The quick melody at the end is too complicated and ends up sounding like you just randomly threw notes into the piano roll... Try to have a simpler melody or make it slower since it currently is overwhelming to listen to. You could also make it an arpeggio (a chord where all notes are played in quick succession, but not at the same time) as that could also help make it less confusing to listen to. If it is already an arpeggio, it moves around too much and some repetition could help make it sound better. Remember there's no incorrect way to make music and that trying out new things can help you grow as a musician, but that doesn't mean that you shouldn't try to sometimes follow a bit of advice as it can really help speed up the learning process.
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when in doubt make a b section, thats usually what I do atleast
man this is fkn awsome🔥 can i ask which plugin do use for these orchestral sounds
Zenology
@@REST_ray thnx 🙂 again good music🔥
from the third, it should be drop
woah
Is there sheet music or something
too much
Cut at 00:13 feels off.
Adjust the second part of he main riff.
I agree
The quick melody at the end is too complicated and ends up sounding like you just randomly threw notes into the piano roll...
Try to have a simpler melody or make it slower since it currently is overwhelming to listen to.
You could also make it an arpeggio (a chord where all notes are played in quick succession, but not at the same time) as that could also help make it less confusing to listen to.
If it is already an arpeggio, it moves around too much and some repetition could help make it sound better.
Remember there's no incorrect way to make music and that trying out new things can help you grow as a musician, but that doesn't mean that you shouldn't try to sometimes follow a bit of advice as it can really help speed up the learning process.
I agree, I think slowing down could help. As this is not a finished melody things like this are expected. Thanks for the feedback!
bet