Dark Water by Tony Walker

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  • Опубліковано 28 вер 2024
  • Two British soldiers return home from the Army in 1920. They visit family in rural Wales and find hidden horrors that they didn't expect.
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КОМЕНТАРІ • 149

  • @thelastsausage635
    @thelastsausage635 3 роки тому +10

    Really liked this one, repaying a debt of bravery to a friend, a loathsome village cult, a dark primeval monster, marvellous story👍👹💕

  • @clonejones7955
    @clonejones7955 3 роки тому +18

    I didn't realize until the end this was Tony's work! Vicars vs the old gods really well written.You could be a voice actor as well.♥️👍😁🇨🇦

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      Awww. Well, if you know any agents...

  • @aarondutil3077
    @aarondutil3077 3 роки тому +20

    Loved this story, Tony. I like the WW I veteran characters…men who probably thought they witnessed the worst horrors via war are now confronted with ancient, Stygian horrors. I hope you use them again in the future.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +2

      Funnily enough I do re use characters. Not these ones yet though. You will find Christian Le Cozh In a couple of stories and Gowan Fell appears several times. They could be characters in a Call of Cthulhu game.

    • @dianesleeman5940
      @dianesleeman5940 3 роки тому

      @@ClassicGhost 0

    • @carolynlewis9008
      @carolynlewis9008 Рік тому

      Indeed! That would be a very stimulating topic to run with.

  • @annetteeggett2802
    @annetteeggett2802 3 роки тому +8

    Fantastic! Thank you. And running around Wales scaring the bejesus out of people sounds my idea of fun. I’d would have loved to have gone along. I think 😃👻

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +2

      Everyone loved it who went

    • @annetteeggett2802
      @annetteeggett2802 3 роки тому +1

      @@ClassicGhost I bet! Did you ever film it? Awesome night out

  • @DS-fk7ed
    @DS-fk7ed Місяць тому

    Shrewsbury is where I was born & brought up although I've been down in London for 25 years.
    Nice to hear it get a mention - us Salopians are very proud of our town!

  • @robertmusacchio9409
    @robertmusacchio9409 3 роки тому +4

    GREAT, does seem a real 1920's tale.

  • @julielevinge266
    @julielevinge266 3 роки тому +1

    Reminds me of Wales, lived in a village for couple of years, ended up running away to London. We were just hated by everyone!!!

  • @rheinhartsilvento2576
    @rheinhartsilvento2576 3 роки тому +10

    You're so talented Tony! Some really top-notch stuff🌟

  • @hollyhobby2763
    @hollyhobby2763 3 роки тому +4

    Nice. Very good story.
    And, as usual Mr. Walker, your insights and anecdotes make my morning🤍

  • @LadyRoseWinters
    @LadyRoseWinters 6 місяців тому +2

    Great story! Lovecraft vibes!

  • @waningmooncancer9628
    @waningmooncancer9628 3 роки тому +1

    Thank you for sharing your own work with us. Truly engrossing; well done you.👍👏

  • @cynthiapate9138
    @cynthiapate9138 2 роки тому

    A wonderful tale!! Thank you.

  • @roxanavasilakis9435
    @roxanavasilakis9435 2 роки тому +1

    Thank you dear Tony 💦

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  2 роки тому

      I think you’re working your way through them all!

  • @carolynlewis9008
    @carolynlewis9008 Рік тому

    You need to write a book! I was so freaked out by this story! I loved it. I heard you say that you wrote it and I was thinking “This is how you exhibit your talent to the world!” You should be extremely proud!🎉

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Рік тому

      Well, as it so happens... Not one to miss a sale: amzn.to/3CYkGSM Click that!

  • @masonsteven77
    @masonsteven77 Рік тому

    You’re an exceptionally gifted writer and storyteller. Cheers.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Рік тому

      Thank you very much. That's a nice thing to hear.

  • @JimBagby74
    @JimBagby74 6 місяців тому +1

    I spent several days in Tintagel years ago, and that would have been a perfect setting for something like this. The layers of history there are deep as you probably know, and presented the opportunity for all manner of possible visitations by some old horror from the caves at the bottom of cliff. Nothing happened though despite my wild imaginings. Oh well, maybe next time!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  6 місяців тому

      I met King Arthur at Tintagel. He seemed like a nice bloke. That was in 2009

    • @JimBagby74
      @JimBagby74 6 місяців тому

      Oh sure. A model prince. And completely transparent which is rare for a head of state these days..

  • @martiwilliams4592
    @martiwilliams4592 3 роки тому +13

    Fantastic, Gripping. Thank you! Am now reading Haunted Wales: A Guide to Welsh Ghostlore. by Richard Holland. Could this perhaps be a source of inspiration? Please continue the great work!

  • @hollywebster6844
    @hollywebster6844 3 роки тому +1

    Excellent!

  • @BigDog366
    @BigDog366 3 роки тому +7

    That was excellent. So, Digger didn't make it, I'm guessing.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +4

      Did you listen to my Derwentwater Haunting? I hope there isn't a theme emerging here. I like to think that Digger was okay.

    • @skeleczar
      @skeleczar 3 роки тому +7

      @@ClassicGhost he better be…

  • @boredwarlock5216
    @boredwarlock5216 3 роки тому

    That RP is legendary!!!

  • @MSYNGWIE12
    @MSYNGWIE12 3 роки тому +1

    No sleep now Tony, terrific gripper as was the anecdotal material about your club. Wish we had the like of it here!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      It was totally absorbing when I was doing all that live action stuff. Like being inside a story.

  • @TheEldritchArchives
    @TheEldritchArchives 3 роки тому +1

    Your Call of Cthulhu games sound much cooler than mine! Great stuff! Hope you convert some more of those old scripts into stories.

  • @rneustel388
    @rneustel388 3 роки тому +1

    The whole time you were reading this, I was seeing it in my mind, and I was thinking what a great film it would make. Seeing those role-playing games would have been so much fun!

  • @katecridland8333
    @katecridland8333 3 роки тому +1

    Brilliant. A classic.

  • @neverlookback876
    @neverlookback876 3 роки тому

    How... Did I only just discover this channel... I love it... I love your stories and I love the way you narrate... Like you are from a time of old 🙏🌹 x

  • @sarahsamaria8283
    @sarahsamaria8283 3 роки тому +11

    This idea of old gods are quite scary. People worshipping things that harm them. Awesome.

  • @dirkbruere
    @dirkbruere Місяць тому

    1980s. We played D&D at Peckforton Castle in Cheshire. It's now a luxury hotel but back them it was in a state of disrepair. What we did was also very dangerous on occasion

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Місяць тому +1

      +@dirkbruere I remember reading about a castle where they did live action D&D

    • @dirkbruere
      @dirkbruere Місяць тому

      @@ClassicGhost Probably that one. It was quite impressive

  • @craigbasham6239
    @craigbasham6239 3 роки тому +1

    your narrator voice is fantastic

  • @CPWebster
    @CPWebster Місяць тому

    A great yarn worthy of Robert E Howard, thank you.

  • @marisaera2353
    @marisaera2353 5 місяців тому +1

    Lasr time I have a pint in Llantrisant!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  5 місяців тому

      Be careful when you leave the cities . actually it’s pretty dangerous inside them
      too

  • @Ricebread343
    @Ricebread343 Місяць тому

    Fantastic!! Love this story. In some way, it reminds me of the lottery by Sherly Jackson, which I have only very recently discovered. It is the age of the place. Very small, close nit community. This is the way we have always done things. The strangers come, we summon our gods and offer the strangers to it. No matter who they are. Clearly, the father has no real power or authority as the vicar. They're not christian people. They worship this god of the dark water. And so the father is sort of like a figurehead. I very much feel that he has had his own run-in with the painted men. But could not bring them over, to leave the old religion, the old ways, and embrace a new religion. I was very sad for the fathers end. But glad that he gained strength and courage to help save his son. I'm very curious as to what was written on that slip of paper. Or what was found inside that book. I Just finished listening.And going to listen to it again. 😊❤❤❤❤

  • @carolynlewis9008
    @carolynlewis9008 Рік тому +1

    YOU WROTE THIS STORY?!?!?!😮

  • @cawiltu
    @cawiltu 3 роки тому +2

    Which came first? This story or STNG’s evil black slime that tried to eat number one

  • @gillfinlayson7894
    @gillfinlayson7894 3 роки тому +3

    Absolutely loved this. Came across this tale quite by chance. Story telling talent in heaps. As I was listening, I thought this is a Lovecraft/Machen tale set in the magical landscape of the glorious Welsh March and quite my favourite setting .... Wonderful. Early Phil Rickman, even, and awash with atmosphere? I'm a keen fan of this wild part of the country & been too long since I visited.
    Must look at your other content and loved your musings after the tale was told.
    I'm certainly enthused & send my best wishes to you! Recommend that your subscribers listen to the "Lovecraft Investigations" series of audio drama podcasts over on BBC Sounds (& elsewhere) as well worth a listen.
    Thanks again!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +1

      Thank you and I am honoured by the comparisons. The mystery machine Lovecraft investigation is one of my favourites

  • @lauraJP76
    @lauraJP76 3 роки тому +3

  • @sarahsamaria8283
    @sarahsamaria8283 3 роки тому +1

    This story reminds me of the god of wasps from the charlie parker series written by john connolly.

  • @gullivergiles480
    @gullivergiles480 10 місяців тому

    I've heard this before, I think potentially narrated by someone else.
    I've really enjoyed it, and we're coming to England next year to do a retreat at Glastonbury. I'd love to chat to you regarding your more high end experiential events. You have caught my attention! :)

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  10 місяців тому +1

      it’s my own story so if they’ve narrated it i want a cut :)

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  10 місяців тому

      i love glastonbury though

    • @gullivergiles480
      @gullivergiles480 10 місяців тому

      @@ClassicGhost ahhhhh I could be wrong and you've changed the thumbnail recently but it's a ripper. I love your original stuff.

  • @tonyeden8381
    @tonyeden8381 3 роки тому +2

    How did I get unsubscribed ?…………must’ve been months ago 😡
    Good thing is I’ve got plenty stories to go at 😊🔥👍

  • @leebennett1821
    @leebennett1821 2 місяці тому

    This is very similar to a Stephen king story the lake

  • @mijiyoon5575
    @mijiyoon5575 3 роки тому +1

    👍👍👍😲👀👀☠☠☠

  • @JennyLane8666
    @JennyLane8666 Рік тому +1

    Wow, Tony, that was fantastic! I love your stuff!! Looking forward to hearing more

  • @stardust949
    @stardust949 3 роки тому

    I think your writing style is just fine, but honestly, couldn't give credence to their particular choice of worship.

  • @Story-Voracious66
    @Story-Voracious66 3 роки тому +7

    It's in the trees!
    It's coming!
    Strange how coincidence creeps up on us.
    In returning to your tale, after a brief pause, I reverted to my UA-cam history to reload Dark Water, and noticed that the last thing that I had listened to was The Hounds of Love.
    "So"? What of it? Nothing unusual in that.
    Then I hear, " it's coming for me through the trees." Or something very like to it.
    Strange phenomena maybe?
    Keep letting the weirdness in Tony.
    Thanks.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +3

      That line sampled by Kate is from Night of The Demon which is actually pretty good. I love that album by the way

    • @Story-Voracious66
      @Story-Voracious66 3 роки тому +1

      @@ClassicGhost Should have guessed that you would know that, most people don't.
      I'm a bit of a K.B. tragic.
      Love the atmosphere you created by the way.
      Nice writing.
      👍🏼🙏🏼🤠

    • @thelastsausage635
      @thelastsausage635 3 роки тому

      Great song!

  • @dartmart9263
    @dartmart9263 3 роки тому +21

    Tony, this one is superb! Please consider writing more of these “Lovecraftian” stories. You really captured the essence of the genre. Thanks for your storytelling and your post-story thoughts.

  • @martiwilliams4592
    @martiwilliams4592 2 місяці тому +2

    Just as captivating also this time around after 3 years. Seems like 300, so much has happened since then. Much needed, thought-provoking and appreciated. Masterful as always, Tony. Thanks so much.

  • @lesliekendall5668
    @lesliekendall5668 3 роки тому +3

    Yes, I enjoyed the story very much.

  • @bronte6364
    @bronte6364 3 роки тому +2

    Creepy.👀. Excellent.😃

  • @davidhughes8661
    @davidhughes8661 2 роки тому +2

    Very enjoyable , cheers

  • @bethpemberton7980
    @bethpemberton7980 3 роки тому +2

    Yikes. This was creepy!

  • @tor-sverresveinsborg8087
    @tor-sverresveinsborg8087 3 роки тому +5

    Fantastic story, loved every second of it!

  • @thurayya8905
    @thurayya8905 Рік тому +2

    That must have been loads of fun, running about in the woods, but knowing there was someone there, on a mission. I used to go to science fiction conventions and we did "runs" (as in Logan's Run) in costume, but that was like a glorified hide and seek. Out in the woods would be much more terrifying.

  • @angeladawn2343
    @angeladawn2343 2 дні тому +1

    Your the Author- and you read the stories? That was amazing.
    I thought all of these stories were from the 1800’s
    I love this channel
    I am an artist… and with empty nest syndrome lol trying to find my rhythm again… the only thing the helps is to work after midnight when the house has went to bed.
    And these audios so my head will shut up.
    I love your stories

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  2 дні тому

      Thank you very much. I don't write them all, but I do smuggle my own stories in now and again. I've just been writing tonight after a long break and I feel better because of it.

  • @aaronweaver9751
    @aaronweaver9751 3 роки тому +3

    Kudos on the old school story.

  • @ginabeena6757
    @ginabeena6757 3 роки тому +1

    Wonderful! Thank you!

  • @yolandaaranda653
    @yolandaaranda653 3 роки тому +3

    Thank You Tony! I loved it! Wonderful Art ! Thank you for. Your generous spirit.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      You are very welcome. Very kind of you to say this

  • @EnCryptedHorror
    @EnCryptedHorror 3 роки тому +2

    That was absolutely brilliant. So atmospheric.

  • @ruralbrewery6585
    @ruralbrewery6585 Рік тому +1

    I love this one. Excellent folk horror with all the right ingredients - new vs old, mindless horror of WW1 echoed in the ancient horror of the mindless slug that doesn't even have to devour you in order to utterly destroy you, debts of brotherhood, sacrifice and the gift of life and all that. Oh, and of course the darkness itself.
    Thank you for doing what you do, hey.
    You've inspired me to gather my household together for a Cthulhu mythos RPG now *chuckles evilly*

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Рік тому

      Yes. That is exactly what you need to do. I keep thinking of joint a club but I’d be loads older than them

  • @vanillasuncherries
    @vanillasuncherries 4 місяці тому +1

    I liked it

  • @angeladawn2343
    @angeladawn2343 2 дні тому +1

    ❤❤❤

  • @hermeticmoth
    @hermeticmoth 3 роки тому +2

    Your stories are captivating and only made better by your narration. Fantastic.

  • @colemarie9262
    @colemarie9262 3 роки тому +2

    Loved it! I'd say convert some more of them.
    And that sounds like one live action setting I'd be really into lol

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      I may take a look at Mr Dudley Disappears. That would be fun

  • @elizabethmaddock4
    @elizabethmaddock4 7 місяців тому +1

    Outstanding! Or well done!

  • @bastetsbutterfly
    @bastetsbutterfly 3 роки тому +3

    This was perfect in every way. Dani from Maine, USA.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +1

      Thanks Dani. I need to practice my Maine accent

    • @bastetsbutterfly
      @bastetsbutterfly 3 роки тому

      @@ClassicGhost Not many folks have a traditional Maine accent anymore. I hear it once in awhile. Check UA-cam for Tim Sample, Burt and I; and if you are really lucky, The humble farmer. Cheers Dani

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +1

      @@bastetsbutterfly I will. Thank you

  • @rameyzamora1018
    @rameyzamora1018 3 роки тому +1

    Very fun, Tony. Love the afterwords, also - well not your tinnitus which sucks a mop but the story of your part in RPG live events is a tale of its own.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      Yes, it was fun. It went on for ages

  • @donaldmccleary9015
    @donaldmccleary9015 Рік тому +1

    This is an awesome story! Great job writing and narrating Tony!
    I like the background story and the old worship of a much-forgotten entity, remembered only by a few. As a veteran, I totally can relate to the affinity owed to one who saved us. I am drawn to such stories.
    It has a good and sad ending at the same time.
    I'm looking forward to listening to this again!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Рік тому +1

      It's an old story but I am glad I narrated it here.

    • @donaldmccleary9015
      @donaldmccleary9015 Рік тому +1

      @@ClassicGhost I forgot to say this is a darn good Lovecraftian story. Actually, it is awesome! I would like to see more of these!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Рік тому +1

      @@donaldmccleary9015 i was definitely in a Lovecraftian mood

  • @michaelbully3210
    @michaelbully3210 Місяць тому

    A really creepy tale. Well done Tony. I like the contrast of the lads returning from the Trenches v. some sort of dark rural cult. But perhaps they are both based on human sacrifice and have something in common ?

  • @sarihdahenry9854
    @sarihdahenry9854 5 місяців тому

    I should be MEMBERIZED , I love your readings

  • @yttm7254
    @yttm7254 3 роки тому

    NO ANIMALS WERE HARMED IN REAL LIFE....🙄🙄🙄🙄....GOOD STORY

  • @fragra9716
    @fragra9716 3 роки тому +2

    Breathtaking as ever !!!!!! Thank you very much!!!!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +1

      You are too kind.

    • @fragra9716
      @fragra9716 3 роки тому +1

      @@ClassicGhost I’m really very happy to find your own page on UA-cam, sir ! You’ve made every my day , love your stories very much! Thank you again for sharing - such a good listening for all day - and even at night ! Very original plots , love every story !

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      @@fragra9716 much appreciated

  • @ruthwalton3457
    @ruthwalton3457 3 роки тому +1

    TO OLD 😳🤣🙈 I am in big trouble 😂😂😂

  • @scoutrifle6827
    @scoutrifle6827 3 роки тому +1

    I love all your readings, but thoroughly prefer your original stories, Tony. This was moody, detailed and wonderfully atmospheric. First class.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      Again, thank you for your constant encouragement

  • @deloreslowndes762
    @deloreslowndes762 Рік тому

    Really enjoyed this one.

  • @rattyrachel4316
    @rattyrachel4316 3 роки тому +1

    Compelling story, excellent writing, superb delivery! Oh, your commentary was a lot of fun, too! (No, don’t tell me what happened to the dog. It surely can’t be good.)😢

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +2

      Honestly, the dog was fine. It got away

  • @geraldinetaeckens5873
    @geraldinetaeckens5873 2 місяці тому

    You are as great a writer as you are a narrator, Tony. You are full of surprises. I really enjoy your channel. I do have a question. Have you ever considered allowing the library of Congress in the United States to use any audio recordings you have of your books for the national library for the blinded disabled? Also are your books in audio version. I think I’ve mentioned to you before that I happened to be blind and so I listen to books rather than read a text. Would really love to get my hands on more of your stuff. I am a retired 72 year-old with a fixed income, so I really cannot join a channel that requires payment. OK if you can give me that information that would be great and I think would be great if you could get your stories into the library in audio form for the blind and disabled not only in the US, but I know Canada has that probably Great Britain does as well and other countries. Thanks for your great creativity and storytelling. 30:30

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  2 місяці тому

      I am very happy for my stories to be used in this way

  • @fernpearlsfriend4842
    @fernpearlsfriend4842 2 роки тому

    This was a creepy story (in a good way of course). Blobs and blob-like things really freak me out. Also the WWI aspect of the story grabbed my attention. I’ve been obsessed with the “Great War” for 15 years or so. The only negative thing I could say about the story is ahhh the poor dog. 😢 Maybe he got away???

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  2 роки тому +1

      The dog was fine. The dogs in all my stories are always ok. (Don't listen to the Derwentwater Haunting).

  • @OssamabinKenny
    @OssamabinKenny 3 роки тому

    People still play the cowboys and aliens live action game with groups similar to the Call of Cthulhu game.
    It’s at the southern US border but I’m afraid that the guns used are very real and the aliens are at a server technological disadvantage.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +2

      With live ammunition? I wouldn't like to be a Deep One n that game

  • @galinda6504
    @galinda6504 3 роки тому

    Ghastly, scary. But I mourn the loss of Digger. Couldn't you have saved him?

  • @rayswoop4947
    @rayswoop4947 3 роки тому

    Robert E Howard also wrote a lot about the Picts, so very awesome, let me know what you think about the watcher by the threshold 😁 that one also has a story of the Picts and others which you might find perfect to narrate, especially the first story or saint Thomas's rime with the ballad of grey weather 😁

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому

      I haven’t read those for years. I remember you being very into them. Must be my Pictish ancestors!

  • @sparklemotion8377
    @sparklemotion8377 3 роки тому

    Word of advice, if you want a monster to be scary, don't call it a slug.😂
    Loved your afterthoughts about back in the day.❤

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +1

      Slugs are scary!

    • @sparklemotion8377
      @sparklemotion8377 3 роки тому

      @@ClassicGhost They're annoying and eat my sunflowers. This is scary...for the snails ua-cam.com/video/Ea2PWEbWDcU/v-deo.html

  • @jaynecooney9549
    @jaynecooney9549 3 роки тому

    Are you still married because I have a friend who’s single I wish I was you have an amazing voice

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +1

      I’m solidly hitched up with Sheila. My voice may be ok but the rest is a mess

    • @jaynecooney9549
      @jaynecooney9549 3 роки тому +1

      @@ClassicGhost well that was awesome that’s the kind of story to scare your kids not to go in the woods

  • @nonatie8514
    @nonatie8514 3 роки тому

    These are the worst long drawn out boring so called stories that I have EVER TRIED MY BEST TO LISTEN TO. The powers of descriptive things are the best they have but other than that , they’re dead and its painful to even try to listen to. Horrible. Never again. Try BITESIZED STORIES instead. No comparison.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 роки тому +5

      I'm sorry you didn't like it. It seems you tried others of my stories too and didn't like them either. Bitesized Audio is great, I agree. Glad you like them

    • @rattyrachel4316
      @rattyrachel4316 3 роки тому +9

      Nonatie, if one doesn’t like what’s being served up, might I be so bold as to suggest that one should quietly, without a fuss, simply leave the table(?)

  • @DearHotMess-wp2yw
    @DearHotMess-wp2yw 5 місяців тому +1

    Another gripping story! I thoroughly enjoyed the story, and the commentary afterward. You are marvelous!