I was admiring your essays and all of sudden realised you come from a telugu background - That made me so happy and it was an inspiration for me being a Telugu girl
@@meis_amira you can apply through the common application or the coalition application! Harvard's website will have all the answers, though there's only two days to the deadline...
no wayyyy. I started writing the optional essay for Harvard couple weeks ago and I open with the same lunchbox story, but I go a different route with it lol
Yk I’ve always wanted to go to college, but I wasn’t sure which college I should go for. But I have high hopes and faith to make it to Harvard or Yale depending on where my life takes me. I’m a hard worker and am very dedicated but know what there is always a chance it won’t work out and already have back up options available!
Just 4 min in the video and I am in love with your work you really deserve Harvard or Harvard deserved you Lots of love and All the best for future From India ❤️
Hi. You’re essays are really great. I’m applying to Universities right now and I have to write a couple of essay too so this was very helpful. How long did it take you do write these essays?
Hi, I don't have any knowladge about writing essays and I want to practice writing essays so it will be perfect (I hope). But What should I do? I am comfused. I feel helpless :/
Hey :) it shocked me when you said you were from Hyd! I've been living in Hyd my whole 16 years of life, with short three-day trips to temples in the south- nowhere else. For some reason, hearing that someone with the same hometown as me in such a big college inspired me so much and I'm literally looking up to you with big puppy eyes
i cant believe an essay as expressive as this can get scholarships. if this essay was sent to any uni in my country it would have been rejected so fast for not being "academic enough". im very surprised.
these essays are usually only 650 words, you can't write you're life story nor have an advanced story with these limitations. in fact, trying to make it all come together within those limits is harder. many argue that it is ineffective when writing about yourself because of that limit. but this young lady went above and beyond with these essays because with those limits the story made sense and told the admission she wasn't like every other student. every admissions goal is to diversify their students' personalities by how they would suit their school. she showed that which is all that matters
Academic enough? It’s a short assay about her to grab attention! Not a spacious novel. She includes academics and other stuff in her resume. That is just so they will get a little idea of who she is, it’s not supposed to be complicated or anything
I feel that i don't really have one main topic to write about in my commonapp essay,i have other aspects that i wanna include....should i jus choose 1 idea or try to include all of them?
If I am applying to different universities and their essay prompts are same or similar, is it legal to sumbit the same essay to different universities? Also, my favorite superhero is WonderWoman.
Hi, harvard has kept the SAT optional for the upcoming intake. I have taken the test but it’s not that high. Do you think it’s a good idea to keep it in my application?
You're a telugu girl!!!! Well that's amazing. I'm telugu too and currently aiming for Harvard. Your video has literally given me hope 'Cause most of the time we donot find telugu people aiming for bigger things. ⭐hoping to see ya there -
I've got a question. what is the common app essay? I really dont understand what i'm supposed to write on that essay. like should we write about our personal experience or not? I hope i dont sound rude
i might make that available in the future if i set up a website! it’s really simple, i just put the colleges on the left and the prompts on the right and checked off which colleges had what prompts in the empty space!
Hi I am indo american with a dream of going to harvar I am 12 years old wish me luck. BTW A little backround on me I was born In America when my mom and dad was working there my mom and dad are Indians and since I was born there I am and Indian american
@@SonyaRenuka I was planning to apply as a transfer student. I have some pretty good credentials, all related to competative programming. But I don't think they are good enough for the ivy leagues. Could you recommend some other colleges that I should apply for. ❤️ from India
I wrote 700 words for my additional essay. But it wasn’t thorough as yours. More emotional based and very basic but heavy hitting wit my explanation of my life.
heyyy,,IK its a very wierd ques but like if we go to HARVARD or any other college like is it really different from university or like we have to do both of them ....please answer...thanks for tips yarr
dude i'm writing the optional essay right now and i think my word count is WAY over. What was the word count on your optional essay? What do you think is too much...
I personally only wrote about 400 words, but I've seen people write various lengths for their optional essay! Just make sure you're being concise and not repetitive and you're including what matters! :)
Hi I have a question! I'm planning to apply for Harvard and Stanford, but I'm from a country in Asia. Do I have to be good at mathematics to get in? I wanna take a science related course but I'm scared that it would require math as well. I'm not very intelligent when it comes to math.
hey, you said you applied to 23 colleges and had to write lots of essays, if I did the same thing, could I just use one essay and not write different types for each college?
i was able to use my main essay for most colleges, but a lot of colleges require supplemental essays and sometimes those supplemental essays are very college specific so it isn't wise to reuse them, however sometimes you can finesse some of your essays to fit other prompts.
Glad you shared your essay, All I wanted to say uf they copy then eventually they will get their punishment but if applicants like you doesn't provide the idea of personal essay writing to the world then we will be in great trouble cause many country doesn't have that much access so the best thing about you guys are you can help us a lot with this essays Stay tuned for us
My school is Dundalk High School, and it has 0 on the scoreboard, but I manage a good GPA. Does being in a low-rank school affect my opportunities of getting into an ivy league?
Hey!I'm an Indian 8th grader I stumbled upon your channel while searching for resources to improve my essay writing.I have a question...How do we write an essay on a topic that isn't really about us? I couldn't find much advice about this.
I was admiring your essays and all of sudden realised you come from a telugu background - That made me so happy and it was an inspiration for me being a Telugu girl
OMG, even I am a Telugu guy, from Hyderabad, India. Aspiring to become a Harvard Student ✌
Im from Andhra Pradesh and I'm Telugu too!!! Love you queen
I am from karnataka but I speak Telugu too
@@abhiavasarala5704 hey can we discuss about colleges on IG? Drop your IG
Even I am a Telugu girl
Your optional essay is amazing and very touching.
thank you!
who knows how can i send my essay to harvard any help please
@@meis_amira you can apply through the common application or the coalition application! Harvard's website will have all the answers, though there's only two days to the deadline...
I loved your optional essay! I love the thought and the creative factor put on the output! 🥺💖🌸
Queen of the common app 🥰
MY FAV!! 🥺
You have such great essays, thank you so much for sharing them. I wish you the best of luck!!!
thank you!
Watching this at the beginning of my junior year planning on applying to Harvard, thank you for making this!!
This is the video most like me 🥺. My favorite part was "Relax"
happy to hear :)
Damn🌝 you deserve harvard girllllll!!!!!!
thank you, you’re all so kind
ty!!
These essays were beautiful!!!!!
ty!!
no wayyyy. I started writing the optional essay for Harvard couple weeks ago and I open with the same lunchbox story, but I go a different route with it lol
So did you get in?
^ did you get in?
@@stobit2519 I ended up writing about something else. I got deferred. Find out again in a week
@@ohmpatel8308 did you end up getting in?
@@ohmpatel8308 hi how did it go?
Lovee your optional essay girlll
Yk I’ve always wanted to go to college, but I wasn’t sure which college I should go for. But I have high hopes and faith to make it to Harvard or Yale depending on where my life takes me. I’m a hard worker and am very dedicated but know what there is always a chance it won’t work out and already have back up options available!
Thank you so much for sharing your experience and advice!!
thanks for watching!
Just 4 min in the video and I am in love with your work you really deserve Harvard or Harvard deserved you
Lots of love and All the best for future
From India ❤️
Never let anyone make you feel bad about yourself.
words of wisdom!
Why don't you have more subs?? You're amazing!
You just exactly showed things that I was searching for😭❤️
Much Love ❤️
Hope you have a significant career
Can you make a tutorial on how you organized or created your spreadsheet
i included a brief description in another comment!
ua-cam.com/video/3WuqozvnAV4/v-deo.html
Same experience with the lunchbox thing in elementary school 😂
Can you please please please please please please please make a video for dorm tour when you get settled. 🤙🏻✌🏻
planning on it!
Your optional essay was inspiring, thank your for sharing :)
luv your essays...
Hi. You’re essays are really great. I’m applying to Universities right now and I have to write a couple of essay too so this was very helpful. How long did it take you do write these essays?
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Hi, I don't have any knowladge about writing essays and I want to practice writing essays so it will be perfect (I hope). But What should I do? I am comfused. I feel helpless :/
Please make a video on how to apply !
The lunch story 😭😭 the exact same with me and I forced my parents into giving me “normal food”
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i didn’t know this was universal 😭
Please make a video about your Amherst essays!
i submitted the same main essay!
Pls tell me how to prove those extracurricular activities
Can you review and edit my saqs for college, please (Preferably if your good with essay writing - leave an email please)8
Hey :) it shocked me when you said you were from Hyd! I've been living in Hyd my whole 16 years of life, with short three-day trips to temples in the south- nowhere else. For some reason, hearing that someone with the same hometown as me in such a big college inspired me so much and I'm literally looking up to you with big puppy eyes
You don’t need Harvard,Harvard needs you
u r right bro
heyy can you make a video on filling the common app essay and css profile
there are plenty of tutorials online! i'm not an admissions officer so it wouldn't be my place to do so.
i cant believe an essay as expressive as this can get scholarships. if this essay was sent to any uni in my country it would have been rejected so fast for not being "academic enough". im very surprised.
these essays are usually only 650 words, you can't write you're life story nor have an advanced story with these limitations. in fact, trying to make it all come together within those limits is harder. many argue that it is ineffective when writing about yourself because of that limit. but this young lady went above and beyond with these essays because with those limits the story made sense and told the admission she wasn't like every other student. every admissions goal is to diversify their students' personalities by how they would suit their school. she showed that which is all that matters
Academic enough? It’s a short assay about her to grab attention! Not a spacious novel. She includes academics and other stuff in her resume. That is just so they will get a little idea of who she is, it’s not supposed to be complicated or anything
I feel that i don't really have one main topic to write about in my commonapp essay,i have other aspects that i wanna include....should i jus choose 1 idea or try to include all of them?
I also have the same dilemma
You should do a video on your ecs
i have my ECs included on my other video!
@@SonyaRenuka are they the only one or you did more than it
Can u pls upload extracurricular essay too
omg girl i’m also hyderabadi! i’m trying to get into harvard for clinical psychology (phD)
comment any other type of videos you'd like to see!
could you read your UC essays?
Extracurricular activities.
EC
heyy plz make a video on how to get a fee waiver for college appplications and also fee waiver for sat exam[since it has a lot benefits]
sorry, i do not have information on that. i suggest searching on google or contacting a college counselor or school counselor.
WAIT UR TELUGU OMG THIS JUST GAVE ME HOPE 😢😢😢TQQ
OMG YOU'RE TELUGU TOO??? YES REPRESENT FOR US SHAWTY!!!!
for the activity essay r we supposed to write in story form or kind of just expand on an activity we listed in the activity list?? pls help!
Very helpful video for college students, keep going 🔥
Just submitted my REA to Harvard today! And the wait begins...
good luck!
Did u get in?
@@user-cw8mf2cc1n yess!!! Still can’t believe it
@@brotega4500 proud of you! Congrats!
@@brotega4500 No way Congrats, upload a video it might go viral
Your essays are mind blowing. Hi to a fellow desi
If I am applying to different universities and their essay prompts are same or similar, is it legal to sumbit the same essay to different universities?
Also, my favorite superhero is WonderWoman.
Plz make a vdo related to extracurricular activities.
Hi, harvard has kept the SAT optional for the upcoming intake. I have taken the test but it’s not that high. Do you think it’s a good idea to keep it in my application?
No
@M S thank you. Are you a Harvard alumni or a student? ( out of curiosity)
@@ahmadjaved4263 I definitely wouldn't include it if it's not at least at the 25th percentile of their admit SAT scores
@M S haha well I Have already applied... let’s me see what happens
@@ritugupta5682 haha no it’s not that low... anyway thank you and let me see what happens
Amazing young women! You got me inspired too!
Hi there, I’m just wondering about your extracurricular activities during high school, I’m from Australia and nice to meet u.
i have them listed in the beginning of my college reaction video!
@@SonyaRenuka are they the only or you did more than it please please reply 🙏
Thank you for this ❤️ and your amazing
ty for watching
@Sonya Renuka thank you for being honest and very informational , and being the gracious person you are , seriously amazing ❤️
Is the topic for all the essays (main, optional, intellectual experience and extracurricular) free choice?
only optional essay give u chance to write essay on ur choice
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please make an EC video!!!
maybe i will sometime, i have some of my ECs listed in my other vid!
@@SonyaRenuka please make an EC video it would be helpful for us
"Desi" girl haha love that
You're a telugu girl!!!! Well that's amazing. I'm telugu too and currently aiming for Harvard. Your video has literally given me hope 'Cause most of the time we donot find telugu people aiming for bigger things. ⭐hoping to see ya there -
can anyone please tell me where I can find essay prompts for ivy league universities for international undergraduate applicants?
You are so underrated ! Ps: my favourite super hero is spider man !
Do you ever proofread personal statements for prospective students?
Do you think it's a good idea to include poetry in application essays for ivy league
I've got a question. what is the common app essay? I really dont understand what i'm supposed to write on that essay. like should we write about our personal experience or not?
I hope i dont sound rude
Girlllll!!! Did I hear marvel!!. you're a hommie now❤️❤️😂😂
Btw ur essay was amazing 👍👍👍
Hey what is the personal essay template exactly?
WAIT are common apps obligated?? To have? I wasn't thinking of submitting common app just because in my commonwealth we dont use it
Is there a way for you to send me a screenshot or link to the spread sheet you used for college essays to keep organize?
i might make that available in the future if i set up a website! it’s really simple, i just put the colleges on the left and the prompts on the right and checked off which colleges had what prompts in the empty space!
Sonya Renuka okay thank you!
Can you tell your stats and extracurricular please?
Bro ive read your essay on harvard class 2024 essay💕
sorry could you link me to this?
Can I get into Harvard after 10th please answer, I need this very much right now.
After 12th take SAT test
Hi I am indo american with a dream of going to harvar I am 12 years old wish me luck. BTW A little backround on me I was born In America when my mom and dad was working there my mom and dad are Indians and since I was born there I am and Indian american
Did your classes start? Are they doing it online?
my classes start next week online, but i get the opportunity to stay on campus!
@@SonyaRenuka I was planning to apply as a transfer student. I have some pretty good credentials, all related to competative programming. But I don't think they are good enough for the ivy leagues. Could you recommend some other colleges that I should apply for.
❤️ from India
there are plenty of online resources to help you find which schools are a good match for you, like niche!
I wrote 700 words for my additional essay. But it wasn’t thorough as yours. More emotional based and very basic but heavy hitting wit my explanation of my life.
You got in?
heyyy,,IK its a very wierd ques but like if we go to HARVARD or any other college like is it really different from university or like we have to do both of them ....please answer...thanks for tips yarr
I started to write an essay and it’s so similar to your main essay i hope they don’t think it as a copy 😭
ua-cam.com/video/6PRJHBnqwfk/v-deo.html
Hi,,just wanted to ask did you get admitted into Harvard even though the essay was similar to the creator's??
Mam how to connect to you please can you tell .
🙏🙏🙏
It so best thanks but I am weak to her because I don't have more experience of hearing English so help me by writing it by massage
What are you pursuing in harvard university?? I mean for which course you have enrolled yourself in Harvard university???
Thanks so much... I'm from Bangladesh... I was really anxious about the essays but thanks to you,..appi😍😍
Fall 22??
Optional Essay 💯💯💯💯
dude i'm writing the optional essay right now and i think my word count is WAY over. What was the word count on your optional essay? What do you think is too much...
I personally only wrote about 400 words, but I've seen people write various lengths for their optional essay! Just make sure you're being concise and not repetitive and you're including what matters! :)
Hi I have a question! I'm planning to apply for Harvard and Stanford, but I'm from a country in Asia. Do I have to be good at mathematics to get in? I wanna take a science related course but I'm scared that it would require math as well. I'm not very intelligent when it comes to math.
If you're choosing Science, there wouldn't be any complicated Math involved in your course. At least that's what I think.
@The Ray R. My previous comment was related to the courses. Anyways, you're right too. There's a lot of discrimination in those regions T-T
HI, IM from India and I couldn't write AP s. could you suggest me some dual degree programs?
hey, you said you applied to 23 colleges and had to write lots of essays, if I did the same thing, could I just use one essay and not write different types for each college?
i was able to use my main essay for most colleges, but a lot of colleges require supplemental essays and sometimes those supplemental essays are very college specific so it isn't wise to reuse them, however sometimes you can finesse some of your essays to fit other prompts.
Do you have to write different essays for each school you apply to or can you send the same ones to all the schools you apply to ??
it all depends. if you notice that many of the schools you’re applying to have similar prompts you can just reuse them and adjust accordingly!
This essay was great and your tips are superrrr helpful!! Wish I had seen the spreadsheet thing before :(
awww ty! good luck!!
I can help you write your essays, dissertations, assignments, and exams. Please contact me on (alexchege13@gmail.com)
You are so pretty 😊
Hey sis which subject you are pursuing in Harvard
Funny thing about essays, I've never had to write one in my extensive career... ever.
thanks a lot!
Great vid
so did you recieve financial aid
Glad you shared your essay,
All I wanted to say uf they copy then eventually they will get their punishment but if applicants like you doesn't provide the idea of personal essay writing to the world then we will be in great trouble cause many country doesn't have that much access so the best thing about you guys are you can help us a lot with this essays
Stay tuned for us
As a punjabi girl.. the lunch story rlly touched me
ur essay is so beautiful,, i hope u gain more subscribers ^_^
girl i already planned my essays even though im a freshman in hs 😭
Would you please send me a pdf file of the essay
Q : Are you a south Indian ??
I'm in eighth grade and... Wow. I don't even think I can get into an Ivy League-
don’t say that! you still have so much time! just spend time enjoying your high school life and do the things you love! :)
@@SonyaRenukaoh my lord i came back to this video and now i’m stressing as a junior 😭😭
My school is Dundalk High School, and it has 0 on the scoreboard, but I manage a good GPA. Does being in a low-rank school affect my opportunities of getting into an ivy league?
What part of Texas are you from?
North Texas!
You should also write your essay in a description or comment so people like me can read themself. : )
Do you also read essays and give feedback? Thanks
Hey!I'm an Indian 8th grader I stumbled upon your channel while searching for resources to improve my essay writing.I have a question...How do we write an essay on a topic that isn't really about us? I couldn't find much advice about this.
look up informative essay structures, that should help!
@@SonyaRenuka Thank you😊