Next episode in 2-3 days which means I will upload either on Wednesday or Thursday. Edit: Those who are asking about fifth episode, read my community post.
Yahh jazz pls do try to upload it as soon as possible.. I assure I try to be so patient but the amount of time i check on your channel is really getting unhealthy😅😬... And it's all because of your amazing talent❤
If there is anything not right in the editing, from small font to typos kindly ignore all this. It's just this episode is edited in a hurry, I hope y'all understand.
U r great author like this episode is almost an hour long and u re edit it in just 1 day.Hats off to u!!❤ This is so well written like always.... how did u even manage it to write n edit this good even in hurry.
Jasmine, i swear to god, i cannot describe in words what i feel when i read your fanfics, it's talented authors who can make readers experience the emotions along with the characters, the anxiety, the fear, the comfort, the anger, the frustation and maybe soon happiness. Your writing has always been clear and on point and i love the way you describe each character and each scene, Tough Love, The Devil Prince, Vampire Prince, Mate, Babydoll are all so good, they leave me speechless, as a fellow writer, i look upto you so much, besides the jaw dropping story and the way you deliver the lines, i see no one talks about the editing and the choice of music which makes the story 10x better and your consistency, you broke your phone yesterday, yet you are, uploading another masterpiece within 1 day. Thank you so much
I hope Y/N will seek forgiveness from both Nini and Lee. I mean I could just feel the betrayal. I sense there was some sort of friendship developed between Y/N and Nini, I hope it won't get ruined.
@@AnushkaMaurya486 why? Was nini and lee didn't trust her ?? And she just took advantage of it ? Someone trusted her nini character was good the fact that what Lee said is true.... Like father like daughter....bettayals
You gotta be kidding me. What forgiveness? That girl's freedom was snatched away from her. Main lead literally sexually assaulted her, tortured her. Running away was her only option. Nina & lee means nothing. Did they help her when jk was doing those nasty things to her? Yn doesn’t owe anyone any apology. She didn’t betray anyone. She never gave lee or nina her words in the first place.
HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS JUST HOW..This was my fav episode! Jungkook has finally started to realise how much he’s been traumatising her skskksks im so excited!🫶🏻 The way he killed those men OMG and when Yn hugged him i SCREAMED..I can’t wait to see this cold ass man fall deeply in love with her.😩
When Jk asked Yn to hide and when he found her after 5 minutes...i imagined how it will be if the scenario was opposite? A lovey dovey couple after getting bored started playing hide and seek for fun and when he found her in the closet, He laughs at her silliness and she also laughs.. wow what a beautiful couple
FFs never really had such strong effect on me to the point i feel deeply connected to characters and their emotions but THIS SERIES AND THESE CHARACTERS! I feel their emotions so deeply as if mine, all just magic of your brilliant writing skills. My favourite part is when y/n hugged jk, something inside me just felt too much on that scene. YOUR IMAGINATION IS MIND-BLOWING AND YOU HAVE MAGIC IN YOUR POETIC HANDS
I read this half and i feel so bad for yn. Even tho she wasnt raped, she almost went through the trauma..my girl doesnt deserve this at all..nobody deserves it actually. I hope jungkook regrets playing with her soon and apologises ( even tho he's really rough and tough.) i hope to see character development otherwise i dont think they should end up together. It'll be really unrealistic for me if yn falls for him 💀 and actually begs him just like he said lol. I hope she'll stand on her ground. Loads of love to this unique story 💜
I genuinely cried while reading the moment when she hugged him & what happened after that. I've never in my life ever read a fanfic better than this. And i swear, i read a lot. The way you describe every single emotions, feelings of theirs and situations is fascinatingly good. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
I am not a person who like to comment much. But her writing skills always makes me to right. I can't describe how she explains everything in detail, I feel like I am seeing all the story in front of my eyes.
It feels like I'm watching a movie.Your writings,the way you portray things are something that I cannot explain in words . We surely don't deserve you and your writings❤❤
Jaz I have been a silent admirer of yours since 'Dangerous Mafia King.' I don't usually comment cause I never found the courage to but today I feel like I should tell you this.I am currently waiting for my ISC board results and I am planning to attend NEET next year.Now the problem is the institute where I am admitted doesn't allow electronic gadgets so I am temporarily saying goodbye to my PC and mobile.The course is for 1 yr so I won't be able to read your amazing stories. I am really overwhelmed by this situation. Preparing for my ISC exams were difficult with full of anxiety but I found comfort in your stories.It was like I was in a different world.Author, please continue your mind-blowing stories. After 1 year I will be here as a young medical student.I knew this day wasn't far behind but it's still heartbreaking.I am going to make my dream come true. I will always be your admirer.Wish me luck😊Hwaiting!!!💕✨
Girl you are something else trust me... It's the way you put everything in the story that literally got me mesmerized.. It's been a long time since i saw a author as good as you... Keep it up girl.. You'll be a famous one with millions of fans 💜💜💜
My heart was pounding so fast while watching this episode, oh my god I felt like I was going to die, this episode was so scary when she was hiding and when he entered the room and said "Are you there Princess"?💀 my body froze at the scene, poor yn. And the way yn hugged him, pls I'm melting 🥹 the music and the way you wrote it, I'm speechless, you are incredible Jasmine.
I knew it. I knew it waiting for your ff is definitely worthy . The moment when yn hugged him for the first time i literally cried. Waiting for the next episode to see their romance.
I don't know but why on earth I'm getting an idea that may be y/n is not Quinn's daughter! Oh its worth waiting for author.. and thanks for the long episode ❤
Jaz why are you such an amazing writer- like wtf istg even ana huang's books cant compare to your fictions- these r too good for me to read THANK YOU SO DAMN MUCH FOR MAKING THIS
I literally teared up when this situation was going around...drastic change in the Mafia's character..... from wild to care....and being realized been called by his name by y/n and showing intimate affection which is very puzzle to y/n .... 💕
The talent she have and she always it pour into her fanfics that I always wait for ffs to be uploaded. I have high respect for her and keep writing those thrilling stories. Love ya😘💜💜
Oh my god It didn't feel like I was reading a fanfiction it felt like it was actually happening and it was real. I was absolutely absorbed in this. With headphones it felt even better. You're doing such a good job author. Love youuu❤
I have never commented on your fanfics but I have to say you are the best author.... I like dark fiction and it made my interest in your fanfics even more......❤
I have no words. U just subscribed to ur channel. The story is great Apart from that u stole my heart. Each and every word in the video explains the perfect emotions. How come??? OK l don't know but u should become an author. Incredible!! Just write a book. Trust me. U gonna be the next Colleen hoover. Amazing
Why 51 minutes feels like its only one minute.. time was flying so fast before i realize it.. i enjoyed too much.. i luuuuuuuvee the story sooooo much.. but i closed my eyes in brutally scene cuz too scared.. i luv the hugs scene yaay..
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn this is ittttttt this was worth waiting for 😭😭 I experienced every f-ing emotion fear anger relief all of it. Bruh the running towards him n hugging him got me bruh and his acknowledging it was 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
"One push from me nd u will be rotting in sand " loke duhhh its only jeon How could you write so perfectly omg i am astonished by this ff I am crying rn 😭 😢 🤧 ❤
Wish i could voice msg you my emotions....like.... You made us go through a roller coaster like... From curious to flustered to shocked to frustrating to relief to sad to curious again and at the end the SUSPENSE..... I screamed sooooooo loud(mutely ,in my head😂)...
@19:33 what a relief .. atleast he didn't,, I was afraid @42:17 from this moment on 🦋🦋💕💕💜💜 Wow,, the last part he finally started to realise, can't wait for him to be head over heels for YN .. my most fav ff is 'Mate' but now it's tie between these 2 😭😭 Author your writing, editing, everything is so amazing 💜
Jaz I love u and you are the best . When I read that your phone broke I was like now what .but you being you uploaded like u promised . I love u again you are the beat aurthour that I follow and now I am gonna read it .yay
I have read many ffs but your ffs are something else.. The best 👍💯. It's feels so amazing while reading. Keep going. All the best.. "MATE" IS MY FAVORITE. ALL THE BEST🌑
Oh ..... Dear Author , if you were in front of me right now i would've showered you with hugs and kisses cuz' this story is so beautifully written and i just can't describe in words that how much I'm loving it right now , can't wait to see jungkook fell 8n love with y/n 💜💜💜
He's so persistent even I felt kinda embarrassed reading the part with his blunt remarks that she will be submissive and ask for more and beg him to f her 🥴 dayum I really don't know what to expect from this duo and idk how the dynamics are gonna change UGH
Ugh how much i missed reading Jasmine fics❤ Incredible writing Can't praise more. Don't let any peoples lame comment affect you. You deserve so much love❤
The only thing I want to steal from you is either your notebook in which you write or your imagination where you are imagining this story 💀😂😂 I swear I love all the ffs of your.
And in the last you left me for longing of more and more...you just end the episode where i thought what happened next...and then pufff i saw "to be continued"🤭..... Arrrrgggghhhhhh 😫😣😩now i have to wait...... But i love it..... amazing work love you 🖤✌️
Can't wait for episode 5...hope ur phone get repaired soon and u upload it within 3 days.....so eager.....4th episode was so damn good gurl.....luv it...
Thank you so much Jaz for uploading I was so curious .. When y/n scrached him and he got furious I really thought he would do something bad to her but he limit himself to tortour her later. I love how he is controlling himself. Anyways, that part was my fav and that too when y/n felt a little safe in his arms... Ohhh this ep was full of excitement and trill. Thank you so much for your hardwork. This was a little effort of me to appreciate your hardwork. I'm sorry if I made any grammatic mistake. I just wanted to appreciate your efforts and hardwork. Have a great day/night💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
A long amazing episode.. I enjoyed every second of it! I was genuinely sad when it ended 😭💜 anyways I loved it so much and can’t wait to see the next episode! I love your work so much and really appreciate all the effort you put into writing the story
I appreciate ur work doing within one day...💜 The scene of yn hugging jungkook.... It was really something caught inside my heart...i really fell for this scene and moreover the way he wrapped his arms around her... Aishhhhh... Means after scaring her to death he finally got something inside his heart after yn hug him.... This feeling was just too good.... Although this episode was too great 💜
Spoiler ahead: Wait ! Why am I suddenly feeling like Harwin Quinns is not y/n's father , that maybe her mother had her with someone else whom she loved.😅Mayyyybeeee it can be right.Does anyone think like that?
My god wht a beautiful part.. 😮😮 u know wht there is a kdrama name "the king external monarch" Also hv a rescue scene of the female lead like this.. U just nailed this scene my God😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮 I got goosebumps 😮😮😮
It's been 3 days you don't give us any update as you already said that you have written the story so plzz just update uss about the next part. Can't wait anymore🥺.
Next episode in 2-3 days which means I will upload either on Wednesday or Thursday.
Edit: Those who are asking about fifth episode, read my community post.
Yahh jazz pls do try to upload it as soon as possible.. I assure I try to be so patient but the amount of time i check on your channel is really getting unhealthy😅😬... And it's all because of your amazing talent❤
Omg yayay take your time tho
My patience is vaining is this entertaining 😅
@@shahnajakter7060ai ai ai ya got this feeling yeah you know😂😂😂
@@jennifermaya1866 where i'm loosing all controls😂
If there is anything not right in the editing, from small font to typos kindly ignore all this.
It's just this episode is edited in a hurry, I hope y'all understand.
you worked hard!
Thank you unnie finally wait is over lots of love 🎉🎉🎉🎉❤❤❤❤❤ you are really very Hardworking. You manage again all this thanks ❤❤❤❤
Your work is all I want and we ignore minor mistakes of professionals 😊
U r great author like this episode is almost an hour long and u re edit it in just 1 day.Hats off to u!!❤ This is so well written like always.... how did u even manage it to write n edit this good even in hurry.
Thank you so much! I will read it once i finish my work! ♥️♥️
I asked he denied, so i took her my style isn't it fair everybody? I'm head over heel for this line, sarcasticness of this line just had me there...
Same here 😍💜
How many parts this series hv? Can u pls tell me
@@rashigoyal7640 14
A Hero sacrifices you to save the world but
A Villian sacrifices the whole world to save you
🖤🥀
Yeah in this case I can imagine this for Jungkook
True
Frrr
'Wife''my wife' from his mouth hits differently....That shiver!!🧎♀️
Smelling some blooming romance💯💜
"And the last thing she saw were the burning eyes of the devil, beautiful in their terrible rage. "
And I like this line. Alot.
Jasmine, i swear to god, i cannot describe in words what i feel when i read your fanfics, it's talented authors who can make readers experience the emotions along with the characters, the anxiety, the fear, the comfort, the anger, the frustation and maybe soon happiness. Your writing has always been clear and on point and i love the way you describe each character and each scene, Tough Love, The Devil Prince, Vampire Prince, Mate, Babydoll are all so good, they leave me speechless, as a fellow writer, i look upto you so much, besides the jaw dropping story and the way you deliver the lines, i see no one talks about the editing and the choice of music which makes the story 10x better and your consistency, you broke your phone yesterday, yet you are, uploading another masterpiece within 1 day. Thank you so much
❤❤❤
Everything is temporary
"Please go away" will be permanentl 😂❤
Frrr😂❤😂❤
I hope Y/N will seek forgiveness from both Nini and Lee. I mean I could just feel the betrayal. I sense there was some sort of friendship developed between Y/N and Nini, I hope it won't get ruined.
Exactly.....why pity yn when she's doing the same.... Innocent? My foot . Such a betrayer
@@AnushkaMaurya486 why? Was nini and lee didn't trust her ?? And she just took advantage of it ? Someone trusted her nini character was good the fact that what Lee said is true.... Like father like daughter....bettayals
You gotta be kidding me. What forgiveness? That girl's freedom was snatched away from her. Main lead literally sexually assaulted her, tortured her. Running away was her only option. Nina & lee means nothing. Did they help her when jk was doing those nasty things to her? Yn doesn’t owe anyone any apology. She didn’t betray anyone. She never gave lee or nina her words in the first place.
@trinachowdhury5533 finally someone with some sense
HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS JUST HOW..This was my fav episode! Jungkook has finally started to realise how much he’s been traumatising her skskksks im so excited!🫶🏻 The way he killed those men OMG and when Yn hugged him i SCREAMED..I can’t wait to see this cold ass man fall deeply in love with her.😩
When Jk asked Yn to hide and when he found her after 5 minutes...i imagined how it will be if the scenario was opposite? A lovey dovey couple after getting bored started playing hide and seek for fun and when he found her in the closet, He laughs at her silliness and she also laughs.. wow what a beautiful couple
❤
Wish it could happen in this series. 💜
Now I’m wondering that why didn’t she hide in the secret garden that Nina told her about?
I was thinking about that too yk
When you're in fear, your mind doesn't work unfortunately @@ji_ME_n-li1tc
FFs never really had such strong effect on me to the point i feel deeply connected to characters and their emotions but THIS SERIES AND THESE CHARACTERS! I feel their emotions so deeply as if mine, all just magic of your brilliant writing skills. My favourite part is when y/n hugged jk, something inside me just felt too much on that scene. YOUR IMAGINATION IS MIND-BLOWING AND YOU HAVE MAGIC IN YOUR POETIC HANDS
I read this half and i feel so bad for yn. Even tho she wasnt raped, she almost went through the trauma..my girl doesnt deserve this at all..nobody deserves it actually. I hope jungkook regrets playing with her soon and apologises ( even tho he's really rough and tough.) i hope to see character development otherwise i dont think they should end up together. It'll be really unrealistic for me if yn falls for him 💀 and actually begs him just like he said lol. I hope she'll stand on her ground. Loads of love to this unique story 💜
Yeah me too, I wish he regrets it and beg for her forgiveness
Oh finally...a lot of cheers for the queen and lots of praises for the extra hardwork...😊❤
Yeah
Omg yeah seriously
I genuinely cried while reading the moment when she hugged him & what happened after that. I've never in my life ever read a fanfic better than this. And i swear, i read a lot. The way you describe every single emotions, feelings of theirs and situations is fascinatingly good. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
I am not a person who like to comment much. But her writing skills always makes me to right. I can't describe how she explains everything in detail, I feel like I am seeing all the story in front of my eyes.
It feels like I'm watching a movie.Your writings,the way you portray things are something that I cannot explain in words . We surely don't deserve you and your writings❤❤
" The Beauty to obscure his Cruelty" just on the lines 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
"You" he pointed his finger at her, his gaze hungry either to take or break or both. "Mine"
THE WAY YOU JUST WRITE JAZZZZZ!!
Wait but how did you manage to write the whole episode again in just a day?
My respect for Jaz: going up high
It was already written hun.
I had to re-edit, thank you for your patience.
@@jaansfics You're so considerate ❤
@@Jazfics can't wait for the next episode !!!!
You are awesome author-nim 😁♥️
We need more of Y/n and Kiwi :(
Kiwi is such a cute name... I instantly went aww
Yes please 💜
I think that hug from y/n has sown a seed in his heart called love......♥️
GIRL? WHAT ARE YOU MADE OF? HOW DID YOU RETRIEVE THIS SO QUICKLY? HUGE RESPECT FOR YA 💜
I am damn sure Jungkook's heart beat must have raised when y/n hugged him
I was thinking the same too👏
Jaz I have been a silent admirer of yours since 'Dangerous Mafia King.' I don't usually comment cause I never found the courage to but today I feel like I should tell you this.I am currently waiting for my ISC board results and I am planning to attend NEET next year.Now the problem is the institute where I am admitted doesn't allow electronic gadgets so I am temporarily saying goodbye to my PC and mobile.The course is for 1 yr so I won't be able to read your amazing stories. I am really overwhelmed by this situation. Preparing for my ISC exams were difficult with full of anxiety but I found comfort in your stories.It was like I was in a different world.Author, please continue your mind-blowing stories. After 1 year I will be here as a young medical student.I knew this day wasn't far behind but it's still heartbreaking.I am going to make my dream come true. I will always be your admirer.Wish me luck😊Hwaiting!!!💕✨
All the best!! ❤
@@vanshika3066 Thank you🥰
All the best dear
Why did I cried at this :') good luck! I will give my international exams in October as well! Lol
@@jeonjungkook-eh7lj Good luck❤️👏👍
Worth waiting,
I really appreciate this YN ... Like she was week but still tried to defend .... 🦋
Y/N’s stuation made my tears come out every time I read her scenes
Girl you are something else trust me... It's the way you put everything in the story that literally got me mesmerized.. It's been a long time since i saw a author as good as you... Keep it up girl.. You'll be a famous one with millions of fans 💜💜💜
Can't wait to see what's coming next..
I'm head over heels for this series..how can you write something so amazing!
Take love girl💓
Not gonna lie it's really really hard to edit 50 min episode and you never disappointed us author,you gave your 💯 in this episode!!!❤️❤️❤️
My heart was pounding so fast while watching this episode, oh my god I felt like I was going to die, this episode was so scary when she was hiding and when he entered the room and said "Are you there Princess"?💀 my body froze at the scene, poor yn. And the way yn hugged him, pls I'm melting 🥹 the music and the way you wrote it, I'm speechless, you are incredible Jasmine.
I knew it. I knew it waiting for your ff is definitely worthy . The moment when yn hugged him for the first time i literally cried. Waiting for the next episode to see their romance.
I felt zoo and volcano both in my stomach when YN HUGGED JK
😵😵😵
When he call her princess it was amazing...princess?...that scene I loved it very much...😘
Are you kidding me?????
You're the best author ever and I'm being totally serious YOU'RE THE BEST
Your stories are some weird different from others
I'm just so astonished that how your all Mafia ff are so good, I never ever find better than those are of yours❤
48:54 that cracked me up lmao 😂😂
Her father omg I'm wheezing 😭😂
I don't know but why on earth I'm getting an idea that may be y/n is not Quinn's daughter!
Oh its worth waiting for author.. and thanks for the long episode ❤
Same!! I thought the same. 🙃
Jk's all dialogues are so sassy and full of satisfaction. I loved it
Jaz why are you such an amazing writer- like wtf istg even ana huang's books cant compare to your fictions- these r too good for me to read THANK YOU SO DAMN MUCH FOR MAKING THIS
I literally teared up when this situation was going around...drastic change in the Mafia's character..... from wild to care....and being realized been called by his name by y/n and showing intimate affection which is very puzzle to y/n .... 💕
Y/n hugging Jungkook was the heart of this episode and his reaction- I'm so obsessed with them
The last part when yn seek help from jk and first time this softness...ah I can't wait to see the love between these two..❤❤❤
Don't tell me devil started falling for her😳✋
May be 😱
The talent she have and she always it pour into her fanfics that I always wait for ffs to be uploaded. I have high respect for her and keep writing those thrilling stories. Love ya😘💜💜
Please! Don't make us wait for a week
And by the way, the episode was phenomenal❤
Love it
Oh my god It didn't feel like I was reading a fanfiction it felt like it was actually happening and it was real. I was absolutely absorbed in this. With headphones it felt even better. You're doing such a good job author. Love youuu❤
O God! U did hard work! Words are less to appreciate u! Thanks jazz! Love ya!!!♥️♥️
*Telepathy? Yes! I'm here right after thinking about ya💀💜*
I have never commented on your fanfics but I have to say you are the best author.... I like dark fiction and it made my interest in your fanfics even more......❤
God ..how time flies in your video I swear...loved every every everyyyy bit of it ..... really proud of you..
Action,romance,thriller,fear, this contains each and everything such a masterpiece😩💜
AGHHH I CANTT IM SOO OBSESSEED. Im on one rollercoaster it’s scary, sad, upsetting, scarily cute and just a whole lot of emotions😭🥹🥺🥺
Masterpiece, literally love your every series of ffs and now kinda obsessed with them ...❤❤
I have no words.
U just subscribed to ur channel.
The story is great
Apart from that u stole my heart.
Each and every word in the video explains the perfect emotions.
How come???
OK l don't know but u should become an author. Incredible!!
Just write a book.
Trust me.
U gonna be the next Colleen hoover.
Amazing
Why 51 minutes feels like its only one minute.. time was flying so fast before i realize it.. i enjoyed too much.. i luuuuuuuvee the story sooooo much.. but i closed my eyes in brutally scene cuz too scared.. i luv the hugs scene yaay..
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn this is ittttttt this was worth waiting for 😭😭 I experienced every f-ing emotion fear anger relief all of it. Bruh the running towards him n hugging him got me bruh and his acknowledging it was 🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌🤌
Omg i just hope your work get recognised on a bigger level. Damnn👏
"One push from me nd u will be rotting in sand " loke duhhh its only jeon
How could you write so perfectly omg i am astonished by this ff
I am crying rn 😭 😢 🤧 ❤
Wish i could voice msg you my emotions....like....
You made us go through a roller coaster like...
From curious to flustered to shocked to frustrating to relief to sad to curious again and at the end the SUSPENSE.....
I screamed sooooooo loud(mutely ,in my head😂)...
@19:33 what a relief .. atleast he didn't,, I was afraid
@42:17 from this moment on 🦋🦋💕💕💜💜
Wow,, the last part he finally started to realise, can't wait for him to be head over heels for YN ..
my most fav ff is 'Mate' but now it's tie between these 2 😭😭 Author your writing, editing, everything is so amazing 💜
Jaz I love u and you are the best . When I read that your phone broke I was like now what .but you being you uploaded like u promised . I love u again you are the beat aurthour that I follow and now I am gonna read it .yay
Finally after waiting ❤️🔥 it's definitely gonna be a masterpiece ❤ I am obsessed with this series 😩💜
Me toooo❤ soooooo obsessed
You are so considerate towards your readers❤️thanks for editing it again & posting it in a day🥺
This is such an interesting story….also the line ‘but if I catch you’ reminded me of Zade Meadows saying ‘if I catch you, I f*ck you’
😂😂
NGL I was waiting for him to say it😂😂
The way you designed the character of Jungkook is called a Real Ruthless Mafia🖤
Are we supposed to expect the same consistency ???
I have read many ffs but your ffs are something else.. The best 👍💯. It's feels so amazing while reading. Keep going. All the best.. "MATE" IS MY FAVORITE. ALL THE BEST🌑
Omg...Are there even any words to describe how incredibly fantastic this series is??...oh god... can't wait for next part❤️✨
I was peacefully reading then comes the line " to be continue" and I as always was like "whyyyyy now "
Oh ..... Dear Author , if you were in front of me right now i would've showered you with hugs and kisses cuz' this story is so beautifully written and i just can't describe in words that how much I'm loving it right now , can't wait to see jungkook fell 8n love with y/n 💜💜💜
He's so persistent even I felt kinda embarrassed reading the part with his blunt remarks that she will be submissive and ask for more and beg him to f her 🥴 dayum I really don't know what to expect from this duo and idk how the dynamics are gonna change UGH
Ugh how much i missed reading Jasmine fics❤
Incredible writing Can't praise more.
Don't let any peoples lame comment affect you. You deserve so much love❤
The only thing I want to steal from you is either your notebook in which you write or your imagination where you are imagining this story 💀😂😂 I swear I love all the ffs of your.
Omfg why this is soo good . Ur story writing skills is sm diff from others . Literally there is a twist in every minute .
When she hugged him.......... I can't describe what I felt........ Best episode of the best series
And in the last you left me for longing of more and more...you just end the episode where i thought what happened next...and then pufff i saw "to be continued"🤭.....
Arrrrgggghhhhhh 😫😣😩now i have to wait......
But i love it..... amazing work love you 🖤✌️
This story is so good....that i also fear what will happen 😂❤
Every ending leaves us at the edge.....it's just so amazing... unnie you are great❤
Checking this channel everyday to see if there is a new ep😅 So excited huhu
Can't wait for episode 5...hope ur phone get repaired soon and u upload it within 3 days.....so eager.....4th episode was so damn good gurl.....luv it...
Thank you so much Jaz for uploading I was so curious ..
When y/n scrached him and he got furious I really thought he would do something bad to her but he limit himself to tortour her later. I love how he is controlling himself.
Anyways, that part was my fav and that too when y/n felt a little safe in his arms...
Ohhh this ep was full of excitement and trill.
Thank you so much for your hardwork.
This was a little effort of me to appreciate your hardwork. I'm sorry if I made any grammatic mistake.
I just wanted to appreciate your efforts and hardwork.
Have a great day/night💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
I'm literally searching for ur channel every hour hoping that u may have reposted the episode-5 again🙂
Omg! This was truly so good! Can’t wait to read the next part! 😭😭😭😭🫶🫶🫶🫶✨✨✨✨
A long amazing episode.. I enjoyed every second of it! I was genuinely sad when it ended 😭💜 anyways I loved it so much and can’t wait to see the next episode! I love your work so much and really appreciate all the effort you put into writing the story
I appreciate ur work doing within one day...💜 The scene of yn hugging jungkook.... It was really something caught inside my heart...i really fell for this scene and moreover the way he wrapped his arms around her... Aishhhhh... Means after scaring her to death he finally got something inside his heart after yn hug him.... This feeling was just too good.... Although this episode was too great 💜
You are a very hardworking person...... Respect
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This reminded me of that one scene from the book haunting Adeline and I swear I ducking loveeeeee itttttt 😩🤌🫀✨✨✨
Tell its not just me saying she’s the best writer ever 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Finally... After waited of days we are going to ready this masterpiece 💜thank you so much author for your hardwork 🫂
Spoiler ahead: Wait ! Why am I suddenly feeling like Harwin Quinns is not y/n's father , that maybe her mother had her with someone else whom she loved.😅Mayyyybeeee it can be right.Does anyone think like that?
Meee
THE BEST AUTHOR ISTG THANK YOU FOR THIS AUTHOR NIM 😭❤️
My god wht a beautiful part.. 😮😮 u know wht there is a kdrama name "the king external monarch" Also hv a rescue scene of the female lead like this.. U just nailed this scene my God😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮 I got goosebumps 😮😮😮
The way you put feelings while writing this, I can feel it, y/n hugging him is what I was expecting and it happen..
And it made me extremely happy 🤍
Our queen is back again.... Yt u can't stop our queen....
when the ff is so good that even 51 mins feel like 2 mins
i spent 3 hours reading this ....damn
Oh, my already episode 4 and thank you for posting much love 💜 your doing awesome
Omg!!!!! The wait is over u r really so hardworking love u❤
I'm checking my phone time to time for the next ep's notification...............
It's been 3 days you don't give us any update as you already said that you have written the story so plzz just update uss about the next part. Can't wait anymore🥺.