Stalled Trek: The City on the Edge of Foreclosure (Full Movie)

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  • Опубліковано 27 лис 2024

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  • @Floydrush-zx9wz
    @Floydrush-zx9wz Рік тому +239

    12:17 "You cannot have your fate, and EDITH too"
    What a line, bravo script writer, bravo 👌

    • @isomeme
      @isomeme Рік тому +13

      Yeah, that was some incredible writing, and ludicrously funny. 😂

    • @OhmyPeteWhole
      @OhmyPeteWhole Рік тому

      It's from Great Space Coaster. ua-cam.com/video/ceHbkjKQ3vg/v-deo.html

    • @cpuuk
      @cpuuk Рік тому +8

      That was a rather good line.

    • @waltwhite2534
      @waltwhite2534 Рік тому +6

      Pausing the video here - don't know how they'll top that one!

    • @jv-lk7bc
      @jv-lk7bc 11 місяців тому +2

      Harlan will NOT forgive you .. but you're in good company ;)

  • @protorhinocerator142
    @protorhinocerator142 Рік тому +81

    I thought the McCoy/McGruff impersonation when he said, "Assassins! Murderers!" was spot-on.

    • @SteveKluver
      @SteveKluver Рік тому +7

      I loved the: "Politicians" part best! 😊

    • @flagg85
      @flagg85 Рік тому +4

      Telemarketers!!!

    • @gregshock
      @gregshock Рік тому +1

      You mean, “Mr Spott” on.

    • @Robert08010
      @Robert08010 4 місяці тому

      And the spots were on him too!

  • @trotbelatrot3282
    @trotbelatrot3282 Рік тому +98

    Kirk saying "You had an adopted sister that started the war with the klingons!" while viewing history thru Guardian. Hysterical!

    • @scotth6814
      @scotth6814 Рік тому +5

      A nice homage.

    • @paulcochran1721
      @paulcochran1721 Рік тому +5

      Hopefully they correct that timeline also!

    • @seanryan3020
      @seanryan3020 Рік тому +1

      I missed the reference the first time I read this comment and in the video. Caught it when I saw the comment while looking for another one!

    • @bentonmarcum8924
      @bentonmarcum8924 6 місяців тому +1

      Her name was Wadda B'Itch

  • @TheNeonParadox
    @TheNeonParadox Рік тому +161

    The little details in this make it absolutely fkn superb. The red-shirt transporting into the rock popped me so hard. 😂😂 How does this not have more views?

    • @ralphwiggum3134
      @ralphwiggum3134 Рік тому +9

      I like how they did the glow around the woman when we first see her and the boxes behind the Spock character that let you know he was behind the attempts to kill her.

    • @powerbadpowerbad
      @powerbadpowerbad Рік тому +3

      Man,I laughed out loud at that sight gag !!! TOO-funny. LOL.

    • @Chilli_Heelers_Doula
      @Chilli_Heelers_Doula Рік тому +9

      Yes, the TARDIS in the background when they first reach New York was dang funny!

    • @harvey3rdman464
      @harvey3rdman464 Рік тому +2

      I noticed that too. Also the sign for "Rottenberry's Fresh Fruit" after Krok and Scott land in the city. The apologies at the end, too. I agree; superb.

    • @arcanondrum6543
      @arcanondrum6543 Рік тому +3

      Red Shirt (Rock) guy is Ensign Bill's son. And you would have to remember that from an early, early Family Guy episode. This -> 2:39 is the Wilhelm Scream, BTW.

  • @juliemarshall7458
    @juliemarshall7458 Рік тому +5

    The poster on the wall behind Krok and Spott that says "Rottenberry" gave me a reason to live. 😁

  • @michaelflowers5712
    @michaelflowers5712 Рік тому +5

    " guess You won't be needing that electric razor"-that was great!

  • @ThatTieDyeGuy
    @ThatTieDyeGuy Рік тому +34

    I laughed, I cried, I hurled. PLEASE MAKE MORE THESE. The Spock and McCoy voices were perfect :D

  • @williamschlosser77
    @williamschlosser77 Рік тому +21

    Totally lost it at"...you cannot have your fate and Edith too." 😂😂😂

  • @BasementBerean
    @BasementBerean Рік тому +147

    This is fantastic! I hope this gets shown at Star Trek conventions, and that somehow you are compensated for all the work this must have taken

  • @PeBoVision
    @PeBoVision Рік тому +68

    Love how an original story element is brought in (the giant statues), and then not used. Clever.
    There is just so much passion on display here, that I can't come up with anything better than 'WOW'.
    Kudos and sincere admiration to everyone involved.

    • @kellyq21
      @kellyq21 Рік тому

      Explain.

    • @PeBoVision
      @PeBoVision Рік тому +8

      @kellyq21 the original Harlan Ellison story includes giant statues...they spoke - not the gateway as in the show....irlt was decided that they were too pricey to gilm, and so we're never shown, and the gateway spoke instead.

    • @grindelston5968
      @grindelston5968 Рік тому +2

      Ohhh, thank you for explaining that!
      Haha, very clever Easter egg!

    • @PeBoVision
      @PeBoVision Рік тому +1

      @@grindelston5968 Too bad when Discovery has the opportunity to introduce the ancient giant statues in Guardian of Forever (they had the CGI and budget to pull it off), they too chose to ignore Ellison, and went with "Carl" instead.
      Just another reaosn to feel "burned" by Discovery. (but it still does Roddenberry better than Foundation does Azimov - even if only ever so slightly)

  • @stevejordan7275
    @stevejordan7275 Рік тому +11

    Only someone who truly loved the original could possibly do this to it.
    I hope you're as proud of this as you should be; only Mad Magazine could have come close.

  • @thebigdog2295
    @thebigdog2295 Рік тому +8

    I think Harlan Ellison would have loved this. He wrote some books that could have been considered comedy. This was fantastic. Especially Mr. Spott's eyebrows. 😅😂🤣

  • @timepoet77
    @timepoet77 Рік тому +19

    If Harlan Ellison were here and he saw this, he'd be laughing with victorious delight.

  • @chrisperrien7055
    @chrisperrien7055 Рік тому +5

    "He's a briquet , Jam" 😎
    The main crew not even noticing the red-shirt dying immediately is classic Trek.
    The little fight/action choreography was excellent
    "Edith Keester" subtle risque
    the "In Search of" cut was spot on too.

  • @MrNobodysSanctuary
    @MrNobodysSanctuary Рік тому +12

    Set phasers on funny, you stunned me with this parody! 🖖

  • @CalverWeems
    @CalverWeems Рік тому +6

    Complete with two, count 'em, two Wilhelm screams! Genius!!

  • @ChristinaMoore79
    @ChristinaMoore79 Рік тому +60

    Love the parody puppets! Great re-telling of this classic Trek episode.

    • @KutWrite
      @KutWrite Рік тому +2

      Yes. What a paradox: An animated puppet.

  • @eddiechoir
    @eddiechoir Рік тому +30

    absolutely superb. Top notch score. Gets close to Star Trek IV without ever quoting it.

  • @lechatbotte.
    @lechatbotte. Рік тому +80

    Absolutely terrific and hilarious. I was laughing so hard. Well done bravo 👏🏻

    • @daveroche6522
      @daveroche6522 Рік тому +2

      "Captain, this appears to be yet another example of the excrescence of human illogic........".

    • @DoctorDuckie1964
      @DoctorDuckie1964 Рік тому +1

      AND...drumroll please! Bette White made Star Trek!❤❤❤❤🎉😂

    • @tonyb6007
      @tonyb6007 Рік тому +2

      The fact that Mr. Spott was wearing his cap as a mask too funny..

  • @antonnym214
    @antonnym214 4 місяці тому +3

    Outstanding. I wrote a book about the original series, and City was my favorite episode.

  • @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd
    @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd Рік тому +29

    Now *this* is Trek!! I love all the call-backs to Harlan Ellison’s original script. You did this episode proud! Subscribed, liked, and sharing! 🖖 ❤😂

    • @milascave2
      @milascave2 Рік тому

      Huh. I've read Ellison, and I have met Ellison, but I did not know that he wrote Star Trek scripts.

  • @NathanTarantlawriter
    @NathanTarantlawriter Рік тому +9

    Spocks ears are perfect.

  • @Bob-qk2zg
    @Bob-qk2zg Рік тому +17

    The red shirt ensign who teleported into the rock got me! 🤣♥️👍

    • @seanryan3020
      @seanryan3020 Рік тому +2

      I've always wanted to see that happen in the show!

    • @Robert08010
      @Robert08010 6 місяців тому +1

      There were lots of great passover eggs tucked away. Did you notice the star wars and lost in space intros up on screens on the bridge?

    • @gorillaau
      @gorillaau 4 місяці тому

      I have just gotten to that part. Hilarious! Especially with the other red shirt deciding no to say anything.

    • @jayrenner211
      @jayrenner211 4 місяці тому

      I think Battlestar Galactia did it first, but with an entire Raider.

  • @tomkerruish2982
    @tomkerruish2982 Рік тому +13

    I was quite impressed by the references to the original script. Then you threw in "In Search Of"? Magnificent!

  • @buzzinpoa
    @buzzinpoa Рік тому +38

    Funny, and very clever...!! Very well done and written...!! A pleasure to watch...!! Congratulations!! I'll share it...!!

  • @johnmarx3919
    @johnmarx3919 Рік тому +30

    Love that message to Harlan at the end - he HATED what they did 2 his episode and would've loved someone taking the piss out of it like this!!!

    • @stevenjones6780
      @stevenjones6780 Рік тому +3

      I never quite understood that, it's such a beloved episode. After all, this story concept was directly related or lifted from Ray Bradbury's short story 'ASound of Thunder'- definitely a concept worth retelling...

    • @isomeme
      @isomeme Рік тому +5

      ​@@stevenjones6780, Ellison's version was (not surprisingly) much darker. Just for example the drug that set the whole plot in motion was being smuggled by a crew member. What better job to transport illegal drugs between planets, right? Roddenberry vetoed that idea; I think it would have been a much better story element. All the changes to Ellison's original story were similar.

    • @joangordoneieio
      @joangordoneieio Рік тому +4

      Exactly! Harlan has always been my Spirit Animal. Im imagining what hed be saying about AI ( I Have No Mouth & I Must Scream!)

    • @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd
      @afriendlyfaceinthecrowd Рік тому +2

      ​@@joangordoneieioHarlan definitely was prescient about AI's dangers, even if he didn't forsee all the "countries as beautiful women" shorts.

  • @Strawberry_Fire
    @Strawberry_Fire Рік тому +71

    Honestly this has been the best parody I've seen! And it's so cool! I'm so happy that youtube recommended it to me.This definitely made my day, your effort in sharing this episode is greatly appreciated. ✨️🖖💙

  • @sandraqureshi9333
    @sandraqureshi9333 Рік тому +4

    I love the way you put, Dr Who's TARDIS in the background for a second! So funny 🤣

  • @anthonylowder6687
    @anthonylowder6687 Рік тому +2

    I absolutely lost it when they did the reference to ‘In Search Of’!🤣🤣

  • @tunnsie
    @tunnsie 4 місяці тому +1

    I haven’t belly laughed this much in a long time. I cracked up when I noticed the red shirt arm sticking out of the rock after beaming down. Bravo, bravo. Wonderful writing!

  • @Justiciar1284
    @Justiciar1284 Рік тому +32

    Great writing! Classic parody! Thank you!

  • @762MusicFan
    @762MusicFan 2 місяці тому +1

    As a life long Trekkie, I approve! Loved all the little inside jokes & Easter eggs. Well done!

  • @aerospike00
    @aerospike00 Рік тому +6

    The "In Search Of..." reference was AWESOME! I watched that show as a kid, and it often scared the daylights out of me! 😂

  • @sandraqureshi9333
    @sandraqureshi9333 Рік тому +14

    The city on the edge of forever is one of my favorite original series episodes. Really funny!😂 I couldn't stop laughing really great will share!

  • @Gunnberg85
    @Gunnberg85 4 місяці тому +1

    It's been a year, but the algorithm finally got around to sending me this gem.
    Simply delightful!
    Thank you for making this!

  • @rodimuspryme1267
    @rodimuspryme1267 Рік тому +8

    “You cannot have your fate, and Edith too”. 🤣🤣

  • @johnhamm5361
    @johnhamm5361 Рік тому +16

    I hate to use this phrase but OMG that was hilariously cheesy. Kudos to the folks that put this together, I need more laughs like this in my life. Thanks again

  • @voyagesfanfilm
    @voyagesfanfilm Рік тому +16

    Haha! That was great - love all the little easter eggs too! :D

  • @Deborita777
    @Deborita777 Рік тому +6

    "Murderers! Politicians!" Lmaooo!
    You gotta do more of these! This parody of ST:ToS is brilliant.
    The classic comedic "triple" is utilized wonderfully!

  • @CailenCambeul
    @CailenCambeul Рік тому +7

    "Telemarketers!" This is as good as one of the Sex Trek episodes with Randy Spears as Captain Quirk. Liked and Subscribed.

  • @0MetallicaManX0
    @0MetallicaManX0 Рік тому +4

    FREAKEN GENIUS! I need more of this!

  • @mcparadise97
    @mcparadise97 Рік тому +8

    I can’t stop laughing 😭🤣 what the hell…I love it! 😍 We need more Star Trek TOS spoofs, parodies and reboots out there like this, because this is freakin golden. ✨

  • @pete4258
    @pete4258 Рік тому +3

    Spott's knit cap just had me dying. 😂😂😂

  • @Shindai
    @Shindai Рік тому +2

    The way the alternate future comes around in this is just impeccable xD

  • @FabricFool
    @FabricFool Рік тому +4

    I’d give an extra thumbs-up for the “fate and Edith too” joke alone.
    Genius!!

  • @stevesmith7839
    @stevesmith7839 Рік тому +2

    THANK YOU for going up side down. In the Star Trek universe space ships are always upright even though there is no such thing.

  • @fr57ujf
    @fr57ujf Рік тому +4

    You cannot have your fate and Edith too. Wonderful.

  • @thelosthippie1969
    @thelosthippie1969 Рік тому +7

    Bravo! Love the shout out to Harlan Ellison.

  • @ananominity
    @ananominity Рік тому +6

    I'm flabbergasted that I never knew about this series you've done!
    Every one of them is so detailed I can't imagine the time put into them.
    Great job with the voices!

  • @chrischristel6680
    @chrischristel6680 2 місяці тому +1

    An absolute masterpiece! Funny, creative, well done!!

  • @smokeynedith3555
    @smokeynedith3555 Рік тому +5

    I remember this episode with Joan Collins. Well done.

  • @RobertGraziose
    @RobertGraziose 2 місяці тому +1

    A very humorous parody of my favorite episode. Do more these are great.

  • @kjamison5951
    @kjamison5951 Рік тому +5

    The great tragedy is only 57K views at this stage!
    Liked, loved and subscribed.
    More please!
    Not only did you parody a classic, iconic episode of original Trek, the tiny details, visual gags and more are brilliantly conceived.

  • @Francois424
    @Francois424 Рік тому +7

    This was awesome ! Thanks for making it.

  • @feenix219
    @feenix219 Рік тому +4

    I love that it cuts so deep, like elements of Ellison's original script being present in the distance, but opting to look at the space donut instead.

  • @marklafrance8141
    @marklafrance8141 Рік тому +6

    Outstanding! Hilarious! Had to keep backing it up because of laughter interrupting the next joke! Way too funny! I absolutely love this! BRILLIANT! The end credits totally Awesome!...👍👍👍👍👍 Bravo!

  • @gilbertcouillard6313
    @gilbertcouillard6313 3 місяці тому +1

    Mr. Spott: "Conjecture...she's a kook."
    TOO FUNNY!

  • @mastercheif117ize
    @mastercheif117ize Рік тому +8

    I hope he makes more episodes! Hilarious!!

  • @mrquicky
    @mrquicky Рік тому +7

    I loved it more than anything put out by the studios in the past several years.

  • @_JimS
    @_JimS Рік тому +1

    Love the running gags with the Starship elevator.

  • @Terminus_El_Camino
    @Terminus_El_Camino Рік тому +13

    That was fantastic. I *almost* didn't click on it. Never seen this channel before. I hope there's more.

    • @OldTrekkie23
      @OldTrekkie23 Рік тому

      STALLED TREK: AXED WEE ARE. Send up the lawsuit against Star Trek: Axanar

    • @seanryan3020
      @seanryan3020 Рік тому +1

      I almost didn't either! So glad I did! I almost died laughing!

  • @bupdaddy1
    @bupdaddy1 Рік тому +1

    "That's interesting, Spock, but let's go look at this Stone Doughnut instead." LOL😆

  • @charliebsexcitinglifeplayl3046

    Absolutely Brilliant and funny! Make more!

  • @Doodles68
    @Doodles68 Рік тому +6

    As puppeteer/ventriloquist, I applaud your puppetry skills! The lip synch and bottom jaw only movement are very impressive. Keep it up!

    • @MarkLargent
      @MarkLargent  Рік тому +3

      Thanks, but I have to confess that all the puppets are computer generated, so I'm animating them instead of puppeteering them. In fact, I built in a little upper jaw movement just so it doesn't seem too mechanical. :-)

    • @spuds6423
      @spuds6423 Рік тому +1

      ​@@MarkLargentObviously your computer went to the "William Shatner School of OverActing"!!!😂😂😂

    • @grindelston5968
      @grindelston5968 Рік тому +1

      @Doodles68
      That is a dying art , my friend - thank you for keeping the old skills alive.
      There's no reason why traditional puppetry and computer modelling can't both exist today. Both require great talent.

  • @DistracticusPrime
    @DistracticusPrime Рік тому +7

    Wonderful! So many perfect details show your love and joy for good writing.

  • @daveroche6522
    @daveroche6522 Рік тому +27

    Childish? Infantile? Puerile? Hell yeah - haven't laughed this long 'n loud for ages - thank you & more please.....

  • @derrickpatten7252
    @derrickpatten7252 Рік тому +9

    "Then I stepped into a BEAR TRAP that was placed under Edith's welcome mat."
    "Clearly an amazing coincidence." As He says this We can see boxes on the table behind Him. One is marked "ACME Bear Trap", the other "Happy Funtime Roller Skates"😂

  • @pex_the_unalivedrunk6785
    @pex_the_unalivedrunk6785 Рік тому +3

    Just about 2-and-a-half minutes into this...and I'm totally hooked! Once the Doctor starts ranting about "murderers, assassins, telemarketers", I knew this was going to be golden. (Oh, My) It makes all my planned parodies about every time the War Pigeons are mentioned, look like amateur satire material. (Coo-Coo!) 🐦

  • @elroma7712
    @elroma7712 Рік тому +4

    Holy shit, it's like the parodies my brother and I used to make back when we were kids but with StarWars instead

  • @nobillismccaw7450
    @nobillismccaw7450 Рік тому +5

    This is very well done. Thank you kindly for your art.

  • @ladymyst8809
    @ladymyst8809 Рік тому +24

    This has made my day Fantastic!!!! I love these and today I get to watch a new one Awesome!! Thank you for creating this wonderful movie❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣❣

  • @billwrascal8147
    @billwrascal8147 Рік тому +6

    Clearly the Burroughs computer did all the hard work, deserves top billing. :)

    • @Roboprogs
      @Roboprogs Рік тому

      Missed opportunity to say “Hello, computer?!?” to the Fakentosh on the bench, though.

  • @RobertScott1952
    @RobertScott1952 Рік тому +1

    That was a gas! Thanks. So many inside jokes to see. I loved it.

  • @mysterymac38
    @mysterymac38 Рік тому +4

    Well done sir. From start to the very end. Loved the photo's in the end credits!

  • @AudiophileStooge
    @AudiophileStooge Рік тому +5

    Thanks for this. As a TOS fan, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

  • @Allegheny500
    @Allegheny500 Рік тому +8

    Amazeballs, keep em coming! I laughed my (bleep) off!

  • @lisanidog8178
    @lisanidog8178 Рік тому +3

    Edith Keeler fascinated me how she knew what the future held. A true seer. And how one little thing changed history up until it was corrected. Quite a thought provoking episode.

  • @ivanstanoffski1444
    @ivanstanoffski1444 Рік тому +5

    Space with rooms to rent 😂😂😂😂 what a punchline cant stop laughing. 😅😅😅😅😅

  • @chrisschembari2486
    @chrisschembari2486 Рік тому +11

    Fantastic work here. Thank you very much for this. I love so many of the gags in this, but I especially love how Spott appears to try to right the time line by "killing the Keester" himself. (Allegedly.) Quite a character development for the devil-faced science officer! 😂

    • @eddieboggs8306
      @eddieboggs8306 Рік тому

      Spock always made me think he was the reputation of Satan .

    • @chrisschembari2486
      @chrisschembari2486 Рік тому

      @@eddieboggs8306 yeah, it even caused trouble for the show when Gene was still trying to get it off the ground. Some TV executives didn't want to put the show on the air because of Spock looking somewhat devilish.

  • @angiehill5884
    @angiehill5884 Рік тому +1

    I LOVE how they put "In Search of..." in the episode!! 💜 This is AWESOME!!

  • @carlpeters8690
    @carlpeters8690 Рік тому +3

    Even the end credits are great. Well done!

  • @chrisgavin3330
    @chrisgavin3330 Рік тому +2

    I had heard this production was really good, but was not ready for THIS! Wow! Well done to the obviously very talented team👌✔👍
    Thanks!!

  • @MoonjumperReviews
    @MoonjumperReviews Рік тому +9

    Hilarious and wonderful production value! Congratulations and well done!

  • @fernandogarajalde4066
    @fernandogarajalde4066 Рік тому +4

    Ghost of Harlan Ellison is thinking of coming back to sue them, but he can’t get in touch with the Guardian of Forever. 😆

  • @dalebronniman9060
    @dalebronniman9060 Рік тому +1

    I watched every episode as it originally aired and it's still by far the best of the Star Trek series.

  • @DIREWOLFx75
    @DIREWOLFx75 Рік тому +2

    Great parody.
    This series is now competing with Star Wreck, the Pirkinning as my favorite Star trek parody.

  • @bernardocoto8519
    @bernardocoto8519 Рік тому +1

    Have been re-watching the original series lately, and now my wife (who has never even heard of it) got hooked on it out of the blue. Loved this short was amazing, it's a perfect parody! The puppets only make it better.

  • @n0jy
    @n0jy Рік тому +1

    Bravo! Bravo! What more can I say. Thank you!

  • @DarkStar-wu9nq
    @DarkStar-wu9nq Рік тому +5

    These are just superb and I am addicted now !!
    I would love you to be financed and produced all the series and films
    The film would be amazing !

  • @stingray2001
    @stingray2001 Рік тому +3

    And this is my friend...Twinkle Toes Mcgurk. 😂🤣

  • @loafalot35
    @loafalot35 Рік тому +8

    Dude, this was awesome, funny as hell. Loved it. Make more.

  • @bethwaller1789
    @bethwaller1789 Рік тому +1

    Sulu's "Oh, my!" cracked me up.

  • @lesyankee6129
    @lesyankee6129 Рік тому +9

    This is hilarious! 🤣 Excellent! Bravo! More please! 🖖

  • @andrewmurray1550
    @andrewmurray1550 Рік тому +2

    love the "Time Tunnel" promo.

  • @Ryanstuff
    @Ryanstuff Рік тому +1

    I didn't know what to expect but this was fantastic!

  • @jeffreyz8030
    @jeffreyz8030 Рік тому +3

    This was wonderful. Thank you.

  • @Finarphin
    @Finarphin Рік тому +8

    Good job. Looks like a lot of work. I'm making a puppet movie of Macbeth (with Barbies), and I don't know if I'll ever finish it. Nice work.

    • @MarkLargent
      @MarkLargent  Рік тому +3

      Thanks! Don't give up. It took me three years to finish this one.

    • @grindelston5968
      @grindelston5968 Рік тому

      If CBS had any sense they would hire you and your team straight away!

  • @Slatsovrspeed
    @Slatsovrspeed Місяць тому +1

    This is genius level satire and entertainment!

  • @i-a-g-r-e-e-----f-----jo--b
    @i-a-g-r-e-e-----f-----jo--b Рік тому +1

    Great video, I am very entertained, thanks! @2:41 Wilhelm scream too!

  • @stevenpresement2739
    @stevenpresement2739 Рік тому +5

    Well, this was truly outstanding. Right down to the end credits.