Dear Life │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубліковано 5 вер 2024
- During our low moments and our bad days, we sometimes start to wonder about our purpose for living and question why things have to happen. I wrote this poem with a lot on my mind, perhaps many people will be able to relate. Stay strong.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user andrewkn
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
I’ve been listening to these for 3 hrs straight bc these are how I feel 💔
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I am going right now from these moments I also listening since 3hrs but I am notable moving on . This all share ho w the life is going. Whn there is nothing in left nor in right.
@@vanshikasingh1709 Can uh please give the central idea of this poem? Tomorrow is my presentation of this spoken word poetry topic
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“i pick at my looks, escape my life through books” i felt that..
Your not alone the negativity in the world consumes and controls thoughts. You are part of everything. You are the one and only you. You are so important and beautiful.
Dear Allah...i'm so happy proud of me..ur shadow always with me..Dear Allah"if u with me i get everything..without u i'm nothing..i know u love me that's why still now i'm alive with happily 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 n u blessed me until my death 😇
Alhamdulillah
@@kevinellieemmahedog100 Ameen 🙏🙏
May Allah SWT grant us all jannatul firdous and keep us on the straight path. Sister please do du'aa for me, my goal is to become a hafizah. I will remember you and the entire Muslim ummah in my prayers. Ameen
@@kevinellieemmahedog100 Alhumdulillah..we are both Muslim..nice to meet u sis🤗 a hug from me..from Bangladesh 🇧🇩 may Allah blessed u every breath with ur family 🙏🙏
@@zenin5396 Alhamdulillah I am also from Bangladesh but I live in the UK. This is a hug back from me 💝💝
I’m alive because I need to be for my friends who don’t have anyone else.. I’m alive to prove that he can’t break me down. But.. I’m alive because I know my friends will hurt him if I wasn’t.. if they come one day and I’m not there but gone.. he’s in danger.. I’m alive to protect the man I still love.. even though he faked the love he gave me..
Try to live for your own self
Please try and love yourself... I was where you were not to long ago and the only thing that rlly saved me was myself... when I decided that I may not know what the future holds but I’m sure as heck gonna be in it bc that’s where I belong. Live your life for yourself or else you will never find true love.
- just your average person 💗💕💕
@@Sarah-bu4rl truly
Luck u atlst have friend to fight for
Am just in bed and this is the exact description of what I feel 😭😭😭 afraid I can't talk to anyone 😭..
Should be strong enough to handle anything
Hey I am here for you❤️❤️
Same here
@@RB-oq1wy hello sorry for everything I may not know what it is.. but
you wanna share or talk about it?
@@thespace7931 thank you for the reply its make me feel that at least there is someone who understands me
These lines just define my life. Every question which I asked from GOD. That why God why I am here? Can't I just leave?? I have now nothing to tell. I am just tired from pretending that I am fine when I am NOT!!!!
Will I ever feel happiness and joy in my life
Shedding tears they increase over the years
Stuck in a place where the doors are locked and there is no way to escape
Hearing voices in the back of my head saying this is where you will forever stay
Will I ever run and get away or stay in the same place
Will I ever see better days or have this sad look on my face
All I need is a chance to open the doors to see there is a better place so that I can help the next person change there hopeless days .
Dear Mel, Your going to be fine.Stop worrying and focus on a solution. Your never truly alone.Eventhough it seems that way.focus on happy thoughts and put all negativity in a dark closet, never to be seen again.Open your heart to possibilities and new horizons.Anything is possible, if you believe. Stop dwelling on sadness and rejoice.Your a fighter.And fighters struggle but never give up.Down the road god is preparing a beautiful path, with all your desires and dreams.just have faith .
Angela Brown Thank you very much for the words of encouragement 😊
Believe on god,yourself.life will be easy one
All of us have strength that runs deep in our souls and sometimes when things go terribly wrong in our lives we lose sight of that strength but the best way to keep going is to remember that inside we will always be strong. Knowing that we can walk forward and look to the future. No matter how broken we are on the outside our strength and souls remain whole.
You freaking deserve more subscribers
TheSquad Mkhize Aww thank you! 😊 I appreciate the support! ❤
Keisha Slaysmylife so so true
Aww thanks
These lines define how life has been these days
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Whenever I want to tell someone what do I feel..they just don't believe me..they say I want attention....I'm locked in a cage inside of me..and I can't get out.
"Weeping may endure for the night but JOY comes in the morning." Your morning is here....all you have to do is BELIEVE. I love you and understand your situation. You have my unconditional love and continuous prayers. Remember, there's a reason for everything. You're gonna come out of this shining brighter than any diamond. Trust me, I know for I've already seen it. Mind blowing!!!!!!! I can't wait for you to me the real you, I already did and it brings tears of joy and inspiration to thousands of not millions. God has an amazing plan for you .❤️❤️😘😘😘😘
That line... At 1:02.... "I can see clearly...", that was so well written. I wish more people realized that you start on a mental throne, knowing you deserve all that life has to offer and then one day you realize that not only is your throne gone but it has gone to someone undeserving of all yourlove, time and respect. You should love yourself as unconditionally as you love those who are mentally scarring you.
I am 11 and these lines are...The exact disrciption of my life... I dont know what to say, I havent heard anything more relatable. 💔
We, humans, cling to life as long as we Hope..
beautifully written lines
Dear life,
I always wondered why I never had any friends.
I wondered how other people gets friends who really care about them.
I wonder why life takes my joy..
I miss you Kittie..
I know that you were not human but you was healing in my pain...
Dear life give me all my needs keep me smiling show my happiness let my standing my paradise it's enough thankyou my life i love you 😊
Idk why since the start of the quarantined my life feels so lonely and anxiety has always been attacking my mind with some scary situations inside my head that made me feel very weak and depress by thinking that I can't go through any challenges that will come to my path. I wish someday I could change the way I see myself so that I will never be afraid to face those obstacles in my path and be strong enough to handle failure in my life because we can never achieve something new, without some experiences of downfall.
I will keep commenting this ur poems remind me of XXXTENTACION who l looked up to coz he really looked up to depressed people and motivated them and was always there for them😢😭
RIP XXXTENTACION💗💯
I love this poem. Fits many of us in 100s of ways...💜💞💗💖
Mel, I'm so proud of you.You speak about the unfortunate things, that saddened us and inspire us to face our fears, and improve our lives.Becsuse of you, we know we're not alone.You give us courage, strength and hope.Thank you for sharing.
Cosmic energy of space delighted and touched you always time to time feel it keep your mind and together and overcome to your duties nicely God bless you.
Well said!
I don’t know who you are but each word you’ve said here was inside of my heart for so long. No words to express 😔
Can uh please give the central idea of this poem? Tomorrow is my presentation of this spoken word poetry topic
I feel the same way. I want you to know that we are all here for you! No matter what!
Thank you God for keeping me in perfect peace, and I hope what I share helps others.
God is going to end it all! Your GREED will not do you any good. Listen to these great quotes and obey.
Dear Poet, Never give up . Be more positive. Pray and God always listens. He knows your sorrow and despair. Pray for guidance. And you will soon find the sun will be shining. Believe in God. He is listening to you. 🙏🙏🙏❤️
Soo truee...we just give and give!!
"Fell for someone I will never have" that really hit hard
So finally I'm here , it looks like someone has potrayed my life story in these lines,I can feel these lines with my soul 💕
Where there is faith, there must be patience... There is a god!!!! 🙏😇
I read the Tao if I'd a wish more people would too. It doesn't say much however it's words are also powerful to the soul . It doesn't weigh us it simply says we are individuals . I don't like the parts myself that seem to get personal however I was told the Tao is also a chronicle of life. Really truly a wonderful poem me too like the water of time is heard sensed and yet we aren't in it going to God if you believe. Thanks for this
Dear Mel, whatever you need is up to you. Just go for it. Never give up on your dreams. Anything is possible to obtain, once you believe. With determination & a optimistic view, everything you hope for will prevail. Forget the doubts & negativity. Focus on results. Life is what you make it. Mel, I believe in you. It's 2021 believe,focused & prevail. Happiness is out there for you. Reach out & grasp it. Goodluck my friend. You deserve all the blessings in life.
I just stumbled upon this and i cannot tell how much I relate to this and it seems as if someone is narrating about me and my life !!
I love you Mel and I love all of you who feel the way Mel does its not over, that fight is not over, uh need to step up and close all those days of negativity and be positive, talk to healthy people, go for rehab sessions, pour your heart out, uh are loved even if uh think uh are not, uh are worth dis world, stop punishing yourself for a crime u never commited, uh don't deserve to be hard on yourself. I loveeeeeeeeeeeee😘😘😘😍😍😍😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😍😘 you all, really I do, I really do
This is really deep I can feel every word, we feel so much in our minds and writing helps just a little I swear love this
Can uh please give the central idea of this poem? Tomorrow is my presentation of this spoken word poetry topic
Heartwarming ❤️
Can uh please give the central idea of this poem? Tomorrow is my presentation of this spoken word poetry topic
I listened to this all night long this describes how I feel 😔💔🙏
This just explains everything in one video that I’m feeling
Baby I've been praying for you don't worry my love ur going to start seeing things more brighter keep ur energy good release urself from all the toxic energy especially when it clearing up ur chakras and praying for you detox ur body meditate drink a lot of water and speak to God he wants to hear you he's going to forgive you but he wants to hear you baby I'm here right next to you praying for my future husband so the Lord can come into your heart and touch ur soul and restore ur mind ur thoughts ur body ur soul and wash away all ur sins and protect u be the light of ur feet the light of ur steps the light of ur path and to give u wisdom to always make the right decisions to always protect u where ever u are and to not let nobody harm u nor any bad negativity come near you God has chosen me for you to be ur partner and hes chosen u to be my partner my husband and together we will see the light and change this world baby i believe in you baby and so does the Lord stay strong im here with you its almost over te amo mi vida
I needed to hear that. Thank you.
I love listening to Mel's thoughts at 0.75 speed. They sound so much better, and add another level of fragility to the delicate poetry. Keep writing for us all to enjoy. 🙏
This is how my life is tooo. Awww you're such a great poet
Can uh please give the central idea of this poem? Tomorrow is my presentation of this spoken word poetry topic
I believe you will never alone. The nature love you. More than you know. Think about that. Ok. Love the nature.
What a moving poem everybody lost in this terrible world should read this
Woooow this really hits hard 😭 it's all me. Thank you
I’m surviving for the sake of others...
Jennifer C ❤️
All I can do is just hope, hope
One day you'll not have any hope left all you'll have is darkness, there's no point in having "hope". We'll all just die... 🖤
Exactly same my heart and mind is going
God always be our strength
Felt this on a deeper level.
Minsan, ang sarap takasan ng mundo.
I want to reach out to everyone feeling this way ---- don't be too hard on yourselves, we are all the same but with different emotions some are very fragile and some are less fragile.❤
Absolutely phenominal . Love your ink and narrations 💖
Awe thank you!!!
Dear Mel, heartily thank you for sharing such a heart touching words.. I truly appreciate it.. much love to you.. keep sharing such things..
Thank you! I will keep sharing!
I felt all this and it’s how I feel😭😭🥺🥺💔💔
Wonderful
From one day looking for a poem to inspire me, to me ending up and subscribing to you. Thank you for your beautiful and deep poems. But most of all thank you for inspiring me to write poems again. You deserve more subscribers.
Dear mel tell me how you know everyone feeling😇😇😇😇. When I feeling low I came to your channel and watch your videos. I does not feel not form few days. 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 . I used your videos to feel better. Love you sister. 😇😇😇😇😇😇.
To my dear sister, I am sorry for not being the sister you wanted me to be, I am sorry for being alive even though you love me sometimes I feel like u don't, all though ik I love you, even though I don't want friends you keep saying I need friends even our parents say I do but the truth is you sis your my best friend,your my soul,your my life,your my protector, ik I can be stupid and ik I am not perfect like you are,no one is perfect but you are perfect the way you are. You are beatful,I am a nightmare dressed like a daydream, you are beatful,smart,sweet,lovely, and perfect the way you are. I love you sister for the way you are.
Mel’s thoughts is always my thoughts..
You'll be fine, have a nice glass of wine. Enjoy living be nice and forgiving. Don't hate because that will conceal your faith. Someday soon you'll have your relieve and only because you still believe.
Cheers and hold on!
I agree
It feels as if it was written just for me. Thank you
Tears all over me..so cultivated.. It's defining me
Wow ❤
Hi
The words all u spoked was like mine what I feel about since Years and still
I've already become that toxic person crying for help by myself every night. Will i ever overcome this? No never.
literally my life it’s so so hard you know that too for a teenage girl 😞
This poem speaks mee feel like I’m one who wrote her poem
Wow... Hats off
Thank you
You are my inspiration for this spoken word poetry lob u lots from Tamil Nadu , India...Your voice expression and that words all came out good..lob u lot sister... U r my guru##mentor😘😘😘
Wow, thank you so much! :)
@@MelsThoughts thanks fr reply me..I nvr forget this...tankzz sister..😘😘😘
I don't know how you write these but this explains my life I always want to kill myself when I feel so I listen to your spoken words which help me to go through thankyou so much
This is the same feeling i am having my existence is nothing i am just a passing stranger to the world. my existence, my consious, my deep soul, i don't khow the source, from what i born even if i khow how i born i want to khow deeper than that or what i was before i was even a exustence. what i see should i believe it or should i question it? Even if i live or even if i die, who cares even if they will care they will care not more than 2 to 3 years, Then what will i be a dust, a ant, a existence with no meaning. Sometimes i wish why i was made sometime i wish what the point of my existence, people will say i am saying this because life is hard but no i am not saying because life is hard i khow life is way i think. I am saying this because i don't khow what is life. What is my point of existence or point of existence of every human in earth which is just a thiny planet in the end of the universe which has no meaning or merits of universe. Is it a coinsidence that we were formed or is it made up.
i think this one is my most favorite
Thank you :)
More than your words... Your voice is something spl and magical.... 😌
Aww thank you
Deeply epicness text and much brave at you 💪
Thank you!
Can uh please give the central idea of this poem? Tomorrow is my presentation of this spoken word poetry topic
Yours poetry are just my words
Thanks God I'm stills alive. 💕 U so much
Love this!
This I can relate to a lot and I don't know what to do because I have lost myself completely and I don't know if I will find myself again
Ok. You can take a decision about me. I promise I never hate you. Don't worry I handle this situation somehow. Thank you my friend.
Love this poem! this reminds me of myself I do have a lot of these feelings right now I guess I’m going though another depression episode
It's okay, I had a depression episode last night. It's hard to really push away but it's always good to talk about it and know you're not alone :)
Thanks mel for everything
So beautiful 💕🌈
Thank you! 😊
hai Mel's I love your spoken and it is so nice to watch your spoken
Aww thank you very much for the support!
Good massage
😢goshhh!!!
Relatable
Lovely 💓
I loved your poem, may who you made this video,step by step I want to do the same with my poetry.
Thank you, this hit home! 😭 💕
No problem! I'm glad you liked it! :)
This poem...🤍
hi, my names mel and i write poems too, ironic?? these are absolutely beautiful.
Hi Mel lol that's amazing!!! Thank you so much for checking my videos out!
Mel's Thoughts aw hahaha!! these actually help a lot, it’s scary listening to something that hits home so close. my moms like a crazy narcissist and mentally abused me all my life and i feel like these are a really good way to realize people are there and feel things, too. thanks mel xx!
I can relate to this
I feel the same....
Baby girl one day at a time,,,do not expect much from your daily interactions....you have your own happiness after all...given free will by God,,,let Him help us choose right,,,whenever faced with a choice,,,,asking God to help us out of any manupulation from any corner only bringing your way those who bring out the best in you...He is with no limitation's unlike man...stay happy stay blessed...
This is so amazing!
Thank you
I found you today Girl
Ur voice is lovely😍
Keep spreading love around🤍
I'm here I'm here my child
Robert Daris Thanks 😁
I really like this... its kikenouttjng emotions in poetic form. Opening up the whispers of the soul and make the thought cry like a trumpet so all can hear..with a loud voice emotions speaks its. Thoughts..