Hey everybody, thanks for watching! Sorry I screwed up the uploading of this, I'm just an idiot that's all lol. I really appreciate everybody waiting so long for this, I know I'm wayyy passed when I initially said this would be out but I'm hoping the wait will be worth it. Anyway, let me know in the comments what you would have changed about Justice League, and also what I should rewrite next!
Holy shit you're so kind thank you so much! As for Ragnarok or Infinity War, there's not much I can think of in terms of changes that would warrant a whole video imo just yet, but I do have some ideas in terms of improving them, so maybe before Avengers 4 I'll do like a speed rewrite of some MCU movies with just smaller fixes
@@troyoboyo17 18:12 - Everybody's been in the costume for the whole time, they never reffer to each others by their real names. 3:28 - Wonder Woman looks to Flash and uses her last breath to say "Run Wally, run." wat.
@TheSpeedMason Shit that was a mistake on my part. But you could argue that since she helped Bruce put together the league that he told her about his identity, but she chose to continue calling him flash out if courtesy until the stakes got too high
It blows my mind how these so called “screen writers” can’t make stuff like this. Dude this is spot on, maybe if they did something like this we wouldn’t have such a messy Dceu. Well done
Anton J.L I’d be fine with flashbacks, honestly, as long as they acknowledge the existence of Jason, Tim, and Dick, because in most movies, they don’t like to, which isn’t the greatest.
Man justice league was great, wasn't it?! So glad they managed to pull through and give us a great set up for years to come! No critical flop here, no siree!
When I heard wally west, I was like 'y u be replacing my boy barry' then i heard your reasoning and understood. I like the story you set up in this video. You basically set up barry flash's intor in a solo flash/later JL movie(if this was the real JL movie, id be hyped to see him come out of the speedforce or whereevre). I thought that was really cool. Also, I like all your post credit scenes, i like the green lantern one the most. With the green lantern one, you could do a movie based on the green lantern corps starring hal jordan(training her), killowog, the fish guy, maybe jon stewart, and sinestro. I think that'd be neat. It'd be based on the idea of a villain who killed the previous owner of the ring. You could build the sinestro corps in a later movie.
@@onnimannimaki8846 Yea, but they could always do a villain that requires more than one gl. I didn't read the gl comics so I don't know how they did it
Dude, I'm a comic nut. Everything about this was insane and I loved it so much. First thing that made me die, Wally West as the Flash, ummmm, hell yeah?! Having Wally as the flash ties it to what most people were used to at one point and then was broken, Wally West was the flash and had been forever, he had the cartoon and years of comics. Second, ERADICATOR!!!! Holy hell, yes. A name drop like that would kill everyone who knows what it is. The character building in this is so good and the backstory of the characters is wonderful. This idea makes Superman, you know, Superman. I swear I cried at least three times, the name drop of Wally, "I'm gonna need a phone booth", and the Jessica Cruz ring end-credit scene. It's so good. Here's hoping Henry Cavill will live to be in the Man of Steel sequel .
Mike Myers I can't say He IS the flash. He most likely is the well known and the fastest Flash but that shouldn't take away the credit that Barry is the Main character as Flash
@@sleepless5240 Technically, while not being the first, Barry is practically the one who created the speed force, the one who has the mantle of Flash most often and is probably the most iconic one. The popularity of Wally West can largely be attributed to the cartoons. Barry IS the main Flash. Who was first is not really that important. Jay Garrick was first but he is certainly not the "main" Flash.
That’s actually a great idea of how Justice League would’ve been. I love how you made the story look more better. Plus, Shameik Moore would’ve been a great Wally West.
Also during Wally’s flashback sequence, Barry Allen should’ve been played by Lucas Till or Ryan Gosling and Iris West should’ve been played by Amber Stevens West or Gugu Mbatha-Raw.
And he would be added on the list of actors that were in both Marvel and DC movies along with Zoe Saldana, Ryan Reynolds and Michael Keaton (because Into the Spiderverse)
@@troyoboyo17 what you pretty much set it up with using the tracer character from overwatch also I can't believe an actual youtubdr replayed to my not so popular comment
As someone who actually didn't mind Justice League, this ''script'' is so amazing that it makes me like it so much less, and wish that this is what we got. Please make videos like this for upcoming DC movies so maybe people working on those movies can take something away from these videos.
I honestly think the most important piece in any story, are the characters. If you can love and feel a connection with the characters in a movie, show, or book, then you naturally want to spend more time with them as they go throughout their tale. That’s why I love your vision of a Justice League movie more than the actual movie itself. You explained how you wanted the characters, and you made them balance and contrast one with another. You had Batman- suspicious, dark, and brooding. You had his bright side Superman- kind, charismatic, and a leader. You gave the Flash more development in your 30 minute fantasy, than was given to the character througout their whole movie. I really dug what you did, and I wish producers, directors, etc. would do the same. Thanks if you read this whole thing.
"Humans... they were not the cowering wretches we were promised. They stand. They are unruly, and there for can not be ruled... To challenge them, is to court... DEATH."
"The humans. They are stronger then we thought The Kryptonian wasn't their last hope There are others. Atlanteans. God's. Speedsters. A Dark Knight. Our armies are not enough. Earth is defended. No one is strong enough to defeat them." "Darkseid Is."
It’s unfortunate there’s so many movies/tv shows that fall short for a lot of us, but on the bright side it gives us all an easier way to test our creativity.
One change I would've made So do you remember that scene in BvS when Flash from the future went back to warn Batman about Superman? Well what if instead of traveling to the middle of the Justice League film, he goes to that moment to warn Bruce
@Jonah Lancaster Zack synders version of JL was meant to explain that part of the movie and that was the intention to warn bruce about superman going rogue after being influenced by darkseid. Something like that.
three things happened today: 1. my friend said that justice league was better than infinity war. 2. my friend was hit by a car. 3. I lost my drivers license.
If I were a director I'd hire you to make this film! Take my money! This makes more sense and I agree that the individual stories of each hero should be introduced before the large group movie. Did Cyborg not make the boom tube disrupt the hive to entrap Steppenwolf since he got transported back to Apocalypse?
Thank you! And my thought is that it would be something he has to consistently be keeping active, and once he starts putting Yuga Khan into the motherbox he stops creating the field.
@@troyoboyo17 Ah that makes more sense! I saw your Aquaman quick preview and I really enjoyed that movie so I look forward to your final thoughts on it!
An amazing idea for the storyline. Loved every moment of it. Standouts had be Wally FREAKING West, Eradicator, "Darkseid is" and Aquaman being a hardass drunk.
your version of the DCEU's movies is so fucking awesome, as a comic fan is so fantastic to "see" how we couldve had a fantastic justice league movie and know that IT CAN BE DONE, now we just have to ask for it
First off, WOW, just WOW. This was legit amazing. And yes, this version of the movie I would have definitely appreciated seeing. And wow does it ever atone for my issues with Superman's characterization in Man of Steel. Still, unless I missed it, but how would Diana have known what would happen when Wally started running? Unless the time travelling was an accident...
First of all, thank you! I really appreciate you saying that! And yeah the time travel was a total accident, it would be sort of like in the first season of the Flash where Barry accidently travels back in time a day because of the tsunami
"Keep the para-demons swarms at Bay". LOL.... Great video and concepts, your opening rocks hard. In the right hands this would have been light years ahead of what we got.
Bro your insane. I loved every part of it. I was in the feels from just your script alone. And some how you made characters like flash, aquaman, cyborg feel like they already had solo movies. You made their characters perfectly in a team up movie. Everything was insane bro.
I'm speechless. All I can say is that your rewrites are insanely good and I hope you one day get to write your own films and have them produced for the world to enjoy.
The "Darkseid is" line still gives me chills. Also, a super-technical fanboy question, that you probably didn't fully work out while writing this, I was wondering how the Time Travel in this movie works. When Wally returns is his consciousness returning into younger Wally? Or is older Wally returning in person? If so, what about younger Wally? If you hadn't already thought of that, a fix I might suggest is for older Wally to talk to his own younger self instead of Batman. And then, younger Wally can go over and talk to Batman and the league. I'm thinking older Wally reaches out to younger Wally like how we saw the Flash scene in BatmanvSuperman, like through the Speedforce. So there isn't any actual time travel more of a space-time zoom-call if that makes sense. This way you can avoid any time-travel plotholes.
Getting every single detail of this into a movie would be pretty great and sounds like something worth watching. The "Holy shit, you're..." is also probably the most surprisingly great thing about this.
Imo a new post credits would be really good for BvS: *in the office of a tall building* Lex jr: I’m sorry, they were too strong to handle... *with a shaky voice* Unknown silhouette: Fine. I guess I’ll have to try myself. You’ve disappointed me, *son* *Some bald dude slowly turns in his chair and menacingly looks at the camera*
23:00 The "Save one" line fits Batman way better than Superman. Bruce knows how it feels not to have to tools to be a hero, Clark doesn't. Any pep-talk of this calibre he could give sounds condescending and pedantic; it's a god telling you "Yeah, I know you are limited, puny mortal." If you're keeping the line, leave it to the Bats as in the original movie
Justin Crumley Meh, Batman is kind of obsessed with saving as many people as he can, which is kind of his flaw. I think that line would fit if we’ve already established that flaw of Batman (Which doesn’t fit the DCEU since he kills, but wtever) and have his character grow(?)
One thing I’d enjoy is Bruce knowing Barry. Like Wally explains all about his mentor, not knowing that Barry worked with Bruce before, and everything that Wally said was already known
If this was EXACTLY how the movie turned out I would like it more than avengers: infinity war and probably avengers: Endgame . Which is like impossible for me. Except for your mid credit scene it would be even better if instead of black canary; (which they probably can’t use because the arrow verse is already using her) maybe it would be Hal Jordan (green lantern)
My version of the darkseid PC scene, Darkseid: You were defeated by earthlings. Steppenwolf: They had a kryptonian, but I'll try again. Darkseid: No... I'll do it myself Steppenwolf: No! No! No! *Screen cuts to black and Steppenwolf is beheaded.
or screen shows an over the shoulder view from darkseids perspective and then red omega beams do the zig zag shit and the screen turns black just as it is about to hit Steppenwolf
I love the idea of Wally West being apart of the Justice League! If I was doing a Flash movie about his Flash here's a few things that it would include: everyone in Central City is known by The Flash, have Linda Park and Tina McGee as Wally's inner circle, and a few legacy villains. Also, Barry Allen is alive but is no longer an active hero.
This is actually pretty damn good. It saddens me we didn't get any of this. I'm not a fan of the whole Genesis chamber idea because it opens up a sort of can of worms, but I always played with he idea of Superman either coming back to life on his own (as in, his body simply needed healing and went into a krypto-coma-like state), or through some other means we got this delusional, mindless, brain-damaged Superman, but I just didn't know how to tie that into the already hated character they'd been building up since Man of Steel. More destruction from him? He wasn't gonna become the most loved superhero at that rate. But you did a good job, The Flash coming back and starting over was a clean way to do it.
MY MAN!!! * Aquaman voice* ! Take a bow sir! This was soo well done! I loved how you gave so many moments which humanized all the characters. That's one of the biggest things that is missing from the current DC movies. None of the superheroes seem like real people. And imagining the Superman-Cyborg moment and the last fight where they all fight together, and the dialogue, and the montage after it... all of those gave me the chills! And I loved the idea of all the credit scenes! And you really know your stuff, if you're starting with Jessica Cruz and not any of the other Lanterns. Now this legit makes me feel pissed off because this is a re-realization of how WB squandered such a great opportunity
I love your version, I feel that stepin wolf kinda lacks screen time which makes the villain seem weak, especially when he's defeated by Superman. But your script is WAAAAAAAAY better then the actual movie. Your characters seem more believable and true (if batman got his own movie to really understand this universes batman).
0:36 “I wanted to see if there was any ‘Ultimate Cut’ or something, but we got nothing” (well thank god we got Zack Snyder’s Justice League in 2021 showed THIS version of a JL movie could work)
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn! Why didn’t WB think of this!? As a comic nut this all make sense! I have goosebumps throughout the vid man! This def deserve my like and subs
Damn! I like your take on this story quite a lot. Wally being the up and coming hero works well. But I’ll admit you actually got me misty eyed when you had the scene between Cyborg and Superman. Well done!
I fucking LOVE how excited you got at key points. So many video essayists nowadays feel so dethatched, but damn, hearing how excited you were made me tear up a little.
i really liked justice league and yet THIS IS ALL IT SHOULDVE BEEN AND MORE. This is the movie I want to see, featuring ALL of the post credit scenes please
I really love your description of what went on with after the meeting. What you wrote about regarding Superman/Clark going over all the victims of his battle with Zod is such a Superman thing. I mean I know that Zach Snyder had an idea of seeing Superman slowly turning from sad and unconfident to the hopeful and inspiring symbol that we know and love. I wanted to see that transition and in that scene you are describing not only does he apologize to Vic but he realizes he needs to do this for him to move on. His interaction with Wally is spot on with a more confident Superman who is friendly and approachable and make people feel in a way special. Superman inspires Wally to be the hero Superman feels he can be.
Tbh i love your First idea for the Post Credit Scene...but besides That i would add an Extra scene of the Camera Zooming into a cell inside Arkham asylum, Cut to Black and a Maniacal Laughter ensues...
This video is fucking amazing, but there's a small plot hole. Up until Wally takes off his mask, everyone has been in costume, correct? So, how did Diana know to say "run, Wally run," at the beginning of the film if Wally never revealed himself to anyone?
Sebastian W. Goooooooood point! Maybe instead of Alfred talking to Batman when he's on the rooftop it's Alfred AND Wonder Woman so they already knew his name and where he worked
I want to say the reveal is not really about each other finding out who the other is but just using that as a social bond to make them more relatable to each other...the bonus is more so for Wally sake who is a fan boy who gets to learn who Batman is.
Acrtually its not a plot hole i mean in act 1 vic and wally were attacked by a parademon and was struggling, up until batman showed up to help them out with a fuckig grappling hook. And then they talk, bruce says "come with me we need you" vic says "fuck this shit i'm out" and then vic meets diana. So that means bruce and diana were there for vic and wally, i mean bruce ust talked about recriuting them right? so that mean they already knew who they were. case closed...
Another plot hole: how do you explain the sudden MASSIVE spike in Superman's power level such that he's actually able to break through a shield that was taking hits from a guy stronger and more durable than him, Doomsday, in BvS. That thing is at least comparable to Captain America's shield and having NO explanation about how supes is just suddenly able to break through it would be like Thor suddenly getting a massive power spike with no explanation and breaking through Cap's shield with his face. XD
How have I not seen this until now? Of all the fan rewrites of this movie that are out there, I honestly think this may be the best. For real, amazing job with this. I’m definitely subscribing
It should've been directly from JL origin. They should've replaced Aquaman with GL, and saved Aquaman for his solo movie, then introduce him in part 2. Keep Steppenwolf as the main villain, and save Darksied for part 2.
I like how Barry goes back in time and they have to bring him back as a team n work together and when Superman can’t even take steppen wolf down to realize it didn’t matter if they brought Superman back n have their problem solved
I have my own Idea for a post-credits scene, here it is: We go to Gotham, as Batman is patroling the streets from the roofs of several buildings until he gets shot in the leg. As he lands the camera goes to show us who did it. A man wearing a hoodie topped off with a gray vest, Brown leather fingerless gloves, Black pants badazzled with a crap-ton of things and a faceless helmet in gray-ish Red. To put it simply, The Red Hood. LIVE ACTION ADAPTATION OF UNDER THE RED HOOD BABY!
I have one issue when the the Wally west thing Wally west is probably the best flash (In terms of just how well known he is, Or at least his stories are) He should’ve been Bart Allen
The problem with that is that impulse usually works best when his character arc is becoming more responsible(since he’s kind of a bratty character). Maybe if we got a standalone flash movie with a bart side story it could work, but as is...
In the original movie, when Batman stops the robber on the rooftop, and they talk about how Superman is gone, is a perfect scene. It shows that the crime community also grieves Superman. The only thing that I would change is that Batman has run into this robber before, like they’ve “met” several times, so they can have a little back and forth moment. So Batman is like, “you really don’t give up do you”? And the robber is like, “are we gonna talk or are we gonna fight, because I’d love to have a lengthy conversation”. So they start fighting, Batman is obviously winning but he lets the robber get the upper hand just a little longer. So this entire time Batman is also having a conversation with Alfred in his earpiece, because he’s trying to get Alfred to identify the robber, for reasons. So Alfred is like the robber is named Guy Gardner. And Batman is like, “alright put him in the file” so now guy is making jokes like, “are you letting me beat you”? And Batman just goes, “you talk to much” and knocks him out with one punch (like in the justice league comics)
Sooo... green Lantern set up. I would change one thing save that conformation till the End\Mid credit scene. Alfredo: Sir, do you remember that Criminal that you fought prior to formation of your playgroup? Bruce: The Justice League. And I just fought two Alien Warlord. Of course I remember, Alfred: Yes... BATMAN: BECAUSE I'M BATMAN Alfred: Ugh. Anyway a confirmation, with multiple sources, deems him a Guy Gardner. Suspenseful music making one feel like he's gotten a revelation or sense of Awe. Bruce: And this is important why? That last line to anger Fans of GG and irony as they would have the card a second later saying "Gardner will return"
Why would Batman need to ID this guy if they've already fought several times before? I mean surely he would've already done that on the first robbery they meet.
Boy!! You've nailed it. Future script writer. I really liked the way you connected JL. Audience loves a movie which they can relate to, and you've done as well. Bravo amazing script
This is really awesome! I liked everything. The one thing I wish we saw more of is some action from Batman. He didn’t really have a moment to shine like the rest of the heroes, and I think he deserves some bigger role as a staple of the DC universe
Hey everybody, thanks for watching! Sorry I screwed up the uploading of this, I'm just an idiot that's all lol. I really appreciate everybody waiting so long for this, I know I'm wayyy passed when I initially said this would be out but I'm hoping the wait will be worth it.
Anyway, let me know in the comments what you would have changed about Justice League, and also what I should rewrite next!
I would have changed the writter.
Holy shit you're so kind thank you so much! As for Ragnarok or Infinity War, there's not much I can think of in terms of changes that would warrant a whole video imo just yet, but I do have some ideas in terms of improving them, so maybe before Avengers 4 I'll do like a speed rewrite of some MCU movies with just smaller fixes
@@troyoboyo17 18:12 - Everybody's been in the costume for the whole time, they never reffer to each others by their real names. 3:28 - Wonder Woman looks to Flash and uses her last breath to say "Run Wally, run."
wat.
@TheSpeedMason Shit that was a mistake on my part. But you could argue that since she helped Bruce put together the league that he told her about his identity, but she chose to continue calling him flash out if courtesy until the stakes got too high
@@troyoboyo17 Ah okay, thanks for the explanation.
It blows my mind how these so called “screen writers” can’t make stuff like this. Dude this is spot on, maybe if they did something like this we wouldn’t have such a messy Dceu. Well done
Maybe not bud we'd have a fusion between the Flash zeries and the dceu which will make 0 sense.
Well he doesn't have to deal with WB's bs
To be fair, he has no budget conservation's or executive oversight
It’s warner brothers fault do some research
Broli Black no it isn’t a fusion
Dude. Warner Bros should hire you. This is great. Just great. I got the feels during that cyborg/superman scene.
That makes two of us
Three of us...could have make sups more likeable and humanlike by this scene for the haters at least... absolutely beautiful idea it is
I teared up, I can't lie
SaiyanQuad92 Honestly!! That shit was it
9+ of us agree
Wally got a C- in the project where he interviews frickin Superman.
That is impressive.
I love the idea Arthur curry is hungover over floating in the ocean
Me too 😂😂😂
@@orbitalpunch4711 Amen to that. In fact, I love the idea of Aquaman being this Raving drunk.
@@RedYoshi-ct1wx
Lol yea
Evacuate the city...
Engage all defenses...
AND GET THIS MAN A JOB AT WARNER BROS!
Engage all defenses*
Hell yeh
plz yes omg this guy is amazing
Completely agree
As long as Snyder isn't there, it should be better
Doesn't matter if your late.
This is some "quality" ass content.
Also I kind of got tired of rewatching your Spiderman and DCEU again and again
That's cause you're a fucking moron.
@@Auron1Roxas2 fuck you seriously fuck you you don't need to call people on the internet morons for no reason
@ProperDuction ' '/ i doubt it
@@Auron1Roxas2 Alright, an idiot over here I see.
"Darkseid is" that gave me chills, no joke. You should work for the DCEU
"...but first, I'm gonna need a phonebooth."
That one line would have made the actual movie 1000 times better.
This is a good joke
Deadass.
New characters introduced:
Nightwing
Green Lantern
Jessica Cruz (Lantern)
Darkseid
Black Canary
I'd love to see these in the DCEU
Agree but i would introduce kyle raynor as a green lantern and young justice the 1998-2003 version than titans you know the grown up version
I also agree but I wanna see not just Nightwing, but all the Robins, especially Jason and Tim, who are rarely in anything.
Clay i argee but i want to introduce tim drake as robin and have flashbacks for dick and Jason
Anton J.L I’d be fine with flashbacks, honestly, as long as they acknowledge the existence of Jason, Tim, and Dick, because in most movies, they don’t like to, which isn’t the greatest.
@@clay7152 Could be that in a canon Batman movie Bruce gets Tim to be a Robin. Jason has been dead for 5 years and Dick is already Nightwing.
You see for superman to be Clark again he needs to think about his rod
Jesus Christ
HAHAHA Comin down his rod RobotChicken Reference there!!!!
Yup, I'm going to pretend this is what we actually got from now on.
Man justice league was great, wasn't it?! So glad they managed to pull through and give us a great set up for years to come! No critical flop here, no siree!
Same.
When I heard wally west, I was like 'y u be replacing my boy barry' then i heard your reasoning and understood. I like the story you set up in this video. You basically set up barry flash's intor in a solo flash/later JL movie(if this was the real JL movie, id be hyped to see him come out of the speedforce or whereevre). I thought that was really cool. Also, I like all your post credit scenes, i like the green lantern one the most. With the green lantern one, you could do a movie based on the green lantern corps starring hal jordan(training her), killowog, the fish guy, maybe jon stewart, and sinestro. I think that'd be neat. It'd be based on the idea of a villain who killed the previous owner of the ring. You could build the sinestro corps in a later movie.
But isn't there one GL per sector
@@onnimannimaki8846 Yea, but they could always do a villain that requires more than one gl. I didn't read the gl comics so I don't know how they did it
@@notthebeastinus2786 my point was that there should be only one GL from earrh at the time
Barry sucks
@@joeker5208 Barry Allen doesn't suck.
Dude, I'm a comic nut. Everything about this was insane and I loved it so much. First thing that made me die, Wally West as the Flash, ummmm, hell yeah?! Having Wally as the flash ties it to what most people were used to at one point and then was broken, Wally West was the flash and had been forever, he had the cartoon and years of comics. Second, ERADICATOR!!!! Holy hell, yes. A name drop like that would kill everyone who knows what it is. The character building in this is so good and the backstory of the characters is wonderful. This idea makes Superman, you know, Superman. I swear I cried at least three times, the name drop of Wally, "I'm gonna need a phone booth", and the Jessica Cruz ring end-credit scene. It's so good. Here's hoping Henry Cavill will live to be in the Man of Steel sequel .
Mike Myers I can't say He IS the flash.
He most likely is the well known and the fastest Flash but that shouldn't take away the credit that Barry is the Main character as Flash
@@internetgoat4831 well I mean your right but Barry is not the main flash Jay Garrick is, as he is the first version of the flash in the DC universe.
Cybernet3 By Main I mean the Iconic and pretty much who made the name of the Flash as well known as it is
@@internetgoat4831 ok I understand now thank you😅😁
@@sleepless5240
Technically, while not being the first, Barry is practically the one who created the speed force, the one who has the mantle of Flash most often and is probably the most iconic one.
The popularity of Wally West can largely be attributed to the cartoons.
Barry IS the main Flash. Who was first is not really that important. Jay Garrick was first but he is certainly not the "main" Flash.
“I have a lot of questions, but first, I need a phone booth” that gave me chills
That’s actually a great idea of how Justice League would’ve been. I love how you made the story look more better. Plus, Shameik Moore would’ve been a great Wally West.
Plus, Superman should come back alive with a mustache.👨🏻💙❤️💛
Also during Wally’s flashback sequence, Barry Allen should’ve been played by Lucas Till or Ryan Gosling and Iris West should’ve been played by Amber Stevens West or Gugu Mbatha-Raw.
And he would be added on the list of actors that were in both Marvel and DC movies along with Zoe Saldana, Ryan Reynolds and Michael Keaton (because Into the Spiderverse)
At 12:56 they don't actually give wally the tracer, instead wally doesn't take it from batman and just says I'm already tracer and runs at the demons
God damnit
how do you delete someone else
@@troyoboyo17 what you pretty much set it up with using the tracer character from overwatch also I can't believe an actual youtubdr replayed to my not so popular comment
@@VladsyourDad you can't but good thinking
Fractal Vlad i believe it’s called murder.
As someone who actually didn't mind Justice League, this ''script'' is so amazing that it makes me like it so much less, and wish that this is what we got. Please make videos like this for upcoming DC movies so maybe people working on those movies can take something away from these videos.
I honestly think the most important piece in any story, are the characters. If you can love and feel a connection with the characters in a movie, show, or book, then you naturally want to spend more time with them as they go throughout their tale. That’s why I love your vision of a Justice League movie more than the actual movie itself. You explained how you wanted the characters, and you made them balance and contrast one with another. You had Batman- suspicious, dark, and brooding. You had his bright side Superman- kind, charismatic, and a leader. You gave the Flash more development in your 30 minute fantasy, than was given to the character througout their whole movie. I really dug what you did, and I wish producers, directors, etc. would do the same. Thanks if you read this whole thing.
Now I’m even more disappointed with justice league after hearing how good it coulda been 😩😭
"Humans... they were not the cowering wretches we were promised.
They stand.
They are unruly, and there for can not be ruled...
To challenge them, is to court... DEATH."
Fine, I'll do it myself
"The humans.
They are stronger then we thought
The Kryptonian wasn't their last hope
There are others. Atlanteans. God's. Speedsters. A Dark Knight.
Our armies are not enough.
Earth is defended.
No one is strong enough to defeat them."
"Darkseid Is."
GOD DAMN THAT WOULD BE A HECKIN AWSOME MOVIE
Edit: eyyy I got a heart
It’s unfortunate there’s so many movies/tv shows that fall short for a lot of us, but on the bright side it gives us all an easier way to test our creativity.
When are they going to hire you to do their movies
it's basically what marvel is doing now, they hire a fan to write a new universe.
Vertutame , is it true ? Wow.
One change I would've made
So do you remember that scene in BvS when Flash from the future went back to warn Batman about Superman?
Well what if instead of traveling to the middle of the Justice League film, he goes to that moment to warn Bruce
@Jonah Lancaster Zack synders version of JL was meant to explain that part of the movie and that was the intention to warn bruce about superman going rogue after being influenced by darkseid. Something like that.
I creamed HARD when the old school justice league theme started playing.
*screamed
three things happened today:
1. my friend said that justice league was better than infinity war.
2. my friend was hit by a car.
3. I lost my drivers license.
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Theman Joe Thank You
It could be, fuck Whedon
Man sucks your friend got hit by a car :/ also getting your drivers license I hope tmrw is a better day
Tell your friend karma is a bitch (Kidding hope he feels better)
If I were a director I'd hire you to make this film! Take my money! This makes more sense and I agree that the individual stories of each hero should be introduced before the large group movie. Did Cyborg not make the boom tube disrupt the hive to entrap Steppenwolf since he got transported back to Apocalypse?
Thank you! And my thought is that it would be something he has to consistently be keeping active, and once he starts putting Yuga Khan into the motherbox he stops creating the field.
@@troyoboyo17 Ah that makes more sense! I saw your Aquaman quick preview and I really enjoyed that movie so I look forward to your final thoughts on it!
An amazing idea for the storyline. Loved every moment of it. Standouts had be Wally FREAKING West, Eradicator, "Darkseid is" and Aquaman being a hardass drunk.
21:37 that legit nearly made me cry. A Perfect superman moment. I wish this could have been the actual movie
your version of the DCEU's movies is so fucking awesome, as a comic fan is so fantastic to "see" how we couldve had a fantastic justice league movie and know that IT CAN BE DONE, now we just have to ask for it
"Run, Wally. Run." *BAD. ASS.*
Nicolas Nick no it’s what they always say in the Flash TV show: Run, Barry, Run
TheMajinVegetable yes but also it’s in the comics
First off, WOW, just WOW.
This was legit amazing. And yes, this version of the movie I would have definitely appreciated seeing. And wow does it ever atone for my issues with Superman's characterization in Man of Steel.
Still, unless I missed it, but how would Diana have known what would happen when Wally started running? Unless the time travelling was an accident...
First of all, thank you! I really appreciate you saying that!
And yeah the time travel was a total accident, it would be sort of like in the first season of the Flash where Barry accidently travels back in time a day because of the tsunami
I just remembered hese weren’t the actual movies and now I’m sad
I would like to hear your “New Frontier” adaptation
2 minutes into the rewrite and I already want to give you my money😂😂😂
"A rooftop streets away"
*picture of Pierce*
If you have to ask, you're streets behind.
"Keep the para-demons swarms at Bay". LOL....
Great video and concepts, your opening rocks hard. In the right hands this would have been light years ahead of what we got.
Your animations are more entertaining than the entire suicide sqaud movie.
This fanfalm made me cry the MUSIC the emotional. You need to go to Hollywood
Bro your insane. I loved every part of it. I was in the feels from just your script alone. And some how you made characters like flash, aquaman, cyborg feel like they already had solo movies. You made their characters perfectly in a team up movie. Everything was insane bro.
I'm speechless. All I can say is that your rewrites are insanely good and I hope you one day get to write your own films and have them produced for the world to enjoy.
"Holy shit you're Bruce Wayne!" I laughed too hard.
I really wish this was the Justice League movie that happend so I could watch clips of it on UA-cam for several minutes.Good job!
The "Darkseid is" line still gives me chills.
Also, a super-technical fanboy question, that you probably didn't fully work out while writing this, I was wondering how the Time Travel in this movie works. When Wally returns is his consciousness returning into younger Wally? Or is older Wally returning in person? If so, what about younger Wally?
If you hadn't already thought of that, a fix I might suggest is for older Wally to talk to his own younger self instead of Batman. And then, younger Wally can go over and talk to Batman and the league. I'm thinking older Wally reaches out to younger Wally like how we saw the Flash scene in BatmanvSuperman, like through the Speedforce. So there isn't any actual time travel more of a space-time zoom-call if that makes sense. This way you can avoid any time-travel plotholes.
*Superman should’ve been interviewed by Freddy Freeman*
5:22 Excellent reference sir, you are streets ahead of the rest
I would personally go with a slightly older Barry allen because i think wally west should be kid flash in the teen titans or something
Getting every single detail of this into a movie would be pretty great and sounds like something worth watching.
The "Holy shit, you're..." is also probably the most surprisingly great thing about this.
Imo a new post credits would be really good for BvS:
*in the office of a tall building*
Lex jr: I’m sorry, they were too strong to handle... *with a shaky voice*
Unknown silhouette: Fine. I guess I’ll have to try myself. You’ve disappointed me, *son*
*Some bald dude slowly turns in his chair and menacingly looks at the camera*
This could be intersing
its cool, but lex jr killed his father
Mind Blown. This is just beautiful. I really have no words. You must be really really proud
Love your rewrite videos and you got your inspiration from Nando V Movies, i also love his rewrite videos as well.
same!
@@DeclanCorey I like this one better. Way more entertaining. Only the ending seemed a bit cheesy but other wise amazing
Nando v movies is my fave rewrite!!!!
This was great.
Let's hire Warner Bros. and make a f******* movie out of this
23:00 The "Save one" line fits Batman way better than Superman. Bruce knows how it feels not to have to tools to be a hero, Clark doesn't. Any pep-talk of this calibre he could give sounds condescending and pedantic; it's a god telling you "Yeah, I know you are limited, puny mortal." If you're keeping the line, leave it to the Bats as in the original movie
It's also smart because batman realized once flash saved one person he would then have the confidence to save the rest.
Justin Crumley Meh, Batman is kind of obsessed with saving as many people as he can, which is kind of his flaw. I think that line would fit if we’ve already established that flaw of Batman (Which doesn’t fit the DCEU since he kills, but wtever) and have his character grow(?)
One thing I’d enjoy is Bruce knowing Barry. Like Wally explains all about his mentor, not knowing that Barry worked with Bruce before, and everything that Wally said was already known
Wow. You managed to improve everything about Justice League. Really well done. Good job!
If this was EXACTLY how the movie turned out I would like it more than avengers: infinity war and probably avengers: Endgame . Which is like impossible for me. Except for your mid credit scene it would be even better if instead of black canary; (which they probably can’t use because the arrow verse is already using her) maybe it would be Hal Jordan (green lantern)
Who do you think they would cast as green lantern?
😐 idk lol. Just as long as it's not Ryan remolds again 😜
@@aaljabri2030 Actually, Ryan as Hal wasnt that bad,it was the plot which made the movie a flop...
HASAN Waqar actually ur kind of right; I just think he fits more as Deadpool
@@aaljabri2030 Agreed...Ryan nailed Deadpool
this is so good, i've watched it several times while imaging what the movie would be looked like
My version of the darkseid PC scene, Darkseid: You were defeated by earthlings.
Steppenwolf: They had a kryptonian, but I'll try again.
Darkseid: No... I'll do it myself
Steppenwolf: No! No! No!
*Screen cuts to black and Steppenwolf is beheaded.
or screen shows an over the shoulder view from darkseids perspective and then red omega beams do the zig zag shit and the screen turns black just as it is about to hit Steppenwolf
that was going to happen actually. Not in that way, buy darkseid would kill step and take a boomtube to earth
Darkseid: No...I'll do it myself
*Puts on the Infinity Gauntlet*
@@WigantX thank you I thought I was the only one who saw it
Darkseid: No... I'll do it myself
Thanos: You stole my line. This does not put a smile on my face.
I love the idea of Wally West being apart of the Justice League! If I was doing a Flash movie about his Flash here's a few things that it would include: everyone in Central City is known by The Flash, have Linda Park and Tina McGee as Wally's inner circle, and a few legacy villains. Also, Barry Allen is alive but is no longer an active hero.
I teared up at 3 instances throughout your voiceover. This is the DC remake we need.
This is actually pretty damn good. It saddens me we didn't get any of this.
I'm not a fan of the whole Genesis chamber idea because it opens up a sort of can of worms, but I always played with he idea of Superman either coming back to life on his own (as in, his body simply needed healing and went into a krypto-coma-like state), or through some other means we got this delusional, mindless, brain-damaged Superman, but I just didn't know how to tie that into the already hated character they'd been building up since Man of Steel. More destruction from him? He wasn't gonna become the most loved superhero at that rate. But you did a good job, The Flash coming back and starting over was a clean way to do it.
Step 1: Don't hire Weadon, get someone to respect Snyder's vision
Step 2: Make it 2 and a half hours
Result: Another amazing film like MoS and BvS
ultimateblaze23 bvS And MOS are amazing films to you I thought we all agreed to never mention those movies
THIS WAS FREAKING GREAT THANKYOU
I'm just gonna pretend this was the movie that was released instead of the actual movie lol
I can't remember the movie at all. It was so boring.
MY MAN!!! * Aquaman voice* ! Take a bow sir! This was soo well done! I loved how you gave so many moments which humanized all the characters. That's one of the biggest things that is missing from the current DC movies. None of the superheroes seem like real people. And imagining the Superman-Cyborg moment and the last fight where they all fight together, and the dialogue, and the montage after it... all of those gave me the chills! And I loved the idea of all the credit scenes! And you really know your stuff, if you're starting with Jessica Cruz and not any of the other Lanterns. Now this legit makes me feel pissed off because this is a re-realization of how WB squandered such a great opportunity
Dude you killed it, all we need is green lantern
"Nothing wrong with Ezra miller" "gal Godot is a fucking treasure" whoa this video didn't age well (fr good video, I just thought it was kinda funny)
Ugh tell me about it lol. If only UA-cam's built in editor actual worked I could cut that shit out. Thanks for watching though!
I love your version, I feel that stepin wolf kinda lacks screen time which makes the villain seem weak, especially when he's defeated by Superman. But your script is WAAAAAAAAY better then the actual movie. Your characters seem more believable and true (if batman got his own movie to really understand this universes batman).
0:36 “I wanted to see if there was any ‘Ultimate Cut’ or something, but we got nothing” (well thank god we got Zack Snyder’s Justice League in 2021 showed THIS version of a JL movie could work)
lol "like megatron" that got me ded
AHAHHA OMG THE "thank you" in robot
uHM this entire thing is great... mid credits birds of prey HELL YES... ALL OF THIS
Just discovered your channel and I love your rewrites. Great ideas and you had me crackin' up. Keep up the good work!
Thanks so much!
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn! Why didn’t WB think of this!? As a comic nut this all make sense! I have goosebumps throughout the vid man! This def deserve my like and subs
Damn! I like your take on this story quite a lot. Wally being the up and coming hero works well. But I’ll admit you actually got me misty eyed when you had the scene between Cyborg and Superman. Well done!
Thanks so much!
I fucking LOVE how excited you got at key points. So many video essayists nowadays feel so dethatched, but damn, hearing how excited you were made me tear up a little.
The editing had me on the floor the whole way through.
i really liked justice league and yet THIS IS ALL IT SHOULDVE BEEN AND MORE. This is the movie I want to see, featuring ALL of the post credit scenes please
This sounded amazing! I lost words ...
I really love your description of what went on with after the meeting. What you wrote about regarding Superman/Clark going over all the victims of his battle with Zod is such a Superman thing. I mean I know that Zach Snyder had an idea of seeing Superman slowly turning from sad and unconfident to the hopeful and inspiring symbol that we know and love. I wanted to see that transition and in that scene you are describing not only does he apologize to Vic but he realizes he needs to do this for him to move on. His interaction with Wally is spot on with a more confident Superman who is friendly and approachable and make people feel in a way special. Superman inspires Wally to be the hero Superman feels he can be.
Tbh i love your First idea for the Post Credit Scene...but besides That i would add an Extra scene of the Camera Zooming into a cell inside Arkham asylum, Cut to Black and a Maniacal Laughter ensues...
This video made me smile like hell. It's perfect
I hate these types of videoes because I just end up being like "Damn look how good it could have been" ahah lol. No but seriously great job man
This video is fucking amazing, but there's a small plot hole. Up until Wally takes off his mask, everyone has been in costume, correct? So, how did Diana know to say "run, Wally run," at the beginning of the film if Wally never revealed himself to anyone?
Sebastian W. Goooooooood point!
Maybe instead of Alfred talking to Batman when he's on the rooftop it's Alfred AND Wonder Woman so they already knew his name and where he worked
I want to say the reveal is not really about each other finding out who the other is but just using that as a social bond to make them more relatable to each other...the bonus is more so for Wally sake who is a fan boy who gets to learn who Batman is.
GREAT JOB! I'd pay $20 to see it!
Acrtually its not a plot hole i mean in act 1 vic and wally were attacked by a parademon and was struggling, up until batman showed up to help them out with a fuckig grappling hook. And then they talk, bruce says "come with me we need you" vic says "fuck this shit i'm out" and then vic meets diana. So that means bruce and diana were there for vic and wally, i mean bruce ust talked about recriuting them right? so that mean they already knew who they were. case closed...
Another plot hole: how do you explain the sudden MASSIVE spike in Superman's power level such that he's actually able to break through a shield that was taking hits from a guy stronger and more durable than him, Doomsday, in BvS. That thing is at least comparable to Captain America's shield and having NO explanation about how supes is just suddenly able to break through it would be like Thor suddenly getting a massive power spike with no explanation and breaking through Cap's shield with his face. XD
How have I not seen this until now? Of all the fan rewrites of this movie that are out there, I honestly think this may be the best. For real, amazing job with this. I’m definitely subscribing
I absolutely bloody love this! Damn. I needed this not that Justice fake sh*t .. PERFECT JUST PERFECT. FINALLY FLASH TIME TRAVELING! YES. NICE ONE.
It should've been directly from JL origin. They should've replaced Aquaman with GL, and saved Aquaman for his solo movie, then introduce him in part 2. Keep Steppenwolf as the main villain, and save Darksied for part 2.
Bro the nightwing post credit scene got me so hype!
I like how Barry goes back in time and they have to bring him back as a team n work together and when Superman can’t even take steppen wolf down to realize it didn’t matter if they brought Superman back n have their problem solved
I have my own Idea for a post-credits scene, here it is:
We go to Gotham, as Batman is patroling the streets from the roofs of several buildings until he gets shot in the leg. As he lands the camera goes to show us who did it. A man wearing a hoodie topped off with a gray vest, Brown leather fingerless gloves, Black pants badazzled with a crap-ton of things and a faceless helmet in gray-ish Red. To put it simply, The Red Hood.
LIVE ACTION ADAPTATION OF UNDER THE RED HOOD BABY!
Loved it bro, u and hitop make quality videos, y’all should collab
Duuude I would kill to collab with HiTop
troyoboyo17 don’t forget about my dude browntable
THIS IS TOOO GOOD & WHAT JUSTICE LEAGUE SHOULDVE BEEN ?!!
Warner Bros: write that down write that down
Bro you f*cking nailed it. You made Superman inspiring, every member work and everyone important. You can be a great movie writer or director.
the use of music in this video got me. Idk why I got emotional when the JLU kicked in. Fantastic work.
I have one issue when the the Wally west thing
Wally west is probably the best flash (In terms of just how well known he is, Or at least his stories are)
He should’ve been Bart Allen
The problem with that is that impulse usually works best when his character arc is becoming more responsible(since he’s kind of a bratty character). Maybe if we got a standalone flash movie with a bart side story it could work, but as is...
In the original movie, when Batman stops the robber on the rooftop, and they talk about how Superman is gone, is a perfect scene. It shows that the crime community also grieves Superman. The only thing that I would change is that Batman has run into this robber before, like they’ve “met” several times, so they can have a little back and forth moment. So Batman is like, “you really don’t give up do you”? And the robber is like, “are we gonna talk or are we gonna fight, because I’d love to have a lengthy conversation”. So they start fighting, Batman is obviously winning but he lets the robber get the upper hand just a little longer. So this entire time Batman is also having a conversation with Alfred in his earpiece, because he’s trying to get Alfred to identify the robber, for reasons. So Alfred is like the robber is named Guy Gardner. And Batman is like, “alright put him in the file” so now guy is making jokes like, “are you letting me beat you”? And Batman just goes, “you talk to much” and knocks him out with one punch (like in the justice league comics)
Sooo... green Lantern set up. I would change one thing save that conformation till the End\Mid credit scene.
Alfredo: Sir, do you remember that Criminal that you fought prior to formation of your playgroup?
Bruce: The Justice League. And I just fought two Alien Warlord. Of course I remember,
Alfred: Yes...
BATMAN: BECAUSE I'M BATMAN
Alfred: Ugh. Anyway a confirmation, with multiple sources, deems him a Guy Gardner.
Suspenseful music making one feel like he's gotten a revelation or sense of Awe.
Bruce: And this is important why?
That last line to anger Fans of GG and irony as they would have the card a second later saying "Gardner will return"
William samaras I think it would be better if it’s Catwoman.
Squidward The Scrub, Nando v Movies for the win
Stupid fucking idea
Why would Batman need to ID this guy if they've already fought several times before? I mean surely he would've already done that on the first robbery they meet.
That was sick. The flash parts reminded me of flashpoint
Boy!! You've nailed it. Future script writer. I really liked the way you connected JL. Audience loves a movie which they can relate to, and you've done as well. Bravo amazing script
This is really awesome! I liked everything. The one thing I wish we saw more of is some action from Batman. He didn’t really have a moment to shine like the rest of the heroes, and I think he deserves some bigger role as a staple of the DC universe