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КОМЕНТАРІ • 187

  • @jackadams8648
    @jackadams8648 3 роки тому +1191

    The iconic voice

    • @kangchan6349
      @kangchan6349 2 роки тому +10

      Ikr

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 2 роки тому

      ua-cam.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/v-deo.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazines

    • @josephstalin4202
      @josephstalin4202 2 роки тому +1

      What does it mean?

    • @apscafe
      @apscafe Рік тому +1

      True

    • @apscafe
      @apscafe Рік тому +3

      @@Pedri10_ voice does

  • @lyr1x302
    @lyr1x302 2 роки тому +36

    Hey Gohar, thanks for giving me free essay tips it really helps me with persuasion and with my English class. Great work!

  • @pxntirx
    @pxntirx 3 роки тому +465

    I have been panicking about essay writing lately, thank you so much for posting this video!

    • @goharsguide
      @goharsguide  3 роки тому +80

      Of course! Glad I could help.

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 2 роки тому +1

      ua-cam.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/v-deo.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazinw

    • @zenmindset85
      @zenmindset85 Рік тому +1

      @@Pedri10_ "Gohar" there you go PEDRO💀

    • @staysolidshades254
      @staysolidshades254 Рік тому +5

      Romans 10:9 because, if you confess with your mouth that Jesus is Lord and believe in your heart that God raised him from the dead, you will be saved.dddd

    • @apscafe
      @apscafe Рік тому +1

      Yes it's helpful

  • @milkandgrapes3933
    @milkandgrapes3933 2 роки тому +5

    Man this guy makes me motivated

  • @justinvalloso3919
    @justinvalloso3919 Рік тому +2

    This video helps, I always over think myself when writing essays especially college admission essays, what's important is to be true to myself

  • @user-op5wq7uv1b
    @user-op5wq7uv1b 8 місяців тому +5

    Thank you for the advice, it was really helpful. I won't be applying for college till a couple of years but I still wanted to get tips to prepare in advance. I was starting to doubt myself because of my educational background, but this video boosted my confidence. Please make a part 2

  • @meow6918
    @meow6918 2 роки тому +10

    This man is speed-running UA-cam, I watched Gohar yesterday, at 200k subs, now as of now he gained another 30k subs. Great! Keep up the good work.

  • @tai9165
    @tai9165 2 роки тому +1

    hello, I want to tell you how much ur videos helped me, I am so thankful to youu gohar !!

  • @shleiromar3032
    @shleiromar3032 2 роки тому +6

    Hello Gohar I really love all your video and the amount of information in them thank you so much ,

  • @matthewmichael5484
    @matthewmichael5484 2 роки тому +1

    OMG thank you SO MUCH for this help

  • @kripalamichhane2812
    @kripalamichhane2812 3 роки тому +3

    I got you on my Tiktok ‘s for you page and since then I’m following you everywhere !
    I was waiting for a bit long video and here it is 🥳

  • @MairaRidaa
    @MairaRidaa 2 роки тому +1

    You helped me. TYSM. You are the best 👌 💓

  • @jinabalan8297
    @jinabalan8297 2 роки тому

    Thankyou so much for this video. I really need this

  • @kylehuang9456
    @kylehuang9456 3 роки тому +163

    Thank you Gohar for the amazing advice, it helped me get into my dream school!

    • @kyle.4215
      @kyle.4215 2 роки тому +1

      which js

    • @kangchan6349
      @kangchan6349 2 роки тому +1

      Good job im happy dor you

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 2 роки тому

      ua-cam.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/v-deo.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazines

    • @kyle.4215
      @kyle.4215 2 роки тому +7

      @@markpenny523 bot

    • @Rzacoe
      @Rzacoe Рік тому +1

      Which school?

  • @9-21__6
    @9-21__6 2 роки тому

    Very good description thank u for making this video

  • @vinchei
    @vinchei 2 роки тому

    Thanks Dude!
    It really helped.

  • @navniverma3205
    @navniverma3205 2 роки тому +1

    I subscribed you because your videos are really helpful
    THANK YOU 💖

  • @dawnt1974
    @dawnt1974 2 роки тому

    You're so awesome! Thank you!

  • @fatoumatabintadiallo3922
    @fatoumatabintadiallo3922 Рік тому

    Without doubt you are the best!

  • @watchneuraxz0
    @watchneuraxz0 9 місяців тому

    Hi Gohar! Love your videos and keep it up!

  • @vincefattizzicoldwellbanke3401

    this has helped me a lot with my essay 😃

  • @apscafe
    @apscafe Рік тому

    I really am impressed

  • @fastandbulbous6282
    @fastandbulbous6282 3 роки тому +3

    the king

  • @ibsatassew
    @ibsatassew 3 роки тому +3

    Gohar man!

  • @emperorqianlong6579
    @emperorqianlong6579 3 роки тому +31

    Pls consider a part 2. This is quite insightful

    • @its.twosday
      @its.twosday Рік тому

      EMPEROR QIANLONG IN DA GOHAR COMMENT SECTION!??!!???!?!?!

    • @emperorqianlong6579
      @emperorqianlong6579 Рік тому +3

      @@its.twosday i go to yale

    • @Kannedcorn
      @Kannedcorn 10 місяців тому

      @@emperorqianlong6579 lololol

  • @omanshbainsla8670
    @omanshbainsla8670 3 роки тому +2

    my hero

  • @samarkumar9496
    @samarkumar9496 2 роки тому +1

    Thanks a lot it helped

  • @monkington9615
    @monkington9615 Рік тому

    I needed to know what a college essay was pointing to, thanks Gohar!
    For future me, HOW THE HELL DO I WRITE A ESSAY BETTER-

  • @shivankmahajan1071
    @shivankmahajan1071 Рік тому

    Thank you so much gohar, even tho I'm going to be a junior in high school, I'm worried as hell about my essays for college

  • @kaykaywilliams3454
    @kaykaywilliams3454 10 місяців тому +1

    Thai was very helpful thanks

  • @JusticeShepard
    @JusticeShepard 3 роки тому +8

    Great video bro😎

  • @marimood
    @marimood Рік тому

    thank you!

  • @tasnimsarker4653
    @tasnimsarker4653 Рік тому +1

    Thank you for these information, this helped me much. Would you please provide the lor sample, u mentioned in earlier videos.

  • @Ayana781
    @Ayana781 2 роки тому

    Yes pls part 2

  • @RoastedSquirrels
    @RoastedSquirrels 20 днів тому +1

    A legend was born

  • @LeonerdtheNerd
    @LeonerdtheNerd 2 місяці тому +2

    So basically be yourself, do not be generic and be specific, do not use boring stuff and be grammatically correct!

  • @MeTheDiamondMiner
    @MeTheDiamondMiner 3 роки тому +57

    I've exchanged a few dms with you over Instagram about your content, but I gotta say, its pretty interesting to watch your content coming from someone whos already in college (It's still interesting). Maybe in the future, you can make some videos for people already in college.

    • @goharsguide
      @goharsguide  3 роки тому +37

      Means a lot! And yeah, I'm excited to see how I branch out in the future :) would love to make videos for college students someday

    • @sushirollart3722
      @sushirollart3722 2 роки тому

      Ignore the part where I said retarded I can’t edit it.

  • @paulraj6094
    @paulraj6094 11 місяців тому

    The amazing shorts video i ever seens 😊😊

  • @Ani-kq4tr
    @Ani-kq4tr 2 роки тому +7

    I’m causally a freshman watching this. Be back in a few years

  • @user-dh2of2um8q
    @user-dh2of2um8q 4 місяці тому

    Now it is the end of regular decision for fall 2024, and i am here for my essay!!!

  • @nononono.
    @nononono. Рік тому

    Part 2 would be helpful

  • @a.I.y.
    @a.I.y. 2 роки тому +56

    Junior in highschool here! I've been binging your videos and I'm starting to apply for college scholarships. Are the rules any different when you're doing a scholarship essay? Are you supposed to make it more professional and less personal?

    • @-ik
      @-ik 2 роки тому +4

      Better balance of both

    • @allenfr
      @allenfr 10 місяців тому +1

      hey what college did you get into? and if you cant respond good luck

  • @togoboyz5107
    @togoboyz5107 2 роки тому +1

    Ima use this in 3 years (:

  • @nusratjahan-lc4by
    @nusratjahan-lc4by 7 місяців тому +1

    I'm from Bangladesh thank you so much for your helpful video 😊❤❤

  • @lucasstephensonhazra8922
    @lucasstephensonhazra8922 8 місяців тому

    Hey Gohar. Thank you so much for your advice. I had a query regarding my College Essay Topic, that is "my growth from Alexithymia and Bend Down by the societal pressures, lack-of-confidence" to "have my own voice and identity, that is me as a Songwriter". I was thinking of how my cat (who sadly passed away in the 2021), helped me in doing this. What do u think about this topic?

  • @so0y421
    @so0y421 3 роки тому +7

    why am i watching this i already got into college

  • @kaushikmedum6455
    @kaushikmedum6455 10 місяців тому

    part 2 please

  • @studymind8837
    @studymind8837 Рік тому

    I didn't came here for any essays I came here to see the legend 🛐🛐 the legendary voice 💗

  • @egg_mittens
    @egg_mittens 2 роки тому +130

    I'm British but considering applying to US colleges. How do admissions officers deal with culture differences for students applying overseas?

    • @ew8754
      @ew8754 2 роки тому +34

      don't you'll be broke just try for oxbridge

    • @markpenny523
      @markpenny523 2 роки тому

      ua-cam.com/video/rw4z-rSwNjY/v-deo.html, it is a video I found online talking about the origins of COVID, and that the video talks about the west is responsible for COVID, I don’t know if it is true but this video was 10 years ago, and it predicted many things that have become true since then. I love America, but I am with humanity if this is true, if you guys can share this it would be amazine

    • @shuhanli
      @shuhanli 2 роки тому +18

      I don't think culture matters too much, it's just about you and your personality! International students are welcome all around!

    • @mighty_spirit8532
      @mighty_spirit8532 2 роки тому +15

      16% of all harvard students are from abroad and then there are even more that come from immigrant parents. Plus British and American culture are extremely similar so even if so many weren't already from abroad I doubt you would have any problem with being from a different country.

    • @Pedri10_
      @Pedri10_ Рік тому +1

      they will hate specifically you so dont do it

  • @lilsanchez0068
    @lilsanchez0068 3 роки тому +4

    I’m taking part in a Program known as QuestBridge as a junior would you we willing to read my essay.
    It’s consist of being...
    Being Compared
    Being Criticized Negatively
    Effecting my Mental Toll
    Concluding : I bottle up my emotion show the world the happy person they want me to be when in reality it make angry the fact they’d mentally made me fear love and trust.

  • @dawnt1974
    @dawnt1974 2 роки тому

    A true service to the people!

  • @canudonut
    @canudonut 7 місяців тому

    Thanks my dibl will get a lot better

  • @thomasdelavega
    @thomasdelavega 2 роки тому

    Pt 2 pls

  • @seemayadav8665
    @seemayadav8665 9 місяців тому

    What do you think about it gohar?
    i think it would only work for common app essay because the school specific essays are about specific topics about you and not about you.

  • @rahipotdar474
    @rahipotdar474 2 роки тому +1

    So that's really your voice!

  • @khoalinski
    @khoalinski 2 роки тому +3

    Gohar. I was wondering if telling the story about your life is a good way to write an essay

  • @1zzy_g4mer
    @1zzy_g4mer Рік тому +3

    When the college asks, "why us?" Could you tell them a story? Or do you have to do something.

  • @user-nr6pu6ex3i
    @user-nr6pu6ex3i 3 роки тому +4

    I wrote about how I almost died twice.... but he said to avoid taking about death ...

  • @roshansamuel6069
    @roshansamuel6069 2 роки тому

    Part 2

  • @lunathion294
    @lunathion294 2 роки тому +3

    The real question is… did he make it into Stanford with his essay on volcanoes….

    • @zerefragn5626
      @zerefragn5626 2 роки тому

      pretty sure he did i think i saw a video where he said he got into all the ivies ik stanford isnt an ivy but yeah

  • @carbonari0
    @carbonari0 2 роки тому

    Can you make a video on student employment in Harvard University

  • @herlandhadi1996
    @herlandhadi1996 3 роки тому +3

    I'm 14 year old and really want know how can i get schoolarship from other country ?

  • @toolate2897
    @toolate2897 Рік тому +1

    Should I include a joke at some point during my college essay, or is it too informal?

  • @graceandnails
    @graceandnails 7 місяців тому

    How did you edit this video?

  • @carrotsticks0643
    @carrotsticks0643 2 роки тому

    Me: supposed to be studying for an exam
    Also me: watching this

  • @Charles10293
    @Charles10293 2 роки тому

    You should make Spotify podcast

  • @projectoce5414
    @projectoce5414 2 роки тому

    I’m in year 8 and he sounds like my teacher

  • @lukosemathew685
    @lukosemathew685 2 роки тому +1

    Is it too late to ask for part 2?

  • @wereaussiethongs8869
    @wereaussiethongs8869 2 роки тому

    What about universities in the Uk? Like Oxford and Cambridge

  • @lianawei8711
    @lianawei8711 Рік тому

    Yow, how to make an imagery essay when no using if descriptions and details? 😭

  • @sienap09
    @sienap09 Рік тому +2

    I am planning on applying for college in Germany. Hopefully getting into TUB (Technical University of Berlin). Is it a good school? And is Germany a good country to study in?

    • @offgeheninderrunde8523
      @offgeheninderrunde8523 Рік тому

      Germany is a great country to study. Little cost and a great country. TU Berlin belongs to one of the elite universities in Germany but is not so known. TUM (Munich) is considered the best university in Germany and is probably as good as MIT Harvard Stanford etc. just does not do as well as the ratings for universities are better designed for them. I have no personal experience with the TUB but the university itself is certainly more than adequate. I Hope I could help you a bit.

    • @sienap09
      @sienap09 Рік тому

      @@offgeheninderrunde8523 Thank you, this really helps a lot.

  • @WompWomp2010
    @WompWomp2010 2 роки тому +6

    When your 11 years old and are watching it and taking note of everything 👁👄👁

  • @Annsh175
    @Annsh175 Рік тому +1

    Sir in my school teachers tell us to write an essay and it’s of 300 words

  • @miraculous_funedits4293
    @miraculous_funedits4293 2 роки тому +5

    Ok...ay....
    Is there anyone in 8th grade whatching how to write essay and Collage stuff so in future ur gonna know what to do in steed of whatching the the book thinking of should i die or sleep 👁👄👁, CUZ I AM IN LITERALLYYY 8TH GRADE and IM WHATCHING THIS 👁👄👁😭🤣🤭🙄

  • @zohaibgulawan9070
    @zohaibgulawan9070 2 роки тому +1

    I'm in year 12 and just wanna ask can for any chance i can read your essay?

  • @BKDK847
    @BKDK847 16 днів тому +1

    step 1: yap

  • @MrTodd2
    @MrTodd2 2 місяці тому

    Gohar I remember when you did club penguin content

  • @sidneyibiom2867
    @sidneyibiom2867 Рік тому

    Where do you write a college essay

  • @DXRKVNE
    @DXRKVNE Місяць тому +2

    does this apply to high school

  • @hermelagirmaw7495
    @hermelagirmaw7495 Рік тому +1

    How can I get in to Stanford from Africa

  • @UniversalFinanceClub
    @UniversalFinanceClub 2 роки тому

    Is using paraphrasing tool fine to use?

  • @dilkeameer
    @dilkeameer 10 місяців тому

    Any suggestions for websites or apps where I can read some good essays to get an idea of the style of writing,

  • @djmac206
    @djmac206 Рік тому

    Should I begin practice writing my college essays as a Sophomore in high school? or wait just a bit.

    • @magentadolphin
      @magentadolphin Рік тому +1

      Maybe write some simple outlines of stories/experiences you’ve had that you might want to share as your college essay?

  • @Djenggot76
    @Djenggot76 Рік тому

    nine collegs easy

  • @rahimeenzahid1591
    @rahimeenzahid1591 2 роки тому

    How to contact you for essay editing?

  • @wajibulshovelfood8938
    @wajibulshovelfood8938 2 роки тому +3

    Quite late, I guess, but we need a part two! Or does it already exist?

  • @asmitakumari5993
    @asmitakumari5993 Рік тому +1

    Hey! I live in India and I wanna apply for MIT, can I write my essay in British English?

  • @channeloft
    @channeloft Рік тому

    4:49 What if ur teacher doesn't know you?

  • @Taodei
    @Taodei 2 роки тому

    Hi can I send you an essay for you to grade I'm in 6th grade and trying to get into a private school

  • @power_0007
    @power_0007 8 місяців тому

    why am i here? i've already finished college???

  • @pankajadhas2696
    @pankajadhas2696 2 роки тому

    What streams and subjects do uh Study at MIT

  • @ja_sh9799
    @ja_sh9799 Рік тому

    well
    i got exactly 1 day to do this

  • @stacksmasherninja7266
    @stacksmasherninja7266 2 роки тому

    do these apply for grad school too ?

  • @yonelatnafu4023
    @yonelatnafu4023 2 роки тому +1

    Im guilty of using alot of quotes🤔😓

  • @night192
    @night192 Рік тому

    Hey if anyone could help, I'd like some tips for film school?

  • @Nightmare-iq9tb
    @Nightmare-iq9tb Рік тому

    Can i write math and physics puns in it ? Would i make the reader angry ?

  • @swatikolhe8866
    @swatikolhe8866 9 місяців тому

    Looking for help to write essay for my high school son …. He is a average student. Please guide.

  • @Armouredplungerman
    @Armouredplungerman Рік тому +1

    HOLA!

  • @esco7536
    @esco7536 2 роки тому +1

    We could to Invite you to our team

  • @embacyshiz2441
    @embacyshiz2441 2 роки тому

    I'm ten and I'm just bored and isk what to watch