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КОМЕНТАРІ • 403

  • @furryash8388
    @furryash8388 8 років тому +95

    Things are definitely starting to get Lovecraftian in this story.

    • @thefatman69dude
      @thefatman69dude 8 років тому

      +Jamie Breeze naw man. He just dropped a fucking shit load of acid. Lol

    • @SkanRashke
      @SkanRashke 8 років тому +1

      +Ryan England Guess we know how the young get made now. Lol. *nervous laughter, looks out at pond*

    • @LilyS1031
      @LilyS1031 7 років тому

      +SkanRashke XD

  • @AnimeLover7220
    @AnimeLover7220 8 років тому +108

    "The last letter of Marcus Finch"?
    Spoiler: It's H
    c:

  • @BritGirlJay
    @BritGirlJay 8 років тому +122

    That was a good one - much prefer the longer pastas :)

    • @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective
      @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective 8 років тому +8

      +BritGirlJay Agreed. The longer ones are always the more powerful ones on here you know?

    • @reptilianbrotherhood7686
      @reptilianbrotherhood7686 8 років тому +2

      +BritGirlJay Amen!

    • @unixone7558
      @unixone7558 8 років тому +3

      +Adam Anouer There also the one's you prefer to get narrated because they're a pain on the wiki to read.

    • @shrewmen
      @shrewmen 8 років тому

      +Reptilian Brotherhood hisssssss

    • @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective
      @Akechi_The_Phantom_Detective 8 років тому +5

      Unix One Yeah :) And it also helps Mr Creepypasta's voice acting is truly engaging which doing acting myself is something I appreciate. Then there's CreepsMcPasta who has the same quality but I think edges more in narration than voice acting.

  • @jonathanlevy8705
    @jonathanlevy8705 8 років тому +14

    Who ever wrote this, is creative as fuck

  • @delayedundisplayed
    @delayedundisplayed 8 років тому +36

    I was wondering how they'd make an almost thirty minute video about the letter 'h'.

    • @MOTHsan
      @MOTHsan 7 років тому +1

      That took me a second. I see what you did there.

    • @Sonkotsu
      @Sonkotsu 7 років тому

      MOTHsan Am lost

    • @KINGSLAY3R502
      @KINGSLAY3R502 5 років тому

      @@Sonkotsu "Finch" "h"
      still lost?

    • @hunterjackson8185
      @hunterjackson8185 2 місяці тому

      I’ve been trying to figure out what you meant for 8 years now

  • @moonlitfox5839
    @moonlitfox5839 8 років тому +11

    Is anyone else reminded of H.P. Lovecraft?
    EDIT: I checked the comments, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks this.

  • @cjmccutcheon4720
    @cjmccutcheon4720 8 років тому +22

    The only problem with this story is how simple a solution to the creature in the pond is. Take an extension cord from your house (I'm sure you have a couple for yard work or something) plug one end into a socket, and toss the other in the pond. Other solutions include using your car battery to electrify the water, siphoning the gas from your car, (assuming you have extra tanks because of how long you are up there) and emptying that into the pond to potentially make it toxic to anything living inside it, or even lighting the gas on fire when it is in the pond, in order to harm the creature.

    • @coltm4a186
      @coltm4a186 8 років тому

      I would've shot the pond and the creature with a powerful rifle or shotgun because the thunder would mask the gunshots.

    • @superduperedgyshooter3777
      @superduperedgyshooter3777 7 років тому +1

      Cj McCutcheon play a feminist video...

    • @superduperedgyshooter3777
      @superduperedgyshooter3777 7 років тому +1

      Colt M4A1 ishmaz akm

    • @bravo075
      @bravo075 4 роки тому +4

      A car battery will not electrify the water, it's DC current. Trust me I'm an engineer. Also you'd need a lot of current to electrify an entire pond.

    • @jimmyshrimbe9361
      @jimmyshrimbe9361 2 роки тому

      I don't think that's gonna work....

  • @blenderfoto
    @blenderfoto 8 років тому +177

    Your voice starts a tad bit too early.
    Not because this makes the rest of the video less enjoyable :P

    • @juliannareader
      @juliannareader 8 років тому

      I noticed that too

    • @unixone7558
      @unixone7558 8 років тому +2

      +Wellstar Three years plus of quality content, I'll let a small editing error slide.

    • @juliannareader
      @juliannareader 8 років тому +8

      Unix One He was just pointing out. It wasn't a complaint and he didn't insinuate it wasn't quality.

    • @unixone7558
      @unixone7558 8 років тому +3

      Sail Hatan I know, I was just throwing in what I thought about it.

    • @cartercarrio6401
      @cartercarrio6401 8 років тому +1

      Just a little pointer so he can keep on making more high quality content

  • @meaningawaitsforyou
    @meaningawaitsforyou 8 років тому +1

    this is the best creepypasta and creepypasta narrations I've heard in a long time.

  • @jackinstripes5950
    @jackinstripes5950 8 років тому +1

    Props to the you and the author. This story is very well written, and you did an amazing job of bringing it to life!

  • @ReyaitheShadowWolf
    @ReyaitheShadowWolf 6 років тому +2

    I've been listening to this one every night before bed for the past week.
    It's so eerily calming and atmospheric.

  • @anomaly9746
    @anomaly9746 8 років тому +1

    Wow, what an amazing job, in both writing and narration. So this is where the radio play has gone - to the internet. Anyone can say whatever they like, but I say this was darkly amazing all around. EXTREMELY WELL DONE.

  • @stevewellington4442
    @stevewellington4442 8 років тому +1

    The voice acting made a slightly cliche story into something amazing. Seriously you're doing god's work here.

  • @NeoAvalon17
    @NeoAvalon17 8 років тому +52

    Is it just me or does that rock on the left look like a gorilla's face?

  • @teresakirkland995
    @teresakirkland995 2 роки тому +1

    Awesome story!! Definitely gotta have a part 2

  • @jakezyjx
    @jakezyjx 8 років тому +13

    Paranormal Investigation Group....P.I.G...

  • @pinkgoth6
    @pinkgoth6 8 років тому +38

    20:43 my knees grew weak, arms spaghetti

    • @baconman5891
      @baconman5891 8 років тому +2

      I've got spaghetti on my sweater already

    • @choruppted
      @choruppted 8 років тому +3

      +bacon messier mom's spaghetti

    • @pinkgoth6
      @pinkgoth6 8 років тому +5

      he tries to puke but spaghetti wont come out

    • @arthas640
      @arthas640 8 років тому

      +Dead Eridan everyone i know just calls that the "moms spaghetti song" :P

    • @pixlatedgamer9412
      @pixlatedgamer9412 7 років тому

      the wat song

  • @amazinggriffin3581
    @amazinggriffin3581 8 років тому +6

    That awkward moment when your name is Marcus.

  • @serenitynatividad6255
    @serenitynatividad6255 8 років тому +1

    Man it's been a while since a pasta gave me serious chills

  • @samiles7250
    @samiles7250 8 років тому +1

    At 1:24 I was like maybe he's talking about a mailman?

  • @MMMAKER35
    @MMMAKER35 8 років тому +17

    Sounds like the Horror From The Vault... Is this a sequel?

    • @MMMAKER35
      @MMMAKER35 8 років тому

      good point :/

    • @thefatman69dude
      @thefatman69dude 8 років тому +3

      Story should of ended with... Oh yeah I forgot I dropped a fuck ton of Acid. Lol

    • @unixone7558
      @unixone7558 8 років тому +1

      +Nick Schrader I don't know, but it shares the Lovecraftian feel. I enjoy the Lovecraftian feel of hopelessness every once in awhile in stories, but it can get stale if you find too many of them too often.

    • @ambersdarkfox
      @ambersdarkfox 8 років тому

      +Nick Schrader In he Horror From The Vault the creature was pretty massive and this don't sound as large. It could be more like a prequel. It started out smaller like this and spread out into the mass monster it became.

    • @autumn4514
      @autumn4514 8 років тому +1

      +ambersdarkfox Thats not really plausible, since he mentioned this was so far from society, while the mass of human parts never left that reserve right near town

  • @Bluesit32
    @Bluesit32 8 років тому +17

    And this is why I don't go camping.

  • @littymarquis764
    @littymarquis764 Місяць тому

    8 years late but this is exceptionally unnerving. The story balances the line between revealing a disturbing creature and maintaining fear of the unknown by having the creature appear as several contradictory disturbing images, all of which likely result from the minds inability to grasp its true nature/form. We get a disturbing glance at what's outside AND we still don't know any more than before what kind of thing it is.
    The segment with the man on the radio was also excellent, perfectly looping voices are not a common horror story trope, but the few stories I've heard with them (two before this) always deeply haunt me, it's so terrifically uncanny. When the man on the radio repeated himself perfectly the first time, I literally jumped up and yelled "AW HECK NAH!"
    Short story overall, but definitely one of my top 15 on this channel.

  • @Malisa77
    @Malisa77 8 років тому +2

    +MrCreepyPasta I always love your stories so I always hit like before I listen😀 Great job....please keep it up!

  • @IncognitoSprax
    @IncognitoSprax 8 років тому +9

    OP definitely is not black. Cause we would of got the fuck out of dodge.

  • @LilyS1031
    @LilyS1031 7 років тому +1

    I loved this one! Story exceedingly scary and great narration.

  • @amandamaverick8528
    @amandamaverick8528 7 років тому

    my nightly bedtime story. I listen to him to help me sleep. can't sleep without it actually. so thank you for uploading pretty much everynight and I'll watch old ones since you didn't upload tonight.

  • @just_another_lunatic3639
    @just_another_lunatic3639 8 років тому +5

    Love these longer pastas, I like to paint or do something like carve while listening to them and try to engulf myself in the characters world.

    • @MOTHsan
      @MOTHsan 7 років тому

      Same. I always listen to them while drawing.

    • @Behemoth9030
      @Behemoth9030 5 років тому

      MOTHsan same here!

  • @diamondogs126
    @diamondogs126 8 років тому

    I like how his voice is early, he was just eager to tell us a story.

  • @dxc886
    @dxc886 8 років тому

    Holy fuck, that was bone chilling. Excellent job reading this, Mr. CreepyPasta. I'd have to say that this is one of your best in my book.

  • @daishinethomas5912
    @daishinethomas5912 8 років тому

    I found this particular story fascinating

  • @duckpie150
    @duckpie150 8 років тому +1

    6:22 the sound was LEEDLE LEEDLE LEEDLE!

  • @toehairyum
    @toehairyum 8 років тому +4

    This one DEFINITELY needs a part 2. The story was really well written and it sounds like the first installment on what could be an epic multiple part series. Part 2 could be about the Paranormal Investigator in the beginning.

  • @malanawey8435
    @malanawey8435 8 років тому +3

    good job! I am watching this at 2am.....wish me luck lol

    • @greatdodger7854
      @greatdodger7854 5 років тому

      It's not that scary. There was pastas way scarier than this. This was just about some schizo who forgot to take his meds on his vacation

  • @AlsoReading
    @AlsoReading 8 років тому +1

    Perfectly Lovecraftian.

  • @tangerinemisfit
    @tangerinemisfit 8 років тому +9

    All hail Cthulhu

  • @AlexandreMercierAubin
    @AlexandreMercierAubin 7 років тому +4

    Marcus Flinched... I am out!

  • @Theren_Alister_XIII
    @Theren_Alister_XIII 8 років тому

    This was really well done, one of the best in fact, keep up the good work

  • @IsrealRose3rd
    @IsrealRose3rd 8 років тому

    +MrCreepyPasta its So Cool to see you made it to a Million.. I've been here sense just a couple 1,000. I knew it was going to come some day.. keep it up man, you're great!!!

  • @dreamerjen69
    @dreamerjen69 8 років тому

    You never seem to disappoint.

  • @datura_preworkout
    @datura_preworkout 8 років тому

    wow I've never been this early to an mcp video!
    love your stuff mrcreepypasta, keep up the good work!

  • @RBear132
    @RBear132 8 років тому

    I love you! 💜 keep up the stories. You make my day listening to these. 😍😘

  • @thetalkingbear
    @thetalkingbear 8 років тому

    I like the scenic footage.

  • @animeman3392
    @animeman3392 8 років тому +4

    +Mr.creepypasta You should read the tale of robert elm. Other creepypasta readers who I personally think are very amateur have attempted to read the story but I'm not getting the life out of it. when you read I can feel the life out of what you read I know that a lot of people who subscribe to you know exactly what I'm talking about. I want to hear the life out of the story which I feel only you can do. please it would mean a lot to me if you will read this pasta for me.Please&thankyou

    • @animeman3392
      @animeman3392 8 років тому

      With that being said I'm going to enjoy creepypasta I just stumbled on since it does look quite interesting

  • @5sostrash594
    @5sostrash594 8 років тому +2

    The last name Finch reminds me of the book To Kill a Mockingbird, because the children and the father have the same last name which is Finch.

    • @chriscanfly6386
      @chriscanfly6386 4 роки тому

      Coincidence. Hundreds of Thousands of people share most names. Its super irrelevant. Thatd be like yelling THATS THE PRESIDENTS NAME everytime you met a donald. Like sure but irrelevant and annoying

  • @Angelinamarie1121
    @Angelinamarie1121 8 років тому

    MCP so loved this one! amazing video as always. 👍💯😊

  • @epicrandomness2681
    @epicrandomness2681 8 років тому

    Congrats for 1 million

  • @spoolsloops
    @spoolsloops 8 років тому +4

    So this is the earliest i've been to one of his videos. Does he always upload creepypasta's late at night?

    • @alleyreeder2292
      @alleyreeder2292 8 років тому

      Im wondering the same thing

    • @your_buddy_ryan
      @your_buddy_ryan 8 років тому +8

      +Slothy Slothington Dad?

    • @juliannareader
      @juliannareader 8 років тому +3

      it might not be night where he is.

    • @unixone7558
      @unixone7558 8 років тому

      +Sail Hatan He lives somewhere in Texas form what I can tell. That or in one of the states around it.

    • @nizzlenotes3892
      @nizzlenotes3892 8 років тому +1

      +Sail Hatan I love your name

  • @yourenotcoolvictor5849
    @yourenotcoolvictor5849 8 років тому

    that outro music I swear to god, kills me every time

  • @zimmerframe6834
    @zimmerframe6834 8 років тому +3

    Did anyone else think it was raining outside

    • @Behemoth9030
      @Behemoth9030 5 років тому

      I know this was three years ago, but when I ready this today, it WAS raining outside.

  • @Premovings
    @Premovings 8 років тому +1

    To Creeps, Mr, and Jr, thanks mates!

  • @nhilly1021
    @nhilly1021 8 років тому +2

    "I received an email attachment from"
    Just so you guys wanted to know

  • @nathanressl
    @nathanressl 6 років тому

    I laid three of this video on top of each other one second apart and the echo is insane and hilarious. Good story though.

  • @tylerhamlett5429
    @tylerhamlett5429 7 років тому +1

    Really enjoy the long pastas too creeps :P

  • @mcswagalot3523
    @mcswagalot3523 8 років тому

    yay you put the . Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh boo . intro back in thx u :D also love the story

  • @fallsoftherail204
    @fallsoftherail204 8 років тому

    It's 3am for me XD thank you MCP, I was getting bored and now I have something to do :D

  • @halkyxn345
    @halkyxn345 8 років тому +1

    see the creepypasta "the bottle" for backstory

  • @mirandabarrett8987
    @mirandabarrett8987 8 років тому

    Amazing acting in this one

  • @nickhannah9543
    @nickhannah9543 5 років тому

    I fucking love this story. It makes me think of the house my grandparents owned in New York

  • @darkomatterus309
    @darkomatterus309 7 років тому +2

    "Smelled sweet, like rotting fruit"
    So using that as a pickup line.

  • @allandale12
    @allandale12 8 років тому +1

    Do you ever intend to do another Narrators UNighted or 24hr livestream like that again?
    I mean you have most likely already anwsred this question but I still want to know. But it was a pretty epic thing...

  • @girlnannapolis
    @girlnannapolis 8 років тому

    Love it!

  • @Cumquat88
    @Cumquat88 8 років тому

    Would you ever do any Clive Barker? Like maybe books of blood or something? Loved the imagery in this one btw!

  • @PrototypeFTW
    @PrototypeFTW 8 років тому

    I needed some creepiness because my next UA-cam video is going to messed up/ creepy! Amazing voice and story :)

  • @Ryan-tx8qc
    @Ryan-tx8qc 8 років тому

    I'm so glad you don't add jump scares at the end of your videos lol.

    • @A.R.T.4
      @A.R.T.4 8 років тому

      He did for a couple though and one of them was a thunder crack, that's why I was wary

    • @nickhannah9543
      @nickhannah9543 4 роки тому

      @@A.R.T.4 They Come. I remember that thunder at the end. Startled me when I first heard that story XD

  • @danielrolon56
    @danielrolon56 8 років тому

    I'm supposed to go hunting this weekend at my family's cabin... I don't want to go anymore

  • @NIGHTFACTORfilms
    @NIGHTFACTORfilms 8 років тому

    This is some Lovecraft stuff, i like it

  • @Breadstew
    @Breadstew 8 років тому

    Great story

  • @artemisarrow179
    @artemisarrow179 8 років тому +1

    I thought my computer was glitching when your voice started, glad I wasn't mistaken. Still, thanks for the plethora of content MCP! I always listen to your stories while I cook alone :-)

  • @MyPuchalski
    @MyPuchalski 8 років тому

    Not bad just the right sense of urgency and foreshadow

  • @Bendaman2001
    @Bendaman2001 8 років тому

    Great video.

  • @TheFrostHellfire
    @TheFrostHellfire 8 років тому +1

    The sound of rain in the background made me have to look out my window twice :|

  • @commonlowlife8085
    @commonlowlife8085 8 років тому

    so good

  • @7firefly763
    @7firefly763 8 років тому +1

    Reminds me of "The Horror From The Vault"

  • @brndy79
    @brndy79 8 років тому

    You are Amazing! I Love your Voice!

  • @benjaminwalker1400
    @benjaminwalker1400 8 років тому +1

    +Mrcreepypasta can you make a story about the Wendigo

  • @emo-yandere-chankitty6367
    @emo-yandere-chankitty6367 8 років тому +1

    wait- i just watched a video of MDE in a cabin.... and creepy things kept happening to them- o-o

  • @mads5376
    @mads5376 8 років тому

    This one reminds me of the pasta Arizona, one of my favorites. They're both as scary as they are interesting.

  • @captsavajho4352
    @captsavajho4352 8 років тому

    The narration started a bit early, but still a great job:)

  • @TrillTierJakal
    @TrillTierJakal 8 років тому

    kinda sounds like the monster thing from that tombs story. I can't remember the name. but it messed over a whole town

  • @hidinginyourmind
    @hidinginyourmind 8 років тому +18

    Snoo-PINGAS usual I see.

  • @SayLona
    @SayLona 8 років тому +1

    CRIMSON, 11, JOY, THE SMELL OF DUST AFTER RAIN

  • @hopernim
    @hopernim 8 років тому

    guys, try not to listen while in the toilet. I swear i almost dropped my phone in the toilet bowl. xD

    • @skitzer6969
      @skitzer6969 8 років тому

      I already dropped it 2 times

  • @Slashthekitsune
    @Slashthekitsune 7 років тому

    Man, someone wrote a 30 minute read about the letter h.

  • @stefanmorris652
    @stefanmorris652 8 років тому

    yay!!!participation!!!

  • @najdaraidy863
    @najdaraidy863 8 років тому +1

    Where is this view? it's fokin beautiful

    • @BlackSwanNews17
      @BlackSwanNews17 8 років тому

      It looks like Australia but I'm just guessing or some where in Central America

    • @4m4n40
      @4m4n40 8 років тому

      The Amazon.

  • @renegadewolf961
    @renegadewolf961 8 років тому

    It's the tree animation from The Tree Keeper!!!

  • @MagicalTalkingPony
    @MagicalTalkingPony 8 років тому +1

    The story clips into the end of the intro, just a heads up.

  • @KingofHearts67
    @KingofHearts67 8 років тому

    This is weird after listening exclusively to creepsmcpasta

  • @rookiejohansom4135
    @rookiejohansom4135 8 років тому +1

    Hey man its ok thier are spider demons in my closet!!

  • @soyboydivision
    @soyboydivision 8 років тому

    The gif thingy in the video of the tree was used ijn another one of his videos, something about a treekeeper I think? It confused me for a second and I thought that I've already watched this one, xD

  • @sillyteeth1320
    @sillyteeth1320 8 років тому +2

    how can i upload a creepypasta?
    i know the submissions are down so, what do i do?

    • @unixone7558
      @unixone7558 8 років тому

      +Molly 663™ Two solutions:
      1) Wait till submissions are back up and running.
      2) Perhaps find a narrator who takes direct submissions.

    • @atti_tube
      @atti_tube 8 років тому +1

      There's a website called the Creepypasta Wiki where you can upload it. The mods are relatively lenient on content, and it just has to be somewhat good (and you have to follow certain upload guidelines, like correctly categorizing your pasta and other things) for it to stay.
      I made an edit to my pasta "The Ringer" in late 2015, and somehow or another, CreepsMcPasta narrated it. I got pretty lucky to have had that happen to me.

    • @sillyteeth1320
      @sillyteeth1320 8 років тому

      omg i love the creepypasta the ringer.
      THANK YOU!!

    • @atti_tube
      @atti_tube 8 років тому +1

      +Molly 663™ Thanks, and no problem. Glad to have helped.

    • @Firstleg42069ha
      @Firstleg42069ha 8 років тому

      +OMGitsGhastly | тяєкк I love the ringer really REALLY good work!

  • @Amber_Phoenix
    @Amber_Phoenix 8 років тому

    Awesome story! Can someone link me some similar ones? I love these Lovecraft-ish type of creepypastas.

  • @andrewmcmanus8695
    @andrewmcmanus8695 8 років тому

    great

  • @michaelhaley1652
    @michaelhaley1652 8 років тому

    Does this mean your not doing the creepypasta challenge stories

  • @GigaLigma
    @GigaLigma 8 років тому +1

    Huh, the thing in the thumbnail looks kind of like the Nightmare from Metroid Fusion.

    • @andrewboswell4722
      @andrewboswell4722 8 років тому +1

      i was thinking the exact same thing lol. was searching the coments to see if anyone else thought the same.

  • @dovecrowlightandarkss2938
    @dovecrowlightandarkss2938 8 років тому

    mrcreepypasta you are good

  • @nybaldeh4038
    @nybaldeh4038 8 років тому

    Btw i just subscribed to this channel

  • @ironcladhammer8331
    @ironcladhammer8331 8 років тому

    The monster reminded me of the Thing by John Carpenter

  • @Jeanette_B_Andersen
    @Jeanette_B_Andersen 8 років тому

    Story time!