i checked out your song, the ghost of a soldier,, and you are absolutely talented. you deserve more recognition. you’re pretty, you have a nice voice, and you play very well
i love how your voice is real. it sounds like fresh or relaxed in a way. it’s not amazingly unique, but it’s like rainy air, you know? i loved the ghost of a soldier, but if you want some advice for songwriting (not that i could ever do it myself) usually it hits a bit deeper if the meaning isn’t literal and it can be interpreted by other people differently. think of mitski with “i bet on loosing dogs” and “first love/late spring.” like, yeah, “pink in the night” and “carry me out” are great and i really love them, but when there’s more room for interpretation more people can relate to it depending on what they see/hear. so, for example, instead of saying “i love you” in a song lyric (not like the weight of it isn’t extremely heavy by itself/already), you could say something like “my eyes hurt when they’re not on you” or “i want to stand on the ground you stood and breathe the air that you breathe.” of course, it can vary with what tense you’re using but you get the idea. it’s the notion that you couldn’t live without them in your presence, that without them you would have no purpose nor drive. it’s extremely unrealistic but it’s romantic and what people *want* to see/hear. of course, this is all just a suggestion so take it with a grain of salt :)
@@paigemus1chere are some based off of your lyrics, I tried! :D - waiting for a text - half asleep - what happened to us - tired of chasing after you - miss you I can think of more if you need!
claiming the "i knew paige before she was famous" ticket
same lol
IT'S MINE
Same hereeeeee!!!!
i checked out your song, the ghost of a soldier,, and you are absolutely talented. you deserve more recognition. you’re pretty, you have a nice voice, and you play very well
ahhh thank u so much!!
@@paigemus1c you’re welcome! 💗
i love how your voice is real. it sounds like fresh or relaxed in a way. it’s not amazingly unique, but it’s like rainy air, you know?
i loved the ghost of a soldier, but if you want some advice for songwriting (not that i could ever do it myself) usually it hits a bit deeper if the meaning isn’t literal and it can be interpreted by other people differently. think of mitski with “i bet on loosing dogs” and “first love/late spring.”
like, yeah, “pink in the night” and “carry me out” are great and i really love them, but when there’s more room for interpretation more people can relate to it depending on what they see/hear.
so, for example, instead of saying “i love you” in a song lyric (not like the weight of it isn’t extremely heavy by itself/already), you could say something like “my eyes hurt when they’re not on you” or “i want to stand on the ground you stood and breathe the air that you breathe.” of course, it can vary with what tense you’re using but you get the idea. it’s the notion that you couldn’t live without them in your presence, that without them you would have no purpose nor drive. it’s extremely unrealistic but it’s romantic and what people *want* to see/hear.
of course, this is all just a suggestion so take it with a grain of salt :)
tbh you’ve inspired me to start writing a little bit more besides just like books.
:0 THANK U FOR THE ADVICE because i'm trying to get good at my lyrics!! thank u so much AHHH
Hey this song is good , Two thumbs up 👍👍
awesome
Your voice is so unique
❤❤❤
OMGG UR AMAZINGGGGG
your voice is absolutely ethereal
as are u
NGL THIS GIVES ME GOOSEBUMPS
thank u so much :D
Lots of love🎉❤❤
i think you'd like to know that your music is arrived in Italy, sei sulla giusta strada, continua a percorrerla!
Amazing!! ❤❤
thank u!!
Pls put this on Spotify 🙏🙏🙏🙏
IM SO PROUD OF MY POOKIE ❤❤❤🎉🎉🎉🎉
love u
Nice
Your voice is good
thank you :D
girl you nailed this cover (☆▽☆)
ur really pretty :))
thank u
YES PAIGE
Ur good
thank you!!
i love your new song 🫠💕 do you need name ideas? or would you prefer to name it yourself?
:0 thank u so much! name ideas please!!
@@paigemus1c :D yw! I’ll give you some soon!
@@paigemus1chere are some based off of your lyrics, I tried! :D
- waiting for a text
- half asleep
- what happened to us
- tired of chasing after you
- miss you
I can think of more if you need!
@@cakey.20 omg half asleep would be so good how did i not see that tysm
@@paigemus1c yw! any time 💖