Honestly, this is the kind of teaching techniques that students from various learning institutions need, it is very creative, educational, informative, interesting and entertaining as well. Guy Stieglitz, you have done an excellent job for making this wonderful instructional video and I give you 100% respect for that. I think you should also do another video that will teach students the differences between paraphrasing and plagiarism and give many examples that will explained clearly theirs differences. Thanks and keep up the good work.
I really thank you for your kind feedback. I am going to make that video real soon because the difference between paraphrasing and citing is important and I think some younger students don't really see the difference.
As an English reading and writing tutor for first and second year college students- many of whom are in remedial classes- I find this video very helpful in explaining how to paraphrase rather than simply what paraphrasing is. I find that many students know what paraphrasing is, but they struggle to rephrase sentences and paragraphs into their own words. I might add that using strategies such as rearranging the order of a sentence, in addition to using synonyms is a great tactic.
+Guy Stieglitz I just checked the link and it works. However, to be honest, you don't need the site. It is just a tool to help in the early stages of learning. Once you know how to paraphrase, it all happens in your mind and you do it quickly and efficiently.
Hi!! I went to the page and put the original text and my own text, but I don't know if what a I wrote is correct or not. Can you explain me how to use the page in more detail?
Paraphrasing is the literary equivalent of trying to disarm an explosive device. Because if you don't do it properly, you could get written up for plagiarism. I know, it happened to me once.
Here is my paraphrase regarding New York City (sentence level changes): Nestled very close to the Atlantic Ocean, the city that never sleeps, New York, has a very wide variety of spectacular sights and attractions that allures not only those who live in the state, but also those from other states and also international visitors.
Thank you for sharing this! I will be able to use your video with my students because you are so thorough and well-paced while explaining. I am a middle school English teacher and never heard of the online paraphrasing tool. Very helpful for my young learners to have a way to check their paraphrasing work.
Yes, I agree. Paraphrasing is a skill, so in the very beginning taking a break may help, but once you internalize the skill through practice, you can manage on the test easily.
The pedagogy is so useful that it touched me deeply, because it taught me everything in the act of paraphrasing in terms of structure, synonymous, sentence, rewording. Thanks a lot 👍
I haven't heard about such an interesting option in writing programs. Thanks a lot for this knowledge, it is going to be extremely helpful in my future writing.
I am so glad I have come across this. I personally feel this is the only vlog that has simplified everything so well. Thank you so much for this .. I really don't understand why people have disliked this...... no one can break down Paraphrasing this well.
Thanks for asking. My focus on the video was to show the steps for paraprasing. However, I believe that I did mention that students would need to cite according to the rules of your institution. (APA, MLA, Chicago). Hope this helps. Cheers
+Guy Stieglitz thanks. I really wanted some help showing how to cite a paragraph that is paraphrased (a short paragraph, let's say 4 sentences). Like did I need to cite after each sentence or just at end or at start and end.... but I eventually found how to do this.
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+Muhammad Saddique Summary writing is simply capturing the main points of a text. The focus here is the MAIN points. The summary is usually shorter than the text that is being summarized because not all details make the summary. The summary should be in your own words. Here is something from OWL Perdue at owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/563/01/ Paraphrasing involves putting a passage from source material into your own words. A paraphrase must also be attributed to the original source. Paraphrased material is usually shorter than the original passage, taking a somewhat broader segment of the source and condensing it slightly. Summarizing involves putting the main idea(s) into your own words, including only the main point(s). Once again, it is necessary to attribute summarized ideas to the original source. Summaries are significantly shorter than the original and take a broad overview of the source material.
yes this will really help me!!...I do have a question though. I am writing a science essay soon. If say a fundamental part of the essay would be something like "garlic contains allin which gets metabolized into allicin via [add a long scientific explanation]" The thing is if I do have that long explanation, chances are if i paraphrase the works of 10 people I would pretty much be copying the works of another 10, but because it is such a fundamental explanation I am not so sure how to go about this...the school i go to uses turnmein to detect plagiarism and I am not sure of how to work around it here thank you for your help!!!
remember, if you think the information can't or should not be paraphrased, simply cite it according the the method you institution uses. For example, I use APA. So the ideas is to quote and cite. Often we paraphrase and cite, but sometimes we quote and cite. Does this help?
That's gonna take a lot of time if you have 5k words of assignments to do in a day... I looking some quick tools for my blog site. So that I can have maximum content with quality.
Ha ha. Hopefully your paraphrasing skill is at a high level by then. Paraphrasing is a skill like driving a car. At first, you have to think of every little thing, but after a while it just happens automatically. But, I guess you could close your eyes if you had to and think about being on a tropical beach -- just for a minute or so. :)
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Thanks, this is really helpful.
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Great video, helped out with my class :)
Great. Glad to hear it.
When i wrote a paraphrase and passed it to my proffessor he told me i summarized it.
Philip Javaa
What did you paraphrase?
thanks i really liked it
Thank you. I am glad to hear it.
I am really suprised that over 300 views and don't like this video. Myself I'll give big like.
thanks Mr Guy.
I think some people dislike, because they really like to dislike because clicking is so easy. For me a BIG LIKE, too.
Honestly, this is the kind of teaching techniques that students from various learning institutions need, it is very creative, educational, informative, interesting and entertaining as well. Guy Stieglitz, you have done an excellent job for making this wonderful instructional video and I give you 100% respect for that. I think you should also do another video that will teach students the differences between paraphrasing and plagiarism and give many examples that will explained clearly theirs differences. Thanks and keep up the good work.
I really thank you for your kind feedback. I am going to make that video real soon because the difference between paraphrasing and citing is important and I think some younger students don't really see the difference.
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Hello guys from 2025 watching this a night before exams🤣
if only i could go back to my elementary years, i could have mastered this by now
Excellent tutorial, to the point.. not like other videos which they talks about bulshits..
Thanks!
As an English reading and writing tutor for first and second year college students- many of whom are in remedial classes- I find this video very helpful in explaining how to paraphrase rather than simply what paraphrasing is. I find that many students know what paraphrasing is, but they struggle to rephrase sentences and paragraphs into their own words. I might add that using strategies such as rearranging the order of a sentence, in addition to using synonyms is a great tactic.
Yes I agree. Thanks.
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+Guy Stieglitz
I just checked the link and it works. However, to be honest, you don't need the site. It is just a tool to help in the early stages of learning. Once you know how to paraphrase, it all happens in your mind and you do it quickly and efficiently.
@@diveinlearning It did not work with given the link, but I went to its homepage and then I found it and worked it as well.
@@Aaron-ej7im I am glad that it worked out. It is interesting because I checked it before I sent it. Either way, I wish you great paraphrasing.
Wow, this is a great tool and very helpful video. thanks a lot.
Hi!! I went to the page and put the original text and my own text, but I don't know if what a I wrote is correct or not. Can you explain me how to use the page in more detail?
Paraphrasing is the literary equivalent of trying to disarm an explosive device. Because if you don't do it properly, you could get written up for plagiarism. I know, it happened to me once.
Great
Please post more videos. You teach so beautifully D:
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I will try!
Yay! Thankyou! and thank you for your response :)
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I will as soon as I have some time. If you have ideas for good content. let me know.
Guy Stieglitz If I think of anything, I will DEFINITELY let you know!
+JanetIsNumberOne
Thank you so much. I hope to but time for me is a real issue. I'll do my best.
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Here is my paraphrase regarding New York City (sentence level changes):
Nestled very close to the Atlantic Ocean, the city that never sleeps, New York, has a very wide variety of spectacular sights and attractions that allures not only those who live in the state, but also those from other states and also international visitors.
Nice effort!
That's much better than the original, which is repetitive, saying that NY is popular and people like to visit, which mean the same thing.
it wouldnt be so easy while doing it on scientific articles
@@pr7009 It is more of a challenge, but still very possible.
thank you very much
Thank You for the video it really helped me out.
Meresahkan
Thank you for sharing this! I will be able to use your video with my students because you are so thorough and well-paced while explaining. I am a middle school English teacher and never heard of the online paraphrasing tool. Very helpful for my young learners to have a way to check their paraphrasing work.
Jessica O'Brien
Thanks
Glad it helps!
March 31, 2021 and studying this
Thank you! This was extremely comprehensive and beneficial.
Thank you so much. It is a useful explanation! ❤️💕
The problem is that I cannot use the dictionary on the exam🙂😭😭😭
They want to test your vocabulary skills.
Tq
A big big thank you. It's been days since i needed help..and was searching for an accurate video explanation. Rly thankful. I needed that.
Great news.
You can change body with the word "system"
He could have changed slowly with gradually, also.
Thanks very much
I'm not sure I could take a break in my test tbh😂
Yes, I agree. Paraphrasing is a skill, so in the very beginning taking a break may help, but once you internalize the skill through practice, you can manage on the test easily.
same 😂😂😂 n i hv an exam today
thnks a lot...wonderful video
Your video is very helpful..Thank you so much Sir :)
You are welcome. Glad it helped.
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Kindly share the link of website for paraphrasing in comment box
still watch this in 2021?
The pedagogy is so useful that it touched me deeply, because it taught me everything in the act of paraphrasing in terms of structure, synonymous, sentence, rewording. Thanks a lot 👍
Awesome!
Thankyou so muchh
Who are in 2022
so clear, so useful...many thanks!
You are welcome:)
2021😶
Thanks
I haven't heard about such an interesting option in writing programs. Thanks a lot for this knowledge, it is going to be extremely helpful in my future writing.
i was going to fail on my test with out ur leason :D
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Very helpful
I am so glad I have come across this. I personally feel this is the only vlog that has simplified everything so well. Thank you so much for this .. I really don't understand why people have disliked this...... no one can break down Paraphrasing this well.
Thanks. I am glad it helped. Any questions let me know.
Me in2022 🤟
Thank you
One thing learner for sure it's not body it's bady in pronounciation 🤦🏻♀️😅❤️
Nice 👍
Thanks
you write and just changed the words. If in academic writing I do, this mean plagiarism
Really it was helpful thank you
Great news.
I like your style of teaching
That's awesome, thanks.
Why did you not cite your sources after each paraphrase? This will lead to plagarism still in an essay paper...
+Nikki Joseph
The goal is to show the format only
Thanks for asking. My focus on the video was to show the steps for paraprasing. However, I believe that I did mention that students would need to cite according to the rules of your institution. (APA, MLA, Chicago).
Hope this helps.
Cheers
+Guy Stieglitz thanks. I really wanted some help showing how to cite a paragraph that is paraphrased (a short paragraph, let's say 4 sentences). Like did I need to cite after each sentence or just at end or at start and end.... but I eventually found how to do this.
Glad to hear you got what you needed.
:)
Nikki Joseph how did you do it? I'm stuck on how to cite a paraphrased paragraph and I have no idea how to go about it.
Enjoyed your explanation. Great!
Thank you so much . this really helps me
Reading out loud what is written is a waste of time - we read much faster than the spoken word.
Very informative 👍🏻
Your video is so informative , thank you .
Awesome😊... Thank you so much😇❤
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Thank you sir.. it really help me alot
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Glad it helped.
Thanks a lot sir 🤠
You are welcome
I always struggle with paraphrase because of my teachers didn't teach me how to do properly.
Hope the video helped.
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Omg1 I am happy to run across this video. i had two anxiety attacks for writing papers. You explain so clearly. Thank you so much!
you're welcome...enjoy your studies
Hope this would help me to do my assignment in research.
Grd 7 here
Paraphrasing is very important. For sure.
Thank you find it so helpful
Who else watching this video in 2021
Thank you, this helps with my assignment.
Wow it's too easy to understand!
Very educative
Glad to hear it:)
Can you upload more videos about how to write the perfect research papers😓?
Tell me about what concerns you and I will try.
💜thank you
You are welcome.
it's very helpful...thanks alot
It's very easy way, thank you
todo bien pero, en español porfavor
Could you tell me where can i found the steps for summary writing?
Thanks
+Muhammad Saddique
Summary writing is simply capturing the main points of a text. The focus here is the MAIN points. The summary is usually shorter than the text that is being summarized because not all details make the summary. The summary should be in your own words.
Here is something from OWL Perdue at owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/563/01/
Paraphrasing involves putting a passage from source material into your own words. A paraphrase must also be attributed to the original source. Paraphrased material is usually shorter than the original passage, taking a somewhat broader segment of the source and condensing it slightly.
Summarizing involves putting the main idea(s) into your own words, including only the main point(s). Once again, it is necessary to attribute summarized ideas to the original source. Summaries are significantly shorter than the original and take a broad overview of the source material.
Can you please send a link to hand man?
Good teaching friend✍️
Very useful, thank you!
yes this will really help me!!...I do have a question though. I am writing a science essay soon. If say a fundamental part of the essay would be something like
"garlic contains allin which gets metabolized into allicin via [add a long scientific explanation]" The thing is if I do have that long explanation, chances are if i paraphrase the works of 10 people I would pretty much be copying the works of another 10, but because it is such a fundamental explanation I am not so sure how to go about this...the school i go to uses turnmein to detect plagiarism and I am not sure of how to work around it here
thank you for your help!!!
remember, if you think the information can't or should not be paraphrased, simply cite it according the the method you institution uses. For example, I use APA. So the ideas is to quote and cite. Often we paraphrase and cite, but sometimes we quote and cite. Does this help?
Guy Stieglitz yes thanks!!
2020
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that page doesn^t work
You teach it very clear and easy to understand sir! Give a big like to you sir!😀
Thanks
I am glad it helped 😎
Thank you so much 🙏
I'm here watching this video to understand paraphrasing🤭
Did it work?
Thank you. Please upload more videos.
Thank you.
You’re fucking good
Thanks 🙏🏻.
awesome!
That's gonna take a lot of time if you have 5k words of assignments to do in a day... I looking some quick tools for my blog site. So that I can have maximum content with quality.
Sir the link you shared is not working..🤔🤔🤔
I will check it tomorrow...
go away take a break. where should i go in my exam LOL
Ha ha. Hopefully your paraphrasing skill is at a high level by then. Paraphrasing is a skill like driving a car. At first, you have to think of every little thing, but after a while it just happens automatically. But, I guess you could close your eyes if you had to and think about being on a tropical beach -- just for a minute or so. :)
@@diveinlearning yes I hope so 😊
ikr! thats so true! u cant go anywhere. Like wth do they mean?? Right?
Can you make video for edit writing please.
I am not sure exactly what you mean by 'edit video'
Cant take a break in exam🙂
But helped me alot...😇
It's usefull for ITU students. ING112 selamlar.
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this was very good video and much useful, but the tool link isn't working ???
I slowly understand this. Please make more video of this. I am studying at the university and most of my assignments are paraphrasing
Wonderful explanation
Thanks!