Why Your Rhymes Are So BORING! | How To Rhyme Better

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  • Опубліковано 16 лис 2024

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  • @lieutenantdan7212
    @lieutenantdan7212 Рік тому +14

    Man your right! I have noticed i rhyme the same structure alot. Great reminder and awesome vid Cole!

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      Thanks Dan, I'm glad you enjoyed it bro! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @Kemet1976
    @Kemet1976 Рік тому +27

    Cole.. right now I'm struggling with hooks. Can you do a video tutorial on hooks, choruses and bridges, and the difference between the three. Thanks

    • @worldgossip716
      @worldgossip716 Рік тому +2

      I agree

    • @Kemet1976
      @Kemet1976 Рік тому +1

      @Nathan Brown Aka NB 🇯🇲 Oh your a super star 🌟 thanks

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +5

      Hey Kermet in addition to the link Nathan shared, here is a video I did on song structure ua-cam.com/video/i77CRLPC3Dg/v-deo.html, and another video where I started 3-4 hooks and finished one ua-cam.com/video/XzP21mKJOek/v-deo.html Enjoy! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      Hey WG, check the links in this thread, 3 links have been shared to help you out ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      Good lookin' out Nathan! You rock man! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @ukkkkkk1879
    @ukkkkkk1879 Рік тому +4

    Thanks for this man. Really appreciate 🙏

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      My pleasure! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate you as well! Much respect! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @skeetermaverick1793
    @skeetermaverick1793 Рік тому +2

    Yo, this is some amazing advice, I really do appreciate the sacrifice, your time is valuable but you were very precise, your words they are true like white on rice, as I'm sitting here watching this on my media device, now I'm repayin' ya with a like, I hope that suffice, but I'm dropping you this comment cause I'm as cold as ice.

  • @criticalthinker907
    @criticalthinker907 Рік тому +2

    Hey Cole Mize
    Thank you for this lesson in rap it will help me a lot

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      My pleasure! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @newbeymusic9519
    @newbeymusic9519 Рік тому +2

    Man I wish somebody in person would listen to me and believe in me enough to help with staying on beat 😅 your video are amazing though really good!!! Been rapping a bit over a year and don’t plan on quitting!!

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      I'm really glad to hear that my video was helpful Newbey! If you need help saying on beat check out this video ua-cam.com/video/RfyIdpItOJo/v-deo.html Keep it up! You got this! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @aranthurai9353
    @aranthurai9353 Рік тому

    love your videos! simple yet so informational! you are awesome. Thank you for these valuable lessons

  • @SoraiaLMotta
    @SoraiaLMotta Рік тому +1

    awesome thanks

  • @FinnBarr-lg8rr
    @FinnBarr-lg8rr Рік тому +11

    I had a teacher who used to teach so whack-y
    So whackly
    But you my man do your job great
    And you teach with zeal
    You're zealous
    So keep going
    Why did you even start?
    To keep going right?
    No, for real why did you even start?
    To keep going right?
    When you are on a journey
    And you keep walking
    No matter how small your stride
    And the stride you take
    You make progress
    So progress is always ongoing
    It doesn't stop anyway
    FINN BARR

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +3

      Thanks for your wise and kind words Finn which very much embodies my philosophy. Always growing, always learning, always thriving!
      Thanks for the support! Much respect! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @BunBunXl
      @BunBunXl Рік тому

      Ew no bro💀💀

  • @vincentvega568
    @vincentvega568 Рік тому

    The lyrics sheet looks amazing. Could you kindly share how to get it, please? Thank you!

  • @neurobutton
    @neurobutton 9 місяців тому +1

    I am following you from many years from Italy!! You are a genius! How can I get this software that you are using for exercise the subdivision of the notes please?

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  9 місяців тому +1

      Thanks! I appreciate you rockin with me. This actually isn't software, I create these from scratch for each video. If you wish to make something similar you can create a table in something like Microsoft Word or Google Sheets ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @neurobutton
      @neurobutton 9 місяців тому +1

      @@ColeMizeStudios I am trying using google sheet, but the problem comes when I have to insert subdivisions into cells! I would write my songs into my phone notes, but It's difficult to remember the subdivision of the syllables if you are trying to make complex patterns. Do you have any suggestion my guy? I hope you are doing well by the way. I'm happy your channel is going well!

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  8 місяців тому

      I honestly would just record your vocals before you end your session for that day so you don't forget your flow. I wouldn't try to create subdivisions like you see in this video. It's super tedious and may ruin your creative workflow. Check out this video for a more simplified way on how I like to structure my lyrics👉 ua-cam.com/video/84KTff8eiWM/v-deo.htmlsi=i9vuZuH_YJx2VaTg I hope this helps! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @trinofficixl
    @trinofficixl Рік тому +2

    Hey Cole I’ve been doing good on flow but I can’t figure out how to use my voice right can you make a video on that

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +1

      I've already done it :) just google Cole Mize Voice - but here's an awesome video I did on finding your rap voice ua-cam.com/video/eyS13s8114I/v-deo.html I hope this helps! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @trinofficixl
      @trinofficixl Рік тому +1

      @@ColeMizeStudios thank you

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      My pleasure Trin! Glad to help! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @DonForte313
    @DonForte313 Рік тому +1

    Keep it up

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      Fa sho Don! Thanks for the support! You keep it up as well! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @owenchaim610
    @owenchaim610 Рік тому +3

    Thats a great tool to have and keep in mind when writing.
    I do find that writing, in that predictable way you describe, really lends itself to a melodic motif and when there is a slight variation in the 4th bar in the melody, its the best of both worlds bringing a complete and compelling lyrical/melodic structure. Post Malone is a great example of this.
    Excellent instruction, as always! 🙏🏼

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +1

      Great point Owen! 100% It's all about making things predictable enough for people to follow along to, but unpredictable enough to keep them guessing. lol! Thanks for your kind words! I appreciate the support! Much respect! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @AP-mi9ze
    @AP-mi9ze Рік тому +1

    I truly appreciate you bro, thank you!

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +1

      I appreciate you as well AP! Thanks for the support! You rock! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @Montana.Joker1993
    @Montana.Joker1993 Рік тому +1

    Круто! Благодарю 😊😊😊

  • @adriannaalba2649
    @adriannaalba2649 Рік тому

    What is the software you use when you are showing the bars?

  • @leave4evr
    @leave4evr Рік тому +2

    what application or plugin are you using for the lyric count?

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +1

      Those are graphics I create from scratch, very time consuming and is a labor of love lol! Glad you're enjoying them! ✌😎- Cole Mize

    • @adriannaalba2649
      @adriannaalba2649 Рік тому +1

      @@ColeMizeStudiosyou should consider having a programmer make it. I would pay GOOD money for this as a plug in and I’m sure everyone else here would to.

  • @Eldenbrosunite
    @Eldenbrosunite Рік тому +1

    Sorry, but can someone please help me with Double Entendres, cuz I am still struggling with it a bit.

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому

      Hey Prince, check out this video of my writing a punchline from scratch👉 ua-cam.com/video/0Q7gAaNVEMk/v-deo.html, also this video where I break down all the common literary devices which includes double entendres 👉 ua-cam.com/video/rPedvG6-hFk/v-deo.html I hope this helps! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @thebox705
    @thebox705 Рік тому +2

    What ? Does the rhymes not always belong to the snare ?

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +2

      absolutely not. The 4th beat is one of the most common places we put rhymes, but we can put rhymes anywhere. ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @thebox705
      @thebox705 Рік тому +1

      So it doesn‘t matter where I put my rhymes ?

    • @thebox705
      @thebox705 Рік тому +1

      @@ColeMizeStudios some guy told me i should move in between 1 and 2 ?

  • @samschmit7181
    @samschmit7181 10 місяців тому +2

    I thought things only rhymed below 10^-5 ångströms.

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  10 місяців тому

      Hey Sam, Where did you get that from? ✌😎 - Cole Mize

    • @samschmit7181
      @samschmit7181 10 місяців тому +2

      It's a Futurama reference.

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  10 місяців тому

      lol gotcha! ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @CjKillinit
    @CjKillinit Рік тому +1

    Is that syllable/ bar writing template software you use in the video available for purchase somewhere?

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  Рік тому +1

      Hey CJ, no not currently, it's my own creation. ✌😎 - Cole Mize

  • @gusmangamer
    @gusmangamer 6 місяців тому

    easily over looked hurdle great articulation of an issue people don't even know they need to fix

  • @LijitNoob-uk9ti
    @LijitNoob-uk9ti Рік тому +1

    Fweg

  • @BunBunXl
    @BunBunXl Рік тому +2

    I cant go to the instrumental 💀💀🥲

    • @ColeMizeStudios
      @ColeMizeStudios  11 місяців тому

      I just checked, the link in the video description is working for me. Try this link to my video for the instrumental ua-cam.com/video/rT62xt0gl5c/v-deo.htmlsi=s4BNqf5CtKXatd9G ✌😎 - Cole Mize