Fanboy Rewrites "Spider-Man: Homecoming”
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- Опубліковано 9 лют 2025
- A few changes can turn a good movie into a great movie.
I thought Spider-Man: Homecoming was a good, fun movie. However, I think that there were some choices made that held it back from being one of the best iterations of Spider-Man of all time. The characters were well done, but the situations that they were put in didn't feel like they fit in a Peter Parker/Spider-Man movie, and this is my potential solution to that.
I'm not saying that my version is perfect. I'm only human, I know that it has flaws. I just wish to express how I would have changed the film if I had the power to do a final rewrite. If you have any suggestions, or think of something I could have done better, let me know in the comments below. It's my first time, plz be gentle.
Also, if you wanna know more about how I felt about the moving, check out the review of Spider-Man: Homecoming that I did with my buddy Storytelling Vlaire:
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COPYFREE NATION
“Alt-J - Left Hand Free (Johnson Somerset Remix)”
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I love your channel and I think it’s a crime you don’t have at least 10000 subs.
troyoboyo17 you made it amazing, spectacular, sensational
Make the amazing Spider-Man 1 and 2 good. Please.
Dude that's amazing
Cars 2
After you put the "-" between Spider and Man I knew this was gonna be good
Respect the hyphen
@@nicholaskhanyola989 Don't forget the hyphen between "Spider" and "Man"
-Yuri Lowenthal
@@nicholaskhanyola989 s-p-I-d-e-m-a-n
Clear alpha move
"You´re just a kid, you don´t know anything about responsability"
Damn man
Honestly, I prefer the original far more.
Responsibility*
Ngl, I feel like that's something too harsh for Tony to say, especially to Peter, but I get what he was going for
@@jamessheerin121 I didn't like the original, I would have preferred if Tony said "If you're nothing without the suit, why did I give it to you?" But the original was still okay
honestly, if he felt that way, then why would he give him the suit?
“I’ll never look the other way again...” damn bro, this got me emotional and it would actually make more sense when we consider the past than just thinking that it’s Peter doing it because he things he’s supposed to because of his powers.
that part is awesome
"why are you crying so loud"
I would have said that vulture said it’s not your problem annymore and then peter after say it’s my problem now
The Spectacular Spider-Man used this exact quote. Probably where he got it from
I'm such a Spider-Man bitch
Just watching this and imagining that version gives me chills
@@faty0shylive514 Também não, como assim?? Br tá em todo lugar mesmo kkk
never heard of the term “spiderman bitch” but i am one
“I shut off the wifi” Omg I’m dead 🤣
“Let’s fucking kill Karen”
@@CenoriaWoah *LETS FUCKING KILL KAREN
This would have had me dying in the theater
@@everythingalldwight4939 lol same
Are u?
In this movie Karen deserves to be called karen
"Let's fucking kill karen"
Ooh Shit Good One My Guy.
Lmao
I love how you have way more focus on Peter’s self doubts. I was never into Spidey that much until Homecoming came out and heavily boosted my interest in him. I loved the movie but I agree that there should have been more personal consequences. It sounds bad but I almost wish that the world was more cruel to him in a way? What I’m saying is my main draw is how Peter is just this lonely dude with the most shit luck of anyone in existence yet he still not only finds time to be a super hero, but also finds time to help others with their small problems as well.
Yesssss! Absofuckinglutely. My favorite thing about Spider-Man 2 (my favorite movie of all time lol) is how Peter's life just fucking suuuuuucks all the time and that it really feels like the universe is out to get him. It really makes it feel so much better when he still chooses to do the right thing.
I agree, and I really hope that they will go a bit more in that direction with Far From Home. I'm sure dying will have to take a huge mental toll on Peter, and then add that to the likely chance of Tony dying in Avangers 4, Peter is going to have some serious emotional baggage, and I really hope that don't underplay this.
*world is out to get him*
*has a girlfriend*
*job*
*best friend*
*goes to school*
Tom
*goes to school*
*has a best friend*
Watch The Spectacular Spider-Man.
@@leafyishereisdumbnameakath4259 I second this
This is the man marvel needs
Isac Hyden He obviously seems to know how to write one
@Isac Hyden he doesnt need to be a director 😂 there is obviously more roles that he would fit perfectly with, maybe more of a screenwriter/editor role bcuz he seems to do perfect with a pre-wrote story and changing it
BEFORE THE MOVIE CAME OUT EVERYONE DIDN'T WANT UNCLE BEN BUT NOW THAT THE FRICKING MOVIE IS OUT EVERYONE IS MAD THERE ISN'T UNCLE BEN
Edit: HOLY F*CK THANKS FOR THE LIKES GUYS LIKE JEEZ THANKS SO MUCH
Edit 2: *Jeez I never use that many caps.* *And again, thanks for the likes.*
Lol I wanted uncle Ben from the start. It's a big part of his character
I didn't want the same story of the death of uncle Ben because I already know it. But I would like to see the *impact* of the death of uncle Ben
U know what i mean?
It's not that people didn't want to see Uncle Ben, it's that people didn't want to watch his death scene again. Uncle Ben is the spark that hits Peter to become Spider-man, the reason why he goes out and helps people with his gift. At least his name being dropped is enough to satisfy the fact that it's what drives him. I'm not mad that he is not in the movie, Marvel still have years to explore the Spidey lore, so it didn't bother me that much.
Sharpie Shank We didn’t want another big death sequence. We never said we wanted just some random little easy to miss reference.
"I will never look the other way again." I remember that from the Spectacular Spider-Man series. Still gives me chills. Great vid man
Who opens the door but Oscar Nominated Micheal Keaton.
OH SHIT THATS THE VULTURE
Birdman
Who is also Batman
Okay this is epic
BUT
I think that the Spider Man movies should at least acknowledge the duality of Uncle Ben and Tony Stark
7:33 I would've liked it better if he really just got in the bus, with his suit on. It'd be really funny to see normal people react to having Spidey sit next to them, like that elevator scene in Spiderman 2 lol.
Ooh I like that idea. Sort of like the fast travel in Spider-Man PS4 with the subway
troyoboyo17 YES
Now that is Spider-Man looolll
I'm getting reminded of Sick Spidey in TASM 2. Plus they actually did exactly that in Spider-Man PS4.
"You're just a kid you don't know anything about responsibility."
I felt that.
I honestly loved every second of this. I especially liked the ending, and the post-credits scene. Would've loved to see the movie this way. Also, the idea of Pete talking out loud to the suit like a vlog is a really, really great idea.
Thank you! That idea was actually the think that got me making this video, believe it or not. I was talking with a friend about the movie and one of us thought of that, and I was like "oh shit fam" lol. But thank you for the support, I really appreciate it!
Yeah, I didn't want a origin story rehash with Uncle Ben but he should've been at least mentioned by Aunt May and not just briefly hinted at by Peter
Is it so bad that we replace Ben Parker with Tony? Like I understand it isn't faithful to the original comics, but I feel like Tony can somewhat replace that father figure that teaches Peter what it means to be a super hero PLUS it ties Peter to the greater MCU. Having both Tony and Ben in there just seems like oversaturation.
@@prometheus3498 I agree with you. We don't need Uncle Ben in every damn Spidey movie
@@prometheus3498 ben parker was like Peters dad when his parents died so when he died he broke down tony stark is not uncle ben he didn't raise peter from when he was little and teach him responsibility that was ben. Ben is to peter like Alfred is to batman a father figure except alfred doesn't die till after Bruce's career ends
@Goddamn 47 we really don't tbh
Well now May's Ben
I wish that this was the movie man. I love this even more, it feels like Spider-Man. I really loved how the final scene in the movie is just him swinging going back to the Tobey films and then just freeze framing that Amazing Fantasy #15 I wish they did that so bad that would have been the best. I like Homecoming for what it was and it was the best Spider-Man movie since Spider-Man 2 but I agree that it needed some changes. Great re-write man, I hope Far From Home has more elements of the Spider-Man described here.
Jesus Christ, this isn’t a rewrite by a fanboy- it’s a movie script and I want it to be real. >:C
Except it's almost the same script.
It's sad how a fanboy can make a script better and more comic accurate to spider-man better than a multi million dollar company ever did smh
@@fightingmedialounge519 that's the point of a rewrite
@@enigmaticbeing7703 Easy to do when you don't face the consequences of getting it wrong.
@Demonetization
Those were my sentiments are hearing his "rewrite" to the scene that pays homage to "The Final Chapter."
Okay I loved that credit scene. Also, I mostly agree with you, but I am part of the "Mary Jane should be Mary Jane" group.
Mary Jane isn't in the movie...
@@no-nd4tq Mary Jane was Michelle, she said that near the end of the movie
TheGreatEgon No, Mary Jane is not in the movie, but Michelle is.
Mary Jane Watson was the love interest of the Sam Raimi films, known as MJ.
However, in homecoming, when Michelle refers to herself as MJ, she is referring to HER initials of Michelle Jones so fuck you.
Next time learn your comic book facts before you argue with someone on the internet.
Hanzii r/gatekeeper
@@no-nd4tq ... do you think Sam Raimi *invented* MJ? It's really obvious that Michelle was intended to be MJ. If not, then why the hell would they even bring it up in the movie? Her initials are such a dumb thing to bring up in the movie if she *wasn't* meant to be MJ. It was obviously meant to be a surprise at the end of the film (which is why they didn't give her the instantly recognizable name "Mary Jane Watson"). Also, you didn't even bring up any facts from the comics in your argument, so you telling me to "learn my comic book facts" doesn't even apply to anything you said. Next time *you* want to argue with someone, and I mean *anyone*, make sure you can actually notice the blatantly obvious. (Notice how I didn't randomly say "fuck you")
"You're just a kid, you don't know nothing about responsibility!" honesty, yeah, I think I prefer that over the other line good job dude
Original writers: Mr. Stark..I don't feel so good...
Peter: what did you do?
Ned: *I shut off the wifi*
I LITERALLY CHOCKED ON MY CEREALS I NEED HELP
@zaydaygaming no? But thanks i guess LMAOOO
@@localbisaster I like that this implies that you’ve been choking for 2 years or so.
@@ShibuNub3305 well yeah
I didn't get the joke and I still don't
*”your NED evolved into a CISCO”*
this just feels like me trying to explain infinity war to my brother before endgame
Instead of Ned, I would have actually preferred MJ as the best friend.
Bary Baragon yeah too bad micheal jackson js dead he would have been perfect
Flynn van Riet pretty sure he was talking about Michael Jordan
Are you guys serious? He's talking about Mick Jagger, obviously.
Guys It's obvious he's talking about Micheal Jordan
Malaska :D whoosh**?
"I will never look the other way again" that line alone is my favorite.
My favorite change was Peter saying "I'll never look the other way again" I'm reference to Uncle Ben. I especially liked that you said it wouldn't be a flashback
1. It would have killed the pace
2. Its kinda nice to have to think about it for a second rather than just call attention to it. Subtle Easter Eggs are more fun
The suit never made Peter parker spider man, the hyphen between spider and man has a lot of meaning behind it. They need to focus on it.
you just blew my mind with that statement
How? It's a pretty basic statement.
@@fightingmedialounge519 Dude or Sis, it's my opinion based on my own feelings. No one's alike, plus, I didn't ask for anyone's hottake. But whatever...
@@ShadowGirlie Except you said it wasn't opinion. So which is it. It's fine if you don't think this is a good spiderman movie. I just wouldn't call that a fact.
@@fightingmedialounge519 oh shut up and quit being a baby.
Now I’ll be eternally depressed this wasn’t the original movie.
PD: The “I shut off the wi-fi” part was bloody brilliant.
I’m pretty satisfied with what we got but I like the idea of him talking himself.
I'd rewrite Flash, personally.
i actually think the current version of flash is better than the amazing spider man and ofc the sam raimi (that flash version was trash) nowadays bullying isnt as physical as it used to be. so honestly this incarnation of flash is perfect. if i should change something i would make flash a little bit smarter maybe make him the reason they won that school competition.
@@benjaminstampe4886 Flash is Flash. He was in my eyes a good character. And if you think that was bullying in the movie, it wasn't. It was a tiny asshole screaming penis. Take it from a guy who took most of his bullying verbally. Some beat ups. And, it's always going to be physical. It still is. But a brainer society shows a different kind of bullying that 30 years ago.
Spectacular Spider-Man flash is the best flash
Hes not as much as a cliche anymore which is good
@@fishgilbert6875 Warning: sorry for the long response:
Why is it good? A cliché is still a cliché and all that that implies, but can still be written well. It still can be interesting as it was made in the past. His character was one of my favourites in Spider-Man lore simply because he felt real and genuine. He really felt like an high school kid, the popular kid figuring his shit out and discovering there may be more to life than what he's doing.
Besides, this new Flash is a cliché too. But instead of choosing to write the character with the most potencial and best character dynamic since what was interesting between Flash and Peter was the physical bullying. Making Flash a science dork along with Peter makes that relationship basically unconsequencial! Peter is a nerd, no secret there and since it's not a battle of brawn but of brain, Peter can easily beat him intellectually. As a brawn battle however he must contain the secret that he is in fact Spider-Man! So that's lost.
They choose to write the rich snoby verbal bully, if you see, is only an annoyance. An asshole who calls Peter: Penis! That's not bullying! I've been verbally bullyed. That's not it, I'd sooner punch him in the nose God damn it!
Why he has any social power is astonishing to me beyond belief! Maybe it's an American kid things, because would he be in my country, we'd all punch that annoying ass in the nose! Anyway, I hope you understand my wish for Flash to be Flash since he never was in the movies.
That ending you've describe and emphasis on "great power great responsibility stuff" is beautiful
Saw your reddit post about your videos and they are great man keep it up.
Oh my god. This....I would have ADORED this movie if you had wrote it. Marvel needs to hire you ASAP. 👏🏻
I see what you are trying to get at with these changes, but I think that it would hamper my favorite theme of it. I just love how relatable to a kid like me, and the struggles that teenager can go through.
He doesn’t go through any struggles that a teen in high school would go through ditching detention mixing random chemicals in the lab and ditching your excursion team will you get you expelled
Not being able to help you friends because of problems you put on yourself can be relatable.
I do like this rewrite mostly, but you must keep Ned, Mary Jane CANNOT BE THE BEST FRIEND, mostly because Ned is awesome in every way, the one thing that stood out to me that I 150 percent agreed with was the intro to the intro of the vulture because that would show why he built a suit with that type of design, because he had experience in that category I really would like to see that
I would have liked it if Tom Holland's real life best friends (who is actually named Harry) played Harry Osborn.
I have to admit after watching this, i like Homecoming a lot less. SOOOO many missed opportunities for great action and character moments. Also i like how there were actual serious consequences for Peter's actions in your version
This would be a really great film! I loved Homecoming and personally I liked it the way it was, but I would so enjoy your version of it. I loved the cameo of Cisco and Barry though ;^)
Thank you! And believe me, I liked Homecoming a lot, I think I just had some high hopes after Civil War. I'm a massive Spider-Man fan, and I really thought that this movie would basically be a live action "Spectacular Spider-Man" which I consider the definitive Spider-Man and will always be my favorite version of the character. But some of the character choices they made kept it from being that.
And if you liked the Cisco and Barry cameos, be sure to stick around for my next video **not so subtle hint wink wink**
my favorite part of all this is the decathalon team losing all because Peter didn't show up. That's how you write a Spider-Man movie. 👏👏👏👏
Uh, you know that wouldn't make sense since there are others in the team who are well prepared for the decathlon. So if one does not come up, the whole team loses, don't you think its rather irrational?
@@avanishdutta2658 nope, the team is well prepared but so is every other team from all the other schools. Peter is they’re key player and he’s literally the smartest kid in their class. I don’t think the team would blame him for losing but they should’ve been quite odd at him for not turning up which lowered their chances. In the beginning of the comics, Peter gets hates from his peers and is known as a snub & anti-social due to his absent behavior while in school/college. Would’ve been nice to see that in movie.
@@nabilibrahim3488 Good point. Adding a bit more scenes would had more impact to the story. They could literally continue peter's story and make him a hero in his own right. He already is, but people just keep saying he is not spidey but ironboy whereas he defeated vulture and mysterio without any help. He is learning to come out of iron man's shadow to become a hero he is. Even before he was approached by stark, he was already a hero saving new york. The suit never matters, if you are nothing without it, then you shouldn't be a hero.
I can't believe that you have such a small following. You're so damn funny. You're awesome dude !
The part I loved the most was when you talked about Spidey launching himself across the river. I could picture this in my head so incredibly well, and it was epic as hell.
Can you just do this for like... All the movies? Like, not all the Spider-Man movies, all the movies. Just all of the movies ever. Please?
Lol ok I'll start from the beginning: Fanboy Rewrites Roundhay Garden Scene: first of all, we need some sound and color. The black and white aesthetic works for Spielberg but here it just feels.. old. It also needs to be longer. Nobody's going to spend $15 to see a 2 second clip over and over. So let's add some extra stuff to pad our that runtime. I say we introduce a new character named Peter Parker and have him-- Oh shit it's just Spider-Man 2.
@@troyoboyo17 Lol
This is a better rendition would’ve loved this if it was a movie
I really enjoy these changes, although I LOVE Homecoming, as I identify a lot with this Peter, and this has become for me, my favorite Spidey, but I agree with what you did, a little less Marvel, more Peter Parker, but I’m hopeful for Far From Home, as it will be not just a continuation for the MCU, but a more personal view of Peter & Co. and have some great character development
We've already seen Uncle Ben killed twice we don't need to be even reminded of it just because it's a new continuity, we already know what motivates Peter.
Amazing Concept rewrite!!!!
Loved the original but your version tho....
Now only if we can get enough exposure then you could get a co-writing credit on the sequel....
Came here from the Reddit Post.
+DaRedeemerSpawn4 Thank you! Haha, I wish. That would be a dream come true.
I wish this was actually homecoming. Marvel needs you on their team lmao. And that credit scene HOLY SHIT
I GOT CHILLS
^ that my friends, is how you know a movie is good. And I wish 100% that movie writers start taking notes
Dude this was freaking amazing!!! I loved this so much! How did I not find this sooner? Please do more of these!
Holy crap thank you! I really appreciate that!
troyoboyo17 no problem man! This was dare I say better than the real thing
So you made karen
Act like an human karen....
AWESOME!!!!! I wish the movie would have played out this way tbh, we needed a uncle Ben moment.
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This sounds amazing and I fucking came with the oscorp thing because it sounds so amazing
“I will *NEVER* look the other way again”
Okey I loved Homecoming, but I absolutely adored most of the changes you made! Great job!
The only two things I would leave out would be: the first scene with Toomes and the general, way too similar to the 2002 Spider-Man Osborn scene where they have to take the project "back to formula"; and second it would be the post credit scene, it's a good idea, but it would box them in the same arc as the previous movies with the Osborns as the big bads and the files for the Sinister Six are way too much like the TASM movies, just introduce the villains organically instead of via folders. Also-also while I would like the Avengers tower to become Oscorp, it's pretty clear Disney wouldn't give Sony that much screen-time, as the tower would feature in a lot of movies and TV shows; I would love if it'll become the Baxter building tho, now that Marvel has the Fantastic Four back!
This was AWESOME. Way better and way more epic than the original Homecoming. Love the way you incorporated the thought bubbles, and this was way more true to the character. So good
Super cool channel, reminds me of Nando v Movies. Wish you got some more attention man. Keep making great stuff
But does he like jazz?
I've been uncertain whether I want the Baxter Building or Oscorp but the way you described your vision for the post-credits scene sold me. I adore these changes, it really pulls away from the Spidey being mini Iron Man.
I agree with everything except for the Karen because I actually really like the character and I do like it when Peter talks himself but Karen's actually a cool character so I thought maybe at first you were right Karen will be annoying but it wouldn't be caring it would be another AI I was thinking since Tony has an AI called Friday he would give Peter annoying AI called Monday and then Karen pops up after they hack it
Does SPIDER-MAN Really Need An A.I, Tho?-
@@Mamamiawhataspicymeat-a-ball no but Peter is more different in the MCU then the comics I do feel like eventually we won't need to care anymore but this would show Tony's caring nature 4 Peter cuz he see him as a son and Tony won't always be around to talk to Peter so that's why he would put the AI there
@@Mamamiawhataspicymeat-a-ball Well?
Holy shit dude this is genuinely amazing. I love how you managed to incorporate so many things into the story while keeping it pretty much the same.
Oh course the Flash hates him. 😂
Great content 👍
The movie really lacked consequence and mature/serious undertones that Spider-Man usually has
This is perfect but I would make one minor change. I would give Peter three potential love interests. Gwen, the nerdy, snarky friend who secretly has a crush on him. Liz Allen (basically the same role she played in the movie). And Mary Jane, the mystery girl who Aunt May introduces him to. They can introduce MJ in the second movie or replace her arrival with the Aunt May finding out that Peter is Spider-Man scene. Aunt May can off handedly mention her when May and Peter are having Chinese Food. I don’t care who any of them are played by but I would prefer it if Liz Allen stays mostly the same.
Yeah I can get behind that. I don't think we necessarily need Gwen in this movie series since they did everything they really could with her in TASM, but I agree to you about MJ
This... This is the plot to spectacular spiderman.
MJ is Michelle now. Mary ain't coming back bro.
TK Noodles well Spectacular Spider-Man is as good as you can get for a Spider-Man story so it's not such a bad thing to steal a thing or two from there
@@BangBangspideyproduc mary jane introduces peter to mj in the comics originally. It is not stolen.
Perfected. Actually put meaning into lifting the rocks thank you.
Just imagine #WarnerBrothers hiring this guy to make #DCEU ... We might get decent #DC movie for a change...
Bitman why the fuck are you hashtagging random words and why hashtag at all in a youtube comment section
Wonder Woman was pretty good but, yeah you're right
omg ikr
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Love the change for Vulture being a prototype for Falcon, but just about all the rest of this either isn't important or is less interesting (imo). For instance, cutting out the confirmation that this is the first movie Spider-man whose aunt actually knows what he does at night makes the movie worse, not better, and while a sinister six movie could be cool, setting it up after one movie is insane, as it would be doing both Kraven and Otto a major injustice to make them anything less than the main villain when they're introduced, since the former has gone criminally long without a movie appearance, and the latter is comic Spidey's arch-nemesis, whose last film incarnation, though necessarily not badly done, is still very different most portrayals of the character.
Happy 7 years to this video!! :D
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There are theories that the avengers tower was sold to the FantasticFour. I really like that theory so maybe have the Oscorp tower overlooking the newly sold Avengers tower?
As someone who really liked Homecoming and usually defends the movie when it is being hated on, I think I preferred your version. I mean there are a few things I think I would of kept the same, but their all things I was fine with in the actual movie so I wouldn't mind too much if they were changed, but good rewrite. I really enjoyed this
This video feels more nostalgic than the entire homecoming movie. I like how this version of spidey faces much more stress inducing problems than what we got in the movie and I think this should have been used as well due to a much better spidey character progression put into it.
I actually almost wanted to cry when aunt may reminded peter about ben. That was truly heartwarming.
I got chills when you said “I Am Spider-Man”
"flash breaks his leg"
HOLY SHIT ITS AGENT VENOM TIME
I really like the “you don’t understand responsibility” because it’s like even though bens word are true he can’t act on them properly so even though his intentions are good, they aren’t responsible
"They console their differences"
Ned and Peter start making out
I love how you can literally hear the smile behind his voice when he talks through his re-write. Makes it much better content when he genuinely cares and enjoys this. Not to mention it was a pretty dam good re-write
I saw you pulled some elements from the Spectacular Spiderman universe and maybe from CW's Flash 😀
someone explain to me why "You're just a kid. You don't know anything about responsibility." hit me wayyy harder than "If you're nothing without the suit then you shouldn't have it."
I really want Daredevil to crossover with Spider-Man.
Hey guys, this is very long, but I came up with an (in my opinion) perfect MCU Spider-man 3 script, that I think will make all the fans happy, at least to some degree:
At the start of the movie, Peter gets arrested after being framed by Mysterio for his death and countless others. In the beginning, he’s fleeing back home, but his house is already surrounded by SHIELD agents or some kind of military. In this version, SHIELD doesn’t know anything about Beck being a bad guy, as far as they know it was all real, because the only people knowing were Skrull Maria Hill and Nick Fury, we can say they went on a mission in space, leaving Peter with no connections and no one to trust except his friends and family. Peter will try to escape and there will be a short chase scene between Peter and SHIELD, but at last, the Avengers come (at this point probably only Falcon, Bucky, and War Machine) to finally arrest Peter, he tries to fight, but at last, they capture him with some kind of a special device (idk, you figure it out). This is the part of the first act where we could really see some good drama that a lot of us have been waiting for. Peter gets sent to the RAFT, or some other high-tech security prison. In here Peter is at his lowest, he will speak with Aunt May over the prison phone, and they will both share a scene of Peter breaking down, confessing about not saving Ben and how he’s been grieving about him, how Stark was his new mentor but he failed him too, and how he was in denial about his feelings about Ben’s death. There will be a flashback, back to his death, and also May’s reaction to first seeing Peter in the suit after Homecoming (WE NEED THESE SCENES EXPLAINED, Watts, you cant just show us May finding out and then nothing, give us some drama). We will get some prison scenes of Peter not able to sleep, him mourning and stuff, also we could see some prisoners that Peter arrested, trying to kill him in the prison. By the beginning of the second act, we will see Peter truly standing up for himself, and deciding to do what’s right, he will escape the prison, but not all Spider-man being strong and stuff, he wants to keep his identity a secret, at least in front of the prisoners, he will use his technological knowledge to bypass the prison’s security and create a security breach, making him the only escapee. At this point, he will go into hiding, create his OWN Spider-man suit, but not like his homemade suit, like an actual suit with no Stark tech, and he will start looking for ways to get clean. The government will hire Kraven the Hunter, in this universe some kind of a Russian or super skilled agent to hunt down Spider-man. By this point, I don’t know what more to add to the story, but I know how I want the movie to end. I want Peter to get clean of any criminal charges (you could even set up Matt Murdock by him being his lawyer or something), I want nobody to know that Peter is Spidey, but do it in a way that it was the medias fault and not some Dr. Strange mind whipping thing, I want a bigger villain to be introduced pulling the strings behind his framing (Wilson Fisk?, Norman Osborn?) and Kraven trying to kill Peter, rather than arresting him (maybe Kraven could be a double agent), and I want Peter to graduate from high school, and at the end of the movie (because MJ is largely absent from the movie), make her first appearance after the whole “Home Run” story be with her iconic red hair (which we’ve seen Zendaya rock), meeting Peter in the door with the iconic line, or something super similar. By this point, Peter will be a college student, independent of any Stark related stuff, broke, but more motivated to do the right thing, he will also make his suits homemade, similar to the suit in the PS4 game. All we want is a good Spider-man story that hits the original elements while keeping it fresh in this world of the MCU, give us drama over comedy.
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Your version of ending was particularly good. It do really gives a hype for the next movie
If only we lived in a world where this movie did exist
I totally missed the flash joke with the cut out of the flash😂, but this does sound like a better version of the movie, but some of these thing just werent posible bc they didnt have they rights for sonys characters yet
I think the "I shut the WiFi" joke would've been the best joke of the movie
Thumbs up just for the -
This is so great, I really wish we got something like this with all the personal consequences/problems because that to me is what makes peter so relatable.
One thing I think would be cool if we got to saw was in the end, instead of peter getting the suit back from tony, he crafts his own original suit because in act 3 he learns that he doesn’t need the high tech suit to be Spider-Man, all of his powers are from within so for him to get back the same suit kinda neglects the lesson he learned in my opinion.
I love this. I hate that they left out uncle Ben. We've seen the whole origin enough but you have to at least mention him
Nice ideas, but i prefer the original. I feel like making Karen so annoying and nearly kill Peter, kinda hurts Tony's character. I like how Peter looks up to him so much, and Tony is there to save him when needed. That wouldn't make sense anymore, nor set up peter to be an Avenger as well.
Why would “The Flash” even need a car. XD
Yeah man, gotta get dat money.
I like your ending of recreating that comic cover a lot better than the actual ending, i really can’t imagine this new dynamic where aunt May knows peter is Spider-Man.
This honestly is a _superior_ Spider-man film
I love these rewrites dude. You should make more of them for the rest of the MCU and DumpsterCEU. But I mainly am commenting to say how fucking ridiculously dope your idea for a post credit scene is on here. When you said "Oscorp" I actually did yell "Oh Shit!" out loud. Wicked awesome kid.
*BEST CREDIT SCENE EVER*
He knocks on the door to see Batma-wait, no-Vulture
Your Ned has become a Cisco 😂I'm dead
Man this was WAY WAY better than Homecoming. I always thought the movie was overrated but all the lil changes of story,theme, character arcs, and meaning to the film makes this movie better
This isn’t necessarily a re-write but how would you suggest that Spider-Gwen enter into the MCU? Have a Gwen Stacey arc within Spider-Man or keep it separate? Loved the video btw!!
Ooh that's a good question. It's kind of tough, since it doesn't seem like they're planning on using Gwen in the MCU for a long time (if even at all), and Spider-Gwen is so much cooler when you know what happens to the original one, you know? So ideally, yeah I would like an arc with Gwen and her death (even though we already got that done so well in TASM2, maybe Spider-Gwen is Emma Stone again or something) and the introduce her through parallel universes, sort of like how I would want the X-Men introduced. TBH tho I don't really know if Spider-Gwen is necessary in the MCU, since she's pretty standalone and I think what they're doing with her in the animated stuff looks awesome, so I'd honestly prefer just a solo Spider-Gwen animated movie in the same style as Into the Spider-Verse.
Good question though! I'd be interested to see if the MCU even bothers bringing in parallel dimensions or not, since that's not as big of a deal with Marvel as it is with something like DC.
troyoboyo17 I agree! Without the original Gwen’s death (not including in TASM) it wouldn’t feel the same. But I do hope that Spider-Gwen gets an animated film at the very least. Her portrayal in the into the Spider-verse trailers just makes me want to see her story played out on screen even more.
Personally, I'd replace Betty with Gwen and have Peter take her to the dance and somewhere during the events of Spider Man 3, Gwen gets bitten by a similar Spider to the one that bit Peter.
I keep watching this to this day... its beautiful
This is what I'm going to imagine happened before FFH
I'm a simple man. I see Spectacular Spider-Man clips, I leave a like