Your method is superb. I got an 8 in writing. You're definitely the best,thank you.
I'm writing my IELTS in January, your videos are amazing. Love from Nigeria !
Hi Cris! You're really good at what you do. Thank you very much for helping a thousands of students from all over the world. Wish you all the best!
I personally felt B is a better introduction. It was simple, comprehensible and answers the question perfectly.
WOW! Best video i've seen on this till now! Your advice is so good!
Absolutely, Introduction B. It's quite obvious and answers the question clearly.
I really enjoyed this piece,I hope to apply them to the introductory part of my essay
At first, I thought A is Band 8 because it has vocabulary and heavy words but after your explanation, I am convinced that B is more clear in easy words which is more relatable to the essay topic.
I have seen many videos of many trainers. But this particular videos is absolutely on target as to how a person should be not just writing the essays but even communicating to people otherwise. Thank you very much.
Thanks for wonderful information on the introduction, Chris! There are myriad of tutors out there that give misleading info as a result test takers go astray and begin to think that IELTS is challenging them. I have found only some resources reliable. They are following: IELTS advantage, Liz IELTS as well as materials by Pauline Cullen. Highly recommend for the students who are aiming to pass the exam with flying colours to learn only from these resources!
Your teaching and guiding style is brilliant, I suppose we are misleading by following faulty advice out there in different sources, I found your's is reliable. Many thanks Chris for everything
Thanks chris, u have articulate the introduction confusion nd it helped me alot to write my essay in an outstanding manner ......thks alot
This lesson has been an eye-opener. I've been using a memorized formula in writing because it is what I learned from other youtubers or IELTS teachers. Thank you so much for changing my mindset before I take my exam 2 days from now.
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I love your lessons, you are helping me to improve my English before I saw your videos and lessons I thought very differently about ielts exam and I’m very frightened but after I followed you my fear gone, you’re real teacher and psychologist , go on please
I'm so glad we have helped you overcome your fear. Just remember to always KEEP IT SIMPLE and that will really help!
introduction B is the best , because it uses simple words and show the main idea in a clear and a direct way , also it is show the opinion of the writer clearly at the end of the essay.
We are putting our 100% trust so i hope your teaching method and your suggestions are completely reliable
God bless you.. Lots of love
Introduction A is band 6 and introduction B is band 8 because it helps the reader to understand it more clearly.
Sir thanks for teaching us the correct way as per the examiner requirements.
I used to frame like this. ist A general stmt abt the topic. 2nd paraphrase the topic in own words 3rd Tell the reader my plan.
I have written in below way before reading instructions and then corrected too after going thru ur full video
With the advancement in technology and the expansion of internet connectivity and availability, many things are now become accessible online, even education. That is why, majority of parents nowadays think, that there is no need for sending their children to school. I too agree with this thought as now knowledge can be directly imparted from home, because there is abundance of content already available on the web and is comparatively cheaper in price.
Then I write 1 para on learning platforms on internet, 2nd on sky rocketed school feels, 3rd on parents themselves can teach children and then conclude
Hi Chris! I like your lesson because you emphasise the importance of communicating clearly and effectively.
Introduction B is better and band 8 introduction.This is because the introduction says clearly what the writer wants to say.
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Hello sir. Very happy and impressed with your devotion in your job. Thanks for being so strived to help students pass their exam. Only God will reward you for this.
You expounded requisite correction in writing with logic.. It's really effective thanks.
it's really helpful to me because where i need to focus write a standard essay for writing test
Thanx a lot sir for such a good advice. In my first ielts exam my teacher also ask me to include a background statement and I only got band 6. But now I will definitely use your advice.
I really enjoyed your teaching..Best teacher❤ Thank u so so much😊
I really like all your lessons. These are so useful and to the point. Thanks for your great service Mr. Chris
Simply amazing. Valuable advice for people aiming at higher score in IELTS or TOEFL exam. SIMPLIFYING is at its best in this lesson, and I share the same vision when it comes to smooth writing style.
On the other hand, a memorised structure with cliches works better for people oriented at 5.5 to 7 score because simple and beautiful style requires months of training that students might not have. Furthermore, after 2 hours of stress, writing anything readable at all is already a considerable feat for an intermediate level student.
I am grateful for this eye-opening video. I will use your advice in my exam and will let you know if it works.
The best video about ielts writing I have seen ever.
Hello Cris, this is what exactly I am looking for, instead of using cram words we need to use original words from our own mind.
Introduction B is clear,simple and natural!
Thanks a lot, I've been struggling how to write a convenient introduction ( plenty of sources and contradictions as well ) until I watched this amazing video, your method is perfectly logical.
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thats great CHris .Thank you so much for such effort and much-needed content .. pLease make more videos on how to write advanced structures
Loved the way u explained 💜
chris !!!your are proving one of the my thought that !!!!Keep it simple as .Introduction B would be far more effective compare to Introduction A
it was really interesting and educative to hear
I was wondering why not in a classroom? What a brilliant example for the importance of introduction. Very creative.
In the middle of the video, I paused no to forget to leave a comment, YOU ARE WNDERFUL. this what Ive been searching for. thank you
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Thank u so much sir for this effective introduction.. I was scrolling the effective introduction. Thanks again update the effective introduction for students 🙏🙏
Wow this is the video that I need badly 😍
Thank you sir.
Really loved the way you explain things so easily 😀
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how nice the introduction of your video is! 😁
Thank you, loved it!
Introduction B is more convenient to read and not written as complicated as A, but it genuinely introducts with the topic in the most appropriate way.
I think writing pattern is different than speaking. Hence following a structure is necessary in order to score higher. For example using background statement will give a good start to your essay, similarly including sentences like this essay will discuss ....... is another way to out things nice and structured while writing an essay. Please guide me if I am wrong! Would love to hear from you Chirs.
Hello teacher Chris.
You explain clearly that introduction A is band 6.😁😁👍
It's amazing. Video is almost 22minuts. But it feels like 5minutes.👍Thank you.
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I saw many videos related writing...but this video is out of the world...i can say.....i just love the way he teaches..❤️..every concept is going to clear to me....❤️ Respect..
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Introduction B is way better! It's got clarity & originality; it's simple and very good foundation to achieve a well written essay. Thanks Mr. Chris.
Thanks, I understood how I must write introductions. I love you channel.
I really enjoyed your way of teaching.
Thanks
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Thank you, it was very helpful, fortunately i have never done most of these mistakes, because i watched a lot of your lessons)
Sir ur love seriuosly ..... Great teacher i have ever seen
Hi Chris, Your guidance touched my ❤
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Thank you a lot for great explanation. With love from Uzbekistan.
Thank you amazing teacher 👊🏻
Thanks for the cool video You always think about students and their results We appreciate your kindness and fairness Thanks a lot 🤩🤩👍👍
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Thank you very much sir for telling us the those things which we have to avoid while writing introduction. I learned a lot from your videos and I improved my English too. Thank you sir once again.
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Chris Pel is a living legend. Amazing teachers are very rare. You are humble and always make it very easy for us to understand the English especially in all the four sections of IELTS. And the great thing about you is that you give away almost everything for free. I wonder if a student subscribes to your paid course it will be more than brilliant.
Completely agree with you, Sir. I used Chris's writing strategies for my essays for writing task 2 and got 7 on the exam. So I can assure you, it works. Thanks, Chris, for you guidance, live long and prosper!
P.S. Needless to say that you have to work on your essays and write many of them, using those strategies. You can't just take a strategy and write a band 9 essay at once. It doesn't work like this
i learnt a essential strategy to write a effective and appropriate manner.
Thank God!!at last I hv found a perfect Ielts teacher🙏thank u Chris..plz keep on making plethora of such videos..oops sorry I mean simply more videos 😄👍
A must watch video for all those who have prblm in writing modules...thank you so much sir
Very informative video. Great work!! Is the strategy of not using memorised phrases applicable to speaking test also?
I really do like the way you explain it! 😉
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Oh My God Sir !!!!!!!! I'm so lucky that i'm watching this video and commenting while watching this. You don't know sir how u helped me today. i was confused how to write band 8 introduction. Now i can proudly say after watching your videos i will get band 8...Lots of love from #INDIA sir !!!!!!!!
Thank you Chris for such kind of nice content because before this video,I'm really really confused about how to write an accurate introduction of writing task 2.
Again thanks a lot 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
B is absolutely correct and I apply this technique in mytask 2 essay , thankyouuu
Absolutely B is Best introduction .I can understand it easily so I am with b
It has been a great class (you can read the comments), I would add the Spanish proverb "The good if it is simple, two times good".
This video was so beneficial for me! Thank you
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Thank you for the video👍👍
Amazing Chris 💕
Thank you so much sir for this easy explanation about mistakes which we do in introduction for making it fency. But I would like to request you, please sir can you make such video (with having similar content like mistakes) on body paragraphs and conclusion paragraph. ( I know free challenge is available for us but to be honest , I found it bit more easier to understand)
Out of class. Such an amazing scene👏👏
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You are the best teacher👏👏👏👏
Thank you jare. This was helpful ❤
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Thank you a lot. You really helped me and I can say without any hesitation that my method of writing task 2 has changed a lot after watching this video. I hope you will make again this kinda great videos soon
Definitely, it's B. I have learned many things from your videos thank you for your efforts.
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Always use "to" after the word prefer. Using "Than" after prefer is wrong.
example: I prefer tea to coffee
the first sentence in B is another example
Sir,
Assalamualaikum. How are you? You glad to know that your every ielts advice specially writing task 2 advice is so much fascinating.I always try to follow your every advice.Thanks a lot our honourable teacher .
Thanks for your lesson,! I believe introduction By is band 8 because it summarizes his opinion says: this is preferable to..... Because....and also answers exactly the question do you agree or disagree
Hello sir, B is a good introduction. Your videos has helped me a lot..You are the best ielts teacher. Thanks a lot.
Introduction B is band 8 because it is easy to understand and it is perfectly introduced the question.
Learning so much from your videos.
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You are ❤️ thank you so much chris
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I love it 💕
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Thank you soo much for helping us !!!
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Thanks sir for giving this type of knowledge because its very useful for every one who has scared about diffcult to doing sach a long words and paraphase with questions if necessary its truely falls thanks criss
Since I have published scientific papers before, I wasn't at all worried about task 1. But I was really scared about task 2. I completed this whole course in a day and got to know everything that I have to take care for task 2. Bam I got 7.5 in writing which I wasn't expecting at all. Thank you Chris.
Is it ok to use relevant phrasal verbs in an IELTS essay ?