"Bruise" - A Slam Poem

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  • Опубліковано 26 сер 2024
  • Levi Todd performs "Bruise", a slam poem about the dangers of aggressive masculinity. Video recorded and edited by Jeff Spott and Amy Frye. Read more of Levi's work at www.levitodd.com

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  • @animallover232001
    @animallover232001 6 років тому +277

    um yes yes yes, at first i wasn't really into the poem but half way through i was in love

    • @dlcolwell120
      @dlcolwell120 5 років тому +3

      But poems are not just words that sound the same and have rhythm there words that come from someone in pain or that needs a escape.........that is the true meaning of a poem.

    • @briannawilliams884
      @briannawilliams884 3 роки тому +1

      @@dlcolwell120 exactly

  • @beccalloydpoetry
    @beccalloydpoetry 6 років тому +175

    why isn’t this more popular?

  • @hddeliZ400md
    @hddeliZ400md 4 роки тому +50

    I feel this, when I was so insecure of a birthmark that my friend called a “angel’s kiss” and no matter how much I told everyone the real story they always said, “You should’ve made up a cool story about like getting in a fight and that happening.” MY DAD even went SO FAR to say, “You should tell people that you got in a fight with a shark and it bit RIGHT THERE.” Yet now he has a sign on the fridge that reads, “Do not lie to me, everything else can be worked out.”

    • @cornwrench
      @cornwrench 2 роки тому +3

      Really???? The audacity those people had to tell you this is extraordinary!

  • @nechma13
    @nechma13 6 років тому +83

    This poem is absolutely amazing the start was so unexpected with the turn

  • @beccalloydpoetry
    @beccalloydpoetry 6 років тому +38

    i am so amazed by the unexpected way the poem concluded

  • @sonjaivanova3795
    @sonjaivanova3795 6 років тому +87

    That is absolutely beautiful! It’s really sad that you don’t have more subscribers- you deserve to!

  • @thetongueofangels1882
    @thetongueofangels1882 5 років тому +37

    I'm just left with a smile.. and a headache from holding the speakers to close to my ear but still a smile, so thank you. 💕✒

  • @the.girl.speaks.2128
    @the.girl.speaks.2128 2 роки тому +2

    This poem is HIGHLY underrated. Share this shit because I want sons to hear this.

  • @ingridq8506
    @ingridq8506 5 років тому +8

    this will forever be one of my favorites

  • @s0urp0wer5
    @s0urp0wer5 4 місяці тому

    "To love another man is to not be one." He went in.

  • @ASMinor
    @ASMinor 5 років тому +8

    I am an avid #MentalHealthAwareness advocate and performer, and I love this so much. I travel the country trying to bring that awareness on stages, in classrooms, hospitals, and on my UA-cam channel, so I get excited when I see other advocates. 💙❤

  • @thalianeufeld8222
    @thalianeufeld8222 Рік тому

    I have to write a personal response based on a slam poem for english and i watched 15 other videos before I found this one and I am choosing this one because not a lot of people are so open about aggressive masculinity, let alone talk about it.

  • @haileymorgan2570
    @haileymorgan2570 5 років тому +6

    I love this poem we need more guys like this in our world

  • @KittyKlawz
    @KittyKlawz 2 роки тому +1

    Hmmm love his mindset, so true all what he said, thank you 🙏🏽 for your strength to stand up n speak from within

  • @karenlakofski5422
    @karenlakofski5422 3 роки тому

    I have watched this over and over....
    It is so beautiful... raw.... educational.....
    Thank you

  • @perseus-ej7kj
    @perseus-ej7kj 4 роки тому +2

    This is beautiful, please don’t stop writing.

  • @nickkroger9411
    @nickkroger9411 7 років тому +10

    Thank you for your words my friend. Much needed.

  • @sallyhey3130
    @sallyhey3130 5 років тому +4

    Ummmmm I’m dying!!! This is so good! I might have just had a heart attack cuz this is so trueee and eye opening

  • @iluvcheeze123
    @iluvcheeze123 3 роки тому +1

    seriously beautiful. well said

  • @writeranonymous9155
    @writeranonymous9155 5 років тому +2

    When I heard, "There's no winner in the story. I guess, that's kind of the point", I paused what I was doing and just sat there, astonished.

  • @samanthabucholtz410
    @samanthabucholtz410 3 роки тому

    chills all the way through- i loved this and the message!

  • @kthnxbye4405
    @kthnxbye4405 3 роки тому

    And that.....is just the truth.
    Something I believe needs to be said more often, because common sense, isn't as common as everyone makes it out to be.

  • @yasminemobley7858
    @yasminemobley7858 3 роки тому

    I love that Keith Haring T-shirt.

  • @skyicee4801
    @skyicee4801 6 років тому +3

    I’m crying this is so amazing

  • @daniellan8216
    @daniellan8216 4 роки тому +2

    i love this

  • @cherokeexxi
    @cherokeexxi 6 років тому +3

    This is so good. Words the world should hear.

  • @karenlakofski5422
    @karenlakofski5422 3 роки тому

    In South Africa we are currently having a huge problem with gender-based violence. Your poem has moved me beyond words

  • @aliannaholcomb5124
    @aliannaholcomb5124 4 роки тому +2

    This was amazing.

  • @lilythpoetry
    @lilythpoetry 3 роки тому

    Yes 🙌

  • @honey5854
    @honey5854 5 років тому +2

    I love this

  • @hoshimochi5702
    @hoshimochi5702 5 років тому +1

    I liked this poem! We should be peacefully counteracting any violence/aggression from any group. It doesn't matter who they are, what they are entitled to. It doesn't matter where you come from, nothing gives you an excuse to act violently or lousily toward others.

  • @andregoforth
    @andregoforth 4 роки тому +7

    We can create such beauty, yet are so easily tempted to create violence.

  • @grannybemx6729
    @grannybemx6729 5 років тому +2

    WOW! So good. Gave me goosebumps. Finger snaps!!!

  • @samm.madden
    @samm.madden 6 років тому +4

    Holy shit, this is so good! Thank you for this man!

  • @serenetiharris2287
    @serenetiharris2287 3 роки тому

    So beautifulll ❤️❤️

  • @aarondrumm3100
    @aarondrumm3100 4 роки тому +2

    One time I got in a drunken fight and told my mom I fell off my skateboard.

  • @izziesanchez9865
    @izziesanchez9865 6 років тому +4

    This is amazing!

  • @daniellemesser9262
    @daniellemesser9262 4 роки тому +12

    Did you know you are being used in college classes for lit analysis?

  • @belindasmith3033
    @belindasmith3033 7 місяців тому

    So fn good

  • @PenelopeLabr
    @PenelopeLabr 5 років тому +3

    Amazing Levi! Continue writing ❤️

  • @Gingybell3
    @Gingybell3 6 років тому +1

    I love the shirt! The poetry is beautiful. ❤️

  • @ishanisinghal8685
    @ishanisinghal8685 5 років тому +1

    love this so much!

  • @guacamolelover3005
    @guacamolelover3005 3 роки тому

    I loved this 100% ❤️❤️

  • @vnuiee
    @vnuiee 5 років тому +2

    Wow this is amazing.

  • @yello.universe4164
    @yello.universe4164 7 років тому +4

    This is so good

  • @paddysullivan7731
    @paddysullivan7731 5 років тому +1

    Let us fight, so what if society says we should

  • @beccalloydpoetry
    @beccalloydpoetry 6 років тому +3

    this was amazing

  • @haroldthomas5410
    @haroldthomas5410 5 років тому +4

    keep doing you man 👌

  • @thomasbailey1654
    @thomasbailey1654 4 роки тому +5

    Have you thought about just trying it on a trampoline first?

  • @sherston
    @sherston 6 років тому +1

    That was fabulous, loved it.

  • @4654mamica
    @4654mamica 5 років тому

    Preach!!!

  • @chickennuggets8448
    @chickennuggets8448 5 років тому +3

    Why don't I see this side of view often?
    Also this was a rhetorical question so please don't make this a fighting comment section

  • @melaniedantas899
    @melaniedantas899 6 років тому +1

    This is greaatt

  • @jmiller297
    @jmiller297 5 років тому

    God, this is good...

  • @jolleil
    @jolleil 5 років тому +3

    nice

  • @azul4904
    @azul4904 2 роки тому

    anybody knows if he has an instagram? :p

  • @myaclyburn5334
    @myaclyburn5334 6 років тому

    Yesss

  • @harleyabbott2624
    @harleyabbott2624 5 років тому

    This is fucking hilarious

  • @katcvm
    @katcvm 5 років тому +2

    Fuck💔

  • @lauracw_24
    @lauracw_24 2 роки тому

    I can tell you've been moved by Francisco. You're a mini him!

  • @youngstreamz1574
    @youngstreamz1574 3 роки тому

    @hyper2k

  • @captainthiccnick
    @captainthiccnick 5 років тому +1

    I thought I would try listening to slam poetry one time. I have to say, I like the message but this isn't for me.

  • @theylivewesleep4682
    @theylivewesleep4682 4 роки тому +2

    I’m an evolved man, so I will NOT HIT the like button. 😏

  • @paddysullivan7731
    @paddysullivan7731 5 років тому

    Sometimes society is right

  • @terriyoung7136
    @terriyoung7136 Рік тому

    I have family members that are gay

  • @paddysullivan7731
    @paddysullivan7731 5 років тому

    This is awful

  • @thomasdeckermusic6543
    @thomasdeckermusic6543 5 років тому

    This guy is definitely an SJW that gets offended by everything 😂

    • @annekpopmultifandomqueen6173
      @annekpopmultifandomqueen6173 4 роки тому

      Mile High Drums I hate people like you I went thro abuse for people that went thro the same thing to say it alright you can get though it just for people like you to put us down because we are just cry babies right yeah you go threw abuse

    • @aarondrumm3100
      @aarondrumm3100 4 роки тому

      Did you misspell 'through' two different ways three different times?

    • @thomasdeckermusic6543
      @thomasdeckermusic6543 4 роки тому

      Anne Kpop Multi fandom queen He didn’t go through abuse 😂 people just wanted him to sound cool by making a sick bar fight story. That’s toxic masculinity but it’s in no way abuse 😂 he then got offended by it and made a whole poem about something that wasn’t a big deal in the first place

  • @paddysullivan7731
    @paddysullivan7731 5 років тому

    Toughness makes a boy a man. Toughness comes from getting back up. Getting back up is when someone knocks you down... but you always come back swinging. That’s why I hate your poem Levi

    • @levitodd5479
      @levitodd5479  5 років тому +4

      thank you for the tremendous feedback paddy

    • @Kate-not-katie
      @Kate-not-katie 5 років тому +1

      Paddy Sullivan dude heck off