@@curioussloth101 Emily would school the shit out of her. She is queen of unconventional poetry. And Edgar Allan Poe would certainly rip her limb from limb with criticism. He was a prolific literary critic, as well as author and poet.
it can be if it is done correctly, but the type that is done incorrectly is the type where they praise being sad and saying having a mental disorder is amazing. To me it sounds like they’re either A. A masochist B. Desperate for attention
i mean, sadness is where some of the most raw, authentic emotions come from, so "sad" art and poetry can be really really breathtaking. gabbie just ... is a terrible author.
IK it's awful :/ My book, the principles of brand marketing is on Amazon.I worked really hard on it for 7 months. Nobody will buy it and it makes me wanna rip my penis off. www.amazon.com/Principles-Brand-Marketing-Blake-Herdlein-ebook/dp/B08BC7Z9VK/ref=sr_1_3?crid=33UAOE16DKVPR&dchild=1&keywords=the+principles+of+brand+marketing&qid=1596218753&sprefix=the+principles+of+brand%2Caps%2C163&sr=8-3
Imagine being a tree planted from a tiny acorn and spending hundreds of years growing, bracing the elements and housing small animals just to one day be cut down to be transformed into Adultolesence by Gabbie Hanna. What a sad life.
Well, most paper is made of softwood conifers, though oak is used for some paper. Trees used in paper making also generally come from farms and nurseries, not forests. Still, I get your point. What a waste.
Trees planted especially for paper are generally fast growing therefore they only need at least 6 years until they are harvested. But I still agree it's a waste of trees and water to print this book.
Anastasia Peteanu almost 2K and I’m the second comment! If anyone is reading this and there’s not more than 3K and still only 2 reply’s don’t reply yet! Wait till there’s 3K so fro every 1000 likes there’s 1 comment!
Funnily enough, I’ve seen people anywhere between 15 and 21 still have that kind of Facebook status. There’s almost always a spelling mistake or two 🤦♀️
@@LRZMKB1013 not the quote, your entire comment. There’s a comment with k likes that says almost the same. Being shocked that she didn’t put it in lol.
@@user-iu4yn4tr1r if it has a lot of likes, evidently everyone from the myspace days thought the same thing I did. All of her "poems" are variations of shitty memes or variations of shitty myspace quotes. "Real eyes realize real lies" being the most famous. Anyways cool for them for getting lots of like. The most I've ever gotten on a comment was 3.5k and I didn't even realize that was a thing people try to obtain i just get bored and comment random shit like everyone else.
as an Asian, I can confirm that even companies here would refuse. You know why? Because we Asians like to be practical, and nothing about her use of space is.
@@raishanovanty7813 That's what I mean, my comment had to be sarcastic... I didn't mean it for serious, her poetry really sucks with slang and all those depressed tumblr girl 2013 vibes
@@im_so_bored3896 While we did have to write poetry and create our own anthologies, the class was mostly about studying and analyzing the elements, techniques, and changes in style over time.
This is frustrating 'cause some dedicated writers spend years trying to get published and this gal just throws something together and calls it poetry??
@@sanujib5686 The typos definitely ruins it quite a bit. The lowercase "i" just bugs me because along with the other typos, it just doesn't seem like a stylistic choice. I can't say wouldn't bug me at least a little, but I would understand it more as a writers choice. Not to mention the book in general is just all bad writing from what I could tell
@@Jammaverse not necessarily. Sometimes when you're depressed you need to expose it, because you need help and you need people to notice it. That's why many depressed teenager are showing their marks (like they're wearing shirt with short sleeve in winter just for people to see it) because they are seeking for attention, and they're to scared to talk to people so they expect others to see their pain and help them. So no, a person who say to everyone that they're depressed isn't necessarily faking it, or using it for being loved. But it doesn't change the things that her poetry is incredibly bad for a 30 years old woman, honestly it was the kind of thing I read on Instagram when I was 15 and depressed, and even at this age I had the maturity to realize that it was just basic sentence that not making me special or quirky to say. (I found way more deep and well-written paragraphs in my old bullet journal, like things that I wrote at 2am after a panick attack, when my thoughts weren't very clear) (sorry for my English, I made my best, it's not my first language)
@@Jammaverse yeah I hate that type of person too, they think mental illness is cool and don't understand how hard it is to have one (I know a girl who say she's boulimic and borderline just for attention, well I know that she's clearly not okay for saying things like that but as a borderline person who have a boulimic friend it just bother me so much). With my comment I just wanted to explain the fact that a depressed person don't necessarily hide it, because I know a lot of very young teen in Instagram who get a lot of hate for posting about their depression by people who say that they're faking it, and it can cause a lot of damage to not be taken seriously when you're in depression. (my English is sooo bad I'm sorry)
There's a reason why she went after Rachel, because she feels threatened by her I guess. Also, because she's a woman too. She won't rip into James because he's a man.
Dark humor was fun and edgy when it wasn’t in the mainstream. Daria was that classic show full of sarcasm, satire and dark humor that utilized historical references and literature books but the dark humor today is legit just about dying, hating and complaining about a so called entitled life in the first world country.
Raindrops fall from the sky “time is relative. Beauty is relative. Family is relatives.” Oh god the trauma she must’ve gone through to think of that one.
A limerick poem about how bad gabbys poems are: Gabbys poems are quite bad But she thinks they are rad They are trash They gave me a rash They’re so dumb, it makes me mad
Hailey Nicole that’s what she said,“i’m not like other girls because im depressed”,lots of other girls are going thru shit,and thats ok.How are ya doing now tho?
Let’s get something straight, these aren’t poems if anything they are awful cheesy one liner jokes with horrible punchlines and corny overused tumblr quotes and phrases that everyone has heard before, nursery rhymes at its finest
I bet if anybody else did this y’all would like it so shut up.... it’s really actually not that good, and I’m guessing she didn’t get professional help. She’ll get better, she just needs help! I’m not a pro at poetry or anything, but I’m honestly telling you common sense most of you clearly don’t have any. I know these comments are constructive criticism, but can you leave it in this comment section and not hers? Most of you are grown adults making fun of her... leave her be lol. You people are super inconsiderate, she probably gets really upset because of things like this :(
And you guys are really sick... these poems are about her childhood trauma. Idk why y’all hate her so much, but please stop it probably really effects her... she’s a human too!
She thinks being “depressed” makes her quirky and not like other girls... I genuinely feel bad for those people who are actually depressed because people like Gabbie make it seem like a joke.
Well, I feel mixed about the whole thing. I cope with my depression and PTSD by joking about it. I do it also because it can sometimes be pretty heavy to only talk about it in a serious light. Hell, even my therapist jokes about it sometimes. HOWEVER, Gabbi sometimes uses her depression as if it's a personality trait, which is just... Not great to say the least.
Thick Fil-A I think joking is okay, but treating it like “Hahaha, I just wanna dieeee” comes off very “Oh I’m so quirky and cute but also sad I wanna ✨die✨ úwù.” You have to be very careful with when and where you choose to make those kind of jokes, especially in media, where people sometimes will have little to no context. And this... ain’t it. When you write your book about ✨👗🌸🍕🍫🧘🏼♀️💭💌💘✨, you cant just throw in suicidal references. You haven’t built that background understanding of it. It’s hollow. It makes it look like a cute aesthetic.
This doesn’t deserve to be in the poetry category. These “poems” are pins that 13 year old girls who are “depressed” get from Pinterest and post on everywhere
As a 14 year old I feel... Certainly not fucking insulted because this is true and my eyes are bleeding from the "poems". (We are being pretty generous when calling these poems.)
As a writer, I find this so frustrating. There’s so many talented people out there who will never have their work read because they don’t have the popularity. 😔
I don't even read books that often but seeing those "poems" just annoys me. I can only imagine how annoyed you, a writer would get. Because those pile of words are kinds of sentences that I'd written on my Facebook posts when I was a fucking teenager. I can't stomach the fact that her fame let's her print these garbage out.
I understand all shades of your frustration. I am an amatour painter and need at least 50 pieces to exhibit them. Took 5 years and I surpassed the 50 but still did not do the exhibition yet, as if you ask me I only have 10 “good” ones. Some of my friends try and convince me but I just don’t think or feel it. So, getting back to the reply, trial and error creates experience and develops skill. (Not going to mention talent as I am not at this time convinced I have it or that I have explored it fully or given it a fair chance) The “small” ones of us may never get a chance as we have “youtubers and influencers” who get to where we dream in a hewrtbeat. Maybe that is why the effort level is clear and we should continue to keep it this way or all art forms (poetry included) will die?
Hmm, relatable. But if I translate to my language, it doesn't make sense/it isn't correct. So sometimes I don't use the correct form in the english grammar because of my first language.
Elisa Castro I agree it’s so weird and kinda gross that she put these in a book to sell, I always thought poems were a form of art and this is jus not it
@@kadianhenriques1112 she wanted to portray adult problems through a child eyes (not saying she did it well, it's what she was going for) poems for children can be amazing, but these poems aren't even childish, they are rushed, lazy and shallow.
There are poems where using slang words or words like "wut" and stuff really does work if there is actual meaning towords it ( I remember one in english but I forgot the nqme) but this is just stupid in this book
I feel like I understand poetry. I feel like she barley understood the minimum and assumed she was a genius. Poetry is not random dead brains thoughts, there needs to be message and content.
It’s good when they talk about how they overcame it, or when they talk about their journey through struggling with their mental health, and its actually sincere.
does this book even count as poetry? (there's maybe a couple poems. but there isn't enough to count as a poetry book) I'm related to a couple famous poets(distant), and they would most likely be horrified by this book of "poetry" my ex had this book, and it was her favorite book. so glad I left her if THIS stuff is her 'favorite book'. I'm pretty sure she read the "poetry" more than she read my, actual, poetry
Which she clearly didn’t read lol I forget who but some you tuber was just reviewing it and showed how she did one of those “do you know internet slang!” interviews and she didn’t know sooooo many words that were in her book. Her book has a “ghostwriter” w their name on front and picture on the back cover at least though.... but not even reading it? Your own book? Lol
I’ve seen better writing from a 2nd grader telling a story about going to the store but their friend Ariana Grande got abducted by aliens and they had to fight them with crayons to get her back.
have you seen ANY other youtuber book other than Joey Graceffa's books? this book is creative, funny, deep, and well thought out. she never claimed to be an amazing poet. this is her first book lol
Lana Grimmistel nono you’re fine lolol I wasn’t being offended I just found the book to be funny because so many people thought it was “edgy” to read it
I clicked this video To have some fun But what happened here Just felt badly done As someone who Can't write for shit The poems here Made me cry a bit I watched talent die And it's blood pour out A scarring experience As bad as rotten trout The whole concept of this book Has just made me sad And that's coming from me Who writes fanfics on wattpad
trisha's, in my opinion, is leagues above gabbie's cuz she actually has raw emotion in her poems and i know there arent rly any layers to her poems but there arent any in gabbie's either. trisha's poetry book is much better cuz it actually feels like she put thought into the poems, and while they arent works of art, they are still better than "family is relatives"
trishas is a lot better, theres lowkey depth in some of them, and you can tell she doesnt take herself too seriously which makes them a lot less pretentious
If you're rich you can go to a vanity publisher. Pretty much instead the publishing firm covering most/all of the production cost in order to buy to right to market/sell your content, with a vanity publisher YOU pay for the entire production process and the publisher distributes the book to retail outlets. It's more or less a glorified, more expensive form of self-publishing - but somewhat more effective since while vanity pubs don't really market the books, they DO distribute it to retailers for sale which is much harder for a single person to do self-publishing. So. My guess is she went through a vanity publisher; they don't care about the book content, just money.
Best vid reviewing the worst poetry ever. As a poet, I was offeNdeD by this “poetry” but the way you word how ridiculous it is makes it hilarious and for that I thank you. I thank you for finding a LeGiT use for this book.
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Imagine all the talented authors who are actually qualified to write a book being turned down by publishers only to see this be published.
All these so called famous social media people writing books, idk why. And calling themselves "authors". I hate that.
Yamini John it’s terrible because some people actually put thought and emotion into their work and you can feel it, it’s authentic... this ain’t it.
Damn f for those authors
I will be trying to get my book published soon. Wish me luck!!!
@@merikijiya13 gl!!!
this isn't poetry. these is just a bunch of bad tweets
She should put that as a disclaimer
these is
luviley
tweets that should've stayed in the drafts
😆
i literally said this and then i deleted it because i didn’t want to be called not original
Percy Shelley did not drown at sea for this shit to be considered “poetry”
tea, sis
Edgar Allen Poe and even Emily Dickson would be ashamed of the poems they hear from this book.
@@curioussloth101 Emily would school the shit out of her. She is queen of unconventional poetry. And Edgar Allan Poe would certainly rip her limb from limb with criticism. He was a prolific literary critic, as well as author and poet.
I laughed harder than I should have at this. FINISH HER.
@@carnuatus Her heart would be the one under the floorboards then.
she should’ve written her “poems” on twitter instead of wasting trees cause yIKES
yeah 😭
This-.
Then she would mot have earned money, that is what it is about.
“Time is relative, beauty is relative, family is relatives”.
The profundity is astounding.
I wish i could have those skills at my literature class
(Sarcastic tone added)
Tearing up rn... it’s so beautiful
I really found that single poem incredibly funny
I'm pretty sure that one is meant to just be a joke, but that doesn't really help her case much lol
T H A T ' S D E E P
This book literally sounds like a satire tumblr post making fun of people who pretend to be depressed
Uncle Cracker but she isn't writing it as satire
Honestly she should've just advertised it as that😂😂
Perfect.
Ramen Noodles So is just a tumblr post of someone pretending to be depressed
Legit
She sounds like a 12 year old who just learned what swearing was.
thats one way to put it :)
Exactly
No one said it has to be deep, like children's book, so what if they are for young teenagers?
it’s even worse. i know 12 year olds who can produce better poetry than this
amrellist uwu I can and I’m BAD at it Lmaoo
This is so disgusting! She’s using “being sad” as an aesthetic, does she think it’s like artsy???
it can be if it is done correctly, but the type that is done incorrectly is the type where they praise being sad and saying having a mental disorder is amazing. To me it sounds like they’re either
A. A masochist
B. Desperate for attention
Lmao wait until you meet dixie damelio...the true queen of *sad aesthetic* 😩💔
i mean, sadness is where some of the most raw, authentic emotions come from, so "sad" art and poetry can be really really breathtaking. gabbie just ... is a terrible author.
i have chronic depression, i'm so quirky 😂👌🏻👌🏻
This is actually offensive to people who seriously go through depression and anxiety. I'm pretty sure she doesn't even feel this way.
Who’s her publisher? If he can publish her, he can publish my 13 year old brother’s homework
LMAO
💀
IK it's awful :/ My book, the principles of brand marketing is on Amazon.I worked really hard on it for 7 months. Nobody will buy it and it makes me wanna rip my penis off.
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@@b.herdlein8764 Dang :( Have you advertise it somewhere else? Or put it in bookstores.
I’m surprised she didn’t include “real eyes, realize, real lies”
s(he) be(lie)ve(d)
sebongie sbeve
No, but if she heard that she probably would have thought that was gold.
@@user-uc6hl6pr1j heart wrenching 😔
True love is eight letters. So is bullshit.
Pretty sure all these “poems” are stolen from tweets/memes/other corners of the internet
I feel like I’ve heard them all before somewhere!
She took my friends Marilyn Monroe one.
Yea...like 10 years ago on Tumblr 😄
minniemousey223 seriously?cant you like sue her for that?
I do to I feel like I’ve seen them
is bc is extremely basic
I felt the same
Imagine being a tree planted from a tiny acorn and spending hundreds of years growing, bracing the elements and housing small animals just to one day be cut down to be transformed into Adultolesence by Gabbie Hanna. What a sad life.
This could be a potential poem
Well, most paper is made of softwood conifers, though oak is used for some paper. Trees used in paper making also generally come from farms and nurseries, not forests.
Still, I get your point. What a waste.
This is already like 10 times better than gabbie's whole "poetry" book
Lmao
Trees planted especially for paper are generally fast growing therefore they only need at least 6 years until they are harvested. But I still agree it's a waste of trees and water to print this book.
I just kept thinking “surely it can’t get worse.”
but it did.
Haha im your first comment and your 1k like.But you probably dont care soooo
Anastasia Peteanu almost 2K and I’m the second comment! If anyone is reading this and there’s not more than 3K and still only 2 reply’s don’t reply yet! Wait till there’s 3K so fro every 1000 likes there’s 1 comment!
It’s the same feeling I had watching game of thrones season 8
Orla Coleman that sounds like one of her poems
6th comment, 11k likes. Tf
gabbie writes for the teenagers who say "that's the idea" when their parents tell them that smoking kills
Well said😂😂
Oh my god😂 that really painted a picture in my mind
@side effects yes. stop being such an edgelord
side effects ^ what they said. Stop.
Lauren we dont claim her
This "poetry" is basically everyone's 'deep' and sad facebook statuses when they were 13
Funnily enough, I’ve seen people anywhere between 15 and 21 still have that kind of Facebook status. There’s almost always a spelling mistake or two 🤦♀️
@@oliviasymonds928 gabbies like 27 or 28 though lol
@@Lauren-rl4eu dis-gos-tan 😂
Good thing I never had facebook I wrote poetry from the social anxiety throughout school.
Can't relate, Never wrote those thoughts down.
I'm shocked that she didn't put in:
"Real eyes
Realize
Real lies"
Copieddddddd
@@samonakian9280 its a myspace quote that every basic girl used to have on their page
@@LRZMKB1013 not the quote, your entire comment. There’s a comment with k likes that says almost the same. Being shocked that she didn’t put it in lol.
@@user-iu4yn4tr1r oh cool well I'm not the only one then
@@user-iu4yn4tr1r if it has a lot of likes, evidently everyone from the myspace days thought the same thing I did. All of her "poems" are variations of shitty memes or variations of shitty myspace quotes. "Real eyes realize real lies" being the most famous. Anyways cool for them for getting lots of like. The most I've ever gotten on a comment was 3.5k and I didn't even realize that was a thing people try to obtain i just get bored and comment random shit like everyone else.
These remind me of those Asian shirts that are translated wrong.
as an Asian, I can confirm that even companies here would refuse. You know why? Because we Asians like to be practical, and nothing about her use of space is.
@@moderndaydreammm PERIODT
ModernDay Dream Only in America. 😂
@@moderndaydreammm Lmao yes periodt
U mean translated wong
"sometimes...
when you feel hungry,
is because you didn't eat"
-Gabbie Hanna
Lol
Lol
Lol
Lol
Lol
gabbie hanna: when i close my eyes, i can’t see.
*cries in 14 year old girl*
Elena Yu i’m 14 and i feel attacked. but like noooo...
Suli E. it was meant to be a joke but sorry 😅
Elena Yu Lol i know it was joke i’m sorry if my reply seemed upset i was literally laughing. all love here 💕😂😂😂
LMAO
I showed my sister this video after she preordered Gabbie Hanna’s next poetry book. My sister canceled the order.
Thank you for saving her money.
We all wrote like this.
However, we had the sense
To delete Wattpad.
what a beautiful hiaku
Wattpad is true literature compared to this book tbh
@Madeline Lyra noice
The fact that comment section has better poems
*nods and pretends not to still write wattpad*
she really used “u” instead of “you” and “2” instead of “to” in a published book-
mmm iNtErNeT sLaNg
that sucks
@@mskavs1924 internet slang belongs in the internet.
It feels weird reading it on a physical book.
@@raishanovanty7813 That's what I mean, my comment had to be sarcastic... I didn't mean it for serious, her poetry really sucks with slang and all those depressed tumblr girl 2013 vibes
@@mskavs1924 i know, it doesn't even feel like a poetry
Thats how you know sHeS nOt LiKe oThEr GiRls!
She single handedly wasted an entire forest to make this book.
Meg Schmeg just this book? She destroyed a rainforest to sell these books in bookstores... the horror
Poor trees 😔
Meg Schmeg this just added a whole new level of disgust 🙈
Todd Peterson All books destroy forests
Sumaya Said yeah but you would hope they are at least worth printing. This is senseless trees lost for this garbage
This makes Wattpad look like Shakespeare’s plays
Wattpad is actually not that bad ngl like their is some movie worthy stuff on their like duplicity ,I sleep naked
@@charlotte-xq7sl your right. I think the poetry on there is pretty good.
@@sweetie9870 yeah there are amazing poetry books on there such as "This is everything I didn't say" and "BloodFeather"
Her poems are like those t-shirts that say “ me? sarcastic? Never!”
Those are better
no it's the "i'm fluent in sarcasm"
"If you can read this you're standing too close" type vibes
I'd rather buy that shirt over this book. At least the shirt can be useful 😂
Rachel Stormont I just laughed out loud at this because it’s so accurate 😂
im embarrassed for her, she's a whole different level of cringe
I think we all feel the same way my dear...
@@strawtifulbonnie9363 I agree with you my dear...
For real
YES I KNOW SHE IS FUCKING CRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINGE
Agreed
the way all these “poems” are just her twitter drafts.
Should’ve just kept it in the drafts-
Pretty fuckin right. Shit I’ll put my tweets in a book and sell it too
@@user-jy1vg5jx1j reeeee-
i was watching the whole time thinking this has got to be a joke ...
LITERALLLLLYYYY
She could have just tweeted all this instead of wasting all those trees.
as an English major and a poet, if she submitted any of those “poems” to an English professor, she would get laughed out of the classroom.
My Poetics professor would not be impressed.
@@cle3763 poetics professor? they teach you how to write poetry?
@@im_so_bored3896 While we did have to write poetry and create our own anthologies, the class was mostly about studying and analyzing the elements, techniques, and changes in style over time.
@@cle3763 aha, i see. cool
Amy they’re quotes at best.
This is frustrating 'cause some dedicated writers spend years trying to get published and this gal just throws something together and calls it poetry??
Exactly, and her grammar is terrible. Like most, if not all, of her "I" is lowercase. Small detail that is highly frustrating to see
EverlastPrime259 *e.e cummings joins the chat* what did u say about grammar in poetry ? Lol
@@everlastprime2595 I don't mind the lowercase "I", just her typos and the use of stuff like "ppl" or "bc" sorta ruins it.
@@sanujib5686 The typos definitely ruins it quite a bit. The lowercase "i" just bugs me because along with the other typos, it just doesn't seem like a stylistic choice. I can't say wouldn't bug me at least a little, but I would understand it more as a writers choice. Not to mention the book in general is just all bad writing from what I could tell
@@jocelynnmariah2993 lol you're right 😂
Gabbie is the kinda girl who thinks everything is so deep, and thinks having depression is quirky, but she’s a 30 year old woman
And you're the type of person who makes assumptions about someone you don't even know.
@@Jammaverse not necessarily. Sometimes when you're depressed you need to expose it, because you need help and you need people to notice it. That's why many depressed teenager are showing their marks (like they're wearing shirt with short sleeve in winter just for people to see it) because they are seeking for attention, and they're to scared to talk to people so they expect others to see their pain and help them. So no, a person who say to everyone that they're depressed isn't necessarily faking it, or using it for being loved. But it doesn't change the things that her poetry is incredibly bad for a 30 years old woman, honestly it was the kind of thing I read on Instagram when I was 15 and depressed, and even at this age I had the maturity to realize that it was just basic sentence that not making me special or quirky to say. (I found way more deep and well-written paragraphs in my old bullet journal, like things that I wrote at 2am after a panick attack, when my thoughts weren't very clear)
(sorry for my English, I made my best, it's not my first language)
@@Jammaverse yeah I hate that type of person too, they think mental illness is cool and don't understand how hard it is to have one (I know a girl who say she's boulimic and borderline just for attention, well I know that she's clearly not okay for saying things like that but as a borderline person who have a boulimic friend it just bother me so much). With my comment I just wanted to explain the fact that a depressed person don't necessarily hide it, because I know a lot of very young teen in Instagram who get a lot of hate for posting about their depression by people who say that they're faking it, and it can cause a lot of damage to not be taken seriously when you're in depression.
(my English is sooo bad I'm sorry)
@@d0uceurpunk your English isn't bad tbh
Wait.. what?? I thought she was like 19🤦🏽♀️😂😂
im surprised “my love for you was bulletproof but you’re the one who shot me” wasn’t in there
💀
Don't start giving her ideas 😓
no. just no.
This song is not bad though😭
it's a good song tho ❤
Surprised we didn’t hear ‘real eyes, realise, real lies ‘
Lia Oldfield where’s kurtis conner when u need him
ah, the classic 12 year old roadman’s instagram bio 🥵
That had more depth than any of her "poems" tbh
that line wasnt bad till everyone and their mother started using it
Lia Oldfield even that has more effort and meaning than her WHOLE BOOK
this is just devastatingly disrespectful to actual poets
jae tfs and suicidal people
And everybody whos ever existed
RusticLantern just a basic affront to humanity. Yes.
Right!? Ugh. Made me actually want to write knowing this is what’s out there right now 😩
to her fans and humanity
75% of these “poems” could pass as tweets
The short conversations are like those incorrect quotes on Tumblr.
it’s concerning that some these ‘poems’ aren’t even close to being acceptable tweets. it’s just- _aaaaaaaaaaaaa why_
I can feel my neurons commit suicide
Ur pfp 🥺😭
And bad ones at that 🙄
The fact that she only went after Rachel, who gave constructive criticism, and not anyone who openly hates her work really confuses me..
Same
There's a reason why she went after Rachel, because she feels threatened by her I guess. Also, because she's a woman too. She won't rip into James because he's a man.
because rachel’s a smaller channel. ppl can get away with going after smaller creators bc there wont be as much backlash. its a spineless move
she was poetry,
but he couldn't read.
his name was jared,
1 9
- gabbie hanna, probably
oh my god 😂😂
this is by far the best comment
I S C R E A M E D😂😂😂
no no this is ACTUALLY GOOD THO
If u get this ur entitled to a military discount
this book shouldn’t be classified as a “poem” instead classified as “i want money, heres some awful quotes that don’t even belong on tumblr.”
@ every UA-camr book ever
Love your picture and username
Lana Del Rey wrote a poetry book and sold it for £1 because she said “thoughts don’t have a price”, her poems were amazing too.
Lana is such an icon ugh
gabby should take notes from a QUEEN
I thought her poetry hasn’t been released yet??
I freaking love her work!!
That is still a price though.....
Dark humor was fun and edgy when it wasn’t in the mainstream. Daria was that classic show full of sarcasm, satire and dark humor that utilized historical references and literature books but the dark humor today is legit just about dying, hating and complaining about a so called entitled life in the first world country.
Wait, there is a show that is called Daria?
@@darinein It was on MTV.
@@darinein v good show
This is the book version of zoellas Christmas calander
😅😂
But worse
Yuh
The fact that she probably a thought a lot of these were “deep” makes me cringe.
Well they are. You might not have experienced the things to understand the undertones.
Raindrops fall from the sky literally everybody who isn’t stupid knows what the meaning is behind the poems, and it isn’t something deep.
Raindrops fall from the sky “link... in bio” THATS SO FUCKING DEEP OMG MY MOM JUST DROPPED DEAD I CAN UNDERSTAND THE UNDERTONES NOW THANK YOU SO MUCH
@@littlekernel The poems are about her childhood trauma....
Raindrops fall from the sky “time is relative. Beauty is relative. Family is relatives.” Oh god the trauma she must’ve gone through to think of that one.
Gabbie: Sad
-isfied
Me: die
-arreah
💀💀💀
😭💯
*Damn I felt that 😔👊*
That hit so hard bro 😔 😔
😔🤘
A limerick poem about how bad gabbys poems are:
Gabbys poems are quite bad
But she thinks they are rad
They are trash
They gave me a rash
They’re so dumb, it makes me mad
Amazing, we need to get this published
There once was a moron named Hanna,
Whose poems are in a sad manor,
They're making me cry,
I just want to die,
By beating myself with a hammer.
@@lime2333 I love this- get it published and get that coin.
BARS
@@lime2333 Before reading her book
I thought there were no poets greater
Now that I read it
I want to swallow a razor
"i'm not like other girls bc im depressed" isn't a personality trait, gabbie
someone forgot to tell her that
Jesus christ shes not the only one with and or depression..
Hailey Nicole that’s what she said,“i’m not like other girls because im depressed”,lots of other girls are going thru shit,and thats ok.How are ya doing now tho?
see saw thats,,, my point? she thinks being depressed is unique and quirky and something to base your whole existence off of and it really isn’t
Branden Clark
you are probably some stupid 9 year old if you think this poetry i s worth buying
cmon
get some brains
I can’t believe how bad this is, and english is not even my first language
Seconded
Yep and English is like my 3rd language
Yes. I started learning to write poems this year, and I watched this video as a reference of what bad poems are like. I hope I can make good ones. 🙈
Lisa x - Valeu! 🤣
nabila1379 Good luck with your poems!!
Let’s get something straight, these aren’t poems if anything they are awful cheesy one liner jokes with horrible punchlines and corny overused tumblr quotes and phrases that everyone has heard before, nursery rhymes at its finest
Bingo!
I swear sis. This ain't even original.
I bet if anybody else did this y’all would like it so shut up.... it’s really actually not that good, and I’m guessing she didn’t get professional help. She’ll get better, she just needs help! I’m not a pro at poetry or anything, but I’m honestly telling you common sense most of you clearly don’t have any. I know these comments are constructive criticism, but can you leave it in this comment section and not hers? Most of you are grown adults making fun of her... leave her be lol. You people are super inconsiderate, she probably gets really upset because of things like this :(
And you guys are really sick... these poems are about her childhood trauma. Idk why y’all hate her so much, but please stop it probably really effects her... she’s a human too!
Preach
Hannah baker's poetry in 13 reasons why was better.
And she actually killed herself
@Taylor 😬
Uhh too far
SAVAGE 💀
She thinks being “depressed” makes her quirky and not like other girls... I genuinely feel bad for those people who are actually depressed because people like Gabbie make it seem like a joke.
I know right??!?!!?!?
Honestly yeah. It’s insulting because killing your self isn’t a joke. Trust me..wanting to die is not fucking quirky.
You guys know some people joke about their depression or death as a coping method? Even I do.
Well, I feel mixed about the whole thing. I cope with my depression and PTSD by joking about it. I do it also because it can sometimes be pretty heavy to only talk about it in a serious light. Hell, even my therapist jokes about it sometimes. HOWEVER, Gabbi sometimes uses her depression as if it's a personality trait, which is just... Not great to say the least.
Thick Fil-A
I think joking is okay, but treating it like “Hahaha, I just wanna dieeee” comes off very “Oh I’m so quirky and cute but also sad I wanna ✨die✨ úwù.”
You have to be very careful with when and where you choose to make those kind of jokes, especially in media, where people sometimes will have little to no context. And this... ain’t it. When you write your book about ✨👗🌸🍕🍫🧘🏼♀️💭💌💘✨, you cant just throw in suicidal references. You haven’t built that background understanding of it. It’s hollow. It makes it look like a cute aesthetic.
Still can’t believe she’s 28 years old, and she wrote this garbage.
Yeah. I’m pretty sure that I’ve read far greater poetry written by people who were/are much younger than Gabbie Hanna.
“fam, this is lit” hahah
my sister writes poems and I can confirm my 17 year old sister is a much better writer
To be fair she was younger when she wrote it but still yikes
Drug abuse stunts cognitive development
Petition for James to finally change this series to "Abominovels"
Ig James likes this idea lol
Where do I sign?
Yes I liked this one sooo much more no offence James 😂
@@paglianhorror hello how are you
trisha not bad, profile pic twin, and yourself?
"I've never been so tired before.
So tired of your s h i t, Gabbie. "
The only true piece of poetry in this entire video.
It sounds like some 60 year old imposter wrote this pretending to be a relatable youth....
You've basically hit the nail on the head there. She's 28 going on 14
Roly I read this in your fucking voice 😂
Omg hi Roly. I didn't realise you watched James as well 😂😂😂
Cᴜʀsᴇᴅ
Instead of getting older she’s getting younger 💀
What are YoUuUuuu doing hErE?!
This sounds like a angsty teen’s tumblr
THIS IS IT CHEIF
fr
that cuz she wrote those when she was a teen ;-;
Honestly I think some of them are ripped off of an angsty teen’s tumblr. I’m not even kidding.
EXACTLY LMFAO
Why'd she write this like she's texting in 2010
cause thats the point the name of the book is "Adultolescence" she's writing it like a child basically, she mentions it in one of her podcasts
@@dead_minty that's not how children type.
@@dead_minty Seems a lot more like she's projecting her stupidity on us, and I'm offended.
with a *NOKIA 331O*
Because that's when she was relevant
Synonyms for the word Synonym:
adequation.
Same
alikeness.
compatibility.
conformity.
correlation.
correspondence.
equality
Etc...
Thank you very useful
Similarity/similar
I was going to say antonym but antonym is the antonym for synonym
Most of them aren't synonymous with synonym
@@fremiloant1186 better than none
This doesn’t deserve to be in the poetry category. These “poems” are pins that 13 year old girls who are “depressed” get from Pinterest and post on everywhere
It's funny that you know that
As a 14 year old I feel...
Certainly not fucking insulted because this is true and my eyes are bleeding from the "poems". (We are being pretty generous when calling these poems.)
i saw this in the “classic literature” section of my favourite book store and then i burned my favourite book store down
Tbh "depressed" 13 year olds don't even stoop this low 😂
Us 13 year old girls do not approve these “poems”
"Roses are red.
My name is not Dave.
This poem makes no sense.
Microwave."
Even this pinterest "funny poem" has more meaning than these atrocities.
MarieTheAristoBrat I think it’s a mini Ladd reference
Amazing onomatopoeia haha
Roses are red,
Family is relatives
I have given up
Money
Roses are orange
Apples are pears
Peaches are plums
Wait I will not go there
Roses are red
I can't write these
Even though this sucks
I do like peas :)
There’s not a single “poem” in this book that couldn’t be a tweet
And even that would be a bad tweet
link , in bio ❤️
Yeah exactly this book feels like her twitter drafts and she looked at them all and thought huh I could turn this into a book
I wrote a better poem in my composition book in middle school
@@CyclingUrchin how dare she steal Gina Linetti's idea.
“family is relatives”
*hmm yes the floor here is made of floor*
Ah, yes. Every 60 seconds a minute passes in Africa.
@@rubyramabu8791 In other words, water is wet.
It should be family ARE realitives.
My depressive 3am poems are better than gabbie hanna’s “poetry”
FACTS
ME KNEE HURTS for sure
Dude obviously THOSE ARE THE MOST EPIC ONES!
@@RaTtattatata indeed they are
Is your knee okay?
As a writer, I find this so frustrating. There’s so many talented people out there who will never have their work read because they don’t have the popularity. 😔
Oh my god yes.... But My question is, how was that Even published ?
I don't even read books that often but seeing those "poems" just annoys me. I can only imagine how annoyed you, a writer would get. Because those pile of words are kinds of sentences that I'd written on my Facebook posts when I was a fucking teenager. I can't stomach the fact that her fame let's her print these garbage out.
I understand all shades of your frustration. I am an amatour painter and need at least 50 pieces to exhibit them. Took 5 years and I surpassed the 50 but still did not do the exhibition yet, as if you ask me I only have 10 “good” ones. Some of my friends try and convince me but I just don’t think or feel it. So, getting back to the reply, trial and error creates experience and develops skill. (Not going to mention talent as I am not at this time convinced I have it or that I have explored it fully or given it a fair chance) The “small” ones of us may never get a chance as we have “youtubers and influencers” who get to where we dream in a hewrtbeat. Maybe that is why the effort level is clear and we should continue to keep it this way or all art forms (poetry included) will die?
I'm an English teacher and I'm going to show my students these "poems" as an example of what not to do.
Thank you, we can't have anymore people making this mistake.
😂😂😂😂😂
Wait that's actually amazing 😂
You are a hero lady
Lmao i luv u
It's probably just me, but I'm pissed the "i"s aren't capitalized
Hmm, relatable. But if I translate to my language, it doesn't make sense/it isn't correct. So sometimes I don't use the correct form in the english grammar because of my first language.
i normally type without capitalisation and perfect english but when it comes to poems i atleast put some respect lol
Same.
I hated that most of the book was in lowercase, maybe I'm too accustomed to having perfect grammar and punctuation in books.
It’s actually so sad to see someone promoting how they want to “kill themselves” when suicide is an actual problem
and not to mention filling a book with stuff like that which her young impressionable fans are going to read
Elisa Castro I agree it’s so weird and kinda gross that she put these in a book to sell, I always thought poems were a form of art and this is jus not it
Kelsie Reese I’m not defending Gabby but poems can be coping mechanisms as well 😬
True a lot of people don't know how it feels to actually want to die
Kelsie Reese exactly🙄
The O-positive poem sounds like a Pinterest quote
Im like 100% sure I saw it there once 💀
i saw it i think i’m not even joking
Is it just me or does these poems make it sound like she’s a little kid?
@@kadianhenriques1112 she wanted to portray adult problems through a child eyes (not saying she did it well, it's what she was going for) poems for children can be amazing, but these poems aren't even childish, they are rushed, lazy and shallow.
Yes (1000th like btw(
I hate how every page is using words like “u,” “ur,” and, “wut” with no punctuation or capitalization. It’s a book, Gabbie, not a text.
but how else is she gonna show how quirky she is????!!!??
Tru
That stuff can work in poetry...but not this poetry
There are poems where using slang words or words like "wut" and stuff really does work if there is actual meaning towords it ( I remember one in english but I forgot the nqme) but this is just stupid in this book
But shes not like other girls! Shes quirky and kind 😩😩😩
It’s the 12 year old emo poems putting suicidal ideation in teen’s heads for me
I'm 12 years old and this is hurting my brain, so gabbie probably thinks like a 9 year old quirky kid lmao
Just.... and the fact that she was so “proud” of this book and acted like she worked so hard on it
The constant reminders in her videos that ppl should buy her book. Yea, she clearly loves it a lot
Isabella Adams she might’ve worked hard on it, but if she did, yikes.
it’s great actually, wtf
@@juliannasabonis that's an opinion
It's about her childhood trauma, that's why its stylized as a children's book. That's the point.
She’s coming out with another poetry book: and this is all I have to say: *yikes*
iamlilyandiamagirl no don’t give her poem ideas
Alexa, play Yikes by Nicki Minaj
At least give her a chance that's all I'm saying
dank zani no ❤️
Me reading all the comments like:👁👄👁
The worst ones are the ones where she is trying to make being greedy edgy.
Or when she's trying to be edgy to make money
Miranda McCaslin 960 likes,, nice
I feel like I understand poetry. I feel like she barley understood the minimum and assumed she was a genius. Poetry is not random dead brains thoughts, there needs to be message and content.
I wish "influencers" would stop talking about mental health and suicide like it's cool
yes!
Exactly, it’s like they think depression is a trend or being depressed is quirky
It’s good when they talk about how they overcame it, or when they talk about their journey through struggling with their mental health, and its actually sincere.
Facts! I don't think she knows that some people actually suffer from REAL depression
Yeah exactly. Because suicide is sooooo funny and cool because it’s *edgy*
I can't believe trees had to die for this.
Ikt
It’s quite upsetting that a beautiful tree was cut down and turned into useless tripe.
This shit hurts lmao who told her this was a good idea
Claudia Schneider no one. Absolutely no one told her to do this
The same person that told her to make another. Lol and I'm guessing they didnt read the first..
She, herself and her.
Honestly if she can publish that mindless trash certainly I can publish my work 😂😂😂
does this book even count as poetry? (there's maybe a couple poems. but there isn't enough to count as a poetry book)
I'm related to a couple famous poets(distant), and they would most likely be horrified by this book of "poetry"
my ex had this book, and it was her favorite book. so glad I left her if THIS stuff is her 'favorite book'. I'm pretty sure she read the "poetry" more than she read my, actual, poetry
would actually love to read your poetry. I used to be the desperate romantic, writing for my ex haha
I don't wanna know the person who picks this as their favorite book. Surely your life is better now that she's your ex
@@therealMrA 1,000,000%
James Lele pons wrote a book...
I’m just gonna leave that there
James has to review it!
Please dear god no!
I think he's already gone through enough torture for now
@@fionaautumn yeah probaply haha
Which she clearly didn’t read lol I forget who but some you tuber was just reviewing it and showed how she did one of those “do you know internet slang!” interviews and she didn’t know sooooo many words that were in her book. Her book has a “ghostwriter” w their name on front and picture on the back cover at least though.... but not even reading it? Your own book? Lol
Why do all of these literally sound like a middle school diary entry
Alex Coffee omg our pictures
That's the sad thing about this book, as well as it ever getting sold.
Exactly
Alex Coffee I’m pretty sure that’s actually what they are💀
This is the MOST disrespectful, lazy, selfish “book” ever published and it’s absolutely disgusting that she would do this to her fans.
I’ve seen better writing from a 2nd grader telling a story about going to the store but their friend Ariana Grande got abducted by aliens and they had to fight them with crayons to get her back.
Don K but... you just read that comment?
Kaitlin Jack contender, Jake Paul’s “you gotta want it”
Emira, they could have a setting in their phone to read it out to them.
have you seen ANY other youtuber book other than Joey Graceffa's books? this book is creative, funny, deep, and well thought out. she never claimed to be an amazing poet. this is her first book lol
Is the “hiaku” at 11:01 an actual typo? Like gaby couldn’t even bother to check the correct spelling of haiku? Wow.
Then she did it agian
Me: I want to read William Shakespeare!
My mom: We have Shakespeare at home.
The Shakespeare at home:
Yasmin Edits don’t even do Shakespeare like that these are an 11 years olds poems 💀
@@luna_888 Agreed. I nearly had a stroke reading "Advice 10."
Yasmin Edits r/ihadastroke
So you bought it?
This makes zero sense
I feel like she saw how people like milk&honey and was like “I can do that lol”
I'ts arguable that milk & honey is poetry lmao
I didn’t even read it LMAO I just saw ppl around reading it and post the small poems on their Snapchat stories
@@kjwgf no yeah I know hahah I didn't mean to attack you I was just saying in general
Lana Grimmistel nono you’re fine lolol I wasn’t being offended I just found the book to be funny because so many people thought it was “edgy” to read it
@@kjwgf alright all good then ^^ and yeah it's ridiculous lol
These aren’t poems, they’re just single lined jokes.
amy **single lined bad jokes*
“jokes”
Joke are supposed to be funny
They’re a joke in a sense
They were so funny i forgot to laugh
I clicked this video
To have some fun
But what happened here
Just felt badly done
As someone who
Can't write for shit
The poems here
Made me cry a bit
I watched talent die
And it's blood pour out
A scarring experience
As bad as rotten trout
The whole concept of this book
Has just made me sad
And that's coming from me
Who writes fanfics on wattpad
👏👏👏👏
Astounding poetry👏👏👏👏
Wonderful, really.
I would read those fanfics ten times over than read that book honestly👏
Brilliant
omg the plot twist at the end
She literally doesn’t even try to hide how she doesn’t even care and wants money
And she tries to make it seem edgy or deep
There’s a joke about her nose to be made there..
what i exactly thought
VintageExtra and then she acts in her UA-cam videos that she doesn’t care about the money... like sure bitch 🙄
You should read Trisha’s book or Onision. Onision’s book makes this look like art
The fact that this is true is kinda sad :')
trisha's, in my opinion, is leagues above gabbie's cuz she actually has raw emotion in her poems and i know there arent rly any layers to her poems but there arent any in gabbie's either. trisha's poetry book is much better cuz it actually feels like she put thought into the poems, and while they arent works of art, they are still better than "family is relatives"
trishas is a lot better, theres lowkey depth in some of them, and you can tell she doesnt take herself too seriously which makes them a lot less pretentious
Omg onisions book is soemthing
@@user-br5gs5bg1t which one lol
How did a publisher read this and go “yeah sure why not”
Madalyn Reed they just didn’t bother to read it
If you're rich you can go to a vanity publisher. Pretty much instead the publishing firm covering most/all of the production cost in order to buy to right to market/sell your content, with a vanity publisher YOU pay for the entire production process and the publisher distributes the book to retail outlets. It's more or less a glorified, more expensive form of self-publishing - but somewhat more effective since while vanity pubs don't really market the books, they DO distribute it to retailers for sale which is much harder for a single person to do self-publishing. So. My guess is she went through a vanity publisher; they don't care about the book content, just money.
Maybe that publisher was blind
Best vid reviewing the worst poetry ever. As a poet, I was offeNdeD by this “poetry” but the way you word how ridiculous it is makes it hilarious and for that I thank you. I thank you for finding a LeGiT use for this book.
It's like she read milk and honey and said "I can do that"
Even that's not ... Great lmao
Taylor Keats well milk and honey has a really deep meaning and so reading the poems carefully you could understand it a lot more
Lol milk and honey sucks
@@xericlily3708 I understand her poems completely, but they're not great. Thanks for your input.
xericlily milk and honey is pseudo-intellectual bullshit that’s meant to seem “deep” but is as shallow as a fucking puddle.
It’s like Gabbi saw the quote “Hurt people, hurt people” and was INSPIRED lmaooo
I’m genuinely surprised one of her poems wasn’t “s(he) s(hit) (her)self”
fynn with luv This made me bust a fucking lung dude 😂
Oh, you better believe she’s putting this in the next one.
Kaitlin Bennett at parties
Haven't heard that one yet, good job!
she shit herself?
This book is more of a “things NOT to do when you’re writing a poem book”
Her book is basically twitter jokes printed out and stapled together.
**bad twitter jokes
lin-manuel miranda did the same thing but at least “family is relatives” is no where near what he did
only the bad ones
Twitter jokes that should have stayed in the drafts
She’s delusional
If she honestly thinks that
These are worth sharing
A haiku
K B beautiful words of truth
K B YEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHS
It’s snowing on Mt. Fuji
Good job m8
Brilliant!
She’s fake deep, meets trying too hard to be funny. Yikes.
Lauren Johnson she’s so cringeworthy
Gabby Hannah sucks
"no one collects Pokemon cards anymore!"
me;
**nervously sweats while looking at my piles and piles of pokemon cards.
Thought you
were bae
Turns out you
just fam
-gabbie hanna
Oop-
I noticed your username and i agree and i love
bro...
Bruh
🤟
Thats honestly unbelievably bad
Omfg 😂😂😂😂😂😂
I refuse to believe that these aren't stolen instagram captions
sufferationist or random tweets
Pinterest fUnNy posts and Tumblr edgy deep post obviously too
“That’s the kind of thing a 14-year-old virgin would say.”
Me, a 14 year old virgin:
You should switch with Gabbie, it probably fits her better.
Well I hope 14 year olds are virgins
Mia Helene Berg oh gosh
Mia Helene Berg Right? When I was 14 I made videos with VideoStar, not have sex.
think he just meant to specify a specific period of pre-sexual awkwardness which everyone goes through lol
Her book is just basically r/im14andthisisdeep in book form