"Despised Ex-Human Pilot Buys Scrapped Alien Ship, Unaware It Speaks and Has a Stubborn Personality.

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  • Опубліковано 8 лют 2025
  • The HFY story

КОМЕНТАРІ • 2

  • @FukuYTmark6
    @FukuYTmark6 4 дні тому +1

    AI voice is irritating

  • @CarolBethCobun
    @CarolBethCobun 4 дні тому

    Ex-Human? Does that mean he isn't human any more ?!? And if he isn't a pilot anymore then why is he buying a ship? Logic holes and mis-wording ruin a good intro. And the intro can make or break interest in the story.