This is a pretty major improvement on a lot of fronts from content I've seen from you previously, in my opinion. It feels way more atmospheric and very accurate to the original story. My only minor gripe is that to be truly accurate, during the "wait your turn" segment there would be a chant of "HE'S RAP RAT AND HE'S THE BOSS." But this is very good, 9/10.
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1:34 jumpscare
1:08 Everybody Say Cheese
Wait your turn!!!!!
This is a pretty major improvement on a lot of fronts from content I've seen from you previously, in my opinion. It feels way more atmospheric and very accurate to the original story. My only minor gripe is that to be truly accurate, during the "wait your turn" segment there would be a chant of "HE'S RAP RAT AND HE'S THE BOSS." But this is very good, 9/10.
T H E. BO SS
hes rap rat and hes the boss guys. don’t get that confused.
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0/10, the guy didn't say "He's Rap Rat and he's the boss." /j
This line is getting overused
@@tailsthefox_ It's an important part of the original creepypasta, that's like making squidward's suicide not have the concert or the shotgun
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Ok?