Nicely narrated 🙂 vary calming, though i was watching this in bed, in the dark with headphones on so when that guy popped his head around the corner with a big grin on his painted face it made me jump😬😄 only just come across ya channel so definitely subbed 🙂🙂❤
@@Phantomzero8 Try again. Not so deadpan. A little more pause between "new" stories. Let us know when people are speaking in quotes by changing your voice (not necessarily by doing voices, but that's an option too). Right now, it sounds like ai, which is bad.
Nicely narrated 🙂 vary calming, though i was watching this in bed, in the dark with headphones on so when that guy popped his head around the corner with a big grin on his painted face it made me jump😬😄 only just come across ya channel so definitely subbed 🙂🙂❤
Thanks a lot I been busy with things lately but I will get to making some more of these soon.
I see potential!
Thank you! I appreciate it. Still learning but i'm sure i will fine tune it as i go :)
@@Phantomzero8 Try again. Not so deadpan. A little more pause between "new" stories. Let us know when people are speaking in quotes by changing your voice (not necessarily by doing voices, but that's an option too). Right now, it sounds like ai, which is bad.
If he only he sound litlle more lively. Only emocion i wass feeling was sleeping, dont even remember half of the story.
The story was probably very good.. but the slow,lack of emotion just didn't do it for me.cud be brilliant .but to to slow..thanks tho
Damn, who"s voice is this??? Seems coming from a dead, no emotion,flat, not human(living),killing the story(any story). The worst choice possible.
it's my voice, yes i have a very monotone voice.