I'm Okay │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • @skylar_1018
    @skylar_1018 4 роки тому +456

    "I'm fine/ I'm Okay"
    -Is the biggest lie everyone has told
    And it's the most used lie.....

    • @MAc_hn
      @MAc_hn 4 роки тому +7

      But why cant people see through the lie if they know its commonly used as a lie? Its because they dont care, theres no point in caring for others, theyll just forget who put them up there...

    • @tatemtrost6863
      @tatemtrost6863 4 роки тому +3

      whenever i say im fine or im okay its true but it makes me wonder/worry does the person im talking to think im actually depressed

    • @nuryasreenyleana1953
      @nuryasreenyleana1953 4 роки тому +3

      Thats the lie ive said my whole life

    • @N3isfree
      @N3isfree 9 місяців тому

      Fr

  • @annade2n671
    @annade2n671 4 роки тому +3031

    No one notice the tears,
    No one notice the stress,
    No one notice the depression,
    But they noticed my mistakes...
    Hey it has been I few months; I just wanted to thank you all for the likes but this doesn’t make me very happy because every time I get like it means that someone was also watching this video and was felling.. you know depressed & whoever you are I just want to make you feel better...
    And by the way you dropped this ❤️ here’s your heart, don’t let anyone break it 😊

    • @bisy1720
      @bisy1720 4 роки тому +15

      Sad but tru

    • @annade2n671
      @annade2n671 4 роки тому +5

      BI SY 🤘😔

    • @Violet-j4d
      @Violet-j4d 4 роки тому +27

      That's all people can see us for. The mistakes we make. And that's just sad because they don't know the real us that we hide. They just judge us by the mistakes we make. It's a cruel world but we just have to try day by day to change it even tho we feel like giving up. I'm tired of people just seeing my skin and not who I am. 💔

    • @amandarowland2994
      @amandarowland2994 4 роки тому +3

      *-* me

    • @suzan7158
      @suzan7158 4 роки тому +4

      😔😔😢

  • @smallpsycho887
    @smallpsycho887 6 років тому +666

    I always say to everyone"I'm okay" but inside I'll never be...

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому +33

      I completely understand the feeling. It's hard, but stay strong!

    • @smallpsycho887
      @smallpsycho887 6 років тому +13

      but...I'm only 11 and no one is there ....I'm going through so much and I'm trans and bi and people just hate me bc of that...

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому +17

      Zoey animates I'm sorry to hear that :( but just remember you're fine just the way you are and people who don't like you don't mean anything. The ones who matter are the people who care about you and support you ❤

    • @bunnylover8770
      @bunnylover8770 6 років тому +2

      Alex The Edge Lord Alex is that you????

    • @scotttodd7481
      @scotttodd7481 6 років тому +1

      U will one day be ok chin up 👌🏽

  • @hazelxzyy9319
    @hazelxzyy9319 5 років тому +266

    While watching this my little sister came into my room to say bye and as I hugged her I began to cry. She asked me what was wrong with me and told her “nothing” so then she told my mom that I was crying and she asked me what was wrong with me and all I said was “I’m okay”. It’s hard to tell the truth when you have so much on your mind 😔
    My little sister is 3 so she didn’t understand why I was crying.

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  5 років тому +35

      Aww :( I'm sorry to hear that. It is hard to tell the truth when you have so much on your mind. Stay strong

    • @sukhbirsingh4305
      @sukhbirsingh4305 4 роки тому +6

      Right 💔............

    • @MAc_hn
      @MAc_hn 4 роки тому +8

      Its hard to tell the truth when you have always lied

    • @dianamosur6754
      @dianamosur6754 3 роки тому +3

      I hope you’re feeling better after these couple of years! Be strong and know you’re cared for! ♥️

  • @connorrussell6361
    @connorrussell6361 5 років тому +1069

    Roses are dead
    Violets are broken
    Outside I'm smiling
    Inside I'm dying!!

    • @yourlocalchannel6515
      @yourlocalchannel6515 4 роки тому +17

      I've been sad for about 11 years now, am I the problem in my life?

    • @emii3870
      @emii3870 4 роки тому +14

      a quote from your lie in April
      I’m a simple girl
      Who *hides* a *thousand* feelings
      Under the most beautiful *smile*
      -Kaori Mizayon

    • @amie1390
      @amie1390 4 роки тому +11

      I’m my own bully

    • @purplepoison4531
      @purplepoison4531 4 роки тому +1

      Violets are dying*😊

    • @purplepoison4531
      @purplepoison4531 4 роки тому

      Violets are dying*😊

  • @vanesa8084
    @vanesa8084 4 роки тому +419

    I watched this.
    I started crying.
    My mom comes in.
    "Whats wrong?" She asked.
    "My fav character died in the show..." I answered, still with the tears in my eyes.

    • @Blue_3987
      @Blue_3987 3 роки тому +32

      And then she laughs it off and you wish you had the courage to tell the truth 😞

    • @clairekimble1272
      @clairekimble1272 3 роки тому +11

      my answer everytime someone walks into my room and im crying

    • @leadbyjesuschrist2124
      @leadbyjesuschrist2124 3 роки тому +2

      Your all stupid idiots .....
      Tell her the truth it's the only way threw this....
      Sorry for the tough love just turned 15 and havent got my filter yet 😂
      But seriously your an idiot, just from a girls prospective....
      Lots of love 💖💖💖
      Always be honest

    • @pointlessvideos940
      @pointlessvideos940 3 роки тому +5

      I’m so sorry.

    • @blueandtrue3027
      @blueandtrue3027 3 роки тому +5

      @@leadbyjesuschrist2124 shed laugh and tell me I’m too young to be depressed.

  • @idk_what_im_doing_tbh8604
    @idk_what_im_doing_tbh8604 5 років тому +2698

    This mask i wear
    This smile i fake
    They'll never know
    Untill i break.
    Under this mask
    There's a broken face
    Not yet to be seen
    Not yet to be heard.
    I hear them hate
    i see them stare
    I'll carry on with my life
    One miserable day at a time.
    My mask hides me
    Day by day
    But all i have to say
    Is "im fine"
    I lied.
    I don't want to be heard
    I don't want to be seen
    I want to be alone
    With my silent plea.
    When im im alone
    My mask breaks
    Shattering from the hate
    My heart aches.
    So i guess its time to put on my mask, see them stare, hear them hate,laugh when i want to cry, in this mask of mine, im sorry for waisting your time.

    • @AshutoshSingh-zq7uz
      @AshutoshSingh-zq7uz 5 років тому +9

      😍😘

    • @bananababy3050
      @bananababy3050 5 років тому +54

      You’re not wasting anybody’s time

    • @jimmiekimwright2918
      @jimmiekimwright2918 5 років тому +24

      This is me

    • @lilacland2829
      @lilacland2829 5 років тому +32

      I relate to this and I think this should've gotten more likes.this was awesome

    • @tate7886
      @tate7886 5 років тому +19

      @@kawaiipotato4681 really no one cares I just care that this made me cry for 20 mins

  • @maddison6484
    @maddison6484 4 роки тому +263

    When I go to school I :
    Smile
    Laugh
    Focus
    But when someone says something about me the way I look or how I act I break and they don't realise they say :
    Why is she angry
    Why is she crying
    What is wrong with her
    She's just doing it for attention
    But she's so happy-
    Or is she
    What they don't realise is I do all these things but I get home and I'm a completely different person that's why I always say
    I'm okay

    • @trappedinmyhead4701
      @trappedinmyhead4701 4 роки тому +1

      I’m exactly the opposite. My family think I’m doing so well but at school I’m like a ghost. I get to classes and just sit there staring into the distance then at break and lunch I just stand silently next to my friends and they give me a hug and a sad smile and I appreciate it so much but I have no energy to smile back cause I save all my energy to fake it at home...

    • @kulwinderkaur-fu3dx
      @kulwinderkaur-fu3dx 3 роки тому +2

      At school I have the reputation for laughing at everything and just being really happy but at home I am really quite,sad lonely

    • @Blue_3987
      @Blue_3987 3 роки тому

      Then class starts, you are coping notes from the board, it's maths and simultaneously having a mental breakdown; after class THOSE classmates say 'how are you so calm and studious; and happy when all you do is study' 😢

  • @bunnylover8770
    @bunnylover8770 6 років тому +1654

    Im just tired
    (I'm depressed)
    The cat scratched me
    (I started cutting)
    I'm not hungry
    (Im starving)
    I'm fine
    (Help me)

    • @luffywaifu2187
      @luffywaifu2187 5 років тому +57

      Bunny lover
      .. this is me.. I started cutting for the first time ever on March 11th 2019.. and ever since then I always said my cat scratched me and people believed it, my parents didn’t question... my mom says my depression is an act I put on for people attention, I’m a disappointment.. I’m sorry for typing this even though you probably won’t care... I just want to harm myself and hopefully I cut a vital spot and die

    • @theaudreyfam3274
      @theaudreyfam3274 5 років тому +8

      that's really true

    • @nathanbailey88
      @nathanbailey88 5 років тому +11

      Anime lover. Don't do it!

    • @luffywaifu2187
      @luffywaifu2187 5 років тому +7

      @@nathanbailey88
      I wish I could:) the medication I am on don't even work anyways

    • @nathanbailey88
      @nathanbailey88 5 років тому +16

      For your mother to say it's for attention.. That's bull shit! Only people who do or have suffered with depression can really understand what it's like i tried to take my life years ago!! Regret it ever since!! Got no one to talk to but bottling it up sure as hell don't help. Trust me the hospital and paramedics that attended to me said i was very lucky to still be alive i thought i was unlucky to be alive at that time.. But now i see it's really not worth it. Trust me things always get better! You're beautiful inside and out but the one's who don't see it are the one's with real problems that's why they try to bring you down.. Rise above it and take no notice!! Don't let any negativity stick in your mind you are worth more than anything to someone you will find them one day.. Stay strong please? 😘

  • @chipomainga6540
    @chipomainga6540 7 місяців тому +130

    I will leave this comment here so that when someone like this I will still get a notification

  • @iiamimperfect6285
    @iiamimperfect6285 5 років тому +659

    I'm okay...
    O- On the edge of breaking down
    K- Know that I'd be a bother if I asked for help
    A- Another few months of cutting myself
    Y- Yet nobody understands
    *I guess you could call this just another cry for help right?*

    • @crispycruncher_0114
      @crispycruncher_0114 5 років тому +4

      iiAm Imperfect please.. don’t ever give up. I know what you’re going through..

    • @lexa-kd2mz
      @lexa-kd2mz 4 роки тому +1

      Samee

    • @annsmith6533
      @annsmith6533 4 роки тому +5

      Every time I start to get happy again I suddenly get sad to the point where I don't even know why I'm sad there is a person who I won't say his name because I don't want to admit it but he has done me wrong to the point where I take shower after shower and still feel dirty

    • @oregano6836
      @oregano6836 4 роки тому +2

      I know this was from a year ago, but listen. I truly get how hard it is, as I am suffering just the same. But if we were put on this earth just to feel broken and sad, we wouldn't have been on the earth. You do have a purpose and everything will eventually get better. Weather it gets better now, tomorrow, in four years, maybe even the day before you die. It will. It sucks, yeah. life really does. But if your situation doesn't get better eventually, then I will legit be shocked. After 20 years of being depressed, it's finally getting better, and it will for you too. Hang in there, bro.

    • @3T4RS
      @3T4RS 3 роки тому

      You are imperfectly perfect~✨

  • @robz7050
    @robz7050 5 років тому +121

    This is what was keeping me alive till now..I'm a sad and depressed person..who else in 2019……?

  • @sophenphath7158
    @sophenphath7158 5 років тому +126

    I can't sleep
    I don't hungry
    I can't do everything
    I can't stop love you
    I can't stop miss you
    (I'm fine)

  • @destinyyoung3878
    @destinyyoung3878 4 роки тому +968

    I feel like this everyday and I'm done with life

    • @Divya_B
      @Divya_B 4 роки тому +41

      There's someone close to me that probably feels this way rn. But I can't talk to that person. So I'm saying this to you here, please hold on. It will get brighter, sunnier, better. I love you !!!!! Hold on :)) despite how cliche that sounds. And stop listening to hardcore hip hop music is you do

    • @emilyone1749
      @emilyone1749 4 роки тому +21

      one day, you will look back at this dark place that you have overcome. you will be proud of yourself that you got through it, you will be okay. pain in temporary, i used to think that i would always be in pain, i felt like pain was for me. but guess what, i overcame that. i’m better now, and you will be too. hold on for me, you will get there. one day you will tell your kids this story

    • @chongfl315
      @chongfl315 4 роки тому +6

      Me to

    • @chongfl315
      @chongfl315 4 роки тому +5

      Me to

    • @khushishrestha3952
      @khushishrestha3952 4 роки тому +12

      Time heals everything...🖤 🖤 now God is only trying to figure out whether you can accept God's challenge easily or not so you have to be strong and prove God that you are strong enough to accept all the challenges🖤🖤more power to you🖤🖤

  • @GodIsLove223
    @GodIsLove223 3 роки тому +42

    Praying for everyone who struggles with depression, anxiety, suicidal thoughts, or any problems they are having with their mental health. God is always with you and he loves you more in a second than anyone could in a lifetime. Follow Him and he will get you through this. Talk to Him through your prayers. ❤️✝️

  • @emelimendez9493
    @emelimendez9493 Рік тому +8

    "Maybe if I pretend on those really bad days, I'll start feel like I'm actually okay." This hit hard

  • @Wowmar78gaming
    @Wowmar78gaming 6 років тому +327

    Faking it until it feels real huh.. me for 3 years straight and I'm still not done

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому +12

      I know what you mean, it really sucks when you realize it

    • @Wowmar78gaming
      @Wowmar78gaming 6 років тому +3

      @@MelsThoughts Yup

    • @sichienelien
      @sichienelien 5 років тому +3

      It began when i was 10, I'm still not okay, I'm 18 right know. I'm believing i'm okay, but I'm not.

    • @sichienelien
      @sichienelien 5 років тому +7

      Faking is easy for me now

    • @Nousseiba-c8v
      @Nousseiba-c8v 5 років тому +2

      @@sichienelien same

  • @loveislove4323
    @loveislove4323 4 роки тому +10

    the words "i am okay" and "i am fine" just cover up the pain. after a while the words do not hurt, the fake smiles stop hurting.
    you start to play a role in as your self and it becomes real. but your life is not a book do not end it, keep being this charter and change how your story goes. just keep going keep the story, your story going

  • @behzadali7392
    @behzadali7392 5 років тому +61

    Wet Eye's 😭
    Totally Broken 💔
    The feeling
    A Deep Breath
    But I'm okay 😢😢😭

  • @idea_jazz8703
    @idea_jazz8703 5 років тому +121

    " i'll fake a smile" I have faking a smile for over 3 years. I wish someone would say "your not okay" but no one cares enough.

    • @shy7336
      @shy7336 4 роки тому +5

      Your not OK... Stop lying what's wrong...

    • @hannahh8119
      @hannahh8119 4 роки тому +1

      Sometimes it is difficult to see... Maybe the other person is faking, too. Try to say how you are feeling..

    • @izzye1156
      @izzye1156 4 роки тому +1

      Maybe it's not that they don't care....its that they don't know, they don't know the signs.

    • @braydentheriault5217
      @braydentheriault5217 3 роки тому

      No1 cares about really anything is what I have learn..-AbbyCav Braydens gf

  • @hannahanglin2657
    @hannahanglin2657 5 років тому +50

    I always fake being okay so people don’t see that I’m rlly not okay I fake smiles all the time and When I go home I sit in my room by myself and sometimes even cry.

    • @sapphirestar9805
      @sapphirestar9805 4 роки тому

      Hannah Anglin HH me all the time... I feel you

  • @broomieboy
    @broomieboy 4 роки тому +83

    Im ‘fine’
    F-Failed
    I-In Pain
    N-Neglected
    E-Embarresed
    Im ‘fine’
    Just take it slow but my depression will grow
    The shadows at night make me fight
    The light of my life is just too bright
    As i cut it makes it worse
    When it all comes down
    Outside i got a smile but inside *i got one sad frown*
    Hear my poem it will be alright were in this together and lets make it right!

    • @ablazeroofing8898
      @ablazeroofing8898 3 роки тому

      I feel like that EVERY DAY

    • @leadbyjesuschrist2124
      @leadbyjesuschrist2124 3 роки тому

      Guys come on, innocent babies die everyday because there parents are idiots, be grateful for the life you have, at least you have a life. 😅❤❤😬 don't be idiots and ruin a blessing
      Love you guys, just some more tough love from your American 15 year old girl ✌

    • @broomieboy
      @broomieboy 3 роки тому

      @@leadbyjesuschrist2124 life still a paim but thx for the advice for other people who could also be looking inside replies

  • @taylerklofta3585
    @taylerklofta3585 4 роки тому +34

    when someone says “How are you”
    i always respond this:
    how? everyday you ask me the same question, do i answer something else than “i’m fine”? No. I don’t. But this time i will tell the truth and say that i’m not fine. You know why i’m not fine? Because i’m tired of living. I’m tired of seeing people’s face. I’m tired of looking at myself in the mirror crying. I’m tired of being alone whenever I need someone to talk to. I’m tired of feeling like this. And i’m tired of being me.

  • @rosecarman9684
    @rosecarman9684 3 роки тому +16

    “Your word is a lamp to my feet
    and a light to my path.”-psalm 119:105

  • @theinvincible3415
    @theinvincible3415 6 років тому +70

    I can relate it with myself

  • @xmysticalcloud
    @xmysticalcloud 4 роки тому +68

    The Day rises.
    The Night Falls.
    Everyday is the same.
    The sunset is black,
    The sky is grey,
    The colors i used to know...
    Have all 𝙁𝙖𝙙𝙚𝙙 away.
    The smile i give,
    Brings joy to others,
    They say, “Your Smile makes my day!“,
    But,
    What if you told them,
    Its not 𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙚𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙡𝙨.
    They notice the mistakes,
    They notice your retakes,
    But never notice the person behind the forever smiling mask.
    And on on,
    As life 𝙜𝙤𝙚𝙨 𝙤𝙣,
    That mask will crumble,
    That mask will fade,
    Leaving you without protection.
    Like they will,
    One day.

  • @adudeandhisdog23
    @adudeandhisdog23 5 років тому +84

    Yeah I'm fine the cat " scratched" me I'm just "tired" my stomach "hurts" I want to die NO YOU ARE JUST ACTING she says

    • @MAc_hn
      @MAc_hn 4 роки тому

      They just refuse to accept the truth or do they even care?

    • @adudeandhisdog23
      @adudeandhisdog23 4 роки тому

      @@MAc_hn i think it's more , the fact it's a very scary situation yaknow but that's not how you should handle it

    • @adudeandhisdog23
      @adudeandhisdog23 4 роки тому

      @@MAc_hn our relationship has grown quite a bit and continues to grow

  • @phoebe3605
    @phoebe3605 3 роки тому +16

    You know that feeling when someone asks, "how are you? Are you okay?" Then you'll say, "yes I'm very okay!" But deep down you're not okay. you want to escape the sadness, reality, everything that's making you feel not okay, but hey you'll ended up saying "I'm okay."

  • @user-xr7ir5dl6c
    @user-xr7ir5dl6c 5 років тому +34

    I have this guy bestfriend and he’s like a brother to me, I tell him everything, I tell him if I’m really okay or not but even to him I say that I’m okay when I’m clearly not. I just don’t want to be that person that’s always sad.

    • @Sparkle-g6w
      @Sparkle-g6w 4 роки тому +1

      My story is the same😔😔😔

  • @Serendipia_95
    @Serendipia_95 Рік тому +1

    this is just making me crying so much inside.

  • @peckymecky3844
    @peckymecky3844 3 роки тому +4

    people ask if you're okay and when you say NO they have no words. They EXPECT you to say yes but are never ready when you say NO.
    S O C I E T Y

  • @anderfoxie732
    @anderfoxie732 5 років тому +12

    I love how we all struggle thru this
    I love how we all lie about this
    I love how we're all alone in this
    When we could be together.
    I was really, actually okay for two days.
    But it's back.

  • @reginahay4998
    @reginahay4998 5 років тому +3

    When you get to a point you’re so numb and dead inside you don’t even fake being okay anymore. And blatantly ignore them if you get pressed for a real answer.

  • @ashleydiaz4536
    @ashleydiaz4536 3 роки тому +2

    This speaks for me it’s how I feel this is really speaking everything that I am afraid to say

  • @VinoVenitas
    @VinoVenitas 6 років тому +18

    "Ill meet your eyes and give a friendly wave ..." I loved the truth and pain in that line. This was an amazing piece and I want to thank you for sharing your truth.,

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 років тому

      Thank you! I enjoy writing what comes to my mind even if it's raw truth :) I appreciate the listen!

  • @divyahule7233
    @divyahule7233 4 роки тому

    Its another level of peace to be able to put what you feel into words.

  • @sarahgoo226
    @sarahgoo226 5 років тому +14

    I relate to this on so many levels..

  • @Heehee_69
    @Heehee_69 4 роки тому +30

    Them: ya okay?*ask like silly person*
    Me: mhm.
    Them: OKEY!😁
    In my mind: i'm faking you wouldn't know how i feel

  • @Gracenboxx
    @Gracenboxx 5 років тому +23

    Trust me
    I’m ok
    Trust me
    I’ll be fine
    Trust me
    I’m used to this
    pain inside
    Won’t go away
    But I’m ok
    I have to be
    I’ll be fine
    eventually
    I’m use to this after all
    -Gracen Boxx @princessgracen

  • @sarahbadarspeaks90
    @sarahbadarspeaks90 3 роки тому +2

    I felt every word!!! I'm so heartbroken but also in awe

  • @ASMinor
    @ASMinor 5 років тому +4

    I am an avid #MentalHealthAwareness advocate and spoken word performer, and I love this so much. I travel the country trying to bring that awareness on stages, in classrooms, hospitals, and on my UA-cam channel, so I get excited when I see other advocates. 💙❤

  • @rad-brad2491
    @rad-brad2491 3 роки тому +1

    I have never heard the way I think about things and I’m speechless to hear it from another voice thank you

  • @mohitjain5406
    @mohitjain5406 4 роки тому +3

    Man! This poem hits me really hard. I'm all tears😔. You are really something 😌

  • @Jasmin-17748
    @Jasmin-17748 Рік тому

    Why is this so relatable , everything hurts but faking it makes it feel real and i feel that if i let them theough that becomes a reality

  • @Hope-c6m
    @Hope-c6m 3 роки тому +13

    "Dear God, Please make my days useful, my nights restful, my home peaceful and my efforts fruitful, in the Mighty name of Jesus, Amen."

  • @CJ74U2NV
    @CJ74U2NV Місяць тому +1

    2024 and seeing this for the first time. It really hits home. Beneath the "I'm okay" mask is someone that's not okay but I'm getting better.
    I got here because I didn't see the real person behind her mask. I allowed myself to be completely vulnerable and stripped off all of my armor. Then, when I was least expecting it, I was stabbed in the heart.
    I know that eventually I will heal completely. I know that eventually, I will have better acceptance of this and put it further and further behind me. But no matter how much the wound heals, the scar will always be there.

  • @alexiagrimm6787
    @alexiagrimm6787 4 роки тому +19

    Peopole think that it's fun to laught at my mistakes, but they don't get it that they're just making it worse😔

    • @leadbyjesuschrist2124
      @leadbyjesuschrist2124 3 роки тому +2

      When they treat you like a joke leave them like it's funny
      Or just punch them in the face

  • @Cityboygonefishing
    @Cityboygonefishing Рік тому

    Real shit I want to hug him . And I hope his friends and family check up because that is so accurate it hurts

  • @tiaananyabansal2031
    @tiaananyabansal2031 3 роки тому +4

    Beautiful, literally so beautiful and nice, I have no words how this poem made me feel, It was so emotional and so relatable, every line, and after hearing it I felt at peace, idk just hearing relatable things like these heals me, and I want to thank you for sharing this with world, with me, it helps alot....❤️❤️

  • @cedricalindsay4362
    @cedricalindsay4362 7 місяців тому +1

    I love poem so much and this one was so deep and relatable

  • @joannalf4750
    @joannalf4750 2 роки тому +10

    smiling outside, crying inside..
    silent outside, screaming inside..
    nothing outside, SOMETHING inside...
    i wrote this last year but now, there's a sun in my heart and a wind in my mind, HOPE YOU TOOO...! remember there WILLL be a rainbow after the rain❤❤

  • @newalabdulkadir4534
    @newalabdulkadir4534 3 роки тому +1

    This describes totally my life . And I always remind myself that one day I will be free from all this fakeness in my life .

  • @kayla_Al07
    @kayla_Al07 4 роки тому +6

    Does anyone feel so worthless and numb...Like no matter what you do you will never be enough. Sometimes I wish that someone will notice that i'm not okay and try to help. But until then I have to hide who I am and be someone i'm not.

  • @kyleighdawn408
    @kyleighdawn408 3 роки тому +1

    I'm not going to vent into the comments because ew. But usually I listen to depressed poems while I write some of my own. I've never paused what I was doing and actually listened. But I did this time, and I cried. Your voice is so soothing and it finally feels like someone gets it. This fight that ur addicted to despite knowing your gonna lose.

  • @a.2345
    @a.2345 5 років тому +14

    dear future self: right now it’s november 14. your life isn’t going the best. you’re hurting. you feel like you’re drowning, and there’s no escape from this constant pain and feeling of being alone every single second.. i promise it’ll get better. in a few months you’ll be over it. him. you are enough. everything happens for a reason, and it all comes in time. you’ll be okay, i promise.

  • @kiyeowoyu9214
    @kiyeowoyu9214 3 роки тому +1

    This poem really describes who I am today and it really hurts so much that in the end there's gonna be only you who can save you.

  • @parkjaehyun9724
    @parkjaehyun9724 6 років тому +68

    Can I borrow your Spoken poetry, I have I competition, and the only thing I can think of is your Spoken poetry I promise to claim it not mine and give you all the credits

  • @emanuellafonseca8417
    @emanuellafonseca8417 2 роки тому

    This feels so raw. Livid. It's beautiful.

  • @jasmineleigh4344
    @jasmineleigh4344 5 років тому +3

    Innocent, fresh, and ever so pure
    When we are children we don’t know much more.
    We are taught while we're young to be kind to others,
    To use manners when needed, and to not hit your brother.
    Don’t judge a book by a cover, they say,
    So I wonder how and why it happens anyway.
    At the young age of five, or for some right before,
    We become little humans who like to explore.
    We grow into a world that’s structured yet free,
    Where they tell us to be who we want to be.
    A vet! An astronaut! A teacher! We choose,
    Not thinking about if we win or we lose.
    In the blink of an eye we’re seven or eight,
    Ready for cursive, division, and opinions to create.
    It may not be realized or noticed per say,
    But the small details we see affect us each day.
    The make-up put on and the clothes that are worn,
    By surrounding people is becoming the norm.
    Twelve years old and on top of the world,
    A middle school hero who’s about to be whirled.
    Things start to matter that shouldn’t be looked at,
    Like how much you weigh, or some natural body fat.
    You are given a number for the size on your jeans,
    Bullies appear and are nothing but mean.
    People start talking; they notice your face,
    You’re the girl who barely takes up any space.
    Although obvious, you have not a clue,
    That what people are saying turns out to be true.
    They say you need help, to get food in your system,
    But you just ignore, and think you have all wisdom.
    Mental breakdowns make you open your eyes,
    To finally see your mind's full of lies.
    Recovery, they say, is the most grueling part,
    It takes energy, time, and all of your heart.
    It’s not just your body it’s your mental state too,
    You must be strong, tough, and find the real you.
    Behind the disorder lies a beautiful human,
    Who’s struggling to thrive in the new world they’re viewed in.
    Progress is made, and weight is put on,
    A smile starts showing, insecurities gone.
    Just turned eighteen and ready for college,
    Still nervous you might not have all the knowledge.
    Move into the dorms, to make a second home,
    With unfamiliar places so you start to roam.
    Discovering life is amazing and brilliant,
    And also discovering that you are resilient.
    You are kind, caring, brave, smart, and level headed,
    Ready to take on whatever might be dreaded.
    You have been through hell, nothing could be worse,
    Eating disorders…they have no remorse.
    So you leave it in the past, never to return,
    Because you have mastered the lesson to be learned.
    That life is a gift and there is so much to do,
    Like walking to the ocean and enjoying the view.
    Taking pleasure in art, and playing with puppies,
    Going out on the weekends and looking for hubbies.
    Running for joy, and the smell of spring flowers,
    Your comfiest pillow, and endless hot showers.
    A genuine laugh that makes your belly hurt,
    And a dance in the rain, who cares about dirt.
    Find your passion, your push, your desire or love,
    Whatever you choose it will fit like a glove.
    You’re your own person, imperfections and all,
    You’re your own hero when it comes to a flaw.
    Be happy, be healthy, and be grateful above all,
    For you’re given this life where you’re ever so small.
    Don’t be too serious, and learn from mistakes,
    And always remember: do whatever it takes.

  • @someoneinthecrowd3162
    @someoneinthecrowd3162 3 роки тому +1

    It's scaring how I can relate to this so much.

  • @angel-ku7im
    @angel-ku7im 4 роки тому +3

    Rose's are red
    Violets are blue
    All the restless nights
    Are because of you
    (For my dad)
    A smile I fake
    Hiding my pain
    Awake I lay
    Drowning in my shame
    (For myself)
    If I'm not mad I'm hurting
    If I'm not crying I'm faking
    If I'm not sleeping I'm thinking
    And if I'm not sad I'm angry
    (For me)
    When you cross my mind I hurt
    When you said those words I was in pain
    When you told me to get over it I was mad
    But now I'm just broken down and sad
    I am like glass but you cant see through me
    I'm easy to break
    All you have to do is drop me
    I shatter to pieces
    I dont hate the world I hate myself
    I dont smile for real I smile to hide it
    I dont like the pain in my heart
    And when you say those words it's like you just dropped my heart
    The world is a cruel place they say
    Everyone feels pain someday they say
    But the pain I feel is not normal
    The pain I feel makes me hate myself its makes me mad for not apparent reason its makes me cry for myself it makes me stay awake at night thinking it makes me put on a mask to cover the bleeding

  • @leve1958
    @leve1958 4 роки тому +1

    You’ve inspired me like no one has
    It literally made me have tears in my eyes

  • @wanyamuthimookariuki2012
    @wanyamuthimookariuki2012 4 роки тому +3

    6years today i said goodbye to my love,,,God has been good to us..today we remembered this with afriend and she said she thanks God i pulled through,,we remembered the events of the day place and how each got the news..she told me she was gland i can take it easy when we talked about it which she thought would never happen,,,little does she know how the journey has been like...all we do is take each day as it comes oiling ourselves well,,packaging ourselves nice for theres no time to remain groomy though its never easy even with years you still feel their absense missg them alot..R.I.P darling...

  • @yatikamanger5773
    @yatikamanger5773 3 роки тому

    Totally broken inside and smiling like u were never been hurt!!

  • @vickymar7418
    @vickymar7418 4 роки тому +8

    The story of my life....

  • @moon_2312
    @moon_2312 2 роки тому +2

    Smiling outside broken inside
    😔
    But yeah I am still smiling with a fake smile everyday
    I am tired of everything
    I am okay I just lost my self again ....
    Thank you for making this video ❤️!..

  • @lillyweitjes526
    @lillyweitjes526 4 роки тому +11

    I'll always smile for others to make them feel better, I will always help everybody, I will always take your problems and make them fade
    But I will always be the person who:
    Cries at home
    Cuts
    Doesn't eat
    Takes food with me but never eat it
    Make you feel better while I am breaking apart

    • @supravietuitoriblog547
      @supravietuitoriblog547 3 роки тому +1

      Hi, I just saw your comment and I wanted you to know that you're not alone in this, okay? Whenever you feel alone and you want to talk to someoane who understands, I'm here for you.

  • @anime-tc6lo
    @anime-tc6lo 3 роки тому +1

    With people I act okay when really I hate myself and wish I didn’t exist but then people like this help me to understand I am not alone, that another’s feel this to, my friend says she understands but really she doesn’t, Why is it people say they know what it is like when the don’t!!! I know no one will probably read this, but thank you for making me feel not alone.....

  • @chloechan2921
    @chloechan2921 4 роки тому +28

    im okay :)
    no im not
    im just scared admit that im that sad depressed person no one wants to be around. i fake my smile because I don’t want others to judge me. i dont want people to worry, but i know they wont, because no one ever worries about the girl who is always smiling, the daughter who is cheerful and the best friend who is caring. tbh i dont even know what love feels like anymore. i used to be such a nice, warm and amazing person, i was happy, but now, i have hit rock bottom, i dont feel like being happy anymore.

    • @MAc_hn
      @MAc_hn 4 роки тому +3

      I used to be that likable girl that everyone can turn to but now? People change. I forgot how to love or feel love, or did i ever know how to love...?

    • @doratonks2085
      @doratonks2085 2 роки тому +1

      I really hope you find happiness one day, ok change that to I KNOW you will find happiness one day. You need to talk to someone, even someone on the internet, doesn’t matter, I’m here for you. Just talk to someone. Let them know how you feel. And sooner or later, you’ll become the same person you were before, or an even better one. Ik things are a little rough rn but just hold on, ok? It’ll be okay. Love you❤️

  • @ghostplayz_thegrimreaper
    @ghostplayz_thegrimreaper Рік тому

    Wow, this is the best spoken poetry because this is what I always think

  • @kaib_0798
    @kaib_0798 4 роки тому +11

    "how are you?"
    my mind: im dying inside, i wanna cry, im cutting myself because i need control over the pain, im having suicidal thoughts, i need help, i want help, please help me, hug me, tell me things are gonna be ok....
    me: Oh me...? I'm Fine!

    • @Sparkle-g6w
      @Sparkle-g6w 4 роки тому

      U r not fine.......... What happened???

    • @tasmiyah6992
      @tasmiyah6992 3 роки тому +1

      U already wrote my thoughts...🙂
      I guess we have almost the same problem...
      Dying, crying, cutting, suicidal thoughts...
      I actually can't just control my mind...it's like...I think so much....that...sometimes I think...the thoughts will only stop if I die...
      It's just too hard for me...😫

  • @Anon-ve7zy
    @Anon-ve7zy 3 роки тому +2

    You know,love kinda weird sometimes it hurt and make you happy at the same time.

  • @genjingsakti1556
    @genjingsakti1556 5 років тому +4

    i thought i was free,but they come again ,its like they don't want to leave they just want me to give up.

  • @Carrotnoodles
    @Carrotnoodles 2 місяці тому

    This hit somewhere really deep you really just described my life

  • @MsDarkAngel
    @MsDarkAngel 5 років тому +3

    We have no choice to be okay😢

  • @alexiswoodrid9977
    @alexiswoodrid9977 2 роки тому

    This is so true. And this is just so sad that Depression is a human emotion that so many people understand that just make u want to die. But u can’t cuz ur “ok” and just fake a smile which is what everyone I know does all the fucking time!

  • @cutieyoongi1916
    @cutieyoongi1916 5 років тому +5

    I’m fine or I’m okay, the lie that everyone believes.

  • @hsulinnnwe3551
    @hsulinnnwe3551 Рік тому

    When she said, "But hey, I'm okay, and the sun will give me another day!"
    I felt how it is to live those repeated bad days!

  • @thelandbeforetime5957
    @thelandbeforetime5957 5 років тому +3

    🥺 bruh I always lie and say I’m fine when I’m not

  • @sweet-lp7dg
    @sweet-lp7dg 3 роки тому +1

    this is why I always ask “are you sure” when I ask someone if there okay. I also try my best to look as if I care (because I do) and I look into there eyes to see if there’s any sign of sadness there…

  • @felixfelicis217
    @felixfelicis217 4 роки тому +3

    I realised I've been lying to myself when i used to think that I'm really okay........the tears, the heavy feelinv in my stomach, the sleepless nights, loneliness........but I'm still okay cuz I'm alive right?

  • @lunaavadoesmusic8852
    @lunaavadoesmusic8852 3 роки тому

    This brought back memories of last year at this time when I was planning to end it all... I'm still here, I regret it a lot but I'm still here! 😖😔

  • @ヴィ紙bぇ
    @ヴィ紙bぇ 4 роки тому +5

    They Only notice my mistakes.😔

  • @jessie_4921
    @jessie_4921 4 роки тому +1

    Damn this is deep. Especially the last two sentences..

  • @oofusdoofus4792
    @oofusdoofus4792 4 роки тому +6

    I had my first suicidal thought when I was 3, because i was getting bullied in preschool.

  • @avahamilton4844
    @avahamilton4844 4 роки тому

    Ache my heart to hear this so many people suffering in silence

  • @cherrybakewell2449
    @cherrybakewell2449 5 років тому +5

    ""I'm okay""(my to the world)xx 😀xx""I'm really ok""xx😕🤔

  • @kaethegae
    @kaethegae 4 роки тому

    Still looking back at this in 2020. When somethings get better something always hits back to make it become bad.

  • @Ne0nLightzz
    @Ne0nLightzz 4 роки тому +9

    No one see my sadness
    No one see my depression
    No one knows about my suicidal thoughts
    No sees my anger
    No one notices my large weight loss
    No notices my eating disorder
    no one notices me
    But they all notice everything thing I do wrong and how many times I've messed up....

  • @neoscencez
    @neoscencez 2 роки тому

    I can't stop listening to this.

  • @nataliecarter6017
    @nataliecarter6017 4 роки тому +3

    Give your children to CPS. Christ Police Station... Stop

  • @johngzone7698
    @johngzone7698 2 роки тому

    thank you for this wonderful words... it feels like i've been given a voice, it's exactly that what i can't express myself

  • @parkerellis5716
    @parkerellis5716 7 місяців тому

    I've gone through a lot in my life. The reason I'm more likely to say "I'm fine." or "I'm okay." is because of the fact that a lot of people don't know how to react. Most will say "You need help." I know I do and I've talked to multiple, professional people about my mental state. However, it makes me feel alone and broken when I can't just talk to someone without feeling like I'm being studied as a patient. I've learned through the years in my experience that my depression never really goes away. Even after medication, there are still subtle thoughts lingering in my mind. I had made an image that at first glance looks like it reads "I'm okay." but when you look closely you see in the center a soft red hue that looks more like "I'nn oT{ay." I feel like people don't really want to listen to how I really feel so I don't usually say what I really want which is "I'm doing horrible. I'm trying to fight these thoughts that keep running through my mind every time I see a knife. I keep myself busy with multiple projects because I believe if I stop thinking of new ideas or I just stop and rest those thoughts will win."

  • @denisseonofre3678
    @denisseonofre3678 Рік тому

    Reminds me of my childhood I lost a lot this made me cry

  • @briespen
    @briespen 4 роки тому +1

    I really like your poems!! Its so beautiful and touching. You are doing great, I hope you do more.

  • @rowtieboodoo3156
    @rowtieboodoo3156 3 роки тому

    Yh I feel the same no one will know that we hurting from inside but all you say is true and I always hide my depression from people and put on a fake smile and by the way love all your poetry

  • @1234567891022438
    @1234567891022438 5 років тому +2

    That is beautiful eplained it exactly how i feel and live ♥️♥️

  • @susiechow8756
    @susiechow8756 3 роки тому +1

    Alone & insecure which not okay. Thank you for the above amen.

  • @nehmion6970
    @nehmion6970 4 роки тому

    I'll start to feel like I'm actually ok, u know ,fake it until it feels like real.
    Really hits me nothing is so relatable than this😔

  • @shaylynngatrel6466
    @shaylynngatrel6466 4 роки тому +1

    They see the smile while I'm outside of my room but they don't notice the tears when I break down and when they do notice they say I'm being emotional