your essay samples and those you are explaining in your videos, there are only the main advantage and the main disadvantage (problem - solution as well). I mean, a myriad of IELTS resources tell you that you need to write at least two reasons (or whatever you are asked) if it is said in the plural, and you are getting penalized if otherwise. I am not talking about so-called "trainers" on the internet, I mean the official materials. For example, IDP, the organisation responsible for providing IELTS in Russia, organize webinars for the participants where I have heard this information. So, the question is, is this obligatory for scoring 7 or above? I find it quite difficult to squeeze in a few reasons (or whatever) and explain/develop them properly. since time and space is not infinite. That is a really pressing issue and I would be extremely glad if you elucidate it. Perhaps, it is worth recording a video about it with some examples because it is essential for many students struggling with Writing. I am looking forward to your reply.
It is certainly possible to score a 7 or higher by fully developing one main idea in each paragraph. Having only one main idea allows you to fully develop your explanation and example and this will lead to a well-developed essay overall.
If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@@Ieltsadvantage Thanks. That is such a relief. Actually, it sounds logical, it is not a test on your counting skills. However, why it is so? I mean, an overwhelming amount of reputed sources keep saying so and paying attention to it, what is the reason behind this? As I said, it is official info if I can say it about IDP. I mean, that is extremely weird.
Thank you Chris,it was an excellent writing explanation!!
You're very welcome!
Hi, Chris, I thought there was not any problem in making up the examples, because they are not testing our veracity but our English. So I'm a little confused when you corrected her sentence "Ireland doubled the police force". Moreover, you added something about the weekends and In that case, I will be worried about the examiner will think I'm out of topic.
Hi there, here is a link to help you:
www.ieltsadvantage.com/2016/09/02/a-guide-to-telling-the-ielts-examiner-lies/
This should clarify this for you. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
Hi Cris if we agree with the statement then we can write in BP1 benefits and BP2 contrast drawback
Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures - IELTS Advantage'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@@Ieltsadvantage I am feeling so frustrated due to writing
@@Ieltsadvantage like this question (Most people have forgotten the meaning behind the traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves
There are two portions one is about forgotten the meaning behind tradition and the second is enjoy
I am confusing about these type of questions
@@Ieltsadvantage I am confused due to my teacher plz help me with these types of questions
Thank you so much for the perfect structure and most helpful video. I had been googling for how should I start with the essay because all I could find was strategies. God Bless!
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I have got a question. Do you think word count has an impact on score? Would it be better for me to take extra pages if the answer isn't irrelevant? What would you suggest?
Hi Chris hope you are safe and great, I'm always admire and follower of your work, in this essay writing don't u think there is error of subject verb agreement and another point is don't we need to write other side of subject contradict or any disadvantages/ disagree paragraph or taking one side is good enough ... pls help as I'm waiting for your replay
Hi there, we would be happy to help. If you need any clarification or wish to discuss this further, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Hello Chris and the rest panel of judges “hehe” . My question is this- how informal can one be in the ielts speaking test
Hi there, the speaking test is supposed to represent a normal conversation between two people, which means it is informal, but you shouldn't use slang or taboo language or anything else that could be considered extremely informal. If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your IELTS preparation, please feel free to email us.
Please tell me that before writing paraphrasing sentence is there a general sentence need to be write plz tell
Now i understand that how much my writings were bad before this video 😢
One of the very best and dedicated teachers. Hats off to you sir. I enjoy your videos alot. very helpful.
I'm glad you like them!
your videos are awesome Chris! I am a huge admirer of your channel and presently taking help from your channel to get the desired scores in my IELTS academic test. Hope I get the desired results by watching and then putting into practice your great tips.
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Very nice video and a clear step by step explanation. But i do have a simple question if you don't mind. When Explaining the main topics in MBP1 or MBP2, should i present let's say 2 explanations per 1 topic as a chain or can i deliver them separately. Or does it depend on the type of essay? You mentioned in this video that it's better to have a chain of explanation regarding topics in this "Opinion essay", but i do notice separate explanations in other types of essays as well.
Thank you in advance.
Hi there, you are correct. There is a different type of strategy for each different type of essay. If you need our help withy our IELTS test preparation please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
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Dear chris plz tell me can i put 3&4 reason rather puting 2 if i can mange and does this will be okey? Plz let me know, and is there will be any problem if i will use my question paper as my ledger?
Would there be any issue when we add additional info such as 'permitted by their parents' as the question never state the curfew is actually coming from the authority or parents itself?
Very well explained sir, Thank you so much
You're very welcome!
I think you forgot the hyphen ( for grown-up ) in word file.
Hello sir please tell me in agree or disagree topic.
Are we allow to go with partially agree or disagree?
Hi there, you should pick a side and write about the choice you have made. If you need help withy our IELTS test preparation please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Thank you Teacher! Video is useful
You are very welcome.
Thanks for this simple strategy in writing task 2.✌️
You're very welcome!
I m just love your all content ❤️❤️ it's a very helpful for me and also for other Student who are struggling with their ielts exams
Super useful! Please, increase the number of videos❤
Thank you, I will. If you need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS test, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Please tell me how to write opennion essay, both views🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏☹️🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏🤔🙏
This essay agrees instead of I totally agree........... Is it is good to use I ir This essay???
Hi there, yes you can use either of your suggestions. If you have any other questions about your IELTS test preparation feel free to email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Nice that you have reduced a lot of weight
and your lesson, marvelous as always
our tenses will depend on the question right? if the question was situated in the past, we will use past tense throughout?
Exactly.
Sir Could you kindly help on how to answer 2 contradictory sentences Opinion essays.
For Instance " some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species, while others think it is a waste of valuable money.
What is you opinion.?
I know, in opinion essay we should only discuss supporting side with 2 arguments in 2 separate body paragraphs.
It is annoying but I would be grateful if you could help.
Hi there, you should read this article on our website: 'IELTS Advantage - Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Lesson'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. However, if you need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Hello Chris, I thought of getting a clarity when it comes to the structure of this question. Is it okay to expand to 4 paragraph? or should we restrict to 3 paragraph in total?
Hi Ashwin,
Thanks for your comment. You should out this link:
www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/03/ielts-writing-task-2-essay-structures/
This will help you understand each essay structure. I hope it helps!
But what if the question is like below
An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assignments.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
If this is the case, then do we need to explain both the advantages and disadvantages eve if I agreed only with the advantages?
Hi there, the question asks you to list down the advantages and disadvantages, therefore, you should write 2 advantages and 2 disadvantages. If you have further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please feel free contact us.
Sir , which book do you recommend to practice. Thank you.
You can start with the Cambridge IELTS books is a good idea.
We also have a range of course options to help you with your IELTS preparation. Send us an email so we can discuss the options available to you.
Sir as I am beginner to start with ielts,,i am from India ,,, everyone recommend to go to traning center of ilets to prepare,,, because i think your vedios our enough. For me to prepare,,but sometimes think if i write my essay ,,who will check my essay ,,and how I can prepare for speaking ,,as I am not willing to go any center,,i think it's wastw of time ,,,can u tell me ,,how can I check my writing my own self,,,and my speaking mistakes,,,,or should I go to ielts to prepare,,,
Hi there, we would love to help you achieve your desired band score. Please email us so we can further assist you or visit our website. You can find our details in our home description box. I look forward to hearing from you.
Please could you put samples of essays. So it is easy to understand
Hi there, here is a link to some sample essays with the same structure:
www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/03/16/writing-task-two-opinion-essay/
Let me know if this helps.
If you have any other issues or queries, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
It's amazing structure. I hope, I can use in my exam.
It looks like the question asks about our opinion on Government's decision of imposing night curfew to teenagers in certain parts of US. I am confused in this part only.
Hi there, that is right! If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your IELTS preparation, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Good job sir keep it up
Thanks very much!
That was helpful.
I'm glad to hear. Thanks for your comment.
Thank you for your great video!
SIr Please help to provide band score on my essay.
Travel restriction at night for young people is beneficial and helps them to protect by an untold incident. In certain areas of US a movement band has been ordered so that children should not be allowed to go out of their homes else they should be along with their elder family members. In my opinion, this has positive effects on the wellbeing of adults and the prosperity of society.
The first and foremost benefit is that the children will be safe from any crime such as theft or robbery. Many dangerous people come out at night in order to do some robbery of money or snatch mobile phones. Mostly they look for young individuals as they have less power and energy to protect themselves. In fact, there are investigative reports in US which state that 80% of crime happens with young people at night time.
Secondly, young individuals have the tendency to indulge in wrong activities such as going to pubs, drinking alcohol and starting any prohibited addiction. There is no one to see them when it is dark and they can start such unethical activities with their friends. All these activities have a negative impact on their families as well as society. There are minimal chances that they can start a good career or support their family in a good way if they involved in such activities from an early age.
In conclusion, ban to travel by government for young individuals have more pros for them to protect their future life and society. In order to stay away from the stressful movement, the parents should overlook their children and advise them wisely to strictly follow such late hour travel restrictions made by the government.
Hi there, we would be happy to help you with this. If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your exam preparation and give you feedback on your work, you should ask us about joining our VIP Course. Simply send us an email here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
W video. Helped me lots even if it was an old video
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Again, same words, you are simply great🙏
Thank you so much 😀
This has been really useful. Thank you so much.
Thanks Mr,Chris❤
Sir iwant to know that you recommended that students mustprepare on genuine ielts material specially cambridge book , so what I should do because I obtaining approximately20score in ielts reading which donloaded online so please give me regarding this serious delema.
Hi Nirmal, here is a link to help you with this:
www.ieltsadvantage.com/2017/08/02/ielts-practice/
This page will help you find reliable materials for you to study.
If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com. Thanks!
As usual, your explanation was excellent!!
Glad to hear that!
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what band this essay will score?
Hi there, we did not determine a band score for this essay. However, here is a link for you to check out some scored essays:
www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/09/18/ielts-writing-task-2-sample/
I hope this helps.
Sir one doubt? how not permitted by their parents and by the govt the same thing ? sir pls explain
Hi there, I am unsure of your question here. Could you email us with a little more detail so we can help you. Our email is chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
Is this answer still valid?
Hi how can l talk to you teacher?
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Hi Chris, thank you for your job .Your tutorials are really helping me so I'd be happy to watch the explanations for problem solution and cause and effect quastions
Hi there, you're very welcome! You should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Hi Cris good evening I need help in all modules for Academic IELTS,please tell me the mode of communication where I can talk to you…
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@@Ieltsadvantage could you send me your email address the given one is not receiving the mails I sent you a mail but it failed..
@@Ieltsadvantage could you tell me your email address the given one is not receiving mails I sent you mail but failed to deliver..
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Sir,we can use connecters??? like To Begin with, children should remain their home ____________, To elaborate it,___________,for example,_________
Yes, you can. However, you need it to use them appropriately. You should visit our website and search for the article "Cohesive Device" to know how you can use them properly.
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@@Ieltsadvantage if I do as like you teach in this video ?? That is okk ... Means = Topic sentence then full stop then explanation
Hlo sir can u provide me IELTS speaking topic Question
Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Speaking Topics'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you so much, Chris. I am writing to you from Azerbaijan to express how I have enhanced my confidence in handling Writing Task 2. Your elucidations and persuasive efforts have been truly enlightening. I now have faith in my ability to articulate my ideas in the essay adhering to the proper regulations. This transformation is a result of your guidance.
Wonderful!
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You just the best. I just do not gave anymore fears in my writting , tnx fir making it look so easy.
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Hi Dear Sir, thanks
You're very welcome, Mary.
A curfew has been exercised in some states of the US and it is strictly prohibited for children to go out of the home without accompanying an adult, especially at night. Although these rules and regulations seem like a bit tough for a child at a young age, they have been imposed by considering the safety and health of every citizen. Personally, I agree with this view as teenagers can be irresponsible sometimes and often adult guidance is needed to understand society.
Teenagers are easily distracted by fun activities in society and can be irresponsible. In other words, they are more likely to seek for pleasure even during a pandemic and can put the whole community in danger. In addition, teenagers tend to underestimate the consequences of these tough situations. During COVID-19 pandemic, when everyone is told to practise social distancing, teenagers in the US did not follow the said request and continued their usual daily routine in shopping centres and beaches. As a result of that, authorities had to impose strict rules against teenagers’ outdoor activities in order to protect the whole community. Also, adult guidance is mandatory for them in a danger period.
It is known that adults are knowledgable and aware of what is happening around the globe. While youngsters spend most of their time watching movies and playing games, adults seek information about the country’s status by watching the news and reading newspapers. Hence, grown-ups know how to behave during a curfew period than youngsters and adult guidance is needed for them. For these exact reasons, an adult should stay with children every time they are going out.
To conclude, it is apparent that children can be irresponsible sometimes and tend to take curfew measures lightly. We must not forget that these rules have been implemented to their own safety and one small mistake can cost thousands of lives and millions of dollars to a country. Therefore, the decision which has been taken by the US government is practical and completely justifiable.
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Hi chris u r amazing
Thank you!
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How many bands she scored?
thanks sir🙏🏼👍🏼
You're very welcome!
So for these types of questions we always have to mention the opinion?
Hi there, this article 'IELTS Advantage- IELTS Writing: Agree or Disagree Lesson with Sample Answer' will help answer your question. If you have further questions, please feel free to contact us.
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Thanks a lot
Sir, I just want to more writing videos
Hi there, you are welcome to watch our writing playlist here: ua-cam.com/video/1aQZ7_tfgps/v-deo.html
Please enjoy it. If you need help with your IELTS test preparation, send us an email and we'll be happy to help.
Thank you, 😊..
1. Dangerous
2. Losing control of teenagers
I find it so useful, especially the way you structure essays and develop ideas. Thank you so muchh
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IELTS is really unfair. Specially the grading strategy is really unreasonable! I hope they make some changes!
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