I listened to the entire story before I realized that you wrote it-I listen to a lot of classic ghost stories and I assumed this was one! It’s very well structured and while listening I felt like I was watching a movie in my head. The characters of the two brothers are clearly defined and the contrast between them gives an enjoyable tension to the narrative. 👍👍
Your new story was really enjoyable, it was well put together, the brothers characters were well defined and the narrative flowed naturally. What is also incredible that you wrote this quickly over Christmas....wonderful. Many thanks and look forward to your 2025 video...Happy New year to you and family...tf
2 This was a wonderful; story, Chris. A really excellent one! I've been looking forward to hearing an original story for some time and I've enjoyed your stories that you've written before. Well done! I wish you and Oana and Onyx a very wonderful New Year. Thank you for this.❤
Dear Chris, another one of your fabulous, original stories! I I’ve been waiting for it since you first announced your intention to share it. Really wonderful! Thank you for dazzling us once again!
First, I have to comment on how pleased I was to discover a real, human narrator. The narration was superb. Secondly, the story was well written, interesting, and unfolded as a quality period piece. Quite enjoyable. Thank you.
This is the first time for me on your Channel and your story is my first listen- I must say, Well done! I really enjoyed the story from start to finish and will now Subscribe and listen some more. Thank you and I hope to hear much more from you in the future-Happy 2025 to you as well-Cheers🎉
I listened to the entire story before I realized that you wrote it-I listen to a lot of classic ghost stories and I assumed this was one! It’s very well structured and while listening I felt like I was watching a movie in my head. The characters of the two brothers are clearly defined and the contrast between them gives an enjoyable tension to the narrative. 👍👍
Thank you, Donna. Your comments on my writing are deeply appreciated.
Your new story was really enjoyable, it was well put together, the brothers characters were well defined and the narrative flowed naturally. What is also incredible that you wrote this quickly over Christmas....wonderful. Many thanks and look forward to your 2025 video...Happy New year to you and family...tf
I'm glad you enjoyed it! As a rule, I can write a story in two days. I start without a storyline and let my imagination take over. Happy New Year!
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This was a wonderful; story, Chris. A really excellent one! I've been looking forward to hearing an original story for some time and I've enjoyed your stories that you've written before. Well done! I wish you and Oana and Onyx a very wonderful New Year. Thank you for this.❤
Thanks, Lorraine! And wishing you the very same for 2024!
Dear Chris, another one of your fabulous, original stories! I I’ve been waiting for it since you first announced your intention to share it. Really wonderful! Thank you for dazzling us once again!
Wow, thank you, Mary!
Excellent story. Written in the style of M.R. James, E.F. Benson, LeFanu and the other early authors of classic English ghost stories.
Wow! I am truly honoured to be compared to these literary masters. Another story on Saturday night. Many thanks!
GOOD STORY, GOOD ENDING.
HAPPY NEW YEAR☆☆☆☆☆☆☆
Thankyou, Barbara! Another story from me Sat night.
I so love the new story. You my dear friend are a fantastic storyteller. Happy New Year.
Thank you! You too, Kari, Happy New Year! And the very for 2025.
This is wonderful channel! 🤩🤩🤩
You are so kind. Happy New Year.
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I think it's a wonderful story!👏
Thank you, Racheal!
Brilliant!!Thanks so much Chris 😀👍
My pleasure, Claire. Thank you!
First, I have to comment on how pleased I was to discover a real, human narrator. The narration was superb. Secondly, the story was well written, interesting, and unfolded as a quality period piece. Quite enjoyable. Thank you.
Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. Another story on Sat night!
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Thank you, Kristina!
I thought it was a wonderful story. Thankyou and all the best to you for 2025
Happy new year! And thank you, Pamela. Another story hopefully later this week.
This is the first time for me on your Channel and your story is my first listen- I must say, Well done! I really enjoyed the story from start to finish and will now Subscribe and listen some more. Thank you and I hope to hear much more from you in the future-Happy 2025 to you as well-Cheers🎉
Thank you very much Jackie. Really appreciated. Another story this Saturday night!
I recognise that music from an Album by Yoko Ono.
It must only be similar as the music is copyrighted by a guy in Ukraine.