Awesome stuff man! love to see dishonoured still being played and uploaded :) I’m gonna drop some constructive criticism here now and I hope it doesn’t come across as rude. 1. Your Commentary: Very entertaining , can’t fault it. However you could be speaking a little clearer, it’s hard to make out what you’re saying here and there. Try to speak a little slower and enunciate your words a little clearer. Also as a general rule, background tracks shouldn’t be the same volume as commentary, 1/3 the volume is what I usually go with when working with media. 2. Video structure: Try to split what you’re doing into segments, maybe a title screen with the mission name or just a relevant joke or comment “I was not excited for this next one etc”. It just gives it more structure and helps the viewer stay oriented. All that aside, keep doing what you’re doing and don’t let anybody put you down Sending love and good vibes 🤌
Thanks so much for watching and for the comments. I am still trying to figure out the style and form of editing so the criticism is always appreciated. I am sorry about the voiceover, I am aware I have to work on my presenter voice but I was not aware of the music being as loud as you are saying. I don't know if I just didn't realize or if it occurred by accident before rendering but I will do better going forward. I am currently working on another challenge project but I like the suggestion and will look into dying light and see if I can add anything to the challenge scene. I don't want to just repeat what everyone else has already done.
@@smith-well I totally get you there, do whatever project catches your interest and makes you happy. Also Don’t be sorry! It’s all good :) In time you’ll gain the confidence in your voice and yourself as a creator. You’re only starting out and you’re doing an awesome job, I love seeing new content creators put themselves out there. I’m one myself this is just an alt. Content creators gotta help other creators as much as possible because *oh my god* there’s so much hate and negativity Sending love and good vibes once again my friend, keep up the good work.
I like your commentary and the concept, keep it up! But the footage is very sped-up in some sections where mouse movement is fast and switched to normal speed for slow sections, pick a middle-ground and stay consistent.
Thank you, I appreciate the criticism and will try to do better going forward. It was only so inconsistent because I wanted to be able to convey the general purpose of the clip but be concise and fit the script. It was hard especially since Dishonored is such a slow paced game when playing stealthily but going forward I will avoid doing it
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Awesome stuff man! love to see dishonoured still being played and uploaded :)
I’m gonna drop some constructive criticism here now and I hope it doesn’t come across as rude.
1. Your Commentary: Very entertaining , can’t fault it. However you could be speaking a little clearer, it’s hard to make out what you’re saying here and there. Try to speak a little slower and enunciate your words a little clearer.
Also as a general rule, background tracks shouldn’t be the same volume as commentary, 1/3 the volume is what I usually go with when working with media.
2. Video structure: Try to split what you’re doing into segments, maybe a title screen with the mission name or just a relevant joke or comment “I was not excited for this next one etc”. It just gives it more structure and helps the viewer stay oriented.
All that aside, keep doing what you’re doing and don’t let anybody put you down
Sending love and good vibes 🤌
Oh dude btw dying light is having a massive revival, a challenge run with that might get some pretty good numbers with algorithm
Thanks so much for watching and for the comments. I am still trying to figure out the style and form of editing so the criticism is always appreciated. I am sorry about the voiceover, I am aware I have to work on my presenter voice but I was not aware of the music being as loud as you are saying. I don't know if I just didn't realize or if it occurred by accident before rendering but I will do better going forward. I am currently working on another challenge project but I like the suggestion and will look into dying light and see if I can add anything to the challenge scene. I don't want to just repeat what everyone else has already done.
@@smith-well I totally get you there, do whatever project catches your interest and makes you happy.
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Don’t be sorry! It’s all good :) In time you’ll gain the confidence in your voice and yourself as a creator. You’re only starting out and you’re doing an awesome job, I love seeing new content creators put themselves out there.
I’m one myself this is just an alt. Content creators gotta help other creators as much as possible because *oh my god* there’s so much hate and negativity
Sending love and good vibes once again my friend, keep up the good work.
I like your commentary and the concept, keep it up! But the footage is very sped-up in some sections where mouse movement is fast and switched to normal speed for slow sections, pick a middle-ground and stay consistent.
Thank you, I appreciate the criticism and will try to do better going forward. It was only so inconsistent because I wanted to be able to convey the general purpose of the clip but be concise and fit the script. It was hard especially since Dishonored is such a slow paced game when playing stealthily but going forward I will avoid doing it
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