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  • Are you writing a college essay? START HERE. Brainstorming with my Essence Objects Exercise is a great way for students to begin the college essay writing process with confidence. What's an essence object? Find out!
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 94

  • @Collegeessayguy
    @Collegeessayguy  5 років тому +7

    What are some of your essence objects? Share below!

  • @strugglingcollegestudent
    @strugglingcollegestudent 3 роки тому +89

    Don't mind me just having an existential crisis while writing college essays

  • @jameschow8874
    @jameschow8874 5 років тому +85

    What's a food that reminds you of your grandmother?
    What's an object that reminds you of home?
    What's an object that reminds you of your connection with your father?
    What object represents your relationship with your mother?
    What object represents your superpower?
    What's a secret that you have?
    What's a piece of art or music that you love?
    What's something that makes you feel safe
    What's a challenge that you've faced in your life?
    What resource did you have to draw on to make it through that challenge?
    What's a goal or dream for the future that you have?
    What's something that you love to do so much that you lose time?
    What's a fear that you have?
    What's something that you regret?
    What object reminds you of a perfect day?
    What's a book that changed your life?
    What's your favorite holiday?
    What's something people associate with you?
    I wouldn't be who I am today without _____?
    My life forever changed when _______?
    What's something that you wouldn't want to reveal to just anyone?
    What's an object that represents your connection with your best friend?
    What do you want to be when you grow up?
    What's a quality you possess that you think is underappreciated?
    Which essences of yours are missing from your list?

  • @hopemooketsa1867
    @hopemooketsa1867 4 роки тому +66

    Damn. This must be what therapy feels like. I actually shed a tear trying to complete this exercise. And most of all.. I just realised that I'm not boring at all.. If anything I'm quite interesting.. I think I would like me.. If I met me..
    Wow📝 you need a nap after completing this

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  4 роки тому +6

      Wow, Hope. Couldn't have said it better myself. We've all got a story. Just takes a little digging. :)

  • @amarisky21
    @amarisky21 3 роки тому +49

    I didn't expect it to go like this... I cried a few times and had to stop the video. This exercise helped me organize my life into simple phrases. I feel like everyone should complete this exercise even if they're not working on a college essay. THANK YOU!!! This was definitely a much needed roller-coaster.

  • @tayfrankel750
    @tayfrankel750 2 роки тому +18

    my college counselor sent me this video to help me brainstorm ideas, but this hit pretty deep and I'm currently rethinking my life's choices

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  2 роки тому +1

      LOL, happens sometimes! Thanks for watching.

  • @paysonzhang5797
    @paysonzhang5797 5 років тому +96

    As I went through the questions I found that I don’t know who I am ... :(

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  4 роки тому +8

      It's never too late to start. I recommend starting with the Values Exercise: www.collegeessayguy.com/cwiab-student-15-values-exercise

  • @niaavaadams1200
    @niaavaadams1200 2 роки тому +11

    I cried so much during this and really didn't think I would. This honestly felt like free therapy and brought up many memories. Thank you so much for this video, I"m definitely going to send it to my friends

  • @LaLa-en2wb
    @LaLa-en2wb 3 роки тому +10

    This guy saves so many lives each day

  • @lillianwyckoff4022
    @lillianwyckoff4022 2 роки тому +10

    Watching this I realized I'm not even a person lol. There is nothing interesting or deep about me. I don't have a superpower. I haven't struggled. I do really well in school, that's what I spend all my time on, but I can't write about that! "I'm smart let me in your college" lol. I get so irritated when people assume I'm this one dimensional person who just studies all the time but it's true! I'm going to watch your values video now though

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Рік тому +1

      Thanks for sharing! Try some more brainstorming! You likely have values, skills, qualities, and itnerests that are worth highlighting in your college essays. :)

    • @smartyltc20o7
      @smartyltc20o7 11 місяців тому

      Same. What did you end up writing about?

  • @saltyxchip
    @saltyxchip 4 роки тому +29

    DONT PUT GRANDMA IN A BOX LMAO

  • @Grkbkasys
    @Grkbkasys 3 роки тому +9

    Wow, that was ....got no words ...before, I didn't think I have a story to tell but now hmm ...yeah I've got a lot of untold stories

  • @karinacastaneda4031
    @karinacastaneda4031 5 років тому +8

    A dream catcher, map, butterfly, ice pack...this was super helpful, thank you!

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  4 роки тому +1

      That's awesome. Each one of those is a story I want to hear about.

  • @enKhma3
    @enKhma3 Рік тому +1

    Thank you. It helped me to find ideas to write on my college essay after uploaded 5 years. It's still valuable. Good luck.

  • @astronae
    @astronae 3 роки тому +9

    you and your wife's tradition is so cute omg

  • @hamfahimkabir
    @hamfahimkabir Рік тому +2

    Great resource. I explored so many unknown things about me and my values. I got a glimpse of how people view me. Thank you so much.

  • @candybar5927
    @candybar5927 4 роки тому +6

    This really works. I am shook.

  • @alithea9510
    @alithea9510 Рік тому +3

    It seems like a lot of these are so personal that I wouldn't want to share them with the vast majority of people, let alone the people reading my college application. Question: what if you're so boring you have nothing to write about?

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Рік тому +3

      Colleges want to get an idea of the skills, qualities, values, and interests you'll bring with you to the school as an incoming student. Sometimes, a good way to do this is by showcasing vulnerability, but there are also other ways. It's OK if you don't want to dig too deep into your personal life in your applications. As long as you can provide insight into who you are and what values you possess, your application will be doing its job. Hope this helps!

  • @robertsun8494
    @robertsun8494 2 роки тому +7

    Just saying, your friendship bracelet is probably the best object possible to represent the amazing relationship you have with your wife. I'm so confused about this exercise though, what do we do if we can answer your brainstorming questions but can't exactly think of an object to describe it?

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  2 роки тому +1

      It's OK if you can't think of an object for each question. Maybe that even means there's some insight to illuminate there, i.e....you don't value material possessions, but instead, X. Thanks for watching!

  • @riotsammy
    @riotsammy 4 роки тому +19

    This video's got me all depressed. Unexpected...

  • @margaritabautista9840
    @margaritabautista9840 4 роки тому +6

    Your videos are extremely helpful. Thank you so much!

  • @joannelee5574
    @joannelee5574 3 роки тому +8

    Dang, I feel like I just left another plane of reality

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 роки тому +3

      I guess I should have listed that as a potential side-effect. :)

    • @joannelee5574
      @joannelee5574 3 роки тому

      In an alternate universe, you’re for sure a therapist

  • @aniruddhvasishta8334
    @aniruddhvasishta8334 4 роки тому +6

    8:08 damn bro I could've gotten 20 objects just from that question (/s)

  • @yourbestfriend2564
    @yourbestfriend2564 3 роки тому +4

    this really attacked my soul lol
    also shout out to guru academic advising my counselor there recommended this

  • @gamerguy8516
    @gamerguy8516 5 років тому +12

    that's so deep

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  5 років тому +3

      It can get pretty deep, yeah! It's exciting to uncover and discover these parts of your life. :) Hope you have fun with it.

  • @session811
    @session811 2 роки тому +3

    Really, thank you soooo much ❤❤

  • @brianshirazi373
    @brianshirazi373 7 років тому +11

    barbecue sauce is dank

  • @AdnanKhan-vw6ix
    @AdnanKhan-vw6ix 6 років тому +2

    am i gonna write these all in my 650 words ? confusing !! can you please tell me what about should i write in my common application essay ??

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  5 років тому

      Thanks for sharing the link, Liam!
      There are also more resources listed in the video description!

  • @MsJeannieKellyTX
    @MsJeannieKellyTX 3 роки тому +2

    Phenomenal

  • @ThomasTheThermonuclearBomb
    @ThomasTheThermonuclearBomb 8 місяців тому +1

    that moment when half of your items are pride flags because you grew up in the south

  • @PamPassey
    @PamPassey Рік тому

    What was the name of the body language book?

  • @HappinessTheBrand
    @HappinessTheBrand 11 місяців тому

    So extremely helpful

  • @yoyotir1360
    @yoyotir1360 3 роки тому +2

    well I still have 7days but I didn't start writing my essay yet because I don't know what to write about

  • @chenchen-eo4yf
    @chenchen-eo4yf 10 місяців тому

    What's the music in the background?! so calm!

  • @brookepitt7600
    @brookepitt7600 Рік тому

    I have a million ideas I just can’t seem to decide which will best show me😢

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Рік тому +1

      Write a rough draft for a couple topics and go from there!

  • @yerassyl1368
    @yerassyl1368 3 роки тому +1

    I am just a crap. Even here I have nothing to write, my life is a big crap

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 роки тому +2

      Disagree. Keep pushing. Take a look at some more of my brainstorming exercises. You may have not found the right one for you yet.

  • @mxrciful7200
    @mxrciful7200 Рік тому

    Can't think of any objects :(

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Рік тому +1

      That's OK! Check out some of our other brainstorming exercises. Not all of them will be applicable to everyone, so hopefully you find one that is generative and relevant to your experience.

  • @isabelleoyewole2617
    @isabelleoyewole2617 2 місяці тому

    i know im cooked cus i couldn't even answer any of these questions..

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  2 місяці тому

      You got this. Sometimes you need to be in the right headspace for brainstorming. Try again later and/or try different exercises! I have tons more on my channel/website.

  • @m.01st
    @m.01st 4 роки тому

    Can I have THE BLACK EDITION PLEASE !!!!!

    • @hopemooketsa1867
      @hopemooketsa1867 4 роки тому

      Which one is that.. Drop a link..
      But I actually found this helpful.. A good starting point..

    • @jessicashahan9888
      @jessicashahan9888 4 роки тому

      What is something people associated with you? My friend says her butt. I say my hight for me.

    • @m.01st
      @m.01st 4 роки тому

      Bro.. I don’t remember typing this.. lol

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 роки тому

      Would love to hear your feedback! Feel free to send us an email to help@collegeessayguy.com

    • @m.01st
      @m.01st 3 роки тому

      @@Collegeessayguy Hey man, I don’t Recall typing this.. but Thanks for Reaching out

  • @alexm2136
    @alexm2136 3 роки тому +1

    one of the cringiest videos I've ever seen

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 роки тому +11

      Ok then! Thanks for chiming in.

    • @pablocuin2396
      @pablocuin2396 3 роки тому

      @@Collegeessayguy face yourself

    • @aspicymeme2773
      @aspicymeme2773 2 роки тому

      you're too young to be on the internet, youl regret it in the future