Good effort, the music is definitely way better, but small advice when editing, Make sure the cuts in the video fit with the music rhythm. By that, i mean, try to have your video cuts fall on music beats, and in the case of a trailer edit, usually you'd want to build a crescendo, where the cuts are tighter and the music faster paced at the 2/3 mark, and then falls back down at the end. It also helps to sync action beats on a music beat.
Good effort, the music is definitely way better, but small advice when editing,
Make sure the cuts in the video fit with the music rhythm. By that, i mean, try to have your video cuts fall on music beats, and in the case of a trailer edit, usually you'd want to build a crescendo, where the cuts are tighter and the music faster paced at the 2/3 mark, and then falls back down at the end.
It also helps to sync action beats on a music beat.
Thanks for the tips! I’ll keep learning!