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[@kaijugrit]

hi guys , this is a piece i composed in FL studio , i do not know how to proceed at this point

[@wolfplay013]

i cannot believe it.

[@lillie3029]

A few critiques; you definitely need to learn theory. Only genres you can get away with not learning theory is riddim and extratone.
Other than that, definitely change up the arp patterns, too repetitive, and maybe borrow from the parallel major to resolve into the final chord.
Another thing I noticed is that you don’t stay on the same chord tone for too long, you shouldn’t try to spam chords together, but instead make it flow from chord to chord.
Other than that, pretty good 👍

[@kaijugrit]

thanks, ill try to keep this in mind

[@Syr3i]

This sounds great!

[@kaijugrit]

thanks , any feedback??

[@Syr3i]

@@kaijugrit I mean, it’s incomplete so I can’t judge it rn.

[@Syr3i]

And most of my works are also pretty eh

[@kaijugrit]

@@Syr3i im sure your work, isnt eh

[@Syr3i]

@@kaijugrit thanks but ngl it kinda is 😓

[@melonade9053]

Hippity hoppity ur sample is now my property 🥷

[@kaijugrit]

whaT????

[@276-]

this is insane!! i love it!!!

[@kaijugrit]

thanks man , it means alot

[@ConnButDumb]

Cool

[@kaijugrit]

thank you

[@kalacarte]

ARPEGIOS YOooooooOOO

[@kaijugrit]

yeah 🔥

[@Crimecraft2]

Id say its a little bit too repetitive, try switching it up more a bit. And for arpeggios, u should do more chord scale relations, cuz those sound fire, and the bass also shouldnt be an arpeggio pattern as well but more of its own thing, but yeah id say my only critique is that its too repetitive, good job on this track.

[@kaijugrit]

sure ill try doing that , but the problem is i honestly dont know what is going anymore at this point

[@Lucas-u8h9z]

what app do u use?

[@kaijugrit]

FL studio