@2:05 - Wouldn't all clothes be handmade and fitted to each individual? I haven't even heard of anything with wheels in this story! It's not like they have factories mass-producing S, M and L shirts, pants or dresses. 😂
it stuff like them really thinking it was going to be ok to portal 300 LizardMen or 300 of anything just randomly appearing out of thin air even 300 gold coins would cause a ruckus! SMH Like come on it’s not smart and makes it seem like the author is just trying to stretch the story out.
I can’t stop listening for unknown reason. So many plot holes. So many contextual errors. Author knows nothing about combat. The flow is stop and go traffic. Sometimes even the action sequences are like getting stuck at a red light for two cycles. This story gives me road rage but I can’t quit it.
just skip to “the mortal mage 🧙♂️ “ smh 🤦🏾♂️ So disappointed i shyt “WE” invested dozens of hours days and in the end you copOut for the money grab so sad 😞
So happy I began listening to this series ❣️ highly recommend it 🤓💯👌🏻⭐️
I'm digging the whole BT Narro library lately. The mortal mage series was really good as well
Absolutely brilliant really good audiobook Big thank you 😊 from a very happy 😆 listener KAZ🇬🇧❤️😃
These books just seem to get better as they go on
I feel like I'm listening to a anime script..a good story, BUT, real pitchy. No dragons but the flow. DRAGS ON. B-
@2:05 - Wouldn't all clothes be handmade and fitted to each individual? I haven't even heard of anything with wheels in this story! It's not like they have factories mass-producing S, M and L shirts, pants or dresses. 😂
Wish the other books were on here lol
When is Bason going to learn how to meditate?
Hello I wanted to comment because I have read every by BT. Narro. books and they are all great. He is my favorite author
I feel bad for Effie she doesnt have any luck with men
she will , i read the last series first on accident. she has a good role in the last series .
here , these are out of order but the new books are here.ua-cam.com/video/xYgvLK8RQ4o/v-deo.html
Oh man, I despise her too much to feel sorry for her
it stuff like them really thinking it was going to be ok to portal 300 LizardMen or 300 of anything just randomly appearing out of thin air even 300 gold coins would cause a ruckus! SMH Like come on it’s not smart and makes it seem like the author is just trying to stretch the story out.
I keep waiting for this to get better but it hasn’t. It’s actually become dumber so I give up. I can’t finish .
Whaat are u listening to
How come no one at academy makes walls to block arrows?
And why can’t Basin determine that runes could be used to recall portal locations?
set speed to 1.5 - then story flows w/ less sleeping
i often find myself doing this , good advise .
you don't "notch" arrows you nock them, I've heard that shit for over 20 hours over and over in this story
Potatoes-Patatas
Then why you keep listening? Another critic who thinks they can do better
I can’t stop listening for unknown reason. So many plot holes. So many contextual errors. Author knows nothing about combat.
The flow is stop and go traffic. Sometimes even the action sequences are like getting stuck at a red light for two cycles. This story gives me road rage but I can’t quit it.
I like t 345
A whole hour just to get to the damn point REALLY BRO REALLY 🤦♀️ WTFFFFFFF LOL
I enjoy your books I like the hero group . BUT You do like to Stab, Burn, Shoot with Arrows and Starve the heroes of your stories Often.
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Every time this author compares someone to a dog I inwardly cringe.
just skip to “the mortal mage 🧙♂️ “
smh 🤦🏾♂️
So disappointed i shyt “WE” invested dozens of hours days and in the end you copOut for the money grab so sad 😞
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