IELTS Task 1 Writing - Transform Band 6 to Band 8
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- Опубліковано 10 чер 2024
- IELTS Task 1 Writing is often overlooked by students. In fact, more students fail IELTS Writing because of Task 1 than Task 2.
This video will show you the common mistakes that lead to a Band 6 and then show you the simple changes you can make to improve your Task 1 Academic writing to a Band 8.
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Link to IELTS Task 1 Academic Marking Criteria- www.ielts.org/-/media/pdfs/wr...
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00:00 Welcome
01:15 Task Achievement
12:27 Coherence and Cohesion
19:54 Vocabulary
21:37 Grammar
22:08 Task 1 Introduction
23:07 Task 1 Overview
28:37 Task 1 Details Paragraphs
OMG!!!!!thank you soooooo much!
i watched this video like 5 days before my 2nd round test, and today i got my result came out, i got band 7.5 !!! 1 year ago, i struggled between band 6 and 6.5, but this time around is 7.5 at writing!!! what an inspiring and helpful tutorial!!! 5 STAR recommended! i can't thank you enough!!!
That's amazing! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
Am writing tomorrow as well
@@tangembi hi! what's your band?
Thank you so much bro, I just studied 3 hours watching your video and got 7 bands overall. Really happy
Amazing news! Congratulations!
rlly😂 I am preparing 5 month nearly for 7 band score but my reading stuck in 6/6.5 even though i solve all cambridge books 2 times
The 'gun to your head' analogy is bang on! (pun intended). This approach really helps in saving time and grasping the overall picture quickly & accurately👍
This was insane! So grateful to get this video, because I need to study more IELTS for my taking test around May in this year, 2024.
You're a real one. I got a band 8 and it's my first time taking this exam. Binge-watching most of your videos if not all did a lot, especially with the writing and speaking. God bless you💝
Congratulations!
what is ur first languange bro?
@@muhammadrazikani7951 Igbo
A simple thank you wouldn't be enough. I watched this particular video literally hours before my test and got 7.5 in writing and 8 overall. Mind you this was my first try. Truly appreciate your videos✨️
Great job!
OMG I cannot thank you enough for your advice. I have never been taught this at school before I saw your video.
Thanks so much Chris for ALL of ur tips n tricks. Even tho I only got 6 in my writing but I got an overall of 7.5 with L 7.5 R 8.5 and S 7.0 from only watching your videos. And not to mention it was my first time attempting IELTS! :D
share with a few reading tips please
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
OMG! i really want you to know that your hard work, dedication, and passion for teaching are truly appreciated. Wish you all the best
Omg, now I realize that I've been making pretty much the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the efficient ways of writing task 1 for free!
You're most welcome!
Teacher Chris, thank you so much for your tips to improve writing.
Thank you!! I was writing every single detail and was struggling to finish it within 20 mins
Thank you, Chris, you nailed it! I've just received the results and finally got 7 on academic writing. I did nothing but strictly follow your suggestions in both writing tasks, and it worked!
Well done!
Tomorrow is my exam
Good luck with it.
Mine too
Me too
@@202_Channel all the best guys
Me too
Thank u so much Chris. I have been stuck on 6.0 in writing but after coming across your videos I just got a 7.5 in writing.
Well done! Keep it up!
Hi, I need 7.5 in writing but stuck at 6.5-7. Can you kindly let me know how you prepared
Thanks for sharing those valuable tips on how to transform from band 6 to band 8! I believe the most significant difference is what key features you select to present and how to summarize it the most logical ways😊
amazing tutorial......grateful to u sir..I was completely lost in the graphs...finding my way ..thanks to u
Thank you so much!! I watched your videos about ielts writing one day before the official test, and I've got 7 for my writing. A big surprise to me as I had always struggled with writing skills, but you just made it straightforward and comprehensible. So lucky that I watched your tutorial
Great job!
Hey Chris, I just wanted to say thank you so so much for all your advice. I gave the IELTS (academic) for the first time and I really had no time to prepare because of school and entrance exam prep. I watched your videos in the last 3 days before the test. I was sceptical about writing, because I really don't like writing. I used to think that in the writing section, you just have to think of lots of ideas and content to put into your essay. But your videos completely changed my views and I followed what you said. Made my writing clear and simple. ANDDD I GOT AN 8 in WRITING!! I got an overall 8, as well. I am 100% sure I couldn't have got an 8 in writing, had I not seen your videos. Once again, thank you so much, Chris! You're an amazing teacher.
Thank you for your gratitude and appreciation. I am happy to know that I could make a positive impact on your IELTS journey. I wish you continued success in all your future endeavors.
How long had you practised for writing???
Awesome how your english is so clear.
Finally I'm done with my IELTS, I followed your advice for the writing section & I got 7 in it
Thank you so much
Writing was my weakest area of all the 4 modules, I'm just glad I stumbled upon your channel
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
Thank you so so much. Just 1 hour before my exam I saw your video and your essay writing advice to be strong about opinion was so good . I got 8/9 band in writing n 8.50 in reading overall 7.5 band.
You are a real teacher. None of the channel is as good as you are. I didn’t have much time to prepare . I put hardly overall 24 hours in preparation bcz of my full time job .
You are the best man. Keep on doing this good work .
Excellent! Congratulations!
wow, thanks a lot for all the plain, simple and very very effective tips.
Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Hello IELTS advantage! I want to thank you because with your videos and tips, I was able to get an 8 with 1,5 months of preparation. I like your way of presenting the material and advice. Good luck to everyone who prepares!
This is amazing news! Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
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With your teachings, I've learnt to take everything into my account logically ...
Thanks a tonne for giving me a better approach to deal with things around...
You are most welcome. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you. Line graph seems much more easier from now ❤
You are absolutely right. Our education system prioritise memory over concept and intelligence. ☹️
I used to include conclusion in my earlier days in exam preparation, because I use them as a filler contact. Later I read the IDP website they don't mention to add conclusion in task 1. Now I ease of these mistakes. You are great teacher. These information cannot obtain from So-called IELTS teachers.
Glad you find this lesson helpful.
Thank you very much for sharing video. Hope you well and continue to share with everyone.
I am writing my ilets exams tomorrow and so lucky to storm on this master's peace video to crown my preparations and increased my confidence in writing more. Can you all wish me good luck please. I will definitely come back here to testify because his videos has been my only source of study material. Thank you Chris 🙏
Hi there, please read this article from our website 'IELTS Advantage- My IELTS exam is tomorrow, what should I do?" for some last minute tips. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test.
You'r the only person who is teaching in that way❤❤❤❤❤❤.
Im so thankful..you are amazing teacher😇😇
Hello!
Can this strategy be reused for other types of Task 1 Writing (e.g: bar/pie charts, tables, or even double (like a pie chart + a table) charts)?
Also, will you release a new video about Map/Process Tasks?
You really provide priceless information for the students, catching the root cause and guiding us to improve our thinking.I hearlty appreciate your effort❤️
thank you so much for this video :) it help me a lots in writing
Tomorrow is my test and I was worried about task 1. Thank you for this video.
Good luck!
Bro let me know if you recd one word type questions or two word or three words please
Very useful video and clear to understand . Thanks a lot!
You're very welcome!
Exclusive style of explaining, man! You gave good examples for addressing my mind-set which is detail-oriented in writing....1- Start with task 2
2- Imagine someone putting a gun on ur head and asking u to address 4-5 points from this data.
I am going to keep this in my head for task 1
38 minutes well-spent.👍
Thank you for your videos. They help me to improve my listing and hearing,
You are most welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
My exam 24th of june and I couldn’t watch ur videos before today!?🤔
How excellent teacher u r Mr.Christopher! Allah bless u🤍
Best of luck with your test! You got this!
How was your exam?
U are such a great teacher
Thank you so much for wonderful instructions.
You are so welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you very much, the best teacher!👍👍👍👍
I have learnt a lot knowledge about task 2 ..from your video which I did not get from my classes..thre is something amazing special teaching ways.which student's basic need..thx..✌️✨i appreciate your teaching ways..👍🥀
Nice information that's really helps me in my preparation 😊
Superb sir
It was a really wonderful session!!!
Fabulous piece of information!!! ❤
really like this vid ^^ , i hope that it'll improve my Wri band
Watched this applied the tips scored exactly 8. Thank you for such quality content.
That's great!
This video is really meaningful for us. Thank you so much ❤.
Great instructions for teachers.
25:01
Greatest tip of all time.
Chris is the best.
Excellent presentation. I have learned a lot. Thank you
You're very welcome!
U are amazing and doing a very good job
I just had my IELTS exam today, I had almost no preparation for it, unfortunately.
However, your videos helped me tremendously to learn in such a short time and I did quite good in my exam today.
Thank you so much.🙏
Glad it helped! Best of luck with your scores.
Thanks so much for your valuable tips, I managed to get my desired score from a 6 to a 7 within a week thanks to your channel. Even if you have less time or resources, anyone can watch this channel and sit confidently for the exam.
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
I just love your videos ❤
Thank u so much u help me a lot because I will pass the exam in few days
Sincerely thanks for useful videos, Chris. You saved me when I struggled with my writing. I just received my result this morning and I got band 7.5 overall with R 8.5 L 7.5 W 7. S 6. for my first try 🤗
Fantastic!
Hello
Thank you very much for this review. I hope to achieve over 7.5 bands in writing.
You are most welcome! We'd be delighted to help you achieve a Band 7.5 in Writing. We have a range of paid and free courses to suit your needs. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
Thank you Chris for your tips . scored 8 band in writing and overall 8 band in my first attempt without even practicing once . Your tips proved to be too good . Thanks a lot once again
Congratulations!
This video is marvelous! Thank you so much!
I struggled with Academic writing and my friend Linda Mtare shared Chris Pell 's ielts advantage link she specifically instructed me to follow all the steps he teaches on Academic writing, Chris thank you so much l finally got into band 7 was so tired of being stuck at 6.5 guys Chris is the real deal 👏
Thanks for sharing!! Congratulations!
Today is my exam,just watching your informative videos before sitting ❤️☺️
Hi
Would i know about ur exam experience...!!!
that was Extremely helpful
Glad to come to know such an informative channel so grateful to you and your entire team Sir. You are so genuine and trying your best to make ielts easy for students . I have to appear in ielts exams in the end of this month. Taking guidance from your videos. Remember me in your prayers.
I"m glad you find it informative! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
I know you hear this a lot but, you're very good.
You're like the GOAT of UA-cam IELTS
Writing just follow this man's strategy it works wonders.... Struggled in writing got my score 7.0 thanks a ton ❤
Well done! Congratulations!
This is super helpful:D tysm
Highly appreciate your efforts. Please make videos like this
Thank you, I will.
Thanks for this video sir. you are great teacher
You are most welcome, Kamal.
This really helps me a lot as my ielts exams will be conducted tomorrow
Again Thanks a lot sir!!
You're very welcome. Best of luck with your test!
This video is way to good to be free on youtube. You are great, thank you!
You're very welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
You are a legend. Very grateful to you. I have presented the content in the exam exactly in this way. Received 7.5 in W and 7.5 in overall due to your other guides on each of the 4 modules.
Well done!
@@Ieltsadvantage Thank you so much !!
Best guru of IELTS ❤
I don’t have much competition, but thanks anyway :)
I learnt a lot from Chris. IELTS Advantage has been really helpful and I follow all the tips given and taught by Chris. I managed to improve my score in writing and speaking from 6 to 6.5 in my 2nd attempt with overall band score increased from 6.5 to 7.5. However, it's still not fulfill my requirement. I hope I can achieve band 7 for all components in my 3rd attempt soon. Thanks Chris.
Great job on improving your scores! If you need our help in preparing for your next attempt, please feel free to reach out.
As usual perfect teacher thank you very much
How do you know if the video was released 27 seconds ago? :)
@@Ieltsadvantage couse all the time l see your video therefore l can say this point with strong confident🥰🤗😎
:)
@@Ieltsadvantage :) sorry what is this
I couldnʼt understand🤔🤔🤔🤔
Thank you so much Sir, I followed ur tips in speaking test and it help alot 😊
Glad to hear that! Best of luck with your scores.
It's very useful for me, because I listened what I shouldn't do and what types of mistakes students tend to do.
Thanks!
Glad it was helpful!
Chris you are the best ever
I quite got you. Thanks so much sir
You're welcome, Agnes.
Hi chris,I just followed ur videos for 3daya before my exam.I got 7.Thanks to my Almighty and u
Great job!
This is helpful.... thanks
Hello there. I must say that this was the most comprehensive video on this specific topic that I have found on UA-cam. You are doing a great job. I have just started to prepare for the writing module but I don't how to get my reports evaluated to understand where I am currently standing and what's lacking in my writing. Can you kindly give some suggestions to me on how I can do it?
Hi there, we can offer you our Writing Correction Service. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
Dear IELTS Advantage team, I would like to express my gratitude for your valuable learning resources. Within a span of 10 days, I exclusively relied on your video lessons to prepare for my IELTS Academic test. The outcome was astonishing as I was able to achieve an overall band score of 7.5, with a band score of 9 in the Reading section. Your instructional content was instrumental in my success. I look forward to enrolling in your program in the near future to further enhance my language proficiency.
This is great news! Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
Thank u all informations were very beneficial to me
You're welcome!
Hi Chris, I have a question:
I always write like this: "The proportion of adults who did not receive adequate health treatment of all states, except for Estonia, increased in 2022."
But you get rid of the phrase "The proportion of adults who did not receive adequate health treatment". Can you tell me when we should or shouldnt eliminate the phrase as that?
Thank you.
Hi dear, it's really useful video, i'm your new subscriber.💜💜
Please Chris make a video for how to structure writing task 2 correctly, in the internet there are many and I am lost completely. Please , please......
Hi there, thank you for your suggestion. I will look into it. In the meantime, please refer to this article on our website 'IELTS Advantage - IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. We also have a range of paid and free courses to help you in Writing. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
This video was so useful for me
Thank you
Glad it was helpful!
Hi Chris. Thanks a lot for the video. I wanted to ask if it is appropriate to say " Estonia increased...Sweden decreased..etc" while, in fact, it is the number of adults increased/decreased?
Hi dear Chris,if it is suitable could you answer to this question 'in the given task the percentage of adults increase or decrease in a particular country but you wrote 'states increased' is it okay?' Thanks beforehand
thank you very much Sir ,i was waiting for this video
You're very welcome! Hope you find it helpful!
@@Ieltsadvantage very helpful sir and iam studying to become an IELTS trainer ..so iam expecting more video uploads ✋️
Loved it 😍
I've learned a lot. I didn't used to like writing part. But after watching this videos and infos I'm starting loving it 😃. Thank u 😍
That's great! If you need help with your IELTS test preparation, send us an email and we'll be happy to help.
Thanks for useful videos! I'm trying your best for the next Ielts test. I hope that I'll get my aim dream🤩😁🥰
Love from Bangladesh sir you are great 🥂
Cheers!
Thank you!!!
You are really a great teacher ❤️
Thanks!
Thanks a lot , alot .....
Thank you very much
I am grateful , No one told me these before. Much much thanks again to you🎉
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Please creat more videos on writing task 1, it's really helpful
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